-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~ kak ~

[General]
nggk ada masalah ~

[Easy]
00:00:733 (1) - finish < oiya, lupa xD
00:11:896 (1) - ^
00:17:477 (1) - ^
00:35:442 (2,1) - coba circle ke 3 di geser kebawah biar enak dilihat ~ *bagiku ini hampir overlap :3
01:06:314 (2,3) - overlap yg buruk < ? maksudnya ini yak 01:05:268 (2,1) - Udh sempet nyadar sih, tpi males ngerubah xD okelah
01:16:779 - ini green timing buat apa? *dengan yg selanjutnya < buat Insane :v deleted
02:29:686 (3,1) - coba di satukan jadi 1 slider (walaupun ritmenya jadi agak berbeda tapi ini membuatnya lebih mudah) < gabisa gitu, soalnya suara yang gedenya ada di red tick, jadi kalo slidernya di mulai di white tick, suara yg gedenya malah ke ignore, kalo circlenya diilangin jadi polarity issue :/ sekali kali gapapa lah :v
02:57:070 (1) - saya rasa 1/2 repeat slider bukan hal yg bagus ~ coba pakai cara lain < cara lainnya gimana yak? ada usulan? kalo pake slider biasa ntar polarity lagi :/ tapi gapapa kali yak? .-.
02:59:338 (3) - finish
04:06:314 (1) - ^ < diff lain ga pake finish dan kayaknya lagunya juga ga terlalu support finish jadi ngga dulu yaa~

[Normal]
00:00:733 (1) - finish
00:17:477 (1) - ^
00:21:489 (4) - coba di jadikan 1 circle aja di red tick (menurutku ini lebih baik) atau nggk 2 circle < bunyi di white tick ga bagus kalo di ignore, dan aku menghindari pake 2 circle berturut-turut buat normal.
00:34:047 (5) - tambah circle atau repeat slider disini < disini 00:34:047 ya maksudnya? :v oke, circle then
00:47:826 (6,2) - overlap < itu ngga bakalan keliatan di gameplay soalnya (6) udh ilang duluan sebelom (2) muncul, coba liat deh pake view -> hit animations, no change
00:50:093 (5) - hapus circle < gapapalah, buat nyusah2in :v Normalnya agak terbelakang soalnya, trus suara drum disitu juga lumayan bwt di map
01:00:384 (4) - saya rasa disini harus clickable ~ coba rhythm ini [url]prntscr.com/bjtrja[/url] atau 1/2 repeat slider < oke, tpi diganti dikit, jadinya slider duluan baru circle
01:07:710 (1) - finish
01:16:779 - sama dengan easy
01:17:477 - lebih baik nggk perlu tambah hijau-hijau aapalah gitu intinya memotong durasi break < hijau hijau xD green timing point say :v trus tenang aja, green timing point ngga motong durasi break kok :3
01:51:140 - nih buat apaan?
01:52:361 (1) - finish
02:23:931 (3,4) - coba rhythm ini http://prntscr.com/bjttaj *prefer ke vocal < hmm, bunyi di big white tick agak gede tuh, sayang kalo ga di map.... kalo aku lebih suka ngemap drum sama perkusi sih buat Normal sama Easy...
03:27:244 (1) - finish < memang sudah ngga pake finish dari Insanenya :v *hitsound ngikutin insane wkwkkw* jadi ngga deh, sama bwt bawah vvv
03:28:640 (5) - ^
03:30:035 (1) - ^
03:48:698 - buat apaan nih green timing? kayak nggk ada apa2 disini -_- (green timing ke 1 sampai ke 5)
03:53:058 (2) - increase curve < looks good enough for me~
04:00:558 (7,2) - overlap < itu overlapnya cuman sebentar, ga bakal terlalu keliatan di gameplay, terus keanya gaada posisi yang lebih bagus buat mindahinnya tanpa ngerusak flow >~< jadi gitu dulu aja
04:25:675 - nih buat apaan?

[Hard]
00:04:047 (2,4) - stacked < unstacked on purpose tho
00:17:477 (1) - finish
00:24:279 (6) - NC? < naah, keanya ga perlu deh
00:25:849 (1,4) - stacked? < sengaja ngga di stack
00:34:221 (1) - coba di increase curvenya biar nggk terlalu rapat dengan slider (9) < nyoba blanket sih, agak susah ;-; tried
01:16:779 - ....
01:26:198 (4,5,6) - patternnya kayak kurang rapi < ada usulan? itu emg sengaja bukan pattern blanket sih....
01:30:035 (1) - finish < ngikutin Insane
01:46:779 (1) - ^
01:50:791 (6) - coba cari tempat lain karena disitu kayak kurang enak ~ < ada usulan? maunya sih sebenernya di taro di tempat sekitar tailnya (2) tapi aku ngga suka pattern kotak .-. diubah sedikit sih
01:51:140 - .... hapus
02:03:524 (1) - finish
03:20:268 (6,7) - hampir overlap ~ coba di jauhkan dikit
03:27:244 (1) - finish < kayaknya ga perlu finish deh buat bagian ini, sama vvv
03:28:640 (6) - ^
03:30:035 (1) - ^
03:30:035 (1) - ^
03:31:431 (6) - ^
03:32:826 (1) - ^ < fix
03:43:291 - ngapain di kasih potong break? < potong break? itu otomatis kayak gitu, kalo lagi gameplay kan breaknya juga abis sebelom note pertama, terus ada muncul panah2 gitu di pinggir buat nunjukkin kalo udh mw mulai lagi. Itu dari osunya kayak gitu, bukan manual.
03:56:547 (3) - finish < kayaknya gaada yang indicate finish deh... ngga dulu ya
04:01:605 (4,6) - overlap < sengaja...
04:03:524 (1) - finish
04:06:314 (1) - ^ < ngikutin insane :v
04:09:105 (1,3) - overlap < on purpose~
04:16:082 (5,7) - imperfect stack < nah kayak gini nih nazi mod :v cuman beda beberapa pixel doang imperfect stacknya xD fixed
04:25:675 (1) - remove NC < gapapa sih, buat bedain sama bagian sebelumnya...

[Reunion of goodbye] wattt....?
00:17:477 (1) - finish < udah finish kok .-.
00:27:768 (9) - NC (combonya terlalu banyak ) < comment about NC-ing below vvv
00:32:651 (6) - ^
00:42:244 (11) - NC disini hapus yg selanjutnya < hah? .-. big white tick sama big soundnya disini kok 00:42:593 (1) -
01:13:291 (1) - finish < ngga cocok bwt finish deh...
01:30:035 (1) - ^ < fix
03:26:896 (14,3) - overlap < wkwkwkk gapapa lah :v cuman sebentar kok, ga terlalu keliatan.
03:28:640 (1) - finish < no finish for this part~
03:30:035 (1) - ^
03:31:431 (1) - ^
04:06:314 (1) - ^ < emg maksudnya ga finish sih :/
04:32:651 (1) - ^ < fix

ehhh untuk diff ini saya rasa banyak sekali combo,sampai2 ada yang 15 combo coba di atur NCnya lagi sehingga combonya berkurang ~ minimal yahh 10 atau 11 lah hehe ~ < kalo aku sih ga terlalu masalah yang penting ngga diatas 20 :v cukup normal kok kalo sampe 15 doang soalnya aku nge NC nya setiap 2 big white tick soalnya suara di situ lebih gede daripada setiap big white tick ^^ kalo sampe 18 lebih sih iya harus dipendekkin, tpi klo 15 masih bisa ditoleransi lah :v

GL ~ kak maaf nggk bisa mod nazi nazian karena saya nggk bisa mod kayak gituan ;w; ~ < justru bagus ngga mod nazi xD mod nazi kadang2 nyebelin :v

paydayzcool wrote:

Hi there hanyuu_nanodesu,

This is a modding post.

Easy

Wow, I can't see any errors here

Normal

01:21:489 - Add a circle here. < for vocal eh? good point, but I mainly follow drums here and I want to make a little break because the previous rhythm is fully mapped on 1/2 >~< no change for now~

Hard

00:01:954 - Either put a circle here or move 00:02:128 (5) further away. < right... moved (4)***
01:30:558 - Add a circle here. < I can't see a reason to :/ I try to make Hard a little easier btw so I don't think adding a note is a good option >.<
01:37:535 (5) - This circle should look like it was n the middle of 01:37:710 (6) and 01:38:058 (7). < hmm... wasn't really meant to be like that tho... I think with (7) blanketing it would looks good enough~
02:12:419 (2) - Slight but noticeable blanket error with 02:12:593 (3). < ha, right

Very well mapped. I can't see any more problems XD.

