Updated all diffs except Spiritomb, I have creative problems~ \(°D°)/, I've done a basic bg for Dark Roserade from the first image x3
DarkSkyKnight wrote:
[Chaotic]
General: I suggest using a bigger distance spacing for everything. From 1.00x to 1.1x would be fine. Nah, I think it's good enough for Insane. I'm not suited with long spacing.
00:28:623 (3,4) - Try not getting these circles covered by the slider. Uh that was my original intention. They are not really covered actually, and it's Insane.
01:17:530 (1) - Put this somewhere else. Why?
01:15:030 (1,2,3,4,5) and onwards - Adopt a bigger distance spacing.Alright, something like that.
http://puu.sh/CS29pimpG wrote:
Chaotic Togekiss
01:10:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use a harder patern? something like using jumps in 5,6,7 Done.
01:20:967 - circle here maybe Done.
01:21:123 - ^
Kokatsu wrote:
[Chaotic Togekiss]
HP or OD -1 HP -1
unused timingsection 01:22:686 Removed
00:00:030 (1,2,3) - replace claps with whistles Done
00:02:530 (1) - move NC on next note, atm it's just hard to read with this NC Fixed
00:08:623 (6) - remove whistle (end) Done
00:41:280 (3) - maybe go for a curved shape? Like this?
http://puu.sh/EMnjIllumined wrote:
General
- Timing is totally off. Please use this: BPM 191.941, Offset 2505 I don't agree with offset, as some people (me, DarkSkyKnight, and even DakeDekaane's Garchomp) use the song before the aforementioned offset. I leave BPM to creator.
- Inconsisitency preview time, audio lead-in and countdown. Plus kiai time, too. Please check it carefully. Lead-in + countdown reason same as reason for offset. The rest, I leave it to the map creator.
- Make sure your all things are changed, then call me back if you still need a futher modding.
Kokatsu wrote:
[Garchomp]
Plays better with AR+1 IMO
01:10:032 (2) - NC to prevent Spinnerbug
00:24:407 (7) - the placement is a bit weird since you stack prev. 6 with 4. Either unstack 6 and 4 or stack 7 and 3
00:26:907 (9) - ^ corrosponding
^ Fixed.
[Lucario]
01:10:032 (2) - NC to prevent Spinnerbug Done.
00:54:719 (6) - remove last reverse? I'm not sure about it, but I'm still considerating
[Spiritomb]
The difficulty in this diff is a bit weird, you got those epic long, easy sliders mixed up with singlenote/slider combinations which are not that easy to read (for beginners) (example: 00:35:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) ; consider evening it
00:47:532 (2) - NC to prevent Spinnerbug
01:10:032 (2) - ^
00:12:532 (1) - uhm..make it more of a circle? D:
^This baby is remapped in those parts x3
Illumined wrote:
General
- Timing is totally off. Please use this: BPM 191.941, Offset 2505 There's a tiny difference, I'd take it, but with an offset of 4, if chaotic_iak and DarkSkyNight agree with that.
- Inconsisitency preview time, audio lead-in and countdown. Plus kiai time, too. Please check it carefully. Mine was th only to fix, done.
- Make sure your all things are changed, then call me back if you still need a futher modding.
OMFG, Good Luck, bring a nice place for osu! players. Gambatte~ :3chaotic_iak wrote:
Unable to update because of International Mathematical Olympiad (see sig). I allow DakeDekaane (map creator) to edit my diff.
^working on~ thanksGabe wrote:
Change the source for " Pokemon: Black/White " as other Pokemon beatmaps' did.
edit; can you put all the picture to .jpg? or even .png. Just don't use two different types of picture.
there's also some unrankable stuffs like the MP3 bitrate is 256 kb/s which it must be 192 kb/s and resize roserade.jpg to 1024x768 like the other backgrounds.
reedit; here's the 192kb/s of the song : clic me.
another edit; use this one instead, which you can download it with the .rar. clic me
MKSTAR26 wrote:
Ohey so you wanted me to mod this. Not bothering to link to modding queue, it's in my sig XD
Spiritomb
This seems legit enough for a Normal+
00:17:978 (1,2) - IMO, this doesn't really make sense to someone at a Normal playing level. Maybe make the repeat slider vertical? <-- Slider moved
00:30:794 (2,3) - This actually looks really epic :O
00:37:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part looks a little scattered, tidy it up? I'm bad in this part, I've done my better
00:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:57:521 (5) - This doesn't align with the start of 2, fix it? Done.
