Nymph_ wrote:

Nymph here and request from: wcx19911123's mod queue.
Yuki Yuki:
01:17:749 (1) - ...(我觉得挺难看的 液) 这个随手拉的 太长了想不到怎么拉所以就这样了 重新拉过了一下 不过实在不擅长这个
01:56:957 (1) - 转盘FINISH? ok.....
03:41:512 (1,2,3) - 03:51:908 (2) - 我真心认为这些并不适合 虽然能听出来前面的是在跟乐器.. 后面的就真不知道为什么要这么下了.. 后面的deleted

tutuhaha wrote:

Yuki Yuki
没仔细看，但是就前面这一段来说要降音就降得彻底点比较好吧，突然两个whistle很吓人的。。。。。
音效和前面三难度尽量保持一致比较好 这个由于是remap过的版本所以没加原来的音效
这首歌只有一些地方要加重音的所以Normal音只要在一些地方加就行了一段一段的太吵了真的。。。 normal的话音量已经尽量降小了 感觉normal的话更有打击感 不是麽

1. The source of [Yuki Yuki] is vocaloid vocaloid2 while others are vocaloid2, idk which is the real source, but use same one please
2. It seems SB.jpeg and miku.jpeg is the same image with different resolution, miku.jpeg as BG and SB.jpeg used in SB right? Actually you could totally use SB.jpeg as BG. Well, I think it's not a big problem

1. The lyric couldn't be well viewed since it has a dark color, maybe add a soft light under it would be beeter, and here is a contrast:
   yours:
   Fixed:

1. 00:32:601 (1) - Remove whistle and use finish instead since there is a finish sound in the background music
2. 00:42:106 - It's not recommended that use 0.5xBPM in the easiest diff., it's hard to new players
3. 01:10:621 (1) - Remove whistle and add finish
4. 01:54:581 (5) - Doesn't fit music, suggest use a slider and a note instead or other ways you like. Oh, remember to add a custom soft clap at 01:55:175
   

1. 00:23:096 (1) - Add finish to fit music
2. 00:58:145 (4) - Spacing to 3 is a bit far
3. 01:10:027 (5) - If you use normal hitsound with about 70% volume here, it would sounds nice
4. 01:20:126 (2) - Add finish
5. 01:36:759 (1,2,3) - Add finish
6. 01:39:135 (1) - ^
7. 01:43:591 (1) - Why this slider spacing so close to previous notes?
8. 01:48:640 (2) - Add finish
9. 02:07:650 (2) - ^
10. 02:17:155 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
11. 02:26:660 (1) - ^
12. 02:45:670 (3) - Add finish
13. 02:55:175 (1) - ^
14. 03:52:205 (1) - ^

1. 00:05:720 (10) - Try 5% soft volume to the reverse seems better
2. 01:37:205 (2,3) - Add finish sounds better IMO
3. 02:24:878 (2) - Even if you want a slow down effect, is should start at this time

1. 00:30:522, 00:30:819 - Add a note sounds better
2. 01:19:532 (1) - Slider ends here seems better
3. 01:29:631 (5) - Add finish
4. 03:42:700 (4) - ^
5. 03:52:205 (3) - ^

1. Offset -6? (-772) Don't forget to move the sections and SB elements as well
2. Because of the SB, maybe disable letterbox during breaks in all diffs
3. I suggest using the kiai pattern of the taiko diff in all diffs. Don't use kiai just for the fountains, that's silly
4. Use the same slider tick rate for all diffs

1. It isn't necessary to change it now, but next time use 640*480 png files for black and white
2. For optimalization, you have various "white.jpg" "black.jpg" and "black ring.png" sprites in the sprite list, next time try reusing old sprites instead of adding new ones.

1. How about making the length of your maps consistent by making this diff as long as the other diffs? If you disagree please remove the SB on this diff that shows up after the map ends.

