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Ranko - Sei Natsu

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Skystar
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Skystar
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月28日 at 21:28:53

Artist: Ranko
Title: Sei Natsu
Source: Touhou
Tags: c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
BPM: 200
Filesize: 7151kb
Play Time: 03:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.64 stars, 145 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 606 notes)
  3. Lunatic (5 stars, 697 notes)
  4. Normal (3.64 stars, 208 notes)
Download: Ranko - Sei Natsu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3 LKs x NTR hehehe

December 28th, 2012 - Bubbled by LKs
Could it ranked at 1.1.2013?
January 1st, 2013 - Ranked by NatsumeRin

[Mapset]
Easy - x847606653
Normal - Flask
Hard - me
Lunatic - me
Last edited by Skystar , edited 41 times in total.
Ulysses
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Ulysses
沙發
Strawberry
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地板
Lan wings
790 posts
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Lan wings
神麻婆您好``我是送SP的
IRC MOD
SPOILER
23:57 Lan_wings: 00:06:232 (6,7,8,1,2,3) -
23:57 Lan_wings: 這裡可以擺成一個六邊形
23:57 AmamiyaYuko: 好
23:57 Lan_wings: 00:05:482 (1,2,3) - 然後擺完后應該可以跟這裡弄對稱
23:58 Lan_wings: 00:06:232 (6,7,3) - 跟這３個點對稱
23:58 AmamiyaYuko: 好
23:58 AmamiyaYuko: 然后
23:58 Lan_wings: 00:06:082 (5) - 這個放六邊形中間你懂的
23:58 AmamiyaYuko: 嗯
23:59 Lan_wings: 00:27:082 (3) - NC
23:59 AmamiyaYuko: 不加
23:59 Lan_wings: 不NC卡不清
23:59 Lan_wings: 差評
23:59 Lan_wings: 看*
23:59 AmamiyaYuko: 反正有移动一格
23:59 Lan_wings: 反正我差評lol
00:00 AmamiyaYuko: 看不清关我P事蛤蛤蛤
00:00 AmamiyaYuko: 我自己知道就行
00:00 AmamiyaYuko: 这玩意打一pc就记住了啊
00:01 Lan_wings: 00:43:582 (3) - 又是坑爹貨
00:02 Lan_wings: 擺明了故意的
00:02 AmamiyaYuko: 这一点不坑爹谢谢
00:02 Lan_wings: 改成2個slider就不坑爹了
00:02 AmamiyaYuko: 故意的
00:02 Lan_wings: 現在每次都坑我1combo
00:02 AmamiyaYuko: 反正我围观了好几个就你一个被坑
00:02 AmamiyaYuko: 说明你弱
00:03 Lan_wings: 我這是大眾水平
00:05 Lan_wings: 01:59:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 個人表示不喜歡這樣的梗
00:05 AmamiyaYuko: 嗯没事我很喜欢
00:05 AmamiyaYuko: 在折腾六边形 你继续
00:05 Lan_wings: ........
00:05 Lan_wings: slider后接stream很難打的
00:06 AmamiyaYuko: 我很好打
00:06 Lan_wings: 02:30:982 (1) - 這裡的節奏太難讀了點
00:07 Lan_wings: 02:38:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同樣的
00:07 Lan_wings: 湊字數
00:08 Lan_wings: 02:47:932 (2,4,6,7,8,9) - 這梗我喜歡
00:08 Lan_wings: 02:48:382 (6) - 不過這裡不加個NC么``雖然我能看到``但是感覺還是應該加一下
00:10 Lan_wings: 00:17:332 (4,1) - 好``又跑回前面去``這裡circle沒擋好slider
00:11 AmamiyaYuko: 加
00:11 AmamiyaYuko: 挡啥
