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_Kiva

Raging Bull wrote:

Ohh thanks. Although I don't know why Kiva didn't upload attachment o.o
oooooooooooops i forgetDownload: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (Snowy Dream) [Kiva].osu
Raging Bull
Okay lets try this again.

Light:
In the beginning, I think the slowdown is really drastic (.5x) I don't really like varying slider speeds on lower difficulty. But if you really want to, maybe you can use .75x instead?
00:23:090 Snap this kiai time D: Move it by +1 ms
00:42:100 (1) - Change these to .75x?
01:18:931 (4,5,6) - Perhaps you can unstack these? I think stacks are difficult for beginners because they can't tell when to hit it.
01:26:060 (3) - Space/unstack this?
02:08:535 (2,3) - Unstack?
02:45:664 (2) - Maybe a finish at slider start would be better? If so, remove this finish 02:44:476 (1) so there isn't a lot of finish in such a short time.
02:56:951 (5) - Combo seems long. Maybe NC here?
03:23:090 (1,2) - Unstack? I'm pretty sure beginners would read stacks as either 1/1 or 1/2 and they won't be able to tell the difference :v

Kiva:
00:22:496 (1) - It's probably just me, but I think removing finish and adding whistle sounds better.
00:33:783 (1) - Err spacing error?
00:38:535 (4) - Maybe you can move this out so the hitburst won't obstruct the AR?
01:10:021 (3,1) - Ahhhh this overlap! D: Move 1 somewhere else?
01:11:803 (1,3) - Switch NC
01:16:555 (4) - Hmm you still didn't space this one properly.
01:48:040 (1) - :o Spacing error?
01:51:011 (1) - ^
02:25:169 (7) - I'm....pretty sure this is borderline unrankable since the previous slider completely blocks this one but yet you can see it's a slider when you are about to click this. I would say move this a bit more or change slider.
03:30:219 (5) - Err spacing error. Spaced as 1/2 but it's 1/1
03:46:555 (4,5,6,1,2) - I think this combo could be confusing for a normal. Perhaps change it up a bit?
03:52:199 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - ._. The hitsound I suggested is wrong here :cry:
03:52:793 (3) - Remove finish add whistle.
03:53:387 (1) - Add finish
03:53:981 (3) - Remove finish add whistle
03:54:575 (1) - Add finish to slider start
03:55:169 (2) - Remove finish.
03:55:763 (1) - Add finish to slider start.
03:56:357 (2) - Remove finish add whistle.
03:59:328 (4) - Oh hey lol. You really did add a repeat.

Hazy:
00:03:931 (7) - I don't think you need triple here. Remove this note?
00:08:090 (5) - ^
00:12:248 (3) - ^
00:18:337 (3) - Perhaps something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/155758
[HitObjects]
140,156,18040,1,0
140,156,18189,1,0
139,156,18337,2,0,B|88:220|142:282,1,140,0|0
136,368,19228,2,0,B|212:368|228:284,1,105
256,192,19823,12,2,22496
256,192,23090,5,4
00:23:090 (1) - Why no kiai here? D: Since you mapped light and Hazy, you should add kiai fountain here for consistency.
Well nothing bothered me much except for your triples ._. I feel like you only added triples for artificial difficulty. Perhaps remove some triples?

Yuki:
00:17:743 (1,2,3) - Space this anti jump? I think it plays ugly right now since it's not exactly building up anything. (Unless you replace spinner with slider)
00:23:238 (2) - I think people might have trouble seeing this is a slider this 00:21:902 (1,2) hitburst blocks it. Perhaps move the entire stream lower?
01:17:743 (1) - This slider seems rather weird to me. Perhaps make a different shape?
03:28:436 (3,4) - I really don't think you need slowdown here. It also seems weird to me because you map with 1x before and 1x after this.
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
:) oh thanks a lot for having a look it again.
Fixed most.
AKB-KaSAi
nice ;)
_Kiva
Breeze

SB

  1. 其实完全可以不用black.jpg的, 把背景色设成黑色然后淡出背景图片后就是黑色了

Timing

  1. 我测的offset是-678 (-6), 差得不多, 这个offset我打着会更顺

Light

  1. 01:00:516 (4) - 我觉得slider在这儿结束更合适
  2. 01:20:120 (1) - finish代替whistle如何?

