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Topic Starter
hehe
thanks for mod :*, remapped a lot of stuff but kept some!

Rtyzen wrote:

Mod on request!~ Took awhile but done it lol
[General]
  1. About the offset, I dunno sounds better at 736 to me lol i think 740 works?
  2. Also, change up the volumes. Don't just have everything at 100% and then the softer parts at 75%. and avoid 100% at parts other than the chorus I guess. It's quite loud. done
  3. Might want to change your combo colours done
  4. Your metadata must be constant throughout all diffs. This includes Artist, Title, Source, Tags, Audio preview time. For example, the name for normal has TV Size while the rest do not. (In case you didn't know, changing the metadata in one diff does not change it for all other diffs :P) done
  5. Your Uninherited Timing points(i.e. all red timing points) are not constant throughout all the diffs. (Green ones do not need to be constant). Similarly to metadata, changing one won't affect the others in the other diff, so you need to change them all manually. Also, when you change the offset via the red timing points, the notes in the map will not snap automatically(e.g. your hard and insane are completely unsnapped lol). You can fix this by going to Timing > Resnap all notes done
  6. Be sure to check AIMod (Ctrl-shift-A) more regularly to find out common and easily pointed out mistakes. fixed, nothing is left there :D
  7. Also, Hitsound more. terrible at this, but will try

[Normal]
  1. 00:01:385 - Redundant timing point?
  2. 00:07:888 (4,2) - Don't overlap
  3. 00:07:888 (4,4) - You can align the ends of these 2
  4. 00:08:960 (1) Remove NC and put here 00:09:317 (2)
  5. 00:10:021 (4,5) - Bad stack
  6. 00:11:103 (5) - NC?
  7. 00:14:674 (1) - Remove NC and put here 00:15:031 (2)
  8. 00:16:638 (1) - Remove NC and put here 00:17:888 (3)
  9. 00:16:817 (2,3,4) - End of 2 dont line up straight with 3 and 4 :(
  10. 00:20:031 (1) - Remove NC and put here 00:20:745 (3)
  11. 00:17:888 (3,4,5,6) - Try making a square or a parallelogram? Looks weird
  12. 00:20:745 (3,5) - Head of 3 and end of 5 bad overlap
  13. 00:23:603 (1,4) - Don't overlap
  14. 00:30:745 (4,1) - Distance snap too wide
  15. 00:44:674 (5,1) - Bad overlap
  16. 00:52:174 (4) - NC
  17. 00:54:674 (1) - Remove NC here and put here 00:55:031 (2)
  18. 00:56:817 (1) - Remove NC here and put here 00:57:531 (3)
  19. 00:59:664 (1) - Remove NC here and put here 01:00:021 (2)
  20. 01:05:745 (2,3) - Blanket better
  21. 01:07:521 (2,3) - Blanket better
  22. 01:11:817 (2) - Try something like this for the rhythm
  23. 01:22:174 (6,1) - DS too close

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:742 (1,2,3) - DS too close
  2. 00:11:994 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I am not sure whether this part is rankable. Too many slider overlaps
  3. 00:16:634 (7,1) - DS
  4. 00:32:352 (2,3,4) - Odd DS(i.e. same time apart(2&3 and 3&4), but different distance apart. Can be very confusing). Fix it
  5. 00:43:155 (6,7,8,9) - This stream looks off. Just make a curve slider and convert to stream (Under compose in case you didn't know)
  6. 00:40:744 (6) - NC
  7. 00:41:459 (1) - Remove NC and put here 00:42:888 (5)
  8. 00:55:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Odd DS
  9. 01:04:673 (6,1) - Distance Snap too wide
  10. 01:11:280 (1,2,3) - Bad overlap
  11. 01:11:459 (2,3,4) - Odd DS
  12. Overall, seems abit hard for a hard, but according to star diff it isn't, so I guess it's OK.

[Insane]
  1. 00:08:412 (1,2,3) - Odd DS
  2. 00:08:412 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Odd DS (unnecessary)
  3. 00:19:663 (4,5) - DS too high.(Even for insane IMO) Slider 4 shouldn't be ending on a blue tick anyway
  4. 00:23:769 (1,2,3) - DS too small (in comparison to the previous part)
  5. 00:43:589 (9,1) - Remove 9 and move 1 back one tick (then extend 1 to end at the original ending time)
  6. 00:43:678 (1,1) - Bad overlap
  7. 00:52:162 (5) - NC
  8. 00:55:019 (5) - NC
  9. 01:04:305 (5,1) - Jump here is bad because the flow is broken IMO
  10. 01:04:305 (5,5) - Bad stack on the end of slider 5
  11. 01:05:912 (1,2,3) - People are going to mistaken this for a triplet. I guarantee it.
  12. 01:11:269 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why do you do this to us :( :P
  13. 01:18:233 (5,6) - Odd DS
  14. 01:22:876 (6) - NC
  15. The flow on this diff is weird lol. Breaks unnecessarily in alot of places in an attempt to make it harder.


That's all from me, Map has potential. Good luck :D ~
Swiftheart
Thanks for the mod!
-Nya-
Hello! M4M from my modding queue.
Thanks again for the mod.
Sorry, but the insane is too hard for me to mod.
Well, here's my mod:

Normal:
1) This diff may be too hard for a normal. I suggest lowering the Approach Rate to 4, and the Overall Difficulty to 4 as well.
2) 00:11:097~ Remove NC
3) 00:28:954~ Remove NC, and then add NC here: 00:29:311.
4) 00:31:811~ Remove NC, and then add NC here: 00:32:168.
5) 00:54:668~ Remove NC here, and then add NC here: 00:55:025.
6) 01:01:097~ Change this slider a bit so that it's mirroring this slider: 01:00:025. Like this:
7) 01:14:668~ This slider is too short; lengthen it to this point: 01:15:204
8) 01:15:561~ I don't really like this spinner here. Maybe remove it?
9) 01:28:954~ I suggest removing this slider and replacing it with a spinner instead that reaches this point: 01:30:025. Something like this:


Hard:
1) 00:03:418~ NC here.
2) 00:23:597~ This triplet is not stacked properly on this triplet: 00:21:989.
3) 00:26:275~ Maybe remove this hitcircle. (It seems out of place to me.)
4) 00:29:132~ I like this overlapping part. :D
5) 00:36:811~ This slider is too long. Maybe shorten it to this point: 00:37:168.
6) 00:44:132~ This part is a bit confusing. Maybe lengthen this slider: 00:43:507 to this point: 00:44:043, and remove this hitcircle: 00:44:132. Then it will look something like this:
7) 00:52:168~ NC here.

Overall, great mapset.
Good Luck! :D
HabiHolic
PM Request

[General]

- This mapset need Easy diff
- delete latterbox during breaks
- change BG Size 1366 x 768, 1024 x 768
- add hitsound please

[Normal]

HP - 1, AR - 2, OD -2 batter. now setting very high

00:00:740 (1) - Flow is strange. I think it is necessary to calibrate the slider.
00:10:739 (4,1) - swap NC please. The flow of the music will be better right
00:24:847 (3,4) - (3) note delete and 00:25:025 (4) - this move 00:24:847 - here slider end 00:25:382 - here
00:25:739 - If you were to modify advice on If you have to add a note here

add hitsound please
all hitsound done call me back
Topic Starter
hehe
thanks for mod!

LizeKotze wrote:

Hello! M4M from my modding queue.
Thanks again for the mod.
Sorry, but the insane is too hard for me to mod.
Well, here's my mod:

Normal:
1) This diff may be too hard for a normal. I suggest lowering the Approach Rate to 4, and the Overall Difficulty to 4 as well. fixed
2) 00:11:097~ Remove NC fixed
3) 00:28:954~ Remove NC, and then add NC here: 00:29:311. fixed
4) 00:31:811~ Remove NC, and then add NC here: 00:32:168. fixed
5) 00:54:668~ Remove NC here, and then add NC here: 00:55:025. fixed
6) 01:01:097~ Change this slider a bit so that it's mirroring this slider: 01:00:025. Like this: fixed
7) 01:14:668~ This slider is too short; lengthen it to this point: 01:15:204 fixed
8) 01:15:561~ I don't really like this spinner here. Maybe remove it? think its fine, change if more complaint
9) 01:28:954~ I suggest removing this slider and replacing it with a spinner instead that reaches this point: 01:30:025. Something like this: nah, i want this to stay to be constant through all diffs


Hard:
1) 00:03:418~ NC here. fixed
2) 00:23:597~ This triplet is not stacked properly on this triplet: 00:21:989. fixed
3) 00:26:275~ Maybe remove this hitcircle. (It seems out of place to me.) fixed
4) 00:29:132~ I like this overlapping part. :D thanks!
5) 00:36:811~ This slider is too long. Maybe shorten it to this point: 00:37:168. fixed
6) 00:44:132~ This part is a bit confusing. Maybe lengthen this slider: 00:43:507 to this point: 00:44:043, and remove this hitcircle: 00:44:132. Then it will look something like this: its fine to me imo
7) 00:52:168~ NC here. fixed
Yuthuil
Normal:

00:05:271 Add a hitcircle?
00:18:597 (3) - replace with short turn back slider while eliminating four?
00:20:739 (1,3) - This pattern doesn't look too nice.
00:22:168 (3) - extend to red tick?
00:36:454 (5) - end this pointing towards the next object - this is normal.
00:37:882 (2) - replace with slider? then eliminate hitcircle?
00:46:097 (3) - Blanket the hitcircle with this slider?

