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hi~3个月前我是只会扔星的彩笔 
基本都是建议..
Yuki YukI
distance spacing 1.34*??求解释..我怎么调都弄不出来
kika?
音量感觉大了..我把所有的30以上的音量都降了10%
00:23:238 (2) - 这个往返是手误吧..
00:24:129 (5,6) - 两个连滑条？中间有个音空着..的
00:44:476 (5) - 中间拐回来的地方消下音，和歌里没对上
01:41:209 (5) - 按前面的习惯，这里是没有note的..所以显得有点怪（个人感觉）
01:44:773 (4,5) -二连打玩起来很high的，为啥放滑条
01:46:555 (2,3,4) - 中轴线对称？
01:47:446 (6) - 半拍滑条
01:56:209 - 这样？
四分之一拍打着不爽..还有，放一条绿线把音效改到S去，后面这两个音显大
02:10:169 (6) - 删..
02:11:654 (6) - ……同上
02:24:724 (3) - 感觉这里不需要，02:25:318倒是可以放..
02:25:466 (1) - 如果觉得上一条建议太搓..这里半拍滑条..
02:31:704 (1) -三连打也很带感啊..
02:37:199 (5,6) - 节奏上交换一下
02:39:575 (6,7) - ^
02:47:149 (2) - 想放两个半拍滑条
03:21:308 - 转盘？break好长..
03:50:120 (2) 03:51:011 (1) - 节奏上交换（不是每个音都要有note的..）
Kiva
kika?
00:18:337 (5) - 提前四分之一拍结束
01:25:169 (1) - 移到半拍后
01:30:516 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里往返的滑条显得多了点..挑一两个改成普通滑条？
02:52:199 (1,2) - 长滑条好少..连起来？
03:51:011 (3) - 改成圈..
基本都是建议..
Yuki YukI
distance spacing 1.34*??求解释..我怎么调都弄不出来
kika?
音量感觉大了..我把所有的30以上的音量都降了10%
00:23:238 (2) - 这个往返是手误吧..
00:24:129 (5,6) - 两个连滑条？中间有个音空着..的
00:44:476 (5) - 中间拐回来的地方消下音，和歌里没对上
01:41:209 (5) - 按前面的习惯，这里是没有note的..所以显得有点怪（个人感觉）
01:44:773 (4,5) -
01:46:555 (2,3,4) - 中轴线对称？
01:47:446 (6) - 半拍滑条
01:56:209 - 这样？
02:10:169 (6) - 删..
02:11:654 (6) - ……同上
02:24:724 (3) - 感觉这里不需要，02:25:318倒是可以放..
02:25:466 (1) - 如果觉得上一条建议太搓..这里半拍滑条..
02:31:704 (1) -
02:37:199 (5,6) - 节奏上交换一下
02:39:575 (6,7) - ^
02:47:149 (2) - 想放两个半拍滑条
03:21:308 - 转盘？break好长..
03:50:120 (2) 03:51:011 (1) - 节奏上交换（不是每个音都要有note的..）
Kiva
kika?
00:18:337 (5) - 提前四分之一拍结束
01:25:169 (1) - 移到半拍后
01:30:516 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里往返的滑条显得多了点..挑一两个改成普通滑条？
02:52:199 (1,2) - 长滑条好少..连起来？
03:51:011 (3) - 改成圈..
IRC modded Kiva's diff.
Fixed spacing issues/some hitsound/made some patterns easier
I'll mod the whole thing tomorrow, but I kinda accidentally closed it so I lost my mod T.T
Fixed spacing issues/some hitsound/made some patterns easier
20:13 <_Kiva> : hi , the assistant of YGOKID
20:13 <_Kiva> : <3
20:14 <Raging_Bull> : Hi.
20:14 <Raging_Bull> : oh well since you're here
20:14 <Raging_Bull> : 00:03:486 (3) - orz
20:14 <Raging_Bull> : Why did you do 1x spacing there
20:14 <Raging_Bull> : then 00:07:050 (2) - .5x here?
20:15 <_Kiva> : which diff?
20:15 <Raging_Bull> : your diff.
20:15 <_Kiva> : :O i made this diff like a year ago
20:16 <_Kiva> : when i just start mapping Dx
20:16 <Raging_Bull> : Okay but like orz two different spacing
20:16 <Raging_Bull> : Can you move 00:03:486 (3) - closer? so like the song doesn't start off difficult?
20:16 <_Kiva> : yeah not acceptable in normal
20:16 <Raging_Bull> : Oh this is a normal? SV seems high :s
20:17 <Raging_Bull> : Well I won't ask you to change it since it'll break sliders
20:17 <_Kiva> : <3 how about i stack 00:03:486 (3) - under (2)
20:18 <Raging_Bull> : I dunno. I would do something else
20:18 <Raging_Bull> : like
20:18 <Raging_Bull> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154395
20:20 <Raging_Bull> : NC seems inconsistent but I'm not really good with NC mods orz.
20:20 <_Kiva> : hmm i am suck at NC
20:20 <_Kiva> : it was random and MATs mentioned that
20:20 <Raging_Bull> : I dunno. How about every stanza?
20:21 <Raging_Bull> : So like NC here? 00:25:466 (6) -
20:21 <Raging_Bull> : 00:27:248 (1,2) - Switch NC. etc etc.
20:22 <_Kiva> : k
20:23 <Raging_Bull> : 00:37:941 (3) - Perhaps you can remove this kick slider?
20:24 <Raging_Bull> : 1/1 slider might work.
20:24 <_Kiva> : shorten this perhaps
20:24 <Raging_Bull> : Alright.
20:25 <Raging_Bull> : 00:53:981 (5) - orz. This suddenly went to 1x slider speed.
20:25 <_Kiva> : orz
20:25 <Raging_Bull> : 00:52:793 (3) - this one was .5x 00:53:981 (5) - 1x 00:56:357 (1) - .5x
20:26 <_Kiva> : yeah fixed this one
20:27 <Raging_Bull> : 00:44:179 (4) - Perhaps you can change this into something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154401
20:27 <Raging_Bull> : I think it fits the vocals better
20:28 <_Kiva> : oh i was following the piano , but yours is better
20:28 <Raging_Bull> : Oh I didn't know :s
20:28 <Raging_Bull> : Follow the timeline, not my really half ass mapped example
20:29 <Raging_Bull> : 01:02:001 (2) - Spacing error.
20:29 <Raging_Bull> : Plus you can unstack 3 at the same time :p
20:31 <_Kiva> : <3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154403 how about this
20:31 <Raging_Bull> : 01:04:674 (7) - Perhaps you can unstack this so it doesn't get blocked from 5's hitburst?
20:31 <Raging_Bull> : Uh is it me or is 2 spaced differently in the screenie?
20:32 <Raging_Bull> : oh my bad
20:32 <_Kiva> : it is 1.2X now
20:32 <Raging_Bull> : I didn't reverse select :s
20:33 <Raging_Bull> : 01:09:427 (3) - Same suggestion as above. Put this somewhere so it isn't blocked by 1's hitburst?
20:33 <Raging_Bull> : 01:16:555 (4) - orz spacing error here.
20:33 <_Kiva> : i should replace 3-4 with a slider
20:34 <Raging_Bull> : Sure.
20:34 <Raging_Bull> : Just tell me if I'm going too fast :p
20:35 <Raging_Bull> : 01:24:872 (6) - Same. Spacing error.
20:35 <_Kiva> : 0.2oops
20:36 <Raging_Bull> : Actually perhaps you can change that into 1/1 slider?
20:36 <Raging_Bull> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154409 ?