Kiva

  1. 00:35:559 (5) - 这个spacing略有些奇怪, 不过倒不是什么问题, 测试的时候打到这儿稍微迟疑了下
  2. 01:01:104 (1) - finish?
  3. 01:29:619 (1) - ^
  4. 01:36:747 (1,2) - (1)的3个点和(2)都加finish感觉会很不错
  5. 03:14:173 (4) - finish

Hazy

  1. 01:00:807 (1) - 其实感觉去掉这个note还更顺一点
  2. 01:17:143 (4) - 这个摆出来一点会好认得多, slider尾的stack感觉不是很容易判断1/2拍还是1/4拍

Yuki Yuki

  1. OD+1? 这个OD比Hazy还低
  2. 00:23:232 (2) - 这是个啥...有点莫名其妙啊...
  3. 02:26:648 (1) - 加finish?

有回复后找我吧
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
SPOILER

Breeze wrote:

SB

  1. 其实完全可以不用black.jpg的, 把背景色设成黑色然后淡出背景图片后就是黑色了

Timing

  1. 我测的offset是-678 (-6), 差得不多, 这个offset我打着会更顺

Light

  1. 01:00:516 (4) - 我觉得slider在这儿结束更合适
  2. 01:20:120 (1) - finish代替whistle如何?

Kiva

  1. 00:35:559 (5) - 这个spacing略有些奇怪, 不过倒不是什么问题, 测试的时候打到这儿稍微迟疑了下
  2. 01:01:104 (1) - finish?
  3. 01:29:619 (1) - ^
  4. 01:36:747 (1,2) - (1)的3个点和(2)都加finish感觉会很不错
  5. 03:14:173 (4) - finish

Hazy

  1. 01:00:807 (1) - 其实感觉去掉这个note还更顺一点
  2. 01:17:143 (4) - 这个摆出来一点会好认得多, slider尾的stack感觉不是很容易判断1/2拍还是1/4拍
    [attachment=0:971e4]0.jpg[/attachment:971e4]

Yuki Yuki

  1. OD+1? 这个OD比Hazy还低
  2. 00:23:232 (2) - 这是个啥...有点莫名其妙啊...
  3. 02:26:648 (1) - 加finish?

有回复后找我吧

>w< Thanks 微风菌~
都改了..尤其是蓝字(虽然我不知道那个怎么改好。。)
不知道怎么淡出BG T T
Breeze
OK, then. Delete some uesless SB elements that could be placed by same pic.
Now let's get this map bubbled
Raging Bull
Snowy, you're beautiful. Now get this thing ranked!
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Breeze wrote:

OK, then. Delete some uesless SB elements that could be placed by same pic.
Now let's get this map bubbled
> < thanks 微风菌~
(不知道要不要给kd 反正给了能取消>.>)

Raging Bull wrote:

Snowy, you're beautiful. Now get this thing ranked!
:D
Garven
Ah, it's been awhile since I've checked this map, haha.

[SB]
A lot of the text looks badly cropped with some more obvious than others.

A lot of the glow effect makes things look really chopped up too since they're all cut rather harshly.

[Light]
00:42:094 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy. It's best to leave a lot of time after a spinner for new players to realign.
01:24:866 (1,2,3) - Maybe tone this down a little. More of a Normal difficulty technique.
01:39:718 (1) - Soon after spinner
02:27:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - These hitsounds felt off compared to previous patterns

[Kiva]
00:55:757 (6,1) - Kind of a big jump for a Normal
01:07:044 (4,5) - Not a good place for a jump in this difficulty level.
01:24:272 (4,5) - These are positioned poorly visually and flow-wise.
02:07:341 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This rhythm really what you want here? It's... not really what I'd expect to play. The back and forth motion isn't much fun to do either considering the music...
I also suggest you give this difficulty a really good look through. Your hitsounding is very inconsistent which leads to a strange play experience.

[Hazy]
00:03:777 (6,7,8) - Whyyy rhythms like this during such a slow introductory part? Ruins the mood of the music. :<
00:57:985 (6,7) - Spacing
Sounds like you forgot to put in your soft whistles during the first kiai section
02:25:460 (1) - Please don't have similar looking sliders with different speeds on them like this. You can barely see the slider tick.

[Yuki YukI]
00:14:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a good spot for accelerated spacing considering it's a descending line in the music. :/
00:51:599 (2,3) - I'm not really feeling why these rhythms are here during such a soft and slow part.
01:25:163 (4) - Not really expecting a 4-hit slider here.
03:41:500 (1,2,3) - This plays really awkwardly. 4 hit, 3 hit, 4 hit just doesn't jive. Try something different, please.
03:51:005 (1) - There's got to be a better place for this slider so that you don't need for force a new combo on it just so you can read it.

[Taiko]
The first 1/3 of the map felt really.. sporadic. The rhythms used didn't really fit with the music much and felt kind of random and sometimes somewhat inappropriate intensity-wise. Please look through this a few times and give it a serious listen. Once it fits aurally, then see if it works play-wise as well.
03:42:688 - Add a note. End the spinner a little earlier.
I really recommend that you find some good taiko modders to look over this map.
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Garven wrote:

Ah, it's been awhile since I've checked this map, haha.

