My mods are generally suggestions, with red ones being things that you must change and bold ones things that I strongly recommend you to change.
p.s. My heart yearns to get this ranked, so I'm going to be stricter, and point out anything that I don't like. Sorry for nazi mod.
[Milotic]
[Spiritomb]
[Lucario]
[Garchomp]
[Chaotic Togekiss]
DONE XD
Good luck with map, and please spend a minute evaluating my mod. Thx.
p.s. My heart yearns to get this ranked, so I'm going to be stricter, and point out anything that I don't like. Sorry for nazi mod.
General Comments
As Chewin pointed out, this style of mapping is too old...can be ranked but I don't know, you better check out new maps and take a look at new styles.
Offset +2.
Lower volume of whistles by 10%.
Milotic
Too many circles, and predominantly straight line, straight edges formation. Too many circles make it bad for beginners. I'd assume this is for beginners.
Spiritomb
The repeating slider idea is repeated WAY MANY TIMES.
Lucario
Too many straight edge imo.
Garchomp
Nice for a first try.
Chaotic Togekiss
Nice.
Offset +2.
Lower volume of whistles by 10%.
Milotic
Too many circles, and predominantly straight line, straight edges formation. Too many circles make it bad for beginners. I'd assume this is for beginners.
Spiritomb
The repeating slider idea is repeated WAY MANY TIMES.
Lucario
Too many straight edge imo.
Garchomp
Nice for a first try.
Chaotic Togekiss
Nice.
[Milotic]
Milotic Mods
00:02:530 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would assume that beginners would not execute this portion well. The first part has a bad unequal distance spacing, while the third combo seems to be not creative enough.
A suggested pattern:
00:12:532 (1) - Remove whistle imo.
00:18:157 (1) - Straight line flows like this are not intuitive. Try this:
00:20:657 (1,2,3) - 00:28:782 (3,4) - Don't put the 4 there, it's confusing for beginners.
00:30:657 (1) - This combo and so on, try not to use all straight line patterns.
00:37:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Confusing for beginners.
00:42:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I suggest using sliders.
00:47:532 (1,2,3,4) - Bad distance spacing, this is wrong.
(It appears the same as previous sections, but having 0.5x really, this is a trap for beginners and is not good.)
00:49:407 (1,2,3) - I suggest not stacking, because beginners...yeah.
A suggested pattern:
00:12:532 (1) - Remove whistle imo.
00:18:157 (1) - Straight line flows like this are not intuitive. Try this:
00:20:657 (1,2,3) - 00:28:782 (3,4) - Don't put the 4 there, it's confusing for beginners.
00:30:657 (1) - This combo and so on, try not to use all straight line patterns.
00:37:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Confusing for beginners.
00:42:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ I suggest using sliders.
00:47:532 (1,2,3,4) - Bad distance spacing, this is wrong.
(It appears the same as previous sections, but having 0.5x really, this is a trap for beginners and is not good.)
00:49:407 (1,2,3) - I suggest not stacking, because beginners...yeah.
[Spiritomb]
Spiritomb Mods
00:00:655 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest replacing it with a spinner.
00:12:530 (1) - Unfortunately, this type of slider is not nice to look.
00:27:998 (1) - Don't let it intersect the previous slider.
00:31:280 (3,4) - Too small dist. spacing.
00:37:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try something else.
00:12:530 (1) - Unfortunately, this type of slider is not nice to look.
00:27:998 (1) - Don't let it intersect the previous slider.
00:31:280 (3,4) - Too small dist. spacing.
00:37:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try something else.
[Lucario]
Lucario Mods
00:03:155 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Try something else.
00:14:717 (1,2) - Try not to let it be on slider 3.
00:37:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try something else, use a nicer shape or a good flow etc.
00:42:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice.
00:47:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no. don't do this. do not put beats on the red tick at this moment.
Use more flow...don't just adopt straight line figures...
00:14:717 (1,2) - Try not to let it be on slider 3.
00:37:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try something else, use a nicer shape or a good flow etc.
00:42:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice.
00:47:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - no. don't do this. do not put beats on the red tick at this moment.
Use more flow...don't just adopt straight line figures...
[Garchomp]
Garchomp Mods
00:00:655 (1) - Spinner.
00:03:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - First off, don't let it stack too much imo, second, add some new combo in the midst of the sequence.
00:13:623 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not a nice flow.
00:13:780 (3) - 3 overlaps with slider.
00:20:030 (10) - New combo (nc.) 00:20:498 (1) delete new combo, then, make 00:20:811 (2) as new combo.
00:37:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - As usual, don't do this.
00:42:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Bad flow.
00:47:998 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - And so on, putting notes on the red tick is awkward.
00:56:123 (5) - Don't hide it like this.
01:03:780 (6) - and so on, confusing pattern of hiding (stacking)
01:22:217 (7,8,9,10,11) - Awkward flow.
00:03:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - First off, don't let it stack too much imo, second, add some new combo in the midst of the sequence.
00:13:623 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not a nice flow.
00:13:780 (3) - 3 overlaps with slider.
00:20:030 (10) - New combo (nc.) 00:20:498 (1) delete new combo, then, make 00:20:811 (2) as new combo.
00:37:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - As usual, don't do this.
00:42:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Bad flow.
00:47:998 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - And so on, putting notes on the red tick is awkward.
00:56:123 (5) - Don't hide it like this.
01:03:780 (6) - and so on, confusing pattern of hiding (stacking)
01:22:217 (7,8,9,10,11) - Awkward flow.
[Chaotic Togekiss]
Togekiss Mods
Can be improved. I would edit this some time later after you improved the other difficulties
DONE XD
Good luck with map, and please spend a minute evaluating my mod. Thx.