20:36 <Raging_Bull> : I think it follows the vocals better.
20:37 <_Kiva> : yep
20:38 <Raging_Bull> : 01:36:753 (1) - I think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154411 will be easier?
20:38 <Raging_Bull> : Just move 01:37:941 (2) - to where ever if you agree.
20:38 <Raging_Bull> : 01:42:991 (5,6) - Whoopsie. Spacing error
20:40 <Raging_Bull> : 02:07:347 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Perhaps this could be mapped to the vocals?
20:40 <Raging_Bull> : If not can you space 02:09:129 (1) - properly?
20:41 <_Kiva> : oops i am still at 01:42:100 (2) -
20:41 <_Kiva> : maybe change them to slider better
20:41 <Raging_Bull> : Ahh okay I'll wait :p
20:41 <Raging_Bull> : I would change 01:42:694 (4) - into a slider I suppose
20:41 <Raging_Bull> : 1/1 slider
20:43 <_Kiva> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154417 <3 this sounds fine
20:44 <Raging_Bull> : Sounds nice
20:44 <Raging_Bull> : Is it me or in the screenie, 1 is spaced wrong?
20:44 <Raging_Bull> : oh wait
20:44 <Raging_Bull> : never mind
20:45 <Raging_Bull> : ignore ignore :s
20:45 <_Kiva> : yeah i just rearrange (3)and (1) a bit
20:45 <_Kiva> : make them horizontal :3
20:45 <Raging_Bull> : But it's not perfectly aligned ._.
20:46 <Raging_Bull> : http://puu.sh/6dXi ._.
20:46 <_Kiva> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154418 this way ?
20:46 <Raging_Bull> : Oh I was talking about 01:41:506 (1) - haha
20:47 <Raging_Bull> : Okay that looks good
20:47 <_Kiva> : yeah i fixed <#
20:47 <_Kiva> : <3
20:48 <Raging_Bull> : 02:07:347 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - So do you wanna map to the vocals here? Or keep?
20:48 <_Kiva> : maybe keep
20:48 <Raging_Bull> : Okay. Can you space 02:09:129 (1,2) - correctly?
20:48 <Raging_Bull> : Perhaps a triangle?
20:49 <_Kiva> : i stacked 02:09:129 (1,2) - with 02:07:347 (1,2) :
20:50 <Raging_Bull> : Hmm well okay then.
20:50 <Raging_Bull> : 02:10:021 (3) - Perhaps NC on this?
20:50 <_Kiva> : right
20:51 <Raging_Bull> : 02:11:803 (5) - Hmm. Can you unstack this? It might be hard to see this with hitsplat from 4.
20:51 <_Kiva> : made it to a repeat slider
20:52 <Raging_Bull> : Okay. Well I assume you're fixing the spacing on the next few patterns then?
20:53 <_Kiva> : sorry i just got disconnected
20:53 <Raging_Bull> : Ahh okay
20:54 <Raging_Bull> : Are you fixing the next few patterns then?
20:54 <Raging_Bull> : Since you made that a repeat slider
20:54 <_Kiva> : yep
20:54 <Raging_Bull> : Ahh spinner bug
20:54 <Raging_Bull> : 02:17:149 (1) - NC on this one.
20:55 <_Kiva> : it is NCed :O
20:55 <Raging_Bull> : Yeah I know but the New combo tab isnt highlighted right?
20:55 <_Kiva> : oooooh i see
20:55 <Raging_Bull> : Yeah I had that in my map orz
20:56 <_Kiva> : same here , should be spinner bug
20:56 <Raging_Bull> : 02:17:743 (3) - Perhaps unstack this to keep the moving feeling?
20:57 <Raging_Bull> : 02:26:060 (1) - Reverse selecting this could fix spacing problem.
20:57 <_Kiva> : yep
20:57 <Raging_Bull> : Hmm
20:58 <Raging_Bull> : 02:24:575 (6,7) - Maybe this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154423 Or you think it might be too hard?
21:00 <_Kiva> : yeah i ll change it to slider
21:00 <_Kiva> : maybe shorter one :3
21:00 <Raging_Bull> : okay then
21:01 <Raging_Bull> : Err tell me when youre done
21:01 <Raging_Bull> : So you can space 02:26:060 (1) - properly :s
21:02 <_Kiva> : yep
21:03 <Raging_Bull> : 02:32:892 (3,4) - Hmm. Since you have a stacking pattern with 1,2 5,6,7,8 maybe you should stack these too?
21:03 <Raging_Bull> : Though I think it will be harder ._.
21:04 <_Kiva> : maybe hard for a normal ._.
21:04 <Raging_Bull> : Perhaps switch them all for some 1/2 sliders?
21:06 <_Kiva> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154426
21:06 <_Kiva> : hmm some
21:06 <Raging_Bull> : Sure it seems good
21:07 <Raging_Bull> : 02:37:941 (1) - Slight spacing error
21:07 <Raging_Bull> : And it's not symmetrical
21:08 <_Kiva> : u mean sliders?
21:08 <Raging_Bull> : Yeah but not a big deal lol
21:08 <Raging_Bull> : But space that one properly please
21:08 <Raging_Bull> : Oh I see why you copy pasted
21:08 <Raging_Bull> : it's the same pattern as earlier
21:08 <_Kiva> : > <
21:10 <Raging_Bull> : If you want the same pattern maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154429
21:11 <Raging_Bull> : Then flip and what not and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154430
21:11 <Raging_Bull> : Aw fml
21:11 <Raging_Bull> : I closed my mod I did on the easy diff
21:11 <Raging_Bull> : whoopsy
21:12 <_Kiva> : haha modding a long song is quite tired
21:12 <Raging_Bull> : no I mean like I closed it ._.
21:12 <Raging_Bull> : I closed that tab ffff-
21:12 <Raging_Bull> : oh well at least it was only one diff
21:20 <Raging_Bull> : whoops I forgot about this so fast
21:20 <Raging_Bull> : So err did you change the combo
21:20 <Raging_Bull> : ?
21:21 <_Kiva> : yeah some
21:22 <Raging_Bull> : 02:41:209 (2) - Perhaps like timeline?
21:22 <Raging_Bull> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154434
21:23 <_Kiva> : <3 long slider looks boring
21:23 <Raging_Bull> : Lol make an arc or something :p
21:25 <_Kiva> : http://puu.sh/6dZY
21:25 <_Kiva> : <3
21:25 <Raging_Bull> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154436 \o/
21:26 <Raging_Bull> : err loading hold on lol
21:27 <Raging_Bull> : You can use that if you want
21:34 <Raging_Bull> : 02:53:981 (5,6,7) - Perhaps this triple stack could be confusing for normal?
21:35 <_Kiva> : yeah it might be
21:35 <Raging_Bull> : I think NC would be good at 02:57:545 (1) -
21:35 <Raging_Bull> : And remove NC 02:58:733 (3) -
21:36 <Raging_Bull> : 02:57:545 (1) - Also maybe add finish to slider start instead of whistle?
21:36 <Raging_Bull> : 02:54:575 (8) - And maybe add whistle and remove finish? :s
21:37 <_Kiva> : hmm
21:38 <Raging_Bull> : I thought it sounds nice since finish would emphasis the downbeat and how her voice got louder
21:38 <_Kiva> : wait
21:39 <Raging_Bull> : Alright
21:40 <_Kiva> : yep all fixed
21:40 <Raging_Bull> : alrighty
21:40 <Raging_Bull> : 03:01:110 (2) - Spacing error :p
21:41 <_Kiva> : <3 was using C&P
21:41 <_Kiva> : C+H
21:41 <Raging_Bull> : Yeah :p
21:41 <Raging_Bull> : 03:17:743 (3) - Spacing error here
21:42 <Raging_Bull> : I suppose you can put 3 under 7 if you like
21:43 <Raging_Bull> : 03:29:030 (3) - Another one
21:43 <Raging_Bull> : 03:32:595 (9) - Same. Another spacing error.