01:02:992 (1,2) - Eh, this wouldn't make sense to a Normal-level player. Make it a steady 1/2 sequence, it's boring to pros, but not to newbies. Fixed both
01:05:492 (1,2) - ^
01:17:527 (1,1) - Put this section's volume at 100%. Done.
Lucario
00:16:727 (6) - Circles overlapping a straight slider's body never look good, shift this.I forgot that while editing, now is fixed.
00:22:510 (1) - Long, sharp-bend sliders like these don't look very good. Curve it? Both fixed
00:23:605 (2,3,4,5) - This part looks very square-ish, IMO things look better if they're moved to and from on a curve. Done.
00:25:011 (3) - Long, sharp-bend sliders like these don't look very good. Curve it?
00:31:732 (5,6) - These look like they're squeezed against the sliders, space them out a little?Circles aren't squeezed anymore
00:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try and make the hitsounding "whistle, clap, whistle, whistle, clap, clap". Done.
00:57:990 (1) - It's unclear when the slider stops repeating, try and make it a little more recognizable? Fixed.
01:00:491 (1) - ^
Garchomp
00:02:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This whole part is a little messy and scattered, organize it somehow? Same, I've done my better.
00:22:510 (2) - Nuu this is a one-sharp-bend slider, change it :< Fixed all of them
00:25:011 (3) - ^
00:27:512 (3) - ^, make it a semicircle most preferably
00:37:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is a little messy and scattered, organize it? Done.
01:02:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't understand this part, but I'm looking at it in the editor so it's probably fine. Same pattern, new order.
Dat is all
At least this isn't graveyarded, wait some time, this gonna get ranked >o<Elfuun wrote:
Gosh, I am waiting for this beatmap for ages ):
Thanks :3Koro McAlpine wrote:
[Milotic]
00:21:260 (2) - Move one grid left, because it's good. /Done
00:22:510 (1) - Spacing after you done this above. /Done
00:49:394 (5) - Will you move this to x:464 y:192? After that, fix the spacing. /I don't want a lineal pattern, so don't.
01:12:526 (7) - Move one grid left. /Done
[Spiritomb]
00:15:008 (1) - Try moving this near x:38 y:188. /Moved to x:36 y:188
[Lucario]
00:33:764 (4) - Move the last point to x:364 y:140. /Done
chaotic_iak wrote:
New version: http://puu.sh/QF2J
(Yeah I'm back at my diff.)
Also time to mod this again! (Also to regain my modding skills.)
[Milotic]
00:40:016 - I think break is not necessary. Just add some beat in 00:41:266 to avoid a long gap without beats.
00:45:017 - ^
00:47:987 (2) - Uh objects on half-beats aren't Easy I think. Instead of the current 2,3,4, try putting a circle on 00:48:143 and 00:48:768 instead; much better for Easy.
00:50:488 (1) - ^
00:52:989 (1) - ^
00:55:489 (1) - ^
01:10:494 (2) - ^ Instead of rearranging the circles, I suggest using sliders here. /Taken and done.
/Other suggestions sounds off for me, sorry
[Spiritomb]
Why does it feel like a Hard instead of a Normal ._. Mostly about objects on half-beats; I feel that there are too much of them for a Normal. I'm not sure about it though. No other complaints besides that.
[Lucario]
00:02:817 (1) - Sounds offbeat. Looks like it's better placed on 00:02:973. /I missed that in last update, thanks
00:06:255 (3) - Incorrect timing I suppose? (Should be 00:06:412) /Done
[Garchomp]
Wait wut AR 9? I think AR 8 is better, especially as you have one object just one beat after a spinner (insufficient recognition time). 00:02:817 has the same issue as Lucario. Otherwise it seems good. /I thought it had AR 8, fixed.
