HellDawn wrote:

Selam canım

Hard

Approach Rate 'de biraz kafam karışık -1 e düsürdüm öylede güzel oluyor zaten bir de hard diff i oldugu icin yakıstıgını düsünüyorum. İstersen yinede bir arkadaşlarına sor -1 iyimi diye (7). çok denedim 7'yi de yok ya çoğunluk 8 dedi, testplayler falan

00:42:186 (3,4) - 1 grid sola kaydirip üstteki 2 sliderla esitleyebilirsin durumu ve daha güzel duruyor öyle okke

SPOILER

00:52:486 (3,4,5,6) - Kafa karışıklıgı istersen farklı bir yer deniyebilirsin ? test playde sorun olmadi AR sayesinde
01:04:203 (2) - Snap dışında yapmıssın sanki oynarken zorlandım en azından biraz yaklaştırabilirsin diye düsünüyorum. ve daha bunlarda var > 01:08:323 (2) - , 01:12:443 (2) - aslinda mapte en çok beğenilen şey o olmuştu, güzel oynaniyor dedi arkadaşlar ben de pek seviyorum değiştiresim yok DT eklendiğinde challenge olur biraz

Süper bir mapset hic bir sey bulamadım, İyi şanslar. Teşkür ettim bebiyim <3

haha5957 wrote:

all my mods are based on my pure feelings so feel free to ignore them all OuO

[General]
at first i didnt like the music but this is damn addictive LOL


[Normal]
00:56:864 (1,2) - something like http://puu.sh/4tglE.jpg this feels better for me OuO hmmm useful, thanks for suggestion i will work on it. Though personally i dont want to make it hard because this is the easiest diff ;_;


[Hard]

00:53:259 (1) - i think 3/4 doesnt fits here.. maybe just make it 1/2? nope, i especially did 3/4 for vocal like how i did in entire map
00:42:186 (3,4) - feels slightly awkward for me, maybe just make 3 a circle, and start the long slider (which is, 4) on 42:443? if i do that i will have to make 4 even more longer which will look awkward. i am just following the rhythm on the background

k
my modding so useless LOL

thus i gave a star
dont be angry plz OuO


good luck~

1. 00:10:512 (3) - This slider's form is not centered with the previous slider's end. If we look on 00:09:997 - , we can see that the curve is mostly at the left. Actually, just move it some grids at the right while keeping the same spacing consistency and it would make it more centered, just like you were doing a blanket with the "approach circle" of the sliderball.
2. 00:53:774 (2) - What I hate personally about these sliders when trying to make a blanket is.. the curve is always not looking good. always. I tried to make it look better with some really small changes, you should try it out:
   
   Code

   288,236,53774,2,0,B|248:236|248:236|188:300|108:252,2,180,8|8|6,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:49:911 (2) - The spacing with the previous and the next objects are slightly inconsistent. Just try to move this circle a bit to make it more consistent.
4. 02:03:817 (2) - It would be prefered to unstack this slider with the end of the previous one, it looks more confusing than enjoyable. If by an example, the slider was starting on 02:03:559 - , then, I wouldn't refuse but, since it's having a larger spacing and it's a Normal difficulty, it is not the same. Please, think about it.
5. 02:20:297 (2) - Is this slider supposed to be aligned with the previous one? If so, move this slider one grid at the left to make it perfectly aligned with the previous slider.

1. 00:11:027 (2,3,4) - The rhythm of these objects are not really following the melody, aka music+lyrics. It's mostly how the slider (3) is starting/ending that sounds very strange. I would like you to replace them with something else, maybe you could try this?
   
2. 00:16:692 (1) - There's actually no sounds on 00:17:336 - , so why would you add something here when we clearly don't hear anything? It would be better if you try to emphasize this point 00:17:207 - instead. All you have to do, is to reduce the slider by 1/4. It would also be better for the next object.
3. 00:59:696 (7) - this circle is not aligned with the previous circles, we can can see pretty easily. Move it two grids up, it's going to make it more aligned with the others.
4. 02:10:769 (6) - Why not stacking this circle with the beginning of this slider 02:09:482 (1) - ? I don't see what's pushing you of don't making it stacked o:

Gabe wrote:

Quick look~
Hai, is that La Cataline's old avatar? o.o ... Yup, it's Ange from Umineko series <3 when i mapped this i had no internet so i just had to used a pic from my computer

Normal

1. 00:10:512 (3) - This slider's form is not centered with the previous slider's end. If we look on 00:09:997 - , we can see that the curve is mostly at the left. Actually, just move it some grids at the right while keeping the same spacing consistency and it would make it more centered, just like you were doing a blanket with the "approach circle" of the sliderball. moved 1 grid right
2. 00:53:774 (2) - What I hate personally about these sliders when trying to make a blanket is.. the curve is always not looking good. always. I tried to make it look better with some really small changes, you should try it out: done
   
   Code

   288,236,53774,2,0,B|248:236|248:236|188:300|108:252,2,180,8|8|6,0:1|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0: 