21:43 <Raging_Bull> : I'll give you some time to fix up some patterns :p
21:45 <_Kiva> : http://puu.sh/6e1P
21:46 <Raging_Bull> : which pattern is that? :p
21:46 <_Kiva> : 03:29:030 (3) -
21:47 <Raging_Bull> : Alright
21:47 <Raging_Bull> : 03:32:595 (9) - Did you fix this yet?
21:48 <Raging_Bull> : 03:33:189 (10,1,2) - Perhaps you could space these so the hitburst won't block the 1 and 2?
21:48 <_Kiva> : yep
21:49 <Raging_Bull> : 03:40:318 (6,7,8,9) - This looked slightly weird to me since it's 4 sliders but 2 variations
21:49 <Raging_Bull> : Perhaps stick to one type? I think 6,7 would be better
21:50 <_Kiva> : unstack them :O
21:50 <_Kiva> : 03:41:506 (8,9) - are they too close
21:50 <Raging_Bull> : Nah they all have 1x distance
21:51 <Raging_Bull> : 03:40:318 (6,7,8,9) -
21:51 <Raging_Bull> : But they are two different sliders
21:51 <Raging_Bull> : nothing bad about it though, I just prefer you stick with one :p
21:52 <_Kiva> :
21:52 <_Kiva> : k
21:53 <Raging_Bull> : 03:44:476 (3) - Perhaps you can move this a bit up and left?
21:53 <Raging_Bull> : To keep with the slider curve
21:54 <_Kiva> : yep
21:54 <Raging_Bull> : 03:42:694 (10,1) - Swap NC
21:55 <Raging_Bull> : I guess you can NC here if you like 03:45:070 (6) -
21:55 <_Kiva> : to keep it constant :p
21:55 <_Kiva> : yep
21:55 <Raging_Bull> : Alrighty
21:56 <Raging_Bull> : 03:51:011 (3) - Remove finish at slider end?
21:56 <Raging_Bull> : Since you have finish at 03:52:199 (1) - I think double finish sounds weird
21:56 <_Kiva> : true
21:57 <_Kiva> : 03:59:327 (4,5,6,7,8) - are they too hard
21:57 <_Kiva> : for normal
21:57 <Raging_Bull> : I would say so since slider was partially blocking them a bit
21:58 <_Kiva> : hmm
22:02 <Raging_Bull> : 03:52:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Perhaps add whistles every 2/4 tick and finish every 1/3 ticks here?
22:03 <_Kiva> : nice idea
22:04 <Raging_Bull> : 03:58:139 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You're fixing up this combo right?
22:04 <_Kiva> : ye
22:05 <Raging_Bull> : 04:00:813 (1) - I think this spinner might be too short for normal. Maybe delete 8 and move it there?
22:05 <_Kiva> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154454
22:05 <Raging_Bull> : Then extend by 1/2
22:05 <Raging_Bull> : Ohh you used a slider instead
22:05 <Raging_Bull> : Perhaps make the spinner a slider?
22:05 <_Kiva> : yeap
22:05 <_Kiva> : 04:00:664 (1) - start at here
22:06 <Raging_Bull> : I dunno I think the spinner might be too short
22:06 <Raging_Bull> : but since its the end of the song
22:06 <Raging_Bull> : I guess they can spin as much as they want :p
22:07 <Raging_Bull> : Though I kinda prefer you use a slider instead if its that short
22:08 <_Kiva> :
22:08 <_Kiva> : a 0.5x one?
22:08 <Raging_Bull> : Lol I got it
22:08 <_Kiva> : 03:59:328 (4) - slider finish at 04:00:516
22:08 <Raging_Bull> : Make it a repeat
22:08 <Raging_Bull> : :p
22:09 <_Kiva> : ;P
22:09 <Raging_Bull> : Yay we're done \o/
22:09 <Raging_Bull> : Now I think I'll finish the modding tomorrow since I deleted it earlier orz
20:13 <_Kiva> : <3
20:14 <Raging_Bull> : Hi.
20:14 <Raging_Bull> : oh well since you're here
20:14 <Raging_Bull> : 00:03:486 (3) - orz
20:14 <Raging_Bull> : Why did you do 1x spacing there
20:14 <Raging_Bull> : then 00:07:050 (2) - .5x here?
20:15 <_Kiva> : which diff?
20:15 <Raging_Bull> : your diff.
20:15 <_Kiva> : :O i made this diff like a year ago
20:16 <_Kiva> : when i just start mapping Dx
20:16 <Raging_Bull> : Okay but like orz two different spacing
20:16 <Raging_Bull> : Can you move 00:03:486 (3) - closer? so like the song doesn't start off difficult?
20:16 <_Kiva> : yeah not acceptable in normal
20:16 <Raging_Bull> : Oh this is a normal? SV seems high :s
20:17 <Raging_Bull> : Well I won't ask you to change it since it'll break sliders
20:17 <_Kiva> : <3 how about i stack 00:03:486 (3) - under (2)
20:18 <Raging_Bull> : I dunno. I would do something else
20:18 <Raging_Bull> : like
20:18 <Raging_Bull> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154395
20:20 <Raging_Bull> : NC seems inconsistent but I'm not really good with NC mods orz.
20:20 <_Kiva> : hmm i am suck at NC
20:20 <_Kiva> : it was random and MATs mentioned that
20:20 <Raging_Bull> : I dunno. How about every stanza?
20:21 <Raging_Bull> : So like NC here? 00:25:466 (6) -
20:21 <Raging_Bull> : 00:27:248 (1,2) - Switch NC. etc etc.
20:22 <_Kiva> : k
20:23 <Raging_Bull> : 00:37:941 (3) - Perhaps you can remove this kick slider?
20:24 <Raging_Bull> : 1/1 slider might work.
20:24 <_Kiva> : shorten this perhaps
20:24 <Raging_Bull> : Alright.
20:25 <Raging_Bull> : 00:53:981 (5) - orz. This suddenly went to 1x slider speed.
20:25 <_Kiva> : orz
20:25 <Raging_Bull> : 00:52:793 (3) - this one was .5x 00:53:981 (5) - 1x 00:56:357 (1) - .5x
20:26 <_Kiva> : yeah fixed this one
20:27 <Raging_Bull> : 00:44:179 (4) - Perhaps you can change this into something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154401
20:27 <Raging_Bull> : I think it fits the vocals better
20:28 <_Kiva> : oh i was following the piano , but yours is better
20:28 <Raging_Bull> : Oh I didn't know :s
20:28 <Raging_Bull> : Follow the timeline, not my really half ass mapped example
20:29 <Raging_Bull> : 01:02:001 (2) - Spacing error.
20:29 <Raging_Bull> : Plus you can unstack 3 at the same time :p
20:31 <_Kiva> : <3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154403 how about this
20:31 <Raging_Bull> : 01:04:674 (7) - Perhaps you can unstack this so it doesn't get blocked from 5's hitburst?
20:31 <Raging_Bull> : Uh is it me or is 2 spaced differently in the screenie?
20:32 <Raging_Bull> : oh my bad
20:32 <_Kiva> : it is 1.2X now
20:32 <Raging_Bull> : I didn't reverse select :s
20:33 <Raging_Bull> : 01:09:427 (3) - Same suggestion as above. Put this somewhere so it isn't blocked by 1's hitburst?
