00:12:857 (5) - Putting a slider here in the red tick feels weak. I suggest that you move it to the white tick before it and put a circle on its previous place.
00:13:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think that this is too active for a slow section and for a part without vocals as well. I suggest doing something like this to differentiate it from the parts with vocals (contrast)
00:16:114 (6) - The sliderend is on the downbeat (which is weird). I suggest doing something like this (although you can do whatever as long as the issue is resolved prob)
00:18:685 (6) - This, like the others, is also kind of weird as the sliderend is on the white tick. I suggest doing something like this:
00:20:571 (5) - lacks emphasis, could flip 90 degrees to the left or something similar that makes it so it doesn't go in the same direction as 00:20:228 (4).
00:23:314 (1,2,3) - Instead of the downbeat being emphasized, the 3rd note is being emphasized. It would be better to just remove 2 or something like this:
00:30:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - kinda weird rhythm, probably grouping the objects into a 1, 2, 3 type pattern would be nice (stuff like triangles)
00:36:342 (5,6,7) - just a suggestion but something like this would be better maybe (kept the big jumps cause of louder vocals, lessened 5, 6, 7 spacing to differentiate drums, and bigger 7 spacing for emphasis)
00:59:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - lacks that power for being the last pattern of the map. could make into a whole burst or this