00:34:915 (2,3,4,5) - Mixing visually identical 1/2 and 1/4 stacks this close together feels too confusing at this bpm, would strongly recommend unstacking 00:34:915 (2,3) or removing 00:35:309 (4) instead
01:42:967 (1,1,2,1) - Spacing here feels really anti-climatic given how easy it is compared to parts right before it like 01:40:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6), maybe increase spacing here and unstack 01:43:283 (1,2) to add a bit more emphasis in comparison
00:40:599 (4,1) - This snap is quite a bit more intense than the rest, if the emphasis isn't intentional maybe space this more similarly to 00:39:178 (5,6) or 00:35:388 (6,7)
00:24:020 (3) - To be a bit more consistent with rhythm choice + emphasis you might remove this repeat and add a stacked circle on 00:24:494 (5) at 00:24:336. It'd follow your active rhythms at 00:26:546 (3,4) more closely, but probably fine as is if you prefer the variety :p
01:23:862 (6) - Super small thing, but maybe ctrl+g this slider so that it's movement follows 01:23:546 (3,4) instead of going opposite it. I imagine most players at this skill level will just pause on it/move straight up but it'll keep flow this way throughout the pattern for those who might not
Made a few adjustments, drum normal should be much more consistent now. Let me know if i misunderstood or missed something, thank you for your patience with me 🙏
Removed @ 00:35:909 (1) - 00:38:383 (1) - 01:29:414 (2) - , added @ 00:04:671 (3,4) - 00:06:682 (1) - 00:17:197 (4) - 00:19:517 (3) - 02:07:919 (4) -