1. Hard (4,89 stars, 319 notes)
2. Normal (2,14 stars, 128 notes)

1. since you have no GDs make your kiai the same in all diffs
2. i think you need a easy for this mapset because the normal diff imo is a bit hard for the easyer diff of the mapset

1. the setting are to hight for a normal i would recomend to sue AR 4 and OD and HP 3 if you think that your AR is fine, just set down the HP and the OD to 4

1. your spacing in some points change random to 1.00 or to 1.20 when you follow 1.1 spacing,try to fix those points i'll mention just some of them
2. 00:19:320 (1) - like here the next is 1.20
3. 00:23:698 (3) - next is 1.0
4. 00:30:908 (1,2) - if you look good here is an unperfectstack since the difference to the next object is 0.02 and it should be 0.00

1. i think you used to many stacks that normaly ppl use in a hard diff or confusing patterns that are not appropriate to the easier diff of a mapset
2. 00:07:217 (2,3) - this pattern looks better like:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:050 (1,2) - i agree with patterns like this but i totally desagree to patterns like : 00:14:428 (1,2) - are a bit confusional imo in the easier diff of the mapset
4. 00:15:200 (2,1) - try something like this here:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:19:320 (1,2) - i don't really like this overlap
6. 00:22:668 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - confusional pattern
7. 00:44:041 (2,3) - same problem as 00:15:200 (2,1) - and other after that won't mention similar patterns again
8. 02:01:552 (2,3) - first of all it's an ugly overlap and confusional and same here: 02:12:883 (1,2,3) -
9. 02:29:363 (1,2,3,4) - same here why why why ;___;

1. i think you should use AR 7 with HP and OD 6 // if you won't change the AR reduce the HP and OD 7

1. 00:08:762 (2,3) - this jump is to big
2. 00:10:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is ok butnot good constructed or how to say it, you need to ctrl+g this: 00:10:565 (1) - and 00:11:080 (2) - and 00:11:852 (5) - to have something like:
   
   SPOILER

   meeh puush stop to work
   
3. 00:31:681 (3) - try to do something like :
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:45:458 (5) - remove this circle seems extra
5. 01:48:677 (5) - place it in the middle
6. 02:12:883 (1,2,3) - why so overlapped ;_;
7. 02:28:848 (4) - ctrl+g here

Kanye West wrote:

few quick things

[Normal]

00:31:681 (2) - I think having notes under slider ends is unrankable for normal diffs, move it to the top of the next slider done
01:00:265 (2,1) - bit of a spacing inconsistency here, can be deceptive for new players because the spacing appears as 1/2 but the timing is 1/1 oh damn how i didn't notice this, thanks fixed
01:52:282 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a bit difficult to read because of the overlap, one possible way to fix would be moving the first slider. done

[Hard]

I think this diff plays better with AR8. You have a lot of sliders with 1/4 timing difference and those are much easier to read with AR8. As well as the pattern jumps. You might want to get more opinions on this though. yes i also think the same, i just changed it for now according to one mod.

00:18:548 (7) - NC
00:19:320 (1) - Remove NC oh yes thank you

Love the map and song, good luck <3 thanks for the sudden mod ilu <3

Kanye West wrote:

o

have a star

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, le random mod! ^^' <3

[General]
The mp3 sound abit muffled, try to find a better quality if you can? Yeah noticed it too, i will wait if someone can find me a better one, i dont want to poot the mapset

[Normal]
00:27:303 - Add Add a clap on slider tick, helps liven up the music!
00:29:361 - ^
00:35:543 - ^
00:37:604 - ^
00:39:664 - ^ done
00:38:634 (4) - NC done
00:54:599 (1) - Ad clap on the tail. done
01:34:771 (4) - Looks better if curved inwards imo:
nah, will stay like that
01:35:286 - Add clap on slider tick.
01:39:406 - ^
01:45:586 - ^
02:02:067 - ^ done all

[Hard]
00:25:243 - Add a clap on slider tick, helps liven up the music!
00:27:303 - ^
00:28:333 - ^
00:30:393 - ^
00:32:453 - ^
00:37:604 - ^
00:40:694 - ^
00:52:024 - ^ done all
00:55:114 (6) - Use clap instead of whistle on the head.
00:57:174 (6) - ^
00:59:234 (2) - ^ nope to these 3
02:12:883 (1,2,3) - This overlap it was not a problem on testplays

Looks pretty good! thanks!