20:33 <Raging_Bull> : 01:16:555 (4) - orz spacing error here.
20:33 <_Kiva> : i should replace 3-4 with a slider
20:34 <Raging_Bull> : Sure.
20:34 <Raging_Bull> : Just tell me if I'm going too fast :p
20:35 <Raging_Bull> : 01:24:872 (6) - Same. Spacing error.
20:35 <_Kiva> : 0.2oops
20:36 <Raging_Bull> : Actually perhaps you can change that into 1/1 slider?
20:36 <Raging_Bull> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154409 ?
20:36 <Raging_Bull> : I think it follows the vocals better.
20:37 <_Kiva> : yep
20:38 <Raging_Bull> : 01:36:753 (1) - I think http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154411 will be easier?
20:38 <Raging_Bull> : Just move 01:37:941 (2) - to where ever if you agree.
20:38 <Raging_Bull> : 01:42:991 (5,6) - Whoopsie. Spacing error
20:40 <Raging_Bull> : 02:07:347 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Perhaps this could be mapped to the vocals?
20:40 <Raging_Bull> : If not can you space 02:09:129 (1) - properly?
20:41 <_Kiva> : oops i am still at 01:42:100 (2) -
20:41 <_Kiva> : maybe change them to slider better
20:41 <Raging_Bull> : Ahh okay I'll wait :p
20:41 <Raging_Bull> : I would change 01:42:694 (4) - into a slider I suppose
20:41 <Raging_Bull> : 1/1 slider
20:43 <_Kiva> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154417 <3 this sounds fine
20:44 <Raging_Bull> : Sounds nice
20:44 <Raging_Bull> : Is it me or in the screenie, 1 is spaced wrong?
20:44 <Raging_Bull> : oh wait
20:44 <Raging_Bull> : never mind
20:45 <Raging_Bull> : ignore ignore :s
20:45 <_Kiva> : yeah i just rearrange (3)and (1) a bit
20:45 <_Kiva> : make them horizontal :3
20:45 <Raging_Bull> : But it's not perfectly aligned ._.
20:46 <Raging_Bull> : http://puu.sh/6dXi ._.
20:46 <_Kiva> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154418 this way ?
20:46 <Raging_Bull> : Oh I was talking about 01:41:506 (1) - haha
20:47 <Raging_Bull> : Okay that looks good
20:47 <_Kiva> : yeah i fixed <#
20:47 <_Kiva> : <3
20:48 <Raging_Bull> : 02:07:347 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - So do you wanna map to the vocals here? Or keep?
20:48 <_Kiva> : maybe keep
20:48 <Raging_Bull> : Okay. Can you space 02:09:129 (1,2) - correctly?
20:48 <Raging_Bull> : Perhaps a triangle?
20:49 <_Kiva> : i stacked 02:09:129 (1,2) - with 02:07:347 (1,2) :
20:50 <Raging_Bull> : Hmm well okay then.
20:50 <Raging_Bull> : 02:10:021 (3) - Perhaps NC on this?
20:50 <_Kiva> : right
20:51 <Raging_Bull> : 02:11:803 (5) - Hmm. Can you unstack this? It might be hard to see this with hitsplat from 4.
20:51 <_Kiva> : made it to a repeat slider
20:52 <Raging_Bull> : Okay. Well I assume you're fixing the spacing on the next few patterns then?
20:53 <_Kiva> : sorry i just got disconnected
20:53 <Raging_Bull> : Ahh okay
20:54 <Raging_Bull> : Are you fixing the next few patterns then?
20:54 <Raging_Bull> : Since you made that a repeat slider
20:54 <_Kiva> : yep
20:54 <Raging_Bull> : Ahh spinner bug
20:54 <Raging_Bull> : 02:17:149 (1) - NC on this one.
20:55 <_Kiva> : it is NCed :O
20:55 <Raging_Bull> : Yeah I know but the New combo tab isnt highlighted right?
20:55 <_Kiva> : oooooh i see
20:55 <Raging_Bull> : Yeah I had that in my map orz
20:56 <_Kiva> : same here , should be spinner bug
20:56 <Raging_Bull> : 02:17:743 (3) - Perhaps unstack this to keep the moving feeling?
20:57 <Raging_Bull> : 02:26:060 (1) - Reverse selecting this could fix spacing problem.
20:57 <_Kiva> : yep
20:57 <Raging_Bull> : Hmm
20:58 <Raging_Bull> : 02:24:575 (6,7) - Maybe this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154423 Or you think it might be too hard?
21:00 <_Kiva> : yeah i ll change it to slider
21:00 <_Kiva> : maybe shorter one :3
21:00 <Raging_Bull> : okay then
21:01 <Raging_Bull> : Err tell me when youre done
21:01 <Raging_Bull> : So you can space 02:26:060 (1) - properly :s
21:02 <_Kiva> : yep
21:03 <Raging_Bull> : 02:32:892 (3,4) - Hmm. Since you have a stacking pattern with 1,2 5,6,7,8 maybe you should stack these too?
21:03 <Raging_Bull> : Though I think it will be harder ._.
21:04 <_Kiva> : maybe hard for a normal ._.
21:04 <Raging_Bull> : Perhaps switch them all for some 1/2 sliders?
21:06 <_Kiva> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154426
21:06 <_Kiva> : hmm some
21:06 <Raging_Bull> : Sure it seems good
21:07 <Raging_Bull> : 02:37:941 (1) - Slight spacing error
21:07 <Raging_Bull> : And it's not symmetrical
21:08 <_Kiva> : u mean sliders
?21:08 <Raging_Bull> : Yeah but not a big deal lol
21:08 <Raging_Bull> : But space that one properly please
21:08 <Raging_Bull> : Oh I see why you copy pasted
21:08 <Raging_Bull> : it's the same pattern as earlier
21:08 <_Kiva> : > <
21:10 <Raging_Bull> : If you want the same pattern maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154429
21:11 <Raging_Bull> : Then flip and what not and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154430
21:11 <Raging_Bull> : Aw fml
21:11 <Raging_Bull> : I closed my mod I did on the easy diff
21:11 <Raging_Bull> : whoopsy
21:12 <_Kiva> : haha modding a long song is quite tired
21:12 <Raging_Bull> : no I mean like I closed it ._.
21:12 <Raging_Bull> : I closed that tab ffff-
21:12 <Raging_Bull> : oh well at least it was only one diff
21:20 <Raging_Bull> : whoops I forgot about this so fast
21:20 <Raging_Bull> : So err did you change the combo
21:20 <Raging_Bull> : ?
21:21 <_Kiva> : yeah some
21:22 <Raging_Bull> : 02:41:209 (2) - Perhaps like timeline?
21:22 <Raging_Bull> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154434
21:23 <_Kiva> : <3 long slider looks boring
21:23 <Raging_Bull> : Lol make an arc or something :p
21:25 <_Kiva> : http://puu.sh/6dZY
21:25 <_Kiva> : <3
21:25 <Raging_Bull> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154436 \o/
21:26 <Raging_Bull> : err loading hold on lol
21:27 <Raging_Bull> : You can use that if you want
21:34 <Raging_Bull> : 02:53:981 (5,6,7) - Perhaps this triple stack could be confusing for normal?
21:35 <_Kiva> : yeah it might be
21:35 <Raging_Bull> : I think NC would be good at 02:57:545 (1) -
21:35 <Raging_Bull> : And remove NC 02:58:733 (3) -
21:36 <Raging_Bull> : 02:57:545 (1) - Also maybe add finish to slider start instead of whistle?