00:11 AmamiyaYuko: 没看懂
00:11 Lan_wings: 00:16:432 (4,1) -
00:11 Lan_wings: 這樣的
00:12 AmamiyaYuko: 这个懒比了不挡也行
00:12 Lan_wings: 擋了好看點0.0
00:12 AmamiyaYuko: 00:17:632 (6,1) - 主要是这个包围一下比较好看
00:12 AmamiyaYuko: 挡了就包不全了
00:13 Lan_wings: 隨便<.<
00:13 Lan_wings: 00:23:782 (1) - 於是這個相信也是很難把尾巴弄到那位置了
00:14 AmamiyaYuko: 试了下 好像还行
00:15 AmamiyaYuko: 这个可以有
00:15 Lan_wings: 咦`可以么
00:15 AmamiyaYuko: 00:34:582 (1) - 这个不跪服?
00:15 Lan_wings: 這個幹嗎要跪
00:15 AmamiyaYuko: 没啥你继续
00:15 Lan_wings: 00:34:582 (1) - 後面兩個點拉好點
00:16 AmamiyaYuko: 嗯0.0
00:16 Lan_wings: 外圈夠漂亮了
00:16 Lan_wings: 但是內圈不是很好看
00:17 AmamiyaYuko: 破了
00:22 Lan_wings: 來試下這個怎麼樣
00:22 Lan_wings: 00:42:982 (1) -
00:22 Lan_wings: 中間白點在x360 y272
00:23 Lan_wings: 尾巴白點在356 320
00:23 Lan_wings: 00:42:982 - 時間點
00:24 Lan_wings: 00:43:282 - 然後複製到這裡順時針旋轉144°
00:24 Lan_wings: 00:43:582 - 複製轉144°
00:24 Lan_wings: 00:43:882 - ^
00:25 AmamiyaYuko: .
00:25 Lan_wings: 00:44:182 - ^
00:25 Lan_wings: 然後00:44:182 - 這個拉長一下
00:25 Lan_wings: 弄成對稱
00:25 Lan_wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/427695
00:25 Lan_wings: 大概是這鳥樣
00:25 AmamiyaYuko: 比较没看懂
00:26 AmamiyaYuko: 已吓尿 还是没看懂
00:26 Lan_wings: 圖能看懂么0.0
00:26 Lan_wings: 0.0
00:26 Lan_wings: 我QQ發你
00:31 Lan_wings: 00:42:982 -
00:31 AmamiyaYuko: 我擦
00:31 AmamiyaYuko: 太鬼畜了
00:31 AmamiyaYuko: 不改
00:31 Lan_wings: 很鬼畜么
00:31 Lan_wings: 看著很爽啊
00:32 AmamiyaYuko: 不过缩小点spacing的话倒是可以 我想想怎么破
00:33 AmamiyaYuko: 好破了0.0
00:33 Lan_wings: 破成怎麼樣
00:33 AmamiyaYuko: update之后给你看0.0
00:34 AmamiyaYuko: 然后呢0.0
00:34 AmamiyaYuko: 没了?
00:34 Lan_wings: 然後後面的稍微調整位置你懂的
00:35 Lan_wings: 01:05:782 (1,2,1,2,1) - 感覺這裡還能破一下
00:36 AmamiyaYuko: 破成啥样...
00:36 AmamiyaYuko: 求正常
00:36 Lan_wings: 01:06:232 (1) - 這個slider改成circle
00:36 Lan_wings: 然後jump
00:36 Lan_wings: 01:06:382 - 然後slider
00:36 AmamiyaYuko: 不改 你没发现整个图这地方都是这节奏
00:37 Lan_wings: 咦``有麼
00:37 Lan_wings: 我沒發現耶
00:37 Lan_wings: 01:03:382 (1) - 這裡尾巴沒弄好
00:37 AmamiyaYuko: 02:12:982 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
00:37 Lan_wings: 這不是跟你之前的節奏一樣么
00:38 Lan_wings: 你需要多點變化
00:38 AmamiyaYuko: 前后一致才是王道
00:38 Lan_wings: 變化王道
00:38 AmamiyaYuko: ...同样的地方节奏变了会很奇怪的
00:39 AmamiyaYuko: 不过你能给出信服的梗我就变._.
00:39 Lan_wings: 在研究怎麼擺
00:39 AmamiyaYuko: 快睡了...
00:40 AmamiyaYuko: 这段先发上去骗kd吧剩下的另外说也行0.0
00:41 AmamiyaYuko: .-. 人呢
00:42 Lan_wings: ０．０
00:42 Lan_wings: 在
00:42 Lan_wings: 剛弄了點``感覺略渣
00:42 AmamiyaYuko: 好那就这样了
00:42 Lan_wings: 發你看看
Last edited by Lan wings , edited 1 time in total.
No_Gu
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No_Gu
可，你要啥难度
其次感觉和风听起来不太舒服
Skystar
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Topic Starter
Skystar

