omg awesome *-* star~
thanks a lotkarenying wrote:
Yuki YukI
00:01:116 - hitnormal靜音超怪的... 这是由于后来加了一个无声的soft-hitnorma弄的 fixed
00:21:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 吵,節奏超怪 fixed a lot
00:44:482 (5) - ugly fixed
其他還不錯 就normal hitsound的地方很吵 這些地方建議减音量,若10~20% 有些地方降了10%的音量
Nymph_ wrote:
Nymph here and request from: wcx19911123's mod queue.
Yuki Yuki:
01:17:749 (1) - ...(我觉得挺难看的 液) 这个随手拉的 太长了想不到怎么拉所以就这样了 重新拉过了一下 不过实在不擅长这个
01:56:957 (1) - 转盘FINISH? ok.....
03:41:512 (1,2,3) - 03:51:908 (2) - 我真心认为这些并不适合 虽然能听出来前面的是在跟乐器.. 后面的就真不知道为什么要这么下了.. 后面的deleted
Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (Snowy Dream) [Yuki YukI].osututuhaha wrote:
Yuki Yuki
没仔细看,但是就前面这一段来说要降音就降得彻底点比较好吧,突然两个whistle很吓人的。。。。。
音效和前面三难度尽量保持一致比较好 这个由于是remap过的版本所以没加原来的音效
这首歌只有一些地方要加重音的所以Normal音只要在一些地方加就行了一段一段的太吵了真的。。。 normal的话音量已经尽量降小了 感觉normal的话更有打击感 不是麽
Breeze wrote:
this is really a old map
only the red ones is what you should fix, others are only suggestions, choose what you like to fix, no need to change if you dislike
[General]@.@
- The source of [Yuki Yuki] is vocaloid vocaloid2 while others are vocaloid2, idk which is the real source, but use same one please Fixed
- It seems SB.jpeg and miku.jpeg is the same image with different resolution, miku.jpeg as BG and SB.jpeg used in SB right? Actually you could totally use SB.jpeg as BG. Well, I think it's not a big problem
[SB]All Fixed
- The lyric couldn't be well viewed since it has a dark color, maybe add a soft light under it would be beeter, and here is a contrast:
yours:[attachment=2:7d9c5]0.jpg[/attachment:7d9c5]
Fixed:[attachment=1:7d9c5]2.jpg[/attachment:7d9c5]
[Light Short][Kiva]
- 00:32:601 (1) - Remove whistle and use finish instead since there is a finish sound in the background music Fixed
- 00:42:106 - It's not recommended that use 0.5xBPM in the easiest diff., it's hard to new players hard to new players...不会的...
- 01:10:621 (1) - Remove whistle and add finishFixed
- 01:54:581 (5) - Doesn't fit music, suggest use a slider and a note instead or other ways you like. Oh, remember to add a custom soft clap at 01:55:175Fixed
[attachment=0:7d9c5]3.jpg[/attachment:7d9c5][Hazy]
- 00:23:096 (1) - Add finish to fit musicFixed
- 00:58:145 (4) - Spacing to 3 is a bit farFixed
- 01:10:027 (5) - If you use normal hitsound with about 70% volume here, it would sounds niceFixed
- 01:20:126 (2) - Add finishFixed
- 01:36:759 (1,2,3) - Add finishFixed
- 01:39:135 (1) - ^Fixed
- 01:43:591 (1) - Why this slider spacing so close to previous notes?Fixed
- 01:48:640 (2) - Add finishFixed
- 02:07:650 (2) - ^Fixed
- 02:17:155 (1) - Finish instead of whistleFixed
- 02:26:660 (1) - ^Fixed
- 02:45:670 (3) - Add finishFixed
- 02:55:175 (1) - ^Fixed
- 03:52:205 (1) - ^
感觉最后一个降速就可以了吧@.@
- 00:05:720 (10) - Try 5% soft volume to the reverse seems betterFixed
- 01:37:205 (2,3) - Add finish sounds better IMOFixed
- 02:24:878 (2) - Even if you want a slow down effect, is should start at this time
[Yuki YukI]nice map in all
- 00:30:522, 00:30:819 - Add a note sounds betterFixed
- 01:19:532 (1) - Slider ends here seems betterFixed
- 01:29:631 (5) - Add finishFixed
- 03:42:700 (4) - ^Fixed
