16:05 handsome: hi
16:05 Clyine: yo
16:05 handsome: could you mod my map? :)
16:05 Clyine: ok
16:05 *handsome is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/453565 SUPER BEAVER - Rashisa]
16:05 handsome: haha thanks m8
16:06 Clyine: wait eh
16:06 Clyine: play through
16:06 handsome: kk
16:09 Clyine: 00:01:356 - the green line here
16:09 Clyine: delete
16:10 Clyine: 00:14:124 (2) - this slider mapped to nothing
16:10 handsome: wait
16:10 handsome: can post
16:10 handsome: LOL
16:10 Clyine: later save log lor
16:10 handsome: i want the stars'
16:10 handsome: but okay
16:10 handsome: LOL
16:10 Clyine: lol
16:11 Clyine: 00:14:660 - add note
16:12 Clyine: 00:21:803 (1,2,3,1) - do 1/2 slider 1/2 slider 1/2 slider note note instead
16:13 handsome: how
16:13 handsome: no space
16:13 Clyine: 00:28:588 (6) - detele this note then mvoe the next slider here
16:13 handsome: or they 1/4 apart?
16:14 Clyine: http://puu.sh/a4RZy/7ace366fcc.jpg
16:14 Clyine: the next one do like this
16:14 Clyine: http://puu.sh/a4S18/26d6aaec55.jpg
16:15 Clyine: 00:30:195 (7) - change this to note
16:15 Clyine: make the 8 notes 2 expanding squares
16:17 Clyine: 00:42:694 (11,1,2,3) - 
16:17 Clyine: this whole thing
16:17 Clyine: change to
16:18 Clyine: http://puu.sh/a4ScM/bf5ad29111.jpg
16:19 Clyine: rmb shift the green line to white tick
16:20 Clyine: 00:49:480 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - this whole thing mapped wrong ya
16:21 Clyine: http://puu.sh/a4SjX/507ae646ad.jpg
16:21 Clyine: correct one
16:23 Clyine: like that insane no more le
16:29 handsome: wah
16:29 handsome: i dont udnerstand the last one
16:29 Clyine: your triplet
16:29 Clyine: the first 2 i think
16:29 Clyine: mapped on wrong timing
16:29 Clyine: the music triplet end liao then ur note triplet come out
16:31 handsome: alright fixed
16:31 handsome: kk thanks man
16:31 Clyine: np
16:32 Clyine: ij veryt lazy do hard
16:32 Clyine: lol
16:32 Clyine: i just post this lol
16:32 handsome: its okay haha
16:32 handsome: if dw then nvm

Artavia wrote:

#modreqs! (Random mod & M4M)


[General]

• ■ This beatmap is shortage of hitsounds.(especially Normal diff) In my opinion, add more hitsound good to have it.
  
  ■ You should change Title. Rashisa > Rashisa (TV Size)

[Normal]

00:28:235 (3) - Ctrl+<

00:46:985 (5) - Move to 00:47:164 and 00:48:593 (6) - Move to 00:48:771

00:51:628 - Add Circle

00:58:235 (1) - Remove NC

01:11:985 (2) - Move to 01:11:807

01:12:343 (3) - Move to 01:12:164

01:18:593 - Add Circle


[Hard]

00:01:803 - Add Circle

00:03:410 (4) - Remove and Change pattern

00:07:339 (1) - Remove NC

00:08:410 (1) - ^

00:23:320 (3) - Remove

00:25:196, 00:25:374 - Add Circle

00:27:160, 00:27:339 - Add Circle

collapsed text

00:33:589 (9) - NC

00:36:089 (6) - ^

00:36:446 (8,9) - Change. I can't see it. (The criteria for basic skin)

00:51:446 (6) - Move to x156 y44


[Insane]

00:42:159 (9,10) - Remove Finish

00:57:695 (5) - Move to x240 y52


[End.....]

with a good song....(♬)

TestApple wrote:

Going to point out the generally bigger flaws that stick out more obviously.

[General]
+10ms in all timings. sounds better, no?

[Normal]
Mostly DS errors. Remember to use DS for most beat spacings in Normal difficulty.

00:08:950 (1,2,3) - Use DS
00:10:021 (4) - Change it to a normal curved slider. This looks really out of place.
00:16:271 (5) - DS it slightly away from end of 4. Placing it directly under here is hard to read.
00:17:878 (1,2,3,4) - Use DS
00:24:664 (2,3,4) - Change to stack, as player can use 2 approach circles to reference for timing, will be better for Normal.
00:27:521 (1) - Jump to next beat too far, try to keep distance same as 00:27:164 (1,2,3)
00:28:950 (1) - Overlaps previous slider 3, hurts eyes slightly ;w; move it lower slightlyyyyy
00:34:664 (1,2) - Remove NC on 1, use NC on 2 instead.
00:36:450 (6) - Curve slider slightly like this -> http://puu.sh/a6BrI/9132f1258c.jpg
00:38:414 (4) - Change this instead to a slider pointing away -> http://puu.sh/a6By7/02d4838f91.jpg
00:52:164 (3,4) - Place these two sliders closer together.
01:11:807 (1,2,3,4) - Something like this probably. http://puu.sh/a6BHn/df702e90d6.jpg Your original timing is too hard for Normal.
01:22:878 (6) - Slider end too close to next beat, move next beat further away.