21:36 <Raging_Bull> : 02:54:575 (8) - And maybe add whistle and remove finish? :s
21:37 <_Kiva> : hmm
21:38 <Raging_Bull> : I thought it sounds nice since finish would emphasis the downbeat and how her voice got louder
21:38 <_Kiva> : wait
21:39 <Raging_Bull> : Alright
21:40 <_Kiva> : yep all fixed
21:40 <Raging_Bull> : alrighty
21:40 <Raging_Bull> : 03:01:110 (2) - Spacing error :p
21:41 <_Kiva> : <3 was using C&P
21:41 <_Kiva> : C+H
21:41 <Raging_Bull> : Yeah :p
21:41 <Raging_Bull> : 03:17:743 (3) - Spacing error here
21:42 <Raging_Bull> : I suppose you can put 3 under 7 if you like
21:43 <Raging_Bull> : 03:29:030 (3) -
Another one21:43 <Raging_Bull> : 03:32:595 (9) - Same. Another spacing error.
21:43 <Raging_Bull> : I'll give you some time to fix up some patterns :p
21:45 <_Kiva> : http://puu.sh/6e1P
21:46 <Raging_Bull> : which pattern is that? :p
21:46 <_Kiva> : 03:29:030 (3) -
21:47 <Raging_Bull> : Alright
21:47 <Raging_Bull> : 03:32:595 (9) - Did you fix this yet?
21:48 <Raging_Bull> : 03:33:189 (10,1,2) - Perhaps you could space these so the hitburst won't block the 1 and 2?
21:48 <_Kiva> : yep
21:49 <Raging_Bull> : 03:40:318 (6,7,8,9) - This looked slightly weird to me since it's 4 sliders but 2 variations
21:49 <Raging_Bull> : Perhaps stick to one type? I think 6,7 would be better
21:50 <_Kiva> : unstack them :O
21:50 <_Kiva> : 03:41:506 (8,9) - are they too close
21:50 <Raging_Bull> : Nah they all have 1x distance
21:51 <Raging_Bull> : 03:40:318 (6,7,8,9) -
21:51 <Raging_Bull> : But they are two different sliders
21:51 <Raging_Bull> : nothing bad about it though, I just prefer you stick with one :p
21:52 <_Kiva> :
21:52 <_Kiva> : k
21:53 <Raging_Bull> : 03:44:476 (3) - Perhaps you can move this a bit up and left?
21:53 <Raging_Bull> : To keep with the slider curve
21:54 <_Kiva> : yep
21:54 <Raging_Bull> : 03:42:694 (10,1) - Swap NC
21:55 <Raging_Bull> : I guess you can NC here if you like 03:45:070 (6) -
21:55 <_Kiva> : to keep it constant :p
21:55 <_Kiva> : yep
21:55 <Raging_Bull> : Alrighty
21:56 <Raging_Bull> : 03:51:011 (3) - Remove finish at slider end?
21:56 <Raging_Bull> : Since you have finish at 03:52:199 (1) - I think double finish sounds weird
21:56 <_Kiva> : true
21:57 <_Kiva> : 03:59:327 (4,5,6,7,8) - are they too hard
21:57 <_Kiva> : for normal
21:57 <Raging_Bull> : I would say so since slider was partially blocking them a bit
21:58 <_Kiva> : hmm
22:02 <Raging_Bull> : 03:52:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Perhaps add whistles every 2/4 tick and finish every 1/3 ticks here?
22:03 <_Kiva> : nice idea
22:04 <Raging_Bull> : 03:58:139 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You're fixing up this combo right?
22:04 <_Kiva> : ye
22:05 <Raging_Bull> : 04:00:813 (1) - I think this spinner might be too short for normal. Maybe delete 8 and move it there?
22:05 <_Kiva> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/154454
22:05 <Raging_Bull> : Then extend by 1/2
22:05 <Raging_Bull> : Ohh you used a slider instead
22:05 <Raging_Bull> : Perhaps make the spinner a slider?
22:05 <_Kiva> : yeap
22:05 <_Kiva> : 04:00:664 (1) - start at here
22:06 <Raging_Bull> : I dunno I think the spinner might be too short
22:06 <Raging_Bull> : but since its the end of the song
22:06 <Raging_Bull> : I guess they can spin as much as they want :p
22:07 <Raging_Bull> : Though I kinda prefer you use a slider instead if its that short
22:08 <_Kiva> :
22:08 <_Kiva> : a 0.5x one?
22:08 <Raging_Bull> : Lol I got it
22:08 <_Kiva> : 03:59:328 (4) - slider finish at 04:00:516
22:08 <Raging_Bull> : Make it a repeat
22:08 <Raging_Bull> : :p
22:09 <_Kiva> : ;P
22:09 <Raging_Bull> : Yay we're done \o/
22:09 <Raging_Bull> : Now I think I'll finish the modding tomorrow since I deleted it earlier orz
I'll mod the whole thing tomorrow, but I kinda accidentally closed it so I lost my mod T.T
Ohh thanks. Although I don't know why Kiva didn't upload attachment o.o
Topic Starter
I don't know too :<Raging Bull wrote:
Ohh thanks. Although I don't know why Kiva didn't upload attachment o.o
although I tell him to give me the new one
Gahh I'm so lazy. I'll mod this tomorrow. And I think your easy diff had unsnapped kiai time. (go give it a check) I think I mentioned it before I deleted that mod on accident.
oooooooooooops i forgetDownload: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (Snowy Dream) [Kiva].osuRaging Bull wrote:
Ohh thanks. Although I don't know why Kiva didn't upload attachment o.o
Okay lets try this again.
Light:
In the beginning, I think the slowdown is really drastic (.5x) I don't really like varying slider speeds on lower difficulty. But if you really want to, maybe you can use .75x instead?
00:23:090 Snap this kiai time D: Move it by +1 ms
00:42:100 (1) - Change these to .75x?
01:18:931 (4,5,6) - Perhaps you can unstack these? I think stacks are difficult for beginners because they can't tell when to hit it.
01:26:060 (3) - Space/unstack this?
02:08:535 (2,3) - Unstack?
02:45:664 (2) - Maybe a finish at slider start would be better? If so, remove this finish 02:44:476 (1) so there isn't a lot of finish in such a short time.
02:56:951 (5) - Combo seems long. Maybe NC here?
03:23:090 (1,2) - Unstack? I'm pretty sure beginners would read stacks as either 1/1 or 1/2 and they won't be able to tell the difference :v
Kiva:
00:22:496 (1) - It's probably just me, but I think removing finish and adding whistle sounds better.
00:33:783 (1) - Err spacing error?
00:38:535 (4) - Maybe you can move this out so the hitburst won't obstruct the AR?
01:10:021 (3,1) - Ahhhh this overlap! D: Move 1 somewhere else?
01:11:803 (1,3) - Switch NC
01:16:555 (4) - Hmm you still didn't space this one properly.
01:48:040 (1) - Spacing error?
01:51:011 (1) - ^
02:25:169 (7) - I'm....pretty sure this is borderline unrankable since the previous slider completely blocks this one but yet you can see it's a slider when you are about to click this. I would say move this a bit more or change slider.
03:30:219 (5) - Err spacing error. Spaced as 1/2 but it's 1/1
03:46:555 (4,5,6,1,2) - I think this combo could be confusing for a normal. Perhaps change it up a bit?
03:52:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - ._. The hitsound I suggested is wrong here
03:59:328 (4) - Oh hey lol. You really did add a repeat.
