01:36 grumd: : you want me to mod?
01:36 Jenny: : yesjuuu
01:36 Jenny: : as in lesjuuuuh
01:36 grumd: : lemme try
01:37 Jenny: : I'd be gladiool if you gave it a shot
01:37 Jenny: : may got lesjuh
01:37 Jenny: : *god
01:37 grumd: : lol
01:38 grumd: : am i a modder tho>
01:38 grumd: : ?
01:38 grumd: : dont think i mod good
01:38 grumd: : anyway, i'll try
01:38 Jenny: : you are a person
01:38 grumd: : ikr
01:42 grumd: : probably irc?
01:43 Jenny: : irc is better because time-saving
01:43 grumd: : 00:01:144 (2) - why jump here?
01:43 grumd: : just tell me the reason
01:43 Jenny: : 00:00:793 (1,2) - these 3 are sounds that are alike (belong together)
01:43 Jenny: : 00:01:261 (3) - new soundpattern starts
01:44 grumd: : and now listen
01:44 grumd: : (2) is pitched up if you compare with (1)
01:44 grumd: : right?
01:44 Jenny: : it's higher, ye
01:44 grumd: : so the transition between (1) and (2) is a pitch-up
01:45 Jenny: : hai
01:45 grumd: : while
01:45 grumd: : 00:01:261 (3,4,5) -
01:45 grumd: : are almost at the same pitch as (2)
01:45 grumd: : if you listen carefully
01:45 grumd: : so, jump must be (1)-(2)
01:45 *Jenny no musical talent or experience, osu first rhythm game ever
01:45 grumd: : not (2)-(3)
01:46 grumd: : pitch-up is A THING which happens when pitch is going up lol
01:46 Jenny: : ...orly
01:46 Jenny: : doing all of them 1.3x seems fine to me tho'
01:46 grumd: : all of them?
01:47 grumd: : what?
01:47 Jenny: : 1-2-3
01:47 grumd: : nono
01:47 grumd: : 2-3 is a static play
01:47 grumd: : nothing changes so much
01:47 grumd: : trust me, you need only just 1-2
01:47 Jenny: : 1-2 -> 1.7x
01:47 Jenny: : 2-3 -> 1.0x
01:47 grumd: : wat
01:47 grumd: : 1.7 is so overmapped
01:48 grumd: : 1.3 looks good
01:48 Jenny: : wellk
01:48 Jenny: : 00:03:019 (2) - same there then I guess?
01:48 grumd: : yup
01:48 grumd: : 00:02:082 (8,9) - also make them straight
01:49 grumd: : 00:02:082 (8) - and fix this spacing. 7-8 must be 1.0
01:49 grumd: : p wait
01:49 grumd: : nono
01:49 grumd: : not 1.0
01:49 grumd: : hm.. 1.15 is good i guess, nothing wrong here
01:50 grumd: : 00:03:371 (4) - you see, you want to underline how pattern in music change: you make a jump, right?
01:50 grumd: : but this change in the music is _decreasing_
01:50 grumd: : i mean, it's getting softer
01:50 grumd: : and its nonsense to underline softness by a jum
01:50 grumd: : ju,p
01:51 grumd: : jump
01:51 grumd: : -_-
01:51 grumd: : typos hate me
01:51 Jenny: : >moving 2-3 closer to 4-5
01:51 grumd: : 00:03:136 (3,4) - so this must be 1.0
01:51 grumd: : yup
01:51 grumd: : could work
01:51 Jenny: : go
01:51 Jenny: : fasterrrrr
01:51 grumd: : 00:04:543 (1) - make this a jump
01:51 grumd: : after (10)
01:51 Jenny: : 1.3 I assume
01:52 grumd: : yup
01:52 grumd: : as always, to keep consistent
01:53 grumd: : 00:07:717 (8) - make this a bit jumpy, it's not bad, but please place it right between 7 and 9
01:53 grumd: : so distances will be equal
01:53 grumd: : like 1.3 and 1.3
01:53 grumd: : would be best like that, yea
01:53 Jenny: : >putting on 6
01:53 Jenny: : rotating 9 go up (over the left)