Hard:

01:11:275 (1,2) - The hitsounds here are weird.
01:24:311 (3,5) - I can't see the slider tracks here. It's weird - and broken.
01:27:525 (1) - ^
01:28:954 (7) - This should end on the red tick.

I think your HP drain's too high.
smallbeans
Hi, I come here for M4M.
Sorry for a little Chinese in following modding, I hope you know what it means.

First, your hitsound volume is too loud, please decrease it by 30%, really.

[Insane]
Why you overmap this diff. ;_ ;

00:04:668 (7) you should also jump this after a big jump. 或許可以將這裡和 00:06:454 做一個搭配. (sorry I don't know how to describe in English...)
00:12:704 (4) don't stack this note, it decrease the flow.
00:24:400 (5) this 1/4 heard weird, move it to 00:24:222.
00:24:757 (2) delete this 1/4 note.
00:30:739 (1,2,3) you just have a big jump before, these three note may cause player misunderstand it also 1/2 jumps, please change it.
00:58:954 (4) I think it should be this : http://i.imgur.com/SUtjLp2.png
00:59:311 it should change, just like the last picture.

ok, others I don't know how to mod, sorry.

[Hard]

00:29:132 (1,2,3,4,5) this is a bad use in Hard, the slider is too short and can't see clear.
00:43:507 (6) why this is not as same as Insane? Please fix it.

[Normal]

00:08:954 (5) fix the blanket with 00:07:882(4)
01:12:704 (4) fix the blanket with 01:13:239(5)
01:14:311 (6,7) stack not well with 01:12:704 (4)'s end.
01:14:668 (7) slider should ends at 01:15:205

End of the mod.
Good luck!
Bonzi
Hello! M4M here!

This is literally my second mod ever, but i'll do my best to make it helpful!

Let's see...

General

The hitsound volume is loud, especially in the kiai. Decreasing all section's volume around 20/30% should go.


[Insane]

00:12:704 (4) - Stacking this note under the slider end basically kills the flow of the next circles.
00:23:775 (1) - Again, this is difficult to read because it's covered by the slider end that is disappearing, try moving it elsewhere.
00:24:757 (2) - i feel like there's really no need to this 1/4, just delete it
00:24:847 (3) - the reverse arrow is covered by the previous 1/4 triplet (00:24:311 (4,5,6) -) making it difficult to read. try moving it!
00:26:097 (1,2,3) - i dont'like these three cirlces, i'd put an a 1/1 slider instead, argh i can't explain why.
00:28:598 (8,1) - the transition from the slow part to the jumps is just too wild. i'd put one or two 1/2 sliders instead of full circles (but the pattern is actually cool, though ;_;)
00:30:562 (8,1,2,3) - Again, the transition from the jump to the three 1/1 circles is confusing. try respacing them or replace with a slider.
00:43:597 (1) - Object end is not snapped!
01:10:561 (5) - same as above ^
01:16:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this a is just a mess, i played it and i couldn't read it for two times, do something, make magic.
01:28:598 (3) - oh, what a sweet end...BOOM object's end loud sound ruins everything, make a green line and silence it :)!

Hard

many,MANY spacing errors and strange slider shapes ;_;, but i'll focus on major errors.

00:09:311 (3,4) - blanket this circle better
00:29:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is basically a mess. this would be not easy to read, remember that this is an hard diff!
00:33:597 (1,2,3) - not that bad, but not that good eithe. You can just do better!
00:51:454 (1) - I'd put this next on the next slider because many player will think this as 2-repeat arrow slider with this spacing, but this is 3-repeats.
01:21:989 (3,4) - i don't see the point of these, really.
01:28:954 (7) - Same on what did i say at insane diff.

Normal


wooho, didn't found anything, good job!
Topic Starter
hehe
MisakiYuri > thanks for mod!

MisakiYuri wrote:

Normal:

00:05:271 Add a hitcircle? fixed
00:18:597 (3) - replace with short turn back slider while eliminating four? i think too confusing for normal
00:20:739 (1,3) - This pattern doesn't look too nice. hmm i like it
00:22:168 (3) - extend to red tick? dont fit
00:36:454 (5) - end this pointing towards the next object - this is normal. fixed
00:37:882 (2) - replace with slider? then eliminate hitcircle? will remain now, fix if complain
00:46:097 (3) - Blanket the hitcircle with this slider? done

Hard:

01:11:275 (1,2) - The hitsounds here are weird. fixed
01:24:311 (3,5) - I can't see the slider tracks here. It's weird - and broken. fixed
01:27:525 (1) - ^ fixed
01:28:954 (7) - This should end on the red tick. no need

I think your HP drain's too high.

smallbeans > thanks for mod!

smallbeans wrote:

Hi, I come here for M4M.
Sorry for a little Chinese in following modding, I hope you know what it means.

First, your hitsound volume is too loud, please decrease it by 30%, really. fixed

[Insane]
Why you overmap this diff. ;_ ; fun

00:04:668 (7) you should also jump this after a big jump. 或許可以將這裡和 00:06:454 做一個搭配. (sorry I don't know how to describe in English...) fixed, its ok i understand!
00:12:704 (4) don't stack this note, it decrease the flow. fixed
00:24:400 (5) this 1/4 heard weird, move it to 00:24:222. fixed
00:24:757 (2) delete this 1/4 note. fixed
00:30:739 (1,2,3) you just have a big jump before, these three note may cause player misunderstand it also 1/2 jumps, please change it. fixed
00:58:954 (4) I think it should be this : http://i.imgur.com/SUtjLp2.png fixed
00:59:311 it should change, just like the last picture.fixed

ok, others I don't know how to mod, sorry.

[Hard]

00:29:132 (1,2,3,4,5) this is a bad use in Hard, the slider is too short and can't see clear. a lot of mixed opinion, i wont change unless unrankable
00:43:507 (6) why this is not as same as Insane? Please fix it. WILL GET BACK TO IT! thank you!

[Normal]

00:08:954 (5) fix the blanket with 00:07:882(4) fixed
01:12:704 (4) fix the blanket with 01:13:239(5) fixed
01:14:311 (6,7) stack not well with 01:12:704 (4)'s end. fixed
01:14:668 (7) slider should ends at 01:15:205 fixed

End of the mod.
Good luck!

ThEBonzi > thanks for mod!

ThEBonzi wrote:

Hello! M4M here!

This is literally my second mod ever, but i'll do my best to make it helpful!

Let's see...

General

The hitsound volume is loud, especially in the kiai. Decreasing all section's volume around 20/30% should go.


[Insane]

00:12:704 (4) - Stacking this note under the slider end basically kills the flow of the next circles. fixed
00:23:775 (1) - Again, this is difficult to read because it's covered by the slider end that is disappearing, try moving it elsewhere. fixed
00:24:757 (2) - i feel like there's really no need to this 1/4, just delete it fixed
00:24:847 (3) - the reverse arrow is covered by the previous 1/4 triplet (00:24:311 (4,5,6) -) making it difficult to read. try moving it! stay
00:26:097 (1,2,3) - i dont'like these three cirlces, i'd put an a 1/1 slider instead, argh i can't explain why. maybe later change
00:28:598 (8,1) - the transition from the slow part to the jumps is just too wild. i'd put one or two 1/2 sliders instead of full circles (but the pattern is actually cool, though ;_;) changed pattern
00:30:562 (8,1,2,3) - Again, the transition from the jump to the three 1/1 circles is confusing. try respacing them or replace with a slider. fixed
00:43:597 (1) - Object end is not snapped! fixed
01:10:561 (5) - same as above ^ fixed
01:16:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this a is just a mess, i played it and i couldn't read it for two times, do something, make magic. fixed
01:28:598 (3) - oh, what a sweet end...BOOM object's end loud sound ruins everything, make a green line and silence it :)! fixed

Hard

many,MANY spacing errors and strange slider shapes ;_;, but i'll focus on major errors.

00:09:311 (3,4) - blanket this circle better fixed
00:29:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is basically a mess. this would be not easy to read, remember that this is an hard diff! keeping unless unrankable
00:33:597 (1,2,3) - not that bad, but not that good eithe. You can just do better! stay
00:51:454 (1) - I'd put this next on the next slider because many player will think this as 2-repeat arrow slider with this spacing, but this is 3-repeats. stay
01:21:989 (3,4) - i don't see the point of these, really. it is mapped to song (guitar)
01:28:954 (7) - Same on what did i say at insane diff. fixed

Normal


wooho, didn't found anything, good job!
Mortem
Hi, as requested from my queue.

