00:18:102 (1,2,3) - space these out more to emphasize louder vocals, maybe even something like this:
00:20:048 (3) - maybe replace with a slider that moves to the left and move it to the left side of the jump to better complement 00:19:075 (1,2,3)
00:22:156 (1,1,1,1) - it might be better to follow the vocals or if u are following that synth thing then just put sliders as long as 00:22:156 (1) every big white tick
00:40:643 (2) - i dont think that needs as much emphasis as it has now as there is no vocals, consider lessening the spacing
01:05:454 (4,5,6,7,8) - with how this is patterned, 01:05:454 (4,5,6) feels like it is the same as 01:05:778 (7,8) which have snares but the it does not so its better to differentiate 01:05:454 (4,5,6).
02:51:589 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this one has even more lol (pls differentiate the snare)
01:42:427 (1) - consider making into a longer slider until the other blue tick
01:47:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - for a quiet part, i dont think this much spacing is needed
02:24:589 (1,2) - maybe lessen the angle a bit cause its kinda uncomfy maybe something like this: