1. Hard (4,89 stars, 319 notes)
2. Normal (2,14 stars, 128 notes)

1. since you have no GDs make your kiai the same in all diffs
2. i think you need a easy for this mapset because the normal diff imo is a bit hard for the easyer diff of the mapset

1. the setting are to hight for a normal i would recomend to sue AR 4 and OD and HP 3 if you think that your AR is fine, just set down the HP and the OD to 4

1. your spacing in some points change random to 1.00 or to 1.20 when you follow 1.1 spacing,try to fix those points i'll mention just some of them
2. 00:19:320 (1) - like here the next is 1.20
3. 00:23:698 (3) - next is 1.0
4. 00:30:908 (1,2) - if you look good here is an unperfectstack since the difference to the next object is 0.02 and it should be 0.00

1. i think you used to many stacks that normaly ppl use in a hard diff or confusing patterns that are not appropriate to the easier diff of a mapset
2. 00:07:217 (2,3) - this pattern looks better like:
   
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3. 00:10:050 (1,2) - i agree with patterns like this but i totally desagree to patterns like : 00:14:428 (1,2) - are a bit confusional imo in the easier diff of the mapset
4. 00:15:200 (2,1) - try something like this here:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:19:320 (1,2) - i don't really like this overlap
6. 00:22:668 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - confusional pattern
7. 00:44:041 (2,3) - same problem as 00:15:200 (2,1) - and other after that won't mention similar patterns again
8. 02:01:552 (2,3) - first of all it's an ugly overlap and confusional and same here: 02:12:883 (1,2,3) -
9. 02:29:363 (1,2,3,4) - same here why why why ;___;

1. i think you should use AR 7 with HP and OD 6 // if you won't change the AR reduce the HP and OD 7

1. 00:08:762 (2,3) - this jump is to big
2. 00:10:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern is ok butnot good constructed or how to say it, you need to ctrl+g this: 00:10:565 (1) - and 00:11:080 (2) - and 00:11:852 (5) - to have something like:
   
   SPOILER

   meeh puush stop to work
   
3. 00:31:681 (3) - try to do something like :
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:45:458 (5) - remove this circle seems extra
5. 01:48:677 (5) - place it in the middle
6. 02:12:883 (1,2,3) - why so overlapped ;_;
7. 02:28:848 (4) - ctrl+g here

Kanye West wrote:

few quick things

[Normal]

00:31:681 (2) - I think having notes under slider ends is unrankable for normal diffs, move it to the top of the next slider done
01:00:265 (2,1) - bit of a spacing inconsistency here, can be deceptive for new players because the spacing appears as 1/2 but the timing is 1/1 oh damn how i didn't notice this, thanks fixed
01:52:282 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a bit difficult to read because of the overlap, one possible way to fix would be moving the first slider. done

[Hard]

I think this diff plays better with AR8. You have a lot of sliders with 1/4 timing difference and those are much easier to read with AR8. As well as the pattern jumps. You might want to get more opinions on this though. yes i also think the same, i just changed it for now according to one mod.

00:18:548 (7) - NC
00:19:320 (1) - Remove NC oh yes thank you

Love the map and song, good luck <3 thanks for the sudden mod ilu <3

Kanye West wrote:

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have a star

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, le random mod! ^^' <3

[General]
The mp3 sound abit muffled, try to find a better quality if you can? Yeah noticed it too, i will wait if someone can find me a better one, i dont want to poot the mapset

[Normal]
00:27:303 - Add Add a clap on slider tick, helps liven up the music!
00:29:361 - ^
00:35:543 - ^
00:37:604 - ^
00:39:664 - ^ done
00:38:634 (4) - NC done
00:54:599 (1) - Ad clap on the tail. done
01:34:771 (4) - Looks better if curved inwards imo:
nah, will stay like that
01:35:286 - Add clap on slider tick.
01:39:406 - ^
01:45:586 - ^
02:02:067 - ^ done all

[Hard]
00:25:243 - Add a clap on slider tick, helps liven up the music!
00:27:303 - ^
00:28:333 - ^
00:30:393 - ^
00:32:453 - ^
00:37:604 - ^
00:40:694 - ^
00:52:024 - ^ done all
00:55:114 (6) - Use clap instead of whistle on the head.
00:57:174 (6) - ^
00:59:234 (2) - ^ nope to these 3
02:12:883 (1,2,3) - This overlap it was not a problem on testplays

Looks pretty good! thanks!