Wow this song sounds so depressing o.o The feels... *shivers*

Hope this helps~! ^^

-RIKKA- wrote:

From M4M

Normal
・01:13:398 (2,1) - Spacing 1.2x ⇒ 1.1x oh thank you <3
・00:51:509 (2) - like this ? ↓

okke

・01:01:295 (1,1) - like ths ? ↓

great


Hard
・00:43:269 (1) - Remove NC ? nah, that note is special
・01:48:419 (4) - y:112 or (1)'s y:113 fix
・02:07:732 (2,3,4,5,6) - x:332 y:44 yup <3

Nice map thanks for the great mod!

1. 02:27:818 (1,1,1) - Given the nature of the thinner texture of the song at this point, all of the loud whistles at this volume seem to cut through a bit too strong.

1. 01:01:295 (1,2,3) - Not a problem, just a commendation; looking at this and patterns like it in the editor, it doesn't look like a naturally-flowing pattern, but in gameplay the execution is fluid. Well done.
2. 02:16:101 (2) - Soft whistle at the beginning of the slider, perhaps?
3. 02:27:818 (1,1,1) - Same criticism as Normal.

Mogsworth wrote:

So excited to see a map for this/Bat For Lashes in general. Only got a few notes on here, all subjective. <3 i especially like this song so much

Normal

1. 02:27:818 (1,1,1) - Given the nature of the thinner texture of the song at this point, all of the loud whistles at this volume seem to cut through a bit too strong. uh-uh, i have a problem with hitsounds and trying to fix everything from the start. CtB has a weird bug

Hard:

1. 01:01:295 (1,2,3) - Not a problem, just a commendation; looking at this and patterns like it in the editor, it doesn't look like a naturally-flowing pattern, but in gameplay the execution is fluid. Well done. thank you
2. 02:16:101 (2) - Soft whistle at the beginning of the slider, perhaps? yup
3. 02:27:818 (1,1,1) - Same criticism as Normal. and same answer

Not very many things I can complain about here without fishing for nitpicks.

UnderminE wrote:

[General]
The mp3 sound abit muffled, try to find a better quality if you can? Yeah noticed it too, i will wait if someone can find me a better one, i dont want to poot the mapset

10crystalmask01 wrote:

UnderminE wrote:

[General]
The mp3 sound abit muffled, try to find a better quality if you can? Yeah noticed it too, i will wait if someone can find me a better one, i dont want to poot the mapset

Found a better quality:

Bat For Lashes - What's A Girl To Do?
~164 kbps. I think the end needs to be trimmed a bit so its total time is the same as your current mp3.

Senbon wrote:

Hello, from my M4M.

General

SPOILER

Great hitsounds
Fun
Yeah, can't wait until you use the better .mp3

I feel like i just nazi modded 'cause it's already great

Normal

SPOILER

00:38:634 (1) - I find this awkward, maybe no repeat nah it's fine
01:45:071 (1) - Align ends nah that looks awkward in current pattern ;_;

Hard

SPOILER

00:34:771 (1,2,3,4) - These doubles doesn't seem to flow and sound well (2) one tick over? nope, i like how they play
00:39:921 (3) - I would change this to a circle and start slider at 00:40:179 good idea, thanks for suggestion i will think about it~

reisende wrote:

Some help with custom clap's volume and sections: <3

Hard
00:52:539 - Custom Clap
00:53:698 (2) - remove section, make previous 75%
00:54:342 - 75%
00:56:402 - ^
00:56:788 - remove section
00:57:818 - remove section
00:58:462 - 75%
00:59:749 - ^
01:01:938 - remove section
01:07:990 - 70%
01:15:973 - noisy whistle
01:42:754 (1) - 75%
01:42:754 (1) - 80%
01:42:754 (1) - ^
01:42:754 (1) - ^
01:42:754 (1) - 70%
01:42:754 (1) - ^ applied all, thanks for your help!

yachiru4 wrote:

Hey from my queue!

