340 wrote:

[General]
whole map have different kiai times. this isn't good. not sure if i should have fixed, cuz its the GD conflict

[Insane]

1. 00:02:343 (8,1) - this overlap looks crappy redone
2. 00:14:307 (3,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/ap1gj/e2b5684504.jpg fixed
3. 00:16:271 (7) - clap on the end of slider doesn't fits here at all i think its fine
4. 00:18:860 (7,8) - delete these claps done
5. 00:40:378 (2) - additions = drum + clap done
6. 00:49:128 (3,4,5) - delete these claps done
7. 00:52:878 (3,4) - crappy flow ;( changed it up a little
8. 01:04:128 (4,5) - ^ fixed
9. 01:06:093 (2,3) - swap these circles on the timeline done
10. 01:16:628 (2,1) - this spacing is too little fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:04:664 (5,6) - this spacing is too little fixed
2. 00:10:021 (5,6) - ^ fixed
3. 00:25:914 (2,1) - ^ fixed
4. 00:29:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - unreadable and too hard for hard fixed, farewell my favourite pattern...
5. 01:00:200 (2) - crappy flow fixed
6. 01:21:271 (1,2) - this blanket isn't perfect fixed
7. 01:23:057 (7) - crappy flow fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:44:664 (5,2) - traps in normal? are you kidding me? have to rethink
2. 00:51:450 (1,2,3) - too hard for normal fixed
3. 01:28:414 (1,2) - stacking on the end of slider isn't good idea for normal fixed

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: rashisa.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51454
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Rashisa (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:らしさ
Artist:SUPER BEAVER
ArtistUnicode:SUPER BEAVER
Creator:handsome
Version:Pjecoo's Easy
Source:ばらかもん
Tags:barakamon naru junon boy opening handa seishuu clyine pjecoo testapple
BeatmapID:460382
BeatmapSetID:190486

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"barakamonp.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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P o M u T a wrote:

hi.

[Clyine's Extra]

1. 00:01:985 (1) - add finish slider head. strong symbals part. fixed
2. 00:06:450 (4) - sound was already dead. so, Fit NC. fixed
3. 01:28:950 (6) - why added finish slider head? this part calm vocal sound.. blast. fixed

good luck!

340 wrote:

you updated my map after i modded two extras, so some of suggestions can be already fixed -_-

[General]
whole map have different kiai times. this isn't good.

[Clyine's Extra]
so many claps. -_- Claps best hitsounds

1. 00:07:878 (1) - nobody likes sliders that repeats more than 1 times you may make sth like this http://puu.sh/ap02u/da72502322.jpg its perfectly readable and playablw now. doing it your way causes to player to hit on a red tick without much of a point
2. 00:20:557 (7,1) - this blanket isn't perfect http://puu.sh/ap09z/480359213a.jpg Fixed
3. 00:30:735 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/ap0bO/59ae83390b.jpg Fixed
4. 00:27:878 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:34:307 (1,1) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:36:807 (2) - finish doesnt fits here Fixed
7. 00:39:307 (1,2) - that overlap looks crappy ;( Fixed
8. 01:17:878 (2) - the fuck? this is TOO suddenly and TOO confusing. perfectly intuitive to me
9. 01:28:949 (6) - that sound is longer than 2 ticks. extend it to big white tick.

I prefer the way it sounds now

rhalp10 wrote:

rhalp's Modding Queues [ForEver OPEN]

Hello from this queues !!


[GENERAL]

Tags conflict with Clyine's Extra diff.
Tags conflict with Hard diff.
Tags conflict with Insane diff.
Tags conflict with Pjecoo's Easy diff.
Tags conflict with TestApple's Extra diff.

[Insane]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:26:271
[Clyine's Extra]
Kiai time is toggled on for less than 15 seconds. 01:26:450
GOOD LUCK !! :D
AiMod best mod

_Stan wrote:

hi m4m
[Normal]
00:18:950 (4) - (248,204) fixed
00:23:593 (1,3) - a little weird relook
00:26:807 (3,1) - blanket fixed
00:29:307 (1,2,3) - different DS fixed
00:35:735 (3,4) - ^ fixed
00:42:521 (5,1) - according to your DS before, you can decrease the ds here like 00:47:164 (5,6) - fixed
00:58:593 (2,3) - IDK NM can jump or not fixed
01:21:807 (5,2) - overlap it perfect fixed