1. You placed some stacks in your map, for example: 01:18:937 (4,5,6) - But I think it's easier to read for new players if you space them out like you did on 01:36:165 (3,4,5) - maybe consider that.

1. the streams/stacks make this map a rather low-end hard, I like it more as a normal and I personally find these streams/stacks a bit unfitting here D: I really think you should remove them to make this map easier. Otherwise it would be too similar to the other diffs and 3 hard diffs is a bit weird
2. recheck your new combos, they're set pretty randomly imo
3. 02:26:066 (1) - move the middle waypoint 1 grid to the left to make the slider look better, also fix the sliders after this

1. 00:19:829 (1) - Let this spinner start 1/4 earlier
2. 00:40:027 (1) - Maybe let this spinner start 1/2 earlier? remove the note there
3. 00:54:878 (6) - This rhythm is a bit weird, change this slider into something else. Maybe place a note on 00:54:878 - and move the slider 1/2 back
4. 02:37:353 (5) - This stack is kinda hard to read, maybe move this 1/4 back to fit the vocals? or space it out.
5. 02:39:730 (5) - Apply the same here
6. 03:56:660 (1) - This spinner is rather sudden and short. Maybe replace it with a few beats?

1. 00:32:007 (1) - This is too close to (7)
2. 00:58:145 (4) - This is too close to (3)
3. 01:05:571 (4,1) - This jump here is very inconsistent with the rest of the spacing of this map

1. Reduce HP drain a bit? it's quite high xD I suggest -2
2. 00:05:274 (10) - No, silencing isn't an excuse for a pooted up rhythm
3. 02:25:472 (3) - Maybe add a new combo on this one to make it a bit easier to read
4. 02:40:918 (6) - Add new combo?
5. 01:39:135 - & 03:42:700 - Resnap these timing sections

1. 00:06:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - change the rhythm here and have something at 00:07:650 -
2. 00:11:215 (3,4) - The endpoints on blue ticks don't sound good
3. 00:19:680 (1) - Make this spinner start 1/4 earlier?
4. 00:22:353 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - wah! this is very hard to read with the sudden repeat slider in the middle of it and I think you should remove the note at 00:23:244 - It confuses me
5. 00:49:234 (2) - This slider doesn't look good, but the rhythm is also bad, don't use blue tick here
6. 03:41:512 (1,2,3) - another wah! Don't start new sliders on blue ticks! This is really impossible to read. Does this 1/4 stream even fit the song here? 1/6 fits better imo

1. 03:26:363 (2) Too close to (1)
2. 03:52:799 (4) - Spacing looks weird here, maybe give this note a new combo

1. There are too many reduntant timing sections! please remove the useless sections
2. You placed finishes on notes that are 1/4 apart from eachother. This is not allowed, and no the bpm is not 220. I'll point them out
   
   
   • 00:08:838 (9)
     00:30:522 (41,42,43)
     01:24:878 (23)
     01:46:561 (33,34,35)
     02:34:977 (143)
     02:41:215 (170,171)
     02:43:888 (174,175,176)
     03:02:304 (4)
     03:21:611 (54,55)
     03:26:660 (75)
     02:53:096 (218,219,220)

1. 03:23:096 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - Overtaking notes here! please fix this
2. 03:40:324 (1) - place a note here?
3. I can't say I'm impressed by this diff, the rhythm and hitsounds are placed very randomly and don't fit the song at all

happy30 wrote:

[General]
Technical stuff Fixed

1. Offset -6? (-772) Don't forget to move the sections and SB elements as well Fixed
2. Because of the SB, maybe disable letterbox during breaks in all diffs Fixed
3. I suggest using the kiai pattern of the taiko diff in all diffs. Don't use kiai just for the fountains, that's silly Fixed on [Hazy] diff
4. Use the same slider tick rate for all diffs Fixed

[SB]
Technical stuff

1. It isn't necessary to change it now, but next time use 640*480 png files for black and white
2. For optimalization, you have various "white.jpg" "black.jpg" and "black ring.png" sprites in the sprite list, next time try reusing old sprites instead of adding new ones. Thanks for suggestions. I will