No_Gu wrote:

可，你要啥难度
其次感觉和风听起来不太舒服
你隨便挑0.0 音效的話當時覺得這BGM配和風音效會怎麼樣 結果試了下就覺得dbl然後就.
wmfchris
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wmfchris

Lan wings wrote:

LRC MOD
Lan wings
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Lan wings

wmfchris wrote:

Lan wings wrote:

LRC MOD
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x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
x847606653
去吃翔
osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: OAO.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48082
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Sei Natsu
TitleUnicode:Sei Natsu
Artist:Ranko
ArtistUnicode:Ranko
Creator:AmamiyaYuko
Version:EZ
Source:Touhou
Tags:
BeatmapID:176712
BeatmapSetID:58785

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ AmamiyaYuko ~

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lunatic]


  1. OD+1 more challenge players.
  2. 00:34:132 (3) - Try ctrl+g,flow much better.

[Hard]


  1. 00:10:882 (2) - Change new combo to here,looks better.
  2. 01:27:682 (2) - ^
  3. 01:46:882 (2) - ^
  4. 01:59:932 - Sound empty to here,Add a circle is better.

[Normal]


  1. 01:00:982 (4) - Add new combo,looks better.

[Easy]


  1. AR+1 is better.
  2. 01:05:782 (1) - Missing Add finish to here.

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~ ;)
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Strange.. I normally can read AR 9 lol

[General]
Add Buta-Otome & Bowling to the tags
http://vgmdb.net/album/34450

[Lunatic]

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OD+1 more challenge players.
it is challenging enough imo. 7 is fine
00:03:082 (6,1,2,3,4) - this was really hard to read the first time
00:09:982 (1,2,1,2) - awkward movement
00:24:232 (2,3) - un-readable imo. Ctrl+G this
02:30:982 (1,2,1) - this distance make it hard to read the sudden beat change
02:33:982 (2) - NC here for new beat change

[Hard]
00:20:482 (2) - this is completely hidden under all the hitbursts
SPOILER
00:36:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ok seriously lol
00:47:032 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why do you use these on a Hard? D:
00:48:082 (1) - again, hard to see. but it's more notable than the the previous one
01:38:782 (5) - 2 repeats, it's really confusing, especially after these forth and back notes 01:38:182 (1,2,3,4) -
01:41:182 (5) - same as above
01:48:382 (3) - try avoid using 2 repeats. It can really be confusing most of the time (There are more but I wont point out all of them)
01:55:282 (1) - kinda hidden too
02:14:782 (3) - hard to see. use NC please
SPOILER

This is really not a Hard imo. It's more like a Lunatic and the current Lunatic is an Extra

[Normal]
AR+1 please
This diff lacks those epic bass hitsounds
01:50:482 (4) - 1 grid right & up

[Easy]
AR+1
00:38:182 (1) - not sure if this is really reccomended
01:05:782 (1) - finish
02:35:782 (1) - finish on head
02:59:782 (3) - finish on tail


That's all from me, sorry if I sounded rude or anything~
Good luck!
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Skystar
Saten

Saten wrote:

Strange.. I normally can read AR 9 lol

[General]
Add Buta-Otome & Bowling to the tags Added
http://vgmdb.net/album/34450

[Lunatic]