[Roserade]
Darn I still can't beat this one Can't mod unless I got how to pass it. Although observing the auto, seems like you have irregular spacing at times where it shouldn't. E.g. 00:04:405 (1) (still in stream), 01:11:280 (3) (has unexpected timing so spacing is important).
Okay so apparently I'm still not that good at modding.
Chaotic Togekiss :
Combo1 : 0,0,255
Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Dark Roserade :
Combo1 : 50,104,205
Combo2 : 31,173,38
Combo3 : 151,247,9
Garchomp :
Combo1 : 191,0,191
Combo2 : 55,135,255
Combo3 : 255,112,43
Lucario :
Combo1 : 191,0,191
Combo2 : 55,135,255
Combo3 : 255,112,43
Milotic :
Combo1 : 191,0,191
Combo2 : 55,135,255
Combo3 : 255,112,43
Spiritomb :
Combo1 : 191,0,191
Combo2 : 55,135,255
Combo3 : 255,112,43
powpow9089 wrote:
Milotic = Easy
Spiritomb = Normal
Lucario = Hard 1
Garchomp = Hard 2
Chaotic Togekiss = Insane More like a guest Insane; Garchomp is author's Insane
Dark Roserade = Extra
Inconsistency in combo colours:
Chaotic Togekiss :
Combo1 : 0,0,255
Combo2 : 128,128,128
Combo3 : 255,0,0 There is a rule about combo color consistency?
Garchomp :
Combo1 : 191,0,191
Combo2 : 55,135,255
Combo3 : 255,112,43
delete .osb file, do Full submit I hear osb files are sometimes auto-generated, so it's okay to have it even without storyboard. Not sure though.
[Chaotic Togekiss]
OD-1
sv too slow in Insane Diff... :c Hm balanced by above
Snap All Notes, please~ Uh it's usual for me: snap notes at 1/4 if necessary, but use 1/2 normally so moving with arrow keys becomes faster
btw, fixed snapping on Chaotic Togekiss.powpow9089 wrote:
Inconsistency in combo colours: /*That will be fixed if a MAT/BAT ask for
Change AudioLeadIn to 2000 /*I think 1500 its enough, sorry
delete .osb file, do Full submit[/spoilerbox]
[Milotic]
OD+1 AR-1 /*AR 2 is too slow and I want an easier diff, it stays
00:03:129 - /*Done
01:10:025 (1) NC /*Fixed
[Spiritomb]
OD-1 /*Done
00:06:881 - http://puu.sh/V6KD /It's easier with a slider
00:14:696 (1) Remove NC /*Done
00:17:509 (3) NC /*Done
00:17:978 (1) Remove NC /*Done
00:38:765 (3,4,5) Convert it to slider? /*Done
00:43:767 (3,4,5) ^ /*Done
[Lucario]
OD-1 /*Done
00:21:344 - /*Done
00:31:263 - ^ /*Applied on 00:33:295 -
[Garchomp]
HP-2 (HP 8 For Hard is too mainstream >w<) /*This diff is supposed to be Insane, but ok, done.
too many circle in 00:12:507 - 00:37:202, change some to slider, maybe? /*I don't know, I like circles x3
01:17:501 - Unsnapped Green Line (Inherited Points) /*Fixed
Dusty wrote:
[Milotic]
00:28:450 (2,3) - if this overlap was unintentional, consider fixing it to be more like 00:33:139 (1,2,3)? /*Fixed
00:33:764 (3,4) - fix overlap? /*Fixed
00:47:518 (1,2,3,4) - I was not expecting this at all and combobroke (sadly... jeez, I suck at this game) but maybe consider changing this so that it starts with a slider? /*Done
[Spiritomb]
00:18:290 (3,4) - maybe break distance snap a little bit so that it doesn't overlap? /*Fixed
00:20:791 (2,3) - ^ /*Fixed
00:28:293 (2,3) - ^ and etc. /*I had different spacing here, thanks, and fixed
00:33:295 (2,3) - actually these need to be closer together /* 00:33:295 (2) didn't have the correct lenght, I notice by this, thanks
00:55:020 (1,2,3) - these don't really make a straight line /*Yup, I don't want make too many lineal patterns
[Garchomp]
00:51:738 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - these two streams overlap in an ugly and confusing way /*Fixed
01:02:992 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - confusing overlap /*Fixed
In Lucario and Garchomp I notice that there aren't very many patterns/symmetry. next time try using some patterns/symmetry, it will make the maps more visually interesting. also there's lots of streams; maybe add some sliders into the mix? /*I like circles ;w; making some patterns and not confusing streams in Garchomp.