Normal
00:06:450 (1) - Move it little bit down and little bit left. There is 00:05:200 (4) - and it's overlaying it.
00:15:735 (3) - Improve design of this slider.
00:27:521 (1,2) - I don't like the spacing here. It's really confusing for "Normal" players.
00:38:236 (3,4) - Put (3) on (4).
00:42:164 (4) - This is really confusing for "Normal" players. Put it like this.
00:46:807 (4) - Make stack with 00:45:378 (1) -
01:11:807 (2) - Put on (3) like you did here: 01:14:307 (6,7) -
01:15:557 (1) - Remove it. It didn't fit there imo.


Hard seems fine to me, but I think you should reduce the AR by 1. Also, there can be some mistakes, but I didn't see any. Except for the sliders.
About GD, I started maping it, so I'll send you diff in PM.

Hope that'll helps
If not, then sorry.

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
hehe
Pjecco > thanks for mod!

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi, as requested from my queue.

Normal
00:06:450 (1) - Move it little bit down and little bit left. There is 00:05:200 (4) - and it's overlaying it.
00:15:735 (3) - Improve design of this slider.fixed
00:27:521 (1,2) - I don't like the spacing here. It's really confusing for "Normal" players. fixed, big mistake LOL
00:38:236 (3,4) - Put (3) on (4).
00:42:164 (4) - This is really confusing for "Normal" players. Put it like this. fixed
00:46:807 (4) - Make stack with 00:45:378 (1) - fixed
01:11:807 (2) - Put on (3) like you did here: 01:14:307 (6,7) - fixed
01:15:557 (1) - Remove it. It didn't fit there imo.
its ok i think
Hard seems fine to me, but I think you should reduce the AR by 1. Also, there can be some mistakes, but I didn't see any. Except for the sliders.
About GD, I started maping it, so I'll send you diff in PM.

Hope that'll helps
If not, then sorry.

Good Luck![/color]
Clyine
http://puu.sh/agTf9/81bfe3b609.osu

ME IZ DONE WOOOOOOOO.

backup
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Untitled.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51454
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Rashisa (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:らしさ
Artist:SUPER BEAVER
ArtistUnicode:SUPER BEAVER
Creator:handsome
Version:Clyine's Extra
Source:ばらかもん
Tags:barakamon naru junon boy op opening handa seishuu
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:8.6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.6
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Background Colour Transformations
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Combo2 : 128,128,64
Combo3 : 0,128,0
Combo4 : 64,128,128

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Topic Starter
hehe
why not, Clyinsane though, LOLOLOLOL

Clyine wrote:

http://puu.sh/agTf9/81bfe3b609.osu

ME IZ DONE WOOOOOOOO.

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360,92,51182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,80,51271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,80,51450,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,80,51629,2,0,P|468:132|440:236,1,180
184,264,52164,1,12,0:0:0:0:
453,223,52343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,56,52521,2,0,P|176:64|156:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,304,52879,2,0,P|372:304|404:280,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,32,53236,5,8,0:0:0:0:
395,288,53414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,240,53593,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,200,53771,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,156,53950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,116,54129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,76,54307,6,0,P|156:108|160:212,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,232,54754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,236,54843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,160,55021,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,236,55200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,344,55379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,96,55557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,344,55736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,96,55914,2,0,L|352:60,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,184,56271,6,0,L|208:224,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,304,56629,2,0,P|484:244|476:208,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,168,56986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,180,57164,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,96,57343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,108,57521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,24,57700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,36,57879,2,0,P|320:64|340:156,1,180,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,212,58414,5,0,0:0:0:0:
343,136,58593,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,212,58771,2,0,P|100:280|116:300,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,232,59129,2,0,P|372:184|340:136,1,90
276,192,59486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,149,59664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,124,59843,5,0,0:0:0:0:
357,149,60021,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,96,60200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,149,60379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,152,60557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,149,60736,6,0,L|460:160,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,136,61093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
446,158,61271,2,0,P|496:228|412:304,1,180
208,136,61807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
449,298,61986,2,0,P|376:312|344:288,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,216,62343,2,0,P|156:200|196:220,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,300,62700,5,0,0:0:0:0:
408,256,62789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,212,62879,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,312,63057,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,63146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,63236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,320,63414,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,276,63504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,232,63593,2,0,P|56:160|84:144,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,120,63950,2,0,P|296:88|248:80,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,316,64307,2,0,P|296:352|336:348,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,108,64664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
323,351,64843,6,0,P|332:276|296:240,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,124,65200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,267,65379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,124,65557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,184,65736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,96,65914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,164,66093,6,8,P|380:224|276:200,1,180,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,332,66629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,215,66807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,332,66986,2,0,P|72:228|116:156,1,180
340,124,67521,1,8,0:0:0:0:
106,165,67700,2,0,B|200:244|200:244|208:132|304:116,1,270,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,316,68414,5,0,1:0:0:0:
308,108,68593,1,8,1:0:0:0:
432,296,68771,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,88,68950,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,272,69129,2,0,B|504:200|504:200|420:208|400:128,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,60,69664,5,8,0:0:0:0:
415,164,69843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,60,70021,2,0,P|164:120|168:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,70379,2,0,P|348:288|336:244,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,142,70736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,266,70914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,142,71093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,266,71271,2,0,P|272:276|244:264,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,142,71629,2,0,P|224:132|272:148,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,256,71986,6,0,P|480:224|492:168,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,40,72343,2,0,P|200:72|184:104,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,128,72611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,172,72700,2,0,P|136:224|96:224,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,320,73057,2,0,L|340:288,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,226,73414,2,0,P|56:184|56:156,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,156,73771,2,0,P|416:160|444:92,1,135
404,64,74129,5,0,1:0:0:0:
340,52,74218,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,68,74307,1,8,1:0:0:0:
248,120,74396,1,0,1:0:0:0:
248,184,74486,1,0,1:0:0:0:
284,236,74575,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,252,74664,1,8,1:0:0:0:
404,236,74754,1,0,1:0:0:0:
448,188,74843,2,0,P|488:248|476:296,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,316,75200,6,0,P|204:272|212:224,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,188,75557,1,4,0:0:0:0:
206,235,75736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,132,75914,1,4,0:0:0:0:
62,179,76093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
62,179,76271,2,4,P|86:83|170:71,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,284,76807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,67,76986,6,0,P|144:140|164:164,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,324,77343,2,0,P|376:268|356:232,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,324,77700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,324,77879,2,0,L|216:220,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,229,78236,5,8,0:0:0:0:
201,229,78414,2,0,P|128:176|128:108,1,135.000005149842,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,136,78771,5,0,0:0:0:0:
196,87,78950,2,0,L|121:136,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,204,79307,1,8,0:0:0:0:
121,136,79486,2,0,L|108:256,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,84,79843,2,0,L|396:148,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,292,80200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,141,80379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,292,80557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,140,80736,2,0,P|380:104|324:100,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,188,81093,6,0,P|112:232|152:236,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,208,81450,2,0,P|396:168|348:164,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,188,81807,1,8,0:0:0:0:
370,162,81986,2,0,L|336:52,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,216,82343,2,0,L|164:336,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,332,82700,2,0,P|380:272|268:320,1,225,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,332,83236,5,8,0:0:0:0:
188,328,83325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,300,83414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,252,83504,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,204,83593,2,0,L|168:100,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,117,83950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,128,84129,2,0,P|376:80|332:80,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,76,84486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
354,76,84664,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,296,84843,6,0,P|276:332|328:344,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,344,85200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,344,85379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
317,344,85557,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,304,85646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,260,85736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,116,85914,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,86093,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,116,86271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,280,86450,5,8,0:0:0:0:
184,116,86629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,299,86807,5,8,0:0:0:0:
184,116,86986,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,315,87164,5,8,0:0:0:0:
184,116,87343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,336,87521,5,8,0:0:0:0:
184,116,87700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,116,87879,5,8,0:0:0:0:
387,76,88057,1,8,0:0:0:0:
426,277,88236,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,317,88414,5,8,0:0:0:0:
387,76,88593,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,317,88950,2,0,L|300:212,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Clyine
;_;
neonat
Normal

00:04:307 (3) - end the slider at 00:04:843
00:06:450 (1,4) - if you want to stack the ends, stack perfectly, they are currently not aligned
00:20:735 (1,3) - this looks really weird
00:40:378 (1) - this doesn't really fit to the song as there is the start of vocals at 00:40:735 which is important yet overlooked here
01:03:593 (3) - new combo here instead of 01:02:878 (1)
01:13:235 (5,7) - blanket them
01:15:557 (1,1) - shift the spinner 01:15:557 (1) to start at 01:15:735 and end at 01:16:807 and remove 01:16:985 (1) and place a circle instead at 01:17:164 - this would fit the song better
01:23:593 (3) - place elsewhere, don't touch 01:21:807 (5)