...Unfortunately I didn't pass the level And I'll explain why.
Your objects seem to be altering from instrument to instrument which is pretty annoying.
After a few seconds on the music, i started to get confused on which beat to follow: The piano's or the loud beats/claps?
Try not to change the rhythm from instrument to instrument, that's all I can really say. My mapping style is something like "map the first instrument you hear" Sometimes piano is on front line, sometimes bass, sometimes vocal. if there is vocal, i mostly map vocal and if not i map what i hear the loudest.


Aaaand a few of your objects are off-timing and I might as well point them out:
00:11:339 (3,4) - this follows vocal
00:15:590 (5,6,7) - Why is this part so slow, when the piano notes are obviously rushed here? Another part that caught me off. okke, tried something different

Good luck! Thanks!

sheela901 wrote:

M4M

[Normal]
00:28:989 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the trail? i added some finishes
00:31:050 (2) - ^
00:38:780 (2) - Add a finish? there is no finish at the background so no
02:05:871 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+J for a flow? oh yes good idea <3

[Hard]
00:23:062 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe you could change the pattern? changed 1 note only
01:10:731 (4) - Somewhere at x:248 y:352 so it could have the same distance snap like 01:09:700 (2,3) . okke
01:55:564 (3) - NC? oke
02:18:368 (2) - Move it to x:308 y:208 for the distance? nah

Good Luck and star!

AnreFM wrote:

What's A Girl To Do?
SELL MOE ;_;

hey undermine ovo
m4m from your queue~
okay hope this helps owo

[Normal]
00:10:437 (3) - isn't exactly in the middle of 00:09:406 (2) - try 144/312 it's there already ><
00:20:228 (3) - Make more curvy? this one bugs me so >< try middle point to 192/308
00:26:927 (1) - Make the same shape as 00:25:897 (2) - ? current straight one just don't fit with the circles after it well, a new rhythm
00:33:884 (2,3) - Doesn't necesarrily need to be stacked, vocal doesn't really fit, is okay though for the bass ><
00:40:841 (1) - didn't really get what this note is following xo carries the vocal and bass at the same time
00:51:663 (5) - blanket 00:50:633 (4) - ? rhythm still connected so it fits owo nah, would be too much after a hard pattern like that
01:11:246 (4,5) - Make it curvy? straight play isn't really good here curvy would look even more uglier
01:18:461 (4) - NC for downbeat oke
01:41:135 (4) - Tail to right a few grid for better stack o3o oh damn even a stack hunter like me didnt notice that ;_;
01:43:969 (2) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964826 i always suck at making those kind of sliders okay ;___;
01:45:258 (3) - NC for combo consistency like you did on previous rhythm oh yes
01:47:319 (1) - Try to make cleaner turn for better look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964831 okke, tried something
02:34:214 (1) - I strongly recomend to bringback kiai here, the feel is strong enough and the last chorus of the song, feels empty without one nope, not much feels ;_;
02:17:724 (1) - Blanket 02:18:754 (1) - better, really hm hm
02:21:846 (1) - lol make the turn cleaner as it doesn't blanket anything, looked a bit off ouo changed it a little bit then ;_;

[Hard]
00:23:062 (3) - NC for different rhythm(i stumbled because of this) oke
01:10:215 (3) - plays better with ctrl g really oke
01:18:461 (5) - NC same as normal woho okay
Fine overall, but i personally dislike the stacked slider like 00:35:688 (4,5) - as a few of them doesn't play well, try to use more like 00:39:295 (1,2) - they plays good actually owo consider changing it~ changed someee

yeah i guess that's all, pretty good already sorry if it doesn't help orz
might do a recheck because i'm baka like that no you were helpful <3 thanks!

ampzz wrote:

General

1. BPM: 116.500
2. Offset: 3817

After you get everything all snapped to this timing send me a pm in-game and I'll edit this for the full mod. (´∪`*)

Faust wrote:

:/

Not updated with timing and mods.

