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Junichi Masuda - Battle! Champion Cynthia

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DakeDekaane
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UnderminE wrote:

[Spiritomb]
00:38:765 (3,2) - not symmetrical shapes /*Fixed
00:47:205 (3) - clap /*Put
01:22:529 (1) - too loud /*80%
00:58:146 - starting from here you can use that same trick I mentioned earlier /*I couldn't understand if the loud volume issue or keep going up with the volume

[Lucario]
01:13:620 (3,4,5,6) - ugly pattern /*If by ugly you mean a bit squeezed and "disordered", it was fixed.
01:21:904 (1,2,3) - too loud /*80%

[Garchomp]
USE SLIDERS MAN. /*OK, I'LL USE SOME SLIDERS D:< (but you'll have to wait the updated version for this, as I'm a bit lazy)
01:21:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - too loud /*80%

Rest looks fine. Good luck!

Edit: I also checked Irre's Gastrodon and Dark Roserade too though they had their own styles so couldn't find anything to fix.
Well, volume issues corrected (some changed of my own, but still taking the suggestion for that point).

Thanks for modding~ o/
Irreversible
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Irreversible

UnderminE wrote:

Edit: I also checked Irre's Gastrodon and Dark Roserade too though they had their own styles so couldn't find anything to fix.
yay :D xD
UnderminE
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UnderminE
Oh dude \:D/
Saten
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Saten
Hey!

[Dark Roserade]
00:00:004 - change this to soft & use 70% instead
00:01:645 (1) - start this 1/4 later but let it end on the same place as before
00:02:817 - I prefer that you start the 1/2 here. In other words, add something here & 00:02:973 -
00:03:129 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern plays really weird when you go between this 00:03:598 (4,1) - . Try this
SPOILER
or
SPOILER
00:03:442 (3) - random finish, doesn't really fit here imo
00:04:692 (2,1) - random finish
00:05:943 (2) - ^
00:06:881 (1) - ^
00:07:193 (3) - ^
00:07:506 - use 60% vol
00:24:699 (11,12,13,1) - I don't like the idea that you stacked the slider when it has 1/2 spacing
00:25:949 (5) - random whistle?
00:32:201 (9) - remove finish
00:32:513 (1) - finish on start
00:34:702 (1) - remove finish
00:35:014 (1) - finish on start
00:59:397 (1,2,3,4) - pattern like this is much better if you make forth and back instead of making a very awkward anti-jump. so basically 00:59:709 (3,4) - Reverse these (Ctrl+G)
01:01:898 (1,2,3,4) - same here 01:02:054 (2,3) - Reverse
01:07:524 (1) - finish
01:09:400 - remove this green line
01:10:025 - add a green line here with 60%
01:10:494 (1,2) - finish
01:12:526 (7,1,2) - avoid stacking there
01:13:307 (3,4,5) - make something more fun, stacking these is just odd and it doesn't really flow imo
01:17:527 - 90% is too loud. Reduce it to 60%

[Irre's Gastrodon]
You mix patterns that mainly fits with AR 8 for the entire map, and then you have jump patterns that are very hard to read with AR 8 lol
for example this: 00:25:480 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - really hard to read with 8 while it's a piece of cake with 9
Personally, I think within the range between SV 1,80-2,00 fits best for insane diffs if you're gonna use AR 9 (because higher spacing make it more comfortable). But it's nothing you should change now, I'm just letting you know :P
00:47:362 (6) - remove finish
00:47:518 - missing beat & add finish on it
00:47:674 - btw, do you really need all these breaks? Small breaks are annoying. Yes I know the drain but it wont kill you unless you have 40% HP
00:57:209 - missing beat
01:07:524 (1) - finish on start
01:07:524 - 60%

[Chaotic Togekiss]
00:07:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ok this part was really messed up :o Nothing wrong with the rhythm, just the placement
00:37:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - you are playing with spacing, some notes are hard to read
00:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^
01:07:524 - 40%
01:07:524 (1) - finish
01:15:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - confusing part again
01:17:684 - add a green line with 40%

[Garchomp]
Why are you using Circle Size 5? Every other diff has 4 and this one only got 5, doesn't make much sense to me
00:30:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - messed up pattern imo, scale it out a bit
01:12:995 (1,2,3) - This plays really odd after the previous part. Offbeats are hard