[Hard]
00:26:450 (1,2) - overlap it perfect fixed
00:32:878 (5,6,1) - DS fixed
00:51:093 (4,1) - you can blanket it fixed
00:53:235 (4,6) - ^ fixed
01:02:521 (3,5) - blanket it more nice fixed
01:05:914 (2,5) - ^ fixed

[Insane]
00:19:664 (3) - down the curve fixed
00:21:628 (8,1) - blanket fixed
00:43:593 (8) - weird ok
00:45:021 (5,6,7) - DS fixed
00:51:985 (4) - (384,152) fixed

two EXs is so hard for me so I cannot mod, sorry

and GOOD LUCK!

DavidEd wrote:

m4m ^.^

excuse me if i may be unclear sometimes (not really an experienced modder xD)
this modding is all based on my opinions

Normal

too many claps mate

00:00:736 (1,3) - make them symmetrical http://puu.sh/arWI3/0a7bc64093.jpg ?? nah, its ok
00:03:235 (4) - move to x:112 y:124 nah, ds 1.0 i wanna keep
00:03:593 (1,2,3) - move to x:64 y:192 ^
00:05:200 (4) - move to x:308 y:208 ^
00:13:593 (3) - really weird slider keep
00:17:521 (6) - ^ ^
00:43:057 (1) - ^ and you could move it down to x:288 y:156 i wanna keep ds, but changed
00:55:021 (1) - weird slider lol you should realise by now this things are intentional
01:05:378 - no new combo fixed
01:10:378 (6) - weird slider keep
01:28:414 (1) - delete note fixed
01:28:950 - replace slider with a single note keep

use only one distance snap for normal maps. and work on the visual issues and spacing (use aimod).

Hard

same here as in the normal difficulty. kind of abusing the clap

00:29:307 (1,1) - those sliders really confused me the first time i played the map keep!
00:43:503 (6) - if you listen closely to the song the last note in that stream is a little bit early. maybe make it look like this? this is harder to play

this difficulty also had alot of weird sliders like in the normal one. i had no other problems with it tho, good job!

good luck with your map!

regenz wrote:

Form my M4M Queue p/3264006

[General]

Why 4 BG instead of use 1 BG and made storyboard to reduce the file size. will do this!
some diff has last section kiai time you can remove it so it'll be same for the rest of mapset. its GD so i keep

[Normal]

00:00:736 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You should remove all clap in this part it not go well with the song fix
00:06:450 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this part is ok with clap however it need to reduce volume 35 percent fix
00:15:021 This loud volume timing make your clap is worst 40 percent is decent for me fix
00:15:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - Spam Clap every beat is really bad You should only use at 2nd beat and 4th beat of measure. fix
remove clap on 1 ( 1st beat of measure )
clap on 2 is fine ( 2nd beat of measure )
remove clap on 3's head (start of slider 3rd beat of measure)
clap on 3's tail is fine ( end of slider 4th beat of measure)
and go on remove unnecessary clap
some place you cannot put it 00:20:735 (1) - just remove it put the clap only 1st and 3rd beat this is very basic hitsound for mapper.

00:26:093 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this part is good but some part is missing clap fix
00:35:021 (1,3,6) - add clap fix
00:38:414 (4) - add clap at end of slider fix
00:38:236 (3) - remove clap fix

again 00:43:057 ear destroying part reduce volume to 40 percent plz check and remove unnecessary clap make sure do like a red bold text above

00:52:164 kiai time also 40 percent and do as red bold text again fix

01:17:164 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - again fix hitsound plz fix

01:28:414 again 40 percent fix

[Hard]

same problem as Normal hit sound volume and placement
compare to insane it's very close gap Try to reduce the clustering of the note try to use 1 beat slider and / or 1 beat return slider rather than rapid pure circle without blank some hitsound use soft some use normal plz made it same as normal because it's all your difficult well insane same too will try to redo!

[Insane]

01:26:271 remove kiai time . make it same as hard and normal okay, but i change hard and normal.
same hit sound problem like other diff

more other than that weird place of newcombo seem like you use a vocal base to judge when to newcombo but that's not constant
newcombo is determine when player got a bonus hitpoint when hit a note so you can keep it constant.