Hard

00:10:468 (6) - this note is irrelevant, I suggest removing it
00:11:985 (6,7) - swap places, circle before slider, circle at 00:11:985 slider at 00:12:164
00:12:700 (8,1) - swap places like above ^ circle before slider, circle at 00:12:700 and slider at 00:12:878
00:19:307 (8) - less curvy, less scrunched up
00:29:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is too packed, it looks more confusing that it should be and doesn't look so nice
00:36:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird pattern to come up right after the previous one, they don't really mix
00:53:771 (5,6) - don't let them overlap with 00:52:164 (1,2,3)
01:00:200 (2) - less curve
01:08:414 (1) - too packed, show more of the slider body
01:09:843 (1) - ^
01:17:164 (2,1) - better blanket and because 01:17:700 (1) is so short, the overlap doesn't look that great because the body and end are covered
01:20:557 (5) - it goes over the beat at 01:20:735 which is important
01:21:093 (6) - too close to previous note
01:23:057 (7) - goes over the beat at 01:23:235 which is important

Insane

00:21:807 (1,2,3) - use the same shape
00:24:843 (2) - repeat arrow is covered by 00:24:485 (6) when hit and 300 comes out, this is unrankable
00:42:700 (1) - this is ugly looking
00:43:593 (1) - ^
00:44:307 (2) - not stacked on end of 00:43:593 (1)
00:45:021 (1) - not stacked on end of 00:43:593 (1)
00:45:021 (1,2,3) - looks too packed
00:53:057 (4) - goes over beat at 00:53:235 which is important
00:53:593 (5,6) - does it need to overlap
01:16:093 (3,4) - blanket
01:18:950 (8,1,2) - too close to each other
01:21:807 (4) - this doesn't fit into the music and rhythm, change the rhythm here

Clyine's Extra

00:01:986 (1) - the bend at the end of the slider is not nice looking
00:05:200 - the beat here is crucial, but you did not map to it
00:24:307 (3,5) - stack them
00:26:450 (1) - should end at 00:26:807 which makes more sense with the vocals, it ends in no-mans-land right now
00:27:879 (1) - ^
00:30:736 (1) - ^
00:37:879 (1,1,1) - ^
00:39:843 (2,3) - blanket
00:53:950 (5,1) - blanket better
01:01:271 (3,5) - stack the ends properly
01:04:843 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:06:093 (1) - remove finish on start of slider, it doesn't fit
01:13:771 (7) - you go over the beat at 01:13:950 which is important, end the slider there and add an additional circle to the stream
01:17:879 (4) - unexpected and doesn't fit the song, remove the slider velocity, it goes against the song. New combos also indicate a change which you didn't even use either. But this isn't a place to use a faster slider velocity, there is no reason to change it




Good luck
Clyine

neonat wrote:

Clyine's Extra

00:01:986 (1) - the bend at the end of the slider is not nice looking Made it a Smoother S.
00:05:200 - the beat here is crucial, but you did not map to it i was following the music here. the instruments end on the white tick
00:24:307 (3,5) - stack them Fixed
00:26:450 (1) - should end at 00:26:807 which makes more sense with the vocals, it ends in no-mans-land right now Changed to 2 sliders.
00:27:879 (1) - ^ Same
00:30:736 (1) - ^ Same
00:37:879 (1,1,1) - ^ Same
00:39:843 (2,3) - blanket Fixed
00:53:950 (5,1) - blanket betterFixed
01:01:271 (3,5) - stack the ends properly Fixed
01:04:843 (1) - finish on start of slider Fixed
01:06:093 (1) - remove finish on start of slider, it doesn't fit Fixed
01:13:771 (7) - you go over the beat at 01:13:950 which is important, end the slider there and add an additional circle to the stream Fixed too
01:17:879 (4) - unexpected and doesn't fit the song, remove the slider velocity, it goes against the song. New combos also indicate a change which you didn't even use either. But this isn't a place to use a faster slider velocity, there is no reason to change it Ah i did that to emphasize on the vocals on this part. i don't find it unreadable as the jump from the prev slider to the next circle has one of the highest DS in the whole song. For now i'll put a NC on the Circle, making it a little bit friendlier.




Good luck
THANKS FOR DEMS MODS. :) :D ;) :P :lol: :oops:
here u go handsome LOL http://puu.sh/ahXZm/adf9325ab2.osu
Topic Starter
hehe
neonat > thanks for mod!

neonat wrote:

Normal

00:04:307 (3) - end the slider at 00:04:843 fixed
00:06:450 (1,4) - if you want to stack the ends, stack perfectly, they are currently not aligned fixed
00:20:735 (1,3) - this looks really weird swag
00:40:378 (1) - this doesn't really fit to the song as there is the start of vocals at 00:40:735 which is important yet overlooked here fixed
01:03:593 (3) - new combo here instead of 01:02:878 (1) fixed
01:13:235 (5,7) - blanket them using ds, i think its k
01:15:557 (1,1) - shift the spinner 01:15:557 (1) to start at 01:15:735 and end at 01:16:807 and remove 01:16:985 (1) and place a circle instead at 01:17:164 - this would fit the song better fixed
01:23:593 (3) - place elsewhere, don't touch 01:21:807 (5) fixed

Hard

00:10:468 (6) - this note is irrelevant, I suggest removing it i think its ok
00:11:985 (6,7) - swap places, circle before slider, circle at 00:11:985 slider at 00:12:164 fixed
00:12:700 (8,1) - swap places like above ^ circle before slider, circle at 00:12:700 and slider at 00:12:878 fixed
00:19:307 (8) - less curvy, less scrunched up fixed
00:29:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is too packed, it looks more confusing that it should be and doesn't look so nice but i like it :< will change if more complain
00:36:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird pattern to come up right after the previous one, they don't really mix its ok
00:53:771 (5,6) - don't let them overlap with 00:52:164 (1,2,3) fixed
01:00:200 (2) - less curve fixed
01:08:414 (1) - too packed, show more of the slider body fixed
01:09:843 (1) - ^ fixed
01:17:164 (2,1) - better blanket and because 01:17:700 (1) is so short, the overlap doesn't look that great because the body and end are covered fixed
01:20:557 (5) - it goes over the beat at 01:20:735 which is important fixed
01:21:093 (6) - too close to previous note fixed
01:23:057 (7) - goes over the beat at 01:23:235 which is important fixed

Insane

00:21:807 (1,2,3) - use the same shape fixed
00:24:843 (2) - repeat arrow is covered by 00:24:485 (6) when hit and 300 comes out, this is unrankable fixed
00:42:700 (1) - this is ugly looking fixed, idk what happened there lol
00:43:593 (1) - ^ fixed
00:44:307 (2) - not stacked on end of 00:43:593 (1) fixed
00:45:021 (1) - not stacked on end of 00:43:593 (1) fixed
00:45:021 (1,2,3) - looks too packed its fine, yo :|
00:53:057 (4) - goes over beat at 00:53:235 which is important fixed
00:53:593 (5,6) - does it need to overlap fixed
01:16:093 (3,4) - blanket fixed
01:18:950 (8,1,2) - too close to each other fixed
01:21:807 (4) - this doesn't fit into the music and rhythm, change the rhythm here fixed
Pho
Mod finished~

[Hard]
00:01:807 (3) - overlap
00:04:307 (4) - feels a little bit chopped off. go with slider-slider-circle instead
00:19:307 (8) - make it flatter
00:20:557 (2,3,4,5) - make it rounder
00:29:307 (2,3,4,5) - this looks strange :D
00:30:735 (6) - overlap
00:33:593 (1,2,3) - go with slider-slider-circle. also no need to perfectly stack here, would be to small distances imo.
00:43:503 (6) - either make slider end on white tick or add a circle between 5 & 6
01:02:521 (3,5) - distances seem to be a bit shorter than, 01:01:807 (1,3) - , try to make it equal
01:21:093 (6,2) - overlap. also, improve blanket to fit 6-approachcircle
01:21:985 (3,4) - end them on white tick, sounds more natural

[Insane]
00:05:200 - consider adding a circle here
00:21:807 (1,2,3) - this seems to be a bit slow im comparison to the previous jumps. also, improve blankets to fit 6-approachcircle better.
00:35:914 (1) - this is confusing, consider putting the note below the circle 5.
00:42:700 (1) - weird blanket, try to improve it (see below)
00:43:593 (1) - this is some weird blanket, try this out https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1833732
00:47:700 (7,8,9) - bigger distance would improve the flow.
01:06:985 (5,7) - try to avoid these kinds of overlap
01:15:021 (1,2,3) - you can improve pattern and flow by making it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1833710
01:17:164 (2,3) - consider making these to sliders instead of circles.synergizes better with the upbeat on 4.
01:21:807 (4) - this sounds offbeat, go with circle + backslider instead, slider starting at 01:21:985 -


[Clyine's Extra]
Consider changing HP to 7 & OD to 8 so some people can play with harder mods on this diff. Atm, these values are too high.