[Light Short]
Technical stuff

1. How about making the length of your maps consistent by making this diff as long as the other diffs? If you disagree please remove the SB on this diff that shows up after the map ends. Fixed

Difficulty

1. You placed some stacks in your map, for example: 01:18:937 (4,5,6) - But I think it's easier to read for new players if you space them out like you did on 01:36:165 (3,4,5) - maybe consider that. Fixed

[Kiva]
Technical Stuff

1. the streams/stacks make this map a rather low-end hard, I like it more as a normal and I personally find these streams/stacks a bit unfitting here D: I really think you should remove them to make this map easier. Otherwise it would be too similar to the other diffs and 3 hard diffs is a bit weird Fixed
2. recheck your new combos, they're set pretty randomly imo Fixed
3. 02:26:066 (1) - move the middle waypoint 1 grid to the left to make the slider look better, also fix the sliders after this Fixed

Rhythm

1. 00:19:829 (1) - Let this spinner start 1/4 earlier Fixed
2. 00:40:027 (1) - Maybe let this spinner start 1/2 earlier? remove the note there Fixed
3. 00:54:878 (6) - This rhythm is a bit weird, change this slider into something else. Maybe place a note on 00:54:878 - and move the slider 1/2 back Fixed
4. 02:37:353 (5) - This stack is kinda hard to read, maybe move this 1/4 back to fit the vocals? or space it out. Fixed
5. 02:39:730 (5) - Apply the same here Fixed
6. 03:56:660 (1) - This spinner is rather sudden and short. Maybe replace it with a few beats? Fixed

Spacing

1. 00:32:007 (1) - This is too close to (7) Fixed
2. 00:58:145 (4) - This is too close to (3) Fixed
3. 01:05:571 (4,1) - This jump here is very inconsistent with the rest of the spacing of this map Fixed

[Hazy]
Technical Stuff

1. Reduce HP drain a bit? it's quite high xD I suggest -2 Fixed
2. 00:05:274 (10) - No, silencing isn't an excuse for a pooted up rhythm Fixed
3. 02:25:472 (3) - Maybe add a new combo on this one to make it a bit easier to read Fixed
4. 02:40:918 (6) - Add new combo? Fixed
5. 01:39:135 - & 03:42:700 - Resnap these timing sections Fixed

[Yuki YukI]
Rhythm
Some rhythms in your map don't follow the song well and feel weird and overmapped

1. 00:06:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - change the rhythm here and have something at 00:07:650 - Fixed
2. 00:11:215 (3,4) - The endpoints on blue ticks don't sound good Fixed
3. 00:19:680 (1) - Make this spinner start 1/4 earlier? Fixed
4. 00:22:353 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - wah! this is very hard to read with the sudden repeat slider in the middle of it and I think you should remove the note at 00:23:244 - It confuses me Fixed
5. 00:49:234 (2) - This slider doesn't look good, but the rhythm is also bad, don't use blue tick here Fixed
6. 03:41:512 (1,2,3) - another wah! Don't start new sliders on blue ticks! This is really impossible to read. Does this 1/4 stream even fit the song here? 1/6 fits better imo Fixed

Spacing

1. 03:26:363 (2) Too close to (1) Fixed
2. 03:52:799 (4) - Spacing looks weird here, maybe give this note a new combo Fixed

[S.Nagi's Taiko]

1. There are too many reduntant timing sections! please remove the useless sections All Fixed
2. You placed finishes on notes that are 1/4 apart from eachother. This is not allowed, and no the bpm is not 220. I'll point them out
   
   
   • 00:08:838 (9) Fixed
     00:30:522 (41,42,43) Fixed
     01:24:878 (23) Fixed
     01:46:561 (33,34,35) Fixed
     02:34:977 (143) Fixed
     02:41:215 (170,171) Fixed
     02:43:888 (174,175,176) Fixed
     03:02:304 (4) Fixed
     03:21:611 (54,55) Fixed
     03:26:660 (75) Fixed
     02:53:096 (218,219,220)Fixed