I highly suggest you to start Newcombo base on Measure not vocal.



there 's 4 beat of measure 1 Big white line and 3 small white line Just new combo every big whiteline (first beat of measure)
so It keep a player gain life constant what ever song type. for Normal Easy and Hard
it depending how "cluster" of the note had.

but for me it's easy and normal IS NC every 8 beats for Hard is 8 beats also harder than that is 4 beats

but current hard is clustering is equal insane diff. so it's 4 beats. thank you! will use it

Goodluck

Neil Watts wrote:

Hi, for my modding queue

SUPER BEAVER - Rashisa (TV Size)

[Normal]
- 00:23:593 (1,3) - try to improve this placing ? fix
- 01:10:378 (6,1) - improve the alignment of the (6) slider fix
- 01:11:985 (3,4,5) - try to blanket here - or something to make this pattern symetrical fix
- 01:21:450 (4,5) - blanket ? no need
- 01:27:878 (4) - improve the curve fix
- 01:26:807 (2,3) - align them? no need

[Hard]
This diff is really hard for a Hard diff. Maybe reduce a little the AR ? drop to 7.5
- 00:02:164 (1,3) - try a little blanket ? no need
- 00:12:164 (7,2,3) - hard to read for a medium player. Really. fix
- 00:21:985 (7,8,9,10) - try to make this easier to read ? no need
- 00:22:878 (1,2,3) - blanket here fix
- 00:29:307 (1,1) - hard to follow no need
- 00:32:521 (3,5) - avoid stacking fix
- 00:41:271 (4,5) - ^ fix
- 00:51:093 (4,1) - improve this blanket ? no need
- 00:56:807 (1,2,3,4) - improve the pattern ? fix
- 01:02:521 (3,5) - improve the blanket ???
- 01:07:521 (9) - be careful when using these sliders. ok

[Insane]
- 00:01:628 (5) - make a better form ? no need
- 00:02:521 (1,2) - avoid stacking ???
- 00:26:807 (4,5,6) - the (5) isn't aligned fix
- 00:45:021 (5,6,7) - improve the distances no need
- 01:20:557 (7,8) - stacki it with the slider end? no need
- 01:21:450 (2,3,6) - make the slider centered no need


Good luck to get this ranked!

HootOwlStar wrote:

Hihi!
I'm here for mod~ Note that these are only suggestions, and my English is poor anyway
Arghhh I love your profile pic (out of topic lol)


[Normal]
00:01:985 (3) - WTH is there a fixed turning point there? (So rude, sry for that) standard wave slider.
00:07:521 (3) - Seems not placing it in the nicer position suggestion? see nothing wrong
00:11:093 (4,1) - A little crashing each other fixed
00:24:843 (3) - This slider seems strange for me standard blanket slider
00:26:807 (3) - Change fixed turning point x:264 y:364 to x:276 y:324 fixed
00:29:307 (5,6) - NOOOOO !!! Don't place them like that TT rethink
00:29:307 (5) - NC fixed
00:35:021 (1,2,3,4) - OMG I definitely love this part ty!
00:46:093 (7) - NC fixed
00:57:700 - Add a circle here to satisfy the vocal? rethink
01:01:093 (3) - It's too over the grid it is fine lol
01:22:878 (5) - NC fixed
01:23:235 (1) - No NC fixed

OMG A lot of Hard, Insane and Extra diffs... And I don't find big problems in them so that's all of my mod~
Hope your mapset gets ranked soon!
Oh, I gave a star for your mapset too thanks!

NoHitter wrote:

[Insane]
- In general, your combos which go back on themselves e.g. 00:12:700 (2,3,4,5,6) and 00:32:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) look odd because you're not making them into perfect triangles. For 00:12:700 (2,3,4,5,6) - a better look would be http://puu.sh/aCMYZ/798dce1b8d.jpg. I would suggest adjusting these combos a bit to avoid overlaps and make them look nicer. redone majority of them. i feel that some don't have to be perfect, so i left out a few.
- 00:01:450 (4,9) - 4 overlaps 7 here which looks ugly. AR is not fast enough to prevent the overlap. fixed!
- 00:02:521 (1,2) - Blanket these two properly. fixed!
- 00:03:771 (2,4) - Blanket these two properly as well. fixed!
- 00:05:200 (7) - Comment about the flow here. Place it more upwards, so the flow from the previous slider will fit it. http://puu.sh/aCMFl/d378e9bb52.jpg fixed!
- 00:07:878 (7,2) - Again, the overlap fixed!
- 00:12:164 (1,2,3) - The flow here is odd yet again. The slider points to the upper right, but your next combo goes from the bottom right to the upper left. fixed!
- 00:19:307 (1) - Make the notes perfectly go on the slidertrack. http://puu.sh/aCMNP/100a8b104b.jpg fixed!
- 00:34:664 (9) - I expected this to have a similar shape with (8). fixed!
- 00:37:253 (3) - There really is no music basis for this note here. Remove. fixed!
- 00:37:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - The flow of this combo is odd. Try positioning the objects so that they lead into each other. fixed!
- 00:51:450 (1,2,3,4,1) - Either make this into a titled square and overlap the two (1)s or make it into a pentagon. The current one looks so ugly :/ fixed!
- 01:23:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - The lack of notes here is offputting a bit. fixed, i think.

[Hard]
- I've noticed that this diff has a lot of changes I've mentioned that can be applied for other parts of the diff (including flow). Please take the initiative to change them as well.
- 00:01:093 () - There's a heavy beat here. Place a note here instead of making it inside the slider. fixed!
- 00:02:075 () - Don't hear any heavy music here to warrant a note. fixed!
- 00:07:164 (3,4) - Generally speaking a good flowing slider to slider combo would usually involve either a similar shape but rotated or flipped. This plays oddly. http://puu.sh/aCNtS/dd18bcfcee.jpg Fix the others all well in this combo. gonna keep for now.
- 00:14:307 (3,4) - Same comment as earlier. Although this plays much better since (3) leads into (4). [Also make (4) lead into (1) of the next combo] ^
- 00:17:878 (2,3,4,5) - The overlaps look ugly IMO. fixed!
- 00:19:307 (1,3,4) - You used a curved slider then switched to straight-edged ones... They look aesthetically unappealing. keeping, i think its cool
- 00:35:021 (2,3,4,5) - Slider are touching each other partly. Please move them further a bit. fixed!
- 01:14:128 (6,7) - Make the first one repeat once only and then extend the repeats of the second. fixed!

[Normal]
- 00:01:985 (3) - The red tick at the middle makes this slider look odd. fixed!
- 00:11:100 (4) - Unsnapped. fixed!
- 00:16:807 (6) - Rotate selection center by -20 to make this fit better. fixed!
- 00:26:807 (3,1) - Incorrect spacing. fixed!
- 00:55:021 (1) - This may confuse players. A short slider with more than 1 repeat. fixed!
- 00:56:271 (3,4) - Same comment regarding flow as other diffs. fixed!

[Overall]
- I'm sorry, but IMO this map isn't ready for ranking yet sorry!

kamisamaaa wrote:

add some suggestion on insane diff >.<
no KD for this post.
[insane]
00:02:075 (8) - overmapped and sound strange. i wanna keep!
00:03:057 (2) - change this to a note and slider. because you miss a strong drum on 00:03:235 fixed!
00:04:664 (6,7) - I have a good idea here. 00:04:664- here add a note and begin a 1/1 slider from 00:04:843- . and use 0.5x slider speed to this slider. a slow slider really fit the music here. good idea, looks fun!
00:13:414 (1,2,3) - strange rhythm. the music here is every two should be a group.thats means 00:13:414- here should be a note this is fix
and make same pattern with 00:12:521 (2,3,4,5,6) - . and begin these slider on white tick. keep jump
00:24:843 (5) - add finish. because of the music done
01:28:593 (2) - also suggest you change to a slow slider end at 01:28:860- okay, change sldier
01:26:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - the jump hear look casual and just up and down a little boring. fix

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, there's a mod in progress. Feel free to apply the suggestions for the diffs I've already checked. I will edit this post and finish the mod soon.

[box=an unfinished modpost]Yo, as requested.

[General]

1. Make sure that Widescreen Support is disabled in all diffs. This thing is used only for storyboads and you don't have one. fixed
2. Clyine's Extra has no video enabled, make sure that this will get fixed. fixed
3. Do you really need to place names of the mappers on the BG? It's not necessary at all and it makes your map ~1mb heavier. You could also use diff-specific storyboard elements and just ONE background image for this reason, which would be more reasonable. reduced, GD, should be fine now.

[Normal]

1. You can try to focus a bit more on improving you flow since it's the main issue I see with this diff. It is not bad even as it is, but it can be improved.
2. 00:16:807 (6,1) - minor - you can try to make a blanket-slider here to improve the appearance of this pattern and to make it look neater. fixed
3. 00:19:128 - please, place a circle here. There's a clearly audible sound in music which should be mapped in order to make the rhythm more logical and natural. fixed
4. 00:27:521 (1) - according to your pattern this new combo is extra. It is out of your pattern, feels irregular and is not really necessary here. Remove it, please. fixed
   Note: 00:38:950 (1) - same thing happens here. fixed
5. 01:28:950 (6) - the head of the slider is inaudible, which is unrankable. Make at least head of the slider audible (20%+ volume). fixed throughout
   
   Not bad, since so many modders have already checked it. It can be better, but for a first map it looks cool!

[Hard]

1. Setting AR to 7,5 might match better with your slider velocity and will also make the spread more balanced. fixed
2. 00:01:271 (2,3,4) - minor - please, check the spacing, it feels broken and does not play good, because there is no any reason to put a lower-DS pattern here. fixed
3. 00:26:807 - 00:27:521 - 00:28:235 - the vocals at these beats are completely ignored which makes the sliders feel off and 00:26:450 (1,2,3,4) - the whole pattern feels rather onfusing and maybe even a bit unpleasant while playing. fixed
4. 00:29:307 (1,2) - the second reverse on such sliders is really hard to notice and feels confusing. I highly suggest you to remove it and replace them with something else to make the diff more playable. Te song is relaxing, so, there should not be any tricky/confusing patterns, imo. fixed
5. 00:32:878 (5,6) - the repeats on the blue ticks sound overmapped and feel forced to play. Mind replacing these sliders with two circles? This would improve the playability and fit better with the rhythm. fixed
6. 00:41:360 (2,4) - these two are overmapped. They don't really make sense with the vocals and music and they seem out of your patterns. Also, note, that there are 3 harder diffs and having overmapped pattern in hard seems really weird. fixed
7. 00:45:200 (7,8,9,10,11) - the jumpy pattern seems to be off music, please, pay more attention to it and see if it is playable or not. I had no problems with reading it, but I didn't understand the logic here, so I'm leaving it up to you. i think it goes along, but it might just be my imagination, keeping for now.
8. 00:49:485 (2,3) - select them and press Ctrl+G. It will swap them on the timeline, it will prevent the overlap (00:48:950 (10,2)) and improve your flow slightly. fixed, and mirrored
9. 00:51:450 (7) - quite the same as 00:29:307 (1,2). If you listen closer, you can hear that the vocals kick in at 00:51:628 - not at 00:51:450. Which means that there should be a circle at 00:51:450. apparently her makes a sound at 00:51:450, so i feel that the 4 beats in a slider is warranted.
10. 01:00:735 (1) - I would not ignore the beat here. It feels empty and bugs me quite a bit + it ruins your consistent pattern a bit. fixed
11. 01:11:985 (4,5) - that would be a good idea to replace them with 1/2 slider in order to emphasize the beats on the white ticks. fixed
12. 01:14:396 (7) - it is realy hard to tell that the slider will have more repeats than the previous one. Place a new combo there, so players will be able to read it easier. fixed
    
    Flow and some rhythm mistakes are the things you should focus on. I think that you can actually make the diff much better.

[Insane]

1. The DS you've picked feels way too agressive. For a relaxing song with such a high Dlider Velocity I'd recommend to use a lower one. Please, consider re-arranging the notes with a lower DS(x1,0, maybe?). Please keep in mind that there're two extra diffs, so your Insane should not be a super-hard one. i tone down the beginning, but i'd like to keep the difficulty.
2. 00:05:200 - you can reduce volume on the tail of a slider to match better with the music. The music kinda fades here, so, reducing volume of the slider should be a nice idea. fixed.
3. 00:22:164 (8) - haven't you missed a new combo here? It feels like you did because the chain is much longer than the others and your combo-pattern seems to be broken here. yeap, fixed.
   
   There're a lot of patterns that bug me, but most of the issues I see are due to high Distance Spacing, so, reducing it might help you to improve the diff a greately.

You have a lot of things to improve, keep going!