Thanks,

paydayz

Chocox wrote:

As your request , m4m return~

First thing I noticed , nice bg :> <

[box=mod]

Easy

1. I don't like the rhythm in this difficulty, it feels like a normal difficulty map. It doesn't seem 'easy' enough , but judging from the star difficulty I assume it is fine. < The way I tried to avoid 1/2 rhythm as much as I can and the way I use a lot of long 3/1 until reverse 4/1 slider make me think it's easy enough... But because of the pretty high BPM, it's indeed pretty hard to make a proper Easy tho ;-;
2. 00:39:454 (5) - DS issue brought up by ai-mod. < I can't see it from here .-. fixed I guess...
3. For normal-hitclap2 , it's better and easier to switch it drum-hitclap so you can play around with the additions at the side and don't waste any time with those green lines. But it's done , let's just leave it there. < ha :v
4. 01:28:465 (2,1) - These 2 finish sounds the same , suggest make 01:30:035 (1) - normal-hitclap2. < actually they sound pretty different, the normal2 is sounded more light than normal1 so I use it for light finish like 01:28:465 (2) - 00:24:279 (2) - and many others, while the finish at big white tick like 01:30:035 (1) - sound bigger and heavier so I use normal1, same below vvv
5. 01:35:617 (1) - ^
6. 01:38:407 (1) - ^
7. 01:41:198 (4) - ^
8. 01:52:361 (1,1) - They are distinctly different , 01:52:361 (1) - has a dominant 'finish' sound , suggest same as above. < I would like to clear this... normal1 is more dominant than normal2 so I prefer normal1 here
9. 02:03:524 (1) - ^
10. 02:11:198 - Perhaps you are missing your slidertick whistle sound here. < I don't really put whistle on Easy and Normal tho, since that might cause everything got hitsounded xD so I decided to add whistle on certain part only. This part is not included so might as well ignore it~
11. 02:25:849 (1) - normal-hitclap2. < same above ^, same below too I guess
12. 02:29:338 (2,3,1) - Confusing rhythm for new players , can these just be one slider 02:29:338 (2,3) . < sacrificing variation ;-; but okay then
13. 02:31:431 (1) - normal-hitclap2.
14. 02:31:431 (1) - ^
15. 02:34:221 (4) - Inconsistent in NC, I suggest to NC this. And the pattern is design in such a way it blankets 02:33:872 (3) and 02:32:826 (2) differently (Gap between 02:33:872 (3,4) - is larger than gap between 02:32:826 (2,4) . , and it seems really weird. < NC-ed and I try to blanket (2) and (4) so I have reason to have different gap :v http://puu.sh/pE5j3/c586c0f8ab.jpg
16. 02:36:663 - If you're focusing so strongly on the vocals in this difficulty , I don't see why you don't add a circle here. I know you added here 01:18:524 (1) - because there is a dominant drum sound , but the vocal there is strong too. < focusing on drum here, not vocal
17. 02:42:593 (1) - - Right now I'm thinking , I think it undoubtedly be better if you switch normal-hitclap2 to normal-hitclap , it sounds better overall. < Oh I think you're talking about that normal hitclap :v I get it now xD explanation below v
18. 03:18:524 (5) - Distance spacing is off , unnoticed by aimod.< fix
19. 03:37:012 - The timing points here are increasing so slowly to the point that it can be neglected. < right, it was for Insane afterall, I guess I'll just delete it here
20. 04:23:058 (1) - I doubt this is allowed here. The last time I recalled music start's mapset was taken out of qualified section because of a similar slider in easy difficulties. Reason being is will definitely mislead the players. Can be easily replaced with a slider. < ;-; so sad ;-; gotta keep it for now, gonna change if some other modders mention the same things
21. Overall , fix your hitsounds , I suggest just changing normal-hitclap2 to normal-hitclap. And your rhythm has to be improved , else this would no longer be an 'easy' difficulty , as you are using rhythms meant for normal difficulty. < take a look at Normal and you'll understand that this is totally Easy xD and about that normal hitclap, yes it's a total mistake xD first of all, I add two normal-hitclaps so I don't have to change sampleset through green timing when the section is playing on normal 2, but some "accident" happened. I was hitsounding another map with normal-hitclap 2 the way you hear it right now. But I think that normal hitclap volume is too low so I decided to edit it with audacity. But when I export it, I accidentally placed it at my Yonjuunana folder and replaced it xD and I only noticed later... but don't worry, it's fixed now :3

Reunion of Goodbye

1. Does this name mean anything. Because grammatically speaking , if 'Reunion of Goodbye' is related to a source of the song it is acceptable , but I think if it's an 'invention' , 'Farewell Reunion' will sound better. < I like the current better tho xD
2. 00:00:733 (1) - Remove NC. < nah
3. Your NC is really messed up here , try NC every 1 big white tick, or else you are gonna get 10-15 combos which are obnoxious. < fine, I'll go NC whenever I think it's too much... below 12 is alright I think
4. 00:07:710 (8,10) - Unintentional overlap which makes it really untidy. If it's intentional then it isn't a good idea... < intentional and I like it~
5. 00:21:663 (1) - With the slow-down , I can safely assume you are mapping to the vocal , and it ends here 00:22:274 . < kay
6. 01:03:349 (5) - Hearing this part in 25% playback rate , I don't think it is snapped to anything , it is just a regular 1/4. < I still feel slightly different... well, just let those 1/8 be xD
7. 01:06:140 (5) - ^ Unless you are not mapping to the drum , it should apply here. < ^ :3
8. 01:12:942 (4) - Fix this DS. The jump from 01:12:593 (3) - to 01:12:942 (4) - is uncalled for. < well, pretty common in the current Insanes actually, but since I myself disliked as well then... fixed
9. 01:16:779 (2) - Remove this note. It is a ghost note , nothing is mapped to this. < Yeah, it make the pattern slightly better tho, from 2/1 pattern to 1/1 pattern... but okay then
10. 02:15:907 (4,7) - Hearing this part in 25% playback rate , I don't think it is snapped to anything , it is just a regular 1/4. Unless you are not mapping to the drum , it should apply here. ^
11. 02:21:489 (6,11,4) - ^ ^^^
12. Nothing else from here.
13. All in all , rework NC and several patterns. < gotta do this after all....

That's all from me , I hope it helps you. I think the map is creative in patterns and rhythms , but it can be further refurbished into a better mapset in time. All the best

1. Black combo color (the way you have it now) might be unrankable, I think you need to grey out your combo colors if you are going to use black because most people have background dim 100% and won't be able to see it very well.
2. 00:47:651 (4,1) - make this overlap cleaner looking pls (http://puu.sh/pEU3T/28dedaa10b.jpg)
3. 00:49:570 (1) - breaks flow in a bad way, do more like 00:43:291 (4) - or 00:04:221 (3) -
4. 00:57:768 (4) - 01:03:349 (5) - 01:06:140 (5) - 02:15:907 (4) - 02:18:698 (7) - 02:21:489 (6) - 02:24:279 (4) - I would like to see a note at the white tick because the accent at the white tick is stronger than a normal note due to the snare sound pick up. I think you have enough examples of what I mean xD -- after playing they are ok, but something to think about
5. 02:36:314 - 02:36:489 - 02:36:838 - idea for this (http://puu.sh/pEXqP/2aaa690e26.jpg) something like (http://puu.sh/pEXuM/9d376537b7.jpg) would be really really fun to play/add in AND would make 02:37:012 (1) - a lot more rewarding than it is now. The hype for something like this is asj;ldkfasdfjasdfkl;askjflsaf
   ok I just played it at this point. what I notice is that there isn't a lot of variety in your mapping. and what I mean by this is the sections are not expressed properly. The softer sections feel exactly like the kiai(bad thing) so what I suggest is making slow sections a little closer together and the kiai a lot more snappy, and have a strong lead in into the kiai like in my example above. Mapping with that in mind the stronger beats will be more rewarding to play.
6. example of softer part needing to feel softer 02:34:919 (3,1) - , these are way to far apart.
   But I will say you have a pretty good sense of flow pattern making and rhythms .

SeaRasp wrote:

Return M4M

Easy

01:05:268 (2,3) - Make (3) follow (2)'s curve better, like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5464763 .

02:31:431 (1,2) - Bad blanket here, try somthing like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5464739 .< damn what even happened here @-@
02:32:826 (2,3,1) - And for this one, do this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5464748 .

01:24:454 (1,2) - Slider end blanket pls, when you do ctr+g on (2) you can see it's off.

03:50:965 (2) - Slider should start on the white tick cause the vocals start on the blue tick before so i shouldn't be the red. Plus the instruments start on the white one. < what? this one 03:53:582 (2) - ? the big drum totally started at red tick so I think starting it at red tick would be fitting.

04:31:431 (1,2) - Usually in easy diffs we try to avoid overlaps but I think this is fine. < this one kind is a good one tho.

Reunion of Goodbye

00:28:117 (7) - Either move this circle a bit farther from 00:27:419 (2) - Or make them touch more but it doesn't look clean like this. < it doesn't really matter since (2) already disappeared when (7) appear (try to look with view -> hit animation) so it wouldn't be visible or just briefly visible (which won't matter) in playfield.

00:39:977 (2,5) - ^ move appart or closer ^

01:33:349 (2,5) - ^ and others that are barely touching... ^

00:47:477 (3,4,5) - A rythm like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5464971 would be perfect here (ignore the pattern I did). It would make every circle follow the vocals and emphasize the longer note with the slider. < I focus more on the percussion tho and I think it fit well.

00:52:012 (5,6) - Make this jump a bit bigger to emphasize higher pitched vocals. < the current position is too good to move, but tried...

00:57:768 (4) - Pretty sure it'd be much better if you did these 1/8 sliders go to the blue tick and follow it up by a circle on the following white tick : like 00:59:163 (6,1) -. I would enjoy it more when I play your map Plus we should be abble to click the downbeat. < it's pretty much fine imo... the downbeat is covered pretty well this way too...

01:07:448 (4) - This note isn't present in the music so remove it and maybe make 01:07:361 (7,8,9) - drum sampleset or add claps to emphasize. < what :v I think (4) is fine since that part sounds more like stream than circle followed by a triplet so keep, and for (7,8,9) normal sampleset would emphasize better than drum imo, the drum sounds quieter and I don't think clap is necessary...

01:12:942 (4,5,6,7) - ^ Add claps or make drum sampleset, it would follow the music better. Pls do this to other streams or tripple patterns in which you can already hear the drums in the music. < as I said, normal sampleset would emphasize better than drum and too much clap would make it too noisy since I increased the volume gradually. A little hint of emphasize with whistle at white and red tick should be enough...

01:15:907 (4,1) - Increase spacing to emphasize higher pitched vocals ? or you can stack it with 01:17:477 (2) - would be nice. < kay, increased the spacing, no stacking tho...

01:27:942 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stream should start here 01:28:116 (5) - . Something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5465144 seems good. < there's already a little hint of stream at 01:27:942 (3) - tho.

02:18:349 (4,5,6) - Stack with 02:17:826 (2) - ? cleaner. < on purpose~ like increased jump or something

02:36:314 (3,4) - Try something like this here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5465242. Covers the vocals pretty nicely. < nah, I don't really care about vocal.

03:03:175 (5) - Make this a 1/2 slider connected to 03:03:524 (1) - by a blue tick circle. Less choppy and won't make me slider break xD < eh, it's pretty common for insane tho, and since there's no really sound at red tick but there's sound at blue tick, I think this kind of rhythm would fit best.

03:38:058 (7) - Try this instead, follows music more: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5465300 . < vocal eh? I think no since there's no really percussion that support the vocal there so it feels pretty weak and doing it like that would feel chopped or something... I'm bad at explaining @-@

03:50:442 (2) - You should cover the red tick, maybe by making a 1/2 slider starting from this red tick. < naah, pretty weak vocal, too weak for slider head nor circle... furthermore with circle there, the drum would be emphasized better and the "pound" would feel more.

04:01:256 (2,3,4,5,1) - Can make a nice star pattern out of these but it's your choice ... I would ! < not really a big fans of patterned stuff lately but done anyway -w-

04:19:919 (7,8) - Increase spacing to emphasize vocals pls. Has to be bigger than the others at least. < I'm supporting the drum tho :v but okay, a very bit increase one.


Oh... I really like this diff, the flow is pretty much perfect. However, there are some overlaps that bother me a bit but it's probably your mapping style so I respect that.

That's all , GL !

[alt][F4] wrote:

hi :3

return of goodbye?

1. Black combo color (the way you have it now) might be unrankable, I think you need to grey out your combo colors if you are going to use black because most people have background dim 100% and won't be able to see it very well. < it's dark grey tho... but okay, I'll light them up a bit.
2. 00:47:651 (4,1) - make this overlap cleaner looking pls (http://puu.sh/pEU3T/28dedaa10b.jpg) < do it the other way
3. 00:49:570 (1) - breaks flow in a bad way, do more like 00:43:291 (4) - or 00:04:221 (3) - < nah, pretty good imo
4. 00:57:768 (4) - 01:03:349 (5) - 01:06:140 (5) - 02:15:907 (4) - 02:18:698 (7) - 02:21:489 (6) - 02:24:279 (4) - I would like to see a note at the white tick because the accent at the white tick is stronger than a normal note due to the snare sound pick up. I think you have enough examples of what I mean xD -- after playing they are ok, but something to think about < I think it's okay, too much note at white tick would make a antijump that make it harder to hit.
5. 02:36:314 - 02:36:489 - 02:36:838 - idea for this (http://puu.sh/pEXqP/2aaa690e26.jpg) something like (http://puu.sh/pEXuM/9d376537b7.jpg) would be really really fun to play/add in AND would make 02:37:012 (1) - a lot more rewarding than it is now. The hype for something like this is asj;ldkfasdfjasdfkl;askjflsaf < Mapping lonesome vocal like that feels kinda awkward for me xD sorry, but no >~<
   ok I just played it at this point. what I notice is that there isn't a lot of variety in your mapping. and what I mean by this is the sections are not expressed properly. The softer sections feel exactly like the kiai(bad thing) so what I suggest is making slow sections a little closer together and the kiai a lot more snappy, and have a strong lead in into the kiai like in my example above. Mapping with that in mind the stronger beats will be more rewarding to play. < I reduced the SV in the verse and pre-chorus, the jumps at the chorus is totally bigger too so I think it would differ them pretty much.
6. example of softer part needing to feel softer 02:34:919 (3,1) - , these are way to far apart. < well, it's 1/1 pattern, it won't matter, really.... but well, I reduced the space a bit.
   But I will say you have a pretty good sense of flow pattern making and rhythms .

Edit: 04:18:785 (6,1) - I read the gap from 5 to 6 as 1/2 maybe im bad idk < lol, it is actually, moved them closer

Normal

DS should be 1x all the way though unless it is kiai then 1.1x. if you think 1.2 is ok then fix 01:02:128 (121) - 02:13:814 (117,118) - < No, it DON'T have to be 1x, you can use any multiplier you like as long as it is consistent, which mean the same throughout all diffs so I keep the 1/2, fixed the DS problem
[*]02:13:117 - bad overlap don't do this < changed the rhythm, hope this one works fine

Easy

Should be 1x DS all the way through < same as Normale ^
inconsisten DS - 00:50:965 (54,55) - .... actually there are too many with out DS, go back through and make them all the same. < fix

sorry for short mod, lots of general stuff I guess idk, if you want me to come back and look after I can try but I probably won't see much. Good luck with ranked

also pls don't respond in a bright color it gives me cancer in the bad way < you have no power here :v and you can always block the responses, it would make it less bright.

Phyloukz wrote:

Hello, my end of the M4M. Sorry for being a bit late but I had things to do
Since you modded my lowest 2 difficulty I'll mod your 2 hardest, deal? Ok, deal. (cant mod low diffs anyways as you could see by modding mine, lol)

Reunion of Goodbye

00:13:640 (2) - how about copy 00:13:291 (1) - and ctrl + h and j for better flow into 00:13:989 (3) - < nah, didn't really meant to be like that, just a pretty much "free" flow stuff
00:28:640 (1) - maybe you should make this slider perfectly symmetrical from the red anchor (yes it may be unreasonable but i see everytime perfect symmetry at this kind of sliders) < well, it doesn't really matter imo, I tried to move the red anchor to be perfectly match with the red tick at least.
00:39:803 (1,2,3) - make this symmetrical triangle < naah, doesn't meant to be one~
00:41:547 (2,4) - this is the first overlap which I dont find pretty, but up to you just my opinion < deal with it
00:49:221 (4) - move this slider a bit down to make it more pretty like puu.sh/pGu4N/6115a0c3fd.jpg (its not 100% accurate i think, but i think you know what i tried to do, just a suggestion) < fix, hope it don't make the jumps too far tho...
01:12:593 (3) - make this slider being part of the stream (like its part of the shape of stream?), but its ok how it is to me, just flows weirdly < ehh, it looked just fine .-.
01:25:675 (1,2) - fix blanket < fix
02:34:221 (1,2) - make a blanket maybe? looks cleaner < sure
01:31:431 (1,2,3,4,1) - holy shit i like this part!! <
01:37:361 (4) - make this shape like the opposite shape of 01:37:710 (5) - to make a ncie pattern, i hope you get what i mean... >.< < hmm good suggestion but pretty hard to do because they have different length and I think the flow from (1) would be too pointy if I do so (the current is pointy enough) so I think I would keep now.
02:25:762 (10) - this combo is pretty long imo, maybe make NC somewhere before (im noob in NCing sorry) < it's fine tho, the whole jumpy pattern is good with the same color.
02:31:343 (10) - ^ (NC here maybe? 02:31:082 (7) - ) ^
02:47:128 (2,3) - just a note: you never did stacked singletaps before (maybe reasonable in point of consistency, idk) < damn, but I think it pretty much readable on gameplay, the stack is good because it covers the same sound... keep for now.
03:23:407 (3,6) - its neither a overlap now not a overlap, just looks weird, but i think you can just leave that like it is, just a note < moved them away a bit
03:27:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nice jumps though, i like! <
03:35:617 (1) - make the part before the red anchor symmetrical? < pretty hard to do ;-; but tried
03:35:617 (1,1) - and create a blanket with the slider part after the red anchor < blanket for 1/4 pattern like this might be a bit tricky so I won't do it.
03:57:592 (9) - NC maybe? would fit perfectly imo (yeah i see, or maybe just leave that cuz u have consistency with this stream 04:09:017 (12) - but i dont like that long combos, but your map your rules :^) ) < NC-ed at 03:57:244 (5) - instead so the whole stream would still be the same combos.


01:21:663 (1) - as i saw later on your map more kind of these sliders which you made symmetrical, i recommend to make this symmetrical too < I guess, wub wub

Hard

00:37:012 (1,2,3) - same DS
00:38:233 (4,5,6) - isnt that DS a bit too close? oO
01:07:622 (12) - pretty long combo
01:07:710 (1,2) - same DS like 01:08:233 (2,3,4) - maybe?
00:49:570 (4,5) - make a symmetrical pattern like http://puu.sh/pGuPB/770b281e31.jpg (make it cleaner obviously) < you mean ctrl+g-ing (4)? I think no.
00:57:070 (3) - symmetry maybe? up to you < it's fine
01:23:756 (6,7,8,9) - i personally dont like those little jumps, they have like no structure for me (trianglem always a solution, xD), but your map not mine :b < should do fine, they indeed have no structure :v
01:29:338 (6,7,8,9) - note: this feels really awkward to play (the double stacking is so sudden, cuz u never did that before) < because of the limited space there, it's pretty hard to move ;-; gotta keep for now unless there's good enough suggestion... the pattern fit the song well too -w-
02:29:686 (4,1) - flows weirdly, maybe shape the slider to the other way < http://puu.sh/pHy7u/8f22e515a2.jpg really? o-o
02:45:384 (1,2,3) - check DS
04:24:454 (1) - make red anchor being accurately on the tick in slider (and adjust symmetry) < adjusted, but no really symmetry
04:28:640 (1) - make this symmetrical < adjust a bit, but for blanket
04:35:791 (7) - NC here? or somewhere else there, cuz without NC hard to read < right

I dont really know if that overlap mapping is great in Hard diff (i assume not but idk) < dunno .-.
And these long combos sometimes are too much imo, but its your map (its just my view, its totally ok i think)

Well thats everything from me, I hope you are satisfied with my mod.
As I modded your map I fell in love with this song, so please get this ranked!!! (i would wonder if this wont get ranked tbh)
Nice song, nice map, thats what osu needs
GL in ranking process and happy mapping! (:

Electoz wrote:

Hi

[General]

1. Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
   
   1. drum-hitfinish.wav < deleted that, what the use of it, I'm not sure myself....

[Easy]

1. 03:49:570 (1,2) - DS < right, wtf happened here o-o
2. 01:05:268 (2,3) - They aren't completely pararell, idk if this is intentional though. < fixed by prev mod I think
3. 01:05:268 (2,3) - Not sure if it's just me who saw this overlap but ok < lol, mistake, fixed from prev mod
4. 02:38:233 (2,2) - A minor overlap here, can be solved by rotating 02:40:151 (2) a few degrees to the right. < right
5. 02:58:117 - 04:12:593 - Missing whistle. < fixed 02:58:117 (2) - , not on the other because it wasn't mean too... only for Hard and Insane there's whistle there.

[Normal]

1. 00:25:500 (6,2,3,4) - Too cramp imo, and kinda hard to read as well. It's more like you're running out of space because of 00:25:849 (1) . I would place 00:25:849 (1) vertically so I can place those next objects in the other direction than that bottom-left corner. (Well you have to move quite a stuff there but it's worth it) < right, it's a total DS hell so I decided to just change the rhythm and well... okay, I guess it at least fixed.
2. 01:09:628 (5) - Is this intentional for having a whistle on a sliderbody? I guess not. < right
3. 02:23:756 - Idk seems like you didn't ignore any strong beats earlier so this is kinda bugging me, use the same rhythm from 01:05:442 (2,3) ? < changed (2) into slider
4. 04:12:593 - 04:12:768 - Missing whistle I guess cuz I saw Hard has them. < yes, I reduced the number of whistle in Normal and Easy to avoid over hitsounding.
5. 04:24:803 - Just my preference but would be nice if you can hitsound the slidertick here. < with whistle? I guess that's okay.

[Hard]

1. 00:45:210 - Remove clap? I don't hear anything on 00:45:210 so it's probably a mistake on this one? < right, it's on body too... damn -_-
2. 01:45:384 - Every drum or whatever sound in this section is mapped except this one, do you really want to skip this? The drum is playing consistently so it's quite off to left one out. < yeah, leave that one out, it's fine enough I guess.
3. 04:35:442 (6,7,8,9) - Very difficult to read the stacks here, you placed them like they have the same beat spacing, so people are gonna interpret 04:35:791 (7,8,9) as 1/1 too. < I NC-ed them now, I think that's gonna help.

Nice map, good luck~

Lefia wrote:

Hi hi from my queue

mod

[easy]

Mod about blanket

how i checked blanket :


00:08:058 (2,1)
00:20:268 (1) move the slider's tail into x:116 y:328
00:23:058 (1,2) do you make it blanket? if yes, please fix it
00:33:524 (3,1) - 00:42:593 (1,3) - 00:56:547 (1,3) - 01:05:268 (2,3) - 01:20:965 (4,2) - 01:34:047 (2,3) - 02:19:221 (3,1) - 02:27:244 (3,1) < not gonna fix all this since in quick glance they looked fine.
02:31:431 (1,2) this part... looks weird < fixed it
02:48:175 (1,2) - 02:55:151 (3,1) - 03:19:919 (2,3) - 03:24:803 (2,3) - 03:49:570 (1,2) - 04:08:407 (4,1,2) - 04:13:291 (3,1) ^^^

don't use 2 circle on 2 white thick, change it into 1/1 slider (i already tested it and the star rating reduce intoi 1,53) and set the CS below 2,5 < Sometimes I used it for variation since there's ain't much variation to do in Easy, and the CS is for perfect diffspread.
00:58:465 (3,1) it's a nice flow, but it'll better if you remove the (3) slider's curve < it would get worse imo .-.
01:49:570 (1,2) it'll be nice if you follow the (1) angle < wat

[hard]

00:23:756 (3,4,5) how about like this? < the current is good too and would make better flow to (6) so keep

00:38:058 add circle at x:164 y:188 < nah, a little pause here is pretty good since the drum stopped.
00:45:384 (1) i don't like the angle, how about ctrl + h < it would make a bad flow from (9) ;-; a good flow from (9) is more needed so the jump would land better.
01:19:570 (2,3,4) like this? < why?

01:24:105 (8) move it into x:256 y:236 < nah, don't really play good imo.
01:29:338 (6,7,8,9) how about like this? < I don't really like that kind of pattern .-.

01:39:279 (4) not suitable with the song, because there is a strong beat at 01:39:454 < still fit the guitar, so still fit the song imo.
02:13:117 (4,5,6,7,8) How about like this < nope

03:57:593 (6,7,8,9) change this stream with the slider < should flow nicely enough too currently.

Sorry, only mod 2 diff...

Good luck!

1. use more sliders, your current representation is accurate rather than simple, which if you decide to be accurate your spacing would be shafted, to maintain those high DS emphasis I suggest you to use more sliders to do those emphasis rather than using circles
2. use more stacks, same explanation as above.

Jonawaga wrote:

NM from my queue~
[Easy]
Modding guide mod:

1. 00:09:367 - timing point is unnecessary < yep
2. 01:52:012 - timing point is unnecessary < fix
3. Using a lower CS will lower the star rating down to 5.5. It doesn't completely solve your problem but it's a good start. < The CS spread is way too perfect now o~o I guess I'll keep for now
4. 00:23:058 - For solving the polarity problems, either do something quick and sloppy: < hmmh pretty good idea but somehow it feels kinda weird if 00:23:756 and 00:23:931 is mapped but 00:24:105 isn't since they are sound of one kind, and I don't think I want to use more 1/2 pattern considering I somehow wanted to reduce the SR... I'll keep for now
   
   SPOILER

   
   OR, use a better rhythm, such as the rhythm 00:28:640 (1,2,3,4) - here. I recommend you use this rhythm for at least twice in this section. These are your two options for your polarity mistakes. You could also change to following the lyrics in some places, but it looks like you don't want to do that. < ya but I don't want to repeat it too many times, and btw the pattern itself is not too good for emphasizing because the big sound here 00:29:861 lands at reverse :/
5. I'll mention blankets in my mod.

My mod:

1. lower the AR idk if beginners can read AR3 < it's 2 tho, not 3 .-.
2. 00:04:919 (2) - move the end a bit closer
3. 00:11:896 (1,2,3) - make the spacing the same
4. 00:32:651 (2,3) - fix blanket if it is
5. 00:39:803 (1,2) - Here's an example of how you could fix the polarity < I'm pretty sure I did the exactly same thing with the rhythm before xD gotta make some variation...
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:50:965 (1,2) - fix blanket
7. 00:56:547 (1,3) - ^
8. 01:18:872 - when you're fixing the rhythm during kiais, try this: < yeah, it's the same thing as 00:28:640 (1,2,3,4) not gonna use that too much because it's kinda ruin the emphasize
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:25:151 - ^: ^
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:24:454 (1,2) - fix blanket < this one seems fine
11. 01:54:454 (3,1) - ^ if it is < I guess this one isn't
12. 02:58:989 (3,4) - this should just be a slider for the fadeout < there are two separate sounds and I think using a slider tail here 02:59:338 (4) - would make it less emphasized
13. 03:23:058 (2,1) - fix blanket
14. 03:57:942 - polarity suggestion: < yep, same as above
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 04:23:058 (1) - this looks nice ^^ < :3

[Normal]
Modding Guide Mod:

1. 01:52:012 - timing point is unnecessary, same as Easy, I'd check every diff < yep, only useful in Insane
2. 02:14:338 - ^ check on every diff < lol I think this one supposed to be increase of volume xD but I deleted the one on Easy tho

My Mod:

1. 00:00:733 (1) - you use this slider shape a lot, please add a little more variety < well, that doesn't really matter imo
2. 00:50:093 (5) - remove this ad readjust the objects around it. The star rating is just above 2.25, and this diff has too many 1/2 patterns. < well there's pretty big drum sound there, I guess I'll just delete (7)
3. 00:52:186 (4) - ^ < leave this one I guess, they make a good vocal pattern here 00:50:965 (1,2,3,4,5) -
4. 00:54:279 (2) - ^ < nah this one seems pretty necessary, I'll just delete the one here 00:53:582 instead
5. 01:00:210 (3,4) - make this 1 slider, same reasoning, then look at the star rating < the sound at 01:00:384 is way too big to be ignored imo, gotta leave this the way it is. If I don't make many 1/2 pattern, the SR would be too close to Easy yet too far to Hard so I think the SR is just right, just 0.01 difference with actual Normal don't really matter imo.
6. keep doing that if you want

[Hard]
timing points are close enough to Normal < fix
My Mod:

1. 00:03:000 (5) - lower this, it's very close to the hp bar < kay
2. 00:07:710 - Either make this a slider ending 00:07:884 - here, or make a circle 00:07:884 - here < it's a pretty good place to pause imo, I don't really hear sound at 00:07:884
3. 00:16:082 (5) - move this so the red tick stacks with (2) < kay
4. 01:04:919 (1,2) - separate these < right
5. some things seem very quiet during the kiai, eg. 01:33:349 (2) - this. It should at least have a louder hitnormal < there's no really sound at 01:33:349 (2) - and similar so I think using soft sampleset would be good enough so the actually big sound would be emphasized better.

I hope I helped. Good Luck~!!

Garden wrote:

[Easy]

1. 01:11:198 (2,1) - can actually avoid the 1/2 gap here with http://puu.sh/qeB9y/913ee6c784.jpg cuz the beat here 01:11:721 - seems stronger and vocal is snapped as well < yeah, but that would make the big sound less emphasized I used that kind of rhythm sometimes too but I don't want to use it to often. I want to emphasize the sound a bit more that part btw so I think it should be fine to use 1/2 pattern twice (with below)
2. 02:29:338 (2,1) - similarly ^ < ^
3. 03:31:431 (2,3,1) - this pattern is not that intuitive for beginners to read imo cuz approaching circle stacked at the slider tail might look confusing, actually u can simply make it a blanket pattern like u always did. http://puu.sh/qeAHm/b7ed00621d.jpg spacing seems not enough so u can change the curve of 03:30:035 (1) - to leave enough space for the pattern < second mod bout this... okay then.
4. 03:35:442 - unused inherited point? < well the thing is used to increase the volume to emphasize more, but in Insane. I guess I'll just remove the entire thing
5. 04:23:058 (1) - nice sliderart but it's not quite suggested in easy cuz beginners might misread the slider path, so change to another shape? < *sigh* 3rd or 4th already.... At first I would like to make heart but I just couldn't figure how to place it. Then now I ended up replacing stuff... I guess heart would indeed works better (?)
   
   nice, the most fully-hitsounded easy i've ever seen!

[Normal]

1. 00:25:500 (6) - 1/4 seriously?? most likely it's misplaced cuz the ds is not correct < lol'd
2. 01:00:210 (3,4) - try this pattern maybe so that ppl can click less: http://puu.sh/qeBXD/f24015abc6.jpg and it's 2.24* (N icon) with this change! < can't really see what you're doing... I guess it's better to screenshot the timeline if you want to fix rhythm. But I'm assuming you merged 01:00:210 (3,4) - into a 1/2 reverse slider... I guess I can't really do that since the sound here 01:00:384 is pretty big to be mapped with reverse only and the sound here 01:00:210 is too weak to be mapped with slider head. Can't merge 01:00:384 (4,5) - either since 01:00:733 is a downbeat that shouldn't be mapped with slider tail. Gotta found some other to reduce the SR
3. 02:33:175 (6,7,1) - maybe look neater this way http://puu.sh/qeCoI/cba316c924.jpg < okay, but I keep the curve and make it less 90°-ish to keep the flow nice
4. 02:59:338 - 03:04:919 - would sound better with soft or normal finish imo, same applied to higher diffs

< oh, it's in drum, right
[Hard]

1. od6 fits better the overall difficulty imo < yeah, but not really fit the diffspread... 5.5
2. 02:32:303 (4) - weird ds < haha

[Reunion of Goodbye]

1. od8 is fairly good for playing at this difficulty level < I don't like high stats for some reason... 7.5
2. 00:16:605 (2,3) - the distances with 1 look unbalanced < Yeah right, but I guess that wouldn't matter much. Balancing it would make the jump somehow too far.
3. 02:34:919 (3) - there's no sound at 02:35:093 - , so maybe try this pattern part1 part2, can follow the vocal here 02:35:442 - as well < changed (3) to 1/1 slider. The vocal here 02:35:442 is pretty weak

nice set, good luck~

Lami wrote:

Easy + Normal

recommend to make same end time with other diffs.
pretty strong melody for ampping, i think. < yeah I'm thinking of doing that too, but I guess it can't be helped... Mapping normally is okay for Insane, and using double spinner is also okay for Hard. But I would like to avoid using double spinner for Normal and Easy since I think it would be pretty surprising (?) for new player and merging the spinner (use the same spinner) for the sound from here 04:37:012 to here 04:42:419 feels pretty weird imo since there's totally sound change here 04:39:803 and I think the spinner would be too long too if I did so.... no change for now

Easy

01:22:012 (2,3) - 1/2 gap is so bad in easiest diff.
pls avoid this. < yeah, but it also can't be helped. It's either 1/2 gap or polarity, nothing inbetween. And I guess it's fine tho since I use it very rarely (only 3 times if I remember it correctly) and the sound here 01:22:884 (3) - is slightly bigger than the other red tick sound so I guess emphasizing it more with 1/2 pattern is fitting enough.
00:49:570 (3,1,2) - DS < I'm pretty sure it DS-ed just fine, tried to improve tho.
02:42:593 (1,3) - little confuse approach on readability. < I can't think of a nicer place .-. any suggestion?

Normal

00:03:175 (5,2) - too close 300 burst, with reverse arrow. < I'll just stack the head then
01:19:396 (2,4) - this stacking is so awful for beginner diff. < I guess I'll just remove (2)

Insane

00:59:163 (6) - 1/8 isn't gerenally beat in here....
play for bad. i think 1/4 is more cool for playing.
plz consider to other notes. < I still hear slightly different and faster sounds than 1/4... I think it don't play that bad tho. Keeping these

looks so good on high diff.
but low diff can more polish i think. (DS consistent or readability issue or.. etc)

Pentori wrote:

m4m https://osu.ppy.sh/s/464706

[Easy]
00:39:803 (1,2) - gap is kinda awkward here since there is a kick drum on 00:40:500 (2) . just make it something like 00:34:221 (1) < yeah, but I just can't map all the things like 00:34:221 (1) ... I'll keep for variation
01:07:710 (1,2) - blanket could be slightly improved imo < lol, rly
01:11:721 (1) - combo's seem inconsistent here. i dont see why you have to nc this when you didn't later on. 01:20:093 (3) - 01:22:884 (3) - 01:28:465 (2) - 01:34:047 (2) < because the sound here seems slightly bigger than the other so, emphasize stuff
01:15:384 (4) - get rid of the manual break after this. beginners will take their hands off their keyboard lol < won't it be too long that it would drain too much HP without break? .-.
02:25:849 (1,2,3) - u should try avoid overlaps like this in easy when the overlapped note isn't a nc. beginners suck at reading so its much preferred to have an obvious flow. something like http://puu.sh/qjadv/588b16f76b.jpg could work where 02:27:244 (3) - is stacked on 02:25:151 (4) < yeah, but the DS won't... sigh
02:29:861 (1) - remove nc
02:31:431 (1,3) - possibly stack 3 on 1's bend? < yeah
03:20:617 (3,1,2) - these blankets could be better < I tried

[Normal]
00:21:489 (4) - change this to a circle on 00:21:663 - since it you're trying to represent the cymbal and the vocal here in one slider it plays really awkwardly :/ if you just kept it to the cymbal it would play a lot nicer < where's the cymbal? here 00:21:663 ? I don't think the sound is that big to be called cymbal xD and because of not too big sound, I don't want to waste emphasize with circles and I think 2 circles in a row would be a little too much for Normal xD
00:31:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole combo is so dense ._. maybe change 00:33:698 (5,6) - to a reverse 1/2 slider < can't really do that since the big sound is already at (6)'s head and it would be weird to land it at reverse, and they also cover different sound so it also feel weird to mix them... Do something with (1,2) rhythm.
00:43:117 (2,3,4) - really confusing because of low ar, i would avoid this < fine
00:55:151 (1) - why nc? i'd remove this for consistency < right... why I even do this
01:00:210 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - another combo that kinda drags on for ages. this is the slow transition of the song and should be mapped with that in consideration. even tho you might make some beats unclickable, remember that this is a normal and you do have to give up some beats. from what i can hear, 01:00:907 (6) - is a very audible clap so that should be clickable. 01:00:210 (3,4) - are only kick drums so you could turn that into a 1/2 reverse slider. it also works with vocals as the player is holding while the vocals are held. < okay, I merged (3,4) into one slider... don't really want to do it tho since it would less emphasize the white tick, and (6) (now (5)) is already clickable btw.
01:11:721 (1) - since you didn't nc every finish you should keep this consistent and remove nc. like u didn't nc 00:32:651 (3) - so theres no reason to nc this. < same thing as Easy, and extra explanation, I think the sound is as big (if not bigger) than the sound here 01:10:500 where I usually NC so I think it reasonable enough to also do NC.
01:16:082 (1) - remove the break here. its much better to let hp drain. u can do this by giving 01:18:524 (1) - a wiggle till the break dissapears. < I'm still not sure... need more input about this
01:19:570 (3,4) - try avoid this < avoid what? I see no problem here .-. the seemingly pointy flow? the "bumper" and slider leniency will do the thing.
02:04:919 (4,5,6) - the music here is guitar beat/guitar beat/clap beat. 02:04:919 (4,5) - here u represented it well but then the next guitar beat falls on the slider end of 02:05:268 (5) - and then the clap is on the slider end of 02:05:791 (6) . maybe a rhythm like http://puu.sh/qjcdI/cef803dd16.jpg would work better here. you can mess around with it < I disliked your suggestion, lol xD it's not that big deal imo :3
02:11:547 (6) - probably not the best idea to have a finish on a slider end. maybe a rhythm like http://puu.sh/qjclS/a4ac2d2c7f.jpg would do the trick. also make sure to nc the finish. < the vocal here 02:11:721 is too weak for even slider end imo. And I think it's not that bad to do it once in a while :3 The vocal is also like stopped tho so it feel kinda "something" with rhythm like this :3
02:13:989 (5) - i think you should keep the reverse slider to represent the guitar. you dont have to make every kick drum audible and it would be better to have the clap as a clickable object. this rhythm achieves this: http://puu.sh/qjcpi/7ea33ff9c5.jpg < lol, nope.
02:29:861 (1) - like i said earlier. because you didnt keep this comboing of the finishes consistent you should remove this nc < same above^^^ gonna change if there's more comment about this I guess, but no for now
02:56:547 (1) - i would make this a 1/1 slider as you are missing the clap beat on 02:56:896 < I think the sound here 02:56:721 is more worth mapping because it's drum+guitar while here 02:56:896 is only drum.
03:04:744 (5) - remove this beat. no need to double tap when its a slow section < I want to make it kinda different so it would make the big sound at (1) emphasized better tho... but okay then
03:44:163 (1) - i think this spinner ends of big white tick in easy. make sure its consistent across all difficulties :p < moved the thing on Easy.

full size songs are so draining to look at
from a first inspection + testplay hard and insane look very clean
i modded like ~ 9 mins drain time so maybe you could mod 3 diffs from mine?
anyways gl!