00:05:200 - consider adding a circle here
00:00:736 (3) - improve the blanket, too curvy sliders don't look nice in this map imo.
00:24:843 (5) - make this stack perfectly on circle 3, you can use a finer grid level for this.
00:26:450 (1) - it would sound more naturally if you let these sliders end at the white tick instead of blue one, despite the fact being more 'challenging' to play ;)
This should be done for all theaw sliders, incl. thw ones at 00:27:879 (1) - , 00:30:736 (1) - , 00:37:879 (1) - ,00:39:307 (1) -
00:32:163 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - you should change position of each 1 circle so it is 1. easier to read and 2. funnier to play.
00:36:807 (2) - indicate that you are going to change flow to the right by making the slider more curvy
00:40:736 (1,1,1) - you could make the distances between the sliders bigger
00:54:129 (6,1,2,3) - you should change the order to 1-2-3-6
01:17:878 - this is nice, but it may be to much of a velocity change to get ranked. Consider making it slower.
01:26:271 (6,2,2,2,2) - same as above 00:32:163 (1,1,1,1,1,1) -

Good song, good map, keep your work up and pray for the BATs to get this map ranked! :D

Greetings,
paseli
Jaltzu
Sorry, don't have much to say...

EASY
00:23:593 (1) - Small distance spacing error.
00:32:164 (1) - ↑↑Same
00:36:450 (2) - ↑↑
00:39:307 (2) - ↑↑
00:53:235 (2) - ↑↑
00:56:450 (3,1) - ↑↑
01:01:093 (2) - ↑↑
*Those are just very little inconsistencies in DS... But decided to point them out still.
01:20:021 (1,2) - May be better like this: http://puu.sh/ai1Eo/790a8562da.jpg

NORMAL
00:18:950 (4,5) - Consider moving these a bit apart. Might be a bit confusing to new players, since there was a 1/2 tic stack just before: 00:16:628 (5,6) and this is 1 tic stack.
00:24:843 (3,4) - Slider 00:24:843 - 00:25:735. I think it fits the music better.
00:38:236 (3,4) - I would replace this with a 3-point slider.
00:51:450 (1,2,3) - 3 stack just slightly after spinner doesn't fit in normal diff imo. 3-point slider could do better.
00:56:093 (2) - Continue this slider to next red tic.
01:28:593 (2,3) - Maybe replace with 1 long slider?


Hard
00:43:503 (6) - Make this slider 1/4 tic shorter OR longer.
00:57:164 (3) - This is hidden behind 00:56:271 (4). Consider moving it.
01:20:557 (5,6) - Add circle here, move the slider 1/2 tic forward, and delete 01:21:093 (6) - circle.

I can't help with other diffs... ;_;
Hope this helps.
Fuuyu
Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue

31st!


Mod Starts Here
[ General]

*Mp3 --> Clear

*BG --> File~Link

What I did :
-Changed BG from .PNG to .JPEG

[ Pjecoo's Easy]
00:26:450 (2) - Fix your slider ( don't just copy.paste )


00:35:021 (1) - Move ( x:56 y:128 )
00:36:450 (2) - Move ( x:336 y:88 )
01:06:807 (2,3) - Fix the sliders


01:20:021 (1) - Invert your blanket


[ Normal]

00:57:164 (4) - Move ( x:140 y:256 )
00:57:521 (1) - Move ( x:240 y:260 ) also Fix your slider


00:58:235 (2,3) - Fix and move your silders


01:00:735 (2,3) - Move ( x:228 y:164 )

[ Hard]
Clear



Remarks :
Nice Song :) . . . Good Luck~
Clyine

paseli wrote:

Mod finished~

[Clyine's Extra]
Consider changing HP to 7 & OD to 8 so some people can play with harder mods on this diff. Atm, these values are too high. Nah its fine right now. might change the HP tho. let me get more opinions first.

00:05:200 - consider adding a circle here Im following the instruments here. so there isnt any circle on the red tick.
00:00:736 (3) - improve the blanket, too curvy sliders don't look nice in this map imo. Improved
00:24:843 (5) - make this stack perfectly on circle 3, you can use a finer grid level for this. fixed
00:26:450 (1) - it would sound more naturally if you let these sliders end at the white tick instead of blue one, despite the fact being more 'challenging' to play ;)
This should be done for all theaw sliders, incl. thw ones at 00:27:879 (1) - , 00:30:736 (1) - , 00:37:879 (1) - ,00:39:307 (1) - Already done from the prev mod. haha
00:32:163 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - you should change position of each 1 circle so it is 1. easier to read and 2. funnier to play. It makes it hard to read actually.
00:36:807 (2) - indicate that you are going to change flow to the right by making the slider more curvy There isnt really much of a difference due to leniency
00:40:736 (1,1,1) - you could make the distances between the sliders bigger im keeping the DS but made it look slight neater
00:54:129 (6,1,2,3) - you should change the order to 1-2-3-6 What do you mean? lol
01:17:878 - this is nice, but it may be to much of a velocity change to get ranked. Consider making it slower. Perfectly playable due to circle 3.
01:26:271 (6,2,2,2,2) - same as above 00:32:163 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - It makes it hard to read.

Good song, good map, keep your work up and pray for the BATs to get this map ranked! :D

Greetings,
paseli
Thanks for the mod :) :D :D :) :D
Fixed some snapping errors as well. they didn't show up on AImod :cry:

http://puu.sh/ai8gf/84aabf45fb.osu ;) ;) ;) ;)
Topic Starter
hehe
Jaltzu > thanks for mod!

Jaltzu wrote:

Sorry, don't have much to say...

NORMAL
00:18:950 (4,5) - Consider moving these a bit apart. Might be a bit confusing to new players, since there was a 1/2 tic stack just before:fixed
00:16:628 (5,6) and this is 1 tic stack. no comprendo
00:24:843 (3,4) - Slider 00:24:843 - 00:25:735. I think it fits the music better.fixed
00:38:236 (3,4) - I would replace this with a 3-point slider.no comprendo
00:51:450 (1,2,3) - 3 stack just slightly after spinner doesn't fit in normal diff imo. 3-point slider could do better. nah
00:56:093 (2) - Continue this slider to next red tic. fixed
01:28:593 (2,3) - Maybe replace with 1 long slider? want to keep this part constant in all diffs


Hard
00:43:503 (6) - Make this slider 1/4 tic shorter OR longer. fixed
00:57:164 (3) - This is hidden behind 00:56:271 (4). Consider moving it. think its fine
01:20:557 (5,6) - Add circle here, move the slider 1/2 tic forward, and delete 01:21:093 (6) - circle. fixed

I can't help with other diffs... ;_;
Hope this helps.
xLoupGarou > thanks for mod!

xLoupGarou wrote:

[centre][ Normal]

00:57:164 (4) - Move ( x:140 y:256 ) changed whole part
00:57:521 (1) - Move ( x:240 y:260 ) also Fix your slider changed whole part
00:58:235 (2,3) - Fix and move your silders changed whole part
01:00:735 (2,3) - Move ( x:228 y:164 ) there is no need to, keep symmetry

paseli > thanks for mod!

paseli wrote:

Mod finished~

[Hard]
00:01:807 (3) - overlap fixed
00:04:307 (4) - feels a little bit chopped off. go with slider-slider-circle instead fixed
00:19:307 (8) - make it flatter think its ok
00:20:557 (2,3,4,5) - make it rounder fixed
00:29:307 (2,3,4,5) - this looks strange :D but playable :<
00:30:735 (6) - overlap fixed
00:33:593 (1,2,3) - go with slider-slider-circle. also no need to perfectly stack here, would be to small distances imo. fixed
00:43:503 (6) - either make slider end on white tick or add a circle between 5 & 6 fixed
01:02:521 (3,5) - distances seem to be a bit shorter than, 01:01:807 (1,3) - , try to make it equal its fine
01:21:093 (6,2) - overlap. also, improve blanket to fit 6-approachcircle fixed
01:21:985 (3,4) - end them on white tick, sounds more natural fixed

[Insane]
00:05:200 - consider adding a circle here fixed
00:21:807 (1,2,3) - this seems to be a bit slow im comparison to the previous jumps. also, improve blankets to fit 6-approachcircle better. i think its fine as it is
00:35:914 (1) - this is confusing, consider putting the note below the circle 5.neatened it up
00:42:700 (1) - weird blanket, try to improve it (see below) fixed
00:43:593 (1) - this is some weird blanket, try this out https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1833732 rethink
00:47:700 (7,8,9) - bigger distance would improve the flow. fixed
01:06:985 (5,7) - try to avoid these kinds of overlap its ok
01:15:021 (1,2,3) - you can improve pattern and flow by making it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1833710 fixed
01:17:164 (2,3) - consider making these to sliders instead of circles.synergizes better with the upbeat on 4. fixed
01:21:807 (4) - this sounds offbeat, go with circle + backslider instead, slider starting at 01:21:985 - fixed

Good song, good map, keep your work up and pray for the BATs to get this map ranked! :D