[Hard]
00:08:767 (1,2) - Move them close together -> http://puu.sh/a6BNM/771a832d71.jpg
00:14:660 (1) - Remove NC, unnecessary. Also Ctrl+G.
00:21:446 (6) - Ctrl+G
00:25:553 (1,2) - Can be spaced further apart.
00:29:303 (2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+G all of them.
00:51:446 (2,3,4,5,6) - Confusing >~< especially slider 6
01:05:196 (1) - Move it further away from previous slider to prevent overlap.
01:11:803 (1,2,3) - Move it further away from each other.
01:12:874 (1) - Remove overlap >~<
01:17:696 (3,4,5) - SPACE FURTHER APART. I GOT TRICKED. And NC each of them.
is it just me or am i sensing some Hanzer from here on


[Insane]
Your beats many times too close to each other for Insane. Breaks the feeling of speed in this map.

00:04:660 (7,8,9) - Move it further away from 6
00:11:446 (1,2,3) - This would be better imo -> http://puu.sh/a6E1E/d9852a06ea.jpg
00:12:428 (4) - Either put it directly right under slider end, or move it much further away from slider end. I thought it was a 1/4 spacing :c
00:21:446 (6,7,8) - This has to go all the way down because of distance.
00:45:017 (1,2,3) - Space them further apart.
00:53:946 (10) - Ctrl+G for speed
00:54:481 (2,3) - Ctrl+G to follow up flow of previous mod ^
01:02:160 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like this http://puu.sh/a6Em7/82ea3826ba.jpg feels better
01:06:446 (1,2,3,4) - Space 4 away from the other 3 like 1,2,3's spacing
01:11:640 (1,2) - Space the 1 further away from 2. The timing is already pretty hard here, make the distance easier to read. If not it'll just make the map frustrating.
01:18:767 (6,7) - DS 7

Rtyzen wrote:

Mod on request!~ Took awhile but done it lol
[General]

1. About the offset, I dunno sounds better at 736 to me lol i think 740 works?
2. Also, change up the volumes. Don't just have everything at 100% and then the softer parts at 75%. and avoid 100% at parts other than the chorus I guess. It's quite loud. done
3. Might want to change your combo colours done
4. Your metadata must be constant throughout all diffs. This includes Artist, Title, Source, Tags, Audio preview time. For example, the name for normal has TV Size while the rest do not. (In case you didn't know, changing the metadata in one diff does not change it for all other diffs ) done
5. Your Uninherited Timing points(i.e. all red timing points) are not constant throughout all the diffs. (Green ones do not need to be constant). Similarly to metadata, changing one won't affect the others in the other diff, so you need to change them all manually. Also, when you change the offset via the red timing points, the notes in the map will not snap automatically(e.g. your hard and insane are completely unsnapped lol). You can fix this by going to Timing > Resnap all notes done
6. Be sure to check AIMod (Ctrl-shift-A) more regularly to find out common and easily pointed out mistakes. fixed, nothing is left there
7. Also, Hitsound more. terrible at this, but will try

[Normal]

1. 00:01:385 - Redundant timing point?
2. 00:07:888 (4,2) - Don't overlap
3. 00:07:888 (4,4) - You can align the ends of these 2
4. 00:08:960 (1) Remove NC and put here 00:09:317 (2)
5. 00:10:021 (4,5) - Bad stack
6. 00:11:103 (5) - NC?
7. 00:14:674 (1) - Remove NC and put here 00:15:031 (2)
8. 00:16:638 (1) - Remove NC and put here 00:17:888 (3)
9. 00:16:817 (2,3,4) - End of 2 dont line up straight with 3 and 4
10. 00:20:031 (1) - Remove NC and put here 00:20:745 (3)
11. 00:17:888 (3,4,5,6) - Try making a square or a parallelogram? Looks weird
12. 00:20:745 (3,5) - Head of 3 and end of 5 bad overlap
13. 00:23:603 (1,4) - Don't overlap
14. 00:30:745 (4,1) - Distance snap too wide
15. 00:44:674 (5,1) - Bad overlap
16. 00:52:174 (4) - NC
17. 00:54:674 (1) - Remove NC here and put here 00:55:031 (2)
18. 00:56:817 (1) - Remove NC here and put here 00:57:531 (3)
19. 00:59:664 (1) - Remove NC here and put here 01:00:021 (2)
20. 01:05:745 (2,3) - Blanket better
21. 01:07:521 (2,3) - Blanket better
22. 01:11:817 (2) - Try something like this for the rhythm
    SPOILER

    
23. 01:22:174 (6,1) - DS too close

[Hard]

1. 00:00:742 (1,2,3) - DS too close
2. 00:11:994 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I am not sure whether this part is rankable. Too many slider overlaps
3. 00:16:634 (7,1) - DS
4. 00:32:352 (2,3,4) - Odd DS(i.e. same time apart(2&3 and 3&4), but different distance apart. Can be very confusing). Fix it
5. 00:43:155 (6,7,8,9) - This stream looks off. Just make a curve slider and convert to stream (Under compose in case you didn't know)
6. 00:40:744 (6) - NC
7. 00:41:459 (1) - Remove NC and put here 00:42:888 (5)
8. 00:55:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Odd DS
9. 01:04:673 (6,1) - Distance Snap too wide
10. 01:11:280 (1,2,3) - Bad overlap
11. 01:11:459 (2,3,4) - Odd DS
12. Overall, seems abit hard for a hard, but according to star diff it isn't, so I guess it's OK.

