00:08:535 (2,3,4) - i think that this spacing is too big for this part

00:13:886 (5,6) - lessen spacing a bit

00:17:291 (3,4) - increase spacing

00:18:102 (1,2,3) - space these out more to emphasize louder vocals, maybe even something like this:

00:20:048 (3) - maybe replace with a slider that moves to the left and move it to the left side of the jump to better complement 00:19:075 (1,2,3)

00:22:156 (1,1,1,1) - it might be better to follow the vocals or if u are following that synth thing then just put sliders as long as 00:22:156 (1) every big white tick

00:29:616 (5,6) - either stack or space out cause it can be misread

01:34:967 (2,3) -

00:34:156 (3) - consider moving this to the right around x:180 y:58

00:40:156 (1) - lacks emphasis

00:40:643 (2) - i dont think that needs as much emphasis as it has now as there is no vocals, consider lessening the spacing

00:50:210 (5,6,7,8,1) - i don't see the reason why this has to be decelerating

I think that its better if there was more contrast between 00:55:724-01:00:751 and 01:00:913-01:16:805 because the first part has a scream while the second doesn't (and I assume this was your intention since the kiais and hitsounding support it).

Same with 02:31:724-02:36:832 and 02:36:913-02:52:318.

You could do this by making spacing bigger on the first part compared to the second or make rhythm denser on the first part compared to the second.

01:34:805 (1) - lower a bit for better flow

01:42:427 (1) - consider making into a longer slider until the other blue tick

01:47:616 (1) -

01:47:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - for a quiet part, i dont think this much spacing is needed

01:53:129 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -

02:10:643 (1,2) - space out more

02:12:913 (4) - sliderend is on white tick (kinda weird)

02:19:886 (6) - space out more

02:24:589 (1,2) - maybe lessen the angle a bit cause its kinda uncomfy maybe something like this:

01:05:454 (4,5,6,7,8) - with how this is patterned, 01:05:454 (4,5,6) feels like it is the same as 01:05:778 (7,8) which have snares but the it does not so its better to differentiate 01:05:454 (4,5,6).

02:41:454 (3,4,5,6,7) -

01:15:913 (4,5,6,7) -

02:51:589 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this one has even more lol (pls differentiate the snare)

02:46:967 (5,6,7) - this burst should be here 02:47:129 (you missed the snares)

02:47:697 (2) - unnecessary

Overall, i think that your rhythm is inconsistent in some parts. For example, in 00:35:129-00:39:994 (6) you put in a lot of bursts following the hi-hat at times, but later on in the chorus you stopped doing it although it is the same part.

It's the same comparing 00:55:724 (1)-01:16:481 (1) with 02:31:724 (1)-02:52:481 (1) where in the first part had bursts following the hihats, but the second didn't.

00:11:778 - maybe slider multiplier increase here?

00:20:859 (1) - nc

00:22:156 (1) - nc

00:25:075 (3,4) - space out a bit maybe?

00:16:805 (1) - space out for emphasis maybe?

00:33:832 (1,2,1,2) - space out more

00:37:237 (4) - triple here maybe?

01:40:481 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i don't see the reason why these are bursts now, if you want to put bursts be more consistent with it ig

01:43:886 (12) - reverse slider here maybe (cause downbeat) and maybe nc as well

01:37:237-01:58:156 - decide whether or not you are going to do streams or bursts cause the beginning is mapped as streams and afterwards are all bursts

02:23:940 (1,2,3) - i don't see the reason why intensity was lowered here

I think that your burst spacing is very random. I thought that it was based on intensity, but as there are a lot of inconsistencies, I do not think it is the case. So yeah, I think that you should base your burst spacings on a consistent idea throughout the map.

It wasn't just the triples or 5-note bursts but also the overlapping 1/2s (time sig not jumps)

Spacing is also very inconsistent for example in 00:48:102 (1,2,3), and it is especially noticeable in the final chorus wherein the scream 02:11:129-02:16:075 has small spacing compared to the arguably more chill part 02:16:156-02:21:264 has big spacing. So overall, I think you should be mindful of intensity and such in the map.