01:54 grumd: : 00:07:834 (9) - this slider is bad. too curvy, the angle between anchors is ~90°
01:54 grumd: : it looks odd
01:54 grumd: : you'd better make it smoother
01:54 grumd: : also, update pls, wanna see the changes
01:54 Jenny: : screenz fasterrrr
01:54 Jenny: : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/387690
01:55 grumd: : as i thought
01:55 grumd: : I UNDERSTAND NOTHING
01:55 grumd: : in that screen
01:55 grumd: : update pls
01:55 Jenny: : people have no readability nowadays
01:55 Jenny: : *sigh
01:55 grumd: : also: you noob, 128fps haha, i have 500
01:56 Jenny: : i have green unlimited mode
01:56 Jenny: : ingame I get 700-1200 on 1920x1200 fullscreen
01:56 Jenny: : + SB/Vid/Skins
01:56 grumd: : still baka
01:56 grumd: : i get 1400-1900
01:56 Jenny: : but why would I heat my room in edit mode
01:56 Jenny: : *shrug
01:57 grumd: : okay wait
01:57 grumd: : 00:07:834 (9) -
01:57 grumd: : 00:07:717 (8) -
01:57 grumd: : why 1.3 then 1.7 on this jump?
01:57 Jenny: : because
01:57 Jenny: : i felt like doing that
01:57 grumd: : 00:07:365 (7,8,9) - these three sounds are similar
01:58 grumd: : you dont need a jump like 1.7
01:58 grumd: : that's overmapped
01:58 grumd: : but feel free to reject everything anyway
01:58 grumd: : i'm just suggestions and explaining my reasons
01:58 Jenny: : duuuh
01:58 grumd: : just suggesting
01:59 grumd: : 00:11:701 (8) - place it right under the (5) slider body
01:59 grumd: : x:83, y:94 is PERFECT
01:59 grumd: : it also fixes unneeded jump
02:00 grumd: : 00:11:584 (7,8) - you anyway don't need a jump here
02:00 Jenny: : i got x64, y104
02:00 Jenny: : o.o
02:00 grumd: : 00:12:053 (1,2,3) - same thing as in the beginning
02:00 grumd: : you got that because you want 1.3 then 1.5
02:01 grumd: : i used my numbers to make 1.3 1.3
02:01 grumd: : also your numbers are wrong
02:01 Jenny: : my numbers... wat
02:01 grumd: : x;y i mean
02:01 grumd: : even if you want to keep 1.3x and 1.5x spacing
02:02 grumd: : you need to use x:63, y: 102
02:02 grumd: : not 64;104
02:03 grumd: : 00:12:053 (1,2,3) - dont forget about this though
02:03 Jenny: : what do there? o.o
02:03 grumd: : i've written before
02:03 grumd: : the same thing as in the eginning
02:03 grumd: : beginning
02:03 Jenny: : 1.3x 1.3x
02:03 Jenny: : ?
02:03 Jenny: : or
02:03 Jenny: : 1.3x, 1.0x
02:03 grumd: : 1.3 1.0
02:04 Jenny: : i require the jumps on the sliders D:
02:04 grumd: : why?
02:04 grumd: : any reasons for that?
02:04 Jenny: : plays neat and I like it
02:04 Jenny: : :<
02:04 grumd: : you must follow the music, not just your wishes
02:04 grumd: : but
02:04 Jenny: : wat
02:04 grumd: : if you want, leave it!
02:04 Jenny: : i find the new sounds strong :<
02:04 grumd: : i just prefer to make sense to every point in the map
02:04 Jenny: : so I put that stuff
02:05 grumd: : okay, going farther
02:05 grumd: : 00:13:342 (6,7,8,9) -
02:05 grumd: : this ruins the flow
02:05 grumd: : two stacks, strange sliderbaka
02:05 grumd: : :c
02:05 grumd: : just don't plays well
02:06 grumd: : 00:15:568 (5,1) - please stack
02:07 grumd: : 00:19:201 (9) - too far. i know you want to place it on (3) but that's shit. it's just too far