Wow this song sounds so depressing o.o The feels... *shivers*

Hope this helps~! ^^

-RIKKA- wrote:

From M4M

Normal
・01:13:398 (2,1) - Spacing 1.2x ⇒ 1.1x oh thank you <3
・00:51:509 (2) - like this ? ↓

okke

・01:01:295 (1,1) - like ths ? ↓

great


Hard
・00:43:269 (1) - Remove NC ? nah, that note is special
・01:48:419 (4) - y:112 or (1)'s y:113 fix
・02:07:732 (2,3,4,5,6) - x:332 y:44 yup <3

Nice map thanks for the great mod!

1. 02:27:818 (1,1,1) - Given the nature of the thinner texture of the song at this point, all of the loud whistles at this volume seem to cut through a bit too strong.

1. 01:01:295 (1,2,3) - Not a problem, just a commendation; looking at this and patterns like it in the editor, it doesn't look like a naturally-flowing pattern, but in gameplay the execution is fluid. Well done.
2. 02:16:101 (2) - Soft whistle at the beginning of the slider, perhaps?
3. 02:27:818 (1,1,1) - Same criticism as Normal.

Mogsworth wrote:

So excited to see a map for this/Bat For Lashes in general. Only got a few notes on here, all subjective. <3 i especially like this song so much

Normal

1. 02:27:818 (1,1,1) - Given the nature of the thinner texture of the song at this point, all of the loud whistles at this volume seem to cut through a bit too strong. uh-uh, i have a problem with hitsounds and trying to fix everything from the start. CtB has a weird bug

Hard:

1. 01:01:295 (1,2,3) - Not a problem, just a commendation; looking at this and patterns like it in the editor, it doesn't look like a naturally-flowing pattern, but in gameplay the execution is fluid. Well done. thank you
2. 02:16:101 (2) - Soft whistle at the beginning of the slider, perhaps? yup
3. 02:27:818 (1,1,1) - Same criticism as Normal. and same answer

Not very many things I can complain about here without fishing for nitpicks.

UnderminE wrote:

[General]
The mp3 sound abit muffled, try to find a better quality if you can? Yeah noticed it too, i will wait if someone can find me a better one, i dont want to poot the mapset

10crystalmask01 wrote:

UnderminE wrote:

[General]
The mp3 sound abit muffled, try to find a better quality if you can? Yeah noticed it too, i will wait if someone can find me a better one, i dont want to poot the mapset

Found a better quality:

Bat For Lashes - What's A Girl To Do?
~164 kbps. I think the end needs to be trimmed a bit so its total time is the same as your current mp3.

Senbon wrote:

Hello, from my M4M.

General

SPOILER

Great hitsounds
Fun
Yeah, can't wait until you use the better .mp3

I feel like i just nazi modded 'cause it's already great

Normal

SPOILER

00:38:634 (1) - I find this awkward, maybe no repeat nah it's fine
01:45:071 (1) - Align ends nah that looks awkward in current pattern ;_;

Hard

SPOILER

00:34:771 (1,2,3,4) - These doubles doesn't seem to flow and sound well (2) one tick over? nope, i like how they play
00:39:921 (3) - I would change this to a circle and start slider at 00:40:179 good idea, thanks for suggestion i will think about it~

reisende wrote:

Some help with custom clap's volume and sections: <3

Hard
00:52:539 - Custom Clap
00:53:698 (2) - remove section, make previous 75%
00:54:342 - 75%
00:56:402 - ^
00:56:788 - remove section
00:57:818 - remove section
00:58:462 - 75%
00:59:749 - ^
01:01:938 - remove section
01:07:990 - 70%
01:15:973 - noisy whistle
01:42:754 (1) - 75%
01:42:754 (1) - 80%
01:42:754 (1) - ^
01:42:754 (1) - ^
01:42:754 (1) - 70%
01:42:754 (1) - ^ applied all, thanks for your help!

yachiru4 wrote:

Hey from my queue!