[Insane]

1. 00:08:412 (1,2,3) - Odd DS
2. 00:08:412 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Odd DS (unnecessary)
3. 00:19:663 (4,5) - DS too high.(Even for insane IMO) Slider 4 shouldn't be ending on a blue tick anyway
4. 00:23:769 (1,2,3) - DS too small (in comparison to the previous part)
5. 00:43:589 (9,1) - Remove 9 and move 1 back one tick (then extend 1 to end at the original ending time)
6. 00:43:678 (1,1) - Bad overlap
7. 00:52:162 (5) - NC
8. 00:55:019 (5) - NC
9. 01:04:305 (5,1) - Jump here is bad because the flow is broken IMO
10. 01:04:305 (5,5) - Bad stack on the end of slider 5
11. 01:05:912 (1,2,3) - People are going to mistaken this for a triplet. I guarantee it.
12. 01:11:269 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why do you do this to us
13. 01:18:233 (5,6) - Odd DS
14. 01:22:876 (6) - NC
15. The flow on this diff is weird lol. Breaks unnecessarily in alot of places in an attempt to make it harder.

That's all from me, Map has potential. Good luck ~

LizeKotze wrote:

Hello! M4M from my modding queue.
Thanks again for the mod.
Sorry, but the insane is too hard for me to mod.
Well, here's my mod:

Normal:
1) This diff may be too hard for a normal. I suggest lowering the Approach Rate to 4, and the Overall Difficulty to 4 as well. fixed
2) 00:11:097~ Remove NC fixed
3) 00:28:954~ Remove NC, and then add NC here: 00:29:311. fixed
4) 00:31:811~ Remove NC, and then add NC here: 00:32:168. fixed
5) 00:54:668~ Remove NC here, and then add NC here: 00:55:025. fixed
6) 01:01:097~ Change this slider a bit so that it's mirroring this slider: 01:00:025. Like this: fixed
7) 01:14:668~ This slider is too short; lengthen it to this point: 01:15:204 fixed
8) 01:15:561~ I don't really like this spinner here. Maybe remove it? think its fine, change if more complaint
9) 01:28:954~ I suggest removing this slider and replacing it with a spinner instead that reaches this point: 01:30:025. Something like this: nah, i want this to stay to be constant through all diffs

Hard:
1) 00:03:418~ NC here. fixed
2) 00:23:597~ This triplet is not stacked properly on this triplet: 00:21:989. fixed
3) 00:26:275~ Maybe remove this hitcircle. (It seems out of place to me.) fixed
4) 00:29:132~ I like this overlapping part. thanks!
5) 00:36:811~ This slider is too long. Maybe shorten it to this point: 00:37:168. fixed
6) 00:44:132~ This part is a bit confusing. Maybe lengthen this slider: 00:43:507 to this point: 00:44:043, and remove this hitcircle: 00:44:132. Then it will look something like this: its fine to me imo
7) 00:52:168~ NC here. fixed

MisakiYuri wrote:

Normal:

00:05:271 Add a hitcircle? fixed
00:18:597 (3) - replace with short turn back slider while eliminating four? i think too confusing for normal
00:20:739 (1,3) - This pattern doesn't look too nice. hmm i like it
00:22:168 (3) - extend to red tick? dont fit
00:36:454 (5) - end this pointing towards the next object - this is normal. fixed
00:37:882 (2) - replace with slider? then eliminate hitcircle? will remain now, fix if complain
00:46:097 (3) - Blanket the hitcircle with this slider? done

Hard:

01:11:275 (1,2) - The hitsounds here are weird. fixed
01:24:311 (3,5) - I can't see the slider tracks here. It's weird - and broken. fixed
01:27:525 (1) - ^ fixed
01:28:954 (7) - This should end on the red tick. no need

I think your HP drain's too high.

smallbeans wrote:

Hi, I come here for M4M.
Sorry for a little Chinese in following modding, I hope you know what it means.

First, your hitsound volume is too loud, please decrease it by 30%, really. fixed

[Insane]
Why you overmap this diff. ;_ ; fun

00:04:668 (7) you should also jump this after a big jump. 或許可以將這裡和 00:06:454 做一個搭配. (sorry I don't know how to describe in English...) fixed, its ok i understand!
00:12:704 (4) don't stack this note, it decrease the flow. fixed
00:24:400 (5) this 1/4 heard weird, move it to 00:24:222. fixed
00:24:757 (2) delete this 1/4 note. fixed
00:30:739 (1,2,3) you just have a big jump before, these three note may cause player misunderstand it also 1/2 jumps, please change it. fixed
00:58:954 (4) I think it should be this : http://i.imgur.com/SUtjLp2.png fixed
00:59:311 it should change, just like the last picture.fixed

ok, others I don't know how to mod, sorry.

[Hard]

00:29:132 (1,2,3,4,5) this is a bad use in Hard, the slider is too short and can't see clear. a lot of mixed opinion, i wont change unless unrankable
00:43:507 (6) why this is not as same as Insane? Please fix it. WILL GET BACK TO IT! thank you!