Greetings,
paseli
Mortem
All Done.
Code desu~
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Untitled.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51454
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Rashisa (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:らしさ
Artist:SUPER BEAVER
ArtistUnicode:SUPER BEAVER
Creator:handsome
Version:Pjecoo's Easy
Source:ばらかもん
Tags:barakamon naru junon boy op opening handa seishuu
BeatmapID:460382
BeatmapSetID:190486

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Ichigaki
Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :)
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪


[General]

  • Barakamon!! >.<) (still not watching this 'till nearly end)
  1. Add the GD mapper nickname to the tags
[Pjecoo's Easy]
  1. 00:02:521 (2) - Remove this
  2. 00:03:593 (3) - change the end point to 00:04:843 -
  3. 00:11:807 - add circle to x : 80 y : 128
  4. 01:28:235 (4) - change to slider to 01:28:414 -
  5. 01:28:593 (5) - remove this
[Normal]
  1. Change CS to 3,5
  2. 00:25:914 - add circle
  3. 00:41:807 (3) - remove this
  4. 00:42:521 (5) - change to reverse slider to 00:42:878 - and ctrl + g
  5. 01:15:735 (1) - change the start point to 01:15:378 -
  6. 01:28:593 (2) - remove this
[Hard]
  1. Change | CS to 3,5 or lower | AR to 7 | HP to 5,5 or lower
  2. 00:02:075 (5) - remove this
  3. 00:04:664 (5) - change the end point to 00:04:843 -
  4. 00:05:200 (6) - remove this
  5. 00:10:468 (6) - ^
  6. 00:15:110 (2) - move to 00:14:932 -
  7. 00:30:735 (6,7) - change to slider
  8. 00:31:271 - add circle
  9. 00:43:146 (2,3) - change to slider
  10. 00:43:324 (4,5) - ^
  11. 01:03:682 (2) - move to 01:03:503 -
  12. 01:13:682 (4) - remove this
  13. 01:14:128 -
  14. 01:15:021 (1) - change to a circle
  15. 01:22:968 (6) - remove this
[Insane]
  1. Change AR to 8,5 or lower
  2. 00:19:575 (3) - remove this
  3. 00:26:985 - add circle
  4. 00:30:914 - ^
  5. 00:42:700 (1) - decrease to 00:42:878 -
  6. 00:42:968 - add circle
  7. 01:23:593 (5,1) - change to slider
[Clyine's Extra]
  1. 00:06:449 (4) - NC?
  2. 00:13:414 (6) - move to x : 200 y : 184
  3. 01:22:699 (6) - decrease to 01:23:057 -
  4. 01:23:146 - add circle
Good Luck \w/
Clyine

ichia7x wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :)
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪


[General]

  • Barakamon!! >.<) (still not watching this 'till nearly end) Best anime
  1. Add the GD mapper nickname to the tags
[Clyine's Extra]
  1. 00:06:449 (4) - NC? Not necessary
  2. 00:13:414 (6) - move to x : 200 y : 184 not following the pattern i want
  3. 01:22:699 (6) - decrease to 01:23:057 -
  4. 01:23:146 - add circle The 1/4 starts only on the white tick
Good Luck \w/
Thank for modding!!!!
no changes tho :? :(
Topic Starter
hehe
ichia7x > thanks for mod!

ichia7x wrote:

[General]

  • Barakamon!! >.<) (still not watching this 'till nearly end)
  1. Add the GD mapper nickname to the tags fixed
[Normal]
  1. Change CS to 3,5 no need
  2. 00:25:914 - add circle no need, too messy
  3. 00:41:807 (3) - remove this no need, fit
  4. 00:42:521 (5) - change to reverse slider to 00:42:878 - and ctrl + g fixed
  5. 01:15:735 (1) - change the start point to 01:15:378 - fixed
  6. 01:28:593 (2) - remove this no need
[Hard]
  1. Change | CS to 3,5 or lower | AR to 7 | HP to 5,5 or lower no need, diff is hard
  2. 00:02:075 (5) - remove this no need
  3. 00:04:664 (5) - change the end point to 00:04:843 - fixed
  4. 00:05:200 (6) - remove this no need
  5. 00:10:468 (6) - ^ fixed
  6. 00:15:110 (2) - move to 00:14:932 - fixed
  7. 00:30:735 (6,7) - change to slider no need
  8. 00:31:271 - add circle no need
  9. 00:43:146 (2,3) - change to slider no need
  10. 00:43:324 (4,5) - ^ no need
  11. 01:03:682 (2) - move to 01:03:503 - no need
  12. 01:13:682 (4) - remove this no need
  13. 01:14:128 - fixed
  14. 01:15:021 (1) - change to a circle fixed
  15. 01:22:968 (6) - remove this no need
[Insane]
  1. Change AR to 8,5 or lower nah, map is hard enough
  2. 00:19:575 (3) - remove this fixed
  3. 00:26:985 - add circle fixed
  4. 00:30:914 - ^ no need
  5. 00:42:700 (1) - decrease to 00:42:878 - fixed
  6. 00:42:968 - add circle no need
  7. 01:23:593 (5,1) - change to slider no need
Good Luck \w/
xclaudioh
good beatmap : DDDDDD
Iceskulls
Hello there from my modding queue

[Clyline's Extra]
  • 00:02:521 (2,3,4,5) - This flow feel weird for me when I finished (2) I have to wait and then the next three notes need to hit (3) and move to (4) and (5) which place on the same place how about make another jump here by change the placement of (5) ? maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1847969
    00:04:664 (1,2,3) - How about move to x=447 y=191 I think this is better flow and (2) can stack (4)
    00:06:628 (5,6) - DS =2.77x
    00:10:557 (7,9,1) - This stack can improve by move (9) to x=81 y=183
    00:15:378 (4,6,1) - I think this stack can improve by move (6) to x=274 y=172
    00:22:521 - NC like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848070
    00:27:164 (2,2) - Stack
    00:29:307 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Hmm.. how about use other jump pattern here?
    00:29:664 (5,2) - Stack
    00:43:593 (1,4,1) - Stack
    00:49:128 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Hmm.. in my aspect first it easy to navigate to the next note but it start to get confuse here 00:50:021 - because it suddenly change the combo number pattern why not start a new combo here 00:50:021 (2) - and delete NC 00:49:842 (1) - to navigate to each notes better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848091
    00:52:164 (1) - NC
    00:56:985 (3) - NC
    00:57:342 (5) - NC
    01:03:057 (4) - NC
    01:22:342 (5,5) - Stack
    01:26:271 (6) - I think it better to change NC this and then NC 01:26:449 (2) - and then NC all notes to 01:27:878 (2) - because I think it better make jump combo numbers the same as you did in previous jumps https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848058
    01:26:807 (2,5,7) - Stack
[Insane]
  • 00:11:628 (2) - Move to x=409 y=186 for better stack with 00:12:343 (3) -
    00:19:664 (3,4) - Stack
    00:20:557 (1,1) - Stack
    00:35:200 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm..I think flow break at (1) how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848183
    00:48:235 (9,1) - Better blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848145
    00:51:450 (1,2) - Stack at tail
    00:53:950 (6,1) - Stack
    01:06:985 (5) - Move to x=236 y=127 for better stack with 01:05:378 (5) -
    01:08:771 (3,4,5) - How about change placement of (5)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848159
    01:12:343 (6) - Hmm... how about move to x=217 y=137 for better flow
    01:22:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better star https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848132
[Hard]
  • 00:08:771 (8) - Move to x=223 y=230 to avoid overlap
    00:25:378 (12) - Move to x=332 y=160 to avoid little overlap with 00:24:664 (10) -
    00:58:414 (1,2,3,4) - How about make triangle and stack the one you made before? Because I feel like the song aren't really suit to stop the cursor so I guess it better to let the players move the cursor with the song. Also when I play this part I usually move my cursor around in triangle shape automatically xD
    01:04:307 (4,1) - Stack at tail
[Normal]
[Pjecoo's Easy]
  • Why DS isn't consistent in Easy DS should be 1.2x on all notes except some notes that are the beats are too far
    From notepad
    DistanceSpacing: 1.2
I think I will recheck easy again

Good luck :)
Clyine

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hello there from my modding queue