02:08 grumd: : http://puu.sh/N9AO it would be far better
02:09 grumd: : 00:18:029 (2,3,4) - before you was using circle-slider-slider pattern, now you place circle at the end
02:09 grumd: : why so? keep that consistant if you can
02:09 grumd: : 00:19:904 (2,3,4) - same
02:09 grumd: : 00:20:841 (2,3,4) -
02:09 grumd: : 00:21:428 (1) - 3.34x jump... just too far
02:10 Jenny: : taking the point in mind that the sound suddenly crashed into something totally different... at least from what I
02:10 Jenny: : hear..
02:10 grumd: : 00:21:896 (3) - i prefer to place just 2 circles stacked instead
02:11 grumd: : 00:27:160 (1) - looks bad with that jump
02:11 grumd: : better just use 1.3
02:11 Jenny: : actually
02:11 grumd: : 00:31:730 (1) - why 1.7? use 1.3 again :v
02:11 Jenny: : that is meant to have a 1.0x-like spacing from the reverse arrow's location
02:11 grumd: : oh i can see why
02:12 grumd: : wait, wtf?
02:12 grumd: : i mean
02:12 grumd: : that (1) position doesnt fit (3-5)
02:13 grumd: : this is better http://puu.sh/N9Gp
02:13 grumd: : do what you wish anyway
02:13 grumd: : also move (2) if you apply it
02:13 Jenny: : hua
02:13 Jenny: : go on
02:13 grumd: : 00:32:785 (5) - move this 1/2 earlier
02:14 grumd: : to match the vocals at 00:32:667
02:15 grumd: : i orefer this rhythm anyway http://puu.sh/N9Ic (cursor at 00:32:550- )
02:15 grumd: : prefer*
02:15 Jenny: : i hate timeline-pics
02:15 grumd: : so?
02:16 Jenny: : seems k
02:16 grumd: : 00:31:730 (1,2,3,4) - also please make distances equal
02:16 Jenny: : i like the 1.7x o.o
02:17 grumd: : k
02:17 grumd: : 00:34:660 (2) - please divide into 2 sliders :v
02:17 grumd: : 2 repeats is bad
02:17 grumd: : 00:36:066 (5) - 3x jump. shit.. this is too much. redo it all somehow
02:18 Jenny: : ...
02:18 Jenny: : that is technically a jump
02:18 Jenny: : but isn't played as one because you slip out of the slider before
02:18 Jenny: : anyways, reduced distance
02:19 grumd: : no
02:19 grumd: : you can't slip out if it's moving in the absolutely different direction
02:19 grumd: : it plays odd
02:19 Jenny: : as said, reducing distance
02:20 grumd: : 01:02:668 (1) - also this position is baka doesnt look good
02:20 grumd: : just explaining
02:20 Jenny: : I want a further away position
02:20 Jenny: : but I know that one doesn't look all-too fancy
02:20 grumd: : 01:16:260- must be a note here imo
02:21 grumd: : what about? 01:02:668 (1) - place this on (8) position? looks pretty
02:21 Jenny: : wellk
02:22 grumd: : 01:36:769 (2,3,4) - these sliders must be upbeat
02:23 grumd: : i mean
02:23 grumd: : starting from (2) position
02:23 grumd: : to match vocals
02:23 grumd: : 01:40:168 (1) - just Ctrl+R it
02:24 grumd: : 01:41:691 (8,9) - r u sick? please make it easier
02:25 grumd: : 01:50:011 (3,4,5,6,7) - i hate this. just a random sliderspam at hight distances
02:25 grumd: : 01:56:691 (8,9,10) - this jump is so overmapped..
02:26 Jenny: : actually
02:26 Jenny: : 01:50:011 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3 and 4 are a pair
02:26 Jenny: : and 5-6-7 build a triangle