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OD+1 more challenge players.
it is challenging enough imo. 7 is fine I think so :3
00:03:082 (6,1,2,3,4) - this was really hard to read the first time fixed
00:09:982 (1,2,1,2) - awkward movement It's my own style. No changed.
00:24:232 (2,3) - un-readable imo. Ctrl+G this fixed
02:30:982 (1,2,1) - this distance make it hard to read the sudden beat change fixed
02:33:982 (2) - NC here for new beat change fixed

[Hard]
00:20:482 (2) - this is completely hidden under all the hitbursts fixed
SPOILER
00:36:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ok seriously lol look this ↓
00:47:032 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why do you use these on a Hard? D: Because I'd like to know people how to thought about such kind of pattern and yeah, I got the answer. :3
00:48:082 (1) - again, hard to see. but it's more notable than the the previous one ^
01:38:782 (5) - 2 repeats, it's really confusing, especially after these forth and back notes 01:38:182 (1,2,3,4) - fixed
01:41:182 (5) - same as above same
01:48:382 (3) - try avoid using 2 repeats. It can really be confusing most of the time (There are more but I wont point out all of them) But I think here is appropriate..?
01:55:282 (1) - kinda hidden too well, fixed.
02:14:782 (3) - hard to see. use NC please fixed
SPOILER

This is really not a Hard imo. It's more like a Lunatic and the current Lunatic is an Extra lol
Rika

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ AmamiyaYuko ~

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lunatic]


  1. OD+1 more challenge players. No, OD8 is crazy IMO.
  2. 00:34:132 (3) - Try ctrl+g,flow much better. right

[Hard]


  1. 00:10:882 (2) - Change new combo to here,looks better. fixed
  2. 01:27:682 (2) - ^ fixed
  3. 01:46:882 (2) - ^ But this not. I think it's readable
  4. 01:59:932 - Sound empty to here,Add a circle is better. fixed
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Rotte
Easy/Basic

没啥大问题

Normal/Standard

00:04:882 - 空的有点坑...
00:56:182 (4) - 小修了一下
248,128,56182,2,0,B|232:68|148:48|88:88|68:148|88:204|124:232|124:232|64:320,1,400
01:03:382 (1) - 
176,52,63382,6,0,B|116:60|88:124|108:176|148:204|148:204|148:304,1,300,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0


Hard/Hyper

总之我pass不能

00:30:982 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 坑死了
00:33:382 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
00:36:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hard里出现更坑，这BPM200啊
01:45:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这些在hard太难，用短滑条代替吧...Orz


Insane/Advanced/Lunatic

pass无望.....超出打图能力，mod不能....



星神你个死货，早就说了神图不要丢啊，哎哟，吃了你

:)
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
@Saten: That would be out screen if I move 1 gird right + up D:

Anyway all fixed except ^

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: OAO.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48082
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Sei Natsu
TitleUnicode:Sei Natsu
Artist:Ranko
ArtistUnicode:Ranko
Creator:AmamiyaYuko
Version:Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
BeatmapID:188142
BeatmapSetID:58785

