Time to sleep. I'll recheck tomorrow..Garven wrote:
Ah, it's been awhile since I've checked this map, haha.
[SB]
A lot of the text looks badly cropped with some more obvious than others. Fixed all.
A lot of the glow effect makes things look really chopped up too since they're all cut rather harshly.
[Light]
00:42:094 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy. It's best to leave a lot of time after a spinner for new players to realign. F
01:24:866 (1,2,3) - Maybe tone this down a little. More of a Normal difficulty technique. F
01:39:718 (1) - Soon after spinner F
02:27:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - These hitsounds felt off compared to previous patterns F
[Kiva]
00:55:757 (6,1) - Kind of a big jump for a Normal F
01:07:044 (4,5) - Not a good place for a jump in this difficulty level. F
01:24:272 (4,5) - These are positioned poorly visually and flow-wise. F
02:07:341 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This rhythm really what you want here? It's... not really what I'd expect to play. The back and forth motion isn't much fun to do either considering the music... F
I also suggest you give this difficulty a really good look through. Your hitsounding is very inconsistent which leads to a strange play experience. Fixed a lot
[Hazy]
00:03:777 (6,7,8) - Whyyy rhythms like this during such a slow introductory part? Ruins the mood of the music. :< F
00:57:985 (6,7) - Spacing F
Sounds like you forgot to put in your soft whistles during the first kiai section
02:25:460 (1) - Please don't have similar looking sliders with different speeds on them like this. You can barely see the slider tick. F
[Yuki YukI]
00:14:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a good spot for accelerated spacing considering it's a descending line in the music. :/ F
00:51:599 (2,3) - I'm not really feeling why these rhythms are here during such a soft and slow part. F
01:25:163 (4) - Not really expecting a 4-hit slider here. F
03:41:500 (1,2,3) - This plays really awkwardly. 4 hit, 3 hit, 4 hit just doesn't jive. Try something different, please. F
03:51:005 (1) - There's got to be a better place for this slider so that you don't need for force a new combo on it just so you can read it. F
[Taiko]
The first 1/3 of the map felt really.. sporadic. The rhythms used didn't really fit with the music much and felt kind of random and sometimes somewhat inappropriate intensity-wise. Please look through this a few times and give it a serious listen. Once it fits aurally, then see if it works play-wise as well.
03:42:688 - Add a note. End the spinner a little earlier.
I really recommend that you find some good taiko modders to look over this map.
Thanks a lot Garven