02:26 grumd: : 02:04:542 (1,2,3) - must be a 1/1 slider, not 3 beats. as you did before (01:10:168 (1) - )
02:26 grumd: : oh right
02:26 grumd: : a triangle
02:26 grumd: : lol
02:27 grumd: : anyway, unnoticeable
02:27 grumd: : so do what you wish
02:27 grumd: : it's still heavily overmapped
02:27 grumd: : 01:56:691 (8,9,10,1) - these, place them closer to everything to make jumps smaller
02:28 grumd: : 02:10:636 (3,4,5) - slider with repeat please
02:28 grumd: : now it's just confusing
02:28 grumd: : slider will fix readability problems
02:29 Jenny: : no slider there
02:29 grumd: : dont want to place it>
02:29 grumd: : ?
02:29 grumd: : ok
02:29 grumd: : 02:17:082 (2) - why antijump?
02:30 Jenny: : dunno, accident with default DS?
02:30 grumd: : 02:20:128 (11,12,13) - these sliderjumps are too hard and meh
02:30 grumd: : anyway, i cant mod that stream part
02:30 Jenny: : dere iz no 2hard
02:30 Jenny: : az long az ftng dere no b 2hard
02:30 Jenny: : desu
02:30 grumd: : 02:20:832 (5,6) - this is ridiculous. i never liked when people use such spacing in sliderstreams
02:31 Jenny: : I can do play that *shrug
02:31 grumd: : 02:22:472 (1) - this slider is also meh
02:31 grumd: : 02:22:472 (1,13,14) - same
02:31 grumd: : 02:26:046 (8,9) - even more meh
02:31 grumd: : sorry, but this is just ~_~
02:32 grumd: : streamy part is shit... can't say anything else, sorry please
02:32 Jenny: : this is a guitar solo
02:32 Jenny: : I can map it full of deathstreams
02:32 grumd: : 02:40:987- remove the note
02:32 Jenny: : and nobody will ever clear this
02:32 grumd: : you can dont map it :v
02:32 grumd: : anyway, let it be
02:33 grumd: : 02:45:793 (4) - NC lol
02:33 grumd: : i'm too tired now
02:33 grumd: : everything looks neat, but very overmapped
02:33 Jenny: : atmosphere :<
02:34 grumd: : yea
02:34 grumd: : you're right
02:34 grumd: : anyway..
02:34 grumd: : gonna post there
02:34 Jenny: : the atmosphere of song is asskicking ;_;

Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:06:300 ( 19 ) - Red note ? ( For consistency. You used d in 00:02:550 ( 17, 34 )

00:13:693 ( 18, 1 ) - Both red notes ? ( You can notice that ( 18, 19, 1, 2, 3 ) are all blue notes, which doesn't really match the significant drum sounds in the music. I suggest changing some to d to fit the drums ~ )

00:40:987 ( 31 ) - Red note ? ( The vocal here is lower than 30 & 32. Also the ratio of blue notes in this small part is almost 100%, reducing the hitsound effects in the song. PM me if you don't understand this )

01:35:245 ( 26, 27 ) - Both red notes ? ( Similar reasons to above. This fits the vocal more & prevents lots of blue notes in one part, which reduces hitsound effects )

02:03:838 ( 46 ~ 48 ) - o o O ? ( To create variations on hitsound patterns & avoid repeating with ( 49 ~ 51 ) )

Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:13:928 ( 70 ) - Red note ? ( There is a drum sound here, which means d fits better )

02:04:424 ( 52 ) - Remove finish ? ( A sudden o O O pattern doesn't fit the previous o o O patterns )

02:47:667 ( 16 ) - Red note ? ( Vocal is significantly lower here )