[SB]
A lot of the text looks badly cropped with some more obvious than others. Fixed all.

A lot of the glow effect makes things look really chopped up too since they're all cut rather harshly.

[Light]
00:42:094 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy. It's best to leave a lot of time after a spinner for new players to realign. F
01:24:866 (1,2,3) - Maybe tone this down a little. More of a Normal difficulty technique. F
01:39:718 (1) - Soon after spinner F
02:27:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - These hitsounds felt off compared to previous patterns F

[Kiva]
00:55:757 (6,1) - Kind of a big jump for a Normal F
01:07:044 (4,5) - Not a good place for a jump in this difficulty level. F
01:24:272 (4,5) - These are positioned poorly visually and flow-wise. F
02:07:341 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This rhythm really what you want here? It's... not really what I'd expect to play. The back and forth motion isn't much fun to do either considering the music... F
I also suggest you give this difficulty a really good look through. Your hitsounding is very inconsistent which leads to a strange play experience. Fixed a lot

[Hazy]
00:03:777 (6,7,8) - Whyyy rhythms like this during such a slow introductory part? Ruins the mood of the music. :< F
00:57:985 (6,7) - Spacing F
Sounds like you forgot to put in your soft whistles during the first kiai section
02:25:460 (1) - Please don't have similar looking sliders with different speeds on them like this. You can barely see the slider tick. F

[Yuki YukI]
00:14:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a good spot for accelerated spacing considering it's a descending line in the music. :/ F
00:51:599 (2,3) - I'm not really feeling why these rhythms are here during such a soft and slow part. F
01:25:163 (4) - Not really expecting a 4-hit slider here. F
03:41:500 (1,2,3) - This plays really awkwardly. 4 hit, 3 hit, 4 hit just doesn't jive. Try something different, please. F
03:51:005 (1) - There's got to be a better place for this slider so that you don't need for force a new combo on it just so you can read it. F

[Taiko]
The first 1/3 of the map felt really.. sporadic. The rhythms used didn't really fit with the music much and felt kind of random and sometimes somewhat inappropriate intensity-wise. Please look through this a few times and give it a serious listen. Once it fits aurally, then see if it works play-wise as well.
03:42:688 - Add a note. End the spinner a little earlier.
I really recommend that you find some good taiko modders to look over this map.
Time to sleep. I'll recheck tomorrow..
Thanks a lot Garven ;)
aabc271
Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by Snowy Dream

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Overall]

Maybe it's me, but I think offset -665 is better.

[SB]

24.png ( Lyric ) has no fade in when appearing at 03:32:440.

[S.Nagi's Taiko]

This is a slow, soft song. So it's better to have fewer long 1/4s, esp 01:03:480 ( 135 ~ 151 ) and 01:07:935 ( 158 ~ 174 )

03:23:084 ( 58 ~ 61 ) - Stacking of notes occur here, which causes confusion. You should add a BPM x0.8 for 58, 0.9 for 59, and 0.6 for 60.

03:23:975 ( 61 ~ 77 ) - Having many 1/4s with BPM x0.5 doesn't look good. Consider reducing them ?

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:04:222 ( 1 ) - Delete this note ?

00:14:470 ( 32 ~ 38 ) - ooo ooo o ?

00:18:034 ( 48 ) - Red note ?

00:22:490 ( 1 ~ 3 ) - o o O ?

01:38:529 ( 1 ~ 3) - ^

01:46:549 ( 33 ) - Blue note ?

02:39:421 ( 160 ~ 168 ) - Change to ooooo o o ?

02:45:361 ( 182 ~ 183 ) - o O ?

03:50:114 ( 24 ) - Blue note ?

03:52:193 ( 34 ) - ^

The map is OK overall ~

Consider using less dense patterns for soft songs next time :3

Rating : 7.5/10

Star and good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
SPOILER

aabc271 wrote:

Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by Snowy Dream

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Overall]

Maybe it's me, but I think offset -665 is better.

[SB]

24.png ( Lyric ) has no fade in when appearing at 03:32:440.

[S.Nagi's Taiko]

This is a slow, soft song. So it's better to have fewer long 1/4s, esp 01:03:480 ( 135 ~ 151 ) and 01:07:935 ( 158 ~ 174 )

03:23:084 ( 58 ~ 61 ) - Stacking of notes occur here, which causes confusion. You should add a BPM x0.8 for 58, 0.9 for 59, and 0.6 for 60.