[Normal]

00:08:954 (5) fix the blanket with 00:07:882(4) fixed
01:12:704 (4) fix the blanket with 01:13:239(5) fixed
01:14:311 (6,7) stack not well with 01:12:704 (4)'s end. fixed
01:14:668 (7) slider should ends at 01:15:205 fixed

End of the mod.
Good luck!

ThEBonzi wrote:

Hello! M4M here!

This is literally my second mod ever, but i'll do my best to make it helpful!

Let's see...

General

The hitsound volume is loud, especially in the kiai. Decreasing all section's volume around 20/30% should go.


[Insane]

00:12:704 (4) - Stacking this note under the slider end basically kills the flow of the next circles. fixed
00:23:775 (1) - Again, this is difficult to read because it's covered by the slider end that is disappearing, try moving it elsewhere. fixed
00:24:757 (2) - i feel like there's really no need to this 1/4, just delete it fixed
00:24:847 (3) - the reverse arrow is covered by the previous 1/4 triplet (00:24:311 (4,5,6) -) making it difficult to read. try moving it! stay
00:26:097 (1,2,3) - i dont'like these three cirlces, i'd put an a 1/1 slider instead, argh i can't explain why. maybe later change
00:28:598 (8,1) - the transition from the slow part to the jumps is just too wild. i'd put one or two 1/2 sliders instead of full circles (but the pattern is actually cool, though ;_;) changed pattern
00:30:562 (8,1,2,3) - Again, the transition from the jump to the three 1/1 circles is confusing. try respacing them or replace with a slider. fixed
00:43:597 (1) - Object end is not snapped! fixed
01:10:561 (5) - same as above ^ fixed
01:16:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this a is just a mess, i played it and i couldn't read it for two times, do something, make magic. fixed
01:28:598 (3) - oh, what a sweet end...BOOM object's end loud sound ruins everything, make a green line and silence it ! fixed

Hard

many,MANY spacing errors and strange slider shapes ;_;, but i'll focus on major errors.

00:09:311 (3,4) - blanket this circle better fixed
00:29:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is basically a mess. this would be not easy to read, remember that this is an hard diff! keeping unless unrankable
00:33:597 (1,2,3) - not that bad, but not that good eithe. You can just do better! stay
00:51:454 (1) - I'd put this next on the next slider because many player will think this as 2-repeat arrow slider with this spacing, but this is 3-repeats. stay
01:21:989 (3,4) - i don't see the point of these, really. it is mapped to song (guitar)
01:28:954 (7) - Same on what did i say at insane diff. fixed

Normal


wooho, didn't found anything, good job!

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi, as requested from my queue.

Normal
00:06:450 (1) - Move it little bit down and little bit left. There is 00:05:200 (4) - and it's overlaying it.
00:15:735 (3) - Improve design of this slider.fixed
00:27:521 (1,2) - I don't like the spacing here. It's really confusing for "Normal" players. fixed, big mistake LOL
00:38:236 (3,4) - Put (3) on (4).
00:42:164 (4) - This is really confusing for "Normal" players. Put it like this. fixed
00:46:807 (4) - Make stack with 00:45:378 (1) - fixed
01:11:807 (2) - Put on (3) like you did here: 01:14:307 (6,7) - fixed
01:15:557 (1) - Remove it. It didn't fit there imo. its ok i think
Hard seems fine to me, but I think you should reduce the AR by 1. Also, there can be some mistakes, but I didn't see any. Except for the sliders.
About GD, I started maping it, so I'll send you diff in PM.

Hope that'll helps
If not, then sorry.
Good Luck![/color]

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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Rashisa (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:らしさ
Artist:SUPER BEAVER
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neonat wrote:

Normal

00:04:307 (3) - end the slider at 00:04:843 fixed
00:06:450 (1,4) - if you want to stack the ends, stack perfectly, they are currently not aligned fixed
00:20:735 (1,3) - this looks really weird swag
00:40:378 (1) - this doesn't really fit to the song as there is the start of vocals at 00:40:735 which is important yet overlooked here fixed
01:03:593 (3) - new combo here instead of 01:02:878 (1) fixed
01:13:235 (5,7) - blanket them using ds, i think its k
01:15:557 (1,1) - shift the spinner 01:15:557 (1) to start at 01:15:735 and end at 01:16:807 and remove 01:16:985 (1) and place a circle instead at 01:17:164 - this would fit the song better fixed
01:23:593 (3) - place elsewhere, don't touch 01:21:807 (5) fixed

Hard

00:10:468 (6) - this note is irrelevant, I suggest removing it i think its ok
00:11:985 (6,7) - swap places, circle before slider, circle at 00:11:985 slider at 00:12:164 fixed
00:12:700 (8,1) - swap places like above ^ circle before slider, circle at 00:12:700 and slider at 00:12:878 fixed
00:19:307 (8) - less curvy, less scrunched up fixed
00:29:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is too packed, it looks more confusing that it should be and doesn't look so nice but i like it :< will change if more complain
00:36:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird pattern to come up right after the previous one, they don't really mix its ok
00:53:771 (5,6) - don't let them overlap with 00:52:164 (1,2,3) fixed
01:00:200 (2) - less curve fixed
01:08:414 (1) - too packed, show more of the slider body fixed
01:09:843 (1) - ^ fixed
01:17:164 (2,1) - better blanket and because 01:17:700 (1) is so short, the overlap doesn't look that great because the body and end are covered fixed
01:20:557 (5) - it goes over the beat at 01:20:735 which is important fixed
01:21:093 (6) - too close to previous note fixed
01:23:057 (7) - goes over the beat at 01:23:235 which is important fixed