...Unfortunately I didn't pass the level And I'll explain why.
Your objects seem to be altering from instrument to instrument which is pretty annoying.
After a few seconds on the music, i started to get confused on which beat to follow: The piano's or the loud beats/claps?
Try not to change the rhythm from instrument to instrument, that's all I can really say. My mapping style is something like "map the first instrument you hear" Sometimes piano is on front line, sometimes bass, sometimes vocal. if there is vocal, i mostly map vocal and if not i map what i hear the loudest.


Aaaand a few of your objects are off-timing and I might as well point them out:
00:11:339 (3,4) - this follows vocal
00:15:590 (5,6,7) - Why is this part so slow, when the piano notes are obviously rushed here? Another part that caught me off. okke, tried something different

Good luck! Thanks!

sheela901 wrote:

M4M

[Normal]
00:28:989 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the trail? i added some finishes
00:31:050 (2) - ^
00:38:780 (2) - Add a finish? there is no finish at the background so no
02:05:871 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+J for a flow? oh yes good idea <3

[Hard]
00:23:062 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe you could change the pattern? changed 1 note only
01:10:731 (4) - Somewhere at x:248 y:352 so it could have the same distance snap like 01:09:700 (2,3) . okke
01:55:564 (3) - NC? oke
02:18:368 (2) - Move it to x:308 y:208 for the distance? nah

Good Luck and star!

AnreFM wrote:

What's A Girl To Do?
SELL MOE ;_;

hey undermine ovo
m4m from your queue~
okay hope this helps owo

[Normal]
00:10:437 (3) - isn't exactly in the middle of 00:09:406 (2) - try 144/312 it's there already ><
00:20:228 (3) - Make more curvy? this one bugs me so >< try middle point to 192/308
00:26:927 (1) - Make the same shape as 00:25:897 (2) - ? current straight one just don't fit with the circles after it well, a new rhythm
00:33:884 (2,3) - Doesn't necesarrily need to be stacked, vocal doesn't really fit, is okay though for the bass ><
00:40:841 (1) - didn't really get what this note is following xo carries the vocal and bass at the same time
00:51:663 (5) - blanket 00:50:633 (4) - ? rhythm still connected so it fits owo nah, would be too much after a hard pattern like that
01:11:246 (4,5) - Make it curvy? straight play isn't really good here curvy would look even more uglier
01:18:461 (4) - NC for downbeat oke
01:41:135 (4) - Tail to right a few grid for better stack o3o oh damn even a stack hunter like me didnt notice that ;_;
01:43:969 (2) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964826 i always suck at making those kind of sliders okay ;___;
01:45:258 (3) - NC for combo consistency like you did on previous rhythm oh yes
01:47:319 (1) - Try to make cleaner turn for better look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/964831 okke, tried something
02:34:214 (1) - I strongly recomend to bringback kiai here, the feel is strong enough and the last chorus of the song, feels empty without one nope, not much feels ;_;
02:17:724 (1) - Blanket 02:18:754 (1) - better, really hm hm
02:21:846 (1) - lol make the turn cleaner as it doesn't blanket anything, looked a bit off ouo changed it a little bit then ;_;

[Hard]
00:23:062 (3) - NC for different rhythm(i stumbled because of this) oke
01:10:215 (3) - plays better with ctrl g really oke
01:18:461 (5) - NC same as normal woho okay
Fine overall, but i personally dislike the stacked slider like 00:35:688 (4,5) - as a few of them doesn't play well, try to use more like 00:39:295 (1,2) - they plays good actually owo consider changing it~ changed someee

yeah i guess that's all, pretty good already sorry if it doesn't help orz
might do a recheck because i'm baka like that no you were helpful <3 thanks!

ampzz wrote:

General

1. BPM: 116.500
2. Offset: 3817

After you get everything all snapped to this timing send me a pm in-game and I'll edit this for the full mod. (´∪`*)

Faust wrote:

:/

Not updated with timing and mods.

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