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG4.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,68382,76582
2,135582,143782
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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48982,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
58282,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
58582,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
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240,332,88582,2,0,B|296:352|348:344,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,344,89032,2,0,B|440:376|500:356|516:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,280,89782,2,0,B|420:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,112,90382,5,0,0:0:0
324,56,90682,1,8,0:0:0
244,48,90982,2,0,B|184:48|136:72,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,112,91582,2,0,B|28:136|32:208,2,100,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,184,92482,5,8,0:0:0
196,192,92782,2,0,B|180:260|112:264|112:264|80:304,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,384,93832,2,0,B|296:360|336:288,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,228,94582,6,0,B|444:240|504:204,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
496,136,95182,2,0,B|512:88,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
485,214,95782,2,0,B|496:280|488:336,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,356,96382,2,0,B|368:368|308:352,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,308,96982,1,4,0:0:0
184,288,97282,6,0,B|128:296,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,216,97882,1,8,0:0:0
296,236,98182,2,0,B|316:180|272:124|212:116|168:136|140:192|140:192|80:156,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,124,99382,1,0,0:0:0
16,204,99682,6,0,B|8:264|16:312,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,124,100582,2,0,B|80:76|152:72|216:124|216:124|272:104|276:32,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,28,101782,1,0,0:0:0
344,108,102082,6,0,B|324:164|272:192,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,232,102682,1,8,0:0:0
192,308,102982,1,0,0:0:0
76,336,103432,2,0,B|56:272|56:272|60:240|60:240|48:176,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,172,104182,2,0,B|120:128|64:96|36:112,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,228,105082,1,8,0:0:0
240,168,105382,2,0,B|248:124|304:92|332:108,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,72,105982,2,0,B|428:44,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,152,106582,5,4,0:0:0
452,172,106882,2,0,B|440:220|400:232|360:236,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,276,107632,2,0,B|216:276,1,50
140,240,108082,2,0,B|40:240,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,180,108982,5,0,0:0:0
216,104,109282,2,0,B|276:120|276:196,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,184,110032,2,0,B|444:156,1,50
448,80,110482,2,0,B|508:92|516:156,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,60,111382,6,0,B|312:60|312:60|268:20|212:36,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,140,112582,2,0,B|312:140|312:140|268:180|212:164,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,220,113782,2,0,B|296:252|228:272|168:256|112:220|144:136|160:116,1,300,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,48,114982,1,0,0:0:0
12,340,116182,6,0,B|112:340|112:340|168:324|184:272,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,200,117082,1,8,0:0:0
100,256,117382,2,0,B|28:256|28:256|-12:192|16:132,1,200
4,56,118282,1,8,0:0:0
76,84,118582,2,0,B|108:128|84:180|84:180|184:180,1,200
264,180,119482,1,8,0:0:0
300,108,119782,2,0,B|352:144|344:208,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,272,120382,2,0,B|352:336|400:364,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,288,120982,5,0,0:0:0
460,212,121282,2,0,B|464:160|428:152|432:96,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,220,122032,2,0,B|360:224|268:216,1,150
192,220,122782,1,0,0:0:0
112,224,123082,1,8,0:0:0
112,144,123382,2,0,B|64:148|32:172|12:216|16:288|84:328|160:292|160:292|196:340|224:360|252:368,1,400
284,300,124882,2,0,B|244:268|216:224,2,100,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,324,125782,6,0,B|424:296|488:332|488:332|512:268,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
505,189,126682,1,8,0:0:0
431,157,126982,2,0,B|418:194|439:230|439:230|381:220|318:250,1,200
270,186,127882,1,8,0:0:0
213,242,128182,2,0,B|152:260,1,50
88,279,128632,1,0,0:0:0
33,220,128932,1,0,0:0:0
18,141,129232,6,0,B|80:136|111:196|111:196|147:164,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,112,129982,1,0,0:0:0
260,78,130282,1,8,0:0:0
311,16,130582,6,0,B|353:57|333:119|333:119|333:168,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,78,131782,2,0,B|256:121|256:121|244:191|298:232,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,132982,12,4,135382,0:0:0
84,96,144982,5,4,0:0:0
163,88,145282,1,8,0:0:0
232,127,145582,1,0,0:0:0
267,198,145882,1,8,0:0:0
252,276,146182,2,0,B|247:330|195:366|195:366|166:366|139:366,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,298,147382,5,0,0:0:0
401,265,147682,1,8,0:0:0
440,195,147982,1,0,0:0:0
446,115,148282,1,8,0:0:0
409,43,148582,2,0,B|358:22|299:22|252:32,1,150
196,76,149332,1,2,0:0:0
90,132,149782,6,0,B|127:178|186:195,3,100,0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,266,150982,2,0,B|100:254|65:222,2,66.6666666666667,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,305,151582,2,0,B|165:344|133:364,2,66.6666666666667,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
237,305,152182,2,0,B|256:344|288:364,2,66.6666666666667,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
280,273,152782,2,0,B|328:261|363:229,2,66.6666666666667,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
239,238,153382,2,0,B|258:199|287:184,2,66.6666666666667
185,237,153982,2,0,B|166:184|122:145,2,100,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
445,50,155782,5,4,0:0:0
125,69,156982,6,0,B|77:106|55:156,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
57,224,157582,2,0,B|73:262|121:299,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
185,347,158182,2,0,B|287:347,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
297,267,158782,2,0,B|195:267,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,257,159682,6,0,B|425:239,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
335,187,160282,1,8,0:0:0
286,123,160582,2,0,B|242:77|190:50,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,57,161182,2,0,B|94:73|50:119,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
37,198,161782,2,0,B|19:267|66:314|139:317|167:277,1,200
115,219,162682,1,8,0:0:0
100,140,162982,2,0,B|169:134|192:200,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
235,243,163582,2,0,B|278:299,2,50,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
270,171,164182,6,0,B|294:133|351:95|419:125|443:174,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
479,233,165082,1,8,0:0:0
443,304,165382,2,0,B|419:342|362:380|294:350|270:301,1,200
228,245,166282,1,8,0:0:0
148,251,166582,2,0,B|94:259,1,50
52,324,167032,2,0,B|13:288|21:230,2,100,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
165,364,168082,2,0,B|217:373|272:366|273:366,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
342,347,168682,1,8,0:0:0
422,347,168982,6,0,B|481:310|467:235|467:235|501:235,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
342,348,170182,2,0,B|283:311|297:236|297:236|263:236,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,171382,12,0,173182,0:0:0
146,114,173782,6,0,B|94:121|65:179|89:232,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
217,149,174982,2,0,B|240:199|211:257|159:264,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,176182,12,0,177982,0:0:0
254,298,178582,6,0,B|298:313|325:333|325:333|346:309|389:285,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
174,298,179782,2,0,B|130:313|103:333|103:333|82:309|39:285,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,180982,12,4,183382,0:0:0
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
x847606653
AR+1
01:05:782 (1) - finish