Insane

00:21:807 (1,2,3) - use the same shape fixed
00:24:843 (2) - repeat arrow is covered by 00:24:485 (6) when hit and 300 comes out, this is unrankable fixed
00:42:700 (1) - this is ugly looking fixed, idk what happened there lol
00:43:593 (1) - ^ fixed
00:44:307 (2) - not stacked on end of 00:43:593 (1) fixed
00:45:021 (1) - not stacked on end of 00:43:593 (1) fixed
00:45:021 (1,2,3) - looks too packed its fine, yo
00:53:057 (4) - goes over beat at 00:53:235 which is important fixed
00:53:593 (5,6) - does it need to overlap fixed
01:16:093 (3,4) - blanket fixed
01:18:950 (8,1,2) - too close to each other fixed
01:21:807 (4) - this doesn't fit into the music and rhythm, change the rhythm here fixed

xLoupGarou wrote:

[centre][ Normal]

00:57:164 (4) - Move ( x:140 y:256 ) changed whole part
00:57:521 (1) - Move ( x:240 y:260 ) also Fix your slider changed whole part
00:58:235 (2,3) - Fix and move your silders changed whole part
01:00:735 (2,3) - Move ( x:228 y:164 ) there is no need to, keep symmetry

paseli wrote:

Mod finished~

[Hard]
00:01:807 (3) - overlap fixed
00:04:307 (4) - feels a little bit chopped off. go with slider-slider-circle instead fixed
00:19:307 (8) - make it flatter think its ok
00:20:557 (2,3,4,5) - make it rounder fixed
00:29:307 (2,3,4,5) - this looks strange but playable :<
00:30:735 (6) - overlap fixed
00:33:593 (1,2,3) - go with slider-slider-circle. also no need to perfectly stack here, would be to small distances imo. fixed
00:43:503 (6) - either make slider end on white tick or add a circle between 5 & 6 fixed
01:02:521 (3,5) - distances seem to be a bit shorter than, 01:01:807 (1,3) - , try to make it equal its fine
01:21:093 (6,2) - overlap. also, improve blanket to fit 6-approachcircle fixed
01:21:985 (3,4) - end them on white tick, sounds more natural fixed

[Insane]
00:05:200 - consider adding a circle here fixed
00:21:807 (1,2,3) - this seems to be a bit slow im comparison to the previous jumps. also, improve blankets to fit 6-approachcircle better. i think its fine as it is
00:35:914 (1) - this is confusing, consider putting the note below the circle 5.neatened it up
00:42:700 (1) - weird blanket, try to improve it (see below) fixed
00:43:593 (1) - this is some weird blanket, try this out https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1833732 rethink
00:47:700 (7,8,9) - bigger distance would improve the flow. fixed
01:06:985 (5,7) - try to avoid these kinds of overlap its ok
01:15:021 (1,2,3) - you can improve pattern and flow by making it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1833710 fixed
01:17:164 (2,3) - consider making these to sliders instead of circles.synergizes better with the upbeat on 4. fixed
01:21:807 (4) - this sounds offbeat, go with circle + backslider instead, slider starting at 01:21:985 - fixed

Good song, good map, keep your work up and pray for the BATs to get this map ranked!

Greetings,
paseli

osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51454
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Rashisa (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:らしさ
Artist:SUPER BEAVER
ArtistUnicode:SUPER BEAVER
Creator:handsome
Version:Pjecoo's Easy
Source:ばらかもん
Tags:barakamon naru junon boy op opening handa seishuu
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ichia7x wrote:

[General]

• 
  Barakamon!! >.<) (still not watching this 'till nearly end)

1. Add the GD mapper nickname to the tags fixed

[Normal]

1. Change CS to 3,5 no need
2. 00:25:914 - add circle no need, too messy
3. 00:41:807 (3) - remove this no need, fit
4. 00:42:521 (5) - change to reverse slider to 00:42:878 - and ctrl + g fixed
5. 01:15:735 (1) - change the start point to 01:15:378 - fixed
6. 01:28:593 (2) - remove this no need

[Hard]

1. Change | CS to 3,5 or lower | AR to 7 | HP to 5,5 or lower no need, diff is hard
2. 00:02:075 (5) - remove this no need
3. 00:04:664 (5) - change the end point to 00:04:843 - fixed
4. 00:05:200 (6) - remove this no need
5. 00:10:468 (6) - ^ fixed
6. 00:15:110 (2) - move to 00:14:932 - fixed
7. 00:30:735 (6,7) - change to slider no need
8. 00:31:271 - add circle no need
9. 00:43:146 (2,3) - change to slider no need
10. 00:43:324 (4,5) - ^ no need
11. 01:03:682 (2) - move to 01:03:503 - no need
12. 01:13:682 (4) - remove this no need
13. 01:14:128 - fixed
14. 01:15:021 (1) - change to a circle fixed
15. 01:22:968 (6) - remove this no need

[Insane]

1. Change AR to 8,5 or lower nah, map is hard enough
2. 00:19:575 (3) - remove this fixed
3. 00:26:985 - add circle fixed
4. 00:30:914 - ^ no need
5. 00:42:700 (1) - decrease to 00:42:878 - fixed
6. 00:42:968 - add circle no need
7. 01:23:593 (5,1) - change to slider no need

Good Luck \w/

CelsiusLK wrote:

[Insane]

• 00:11:628 (2) - Move to x=409 y=186 for better stack with 00:12:343 (3) - fixed
  00:19:664 (3,4) - Stack wut
  00:20:557 (1,1) - Stack as much as i'd like to, it'd interfere with the blanket, so nty
  00:35:200 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm..I think flow break at (1) how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848183 changed, but didnt follow
  00:48:235 (9,1) - Better blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848145 fixed
  00:51:450 (1,2) - Stack at tail fixed
  00:53:950 (6,1) - Stack fixed
  01:06:985 (5) - Move to x=236 y=127 for better stack with 01:05:378 (5) - no need
  01:08:771 (3,4,5) - How about change placement of (5)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848159 no need
  01:12:343 (6) - Hmm... how about move to x=217 y=137 for better flow no need
  01:22:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better star https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848132 just realsied it looks really bad, thanks

[Hard]

• 00:08:771 (8) - Move to x=223 y=230 to avoid overlap no need
  00:25:378 (12) - Move to x=332 y=160 to avoid little overlap with 00:24:664 (10) - fixed
  00:58:414 (1,2,3,4) - How about make triangle and stack the one you made before? Because I feel like the song aren't really suit to stop the cursor so I guess it better to let the players move the cursor with the song. Also when I play this part I usually move my cursor around in triangle shape automatically xD fixed
  01:04:307 (4,1) - Stack at tail fixed

[Normal]

• 00:21:807 (2,1) - Stack at tail already too far
  00:28:950 (4,1) - Better blanket little https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848307 fixed
  00:36:450 - How about this rhythm ? http://puu.sh/anGus/8150397ffe.jpg fixed
  00:42:521 (5,1) - Nazi DS=1.0x its very near, i don't think it matters
  00:58:950 (3,1) - ฺBetter stack at tail fixed
  01:13:235 (5) - Move to x=172 y=308 for better stack with 01:11:450 (1) - fixed

Good luck

Moo-Chan wrote:

From your modding queue~ The M4M

[Insane]

1. 00:01:628 (5,1) - Maybe find a way to blanket these? no need
2. 00:23:771 (1) - Move to x:390 y:159 fixed
3. 00:25:378 (1) - Make this slider match 00:24:843 (2) fixed
4. 00:48:771 (1) - Place it away from the previous slider no need
5. 01:10:557 (5) - I'm pretty sure this slider is un-rankable no need
6. 01:25:021 (4) - ^^[ color=#BF0000]no need[/color]
7. 01:28:950 (4) - This is just ugly lol nah

Well that's all I see~ Hope to see your mod soon !

P o M u T a wrote:

hi.

[General]

1. why you have 'op' tag? Don't need 'op'. already you have 'opening'. Please remove it. done

[Normal]

1. 00:06:450 (1) - add finish slider head. because symbals part. really sad. done
2. 00:37:878 (2) - add finish. symbals. done
3. 01:25:378 (7) - add clap slider end. really fit this part. done

[Hard]

1. 00:00:736 (1) - add finish slider head. symbal. done
2. 00:06:450 (1) - add finish slider head. symbal. done
3. 00:26:450 (1) - add finish. done

[Insane]

1. 00:22:164 (1,1) - remove NC. why NC? not have mean. really don't need! thought twice, maybe not good for NC, thanks!
2. 00:26:450 (3) - add finish.done
3. 00:55:021 (1,2) - both overlaps is bit ugly. move end point better. done

good luck!

340 wrote:

[General]
whole map have different kiai times. this isn't good. not sure if i should have fixed, cuz its the GD conflict

[Insane]

1. 00:02:343 (8,1) - this overlap looks crappy redone
2. 00:14:307 (3,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/ap1gj/e2b5684504.jpg fixed
3. 00:16:271 (7) - clap on the end of slider doesn't fits here at all i think its fine
4. 00:18:860 (7,8) - delete these claps done
5. 00:40:378 (2) - additions = drum + clap done
6. 00:49:128 (3,4,5) - delete these claps done
7. 00:52:878 (3,4) - crappy flow ;( changed it up a little
8. 01:04:128 (4,5) - ^ fixed
9. 01:06:093 (2,3) - swap these circles on the timeline done
10. 01:16:628 (2,1) - this spacing is too little fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:04:664 (5,6) - this spacing is too little fixed
2. 00:10:021 (5,6) - ^ fixed
3. 00:25:914 (2,1) - ^ fixed
4. 00:29:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - unreadable and too hard for hard fixed, farewell my favourite pattern...
5. 01:00:200 (2) - crappy flow fixed
6. 01:21:271 (1,2) - this blanket isn't perfect fixed
7. 01:23:057 (7) - crappy flow fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:44:664 (5,2) - traps in normal? are you kidding me? have to rethink
2. 00:51:450 (1,2,3) - too hard for normal fixed
3. 01:28:414 (1,2) - stacking on the end of slider isn't good idea for normal fixed

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: rashisa.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51454
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Rashisa (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:らしさ
Artist:SUPER BEAVER
ArtistUnicode:SUPER BEAVER
Creator:handsome
Version:Pjecoo's Easy
Source:ばらかもん
Tags:barakamon naru junon boy opening handa seishuu clyine pjecoo testapple
BeatmapID:460382
BeatmapSetID:190486

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"barakamonp.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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88950,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,5,0,0


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P o M u T a wrote:

hi.

[Clyine's Extra]

1. 00:01:985 (1) - add finish slider head. strong symbals part. fixed
2. 00:06:450 (4) - sound was already dead. so, Fit NC. fixed
3. 01:28:950 (6) - why added finish slider head? this part calm vocal sound.. blast. fixed

good luck!

340 wrote:

you updated my map after i modded two extras, so some of suggestions can be already fixed -_-

[General]
whole map have different kiai times. this isn't good.

[Clyine's Extra]
so many claps. -_- Claps best hitsounds

1. 00:07:878 (1) - nobody likes sliders that repeats more than 1 times you may make sth like this http://puu.sh/ap02u/da72502322.jpg its perfectly readable and playablw now. doing it your way causes to player to hit on a red tick without much of a point
2. 00:20:557 (7,1) - this blanket isn't perfect http://puu.sh/ap09z/480359213a.jpg Fixed
3. 00:30:735 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/ap0bO/59ae83390b.jpg Fixed
4. 00:27:878 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:34:307 (1,1) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:36:807 (2) - finish doesnt fits here Fixed
7. 00:39:307 (1,2) - that overlap looks crappy ;( Fixed
8. 01:17:878 (2) - the fuck? this is TOO suddenly and TOO confusing. perfectly intuitive to me
9. 01:28:949 (6) - that sound is longer than 2 ticks. extend it to big white tick.

I prefer the way it sounds now

rhalp10 wrote:

rhalp's Modding Queues [ForEver OPEN]

Hello from this queues !!


[GENERAL]

Tags conflict with Clyine's Extra diff.
Tags conflict with Hard diff.
Tags conflict with Insane diff.
Tags conflict with Pjecoo's Easy diff.
Tags conflict with TestApple's Extra diff.

[Insane]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:26:271
[Clyine's Extra]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:26:450
GOOD LUCK !! :D
AiMod best mod

_Stan wrote:

hi m4m
[Normal]
00:18:950 (4) - (248,204) fixed
00:23:593 (1,3) - a little weird relook
00:26:807 (3,1) - blanket fixed
00:29:307 (1,2,3) - different DS fixed
00:35:735 (3,4) - ^ fixed
00:42:521 (5,1) - according to your DS before, you can decrease the ds here like 00:47:164 (5,6) - fixed
00:58:593 (2,3) - IDK NM can jump or not fixed
01:21:807 (5,2) - overlap it perfect fixed

[Hard]
00:26:450 (1,2) - overlap it perfect fixed
00:32:878 (5,6,1) - DS fixed
00:51:093 (4,1) - you can blanket it fixed
00:53:235 (4,6) - ^ fixed
01:02:521 (3,5) - blanket it more nice fixed
01:05:914 (2,5) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:19:664 (3) - down the curve fixed
00:21:628 (8,1) - blanket fixed
00:43:593 (8) - weird ok
00:45:021 (5,6,7) - DS fixed
00:51:985 (4) - (384,152) fixed

two EXs is so hard for me so I cannot mod, sorry

and GOOD LUCK!

DavidEd wrote:

m4m ^.^

excuse me if i may be unclear sometimes (not really an experienced modder xD)
this modding is all based on my opinions

Normal

too many claps mate

00:00:736 (1,3) - make them symmetrical http://puu.sh/arWI3/0a7bc64093.jpg ?? nah, its ok
00:03:235 (4) - move to x:112 y:124 nah, ds 1.0 i wanna keep
00:03:593 (1,2,3) - move to x:64 y:192 ^
00:05:200 (4) - move to x:308 y:208 ^
00:13:593 (3) - really weird slider keep
00:17:521 (6) - ^ ^
00:43:057 (1) - ^ and you could move it down to x:288 y:156 i wanna keep ds, but changed
00:55:021 (1) - weird slider lol you should realise by now this things are intentional
01:05:378 - no new combo fixed
01:10:378 (6) - weird slider keep
01:28:414 (1) - delete note fixed
01:28:950 - replace slider with a single note keep

use only one distance snap for normal maps. and work on the visual issues and spacing (use aimod).