\:

HellDawn wrote:

Selam canım

Hard

Approach Rate 'de biraz kafam karışık -1 e düsürdüm öylede güzel oluyor zaten bir de hard diff i oldugu icin yakıstıgını düsünüyorum. İstersen yinede bir arkadaşlarına sor -1 iyimi diye (7). çok denedim 7'yi de yok ya çoğunluk 8 dedi, testplayler falan

00:42:186 (3,4) - 1 grid sola kaydirip üstteki 2 sliderla esitleyebilirsin durumu ve daha güzel duruyor öyle okke

SPOILER

00:52:486 (3,4,5,6) - Kafa karışıklıgı istersen farklı bir yer deniyebilirsin ? test playde sorun olmadi AR sayesinde
01:04:203 (2) - Snap dışında yapmıssın sanki oynarken zorlandım en azından biraz yaklaştırabilirsin diye düsünüyorum. ve daha bunlarda var > 01:08:323 (2) - , 01:12:443 (2) - aslinda mapte en çok beğenilen şey o olmuştu, güzel oynaniyor dedi arkadaşlar ben de pek seviyorum değiştiresim yok DT eklendiğinde challenge olur biraz

Süper bir mapset hic bir sey bulamadım, İyi şanslar. Teşkür ettim bebiyim <3

haha5957 wrote:

all my mods are based on my pure feelings so feel free to ignore them all OuO

[General]
at first i didnt like the music but this is damn addictive LOL


[Normal]
00:56:864 (1,2) - something like http://puu.sh/4tglE.jpg this feels better for me OuO hmmm useful, thanks for suggestion i will work on it. Though personally i dont want to make it hard because this is the easiest diff ;_;


[Hard]

00:53:259 (1) - i think 3/4 doesnt fits here.. maybe just make it 1/2? nope, i especially did 3/4 for vocal like how i did in entire map
00:42:186 (3,4) - feels slightly awkward for me, maybe just make 3 a circle, and start the long slider (which is, 4) on 42:443? if i do that i will have to make 4 even more longer which will look awkward. i am just following the rhythm on the background

k
my modding so useless LOL

thus i gave a star
dont be angry plz OuO


good luck~

1. 00:10:512 (3) - This slider's form is not centered with the previous slider's end. If we look on 00:09:997 - , we can see that the curve is mostly at the left. Actually, just move it some grids at the right while keeping the same spacing consistency and it would make it more centered, just like you were doing a blanket with the "approach circle" of the sliderball.
2. 00:53:774 (2) - What I hate personally about these sliders when trying to make a blanket is.. the curve is always not looking good. always. I tried to make it look better with some really small changes, you should try it out:
   
   Code

   288,236,53774,2,0,B|248:236|248:236|188:300|108:252,2,180,8|8|6,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:49:911 (2) - The spacing with the previous and the next objects are slightly inconsistent. Just try to move this circle a bit to make it more consistent.
4. 02:03:817 (2) - It would be prefered to unstack this slider with the end of the previous one, it looks more confusing than enjoyable. If by an example, the slider was starting on 02:03:559 - , then, I wouldn't refuse but, since it's having a larger spacing and it's a Normal difficulty, it is not the same. Please, think about it.
5. 02:20:297 (2) - Is this slider supposed to be aligned with the previous one? If so, move this slider one grid at the left to make it perfectly aligned with the previous slider.

1. 00:11:027 (2,3,4) - The rhythm of these objects are not really following the melody, aka music+lyrics. It's mostly how the slider (3) is starting/ending that sounds very strange. I would like you to replace them with something else, maybe you could try this?
   