others no change.Thanks>_>
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Citrus
[Easy]
  • 00:25:582 (1) - 稍稍修整了一下
    360,328,22582,2,0,B|432:320|456:240,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:38:782 (2) - （480，288）
    02:35:782 (1) - 开头finish
    02:59:782 (3) - 开头和结尾均加finish
[Normal]
  • 00:48:982 (1) - 稍微修整了一下
    362,225,48982,6,0,B|362:145|362:145|394:113|398:89|394:53|384:36,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    00:55:582 (2,3) - 我的建议是换成slider，从00:55:432开始
    SPOILER
    301,188,55432,2,0,P|268:224|200:216|176:164,1,150
    00:53:482 (8,1) - 上一条如果改了的话，这两个挪动一下位置就行
    01:54:982 (4) - （192,56）感觉沿着滑条的方向比较美观
    02:30:982 (2,3,4,5,6) - 建议把所有的whistle去掉，然后02:33:382 (6) - 开头加finish
    02:58:582 (1,2) - 这两个沿中间对称怎么样？
[Hard]
  • 00:30:982 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 建议换成slider，这个排列对于hard来说太难了
    00:33:382 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
    00:36:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^毫无人性，天理何在？
    01:44:182 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 建议适当使用slider，hard难度200bpm的连续单点略难
    02:27:082 (3) - 摆正
    294,328,147082,2,0,B|256:350|216:327,1,80
    02:29:332 (3) - 音量下降20%比较好
[Lunatic]
  • 神图，找不到什么问题，只能帮你把一些slider弄得好看一点
    00:00:982 (1) - 弧度大一点比较好看
    56,180,982,6,0,P|83:146|152:127|197:183|199:226,1,192,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:18:982 (1) - 修了一下 
    268,100,78982,6,0,P|232:64|163:84|152:133,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:22:582 (1) - ^
    292,132,82582,6,0,P|336:156|336:228|292:252,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:28:582 (1) - ^
    300,48,88582,6,0,P|255:72|255:144|299:168,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:30:982 (1) - ^
    180,168,90982,6,0,B|232:195|288:170|295:121,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    02:29:332 (3) - 降低20%音量
awesome map！ 五体投地！
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi Yuko san :3 As requested.