- 03:52:205 (3) - ^Fixed
star
Thanks >.<happy30 wrote:
[General]
Technical stuff Fixed[SB]
- Offset -6? (-772) Don't forget to move the sections and SB elements as well Fixed
- Because of the SB, maybe disable letterbox during breaks in all diffs Fixed
- I suggest using the kiai pattern of the taiko diff in all diffs. Don't use kiai just for the fountains, that's silly Fixed on [Hazy] diff
- Use the same slider tick rate for all diffs Fixed
Technical stuff
- It isn't necessary to change it now, but next time use 640*480 png files for black and white
- For optimalization, you have various "white.jpg" "black.jpg" and "black ring.png" sprites in the sprite list, next time try reusing old sprites instead of adding new ones. Thanks for suggestions. I will
[Light Short]
Technical stuffDifficulty
- How about making the length of your maps consistent by making this diff as long as the other diffs? If you disagree please remove the SB on this diff that shows up after the map ends. Fixed
[Kiva]
- You placed some stacks in your map, for example: 01:18:937 (4,5,6) - But I think it's easier to read for new players if you space them out like you did on 01:36:165 (3,4,5) - maybe consider that. Fixed
Technical StuffRhythm
- the streams/stacks make this map a rather low-end hard, I like it more as a normal and I personally find these streams/stacks a bit unfitting here D: I really think you should remove them to make this map easier. Otherwise it would be too similar to the other diffs and 3 hard diffs is a bit weird Fixed
- recheck your new combos, they're set pretty randomly imo Fixed
- 02:26:066 (1) - move the middle waypoint 1 grid to the left to make the slider look better, also fix the sliders after this Fixed
Spacing
- 00:19:829 (1) - Let this spinner start 1/4 earlier Fixed
- 00:40:027 (1) - Maybe let this spinner start 1/2 earlier? remove the note there Fixed
- 00:54:878 (6) - This rhythm is a bit weird, change this slider into something else. Maybe place a note on 00:54:878 - and move the slider 1/2 back Fixed
- 02:37:353 (5) - This stack is kinda hard to read, maybe move this 1/4 back to fit the vocals? or space it out. Fixed
- 02:39:730 (5) - Apply the same here Fixed
- 03:56:660 (1) - This spinner is rather sudden and short. Maybe replace it with a few beats? Fixed
[Hazy]
- 00:32:007 (1) - This is too close to (7) Fixed
- 00:58:145 (4) - This is too close to (3) Fixed
- 01:05:571 (4,1) - This jump here is very inconsistent with the rest of the spacing of this map Fixed
Technical Stuff[Yuki YukI]
- Reduce HP drain a bit? it's quite high xD I suggest -2 Fixed
- 00:05:274 (10) - No, silencing isn't an excuse for a pooted up rhythm Fixed
- 02:25:472 (3) - Maybe add a new combo on this one to make it a bit easier to read Fixed
- 02:40:918 (6) - Add new combo? Fixed
- 01:39:135 - & 03:42:700 - Resnap these timing sections Fixed
Rhythm
Some rhythms in your map don't follow the song well and feel weird and overmappedSpacing
- 00:06:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - change the rhythm here and have something at 00:07:650 - Fixed
- 00:11:215 (3,4) - The endpoints on blue ticks don't sound good Fixed