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Best of luck!

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hello, here's the mod from my queue! Don't expect to much because im still a noob modder, but I'll try my best

[Insane]

00:58:772 (3) - Have this blanket 4 a little better fix

Well that's the end of the mod!
Sorry it's so short, but i dont really see anything wrong with the map
Hopefully this will help you a bit

GL Getting this ranked! the jumps are really fun

xxdeathx wrote:

rechecking no KD

easy is missing dont need, NHIX mapset.

map could still be a lot neater. i'll be talking about your hard diff but it can very well apply to the others.
some of your sliders of the same length are more curved than others and when they're next to each other it would look better for corresponding sliders to be congruent. also use copy/paste more often and rotate/flip the sliders so that they're the exact same shape. it'll be much neater that way.
also, using too many slider points or having red slider points can be great if they work out fine but really ugly and ruin the consistency of the map if they don't. that's the case with a lot of your sliders like 00:10:021 (3,4) - in your hard so i'd just stick with the simple 2 or 3 slider point sliders. this section 00:12:164 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - was really nice compared to the rest of your map because it followed the neatness things i just specified. but please try to stay away from 00:16:450 (4,5) until you're more familiar with these. even i've never used a slider with a single red point because i don't know where they're good for.
stuff like 00:07:521 (4,6) - 00:08:414 (7,8) - in your hard should be parallel (use copy/paste)
00:30:021 (3,4,5,6) - this part doesn't use time-distance spacing (distance snap) so it's extremely hard to play and misleading.
i was talking about consistency. you want to reuse patterns in corresponding parts of the music and keep your mapping style consistent throughout, so when you get creative like 00:40:735 (1,2,3) - it conflicts with the style you have in the rest of the map.
01:05:200 (5,6,7,8,9) - these jumps are way too hard and the flow isn't good either
01:19:843 (1,2,3,4,5) - way too hard too

your normal is a little better than your hard in these regards but the same things still apply. patterns like 00:38:950 (3,4) - don't fit in as much as http://puu.sh/aGARt/f455ac2adf.png

let's have a look at your insane: i didn't mod it earlier but i'll point out things now
00:01:985 (7,8,9,2,3) - again, needs to be neater. you might as well fully stack them or place one of them at a different location to avoid this messy overlap
00:26:093 (1,2) - the consistency i mentioned before. you should see an opportunity to make this symmetrical
00:42:878 (4) - i understand what you're trying to do here but a 1/4 slider pointing the other way isn't good when there's a stream of circles following it
01:04:664 (6,1,2) - it's better and quite possible if you don't overlap them at all
01:26:271 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - way harder than the rest of your map. without these circles, this diff would be 4.47 stars compared to 4.78 earlier. having 13 2.xx distance 1/2 circles in a row is way too hard for a 4.5 star map. the end can be harder but if it boosts the star difficulty by over 0.3, that's too much.

well it's clear you've put a lot of effort into this and want this ranked, but it is your first and only map. you still need some more experience to make it up to ranking quality standards, which i don't feel it has met yet. i did give you some overall and specific issues, but nohitter (an ex-BAT) has a better understanding than i do and now that your map's up to 50 SP, you could try poking a BAT to give you more advice. star priority generally doesn't mean anything as far as i've seen, but having this much usually puts map relatively high on the pending list and shows your dedication so mention that to the BAT and it's likely you'll find one to go over this map with you.

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, From my queue!

Your map is 'handsome' :3

[> General <]

1. - Do you even need the mapper's name on the background? I don't know if this is against the criteria, but this is just my opinion. o_o i like it

[> Normal <]

1. 00:12:164 (1) - Ctrl + G for a better diamond flow? And watch the spacing. going for a triangle rather, the slider is a separate pattern.
2. 00:16:093 (3) - Add clap done
3. 00:19:307 (6,7,8,1) - A bit boring when staying on one place of grid, Try making a Tornado formation here. And add NC on slider (6), new track. changed
4. 00:22:878 (5,3) - Don't know if this overlap tail is intentional, I perfer a stack here, watch the spacing. Also, add clap on slider tail. keep
5. 00:28:235 (6,7) - A little ugly blanket, unsharp slider? keep
6. 00:33:593 (3,4,1) - Make a Triangle form here? keep
7. 00:38:950 (3,4) - You broke the flow here, make a blanket or a parallel here, it doesn't play well imo. keep
8. 00:42:878 (1,2) - Since there is a downbeat here, swap NC fixed
9. 00:51:450 (1,2,3) - Overlap, remake as blanket. Also, remove clap on circle (2), I only hear vocal track, not the song track here. overlap is fine
10. 01:00:021 (1) - Make a blanket here? it might look better when you're make symmetry with the next notes on 01:00:735 (2,3) - keep
11. 01:22:521 (1) - Add clap fixed
12. 01:23:593 (4,8) - Same reason as 00:22:878 (5,3) - idk the combo you're linking to is weird
13. 01:25:378 (8,2) - You should've made a symmetry here... keep, not a fan of symmetry
14. - Some nazi issues, but nice diff!

