What's A Girl To Do?
SELL MOE
hey undermine ovo
m4m from your queue~
okay hope this helps owo
yeah i guess that's all, pretty good already sorry if it doesn't help orz
might do a recheck because i'm baka like that
SELL MOE
hey undermine ovo
m4m from your queue~
okay hope this helps owo
[Normal]
00:10:437 (3) - isn't exactly in the middle of 00:09:406 (2) - try 144/312
00:20:228 (3) - Make more curvy? this one bugs me so >< try middle point to 192/308
00:26:927 (1) - Make the same shape as 00:25:897 (2) - ? current straight one just don't fit with the circles after it
00:33:884 (2,3) - Doesn't necesarrily need to be stacked, vocal doesn't really fit, is okay though
00:40:841 (1) - didn't really get what this note is following xo
00:51:663 (5) - blanket 00:50:633 (4) - ? rhythm still connected so it fits owo
01:11:246 (4,5) - Make it curvy? straight play isn't really good here
01:18:461 (4) - NC for downbeat
01:41:135 (4) - Tail to right a few grid for better stack o3o
01:43:969 (2) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964826
01:45:258 (3) - NC for combo consistency like you did on previous rhythm
01:47:319 (1) - Try to make cleaner turn for better look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964831
02:34:214 (1) - I strongly recomend to bringback kiai here, the feel is strong enough and the last chorus of the song, feels empty without one
02:17:724 (1) - Blanket 02:18:754 (1) - better, really
02:21:846 (1) - lol make the turn cleaner as it doesn't blanket anything, looked a bit off ouo
00:10:437 (3) - isn't exactly in the middle of 00:09:406 (2) - try 144/312
00:20:228 (3) - Make more curvy? this one bugs me so >< try middle point to 192/308
00:26:927 (1) - Make the same shape as 00:25:897 (2) - ? current straight one just don't fit with the circles after it
00:33:884 (2,3) - Doesn't necesarrily need to be stacked, vocal doesn't really fit, is okay though
00:40:841 (1) - didn't really get what this note is following xo
00:51:663 (5) - blanket 00:50:633 (4) - ? rhythm still connected so it fits owo
01:11:246 (4,5) - Make it curvy? straight play isn't really good here
01:18:461 (4) - NC for downbeat
01:41:135 (4) - Tail to right a few grid for better stack o3o
01:43:969 (2) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964826
01:45:258 (3) - NC for combo consistency like you did on previous rhythm
01:47:319 (1) - Try to make cleaner turn for better look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964831
02:34:214 (1) - I strongly recomend to bringback kiai here, the feel is strong enough and the last chorus of the song, feels empty without one
02:17:724 (1) - Blanket 02:18:754 (1) - better, really
02:21:846 (1) - lol make the turn cleaner as it doesn't blanket anything, looked a bit off ouo
[Hard]
00:23:062 (3) - NC for different rhythm(i stumbled because of this)
01:10:215 (3) - plays better with ctrl g really
01:18:461 (5) - NC same as normal
Fine overall, but i personally dislike the stacked slider like 00:35:688 (4,5) - as a few of them doesn't play well, try to use more like 00:39:295 (1,2) - they plays good actually owo consider changing it~
00:23:062 (3) - NC for different rhythm(i stumbled because of this)
01:10:215 (3) - plays better with ctrl g really
01:18:461 (5) - NC same as normal
Fine overall, but i personally dislike the stacked slider like 00:35:688 (4,5) - as a few of them doesn't play well, try to use more like 00:39:295 (1,2) - they plays good actually owo consider changing it~
yeah i guess that's all, pretty good already sorry if it doesn't help orz
might do a recheck because i'm baka like that