[Lucario]
Please use AR 7 instead
everything is confusing with 6
01:11:901 (5,6,7,1,2) - please avoid stacking 2 different beat-tempos
01:17:527 - 50%

[Spiritomb]
I'm really against AR 6 on Normals. But this plays muuch better with 6
01:17:527 - 50%
01:17:527 (1,1) - Why? On a Normal D: that's the worst thing you can do

[Milotic]
00:47:518 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is not reccomended on an Easy difficulty. It gooes in a weird way and forces the player to alternate between offbeats and regular beats which is really frustrating. consider sticking to 1/1 or use more sliders that might make it less messy
01:12:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same here


I still think this needs a bit more work, but I hope this helps out a bit
Good luck!
chaotic_iak
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chaotic_iak

UnderminE wrote:

[Chaotic Togekiss]
aww cute bg
00:10:944 (3,4) - no I don't quite get what you intend.
00:15:008 (1) - not symmetrical Not intended to be symmetrical, although sure.
00:27:981 - Starting from this part until here 00:37:515 - you can use volume-ups by 5% since that horrible melody in the background (lol) gets louder and louder. Done
00:58:146 - starting from here you can use that same trick I mentioned earlier Done
Loved it <3 Though too huge circles but anyways My Insane diffs tend to have CS of 4, rarely 5. But that's current style... This one is made like a few months ago. If someone else has a similar opinion, CS 5 it is.

Saten wrote:

[Chaotic Togekiss]
00:07:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ok this part was really messed up :o Nothing wrong with the rhythm, just the placement Intended. Well not really messed up, only patterned somehow.
00:37:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - you are playing with spacing, some notes are hard to read Attempting to make everything 1.25 +/- 0.06x.
00:42:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:07:524 - 40% Done
01:07:524 (1) - finish Done
01:15:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - confusing part again Same reason
01:17:684 - add a green line with 40% Merged with 01:07:524 's 40%
Thanks! http://puu.sh/1vx4A
DakeDekaane
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Saten wrote:

Hey!

[Dark Roserade]

/*^Fixed all.

[Garchomp]
Why are you using Circle Size 5? Every other diff has 4 and this one only got 5, doesn't make much sense to me /*(Look at my avatar) Fixed uguu~
00:30:794 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - messed up pattern imo, scale it out a bit /*This made me think in remapping almost the whole diff
01:12:995 (1,2,3) - This plays really odd after the previous part. Offbeats are hard /*Added a circle in 01:12:838, it should make it better

[Lucario]
/*^Fixed all.

[Spiritomb]
/*^Fixed all.
01:17:527 (1,1) - Why? On a Normal D: that's the worst thing you can do /*Circle removed~

[Milotic]
00:47:518 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is not reccomended on an Easy difficulty. It gooes in a weird way and forces the player to alternate between offbeats and regular beats which is really frustrating. consider sticking to 1/1 or use more sliders that might make it less messy
01:12:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same here

/*^Lots of people have complained about that, I'll change in some time (I couldn't do anything nice for here)~ (My nice pattern uguu~)

I still think this needs a bit more work, but I hope this helps out a bit
Good luck!
Irreversible
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Irreversible

Saten wrote:

Hey!
hey! xD
[Irre's Gastrodon]
You mix patterns that mainly fits with AR 8 for the entire map, and then you have jump patterns that are very hard to read with AR 8 lol
for example this: 00:25:480 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - really hard to read with 8 while it's a piece of cake with 9
Personally, I think within the range between SV 1,80-2,00 fits best for insane diffs if you're gonna use AR 9 (because higher spacing make it more comfortable). But it's nothing you should change now, I'm just letting you know :Pok, thanks :D
00:47:362 (6) - remove finish
00:47:518 - missing beat & add finish on it
00:47:674 - btw, do you really need all these breaks? Small breaks are annoying. Yes I know the drain but it wont kill you unless you have 40% HP
00:57:209 - missing beat
01:07:524 (1) - finish on start
01:07:524 - 60%
changed everything.. except the breaks, i think i'll leave them like this 'xD (maybe i'll change them LOL)
Aurele
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Aurele
The source should be "Pokemon: Black/White"
You can look at the other ranked beatmaps here: http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?q=Pokemon:
chaotic_iak
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chaotic_iak
Feels like Pokemon Diamond/Pearl/Platinum for me? Dunno, forgot. If someone bothers to go through DPPt's Elite Four and compare the music...