Hard

same here as in the normal difficulty. kind of abusing the clap

00:29:307 (1,1) - those sliders really confused me the first time i played the map keep!
00:43:503 (6) - if you listen closely to the song the last note in that stream is a little bit early. maybe make it look like this? this is harder to play

this difficulty also had alot of weird sliders like in the normal one. i had no other problems with it tho, good job!

good luck with your map!

regenz wrote:

Form my M4M Queue p/3264006

[General]

Why 4 BG instead of use 1 BG and made storyboard to reduce the file size. will do this!
some diff has last section kiai time you can remove it so it'll be same for the rest of mapset. its GD so i keep

[Normal]

00:00:736 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You should remove all clap in this part it not go well with the song fix
00:06:450 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this part is ok with clap however it need to reduce volume 35 percent fix
00:15:021 This loud volume timing make your clap is worst 40 percent is decent for me fix
00:15:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - Spam Clap every beat is really bad You should only use at 2nd beat and 4th beat of measure. fix
remove clap on 1 ( 1st beat of measure )
clap on 2 is fine ( 2nd beat of measure )
remove clap on 3's head (start of slider 3rd beat of measure)
clap on 3's tail is fine ( end of slider 4th beat of measure)
and go on remove unnecessary clap
some place you cannot put it 00:20:735 (1) - just remove it put the clap only 1st and 3rd beat this is very basic hitsound for mapper.

00:26:093 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this part is good but some part is missing clap fix
00:35:021 (1,3,6) - add clap fix
00:38:414 (4) - add clap at end of slider fix
00:38:236 (3) - remove clap fix

again 00:43:057 ear destroying part reduce volume to 40 percent plz check and remove unnecessary clap make sure do like a red bold text above

00:52:164 kiai time also 40 percent and do as red bold text again fix

01:17:164 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - again fix hitsound plz fix

01:28:414 again 40 percent fix

[Hard]

same problem as Normal hit sound volume and placement
compare to insane it's very close gap Try to reduce the clustering of the note try to use 1 beat slider and / or 1 beat return slider rather than rapid pure circle without blank some hitsound use soft some use normal plz made it same as normal because it's all your difficult well insane same too will try to redo!

[Insane]

01:26:271 remove kiai time . make it same as hard and normal okay, but i change hard and normal.
same hit sound problem like other diff

more other than that weird place of newcombo seem like you use a vocal base to judge when to newcombo but that's not constant
newcombo is determine when player got a bonus hitpoint when hit a note so you can keep it constant.

I highly suggest you to start Newcombo base on Measure not vocal.



there 's 4 beat of measure 1 Big white line and 3 small white line Just new combo every big whiteline (first beat of measure)
so It keep a player gain life constant what ever song type. for Normal Easy and Hard
it depending how "cluster" of the note had.

but for me it's easy and normal IS NC every 8 beats for Hard is 8 beats also harder than that is 4 beats

but current hard is clustering is equal insane diff. so it's 4 beats. thank you! will use it

Goodluck

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi, for my modding queue

SUPER BEAVER - Rashisa (TV Size)

[Normal]
- 00:23:593 (1,3) - try to improve this placing ? fix
- 01:10:378 (6,1) - improve the alignment of the (6) slider fix
- 01:11:985 (3,4,5) - try to blanket here - or something to make this pattern symetrical fix
- 01:21:450 (4,5) - blanket ? no need
- 01:27:878 (4) - improve the curve fix
- 01:26:807 (2,3) - align them? no need

[Hard]
This diff is really hard for a Hard diff. Maybe reduce a little the AR ? drop to 7.5
- 00:02:164 (1,3) - try a little blanket ? no need
- 00:12:164 (7,2,3) - hard to read for a medium player. Really. fix
- 00:21:985 (7,8,9,10) - try to make this easier to read ? no need
- 00:22:878 (1,2,3) - blanket here fix
- 00:29:307 (1,1) - hard to follow no need
- 00:32:521 (3,5) - avoid stacking fix
- 00:41:271 (4,5) - ^ fix
- 00:51:093 (4,1) - improve this blanket ? no need
- 00:56:807 (1,2,3,4) - improve the pattern ? fix
- 01:02:521 (3,5) - improve the blanket ???
- 01:07:521 (9) - be careful when using these sliders. ok

[Insane]
- 00:01:628 (5) - make a better form ? no need
- 00:02:521 (1,2) - avoid stacking ???
- 00:26:807 (4,5,6) - the (5) isn't aligned fix
- 00:45:021 (5,6,7) - improve the distances no need
- 01:20:557 (7,8) - stacki it with the slider end? no need
- 01:21:450 (2,3,6) - make the slider centered no need


Good luck to get this ranked!

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hihi!
I'm here for mod~ Note that these are only suggestions, and my English is poor anyway
Arghhh I love your profile pic (out of topic lol)


[Normal]
00:01:985 (3) - WTH is there a fixed turning point there? (So rude, sry for that) standard wave slider.
00:07:521 (3) - Seems not placing it in the nicer position suggestion? see nothing wrong
00:11:093 (4,1) - A little crashing each other fixed
00:24:843 (3) - This slider seems strange for me standard blanket slider
00:26:807 (3) - Change fixed turning point x:264 y:364 to x:276 y:324 fixed
00:29:307 (5,6) - NOOOOO !!! Don't place them like that TT rethink
00:29:307 (5) - NC fixed
00:35:021 (1,2,3,4) - OMG I definitely love this part ty!
00:46:093 (7) - NC fixed
00:57:700 - Add a circle here to satisfy the vocal? rethink
01:01:093 (3) - It's too over the grid it is fine lol
01:22:878 (5) - NC fixed
01:23:235 (1) - No NC fixed

OMG A lot of Hard, Insane and Extra diffs... And I don't find big problems in them so that's all of my mod~
Hope your mapset gets ranked soon!
Oh, I gave a star for your mapset too thanks!