2. 00:16:692 (1) - There's actually no sounds on 00:17:336 - , so why would you add something here when we clearly don't hear anything? It would be better if you try to emphasize this point 00:17:207 - instead. All you have to do, is to reduce the slider by 1/4. It would also be better for the next object.
3. 00:59:696 (7) - this circle is not aligned with the previous circles, we can can see pretty easily. Move it two grids up, it's going to make it more aligned with the others.
4. 02:10:769 (6) - Why not stacking this circle with the beginning of this slider 02:09:482 (1) - ? I don't see what's pushing you of don't making it stacked o:

Gabe wrote:

Quick look~
Hai, is that La Cataline's old avatar? o.o ... Yup, it's Ange from Umineko series <3 when i mapped this i had no internet so i just had to used a pic from my computer

Normal

1. 00:10:512 (3) - This slider's form is not centered with the previous slider's end. If we look on 00:09:997 - , we can see that the curve is mostly at the left. Actually, just move it some grids at the right while keeping the same spacing consistency and it would make it more centered, just like you were doing a blanket with the "approach circle" of the sliderball. moved 1 grid right
2. 00:53:774 (2) - What I hate personally about these sliders when trying to make a blanket is.. the curve is always not looking good. always. I tried to make it look better with some really small changes, you should try it out: done
   
   Code

   288,236,53774,2,0,B|248:236|248:236|188:300|108:252,2,180,8|8|6,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0: 

3. 01:49:911 (2) - The spacing with the previous and the next objects are slightly inconsistent. Just try to move this circle a bit to make it more consistent. oh true, fixed
4. 02:03:817 (2) - It would be prefered to unstack this slider with the end of the previous one, it looks more confusing than enjoyable. If by an example, the slider was starting on 02:03:559 - , then, I wouldn't refuse but, since it's having a larger spacing and it's a Normal difficulty, it is not the same. Please, think about it. tried something different
5. 02:20:297 (2) - Is this slider supposed to be aligned with the previous one? If so, move this slider one grid at the left to make it perfectly aligned with the previous slider.donnnee

Hard

1. 00:11:027 (2,3,4) - The rhythm of these objects are not really following the melody, aka music+lyrics. It's mostly how the slider (3) is starting/ending that sounds very strange. I would like you to replace them with something else, maybe you could try this? yeah, tried something like that
   
2. 00:16:692 (1) - There's actually no sounds on 00:17:336 - , so why would you add something here when we clearly don't hear anything? It would be better if you try to emphasize this point 00:17:207 - instead. All you have to do, is to reduce the slider by 1/4. It would also be better for the next object. done
3. 00:59:696 (7) - this circle is not aligned with the previous circles, we can can see pretty easily. Move it two grids up, it's going to make it more aligned with the others. okkeee
4. 02:10:769 (6) - Why not stacking this circle with the beginning of this slider 02:09:482 (1) - ? I don't see what's pushing you of don't making it stacked o: oh true it looks better like that, done

Nice job here, UnderminE (:
Try to get.. 2 more mods? Call me back after!

yurunneram wrote:

Hey friend :3 Thx for the joke >< Needed to chill a bit so much stress these days ==

Mojin taimu~ OwO)/

Ok now ur song just makes me gloomy again ==

NORMAL

00:40:898 (1) - Try something else since a clap is on 00:41:928 i don't see anything wrong? Clap is on white tick like others.