O-Moei wrote:

Hi !, 🌀NM request
Kebanyakan NM request, jadi aku mod 1 diff aja ya

✨ = Suggestion
💧 = Uuhhh?
💥 = Warning !!!

Here we go...

General :
- None -

Reunion of Goodbye :
✨00:23:582 (2,3) - Blanket ? < Okay
✨00:55:151 (1,2,3) - Kalo ngejaga Triangle flow, baiknya mereka kasih jarak lebih dikit lagi deh < ngga terlalu bermaksud buat bentuk segitiga sih .-.
✨01:17:477 (2,3,4,1) - Mereka baiknya tetap stack sama 01:16:082 (1) - . Klo diperatiin, 01:17:477 (2) - Ini gak NC, trus ritme mulai maju lagi setelahnya kan?. Kalo setuju, mngkin nnti 01:18:524 (1) - slidertail ini arahin lagi ke kombo selanjutnya < emang awalnya kayak gitu sih, tpi gara2 01:16:082 (1) - dipindahin jadi miss xD fix
✨01:25:151 (3) - Coba posisi x108y70. Testplay yang lebik baik nan overlap yang clearly readable < fix
✨03:09:105 (6) - Ini juga masih NC, sebab ritme drum belum berubah < .-. maksudnya di NC disini? Ngga deh soalnya suara di sini 03:09:454 (1) - lebih gede jadi lebih cocok NC disitu.
✨03:23:407 (3) - Coba posisi x302y86 untuk menjaga flow dari curve slidernya. Atau lengkungin lagi slidernya dikit < nah, flownya bakalan malah kayak lebih kaku soalnya terlalu ngikutin bentuk slider (?)
✨04:35:442 (6,7) - NC. Ya gapapa sih klo masih mw ikut white tick buat kombo nya, tapi readibility lebih penting kan < ini masih readable kok buat Insane termasuk pattern yang common soalnya
✨04:42:419 (1) - Coba ini ganti jadi slider sampe 04:42:768 - < nah, lebih suka ending yang sudden pake circle. Kalo dijadiin slider rasanya jadi "extra" banget.

Ya, sekian. Makasih udah ikut serta

miradzin wrote:

Here from my queue. Please mod https://osu.ppy.sh/s/462576 cause length is almost the same
Reunion of Goodbye

1. 00:16:082 (1) - It's not because it is a big white tick that you need to make the 1/1 slider here, try making it here 00:15:907 - it's better for the vocal, fits better the music, and there's no clickable sound in the middle of it. < as I said, I'm not a big fan of following vocal. And I think it still fit because it's following the main rhythm. No change for now, might be considered tho
2. 00:21:663 (1) - I wouldn't stack these < Why? for my "defense" I stacked this because the circle following similar sound as this 00:20:791 (2) - and I would like to make a little "symmetrical" pattern
3. 00:35:617 (1) - Same with the slider, is better at 00:35:442 - also I think 00:35:965 - should be clickable < wub nope. I still consider the first one because that part is silent part and the vocal is the most dominant one, but on this part, there's a very big drum sound here 00:35:617 emphasized with big white tick so I hate (sorry for the mean word) to ignore it. And here 00:35:965 I guess it's pretty normal to cover drum-kick sound with slider tail, no?
4. 00:40:675 (6,7) - Instead of almost muting the sound of the end of the slider and some other circles, I think you can make a 1/1 slider. < Lol good point, I don't really have good excuse for this but somehow I want to keep. Well I guess I can use this excuse... This is the hardest diff so I want to make the pattern more tricky, and I guess using circle here 00:41:024 would emphasize it better and would separate it from the vocal note.
5. 00:57:070 (2) - A little ugly this pattern < You talk like Yoda, lol. Honestly I don't really see your point... it's a pretty common pattern.. Is it ugly because it looks kinda unbalanced? Well, I tried to fix it I guess.
6. 00:57:768 (4) - No, don't end this like that, 00:57:942 - this is totally clickable, make something like this 00:59:163 (9,1) - < Yeah, I've been declining this kind of mod and I guess I would do it on this one too. I don't want to make too many tricky pattern like that. I think too much of those would make the map less fun (personal opinion)
7. 02:15:907 (4) - ^ ^
8. 03:21:662 (1,2) - Oh, why not a 1/1 slider? < I'm following vocal for this good part.
9. 03:20:617 (6) - NC < okay
10. 03:37:710 (5,6) - I think you should place them higher, and place 03:38:058 (7) - a little lower. < Only moved (7) a little lower
11. 03:20:617 (6) - I would place this farther away < What? from where? I think it's far enough from the previous note to make emphasize
12. 00:07:710 (1) - This should be at 00:07:535 - < Nah, same reason as the first I guess. And there's bigger guitar sound at this one too.
13. 00:09:803 - It should be interesting mapping this sound, so making a 1/2 slider and one circle may be better < Good point, fix
14. 00:22:884 (2) - NC? < nah
15. 00:38:058 (4) - Yeah, those "mute" sounds are no good, 00:37:710 - from here add a circle and them the slider, also here 00:38:407 - you can use whistle drum hitsound, it fits good with the music < simply talking, swap them right? Okay then
16. 00:39:803 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of making the same thing with 2 and 4, why not use sliders? They fit the vocal too.< what
17. 00:41:024 (7,1) - I think if the slider comes first is better. < nah, drum
18. 01:13:814 (2) - Make the same as slider 1, there's a sound at 01:13:989 - < okay
19. 01:16:082 (1) - I think is ok not having a NC here, but NC here 01:17:477 (2) - < Nah I prefer NC at the big stopping sound
20. 01:30:907 (3,4) - circle first and then the slider < Why? It's following both, vocal and drum nicely this way
21. 01:42:593 - You shouldn't ignore this sound < Once in a while would be fine I guess... For a little variation ^^

So... I'll end it here, it's becoming repetitive with the rhythm thing, it's a good map though.
Hope it helped, good luck!

TheKingHenry wrote:

Hello mod from my queue~
Oh boy not only are you prob better mapper than me, this mapset has multiple mods already. Oh well, I'll try to scrape something together.

Easy

1. 03:21:663 (1,2) - totally not nazing here, but you could change the shape of the curve of the slider 1 a little to make this blanket better < lol, okay

See here

Current

Fixed

1. 04:21:663 (3) - Is this shape intentional, like I know now it's the same as 04:22:361 (4) - but visually the first one doesn't fit as well as the latter < I guess I'll just blanket this hellish slider 04:23:058 (1) -

Normal

1. 04:22:361 (4) - if this is supposed to be blanket you should prob fix it < wut, that's a circle. The selection is glitching I guess...

Hard

1. 00:27:942 (7,8,9,1) - I know you said no blanket mods, but you should definitely do something to this pattern visually. Since there a little break after the slider 1, there's a lot of possibilities to do blankets and/or triangles or smth else without disturbing the following patterns. < Nah, if I blanket 00:28:465 (9,1) - it would ruin the jump for emphasize. It's good enough I think
2. 00:47:651 (7,8) - This probably falls under your category of sliders not meant to blanket, but I see no reason not to do so. It would look visually better and the spacing would be more even too, leading to more smooth transition while playing. Blanketing it wouldn't even break the triangle pattern you have there atm < meant to be another emphasize, but well, I guess this part is not really urgent... fix
3. 01:16:082 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - I don't know if these are supposed to be in straight line or curved, but atm they aren't really either < lol, screw that part. Fix

As you can see

1. 01:25:326 (2,3) - No reason not to blanket this slider 2 < Well the reason is "I'm lazy" I guess. Fix
2. 01:26:198 (4,5,6) - This might again fall to the category of what you have intended, but personally this is the first place in your mapset I'm not really sure what you are trying to do (visually that is). 01:26:198 (4,5,6) - Blanket is off and other than that, 01:26:721 (5,6) - are not constructing any clean structure, only thing that is constant is the spacing from sliderend 4 to circle 5 to slider 6. They aren't even connected to the structure of 01:24:454 (1) - which was earlier in the area. < Well, this is why I hated Hard... They restrain the jumps which make my patterns less appealing... Well, fix. I don't really triangled them btw.

Perhaps something like this

Also triangled the beginning of slider 4 here with the objects before it.

1. Except you of course do it better and more carefully than me here lol
2. 01:40:326 (6,7) - I wonder why these are intentional as you say not to make blanket mod. What makes them better than simply blanketing them? 01:40:326 (6,7) - Same. If you have blanketing, at least triangle 01:40:326 (6,7,8) < This one is alright I guess. Tried to make triangle and blanketed 01:40:326 (6,1) - tho
3. Rest was pretty much the same drill, blankets undone here and there. Because you didn't want blanket mod I'm not gonna mention 'em here. I still think you should definitely blanket at least some of them though. < Yeah, gonna consider those

Reunion of Goodbye

1. I guess it's part of the business nowadays, but 03:27:244 (1) - forget actual star ratings (didn't check those with anything) this part is like half star harder intensity-wise than almost anything else here while playing, not too big fan when considering it like that. On the other hand it was pretty fun tho < yes indeed lol, I think that part of the bridge is a total climax and should be climaxed as well.
2. Okay I'm just going to cut it short here. Almost everything else that came into my mind here were visual, mostly blankets, so I'm not gonna post anything here. You can see for yourself if there are some ones you would like to change. < If I'm dedicated enough, lol

1. The maps played mostly fairly well. I also saw what you mean with intended overlaps, they were mostly constant and all that. I didn't get what you meant with intended non-blanketing at times though, as you prob see from my mod. There were many cases where blanketing would've made it play worse, it's understandable. That wasn't true every time though. < Gonna share my personal experience here, feel free to skip, lol. This is my new mapping style with free styled pattern, no blanket, extra overlapping, as long as the flow feel nice I'll go on. My old mapping style is a total contrary, everything must be in order, there's must be a reason why a note is there, blanket, triangles, everything. But then I realized that my old mapping style not really play fun because of uneven spacing and it also not really fun in mapping either. Since then I disliked blanket and wanted to make "maps as arts". I guess that, lol.