[General]
●If you can , change to BG size 800 x 600 → 1024 x 768

[Easy]
●OD and HPDrain +1
●00:00:382 - you should start here ~ same as other diff
●00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little.I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●00:39:982 (2) - add new combo
●01:17:782 (1,1) - the flow isnt good.. >< I think it'd look better and good the flow if it was symmetrical.
●01:35:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as here.00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) -
●02:38:182 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
●03:01:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Normal]
●00:00:382 - start to here ? red line...maybe confusing many players
●01:18:982 - try this ?
●02:01:282 (2) - Rotate by 20°? Aim for the start of 02:02:032 (3) -
●02:33:982 (7) - add new combo
●02:59:782 (2) - add finish on the slider's head ?

[Hard]
●00:21:832 (2) - hmm... try this ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492790
●00:35:107 (3) - remove note ..? Rhythm here is hard to take a little.
●00:43:432 (2,3) - try this ? like this here.00:41:182 (3) -
●00:46:432 - NC:2 sound here ? like this your pattern00:45:232 -
●00:52:432 (5) - move to x:200 y:160 . looks better and make the spacing equal here
●01:44:782 (1,2,3,4) - try to put spacing around (0.60x ~ 0.80x)?
●02:27:082 (3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
●02:34:582 (5) - add new combo ? same as Lunatic diff . I think Lunatic diff is looks good :3
●02:40:582 (1) - 1 grid down at slider end point? same as 02:41:032 (2,1) -

[Lunatic]
●OD + 1 ?
●00:11:782 (1) - slider end point to x:204 y:216? looks better imo
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492779
●00:17:482 (5) - stack on middle point to this slider ? 00:17:782 (1) - like this your pattern at here.00:16:582 (1,3) -
●00:26:182 - hmm , this finish sound is a little loud . want to put 50% volume ~ gradually add finish sound ~ 00:24:982 - →00:26:182 - →00:27:382 -
●00:38:782 (1) - add finish ? try to put finish with constant rhythm ~ ? 'v'
●00:41:782 (1) - it is better to use (0.06x) like this your pattern ~
●00:57:232 (8) - more jump..? I want more spacing here >< because it is stronger sound ~
●01:32:182 (1,2,3,4,5) - gradually add volume here ? 40% → 50% → 60%
●01:38:332 - only default sound ? o.o
●01:45:982 (1) - add finish ?
●02:25:282 (2) - remove finish~it follows nothing.
●02:34:282 (3) - 1 grid right . stack on here.02:32:582 (1) -
●02:47:032 (3) - Ctrl + G ? try to make a little jump :3

nice Lunatic !

good luck :P
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Skystar
alacat

alacat wrote:

Hi Yuko san :3 As requested.

[General]
●If you can , change to BG size 800 x 600 → 1024 x 768 maybe 800×600 is ok..?

[Hard]
●00:21:832 (2) - hmm... try this ? ok
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492790
●00:35:107 (3) - remove note ..? Rhythm here is hard to take a little. ^
●00:43:432 (2,3) - try this ? like this here.00:41:182 (3) - No I want keep this pattern 00:42:682 (4,1,2) -
SPOILER
●00:46:432 - NC:2 sound here ? like this your pattern00:45:232 - fixed
●00:52:432 (5) - move to x:200 y:160 . looks better and make the spacing equal here ^
●01:44:782 (1,2,3,4) - try to put spacing around (0.60x ~ 0.80x)? haha ok
●02:27:082 (3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical. fixed
●02:34:582 (5) - add new combo ? same as Lunatic diff . I think Lunatic diff is looks good :3 :3
●02:40:582 (1) - 1 grid down at slider end point? same as 02:41:032 (2,1) - fixed