02:03:817 (2) - Flip horizontally? Flows better donnee

Quite clean

HARD

00:13:344 (2,3,4,5) - This doesn't play so well, try something else? okke

00:17:851 (3,4) - Don't recommend the jump here okke

00:53:774 (2) - Why's there jump here when there's none here 00:55:319 (4) - tried something

01:40:898 - Why no note here? Can stack over 01:40:126 (3) vocal stops there


Oof thats all *wipes off all the depressing feels* Thx fwend would like to hear another joke some day~ ^^ tell me if ya have another one

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram

Xinely wrote:

Hi m4m from my queue

• 
  Normal
  00:09:482 (2,3) - make them blanket with nicely? http://puu.sh/4Mnow.jpg , and yeah make sure 00:12:057 (4) - fix this spacing for consistency oh yes forgot that
  00:13:345 (3) - sampleset drum in head too? seems fit imo :3 done ><
  00:15:147 (2) - when music is calm, whistle in body really not fit imo, remove whistle from body?
  00:16:692 (1) - same as previous, due drum sound here, sampleset drum in head? if you agree with this, make fix in 00:20:812 - etc which have hard sound drum did it for intro only
  00:26:993 (1,2) - kinda bad flow imo, 00:26:993 (1) - 's tail 156,244? done
  00:45:533 - i really recommended to use Finish S:C1 here due music done
  00:48:623 (1) - for this, i heard hard music in 00:49:010 - , you can't skip to map this time imo, try http://puu.sh/4MoeG.jpg with finish S:C1 in repeat fine
  01:18:495 (1) - finish S:C1?also newbie will be confuse 1/1 stacked, hmm move to 140,116 for triangle pattern? finish is fine not changng, done triangle
  01:46:306 (2) - keep spacing consistency pls, my advice: move to 180,244 done
  01:51:456 (4) - in tail, it will be better if you use same hitsounds in 01:50:941 - that woul be wrong, just put a whistle instead
  01:57:121 (1) - whistle too loud here imo make it become 40%? 50 then
  02:01:241 (1) - 284,72. better flow done
  02:06:649 (4,5) - move all to 472,228 for better flow that part is different now
  02:13:602 (1) - same as 01:57:121 (1) -
  02:16:692 (2,3) - really bad overlap due touched with previous, make it anything to avoid overlap that's on purpose.
  02:24:417 (4) - 400,196 for flow okke
  02:40:898 (1) - really recommended to move 02:42:958 - for better vocal oh yes forgot that

• 
  Hard
  00:08:452 (1) - actually make it curved for better flow http://puu.sh/4MtIm.jpg done
  00:25:705 (2) - maybe ctrl+G for flow? done
  00:49:138 (2) - oh man, you can place in 292,48 for better visual, flow and funplaybale done
  00:53:259 (1,2) - you should swap NC due rhythm of music done
  well this rhythm is fun but the 1/4 jumps is so dead and some jumps that seems like insane it supposed to be a dead mapset, since the song is.. you know

Good Luck than ~

1. 00:35:233 (1) - rotate by 135° (Selection C.)? matches better with 00:34:203 (3) and 00:36:263 (2), imo.
2. 00:40:898 (1) - move to 408|84? cause 00:38:838 (2) is following the direction 00:37:293 (1) indicates, I think it'd be nice if this follows 00:39:353 (3).
3. 00:55:834 (3) - rotate by 60° to match better with 00:56:864 (1).
4. 01:05:104 (1) - if you decrease the curve here slightly it'd might look better with 01:03:559 (1)
   comparison

   
   02:19:267 (1,2) - same here
5. 01:13:344 (1,2,3,4) - move 3 to 372|100 and 4 to 308|92? that way they are aligned to 1. ovo
6. 01:34:975 (1,2,3) - you could refine the shape here. I randomly placed a cirlce in the middle to use as a reference and you could align the other objects to that.
   screen

   
   see how the cirlces are much closer to the middle than the slider tracks?
7. 01:57:121 (1) - the shape is fine the way it is, but I'd prefer it more rounded out. (just use two anchors instead of one to get a nicer curve?)
   screen

   
   02:01:241 (1) - same here

1. 00:08:452 (1,2) - use the same curve for both of them?
2. 00:20:812 (1) - looks better to me if you bend it in the other direction.
3. 00:25:705 (2,3) - you could create a really nice triangle pattern with 00:24:932 (1). .o.
   screen -2 is a bit far off here though

