This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 27 de enero de 2013 at 09:26:59 p.m.

Artist: Junichi Masuda
Title: Battle! Champion Cynthia
Source: Pokemon: Black/White
Tags: chaotic_iak DarkSkyKnight Irreversible Pearl Diamond Platinum Game Freak Nintendo
BPM: 191.94
Filesize: 2897kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:

1. Chaotic Togekiss (5 stars, 305 notes)
2. Dark Roserade (5 stars, 331 notes)
3. Garchomp (4.99 stars, 258 notes)
4. Irre's Gastrodon (5 stars, 239 notes)
5. Lucario (4.78 stars, 192 notes)
6. Milotic (1.85 stars, 72 notes)
7. Spiritomb (3.79 stars, 111 notes)

Download: Junichi Masuda - Battle! Champion Cynthia
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My 1st beatmap, literally I put my heart on it, lots and lots of work, but it worth it :3
02/01/13: Redownload if you did it before this date, new format for backgrounds.
Milotic, Spiritomb, Lucario and Garchomp difficulties by me.
Chaotic Togekiss by chaotic_iak
Irre's Gastrodon by Irreversible
Dark Roserade by DarkSkyKnight
I hope you enjoy, and if possible, help me to make this ranked :3
Any kind of feedback is welcome~
Thanks all mods have helped me to improve my work~
Gotta map 'em all! Pokémon!
History:
03/06/12 Submitted
13/06/12 Added Chaotic Togekiss by chaotic_iak
21/06/12 Added Dark Roserade by DarkSkyKnight
02/11/12 Added Irre's Gastrodon by Irreversible

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
Background
zvvuaq.jpg is 615 x 470, which differs from the recommended size of 1024 x 768 or 800 x 600.

MP3 Bitrate
The bitrate for Yousei Teikoku.mp3 is 259kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s.

[Milotic]
00:07:530 (8) - NC

[Spiritomb]
00:07:530 (8) - NC?
00:59:405 (5,6) - alignment?
01:01:905 (5,6) - ^
01:04:405 (5,6) - ^
01:06:905 (5,6) - ^

[Lucario]
00:03:780 - nc?
00:04:405 - ^
00:05:030 - ^
00:05:655 - ^
00:06:280 - ^
00:06:905 - ^
00:07:530 - ^
↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑↑just suggestion♪~

[Garchomp]
all note and slider not alignment line~u need to resnap all note....
orz!!!this diff is so pro!!!!!
look is good~

good mapset~
Good Luck~xD

Hi from my queue
[General]
For all diffs remove the spinner at the beginning. Give the player a chance to get ready, plus you shouldn't have anything before the red line

[Milotic]

00:05:655 New Color
00:07:842 to 00:11:905 Add Spinner
00:18:780 to 00:19:405 Add Slider dont reverse
00:21:280 to 00:21:905 ^
00:39:248 (4,5,6) don't stack
00:47:998 Remove New Color
00:49:405 New Color
00:50:030 Remove New Color
00:50:498 ^
00:50:967 New Color
00:55:498 Remove New Color
00:57:998 ^
01:00:498 ^
01:02:998 ^
01:05:498 ^

[Spiritomb]

00:05:655 New Color
00:07:842 to 00:11:905 Add Spinner
00:22:530 Instead of one big slider break it into two
00:50:030 Remove New Color
00:52:530 ^
00:55:030 ^
01:22:530 Remove note and finish spinner here

[Lucario]

00:04:405 New Color
00:05:655 ^
00:07:842 to 00:11:905 Add Spinner
00:15:030 Remove New Color
00:17:530 ^
00:25:030 ^
00:27:530 ^
00:50:498 ^
00:52:998 ^
00:55:498 ^
00:57:998 ^
00:58:780 New Color
01:00:498 Remove New Color
01:01:280 New Color
01:02:998 Remove New Color
01:03:780 New Color
01:05:498 Remove New Color
01:06:280 New Color

[Garchomp]

I'm not really good a modding insane diffs so ask a more advanced modder for this one

Thank you, I've done some moddifications

Athena Tennos wrote:

MP3 Bitrate
The bitrate for Yousei Teikoku.mp3 is 259kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s.

Wut .w.