EDIT: Oh formatting. Oops. Didn't see current source before posting :P
DakeDekaane
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Thanks, source changed /o/
ColdTooth
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ColdTooth
Modmodmodmodmod~ so tempting to make a guest difficulty, Must resist!~

Pokemon~ c;

[Milotic]

00:47:518 (1) - Slider should end at 00:48:143 -
00:47:518 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I probally assume you like this pattern. However, in my opinion, this is a bit confusing, especially for noobs. I meant the circles. They also propose a beat, but in a confusing way. I just think you should change the rhythm here as in sliders here and there, along with some specially placed circles. They aren't randomly placed, they aren't bad, they're just confusing. I suggest something like this? http://puu.sh/1zQdV
01:12:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

[SpiritTomb]

00:04:692 (3) - Remove clap. The whistle before that just makes it an odd rhythm imo
00:20:010 (5) - NC and make 00:20:479 (1,2,3,4) - with the combo
00:32:513 (4) - NC and make 00:32:982 (1,2,3) - with the combo
00:35:014 (4) - NC and make 00:35:483 (1,2,3,4) - with your combo
00:43:767 (3) - Could be somewhere else besides hiding behind 00:42:517 (1) -
01:12:838 (1) - Remove. This is a little confusing on normal.
01:14:714 (4) - ^

[Lucario]

Good solid hard!

00:14:696 (1) - Could be symmetrical with 00:14:227 (4) -

[Garchomp]

In general, the distance between notes like 00:13:601 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be increased with their spacing. 0.9 is eh and doesn't look right imo.

00:29:700 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:201 (1) - ^

[Chaotic Togekiss]

Same thing for Garchomp diff. The spacing like 00:13:601 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be increased.

I feel like theres a lot of whistles. It gets annoying in some beats

00:23:448 (1) - Remove NC
00:25:949 (1) - ^
00:54:708 (5) - Down by one or two units (Tiny)
00:57:209 (5) - ^

[Irre's Gastrodon]

00:05:005 (6) - Finish?~
00:47:362 (6) - Make these into 2 circles?
00:57:365 (1) - Remove NC
01:02:835 (1) - ^

[Dark Roserade]

Nothing to say here.

Star~
DakeDekaane
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VinylDash14 wrote:

Modmodmodmodmod~ so tempting to make a guest difficulty, Must resist!~ /*I always acept GD, and there's still a vacant (max 8 diffs), but in this case I will be picky as this mapset has high priority >_< /*

Pokemon~ c;

[Milotic]

00:47:518 (1) - Slider should end at 00:48:143 -
00:47:518 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I probally assume you like this pattern. However, in my opinion, this is a bit confusing, especially for noobs. I meant the circles. They also propose a beat, but in a confusing way. I just think you should change the rhythm here as in sliders here and there, along with some specially placed circles. They aren't randomly placed, they aren't bad, they're just confusing. I suggest something like this? http://puu.sh/1zQdV
01:12:995 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

/*I'll be changing that, it'll be the same rhythm but I'll use more sliders, and yes, I liked in some way but wel~ maybe take this for Spiritomb, as I did a long time ago, the kiai in Lucario was the former kiai of Spiritomb (too hard, then changed, blablabla, I talk like an old man xD).

[SpiritTomb]

00:04:692 (3) - Remove clap. The whistle before that just makes it an odd rhythm imo /*Changed for a clap
/*Fixed combos
01:12:838 (1) - Remove. This is a little confusing on normal. /*Removed and made something else
01:14:714 (4) - ^ /*^

[Lucario]

Good solid hard! /*Thanks

00:14:696 (1) - Could be symmetrical with 00:14:227 (4) - /*It is now

[Garchomp]

In general, the distance between notes like 00:13:601 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be increased with their spacing. 0.9 is eh and doesn't look right imo. /*Spacing goes up bit by bit in each combo, beginning with 0.8x and finishing with 1.3x, I liked, and maybe I'll change later, but that will be my own choice.

00:29:700 (1) - Remove NC /*Removed from 00:30:794 (4) instead.
00:32:201 (1) - ^ /*^

[Dark Roserade]

Nothing to say here.