   
   I love triangles, sorry!orz
4. 00:32:400 (1,2) - if aligned to 00:31:885 (4) it'd look better.
   screen/compariosn

   
5. 00:41:156 (1,2) - rotate them slightly so they point towards 00:42:186 (3)'s end? they feel more connected that way I think.
6. 01:40:641 (5) - I know this is intentional, but still I'd prefer is this were moved to the same place as 01:40:126 (3).
7. 02:11:027 (1,2,3) - this looks rather random. o.o (maybe I just don't get the pattern.. xD) it's nice that you alternate the three sliders in the same direction, but maybe you can think of something better than this like you did here - 02:15:147 (1,2,3).

Squirrel wrote:

hellow, mod from queue. ~ c:
it's mot much, though, cause -noob beginner modder- >< <3

[General]
everything's perfectly fine here! ^__^
Personally, I'd change the combo colours.. they look unharmonious. and I prefer colours that match each other more. s: i choose 3 colours from background image

[Normal]

1. 00:35:233 (1) - rotate by 135° (Selection C.)? matches better with 00:34:203 (3) and 00:36:263 (2), imo. that's how it was before but someone told me to change it because it's kind of tricky
2. 00:40:898 (1) - move to 408|84? cause 00:38:838 (2) is following the direction 00:37:293 (1) indicates, I think it'd be nice if this follows 00:39:353 (3). oke
3. 00:55:834 (3) - rotate by 60° to match better with 00:56:864 (1). non non non, i want it to match with previous one
4. 01:05:104 (1) - if you decrease the curve here slightly it'd might look better with 01:03:559 (1)
   comparison

   
   02:19:267 (1,2) - same here done
5. 01:13:344 (1,2,3,4) - move 3 to 372|100 and 4 to 308|92? that way they are aligned to 1. ovo i dont want that to happen tho
6. 01:34:975 (1,2,3) - you could refine the shape here. I randomly placed a cirlce in the middle to use as a reference and you could align the other objects to that.
   screen

   
   see how the cirlces are much closer to the middle than the slider tracks? i didnt get this ;_;
7. 01:57:121 (1) - the shape is fine the way it is, but I'd prefer it more rounded out. (just use two anchors instead of one to get a nicer curve?)
   screen

   
   02:01:241 (1) - same here done

[Hard]

1. 00:08:452 (1,2) - use the same curve for both of them? done
2. 00:20:812 (1) - looks better to me if you bend it in the other direction.done
3. 00:25:705 (2,3) - you could create a really nice triangle pattern with 00:24:932 (1). .o.
   screen -2 is a bit far off here though

   
   I love triangles, sorry!orz non non ;_;
4. 00:32:400 (1,2) - if aligned to 00:31:885 (4) it'd look better. done
   screen/compariosn

   
5. 00:41:156 (1,2) - rotate them slightly so they point towards 00:42:186 (3)'s end? they feel more connected that way I think. nah
6. 01:40:641 (5) - I know this is intentional, but still I'd prefer is this were moved to the same place as 01:40:126 (3). non non ><
7. 02:11:027 (1,2,3) - this looks rather random. o.o (maybe I just don't get the pattern.. xD) it's nice that you alternate the three sliders in the same direction, but maybe you can think of something better than this like you did here - 02:15:147 (1,2,3). AND EVERYONE HATED THAT haha i don't know i like this one since it's kind of jumpy

Really nice difficulties, good luck getting this ranked!
Too bad, there is no Easy/Insane, I think it'd be awesome for this to have more difficulties..! >: i actually tried making an Easy first but there was no difference between Normal and Easy diffs in the end. aaand i cant make insane diffs, this was my best ;_;
And sorry for noob modding, this was kinda hard to do, cause I have a sliiight aversion for straight horizontal and vertical sliders. '__'
Hope this was helpful somehow! ^__^/

UnderminE wrote:

Someone shoot a star pls it has to be 40 ;_;

_Gezo_ wrote:

YOU CAN DO IT

free whateveryouwant if you rank it, k?