[> Hard <]

1. 00:03:593 (1,2,3,4) - Good pattern, but it's not complete, Can't you curve the last slider for a full one? keep, it goes with the vocals
2. 00:04:664 (4,5) - This doesn't consider a jump, it's just a weird spacing when you've used 1.4x/1.5x spacing all the way here. Could you fix that? fixed!
3. 00:13:057 (2) - Curve this to blanket the next slider or try to flow with the previous slider. changed
4. 00:25:021 (1,1) - Likely an Overlap, try stacking the slider tail. too far apart to be an issue
5. 00:29:307 (1,2) - Make a parallel or symmetry here. keep~
6. 00:32:164 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:35:021 (1,2) - ^
8. 00:45:200 (7) - Add NC fixed
9. 00:48:950 (9,3) - Same as 00:25:021 (1,1) - keep, too far to actually be an issue
10. 00:51:807 (7) - Same reason as normal diff, remove clap. fixed
11. 01:01:450 (3) - Remove clap fixed
12. 01:02:343 (5) - Add NC fixed
13. 01:05:200 (5,6,7,8) - Looks bad, remake it perfectly. fixed
14. 01:17:700 (1,1) - Remove NCs, still on the same track, omg.. i wanna keep the effect of this
15. - Add claps > 00:08:950 (8) - / 00:30:021 (2) - / 00:31:093 / 00:31:807 (4) - / 00:32:521 (1) - / 00:33:235 (2) - / 00:35:378 (1) - / 00:36:093 (2) - / 00:36:807 (4) - / 00:37:521 (1) - / 00:38:235 (2) - / 00:38:950 (3) - / 00:39:664 (4) - / 01:23:235 (7) - / That's all~ fixed some! thanks!
16. - Well, pretty much a great diff, GJ!

Insanes are fine, I can feel this map should be ready for a BAT-mod, Try getting one!
And.. Good Luck!

INSANE
7 needs NC because SV change that is not natural. may help with the hp drain during silent section too
why SV change to slwoer section like 1 beat early?
NCS during the vocals jumps - best one NC every 4 circles
the triangular pattern with sliders really weird cuz they dont flow into each other at all
before kiai teh "DAKARA" should be the emphasized thing. there is an extra circle before that may want to be unNC'd or moved or something
during kiai there's a reverse slider that ends on downbeat sounds crap
NCs after kiai wat inconsistent with 1 bar pattern
ending weird NCs too

there's also a gross slider somewhere

HARD

NCS are gross all over the place
1/2 stack in very first section out of place much
a bunch of passive sliders n stuff. on vocals and downebats (downbeats more importnat but yeah)
some weird triangle thing NC would make spacing more readable
rhythms before kiai way too extreme cuz of the triples under slidesr
t eh dakara thing again
rhythms in kiai are really odd
after the spinner what is that rhythm
right before end silenter part, there's a triple vocal thing, then another triple vocal thing after 1 beat, but he has triple patterns separated by 1/2 beat and it is really stupid

testplay 2:
around 1/4 into it there's a weird wave slider that is kidn fo gross
the 2 reverse slidesrs somewhere in kiai that are parallel i read reallywrong every time

flip dat last slider so mouse drops into the curve

NORMAL

le wave and blanket stuff of it
the circle jump tthen stack thing hard read.
some square stuff is that a jump or something?
distance snap is not here or my keyboard is broken
doubles eww
dat slider
SV change in normal umm no
he's like skipping thedownbeat for the slow SV part and i dont get it
triple? just make it a 1/2 slider

rhythm is confusing af
stacks are confusing af