1. 03:23:096 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - Overtaking notes here! please fix this
2. 03:40:324 (1) - place a note here? Fixed
3. I can't say I'm impressed by this diff, the rhythm and hitsounds are placed very randomly and don't fit the song at all

Raging Bull wrote:

Ohh thanks. Although I don't know why Kiva didn't upload attachment o.o

Raging Bull wrote:

Ohh thanks. Although I don't know why Kiva didn't upload attachment o.o

[HitObjects]
140,156,18040,1,0
140,156,18189,1,0
139,156,18337,2,0,B|88:220|142:282,1,140,0|0
136,368,19228,2,0,B|212:368|228:284,1,105
256,192,19823,12,2,22496
256,192,23090,5,4

Breeze wrote:

OK, then. Delete some uesless SB elements that could be placed by same pic.
Now let's get this map bubbled

Raging Bull wrote:

Snowy, you're beautiful. Now get this thing ranked!

Garven wrote:

Ah, it's been awhile since I've checked this map, haha.

[SB]
A lot of the text looks badly cropped with some more obvious than others. Fixed all.

A lot of the glow effect makes things look really chopped up too since they're all cut rather harshly.

[Light]
00:42:094 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy. It's best to leave a lot of time after a spinner for new players to realign. F
01:24:866 (1,2,3) - Maybe tone this down a little. More of a Normal difficulty technique. F
01:39:718 (1) - Soon after spinner F
02:27:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - These hitsounds felt off compared to previous patterns F

[Kiva]
00:55:757 (6,1) - Kind of a big jump for a Normal F
01:07:044 (4,5) - Not a good place for a jump in this difficulty level. F
01:24:272 (4,5) - These are positioned poorly visually and flow-wise. F
02:07:341 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This rhythm really what you want here? It's... not really what I'd expect to play. The back and forth motion isn't much fun to do either considering the music... F
I also suggest you give this difficulty a really good look through. Your hitsounding is very inconsistent which leads to a strange play experience. Fixed a lot

[Hazy]
00:03:777 (6,7,8) - Whyyy rhythms like this during such a slow introductory part? Ruins the mood of the music. :< F
00:57:985 (6,7) - Spacing F
Sounds like you forgot to put in your soft whistles during the first kiai section
02:25:460 (1) - Please don't have similar looking sliders with different speeds on them like this. You can barely see the slider tick. F

[Yuki YukI]
00:14:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a good spot for accelerated spacing considering it's a descending line in the music. :/ F
00:51:599 (2,3) - I'm not really feeling why these rhythms are here during such a soft and slow part. F
01:25:163 (4) - Not really expecting a 4-hit slider here. F
03:41:500 (1,2,3) - This plays really awkwardly. 4 hit, 3 hit, 4 hit just doesn't jive. Try something different, please. F
03:51:005 (1) - There's got to be a better place for this slider so that you don't need for force a new combo on it just so you can read it. F

[Taiko]
The first 1/3 of the map felt really.. sporadic. The rhythms used didn't really fit with the music much and felt kind of random and sometimes somewhat inappropriate intensity-wise. Please look through this a few times and give it a serious listen. Once it fits aurally, then see if it works play-wise as well.
03:42:688 - Add a note. End the spinner a little earlier.
I really recommend that you find some good taiko modders to look over this map.

Garven wrote:

[SB]
02:07:341 - yume isn't appearing here

[Kiva]
02:10:015 (1,2) - Spacing

[Hazy]
02:25:460 (3) - I think something like this would work better for readability.


[Taiko]
03:37:787 (112,113) - Don't have a finish so close to a normal note please
Seemed a little quiet during the louder parts of the song.

Garven wrote:

Rebub~