- 00:19:680 (1) - Make this spinner start 1/4 earlier? Fixed
- 00:22:353 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - wah! this is very hard to read with the sudden repeat slider in the middle of it and I think you should remove the note at 00:23:244 - It confuses me Fixed
- 00:49:234 (2) - This slider doesn't look good, but the rhythm is also bad, don't use blue tick here Fixed
- 03:41:512 (1,2,3) - another wah! Don't start new sliders on blue ticks! This is really impossible to read. Does this 1/4 stream even fit the song here? 1/6 fits better imo Fixed
[S.Nagi's Taiko]
- 03:26:363 (2) Too close to (1) Fixed
- 03:52:799 (4) - Spacing looks weird here, maybe give this note a new combo Fixed
- There are too many reduntant timing sections! please remove the useless sections All Fixed
- You placed finishes on notes that are 1/4 apart from eachother. This is not allowed, and no the bpm is not 220. I'll point them out
- 00:08:838 (9) Fixed
00:30:522 (41,42,43) Fixed
01:24:878 (23) Fixed
01:46:561 (33,34,35) Fixed
02:34:977 (143) Fixed
02:41:215 (170,171) Fixed
02:43:888 (174,175,176) Fixed
03:02:304 (4) Fixed
03:21:611 (54,55) Fixed
03:26:660 (75) Fixed
02:53:096 (218,219,220)Fixed
- 03:23:096 (58,59,60,61,62,63) - Overtaking notes here! please fix this
- 03:40:324 (1) - place a note here? Fixed
- I can't say I'm impressed by this diff, the rhythm and hitsounds are placed very randomly and don't fit the song at all
I don't know too :<Raging Bull wrote:
Ohh thanks. Although I don't know why Kiva didn't upload attachment o.o
oooooooooooops i forgetDownload: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (Snowy Dream) [Kiva].osuRaging Bull wrote:
Ohh thanks. Although I don't know why Kiva didn't upload attachment o.o
[HitObjects]00:23:090 (1) - Why no kiai here? D: Since you mapped light and Hazy, you should add kiai fountain here for consistency.
140,156,18040,1,0
140,156,18189,1,0
139,156,18337,2,0,B|88:220|142:282,1,140,0|0
136,368,19228,2,0,B|212:368|228:284,1,105
256,192,19823,12,2,22496
256,192,23090,5,4
Breeze wrote:
SB
- 其实完全可以不用black.jpg的, 把背景色设成黑色然后淡出背景图片后就是黑色了
Timing
- 我测的offset是-678 (-6), 差得不多, 这个offset我打着会更顺
Light
- 01:00:516 (4) - 我觉得slider在这儿结束更合适
- 01:20:120 (1) - finish代替whistle如何?
Kiva
- 00:35:559 (5) - 这个spacing略有些奇怪, 不过倒不是什么问题, 测试的时候打到这儿稍微迟疑了下
- 01:01:104 (1) - finish?
- 01:29:619 (1) - ^
- 01:36:747 (1,2) - (1)的3个点和(2)都加finish感觉会很不错
- 03:14:173 (4) - finish
Hazy
- 01:00:807 (1) - 其实感觉去掉这个note还更顺一点
- 01:17:143 (4) - 这个摆出来一点会好认得多, slider尾的stack感觉不是很容易判断1/2拍还是1/4拍
[attachment=0:971e4]0.jpg[/attachment:971e4]Yuki Yuki
- OD+1? 这个OD比Hazy还低
- 00:23:232 (2) - 这是个啥...有点莫名其妙啊...
- 02:26:648 (1) - 加finish?
有回复后找我吧
> < thanks 微风菌~Breeze wrote:
OK, then. Delete some uesless SB elements that could be placed by same pic.
Now let's get this map bubbled
Raging Bull wrote:
Snowy, you're beautiful. Now get this thing ranked!
Time to sleep. I'll recheck tomorrow..Garven wrote:
Ah, it's been awhile since I've checked this map, haha.
[SB]
A lot of the text looks badly cropped with some more obvious than others. Fixed all.
A lot of the glow effect makes things look really chopped up too since they're all cut rather harshly.