[Clyline's Extra]
  • 00:02:521 (2,3,4,5) - This flow feel weird for me when I finished (2) I have to wait and then the next three notes need to hit (3) and move to (4) and (5) which place on the same place how about make another jump here by change the placement of (5) ? maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1847969 Ah.. this is because if u notice at (2) a slider would actually fit the music BUT i didnt want to use a slider here, so by putting (3) in this way i made a pseudo slider in a sense if u know what i mean
    00:04:664 (1,2,3) - How about move to x=447 y=191 I think this is better flow and (2) can stack (4) it is to emphasize on the change in pitch. i wouldnt want 2 to stack to anything.
    00:06:628 (5,6) - DS =2.77x fixed
    00:10:557 (7,9,1) - This stack can improve by move (9) to x=81 y=183 Fixed
    00:15:378 (4,6,1) - I think this stack can improve by move (6) to x=274 y=172 Fixed
    00:22:521 - NC like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848070 the followpoints wont have much of a difference; and i would like to keep my NC for this type of jumps at the white ticks
    00:27:164 (2,2) - Stack It becomes rather boring when stacked
    00:29:307 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Hmm.. how about use other jump pattern here? done
    00:29:664 (5,2) - Stack not necessary now after ^
    00:43:593 (1,4,1) - Stack No point stacking here
    00:49:128 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Hmm.. in my aspect first it easy to navigate to the next note but it start to get confuse here 00:50:021 - because it suddenly change the combo number pattern why not start a new combo here 00:50:021 (2) - and delete NC 00:49:842 (1) - to navigate to each notes better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848091 The NC here is to show that the note after the triplet is a 1/2 not a 1/4
    00:52:164 (1) - NC i would like to keep this
    00:56:985 (3) - NC not going to fc because of a vocal
    00:57:342 (5) - NCAll these are to keep the follow points
    01:03:057 (4) - NC notice the first 2 triplets sound similar
    01:22:342 (5,5) - Stack done
    01:26:271 (6) - I think it better to change NC this and then NC 01:26:449 (2) - and then NC all notes to 01:27:878 (2) - because I think it better make jump combo numbers the same as you did in previous jumps https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848058 white tick T_T
    01:26:807 (2,5,7) - Stack i want a jump here

Good luck :)
Thank for the mod!!!!
http://puu.sh/anXAm/59f8c75528.osu
TMR I THEN SETTLE THE HITSOUND FOR U HANDSOME
Moo-Chan
From your modding queue~ The M4M

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:628 (5,1) - Maybe find a way to blanket these?
  2. 00:23:771 (1) - Move to x:390 y:159
  3. 00:25:378 (1) - Make this slider match 00:24:843 (2)
  4. 00:48:771 (1) - Place it away from the previous slider
  5. 01:10:557 (5) - I'm pretty sure this slider is un-rankable
  6. 01:25:021 (4) - ^^
  7. 01:28:950 (4) - This is just ugly lol

Well that's all I see~ Hope to see your mod soon !
Topic Starter
hehe
CelsisLK > thanks for mod!

CelsiusLK wrote:

[Insane]
  • 00:11:628 (2) - Move to x=409 y=186 for better stack with 00:12:343 (3) - fixed
    00:19:664 (3,4) - Stack wut
    00:20:557 (1,1) - Stack as much as i'd like to, it'd interfere with the blanket, so nty
    00:35:200 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm..I think flow break at (1) how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848183 changed, but didnt follow
    00:48:235 (9,1) - Better blanket https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848145 fixed
    00:51:450 (1,2) - Stack at tail fixed
    00:53:950 (6,1) - Stack fixed
    01:06:985 (5) - Move to x=236 y=127 for better stack with 01:05:378 (5) - no need
    01:08:771 (3,4,5) - How about change placement of (5)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848159 no need
    01:12:343 (6) - Hmm... how about move to x=217 y=137 for better flow no need
    01:22:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better star https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848132 just realsied it looks really bad, thanks
[Hard]
  • 00:08:771 (8) - Move to x=223 y=230 to avoid overlap no need
    00:25:378 (12) - Move to x=332 y=160 to avoid little overlap with 00:24:664 (10) - fixed
    00:58:414 (1,2,3,4) - How about make triangle and stack the one you made before? Because I feel like the song aren't really suit to stop the cursor so I guess it better to let the players move the cursor with the song. Also when I play this part I usually move my cursor around in triangle shape automatically xD fixed
    01:04:307 (4,1) - Stack at tail fixed
[Normal]
  • 00:21:807 (2,1) - Stack at tail already too far
    00:28:950 (4,1) - Better blanket little https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1848307 fixed
    00:36:450 - How about this rhythm ? http://puu.sh/anGus/8150397ffe.jpg fixed
    00:42:521 (5,1) - Nazi DS=1.0x its very near, i don't think it matters
    00:58:950 (3,1) - ฺBetter stack at tail fixed
    01:13:235 (5) - Move to x=172 y=308 for better stack with 01:11:450 (1) - fixed
Good luck :)

Moo-Chan > thanks for mod!

Moo-Chan wrote:

From your modding queue~ The M4M

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:628 (5,1) - Maybe find a way to blanket these? no need
  2. 00:23:771 (1) - Move to x:390 y:159 fixed
  3. 00:25:378 (1) - Make this slider match 00:24:843 (2) fixed
  4. 00:48:771 (1) - Place it away from the previous slider no need
  5. 01:10:557 (5) - I'm pretty sure this slider is un-rankable no need
  6. 01:25:021 (4) - ^^[ color=#BF0000]no need[/color]
  7. 01:28:950 (4) - This is just ugly lol nah


Well that's all I see~ Hope to see your mod soon !
Mortem
Sorry for late reply. Here is my fixed easy diff.
:3
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Untitled.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51454
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Rashisa (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:らしさ
Artist:SUPER BEAVER
ArtistUnicode:SUPER BEAVER
Creator:handsome
Version:Pjecoo's Easy
Source:ばらかもん
Tags:barakamon naru junon boy op opening handa seishuu clyine pjecoo testapple
BeatmapID:460382
BeatmapSetID:190486

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"barakamonp.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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736,-200,4,1,0,50,0,0
15021,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,60,0,0
26093,-200,4,2,0,40,0,0
40289,-200,4,3,0,40,0,0
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88414,-133.333333333333,4,1,0,75,0,0
88950,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,5,0,0


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Combo2 : 128,128,64
Combo3 : 0,128,0
Combo4 : 64,128,128

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P o M u T a
hi.

[General]
  1. why you have 'op' tag? Don't need 'op'. already you have 'opening'. Please remove it.
[Pjecoo's Easy]
  1. 00:06:450 (1) - add finish slider head. because symbals part. really sad.
  2. 00:17:521 (4,1) - stack is hard for beginner.
  3. 00:26:450 (2) - add finish slider head.
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:450 (1) - add finish slider head. because symbals part. really sad.
  2. 00:37:878 (2) - add finish. symbals.
  3. 01:25:378 (7) - add clap slider end. really fit this part.
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:736 (1) - add finish slider head. symbal.
  2. 00:06:450 (1) - add finish slider head. symbal.
  3. 00:26:450 (1) - add finish.
[Insane]
  1. 00:22:164 (1,1) - remove NC. why NC? not have mean. really don't need!
  2. 00:26:450 (3) - add finish.
  3. 00:55:021 (1,2) - both overlaps is bit ugly. move end point better.
[TestApple's Extra]
  1. 00:01:985 (1) - add finish. because symbals part.
  2. 00:06:450 (2) - sound was already dead. so, Fit NC.
  3. 00:37:878 (1) - add finish slider head. symbals.
[Clyine's Extra]
  1. 00:01:985 (1) - add finish slider head. strong symbals part.
  2. 00:06:450 (4) - sound was already dead. so, Fit NC.
  3. 01:28:950 (6) - why added finish slider head? this part calm vocal sound.. blast.
good luck!
Topic Starter
hehe
P o M u T a > thanks for mod!

P o M u T a wrote:

hi.

[General]
  1. why you have 'op' tag? Don't need 'op'. already you have 'opening'. Please remove it. done


[Normal]
  1. 00:06:450 (1) - add finish slider head. because symbals part. really sad. done
  2. 00:37:878 (2) - add finish. symbals. done
  3. 01:25:378 (7) - add clap slider end. really fit this part. done
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:736 (1) - add finish slider head. symbal. done
  2. 00:06:450 (1) - add finish slider head. symbal. done
  3. 00:26:450 (1) - add finish. done
[Insane]
  1. 00:22:164 (1,1) - remove NC. why NC? not have mean. really don't need! thought twice, maybe not good for NC, thanks!
  2. 00:26:450 (3) - add finish.done
  3. 00:55:021 (1,2) - both overlaps is bit ugly. move end point better. done

good luck!
340
you updated my map after i modded two extras, so some of suggestions can be already fixed -_-

[General]
whole map have different kiai times. this isn't good.