Star~
Thanks for modding and star /o/

@chaotic_iak and Irreversible: I've extended the kiai up to 01:13:776 (2), if you want extend it too~
chaotic_iak
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chaotic_iak

VinylDash14 wrote:

[Chaotic Togekiss]

Same thing for Garchomp diff. The spacing like 00:13:601 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be increased. Well, made before my current mapping style. I think this is no longer Insane, and Hard+ (or Insane-?) instead.

I feel like theres a lot of whistles. It gets annoying in some beats My usual hitsound style is to have a bunch of hitsounds, so I can't determine myself which are annoying. Can you give some examples?

00:23:448 (1) - Remove NC It was because change of followed instrument, but sure.
00:25:949 (1) - ^ ^
00:54:708 (5) - Down by one or two units (Tiny) Keeping spacing consistent.
00:57:209 (5) - ^ Keeping spacing consistent.
Thanks!

@Dake: I don't think I like the extended kiai time. In fact I think there shouldn't be any kiai here since there is no "chorus", but the current one seems good so I keep it.

http://puu.sh/1A4Q8
Hinsvar
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Hinsvar
Hi.

Last.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General
  1. The BG files are pretty big on size... Maybe you can reduce them?
  2. The lead-in is too short, IMO. Make it 2500-3000 ms?
  3. I'm sure enough three Insane diffs in a mapset is unrankable...
>Milotic
  1. 00:12:507 (1) - Add whistle on the entire slider? It's gonna be pretty loud, I know, but yeah, I think it fits.
  2. 00:22:510 (1) - ^
  3. 00:22:510 (1,1) - Why is the spacing here 0.6x...
  4. 00:40:016 (4) - Move the middle anchor point to (188,124)? The 00:38:765 (3,4) pattern looks better like that, IMO.
  5. 00:45:017 (4) - ^ (184,244)
  6. 00:47:518 - 00:57:521 - Add whistles every four stanzas?
  7. 01:11:901 - Add Normal whistle?
  8. 01:12:213 - ^
>Spiritomb
  1. 00:02:973 (1) - Whistle?
  2. 00:05:474 - ^
  3. 00:18:759 (4) - Move the anchor point on the repeat 1 grid (x:92) to the right? This is to improve the look of 00:18:290 (3,4). But why 1.1x in the first place...
  4. 00:43:767 - Add whistle?
  5. 00:44:705 - Replace clap with whistle?
  6. 01:15:495 (2) - Same as 00:18:759 (4), except 2 grids to the right.
>Lucario
  1. 00:38:140 (2,3,4) - This pattern seems to be pretty forced, looking at the inconsistent spacing... At least apply NC to (4).
>Garchomp
  1. 00:31:419 (6) - Are these two claps here intentional?
  2. 00:35:483 (3,4) - I don't like how these two sliders touch each other. That's my opinion, though.
  3. 00:38:140 (2,3,4,5,6) - Yep, seems to be forced... It's going to be hard to read this, you know... Add NC to (4) and (6), then remove NC at 00:40:328 (1)?
  4. 00:43:142 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (Similar case.)
  5. 00:47:049 (8) - Uh... Using a slider with two repeats don't work well here, IMO. Split them into a slider that repeats once and a circle (in that order) instead?
>Chaotic Togekiss
  1. Still pretty decent, but mapping an Insane diff with medium grid size isn't really a good idea looking at the overall design of this diff... Oh well.
Dark and Irre's diffs have no problem, so I'll let them slip.

That's it; I'm out.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Irreversible
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Irreversible

VinylDash14 wrote:

Modmodmodmodmod~ so tempting to make a guest difficulty, Must resist!~



[Irre's Gastrodon]

00:05:005 (6) - Finish?~
00:47:362 (6) - Make these into 2 circles?
00:57:365 (1) - Remove NC
01:02:835 (1) - ^

[Dark Roserade]

Thanks for the suggestions, changed everything ^_^~

Here's the updated version.