Athena Tennos wrote:

[Garchomp]
all note and slider not alignment line~u need to resnap all note....
orz!!!this diff is so pro!!!!!
look is good~

\(oDo)/ thanks for that

Yu-Izanagi-12 wrote:

[General]
For all diffs remove the spinner at the beginning. Give the player a chance to get ready, plus you shouldn't have anything before the red line

Thanks for pointing this.

Time to mod!

All are suggestions unless in bold, hence the usual asking tone (if you read my previous mods) doesn't exist here. Some are those that are given to me in my map

[Milotic]
Countdown not necessary
00:02:530 - Better to have an object here
00:03:780 (2,4,2,4) - Try not to stack them; it's Easy right?
00:17:998 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4), 00:27:998 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3), etc - In Easy, try not to have objects on red ticks (or any non-white ticks for that matter)
00:18:780 (4), 00:21:280 (4), etc - Number of repeats is confusing; generally in Easy/Normal, if a slider is less than 1-beat long, use a predictable number of repeats or don't have an object soon after the slider (soon = seen before slider ends)
00:41:280, 00:46:280 - Add break/spinner/something, just to avoid draining HP
01:12:530 (7) - Add finish
01:17:530 - Spinner should start here

[Spiritomb]
Wut Spiritomb is Normal? It's like her starting Pokemon and things are really bad with the lack of weaknesses- Okay your map, your choice.
Slider tick rate seems better 1
00:23:780 - Wut what is this bookmark doing here unsnapped?
00:47:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7), etc - Better to follow the melody (timpani?) like hitcircle/slider end on 00:47:530, 00:47:686, 00:47:842, 00:47:998, 00:48:155, 00:48:467, 00:48:780, 00:48:936, 00:49:092, 00:49:248, 00:49:405, 00:49:561, 00:49:717, 00:49:873 (or something; this is what I hear). Otherwise it gets confusing; in fact I mistimed the 4 half a beat early.
01:12:530 (7) - Add finish. Wait wut why is this exactly as the Milotic's 01:12:530.

[Lucario]
Increase AR, things are quite confusing (many hit objects = don't know which to hit)
00:47:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9), etc - Similar to above, especially as the 4 has a different time/distance ratio
01:12:530 (7) - Add finish too

[Insane]
Increase AR, things are quite confusing (many hit objects = don't know which to hit)
00:15:030 (1), etc - Perhaps no new combo
01:20:967 - Spinner should end here

Yay. Good luck and have fun

Hm. Hey there, from my queue.

[General]

Change the offset of your timing point to 30. This is so the offset sits at the start of the spinner in [Spiritomb, [Lucario] and [Garchomp]. Never place hitobjects before the first timing section. Don't forget to make this change in every difficulty.
Your BG is 785x600, this is unrankable. Your BG must be a 4:3 ratio. Suggested dimensions are: 1024x768 and 800x600. You may also want to find a BG with a better quality.
I don't reccomend using black as a combo colour, as it blends in with Cynthia's coat. The kiai time in [Milotic] runs slightly longer than the kiai time in the other difficulties. It's required that all standard difficulties use the exact same kiai time.
The slider tick rate in [Spititomb] is 0.5, I believe this is unrankable. Also, it's required that all standard difficulties use the same slider tick rate as well. If I recall correctly.

Well. In general, your map could use a lot of work.
For your first map, it is quite nice. The patterns are easy to read and you've used distance snap.
I'll just point out any unrankable issues and give you a couple tips for mapping in the future.

[Milotic]

It's reccomended that you use at least AR 3 for any difficulty. Anything underneath 3 is justy tedious and hard to read.

00:12:530 (1) - Placing two slider points on top of each other force the slider to make an immediate change of direction, these are called red anchors. Was this the kind of shape you were trying to make? 00:18:780 (4) - It's been observed that many newer players tend to let go of the sliders after the first slider repeat, so try to avoid having more than 1 repeat.
01:11:905 (5) - In easier difficulties, be sure to place new combos when the consistency in spacing changes.

[Spiritomb]

00:18:311 (2,3,4,5) - I reccomend that you avoid having 1/2 tapping in easier difficulties. Most new players would use mouse-only and for them, it would be difficult to click at this speed whilst keeping control of their mouse.
00:36:280 (6,7) - Personally, I would delete (7) and give (6) an extra slider repeat. This will make (6) consistent to all previous sliders in this sort of pattern.
00:47:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The tapping consistency is constantly changing in these patterns, new players would find this very difficult to sightread and play at their level.