3. 01:49:911 (2) - The spacing with the previous and the next objects are slightly inconsistent. Just try to move this circle a bit to make it more consistent. oh true, fixed
4. 02:03:817 (2) - It would be prefered to unstack this slider with the end of the previous one, it looks more confusing than enjoyable. If by an example, the slider was starting on 02:03:559 - , then, I wouldn't refuse but, since it's having a larger spacing and it's a Normal difficulty, it is not the same. Please, think about it. tried something different
5. 02:20:297 (2) - Is this slider supposed to be aligned with the previous one? If so, move this slider one grid at the left to make it perfectly aligned with the previous slider.donnnee

Hard

1. 00:11:027 (2,3,4) - The rhythm of these objects are not really following the melody, aka music+lyrics. It's mostly how the slider (3) is starting/ending that sounds very strange. I would like you to replace them with something else, maybe you could try this? yeah, tried something like that
   
2. 00:16:692 (1) - There's actually no sounds on 00:17:336 - , so why would you add something here when we clearly don't hear anything? It would be better if you try to emphasize this point 00:17:207 - instead. All you have to do, is to reduce the slider by 1/4. It would also be better for the next object. done
3. 00:59:696 (7) - this circle is not aligned with the previous circles, we can can see pretty easily. Move it two grids up, it's going to make it more aligned with the others. okkeee
4. 02:10:769 (6) - Why not stacking this circle with the beginning of this slider 02:09:482 (1) - ? I don't see what's pushing you of don't making it stacked o: oh true it looks better like that, done

Nice job here, UnderminE (:
Try to get.. 2 more mods? Call me back after!

yurunneram wrote:

Hey friend :3 Thx for the joke >< Needed to chill a bit so much stress these days ==

Mojin taimu~ OwO)/

Ok now ur song just makes me gloomy again ==

NORMAL

00:40:898 (1) - Try something else since a clap is on 00:41:928 i don't see anything wrong? Clap is on white tick like others.

02:03:817 (2) - Flip horizontally? Flows better donnee

Quite clean

HARD

00:13:344 (2,3,4,5) - This doesn't play so well, try something else? okke

00:17:851 (3,4) - Don't recommend the jump here okke

00:53:774 (2) - Why's there jump here when there's none here 00:55:319 (4) - tried something

01:40:898 - Why no note here? Can stack over 01:40:126 (3) vocal stops there


Oof thats all *wipes off all the depressing feels* Thx fwend would like to hear another joke some day~ ^^ tell me if ya have another one

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram

Xinely wrote:

Hi m4m from my queue

• 
  Normal
  00:09:482 (2,3) - make them blanket with nicely? http://puu.sh/4Mnow.jpg , and yeah make sure 00:12:057 (4) - fix this spacing for consistency oh yes forgot that
  00:13:345 (3) - sampleset drum in head too? seems fit imo :3 done ><
  00:15:147 (2) - when music is calm, whistle in body really not fit imo, remove whistle from body?
  00:16:692 (1) - same as previous, due drum sound here, sampleset drum in head? if you agree with this, make fix in 00:20:812 - etc which have hard sound drum did it for intro only
  00:26:993 (1,2) - kinda bad flow imo, 00:26:993 (1) - 's tail 156,244? done
  00:45:533 - i really recommended to use Finish S:C1 here due music done
  00:48:623 (1) - for this, i heard hard music in 00:49:010 - , you can't skip to map this time imo, try http://puu.sh/4MoeG.jpg with finish S:C1 in repeat fine
  01:18:495 (1) - finish S:C1?also newbie will be confuse 1/1 stacked, hmm move to 140,116 for triangle pattern? finish is fine not changng, done triangle
  01:46:306 (2) - keep spacing consistency pls, my advice: move to 180,244 done
  01:51:456 (4) - in tail, it will be better if you use same hitsounds in 01:50:941 - that woul be wrong, just put a whistle instead
  01:57:121 (1) - whistle too loud here imo make it become 40%? 50 then
  02:01:241 (1) - 284,72. better flow done
  02:06:649 (4,5) - move all to 472,228 for better flow that part is different now
  02:13:602 (1) - same as 01:57:121 (1) -
  02:16:692 (2,3) - really bad overlap due touched with previous, make it anything to avoid overlap that's on purpose.
  02:24:417 (4) - 400,196 for flow okke
  02:40:898 (1) - really recommended to move 02:42:958 - for better vocal oh yes forgot that

• 
  Hard
  00:08:452 (1) - actually make it curved for better flow http://puu.sh/4MtIm.jpg done
  00:25:705 (2) - maybe ctrl+G for flow? done
  00:49:138 (2) - oh man, you can place in 292,48 for better visual, flow and funplaybale done
  00:53:259 (1,2) - you should swap NC due rhythm of music done
  well this rhythm is fun but the 1/4 jumps is so dead and some jumps that seems like insane it supposed to be a dead mapset, since the song is.. you know

Good Luck than ~

1. 00:35:233 (1) - rotate by 135° (Selection C.)? matches better with 00:34:203 (3) and 00:36:263 (2), imo.
2. 00:40:898 (1) - move to 408|84? cause 00:38:838 (2) is following the direction 00:37:293 (1) indicates, I think it'd be nice if this follows 00:39:353 (3).
3. 00:55:834 (3) - rotate by 60° to match better with 00:56:864 (1).
4. 01:05:104 (1) - if you decrease the curve here slightly it'd might look better with 01:03:559 (1)
   comparison