Good luck!

Nostalgic wrote:

Hi I am back for the m4m!

[Reunion]

1. 00:16:779 (3,4) - improve blanket? < nah, don't mean to blanket here
2. 01:32:477 (4) - i believe 1/2 slider would be better instead of 3/4? < it doesn't really matter imo. It kinda make a longer, unsplitted sound that I think is pretty fitting for this part
3. 02:32:826 (1,7) - not stacking them? you don't stack previously < once in a while won't matter, lol
4. 03:27:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - all anti-clockwise flow? pretty unfriendly to mouse players lol < heh, I don't know xD it just turned out like that
5. 03:37:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i don't agree with the ds change. it's quite unintuitive < what? I don't really get your point here.
6. 04:21:663 (1,2,3,4) - better shape? < any suggestion?

I couldn't really find any problem. so i will shoot stars instead.

Pyroflayer wrote:

no kds < accident kudos

Reunion of goodbye

1. 00:07:710 (1) - kind of weird to put a repeat here. especially with the whistle on the tail. I think you would benefit more from just a longer slider, I also suggest starting the slider 1 red tick sooner because that's when the held out vocal exists. Even if you argue the repeat is for the guitar, then you become inconsistent with 00:06:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - where you map for vocals instead. If you wanted to map for guitar you should have sliders 00:06:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - Plus that would match 00:04:221 (3) - where you put a slider for vocals. < 00:04:221 (3) - and 00:06:314 (1,2,3,4,5) - follow both, vocal and guitar. Why choose one while you can follow both? And the same here 00:07:710 (1) - a 1/1 reverse slider would also fit for long vocal sound imo.
2. 00:10:326 (5,1) - there is no reason for 1 to be clickable, BOTH the vocal and guitar hold a not starting 00:10:326 - and the guitar comes back at this time 00:10:675 - . Do something like http://puu.sh/sQKS8/9eaad8c92f.jpg < okay, got your point here
3. 00:12:768 (5) - 00:14:163 (4) - the repeat is coverings a decently strong sound but its not clickable, might as well use a long slider since player doesn't benefit from having this repeat. < following the vocal sound here, and yet, not ignoring the drum. I think it's a win win. And I don't really get the "player doesn't benefit from having this repeat" part. I don't think adding a repeat would make the map less fun or something.
4. 00:16:954 - you should cover this sound somehow, repeat slider seems like your thing so it wouldn't be bad here. < well, a little sound don't really matter actually, but I do change tho. I used two 1/2 sliders instead because I think it fit better.
5. 00:21:663 (1) - ??http://puu.sh/sQL8H/0f6ce96a1d.png maybe go to this tick? < I think someone said that the sound end there and I think I agreed. Still agreed tho
6. compare 00:26:547 (3,4,5) - with 00:23:756 (3) -, with the circles you are making the strong beats clickable, and with the repeat slider that is what's lacking. < variation thing I guess. I still worried a lot about variation back then and well I guess it's not that bad.
7. 00:28:640 (1) - there is no reason to stray from the rhythming you've been using, < what?
8. 00:29:512 (2) - the white tick should be clickable. (it is possible to have emphasis at the end of a slider, but this isn't doing it. < I think on this part, the red tick and white tick is pretty much equal. I mean both have drum sound, only the red tick has the deeper one (what's that thing called, I dunno) and the white tick has the snare. I think it's won't really matter to map it this way since the sound at white tick is not that distinctly big either.
9. 00:33:436 (4,5) - the play doesn't benefit from this additive rhythm < It's pretty fitting so it won't matter imo. It's not like you can't add extra triplets.
10. 00:34:134 - through 00:56:547 - you need to re-work your rhythms. There are lots of times where 00:34:570 - this sound is being passively represented and not emphasized properly, randomly you have spots where 00:35:442 (3) - its clickable like this and this 00:38:233 - you should be picking something and following it consistently, the best thing for a section like this would be to work around the snare hits. < Well, I notice only a few slider that make the snare don't clickable. First is here 00:36:489 (4) - Like here 00:12:768 (5) - 00:14:163 (4) - I'm following both, vocal and drum with this slider so it pretty much win win. And here 00:49:570 (1) - well I don't really have excuse for this one so maybe I should just change it. The rest of the snares are clickable so I think it's pretty consistent.
11. 00:57:768 (4) - you're also inconsistent with these, sometimes the white tick after them is clickable but not always, I suggest having it always clickable because that is the accented note which is supported by snare AND guitar. < nah
12. 01:07:012 (2) - I suggest changing this to 2 1/4 sliders since 01:07:012 - this is snare 01:07:186 - and this is a different drum. < I see your point but I hate that kind of rhythm. Sorry
13. 01:12:593 (3,4,5,6,7) - The rhythm is http://puu.sh/sQM9s/3bbfb9e6b9.jpg < I don't feel like changing it.... I see your point, but I think it still fit and make a nice lead up too so I doesn't really matter imo.
14. 01:13:814 (2) - would be better without repeat. < there's a drum
15. 01:18:524 (1,1) - this is underwhelming, space these out a bit. There is TONS of emphasis in the music, and 0 emphasis in the map. something like 02:35:617 (1,2,1) - actually works. but people would complain you didn't map 01:18:524 - < that's a 1/4 pattern. But okay, a bit
16. 01:27:942 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - no sound to back this up, < there are sounds
17. 01:37:186 (2,3,4) - this is a good example of additive rhythm that benefits the player. < okay
18. 02:58:640 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - these are in the wrong spots. The rhythm is http://puu.sh/sQM9s/3bbfb9e6b9.jpg < right
19. there are just general issues like what I pointed out throughout the map.
20. probably would help if remapped certain sections

Hard

1. 00:01:954 - its feels like you are leaving random spaces. try something like http://puu.sh/sQMom/f7d77fdfd0.png < I guess I'll keep thing simple for silent part on Hard. Don't feel like changing, dunno why lol. I'm not a big fan of your rhythm.
2. 00:07:710 (5,6) - DOn't stack like this, very bad. For hard players they won't be able to tell what rhythm gap this is, because it looks like 1/4 < Hard players nowadays are not that inexperienced. Nowadays players are scary.
3. 00:11:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - look at how you rhythm this, its beautiful. Do your rhythm like that for a the section right before it 00:09:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - < They are definitely on a different level. 00:11:896 (1,2,3,4,5) - totally should be more advanced because the new instrument like the drum and bass entered. While the rhythm before it, it still silent thus it should be much simpler. You're the one who told me to make distinctive difference between verse before...
4. 00:14:512 - this is another random break < not really random imo, the sound is kinda stopped there and I don't like mapping vocal.
5. 00:31:779 (2,1) - 00:32:651 (4,1) - Another instance where you should just stack it normally. < I don't really like normal stack for stops like this.... And I think it don't really make difference....
6. 00:56:547 - this section is better in this diff than the highest diff. < okay
7. 01:07:012 (5) - change it to fit the rhythm like I said in the highest diff for that one part http://puu.sh/sQMGb/7af40fe75e.jpg < I don't feel like doing so, lol. Same reason as highest diff I think
8. 01:18:524 (5) - same comment as before. < the emphasize thing? well what excuse should I use here..... I want to make consistent moving stack (what's that thing called) I guess and I think since it's not a 1/2 rhythm, but 1/1 rhythm I think it's similar to this 00:31:779 (2,1) - little stops.
9. 01:27:942 (3) - this doesn't really work because strong beats exist here 01:28:117 - and 01:28:291 - < the entire thing is on par imo
10. 01:31:779 -01:34:570 (6) - this is clickable, but 01:32:477 - 01:35:965 - isn't? inconsistencies like this are throughtout < I don't have much option on Hard. If I make all the snares clickable like I did on Insane, it might cause too much notes and thus making it too hard. Lower your expectation for consistencies on Hard. As long as the sound that should be mapped, mapped, consider it as consistent.
11. general things are, don't make something look like a 1/4, and improve rhythm choice, be consistent on which sounds you can click and which sounds you can't

Normal

• 1. nothing much I can say for you other than in the beginning don't spam so much 1/1, use long beats too. < might consider this. But I think the Normal already has perfect star diff so maybe changing this part would also disturb the star diff...
  
  
  

  Easy

  • 1. 00:02:128 - I wouldn't repeat this, I would have something like this to follow rhythm more closely http://puu.sh/sQNlO/4ad8d0ca49.jpg < I prefer to keep it simple since this is a silent part. It's not good to throw in too much stuff here.
    2. 00:03:524 - and then have a 3/1 slider here. which would help 00:04:919 (2) - make more sense. < I didn't apply above, soo
    3. 00:06:314 (1) - take a beat off of this to make 00:07:710 - clickable. < fixed this one
    4. tbh your whole intro(00:00:733 - to 00:11:896 - needs remap, its not following anything. < it's following the main beat tbh. You don't need detailed map for this.
    
