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00:04:757 (3) - Minor, but ctrl g'ing it and keeping up with the circular flow would prob be more consistent within this section.
Look at 00:08:862 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 00:13:599 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - as examples of circular flows used in this section.

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you're right!

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00:22:757 (1,1,1,1) - ehhh i don't know, it doesn't feel correct to have these overlapped and without any movement when the music isn't quiet. you could try decreasing the pacing for each individual circle, but to a different extent to the one you currently have, it doesn't match the rest of the mapset either

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I want to do something different for the transition, for example the square jumps on the top diff, and this pattern was the idea for this diff, although i get your point, will leave this for more opinions but i kinda want to keep it more than making some other patterns :c

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00:24:020 (3) - To be a bit more consistent with rhythm choice + emphasis you might remove this repeat and add a stacked circle on 00:24:494 (5) at 00:24:336. It'd follow your active rhythms at 00:26:546 (3,4) more closely, but probably fine as is if you prefer the variety :p

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00:40:599 (4,1) - This snap is quite a bit more intense than the rest, if the emphasis isn't intentional maybe space this more similarly to 00:39:178 (5,6) or 00:35:388 (6,7)

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00:45:336 Having this gap feels a bit off because it is the only gap within this section and there's a continuous 1/2 guitar strumming in the background.

Could probably use a 1/2 or a 3/4 slider here 00:45:178 (2) - Like you did sometimes like 00:44:546 (5) - 00:48:967 (2) -

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00:55:125 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing here is quite substantial considering that we're in the middle of a build up.
Would probably switch positions between 00:55:441 (3,4,5) - and 00:55:915 (7) - in order to reduce it.

Take note that the spacing here is similar to 00:57:967 (5,1) - which is the end of the build up and a stronger sound.

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01:03:020 (5,6) - Could space this a bit more. It is probably the most important sound in this whole build-up and currently it is a bit underwhelming.

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i get your point although the snappy movement is okay enough i think, but mostly because i want to keep the banger symmetrical pattern :D lol if this doesn't make sense enough feel free to reopen

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01:33:020 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Rhythm choice here is somewhat confusing and may not represent the drums very well.

There's stronger sounds on the white ticks 01:33:177 (4) - 01:33:494 and 01:33:809 but none of them are being emphasized at the moment cuz some are just reverses.

Could change the rhythm a bit to something like for example, so you'll have a clickable on all of them.

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01:42:967 (1,1,2,1) - Spacing here feels really anti-climatic given how easy it is compared to parts right before it like 01:40:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6), maybe increase spacing here and unstack 01:43:283 (1,2) to add a bit more emphasis in comparison

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