[Clyine's Extra]
so many claps. -_-
  1. 00:07:878 (1) - nobody likes sliders that repeats more than 1 times :P you may make sth like this http://puu.sh/ap02u/da72502322.jpg
  2. 00:20:557 (7,1) - this blanket isn't perfect http://puu.sh/ap09z/480359213a.jpg
  3. 00:30:735 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/ap0bO/59ae83390b.jpg
  4. 00:27:878 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:34:307 (1,1) - ^
  6. 00:36:807 (2) - finish doesnt fits here
  7. 00:39:307 (1,2) - that overlap looks crappy ;(
  8. 01:17:878 (2) - the fuck? this is TOO suddenly and TOO confusing.
  9. 01:28:949 (6) - that sound is longer than 2 ticks. extend it to big white tick.
[TestApple's Extra]
  1. this difficulty have different tags than other diffs. fix that!
  2. 00:00:736 (1,2) - this blanket isn't perfect
  3. 00:10:557 (1) - make it ending on 00:10:855 (1/3 beat snap divisor)
  4. 00:13:593 (1) - ctrl+g
  5. 00:51:450 (2) - clap doesnt fits here
  6. 00:59:128 (5,6,7) - this blanket isn't perfect
  7. 01:04:128 (6) - i dont like how this moment sounds. make sth like this http://puu.sh/ap0ZF/9933af7e7e.jpg
  8. 01:09:485 (6) - ctrl+g
  9. 01:23:593 (7) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:343 (8,1) - this overlap looks crappy
  2. 00:14:307 (3,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/ap1gj/e2b5684504.jpg
  3. 00:16:271 (7) - clap on the end of slider doesn't fits here at all
  4. 00:18:860 (7,8) - delete these claps
  5. 00:40:378 (2) - additions = drum + clap
  6. 00:49:128 (3,4,5) - delete these claps
  7. 00:52:878 (3,4) - crappy flow ;(
  8. 01:04:128 (4,5) - ^
  9. 01:06:093 (2,3) - swap these circles on the timeline
  10. 01:16:628 (2,1) - this spacing is too little
[Hard]
  1. this difficulty have different tags than other diffs. fix that!
  2. 00:04:664 (5,6) - this spacing is too little
  3. 00:10:021 (5,6) - ^
  4. 00:25:914 (2,1) - ^
  5. 00:29:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - unreadable and too hard for hard
  6. 01:00:200 (2) - crappy flow
  7. 01:21:271 (1,2) - this blanket isn't perfect
  8. 01:23:057 (7) - crappy flow
[Normal]
  1. 00:44:664 (5,2) - traps in normal? are you kidding me?
  2. 00:51:450 (1,2,3) - too hard for normal
  3. 01:28:414 (1,2) - stacking on the end of slider isn't good idea for normal
[Pjecoo's Easy]
  1. 00:36:450 (2) - nobody likes sliders that repeats more than 1 times
Topic Starter
hehe
340 > thanks for mod!

340 wrote:

[General]
whole map have different kiai times. this isn't good. not sure if i should have fixed, cuz its the GD conflict

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:343 (8,1) - this overlap looks crappy redone
  2. 00:14:307 (3,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/ap1gj/e2b5684504.jpg fixed
  3. 00:16:271 (7) - clap on the end of slider doesn't fits here at all i think its fine
  4. 00:18:860 (7,8) - delete these claps done
  5. 00:40:378 (2) - additions = drum + clap done
  6. 00:49:128 (3,4,5) - delete these claps done
  7. 00:52:878 (3,4) - crappy flow ;( changed it up a little
  8. 01:04:128 (4,5) - ^ fixed
  9. 01:06:093 (2,3) - swap these circles on the timeline done
  10. 01:16:628 (2,1) - this spacing is too little fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:664 (5,6) - this spacing is too little fixed
  2. 00:10:021 (5,6) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:25:914 (2,1) - ^ fixed
  4. 00:29:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - unreadable and too hard for hard fixed, farewell my favourite pattern...
  5. 01:00:200 (2) - crappy flow fixed
  6. 01:21:271 (1,2) - this blanket isn't perfect fixed
  7. 01:23:057 (7) - crappy flow fixed
[Normal]
  1. 00:44:664 (5,2) - traps in normal? are you kidding me? have to rethink
  2. 00:51:450 (1,2,3) - too hard for normal fixed
  3. 01:28:414 (1,2) - stacking on the end of slider isn't good idea for normal fixed
Mortem
All fixed.
...
osu file format v13

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Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Rashisa (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:らしさ
Artist:SUPER BEAVER
ArtistUnicode:SUPER BEAVER
Creator:handsome
Version:Pjecoo's Easy
Source:ばらかもん
Tags:barakamon naru junon boy opening handa seishuu clyine pjecoo testapple
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rhalp10

rhalp's Modding Queues [ForEver OPEN]


Hello from this queues !!


SUPER BEAVER-Rashisa (TV Size)
[GENERAL]

Tags conflict with Clyine's Extra diff.
Tags conflict with Hard diff.
Tags conflict with Insane diff.
Tags conflict with Pjecoo's Easy diff.
Tags conflict with TestApple's Extra diff.

[Insane]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:26:271
[Clyine's Extra]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:26:450
GOOD LUCK !! :D
Clyine
wao many mod
P o M u T a

P o M u T a wrote:

hi.

[Clyine's Extra]
  1. 00:01:985 (1) - add finish slider head. strong symbals part. fixed
  2. 00:06:450 (4) - sound was already dead. so, Fit NC. fixed
  3. 01:28:950 (6) - why added finish slider head? this part calm vocal sound.. blast. fixed
good luck!

340

340 wrote:

you updated my map after i modded two extras, so some of suggestions can be already fixed -_-

[General]
whole map have different kiai times. this isn't good.

[Clyine's Extra]
so many claps. -_- Claps best hitsounds
  1. 00:07:878 (1) - nobody likes sliders that repeats more than 1 times :P you may make sth like this http://puu.sh/ap02u/da72502322.jpg its perfectly readable and playablw now. doing it your way causes to player to hit on a red tick without much of a point
  2. 00:20:557 (7,1) - this blanket isn't perfect http://puu.sh/ap09z/480359213a.jpg Fixed
  3. 00:30:735 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/ap0bO/59ae83390b.jpg Fixed
  4. 00:27:878 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
  5. 00:34:307 (1,1) - ^ Fixed
  6. 00:36:807 (2) - finish doesnt fits here Fixed
  7. 00:39:307 (1,2) - that overlap looks crappy ;( Fixed
  8. 01:17:878 (2) - the fuck? this is TOO suddenly and TOO confusing. perfectly intuitive to me
  9. 01:28:949 (6) - that sound is longer than 2 ticks. extend it to big white tick.
I prefer the way it sounds now

rhalp10

rhalp10 wrote:

rhalp's Modding Queues [ForEver OPEN]


Hello from this queues !!


[GENERAL]

Tags conflict with Clyine's Extra diff.
Tags conflict with Hard diff.
Tags conflict with Insane diff.
Tags conflict with Pjecoo's Easy diff.
Tags conflict with TestApple's Extra diff.

[Insane]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:26:271
[Clyine's Extra]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:26:450
GOOD LUCK !! :D
AiMod best mod

AiMod best mod
Thanks for the moddddd
http://puu.sh/aqkuu/177832bcfd.osu
here you go

i mod before i hs
MODDDDDDD
[normal]
00:56:093 (2,3,4,1,2) -
01:11:985 (3,4) -
01:14:664 (7) - end this on white tick
01:17:878 (3,4,5) -

[hard]
00:15:200 (2) -
00:26:450 (1,2) -
00:28:235 (3) -
00:29:128 (1) -
00:32:878 (5,6,7,8) - either both triplet or both repeat slider
01:04:664 (6) -
01:07:521 (9) -
01:09:664 - add note
01:09:843 (1) - change to 3 circle
01:11:093 - add note
01:14:128 (6,7) - 6 end on blue tick 7 start at red tick end at red tick
01:15:021 (8) - remove this note and start spinner here
01:17:164 (2) -

if u fix u need think of pattern again hahahaa
tell me after u done
later i mod the GDs

Testapple's extra
00:10:557 (1) - this slider sounds very weird because of the blue tick. make it a circle + 1/2 repeat slider or 1/2 repeat slider + circle instead

Pjecoo's easy
Placement is all good but patterns need alot of work here. Use some symmetry and change the direction of the flow a little bit. the whole map is going only clockwise haha.
msg me ingame if u need help

i edited this post like 20 times =.=
Kibbleru
5 minute lazy ass mod, i don't suck this much at modding fyi i just didn't put alot of time into this q:


[TestApple Extra]
  1. oh my lord the amount of green lines in the extra diff
    btw u know u can use this right http://puu.sh/aryEu/c47cfd63c1.jpg
    thatll save u the trouble of spamming ctrl shift p
  2. 00:10:557 (1) - this isnt snapped correctrly
  3. 00:42:164 - uhh maybe do this

    so u can be consistent with what u have at 00:41:450 -
  4. 00:46:450 - don't miss this beat
  5. btw i don't think this difficulty has the components of an extra diff would, probably better to call it an insane and it's not nearly hard enough
  6. 00:41:360 - silence the slider end... too loud and sounds weird

    also for future reference, this 00:07:878 (1,2) - is NOT a good rhythm .-. and if you wan't to use it silence the slider end so that you can't hear it (use green ticks and turn volume down)
[Chyline Extra]
  1. ur clap pattern doesn't fit the music listen to it closely, it should be 2nd and 4th white tick
  2. 00:39:307 (1) - why this slider shape =w= ugly imo
  3. 01:06:450 - should be something clickable here
    01:09:307 - ^
    01:12:164 - ^
    blah... try to have something clickable on every downbeat (big white tick)
[Insane]
  1. blah got lazy at this point lol
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