[Lucario]

It appears here you've used different combo colours to the other difficulties.
If I guess right, this is to try match the colours of a Lucario, right?
That's a creative idea, however I believe it's reccomended that you use the same combo colours throughout every difficulty, to keep consistency.

00:28:780 (5) - Do not ever place a repeat slider underneath another slider, the hitburst from the previous slider would cover the repeat arrow, thus making it difficult to read.
00:30:030 (1,2,3) - I reccomend you try avoid placing hitobjects this close to the border of the screen.
00:47:998 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here would easily decieve the player, (4) is placed way too close to (3).
00:50:030 (9) - And here, (9) is too close to (8).
00:57:998 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This song runs at a rather high bpm. Long 1/2 streams like these here are pretty difficult for a [Hard].

[Garchomp]

AR 6 is WAY too slow for an [Insane]. Most difficulties of this level would use AR 8, or 9. A higher AR is also reccomended so that notes are easier to read.

00:03:780 (3,4,5) - These kinda crash into the hp bar a bit, try to avoid placing hitobjects this high.
00:20:811 (3) - I'd add a new combo here, it's the start of a new pattern.
00:33:311 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These sorts of patterns are interesting, but purely frustrating to play. Your goal is to create a fun map to play, not something that's frustrating.
01:16:436 (6,7,8,9,10) - Try to avoid mapping streams that overlap themselves, it's difficult to sightread.

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You're off to a good start, as a mapper.
Your first map is quite impressive, and better than most other first maps I've seen.
Best of luck with this.

Lots of work but it seems better :3 Thank you everybody, I've changed that "frustrating streams"

While editing Milotic remembered when I was a newbie ;w;

Well, that doesn't matter, keep helping me, please D:

Hm... Are you accepting guest diffs? I think I can make something fun (read: killer) from this song.

chaotic_iak wrote:

Hm... Are you accepting guest diffs? I think I can make something fun (read: killer) from this song.

Hmm, if you don't mind, that will be awesome, thanks :3

http://puu.sh/ADvn

I can't find a good background Can anyone suggest me a good background?

Maybe one of these~ It's hard~ D:

http://puu.sh/AZzs

http://puu.sh/AZzA

Btw, I liked it, good work x3

It doesn't have the same theme Or if you have some Pokemon name that Cynthia uses and you haven't used it above, and also you have such wallpaper that fits with the others (moe forms I see?), then I can use that name.

http://puu.sh/B9OJ Gastrodon

http://puu.sh/B9Or Togekiss

I didn't find moemon from 5th Gen ~_~ I hope this help~

http://puu.sh/Bfh3
Save the Togekiss wallpaper as "togekisswallpaper.jpg".

Who says Togekiss can't be mad?

Done~

If someone views this thread, please mod, we'll be pleased \o/

Hi~
Random Mod~

Serperior Is The Best Pokemon!

Milotic
00:18:155 (1) - Move this note 1 grid right
00:30:030 (3,4,5) - Change (3,4,5) to one slider with a reserve and rearrange (6)
00:43:780 (3,4,5) - ^
00:47:530 to 00:57:030 - Notes here have a huge spacing distance from the rest
00:57:998 (1,2,3) - Confusing for beginners. It's an Easy map IMPROVISE!
01:00:498 (1,2,3) - ^
01:02:998 (1,2,3) - ^
01:05:498 (1,2,3) - ^
01:10:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make the spacing equal.
Try to make the spacing as equal as possible~
This is an Easy map

Spiritomb
Approach Rate + 2 to prevent overlapping of notes
01:07:217 (3) - Way too near to (2)

Lucario
00:17:217 (1,2,3) - Move this away from the previous notes. It's too near
00:57:730 (8) - Move this slider one grid right

Garchomp
Seems Okay~

Choatic Togekiss
Wow....Togekiss is chaotic
00:59:405 (1) - One grid down
01:01:905 (1) - One grid up
01:04:405 (1) - One grid right
01:06:905 (1) - One grid left
____________________________________________________________
Gooda luck~
Serperior is the best Pokemon~

http://puu.sh/Bknb
Fixed...with a lot of differences to maintain stuffs.

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this



Good luck

Ignore my post at #17 above because of the new mod. Use this one: http://puu.sh/Bx46

Whew~

I feel this is improving more, thank you dear mods, I love you~

Keep pointing what is wrong or too difficult~ I think this is becoming better >w<