Thanks c:Genkishi wrote:
Yo o/
[Spiritomb]
00:42:517 (1) - Instead of clap use finish /*Fixed
01:02:523 (4) - 1 grid down? so it aligns with slider (2) /*Fixed
[Lucario]
00:42:517 (1) - Add finish /*Fixed
00:49:394 (6) - New combo /*I don't like very much, sorry
00:51:894 (6) - ^ /*^
[Garchomp]
00:21:885 (8) - move 1 grid to the left /*Fixed
00:33:295 (1) - 1 grid down /*Moved this combo 1 grid up instead
00:39:234 (4,5,6) - How bout unstacking this notes by moving the (4) by 2 grids to the right, (5) by 2 grids up and (6) by 2 grids to the left /*Done
00:44:236 (4,5,6) - ^ Same situation /*Done
00:51:738 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make it like this? http://puu.sh/Yzvb /*I already had it like that
That's All GL
TheVileOne wrote:
Milotic
Very well made difficulty.
00:22:510 (1) - Nice slider. /*Thanks
00:35:639 (1,2) - Not a perfect blanket? /*Fixed
Spiritomb
Had flow issues here and there, but nothing serious.
00:06:881 (2) - Use a softer curve. A right angle seems out of place. Only a suggestion. /*Done
Lucario
Other than the start being crooked, I had nothing to say about this. Streams look surprisingly well.
00:02:973 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be so much cleaner if you didn't start this crooked. http://puu.sh/Zw5K /*Fixed
Garchomp
Great use of streams. There are some tricky parts. Definitely everything a good Hard is supposed to have.
00:16:571 (7,8) - Exactly 0.8. Please make the pattern perfect. /*Fixed
01:21:278 (1,2) - ^ /*Fixed
Dark Roserade
Really well made. Patterns have nice form.
01:12:838 - You definitely need a note here. It makes sense. /*Added
01:22:060 (5,6) - Jump comes from nowhere. I don't suggest such a large spacing for something that doesn't even sound like it should be a jump. /*I tried my best as the original creator isn't available now and let me do the modifications, I moved 01:22:216 (6,7,8,9,10) - and follow the curve made by the previous stream
Conclusion
Really nice mapset as a whole. It's nearly bubble ready. /* ^o^
Yay thanks. Darn for mapping at night. http://puu.sh/ZYz5TheVileOne wrote:
Chaotic Togekiss
I look forward to playing this difficulty when it gets ranked. Really quality stuff. Yay thanks :3
00:00:004 (1) - Move down 1 unit? Done
00:02:661 (1,2,3) - This isn't 1.5 like the rest of the combo. Remade
00:07:662 (2,3) - 1.5 snap instead of 1.6. Remade
00:08:131 (4,5) - ^ Remade
00:07:350 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider making this one perfect U shape. Remade
00:17:196 (8,1) - Spacing is different than 00:14:696 (8,1) Not a particularly large difference; I'd think no one will actually predict inaccurately because of this
00:23:292 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I like these patterns. Yay
00:28:450 (2,3,4) - Make spacing equal please. Done
00:30:951 (2,3,4) - ^ Done
00:47:831 (4,5) - Spacing. It's screwing up the pattern. Currently have no idea. Further revision will come soon; it's night here and I'm sleeping late