Hazy:
00:03:931 (7) - I don't think you need triple here. Remove this note?
00:08:090 (5) - ^
00:12:248 (3) - ^
00:18:337 (3) - Perhaps something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/155758
Well nothing bothered me much except for your triples ._. I feel like you only added triples for artificial difficulty. Perhaps remove some triples?
Yuki:
00:17:743 (1,2,3) - Space this anti jump? I think it plays ugly right now since it's not exactly building up anything. (Unless you replace spinner with slider)
00:23:238 (2) - I think people might have trouble seeing this is a slider this 00:21:902 (1,2) hitburst blocks it. Perhaps move the entire stream lower?
01:17:743 (1) - This slider seems rather weird to me. Perhaps make a different shape?
03:28:436 (3,4) - I really don't think you need slowdown here. It also seems weird to me because you map with 1x before and 1x after this.
Light:
In the beginning, I think the slowdown is really drastic (.5x) I don't really like varying slider speeds on lower difficulty. But if you really want to, maybe you can use .75x instead?
00:23:090 Snap this kiai time D: Move it by +1 ms
00:42:100 (1) - Change these to .75x?
01:18:931 (4,5,6) - Perhaps you can unstack these? I think stacks are difficult for beginners because they can't tell when to hit it.
01:26:060 (3) - Space/unstack this?
02:08:535 (2,3) - Unstack?
02:45:664 (2) - Maybe a finish at slider start would be better? If so, remove this finish 02:44:476 (1) so there isn't a lot of finish in such a short time.
02:56:951 (5) - Combo seems long. Maybe NC here?
03:23:090 (1,2) - Unstack? I'm pretty sure beginners would read stacks as either 1/1 or 1/2 and they won't be able to tell the difference :v
Kiva:
00:22:496 (1) - It's probably just me, but I think removing finish and adding whistle sounds better.
00:33:783 (1) - Err spacing error?
00:38:535 (4) - Maybe you can move this out so the hitburst won't obstruct the AR?
01:10:021 (3,1) - Ahhhh this overlap! D: Move 1 somewhere else?
01:11:803 (1,3) - Switch NC
01:16:555 (4) - Hmm you still didn't space this one properly.
01:48:040 (1) -
Spacing error?01:51:011 (1) - ^
02:25:169 (7) - I'm....pretty sure this is borderline unrankable since the previous slider completely blocks this one but yet you can see it's a slider when you are about to click this. I would say move this a bit more or change slider.
03:30:219 (5) - Err spacing error. Spaced as 1/2 but it's 1/1
03:46:555 (4,5,6,1,2) - I think this combo could be confusing for a normal. Perhaps change it up a bit?
03:52:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - ._. The hitsound I suggested is wrong here
03:52:793 (3) - Remove finish add whistle.
03:53:387 (1) - Add finish
03:53:981 (3) - Remove finish add whistle
03:54:575 (1) - Add finish to slider start
03:55:169 (2) - Remove finish.
03:55:763 (1) - Add finish to slider start.
03:56:357 (2) - Remove finish add whistle.
03:53:387 (1) - Add finish
03:53:981 (3) - Remove finish add whistle
03:54:575 (1) - Add finish to slider start
03:55:169 (2) - Remove finish.
03:55:763 (1) - Add finish to slider start.
03:56:357 (2) - Remove finish add whistle.
Hazy:
00:03:931 (7) - I don't think you need triple here. Remove this note?
00:08:090 (5) - ^
00:12:248 (3) - ^
00:18:337 (3) - Perhaps something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/155758
[HitObjects]00:23:090 (1) - Why no kiai here? D: Since you mapped light and Hazy, you should add kiai fountain here for consistency.
140,156,18040,1,0
140,156,18189,1,0
139,156,18337,2,0,B|88:220|142:282,1,140,0|0
136,368,19228,2,0,B|212:368|228:284,1,105
256,192,19823,12,2,22496
256,192,23090,5,4
Well nothing bothered me much except for your triples ._. I feel like you only added triples for artificial difficulty. Perhaps remove some triples?
Yuki:
00:17:743 (1,2,3) - Space this anti jump? I think it plays ugly right now since it's not exactly building up anything. (Unless you replace spinner with slider)
00:23:238 (2) - I think people might have trouble seeing this is a slider this 00:21:902 (1,2) hitburst blocks it. Perhaps move the entire stream lower?
01:17:743 (1) - This slider seems rather weird to me. Perhaps make a different shape?
03:28:436 (3,4) - I really don't think you need slowdown here. It also seems weird to me because you map with 1x before and 1x after this.
Topic Starter
oh thanks a lot for having a look it again.Fixed most.
SB
- 其实完全可以不用black.jpg的, 把背景色设成黑色然后淡出背景图片后就是黑色了
Timing
- 我测的offset是-678 (-6), 差得不多, 这个offset我打着会更顺
Light
- 01:00:516 (4) - 我觉得slider在这儿结束更合适
- 01:20:120 (1) - finish代替whistle如何?
Kiva
- 00:35:559 (5) - 这个spacing略有些奇怪, 不过倒不是什么问题, 测试的时候打到这儿稍微迟疑了下
- 01:01:104 (1) - finish?
- 01:29:619 (1) - ^
- 01:36:747 (1,2) - (1)的3个点和(2)都加finish感觉会很不错
- 03:14:173 (4) - finish
Hazy
- 01:00:807 (1) - 其实感觉去掉这个note还更顺一点
- 01:17:143 (4) - 这个摆出来一点会好认得多, slider尾的stack感觉不是很容易判断1/2拍还是1/4拍
Yuki Yuki
- OD+1? 这个OD比Hazy还低
- 00:23:232 (2) - 这是个啥...有点莫名其妙啊...
- 02:26:648 (1) - 加finish?
有回复后找我吧
Topic Starter
SPOILER
Breeze wrote:
SB
- 其实完全可以不用black.jpg的, 把背景色设成黑色然后淡出背景图片后就是黑色了
Timing
- 我测的offset是-678 (-6), 差得不多, 这个offset我打着会更顺
Light
- 01:00:516 (4) - 我觉得slider在这儿结束更合适
- 01:20:120 (1) - finish代替whistle如何?
Kiva
- 00:35:559 (5) - 这个spacing略有些奇怪, 不过倒不是什么问题, 测试的时候打到这儿稍微迟疑了下
- 01:01:104 (1) - finish?
- 01:29:619 (1) - ^
- 01:36:747 (1,2) - (1)的3个点和(2)都加finish感觉会很不错
- 03:14:173 (4) - finish
Hazy
- 01:00:807 (1) - 其实感觉去掉这个note还更顺一点
- 01:17:143 (4) - 这个摆出来一点会好认得多, slider尾的stack感觉不是很容易判断1/2拍还是1/4拍
[attachment=0:971e4]0.jpg[/attachment:971e4]Yuki Yuki
- OD+1? 这个OD比Hazy还低
- 00:23:232 (2) - 这是个啥...有点莫名其妙啊...
- 02:26:648 (1) - 加finish?
有回复后找我吧
>w< Thanks 微风菌~
都改了..尤其是蓝字(虽然我不知道那个怎么改好。。)
不知道怎么淡出BG T T
OK, then. Delete some uesless SB elements that could be placed by same pic.
Now let's get this map bubbled
Now let's get this map bubbled
Snowy, you're beautiful. Now get this thing ranked!
Topic Starter
> < thanks 微风菌~Breeze wrote:
OK, then. Delete some uesless SB elements that could be placed by same pic.