[Light]
00:42:094 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy. It's best to leave a lot of time after a spinner for new players to realign. F
01:24:866 (1,2,3) - Maybe tone this down a little. More of a Normal difficulty technique. F
01:39:718 (1) - Soon after spinner F
02:27:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - These hitsounds felt off compared to previous patterns F
[Kiva]
00:55:757 (6,1) - Kind of a big jump for a Normal F
01:07:044 (4,5) - Not a good place for a jump in this difficulty level. F
01:24:272 (4,5) - These are positioned poorly visually and flow-wise. F
02:07:341 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This rhythm really what you want here? It's... not really what I'd expect to play. The back and forth motion isn't much fun to do either considering the music... F
I also suggest you give this difficulty a really good look through. Your hitsounding is very inconsistent which leads to a strange play experience. Fixed a lot
[Hazy]
00:03:777 (6,7,8) - Whyyy rhythms like this during such a slow introductory part? Ruins the mood of the music. :< F
00:57:985 (6,7) - Spacing F
Sounds like you forgot to put in your soft whistles during the first kiai section
02:25:460 (1) - Please don't have similar looking sliders with different speeds on them like this. You can barely see the slider tick. F
[Yuki YukI]
00:14:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a good spot for accelerated spacing considering it's a descending line in the music. :/ F
00:51:599 (2,3) - I'm not really feeling why these rhythms are here during such a soft and slow part. F
01:25:163 (4) - Not really expecting a 4-hit slider here. F
03:41:500 (1,2,3) - This plays really awkwardly. 4 hit, 3 hit, 4 hit just doesn't jive. Try something different, please. F
03:51:005 (1) - There's got to be a better place for this slider so that you don't need for force a new combo on it just so you can read it. F
[Taiko]
The first 1/3 of the map felt really.. sporadic. The rhythms used didn't really fit with the music much and felt kind of random and sometimes somewhat inappropriate intensity-wise. Please look through this a few times and give it a serious listen. Once it fits aurally, then see if it works play-wise as well.
03:42:688 - Add a note. End the spinner a little earlier.
I really recommend that you find some good taiko modders to look over this map.
aabc271 wrote:
Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by Snowy Dream
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[Overall]
Maybe it's me, but I think offset -665 is better.
[SB]
24.png ( Lyric ) has no fade in when appearing at 03:32:440.
[S.Nagi's Taiko]
This is a slow, soft song. So it's better to have fewer long 1/4s, esp 01:03:480 ( 135 ~ 151 ) and 01:07:935 ( 158 ~ 174 )
03:23:084 ( 58 ~ 61 ) - Stacking of notes occur here, which causes confusion. You should add a BPM x0.8 for 58, 0.9 for 59, and 0.6 for 60.
03:23:975 ( 61 ~ 77 ) - Having many 1/4s with BPM x0.5 doesn't look good. Consider reducing them ?Suggested patternsSuggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~
00:04:222 ( 1 ) - Delete this note ?
00:14:470 ( 32 ~ 38 ) - ooo ooo o ?
00:18:034 ( 48 ) - Red note ?
00:22:490 ( 1 ~ 3 ) - o o O ?
01:38:529 ( 1 ~ 3) - ^
01:46:549 ( 33 ) - Blue note ?
02:39:421 ( 160 ~ 168 ) - Change to ooooo o o ?
02:45:361 ( 182 ~ 183 ) - o O ?
03:50:114 ( 24 ) - Blue note ?
03:52:193 ( 34 ) - ^
The map is OK overall ~
Consider using less dense patterns for soft songs next time :3
Rating : 7.5/10
Star and good luck ~
All fixed. Thanks for your mod, GarvenGarven wrote:
[SB]
02:07:341 - yume isn't appearing here
[Kiva]
02:10:015 (1,2) - Spacing
[Hazy]
02:25:460 (3) - I think something like this would work better for readability.
[Taiko]
03:37:787 (112,113) - Don't have a finish so close to a normal note please
Seemed a little quiet during the louder parts of the song.
Thanks for your advice, Garven.Garven wrote:
Rebub~