    All diffs are full of rhythmic inconsistencies like what I've pointed out, rework those, and if you have any questions feel free to pm me in game.

Halfslashed wrote:

Hello, M4M from Queue
Per your request, the map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/541555

Reunion of Goodbye

Just a general thing, but did the top left corner offend you? (Ctrl+A your map to see what i'm talking about)

00:10:849 (3,4) - I don't feel that 00:10:849 (3,5) get enough emphasis the way you have it, so I would recommend reworking spacing here. Ctrl+G would give an idea of what I think needs emphasis, but that would be too much spacing IMO. < Yeah, I dunno... It's a pretty silent part so I don't think giving that much jump would be good .-. And it's no really reason to add emphasis I guess since the sound is not too big either. Instead, because it's a linear flow, I guess I have to adjust the spacing a bit so the distance would be the same and thus easier to hit. Completely unrelated to your mod actually xD
00:18:175 (3,4) - I get that you're following the drums here, but I think switching to vocals would work better here: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/jA8BrVt.png < Nah, I would reconsider if you mention the silent part. But this part, the drum is the big sound okay, so I think it would make more sense to follow the drum. It's also kinda follow the vocal tho.
00:25:849 (1,3) - Could you make this overlap similar to the ones you used before? Like the one at 00:25:326 (5,1). < Hmmh... it would be too close to previous slider that way. I'll just move (3) so it won't overlap anymore~
00:26:896 (5,2,7) - Same as above. It's clearly intentional, but using too many different forms of overlaps for the same section of the music doesn't make too much sense to me. < Same as above too. But I won't change this one because it's just at it's perfect position.
01:25:326 (4,2) - Visual distance is a bit more cramped than it should be IMO. < Hmmm.... right. I couldn't find a nice way to fix it while keeping the blankets tho... I think it's better now (?)
02:12:593 (3) - It might be an issue with most your wave sliders, but this slider looks pointer than I think it should be. It's noticeable here because of the blanket. < you mean too curvy? Some like it curvy~ And I think, yeah, it makes good blanket.
02:53:756 (1) - A 1/2 repeat would probably function better to reflect the vocal here. < Good point, I don't really have reason to deny that fact but I refuse to change. I guess it's up to taste, but for technical reason... I think the sound is very big and long 1/1 slider would emphasize it better. And I don't know... the vocal seems... weak (?) It's not really so weak, but I think just don't really worth mapping.

Sorry that I couldn't find much, but it's a pretty solid map.

Hard

00:01:431 (3) - Not a big fan of the rhythm here because you're trying to follow guitar, but a prominent guitar note ends up on a reverse. Try this rhythm, since you can then follow vocals and guitar better: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/2htgo5D.png < Hmmm I'm totally thinking on this one. I guess the bigger sound is here 00:01:779 but it don't make my rhythm good either because it covered with a slider tail. But I guess, your rhythm is no change either.... The only big sound here 00:01:605 is vocal and I don't think it's not that big either.... I'm confused. I guess I'll keep...
00:05:965 (6) - Why not a 1/2 slider to map the guitar note on 00:06:140? < Good point.
01:37:012 (4,6) - Could be a blanket. < Changed something. Not really blanket tho. Too lazy, lol
01:41:896 (2,3,4,5) - Not a fan of the visual distance between 2 and 5, seems a bit cramped. < Move them further a bit. I'm out of space here...
02:05:268 (7) - You should really map more of the guitar sounds here. Intensity picked up but rhythm calmed down, which isn't good. < hahaha let that one be.
02:07:535 - Any reason why this isn't mapped? Similar to the point above this, and it honestly looks like you could stack/overlap a circle here with 02:06:838 (2). < I don't like vocal. There's no drum there. And I'm trying to put the number of notes to minimum.
02:41:896 (6,7,1) - This is awesome! < Lol, what's so awesome xD
02:56:198 (8,4) - Why not incorporate the partial overlaps you like to use here instead of the stack? < Ehh, it depends on my feeling maybe. Partial overlap here won't really looks good because reason...
03:34:221 (4,5) - Not a fan of this angle, try rotating this 10 degrees clockwise? < I think it's not the angle that mattered, it's the position... I change the position a bit instead.
03:44:076 (1) - I think some long sliders would fit this better than a spinner. < Insane did that. This is the downgrade version of Insane.

Nice set, good luck to you (and good to see you again). < I totally forgot you for a while xD

YukiZura- wrote:

from mod queue ^^
firstly i wanna stay nice song tho xD < Thank you I guess... I shouldn't be the one saying ty tho xD

Reunion of Goodbye

00:02:128 (1,2) - first thing i saw .. blanket ^^ < Read the description. I'll skip all blanket mods

picture

you did

try do it like this intead

00:01:779 - move this slider to here 00:02:303 (2) - so you could see the blanket more clearly ^^ after fixes put back where it belong

00:22:884 - how about NC here then 00:23:058 - disable this nc < Nah, I prefer NC at big white tick to emphasize it better.
00:41:198 (1,2) - blanket .... move this slider 00:41:547 - to here 00:41:111 - you can see ^^
00:42:593 - straight slider? since you already put straight slider here 00:42:244 - make it a balanced so it look not to messy < Hmm... I don't really see it as messy tho... Well, there's no real reason not to apply this but I think I'll left it be... Why? I'll just use alibi, lol. First, it's a NC so I think I'll use different shape to differentiate it. And I think it would make a nice "blanket" pattern here 00:42:593 (1,3) -
01:20:617 (3,5) - fix blanket
01:22:884 (1,2) - again blanket
02:10:500 (1,2) - blanket
02:34:744 (2,3) - blanket this
02:57:593 (4,1,2) - blanket this as well .. lol i just realise .. all the mod i give is about blanket xD
03:49:047 (2,1) - blanket this too
-It good already just fixing so it look more nicer

Hard

00:30:907 (8) - i think reverse slider here much better < Hmmh? Why tho. There's no sound that would indicate 1/4 reverse slider and I wouldn't put too much 1/4 rhythm in Hard.

00:28:465 (9,1) - blanket this < Still would ignore these
00:38:058 - feels like this missing a note < Considering that I'm following drum (read the description), the sound there is only vocal, and the drum is nicely stops here 00:37:884 I think it would be pretty appropriate to make a little pause there too.
01:10:151 (8,1) - blanket can be better
01:10:151 (8,1) - this as well.. feel like it missing a note < Where do you want me to add note? That's a tight 1/2 pattern.
01:31:779 (6,7) - better the blanket please ^^
01:32:651 - missing note? again < Same reason as 00:38:058 -
01:48:872 - flow more better this way < Nah, I disliked circular motion now. Did some change to make it somehow better tho.

picture

03:15:210 - idk why but you leave a lot of random spaces that supposed to have a note in it .. try slow the song to 25% you can heard more clearly < Same thing as 00:38:058 - as well. I wouldn't like to stuff to much thing in Hard. I've tried to do so and the SR increased to almost Insane. So I would like to add as many 1/1 breaks as possible to put it simply. And they're not random either since I only stopped at where there's no drum since I mainly following drums.
03:26:896 (8) - flow can be better < Your suggestion don't really make it better tbh... Just let the flow break here maybe so I can make another flow break to (1) and thus emphasized it.

example

and dont forget to blanket this 03:26:896 (8,1) - if you do the flow that i suggest

that all i think ^^
good luck \o/

Yahuri wrote:

sup dazai < sup dazai too

Reunion of Goodbye
00:01:954 - i think this deserves a click (vocals) more than 00:02:128 - because there really isnt any sound there. < Hmmm I still kinda hear the guitar sound at white tick tho...
00:13:989 (3,4) - blanket? < lol, this one wouldn't hurt I guess. fix
00:16:082 (1,2,3) - could alter the shape of 1 to get a better blanket with 2 and 3. if you make this change, update the rest of your wave sliders as well. < not a really big fan of not-curvy slider wave tbh. But this one do look too curvy... I make it less curvy but don't blanket it.
00:23:756 (3,1) - increase DS for cymbal crash < right... Why did I even do this. It's a nice pattern too T-T. Fixed tho, I hope the pattern looked fine.
00:29:512 (2,1) - ^ < fix
00:39:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks kinda cluttered here, how about putting 5 in between 2 and 7? < fixxx
01:31:082 - auto-clap? < right
01:55:151 (1,2) - fix blanket < kay
01:58:814 (4,1) - could use more DS, has somewhat strong drum and vocals < Right... I sure cared too much about pattern back then...
02:34:221 (1) - 02:34:919 (3) - would look better if both of these blanketed 02:34:744 (2) < (3)'s shape is more for flow... I decided to un-blanket both of them for consistency, lol.
02:45:384 (1,2,3) - flow seems a bit too linear to be comfortable imo < right... did something.
03:45:384 (2,3) - could try getting a better blanket around the first red anchor of 3 < Tried to do that tho... I guess it's imperfect then. Tried to perfect it.
04:00:733 (1,2) - i think this should have less DS than this 04:01:780 (5,1) - since 04:01:954 (1) has the cymbal crash+vocals, while 04:01:257 (2) only has vocals < I'm out of space here, lol. Help.
04:29:861 (1,3,4,5) - aesthetics dont look very good here since the 3 is stacked right next to 1, you could try blanketing around 3's approach circle rather than 5 < wait, what? I guess this is stacking thing huh? I don't map with stack so I don't really see the difference xD Okay, did something. Hope it looked fine.
04:42:419 (1) - theres nothing really special about this note (other than being the last note) for there to be a finish here, so remove finish < kay~

i might come back for another diff cuz this song is gud XD (but i have 3 more requests to do so aaaaaa) < take your time, lol

Good luck!