Now let's get this map bubbled
(不知道要不要给kd 反正给了能取消>.>)
Raging Bull wrote:
Snowy, you're beautiful. Now get this thing ranked!
Ah, it's been awhile since I've checked this map, haha.
[SB]
A lot of the text looks badly cropped with some more obvious than others.
A lot of the glow effect makes things look really chopped up too since they're all cut rather harshly.
[Light]
00:42:094 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy. It's best to leave a lot of time after a spinner for new players to realign.
01:24:866 (1,2,3) - Maybe tone this down a little. More of a Normal difficulty technique.
01:39:718 (1) - Soon after spinner
02:27:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - These hitsounds felt off compared to previous patterns
[Kiva]
00:55:757 (6,1) - Kind of a big jump for a Normal
01:07:044 (4,5) - Not a good place for a jump in this difficulty level.
01:24:272 (4,5) - These are positioned poorly visually and flow-wise.
02:07:341 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This rhythm really what you want here? It's... not really what I'd expect to play. The back and forth motion isn't much fun to do either considering the music...
I also suggest you give this difficulty a really good look through. Your hitsounding is very inconsistent which leads to a strange play experience.
[Hazy]
00:03:777 (6,7,8) - Whyyy rhythms like this during such a slow introductory part? Ruins the mood of the music. :<
00:57:985 (6,7) - Spacing
Sounds like you forgot to put in your soft whistles during the first kiai section
02:25:460 (1) - Please don't have similar looking sliders with different speeds on them like this. You can barely see the slider tick.
[Yuki YukI]
00:14:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a good spot for accelerated spacing considering it's a descending line in the music. :/
00:51:599 (2,3) - I'm not really feeling why these rhythms are here during such a soft and slow part.
01:25:163 (4) - Not really expecting a 4-hit slider here.
03:41:500 (1,2,3) - This plays really awkwardly. 4 hit, 3 hit, 4 hit just doesn't jive. Try something different, please.
03:51:005 (1) - There's got to be a better place for this slider so that you don't need for force a new combo on it just so you can read it.
[Taiko]
The first 1/3 of the map felt really.. sporadic. The rhythms used didn't really fit with the music much and felt kind of random and sometimes somewhat inappropriate intensity-wise. Please look through this a few times and give it a serious listen. Once it fits aurally, then see if it works play-wise as well.
03:42:688 - Add a note. End the spinner a little earlier.
I really recommend that you find some good taiko modders to look over this map.
[SB]
A lot of the text looks badly cropped with some more obvious than others.
A lot of the glow effect makes things look really chopped up too since they're all cut rather harshly.
[Light]
00:42:094 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy. It's best to leave a lot of time after a spinner for new players to realign.
01:24:866 (1,2,3) - Maybe tone this down a little. More of a Normal difficulty technique.
01:39:718 (1) - Soon after spinner
02:27:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - These hitsounds felt off compared to previous patterns
[Kiva]
00:55:757 (6,1) - Kind of a big jump for a Normal
01:07:044 (4,5) - Not a good place for a jump in this difficulty level.
01:24:272 (4,5) - These are positioned poorly visually and flow-wise.
02:07:341 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This rhythm really what you want here? It's... not really what I'd expect to play. The back and forth motion isn't much fun to do either considering the music...
I also suggest you give this difficulty a really good look through. Your hitsounding is very inconsistent which leads to a strange play experience.
[Hazy]
00:03:777 (6,7,8) - Whyyy rhythms like this during such a slow introductory part? Ruins the mood of the music. :<
00:57:985 (6,7) - Spacing
Sounds like you forgot to put in your soft whistles during the first kiai section
02:25:460 (1) - Please don't have similar looking sliders with different speeds on them like this. You can barely see the slider tick.
[Yuki YukI]
00:14:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a good spot for accelerated spacing considering it's a descending line in the music. :/
00:51:599 (2,3) - I'm not really feeling why these rhythms are here during such a soft and slow part.
01:25:163 (4) - Not really expecting a 4-hit slider here.
03:41:500 (1,2,3) - This plays really awkwardly. 4 hit, 3 hit, 4 hit just doesn't jive. Try something different, please.
03:51:005 (1) - There's got to be a better place for this slider so that you don't need for force a new combo on it just so you can read it.
[Taiko]
The first 1/3 of the map felt really.. sporadic. The rhythms used didn't really fit with the music much and felt kind of random and sometimes somewhat inappropriate intensity-wise. Please look through this a few times and give it a serious listen. Once it fits aurally, then see if it works play-wise as well.
03:42:688 - Add a note. End the spinner a little earlier.
I really recommend that you find some good taiko modders to look over this map.
Topic Starter
Time to sleep. I'll recheck tomorrow..Garven wrote:
Ah, it's been awhile since I've checked this map, haha.
[SB]
A lot of the text looks badly cropped with some more obvious than others. Fixed all.
A lot of the glow effect makes things look really chopped up too since they're all cut rather harshly.
[Light]
00:42:094 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy. It's best to leave a lot of time after a spinner for new players to realign. F
01:24:866 (1,2,3) - Maybe tone this down a little. More of a Normal difficulty technique. F
01:39:718 (1) - Soon after spinner F
02:27:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - These hitsounds felt off compared to previous patterns F
[Kiva]
00:55:757 (6,1) - Kind of a big jump for a Normal F
01:07:044 (4,5) - Not a good place for a jump in this difficulty level. F
01:24:272 (4,5) - These are positioned poorly visually and flow-wise. F
02:07:341 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This rhythm really what you want here? It's... not really what I'd expect to play. The back and forth motion isn't much fun to do either considering the music... F
I also suggest you give this difficulty a really good look through. Your hitsounding is very inconsistent which leads to a strange play experience. Fixed a lot
[Hazy]
00:03:777 (6,7,8) - Whyyy rhythms like this during such a slow introductory part? Ruins the mood of the music. :< F
00:57:985 (6,7) - Spacing F
Sounds like you forgot to put in your soft whistles during the first kiai section
02:25:460 (1) - Please don't have similar looking sliders with different speeds on them like this. You can barely see the slider tick. F
[Yuki YukI]
00:14:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a good spot for accelerated spacing considering it's a descending line in the music. :/ F
00:51:599 (2,3) - I'm not really feeling why these rhythms are here during such a soft and slow part. F
01:25:163 (4) - Not really expecting a 4-hit slider here. F
03:41:500 (1,2,3) - This plays really awkwardly. 4 hit, 3 hit, 4 hit just doesn't jive. Try something different, please. F
03:51:005 (1) - There's got to be a better place for this slider so that you don't need for force a new combo on it just so you can read it. F
[Taiko]
The first 1/3 of the map felt really.. sporadic. The rhythms used didn't really fit with the music much and felt kind of random and sometimes somewhat inappropriate intensity-wise. Please look through this a few times and give it a serious listen. Once it fits aurally, then see if it works play-wise as well.
03:42:688 - Add a note. End the spinner a little earlier.
I really recommend that you find some good taiko modders to look over this map.
Thanks a lot Garven
Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by Snowy Dream
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[Overall]
Maybe it's me, but I think offset -665 is better.
[SB]
24.png ( Lyric ) has no fade in when appearing at 03:32:440.
[S.Nagi's Taiko]
This is a slow, soft song. So it's better to have fewer long 1/4s, esp 01:03:480 ( 135 ~ 151 ) and 01:07:935 ( 158 ~ 174 )
03:23:084 ( 58 ~ 61 ) - Stacking of notes occur here, which causes confusion. You should add a BPM x0.8 for 58, 0.9 for 59, and 0.6 for 60.
