Lost Requiem

01:26:325 (86325|3,86325|2) - no sound here like at 01:22:725 (82725|1,82725|0) - you could just remove or i think itd look nicer if you made 01:26:250 (86250|1,86250|0) - into a [14] chord and make them ln for the increasing suspense here

01:30:075 (90075|1) this is no sound here should remove that

01:32:250 (92250|2) move this by 1/4 to blue line there sound is on blue tick

01:41:325 vs 01:41:925 where double?

01:41:475 (101475|2) there no difference between rice and LN in this 1/8 length

01:41:775 (101775|3,101793|2,101925|3,101943|2,102975|2,102993|3,103125|2,103143|3,104175|2,104193|3,104325|2,104343|3) - same pattern 3 times in a row? mirror one of these so it doesn't feel repetitive.

01:46:575 (106575|0,106593|1,106725|0,106743|1) - etc

01:43:550 (103550|2,103650|2,103725|2,103837|2) - very uncomfortable to hit. sacrifice 01:43:762 (103762|0) - and move 01:43:725 (103725|2) - to col 1

01:44:475 (104475|1,104475|3) - why is the impact here and not on the kick? move a note down

01:45:000 (105000|0) - double???

01:57:900 (117900|0,117950|1,118050|1,118125|0,118200|1,118237|0,118312|1,118350|0) - too much load on the left hand

02:03:600 vs 02:13:200 LN?

02:07:200 - 02:09:600 this section felt way too empty than what the song's section is trying to cover
perhaps buffing this into a more rice-oriented structure may enmend it (representing the lack of the "violin" melody)

maybe working it out like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19517574/9110
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19517576/bc68

02:16:800 - 02:18:000 very similar to previous time stamp 02:07:200 but felt very repetitive from the last section, would be great to diversify it with other patterns that follow this structure

02:18:300 - how about make these quad gracely like this?

i feel that quads little bit bored? normal? anyways

02:24:225 there is a sound

02:34:250 to 02:34:612 what is this for?

02:36:000 (156000|0,156225|0) - vs 02:36:225 (156225|3,156600|3,156825|3) - the stacking distribution felt a bit uncomfortable (through gameplay) i'd suggest to mirror 02:36:975 (156975|2,157050|3)

02:37:225 (157225|0) should extended to 02:37:500

02:48:000 is this intend?

03:18:088 (198088|0,198182|1,198182|0,198275|1,198369|0,198463|1,198463|0,198650|1,198650|0,198744|0,198838|1,198838|0,199025|1,199025|0,199119|1,199213|1,199213|0,199307|0) - the balance...

03:28:307 - i wonder why not using ln to show the violin,Just curious

04:06:954 - why disrupt the flow with a triple

04:18:292 (258292|2,258380|2,258483|2,258571|2) - take pressure off

04:36:071 (276071|3,276071|0,276115|1,276159|2,276204|0,276248|2,276292|1,276336|0) i guess this is representing the same sound as 04:36:071 (276071|3,276071|0,276115|1,276159|2,276204|0,276248|2,276292|1,276336|0) - or 04:32:542 (272542|3,272601|2,272659|1,272718|0,272777|3,272836|1,272895|2,272954|3) - but in the first timestamp it clearly doesn't show up

just rice-up this section to enmend the hand balance

04:48:418 (288418|3,288525|2,288534|3,288643|2,288653|3,288777|2,288777|3,288865|2,288954|3,289012|2,289071|3) - and 04:59:895 (299895|2,299917|3,300071|2,300150|3,300189|2,300336|2,300358|3,300424|2,300525|3,300645|2,300667|3,300777|3,300777|2,300895|2,300931|3,301020|3,301042|2) - felt too right hand biased, i'd recommend to give the left hand (column 1 and 2) some protagonism too)
(i just found out this is a mirrored structure already, still i think the density intercalation between both pair of columns can improve imo)

05:12:726 (312726|0,312801|0) - too tight

05:13:601 i dont see a reason why this couldn't be a triple/quad

06:44:188 (404188|2,404206|3,404263|2,404288|0,404288|3,404338|1,404388|2,404438|3,404488|1,404506|0,404563|1,404588|3,404588|0,404638|2,404688|1,404738|0,404788|3,404825|2,404863|1,404900|0,404938|2,404975|3,405013|0,405050|1,405088|3,405125|2,405163|1,405200|0,405238|2,405275|3,405313|0,405350|1) - i feel like the progression can be slower as this felt very sudden by just appearing after a less dense hybrid patterning
06:44:188 (404188|2,404206|3,404263|2,404288|3,404288|0,404338|1,404388|2,404438|3,404488|1,404506|0,404563|1,404588|0,404588|3,404638|2,404688|1,404738|0)

06:49:483 (409483|2,409578|2,409626|1,409721|1) - ?

07:04:530 (424530|2,424530|1,424530|3,424673|2,424697|1,424721|0) - reaally subjective but this part could potentially turn into a transition from long note/hybrid-ish to fully rice in a way that the notes represent descendent long notes in terms of length

07:23:102 - feels goofy to go full ln after rice, introduce some lns overtime in the other part so it doesnt hit like a bomb

08:06:122 - 08:07:949 felt veeery empty compared to the following sections; i get that only the percussion is playing but it really decreased it's density a lot - i'd suggest to play with some dump patterning in here or add more graces to intensify a bit more this section

like for example here 08:07:166 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19517628/f382

08:15:959 (495959|0,496000|2,496042|0,496084|3,496125|1,496167|3) - i think you can do a similar burst like done in an already ranked map (if this is controversial then it would be better to just take it as a reference) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19517631/2b3e