03:23:975 ( 61 ~ 77 ) - Having many 1/4s with BPM x0.5 doesn't look good. Consider reducing them ?

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:04:222 ( 1 ) - Delete this note ?

00:14:470 ( 32 ~ 38 ) - ooo ooo o ?

00:18:034 ( 48 ) - Red note ?

00:22:490 ( 1 ~ 3 ) - o o O ?

01:38:529 ( 1 ~ 3) - ^

01:46:549 ( 33 ) - Blue note ?

02:39:421 ( 160 ~ 168 ) - Change to ooooo o o ?

02:45:361 ( 182 ~ 183 ) - o O ?

03:50:114 ( 24 ) - Blue note ?

03:52:193 ( 34 ) - ^

The map is OK overall ~

Consider using less dense patterns for soft songs next time :3

Rating : 7.5/10

Star and good luck ~ ;)
;) thx for taiko modding.
Fixed almost all.
Garven
[SB]
02:07:341 - yume isn't appearing here

[Kiva]
02:10:015 (1,2) - Spacing

[Hazy]
02:25:460 (3) - I think something like this would work better for readability.


[Taiko]
03:37:787 (112,113) - Don't have a finish so close to a normal note please
Seemed a little quiet during the louder parts of the song.
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Garven wrote:

[SB]
02:07:341 - yume isn't appearing here

[Kiva]
02:10:015 (1,2) - Spacing

[Hazy]
02:25:460 (3) - I think something like this would work better for readability.


[Taiko]
03:37:787 (112,113) - Don't have a finish so close to a normal note please
Seemed a little quiet during the louder parts of the song.
;) All fixed. Thanks for your mod, Garven
Garven
Rebub~
_Kiva
looks all gud , nuked
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Garven wrote:

Rebub~
:D Thanks for your advice, Garven.
It must be useful.
Sun Rainbow
This Bestmap is OK.
Give your Heart~
Go to Ranked~
Moriya Suwako
Good Beatmap .w.
Breeze
Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

SB

  1. 03:42:688 - Scale out effect here mismatched BG, I fixed this for you
    ATTACH[Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (Snowy Dream).osb]

Light

  1. 00:05:856 (1) - Try this, it has a better shape with 00:07:638 (2)
    396,196,5856,6,0,B|344:240|424:312|352:368,1,179.999994635582
  2. 03:21:302 (x) - Extend break to here?

Kiva

  1. 02:22:193 (1) - I'd suggest you don't use jump here, this might be confusing to noob

Taiko

  1. Maybe remove SB if taiko diff. and add a taiko BG? Since SB looked kinda awkward in taiko mode
    If you want, here's the taiko BG, but if you do so, remember to move SB code into other diff.'s osu file, then delete osb file

Nothing much touched the mapset itself, just some SB suggestions and tiny design prettify
I guess I can extend ranking this map after you done this

Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (Snowy Dream).osb
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
SPOILER

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

SB

  1. 03:42:688 - Scroll out effect here mismatched BG, I fixed this for you
    [attachment=1:5af20]Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (Snowy Dream).osb[/attachment:5af20]

Light

  1. 00:05:856 (1) - Try this, it has a better shape with 00:07:638 (2)
    396,196,5856,6,0,B|344:240|424:312|352:368,1,179.999994635582
  2. 03:21:302 (x) - Extend break to here?

Kiva

  1. 02:22:193 (1) - I'd suggest you don't use jump here, this might be confusing to noob

Taiko

  1. Maybe remove SB if taiko diff. and add a taiko BG? Since SB looked kinda awkward in taiko mode
    If you want, here's the taiko BG, but if you do so, remember to move SB code into other diff.'s osu file, then delete osb file
    [spoilerbox][attachment=0:5af20]Taiko.jpg[/attachment:5af20]

Nothing much touched the mapset itself, just some SB suggestions and tiny design prettify
I guess I can extend ranking this map after you done thisww 看到泡被戳了感觉很好 (终于有BAT来看图了啊> <)
Thanks so much! 微风菌, accept all of above.
Breeze
Nice
RANKED
_Kiva
hao
fanzhen0019
congratz!
Nymph
this is not science
Kawayi Rika
congratz ~ ;)
Breeze
Sorry, map will be taken down a while to fix a SB bug
Will be back soon, please wait a sec to play this map
Breeze
Should be fine now
Enjoy
wule
哇血梦RANK了恭喜
KayeSara
真心祝福,一年了 终于rank
Dino99
Congratz!
Yumeko Yuki
congratz....
一年了啊....o.0
sospk0011
I got S and score is Eight digit of number in 'Hazy'!
Sun Rainbow
ganbatte~I am your fans desu~
Otosaka-Yu
Moon
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