   
   02:19:267 (1,2) - same here
5. 01:13:344 (1,2,3,4) - move 3 to 372|100 and 4 to 308|92? that way they are aligned to 1. ovo
6. 01:34:975 (1,2,3) - you could refine the shape here. I randomly placed a cirlce in the middle to use as a reference and you could align the other objects to that.
   screen

   
   see how the cirlces are much closer to the middle than the slider tracks?
7. 01:57:121 (1) - the shape is fine the way it is, but I'd prefer it more rounded out. (just use two anchors instead of one to get a nicer curve?)
   screen

   
   02:01:241 (1) - same here

1. 00:08:452 (1,2) - use the same curve for both of them?
2. 00:20:812 (1) - looks better to me if you bend it in the other direction.
3. 00:25:705 (2,3) - you could create a really nice triangle pattern with 00:24:932 (1). .o.
   screen -2 is a bit far off here though

   
   I love triangles, sorry!orz
4. 00:32:400 (1,2) - if aligned to 00:31:885 (4) it'd look better.
   screen/compariosn

   
5. 00:41:156 (1,2) - rotate them slightly so they point towards 00:42:186 (3)'s end? they feel more connected that way I think.
6. 01:40:641 (5) - I know this is intentional, but still I'd prefer is this were moved to the same place as 01:40:126 (3).
7. 02:11:027 (1,2,3) - this looks rather random. o.o (maybe I just don't get the pattern.. xD) it's nice that you alternate the three sliders in the same direction, but maybe you can think of something better than this like you did here - 02:15:147 (1,2,3).

Squirrel wrote:

hellow, mod from queue. ~ c:
it's mot much, though, cause -noob beginner modder- >< <3

[General]
everything's perfectly fine here! ^__^
Personally, I'd change the combo colours.. they look unharmonious. and I prefer colours that match each other more. s: i choose 3 colours from background image

[Normal]

1. 00:35:233 (1) - rotate by 135° (Selection C.)? matches better with 00:34:203 (3) and 00:36:263 (2), imo. that's how it was before but someone told me to change it because it's kind of tricky
2. 00:40:898 (1) - move to 408|84? cause 00:38:838 (2) is following the direction 00:37:293 (1) indicates, I think it'd be nice if this follows 00:39:353 (3). oke
3. 00:55:834 (3) - rotate by 60° to match better with 00:56:864 (1). non non non, i want it to match with previous one
4. 01:05:104 (1) - if you decrease the curve here slightly it'd might look better with 01:03:559 (1)
   comparison

   
   02:19:267 (1,2) - same here done
5. 01:13:344 (1,2,3,4) - move 3 to 372|100 and 4 to 308|92? that way they are aligned to 1. ovo i dont want that to happen tho
6. 01:34:975 (1,2,3) - you could refine the shape here. I randomly placed a cirlce in the middle to use as a reference and you could align the other objects to that.
   screen

   
   see how the cirlces are much closer to the middle than the slider tracks? i didnt get this ;_;
7. 01:57:121 (1) - the shape is fine the way it is, but I'd prefer it more rounded out. (just use two anchors instead of one to get a nicer curve?)
   screen

   
   02:01:241 (1) - same here done

[Hard]

1. 00:08:452 (1,2) - use the same curve for both of them? done
2. 00:20:812 (1) - looks better to me if you bend it in the other direction.done
3. 00:25:705 (2,3) - you could create a really nice triangle pattern with 00:24:932 (1). .o.
   screen -2 is a bit far off here though

   
   I love triangles, sorry!orz non non ;_;
4. 00:32:400 (1,2) - if aligned to 00:31:885 (4) it'd look better. done
   screen/compariosn

   
5. 00:41:156 (1,2) - rotate them slightly so they point towards 00:42:186 (3)'s end? they feel more connected that way I think. nah
6. 01:40:641 (5) - I know this is intentional, but still I'd prefer is this were moved to the same place as 01:40:126 (3). non non ><
7. 02:11:027 (1,2,3) - this looks rather random. o.o (maybe I just don't get the pattern.. xD) it's nice that you alternate the three sliders in the same direction, but maybe you can think of something better than this like you did here - 02:15:147 (1,2,3). AND EVERYONE HATED THAT haha i don't know i like this one since it's kind of jumpy

Really nice difficulties, good luck getting this ranked!
Too bad, there is no Easy/Insane, I think it'd be awesome for this to have more difficulties..! >: i actually tried making an Easy first but there was no difference between Normal and Easy diffs in the end. aaand i cant make insane diffs, this was my best ;_;
And sorry for noob modding, this was kinda hard to do, cause I have a sliiight aversion for straight horizontal and vertical sliders. '__'
Hope this was helpful somehow! ^__^/

UnderminE wrote:

Someone shoot a star pls it has to be 40 ;_;

_Gezo_ wrote:

YOU CAN DO IT

free whateveryouwant if you rank it, k?