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Battle! Champion Cynthia.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 57530
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 14227,42517,82529
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Battle! Champion Cynthia
TitleUnicode:Battle! Champion Cynthia
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:Junichi Masuda
Creator:DakeDekaane
Version:Irre's Gastrodon
Source:Pokemon: Black/White
Tags:chaotic_iak DarkSkyKnight Irreversible Pearl Diamond Platinum Game Freak
BeatmapID:196385
BeatmapSetID:51877

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.60000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"GastrodonEast.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,7706,11595
2,47718,49419
2,50219,51763
2,52720,54108
2,55220,56609
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,212,208,200

[TimingPoints]
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57521,-100,4,1,0,60,0,1
67524,-100,4,1,0,90,0,0
69869,-100,4,1,0,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 162,88,45
Combo2 : 241,158,177
Combo3 : 255,222,68

[HitObjects]
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Star~
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible

VinylDash14 wrote:

Modmodmodmodmod~ so tempting to make a guest difficulty, Must resist!~



[Irre's Gastrodon]

00:05:005 (6) - Finish?~
00:47:362 (6) - Make these into 2 circles?
00:57:365 (1) - Remove NC
01:02:835 (1) - ^

[Dark Roserade]

Thanks for the suggestions, changed everything ^_^~

Here's the updated version.

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Title:Battle! Champion Cynthia
TitleUnicode:Battle! Champion Cynthia
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:Junichi Masuda
Creator:DakeDekaane
Version:Irre's Gastrodon
Source:Pokemon: Black/White
Tags:chaotic_iak DarkSkyKnight Irreversible Pearl Diamond Platinum Game Freak
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Star~
DakeDekaane
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Hinsvar wrote:

Hi.

Last.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General
  1. The BG files are pretty big on size... Maybe you can reduce them? /*Changed from PNG to JPG
  2. The lead-in is too short, IMO. Make it 2500-3000 ms? I think 1500ms is enough to react.
  3. I'm sure enough three Insane diffs in a mapset is unrankable... /*Not unrankable as I have an even spread (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane)


>Milotic
  1. 00:12:507 (1) - Add whistle on the entire slider? It's gonna be pretty loud, I know, but yeah, I think it fits. /*Pretty loud @_@.
  2. 00:22:510 (1) - ^ /*^
  3. 00:47:518 - 00:57:521 - Add whistles every four stanzas? /*Finishes fits more imo, added some that were missing.
  4. 01:11:901 - Add Normal whistle? /*Liked, done.
  5. 01:12:213 - ^ /*Too loud here with the previous added.
>Spiritomb
  1. 00:18:759 (4) - Move the anchor point on the repeat 1 grid (x:92) to the right? This is to improve the look of 00:18:290 (3,4). But why 1.1x in the first place... /*Moved the node, and 1.1x to it doesn't look to close and squeezed.
>Lucario
  1. 00:38:140 (2,3,4) - This pattern seems to be pretty forced, looking at the inconsistent spacing... At least apply NC to (4). /*Fixed spacing
>Garchomp
  1. 00:31:419 (6) - Are these two claps here intentional? /*Oops, fixed
  2. 00:35:483 (3,4) - I don't like how these two sliders touch each other. That's my opinion, though. /*I like this pattern o3o
  3. 00:38:140 (2,3,4,5,6) - Yep, seems to be forced... It's going to be hard to read this, you know... Add NC to (4) and (6), then remove NC at 00:40:328 (1)? /*Yeah, a bit forced, but it's a jumpy part so it's ok imo, I made a bit more simmetrical.
  4. 00:43:142 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (Similar case.) /*^
  5. 00:47:049 (8) - Uh... Using a slider with two repeats don't work well here, IMO. Split them into a slider that repeats once and a circle (in that order) instead?/*You noticed a product of my laziness~, changed as you said
That's it; I'm out.

Good luck on the way 8-)
NewRulerNA
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Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
hi
found issues. you must fix those.

[General]
  1. tag is not same between diffs. add "Nintendo" to "Irre's Gastrodon"
[Milotic]
  1. 01:09:400 - two inherited timing sections. you must remove one.

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point. An inherited timing section may be placed on an uninherited timing section (but only to change the slider speed). Having two uninherited or two inherited sections on top of each other will cause problems within the beatmap.
[Lucario]
  1. 01:09:400 - same as above
[Garchomp]
  1. 01:09:400 - same as above
[Irre's Gastrodon]
  1. StackLeniency is 0.2. this setting is completely stack...like 00:26:730 (1,2). you must change to 0.3 or more.
DakeDekaane
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^Fixed all orz thank you very much

Irre don't need to do nothing, I've fixed the tags and stack leniency
Witi kanto red
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Witi kanto red
:) i love it x3 its great
Hqphqp-Q
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one day, this will be ranked.






























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