From my queue~
General
1st timing offset+20 plz, it's not fit now
Inconsistency in Tags. check it again
Standard
00:10:765 - finish
00:18:935 - ^
00:25:318 (2) - delete it, it's breaking the flow
00:27:105 - finish
00:29:147 (3) - NC, follow the style with 00:31:190 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) -
00:43:445 - finish
00:48:552 (2) - 1grid down will be looks more symmetry
00:44:977 (2) - boring, i think you can try something exciting notes
00:49:573 (1) - remove NC. follow the beats, like others
00:50:850 - add a circle here, since you did it other points
00:57:743 (1) - remove NC. follow the beats, like others
00:59:786 - finish
01:12:041 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - i don't wanna recommend to stack in easy diff. maybe you can put them zig zag instead
01:15:105 (3) - widen the 'c' shape to be looks good
01:16:126 (4) - finish?
01:24:296 - finish
01:28:382 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:12:041 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -
01:40:637 - finish
01:56:467 (1) - remove NC. still same melody here, like 01:51:871 (3,3) - . NC here 01:57:488 (2) - instead
01:56:977 - finish
02:05:147 - ^
02:06:424 (3) - isn't it looks too hard? you can move it left 3grid to make it soft
*about the finish sounds, check it with all diffs
Hardcore
00:13:828 (4) - some players can miss it with the unexpected 2nd slider (with short lenth of slider), you'd better reduce 1 arrow or try some other ways
00:17:913 (4) - ^ and other sliders too
02:02:084 (1) - considering remove NC it
02:10:254 (1) - ^
*overall, looks pretty hard especially with 1/4 sliders, consider remap some parts
Taiko Oni
you'd better use a BG which connected with 'satori', because it's not too hard to find some image
Lolicore
no, i don't think it's going for rank now, you know there's really huge gap between Hardcore and Lolicore. i highly recommend make 1 more Insane diff between them
also, are you sure that most ppl can pass(not FC) it? no, most players can't pass this with the 235BPM and this crazy jumps and streams. also i'd like to suggest to reduce the Normal Custom1 Finish sound, it's really noisy now
General
1st timing offset+20 plz, it's not fit now
Inconsistency in Tags. check it again
Standard
00:10:765 - finish
00:18:935 - ^
00:25:318 (2) - delete it, it's breaking the flow
00:27:105 - finish
00:29:147 (3) - NC, follow the style with 00:31:190 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) -
00:43:445 - finish
00:48:552 (2) - 1grid down will be looks more symmetry
00:44:977 (2) - boring, i think you can try something exciting notes
00:49:573 (1) - remove NC. follow the beats, like others
00:50:850 - add a circle here, since you did it other points
00:57:743 (1) - remove NC. follow the beats, like others
00:59:786 - finish
01:12:041 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - i don't wanna recommend to stack in easy diff. maybe you can put them zig zag instead
01:15:105 (3) - widen the 'c' shape to be looks good
01:16:126 (4) - finish?
01:24:296 - finish
01:28:382 (1,2,3,4) - same as 01:12:041 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -
01:40:637 - finish
01:56:467 (1) - remove NC. still same melody here, like 01:51:871 (3,3) - . NC here 01:57:488 (2) - instead
01:56:977 - finish
02:05:147 - ^
02:06:424 (3) - isn't it looks too hard? you can move it left 3grid to make it soft
*about the finish sounds, check it with all diffs
Hardcore
00:13:828 (4) - some players can miss it with the unexpected 2nd slider (with short lenth of slider), you'd better reduce 1 arrow or try some other ways
00:17:913 (4) - ^ and other sliders too
02:02:084 (1) - considering remove NC it
02:10:254 (1) - ^
*overall, looks pretty hard especially with 1/4 sliders, consider remap some parts
Taiko Oni
you'd better use a BG which connected with 'satori', because it's not too hard to find some image
Lolicore
no, i don't think it's going for rank now, you know there's really huge gap between Hardcore and Lolicore. i highly recommend make 1 more Insane diff between them
also, are you sure that most ppl can pass(not FC) it? no, most players can't pass this with the 235BPM and this crazy jumps and streams. also i'd like to suggest to reduce the Normal Custom1 Finish sound, it's really noisy now