03:23:975 ( 61 ~ 77 ) - Having many 1/4s with BPM x0.5 doesn't look good. Consider reducing them ?
The map is OK overall ~
Consider using less dense patterns for soft songs next time :3
Rating : 7.5/10
Star and good luck ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by Snowy Dream
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[Overall]
Maybe it's me, but I think offset -665 is better.
[SB]
24.png ( Lyric ) has no fade in when appearing at 03:32:440.
[S.Nagi's Taiko]
This is a slow, soft song. So it's better to have fewer long 1/4s, esp 01:03:480 ( 135 ~ 151 ) and 01:07:935 ( 158 ~ 174 )
03:23:084 ( 58 ~ 61 ) - Stacking of notes occur here, which causes confusion. You should add a BPM x0.8 for 58, 0.9 for 59, and 0.6 for 60.
03:23:975 ( 61 ~ 77 ) - Having many 1/4s with BPM x0.5 doesn't look good. Consider reducing them ?
Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~
00:04:222 ( 1 ) - Delete this note ?
00:14:470 ( 32 ~ 38 ) - ooo ooo o ?
00:18:034 ( 48 ) - Red note ?
00:22:490 ( 1 ~ 3 ) - o o O ?
01:38:529 ( 1 ~ 3) - ^
01:46:549 ( 33 ) - Blue note ?
02:39:421 ( 160 ~ 168 ) - Change to ooooo o o ?
02:45:361 ( 182 ~ 183 ) - o O ?
03:50:114 ( 24 ) - Blue note ?
03:52:193 ( 34 ) - ^
00:04:222 ( 1 ) - Delete this note ?
00:14:470 ( 32 ~ 38 ) - ooo ooo o ?
00:18:034 ( 48 ) - Red note ?
00:22:490 ( 1 ~ 3 ) - o o O ?
01:38:529 ( 1 ~ 3) - ^
01:46:549 ( 33 ) - Blue note ?
02:39:421 ( 160 ~ 168 ) - Change to ooooo o o ?
02:45:361 ( 182 ~ 183 ) - o O ?
03:50:114 ( 24 ) - Blue note ?
03:52:193 ( 34 ) - ^
The map is OK overall ~
Consider using less dense patterns for soft songs next time :3
Rating : 7.5/10
Star and good luck ~
Topic Starter
SPOILER
aabc271 wrote:
Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by Snowy Dream
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[Overall]
Maybe it's me, but I think offset -665 is better.
[SB]
24.png ( Lyric ) has no fade in when appearing at 03:32:440.
[S.Nagi's Taiko]
This is a slow, soft song. So it's better to have fewer long 1/4s, esp 01:03:480 ( 135 ~ 151 ) and 01:07:935 ( 158 ~ 174 )
03:23:084 ( 58 ~ 61 ) - Stacking of notes occur here, which causes confusion. You should add a BPM x0.8 for 58, 0.9 for 59, and 0.6 for 60.
03:23:975 ( 61 ~ 77 ) - Having many 1/4s with BPM x0.5 doesn't look good. Consider reducing them ?Suggested patternsSuggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~
00:04:222 ( 1 ) - Delete this note ?
00:14:470 ( 32 ~ 38 ) - ooo ooo o ?
00:18:034 ( 48 ) - Red note ?
00:22:490 ( 1 ~ 3 ) - o o O ?
01:38:529 ( 1 ~ 3) - ^
01:46:549 ( 33 ) - Blue note ?
02:39:421 ( 160 ~ 168 ) - Change to ooooo o o ?
02:45:361 ( 182 ~ 183 ) - o O ?
03:50:114 ( 24 ) - Blue note ?
03:52:193 ( 34 ) - ^
The map is OK overall ~
Consider using less dense patterns for soft songs next time :3
Rating : 7.5/10
Star and good luck ~
thx for taiko modding.Fixed almost all.
[SB]
02:07:341 - yume isn't appearing here
[Kiva]
02:10:015 (1,2) - Spacing
[Hazy]
02:25:460 (3) - I think something like this would work better for readability.
[Taiko]
03:37:787 (112,113) - Don't have a finish so close to a normal note please
Seemed a little quiet during the louder parts of the song.
02:07:341 - yume isn't appearing here
[Kiva]
02:10:015 (1,2) - Spacing
[Hazy]
02:25:460 (3) - I think something like this would work better for readability.
[Taiko]
03:37:787 (112,113) - Don't have a finish so close to a normal note please
Seemed a little quiet during the louder parts of the song.
Topic Starter
Garven wrote:
[SB]
02:07:341 - yume isn't appearing here
[Kiva]
02:10:015 (1,2) - Spacing
[Hazy]
02:25:460 (3) - I think something like this would work better for readability.
[Taiko]
03:37:787 (112,113) - Don't have a finish so close to a normal note please
Seemed a little quiet during the louder parts of the song.
All fixed. Thanks for your mod, GarvenRebub~
Topic Starter
Garven wrote:
Rebub~
Thanks for your advice, Garven.It must be useful.
This Bestmap is OK.
Give your Heart~
Go to Ranked~
Give your Heart~
Go to Ranked~
Good Beatmap .w.
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions
Nothing much touched the mapset itself, just some SB suggestions and tiny design prettify
I guess I can extend ranking this map after you done this
Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (Snowy Dream).osb
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions
SB
- 03:42:688 - Scale out effect here mismatched BG, I fixed this for you
ATTACH[Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (Snowy Dream).osb]
Light
- 00:05:856 (1) - Try this, it has a better shape with 00:07:638 (2)
396,196,5856,6,0,B|344:240|424:312|352:368,1,179.999994635582
- 03:21:302 (x) - Extend break to here?
Kiva
- 02:22:193 (1) - I'd suggest you don't use jump here, this might be confusing to noob
Taiko
- Maybe remove SB if taiko diff. and add a taiko BG? Since SB looked kinda awkward in taiko mode
If you want, here's the taiko BG, but if you do so, remember to move SB code into other diff.'s osu file, then delete osb file
Nothing much touched the mapset itself, just some SB suggestions and tiny design prettify
I guess I can extend ranking this map after you done this
Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (Snowy Dream).osb
Topic Starter
SPOILER
Breeze wrote:
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestionsSB
- 03:42:688 - Scroll out effect here mismatched BG, I fixed this for you
[attachment=1:5af20]Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (Snowy Dream).osb[/attachment:5af20]Light
- 00:05:856 (1) - Try this, it has a better shape with 00:07:638 (2)
396,196,5856,6,0,B|344:240|424:312|352:368,1,179.999994635582- 03:21:302 (x) - Extend break to here?
Kiva
- 02:22:193 (1) - I'd suggest you don't use jump here, this might be confusing to noob
Taiko
- Maybe remove SB if taiko diff. and add a taiko BG? Since SB looked kinda awkward in taiko mode
If you want, here's the taiko BG, but if you do so, remember to move SB code into other diff.'s osu file, then delete osb file
[spoilerbox][attachment=0:5af20]Taiko.jpg[/attachment:5af20]
Nothing much touched the mapset itself, just some SB suggestions and tiny design prettify
I guess I can extend ranking this map after you done thisww 看到泡被戳了感觉很好 (终于有BAT来看图了啊> <)
Thanks so much! 微风菌, accept all of above.
Nice
RANKED
RANKED
congratz！
this is not science
congratz ~
Sorry, map will be taken down a while to fix a SB bug
Will be back soon, please wait a sec to play this map
Will be back soon, please wait a sec to play this map
Should be fine now
Enjoy
Enjoy
Congratz!
congratz....
一年了啊....o.0
一年了啊....o.0