I also wanted to mention 02:22:481 (1,2) as well as this is the loudest scream in the map yet it has boring spacing.

Rhythm might also be kinda weird. For example you randomly switched rhythms from 00:56:048 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) to 00:58:156 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) even though there is nothing that supports it.

02:11:454 (3,4,1,2,3,4) is also another one as it seems to follow the synths, but you proceed to not follow it after.

00:01:400-00:11:778 - lessen spacing cause intro

00:29:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe have a progression with the streams and refrain from having circular flow

00:36:913 (4) - white tick is on sliderend

02:29:454 (2) -

00:42:589 (6) - maybe do this:

00:44:859 (3,4,5) - consider making these a burst instead cause u did the same thing for other similar parts

00:47:129 (3,4) - stack

01:27:994 (4) -

01:39:345 (1,2,3,4,5) - lessen spacing a bit maybe

01:49:399 (3,4) - continue the burst patterns u were doing maybe

01:54:913 (4,5,6) -

01:51:832 (5,6,7,8,9) - emphasize vocals maybe

01:57:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe start the stream either 01:57:507 (3) or 01:57:669 (5)

01:57:994 (1) - having a long slider here is kinda weird, maybe replace with something like:

02:04:805 (2,3,4) - doesnt need to be spaced

02:09:183 (4,5,6) - maybe change to this to make it similar to the previous pattern:

02:10:318 (3) - would emphasize more

02:16:643 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - kinda weird how the flow is linear for both patterns

02:24:427 (2) - kinda unnecessary slider

02:29:129 (1) - more emphasis

02:30:427 (1) - same but also try not to make the flow flat (kinda weird imo)

02:30:913 (2,3,4) - space out more and emphasize (4) more cause loud vocal

02:34:318 (1) - out of place

Overall, throughout the map there are a lot of stuff with weird flow such as 00:29:940-00:34:156 which has circular flow or 02:09:508 (5,6,1) which has linear flow that make the patterns feel weaker. I think that your flow in the top diff was better, so you could look at that.

00:10:971 - I don't think that this should be muted cause there is a note

00:12:857 (5) - Putting a slider here in the red tick feels weak. I suggest that you move it to the white tick before it and put a circle on its previous place.

00:13:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think that this is too active for a slow section and for a part without vocals as well. I suggest doing something like this to differentiate it from the parts with vocals (contrast)

00:18:685 (6) - This, like the others, is also kind of weird as the sliderend is on the white tick. I suggest doing something like this:

00:16:114 (6) - The sliderend is on the downbeat (which is weird). I suggest doing something like this (although you can do whatever as long as the issue is resolved prob)

00:20:571 (5) - lacks emphasis, could flip 90 degrees to the left or something similar that makes it so it doesn't go in the same direction as 00:20:228 (4).

00:23:314 (1,2,3) - Instead of the downbeat being emphasized, the 3rd note is being emphasized. It would be better to just remove 2 or something like this:

00:27:428 (2) - rotate like around 10 degrees to make flow better

00:30:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - kinda weird rhythm, probably grouping the objects into a 1, 2, 3 type pattern would be nice (stuff like triangles)

00:34:885 (2) - the note is on the white tick not the blue one

00:59:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - lacks that power for being the last pattern of the map. could make into a whole burst or this

Chorus has wayyy too big spacing compared to the rest of the map. I suggest toning it down a bit.

Same goes for the triangle jumps. They are wayyy too spaced, and the last 2 triangles usually have the same-ish spacing, breaking the concept of a progression. I suggest that you lessen the gap in spacing per triangle (some of them have a huge jump in spacing).

00:36:342 (5,6,7) - just a suggestion but something like this would be better maybe (kept the big jumps cause of louder vocals, lessened 5, 6, 7 spacing to differentiate drums, and bigger 7 spacing for emphasis)