[Lunatic]
●OD + 1 ? No...OD8 is too hard to get full combo. (OD7 is hard too ;_; I can't get FC even it's OD7)
●00:11:782 (1) - slider end point to x:204 y:216? looks better imo fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492779
●00:17:482 (5) - stack on middle point to this slider ? 00:17:782 (1) - like this your pattern at here.00:16:582 (1,3) - No, I made this blanket 00:17:632 (6,1) -
●00:26:182 - hmm , this finish sound is a little loud . want to put 50% volume ~ gradually add finish sound ~ 00:24:982 - →00:26:182 - →00:27:382 - GOOD!
●00:38:782 (1) - add finish ? try to put finish with constant rhythm ~ ? 'v' ok
●00:41:782 (1) - it is better to use (0.06x) like this your pattern ~ I can't understand...? But I think it's good enough.
●00:57:232 (8) - more jump..? I want more spacing here >< because it is stronger sound ~ ok
●01:32:182 (1,2,3,4,5) - gradually add volume here ? 40% → 50% → 60%GOOD WAY!!
●01:38:332 - only default sound ? o.o my fault o.o fixed
●01:45:982 (1) - add finish ? No..
●02:25:282 (2) - remove finish~it follows nothing. ahh I forgot remove finish when I copy this note...
●02:34:282 (3) - 1 grid right . stack on here.02:32:582 (1) - fixed
●02:47:032 (3) - Ctrl + G ? try to make a little jump :3 :3

nice Lunatic !

good luck :P
thanks > <

thou bad

thou bad wrote:

[Lunatic]
  • 神图，找不到什么问题，只能帮你把一些slider弄得好看一点
    00:00:982 (1) - 弧度大一点比较好看
    56,180,982,6,0,P|83:146|152:127|197:183|199:226,1,192,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:18:982 (1) - 修了一下 
    268,100,78982,6,0,P|232:64|163:84|152:133,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:22:582 (1) - ^
    292,132,82582,6,0,P|336:156|336:228|292:252,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:28:582 (1) - ^
    300,48,88582,6,0,P|255:72|255:144|299:168,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    01:30:982 (1) - ^
    180,168,90982,6,0,B|232:195|288:170|295:121,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    02:29:332 (3) - 降低20%音量 不
awesome map！ 五体投地！
Others all fixed.
sherrie__fay
437 posts
Joined October 2010
sherrie__fay
mod req via QQ group PM in-game PM baka scorpiour's modding queue
……总之就是过来mod了>A<

[Lunatic]
  1. 00:06:982 (3) - 尾部上移一格和00:06:832 (2) - 分开
  2. 00:10:882 (2) - NC
  3. 00:17:482 (5) - 建议微移到x:124 y:132
  4. 00:31:582 (5) - 建议NC 要不这里一堆圈圈不好读图
  5. 01:47:782 (1) - 这个静音没问题吗>_>
  6. 02:15:382 (1) - 上移一格(grid level 4
  7. 02:34:282 (3) - 和02:32:582 (1) - 没有对齐
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:182 (3) - 偶数折返有点坑 建议最后一个做成单点
  2. 01:48:382 (3) - ^
  3. 01:50:782 (3) - ^
  4. 00:52:957 (2,3) - 建议长度换成一样的
  5. 02:00:082 (2,3) - ^
  6. 02:03:532 - +note
  7. 02:13:432 (1) - 去掉NC
  8. 02:14:782 (1) - ^
  9. 02:29:032 (2) - 下移一格和后面对齐
  10. 02:38:332 - +note
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:782 (4) - 建议+clap
  2. 01:00:682 - +note
  3. 01:24:982 (5) - +NC
  4. 01:44:182 (5) - ^
  5. 01:47:632 (3) - 为什么不前移一格然后做reverse 这个2连出现在这里节奏有点突兀啊
  6. 01:50:032 (3) - ^
[Easy]
  1. 01:21:382 (2) - 把前边的NC挪到这里
其他没有啥问题

(๑• •๑)感觉没有前一张做得好 一些silder拉得不是很严谨 有以grid level 4为单位的微小偏差。
静音note不让用。
不过整体来看还是不错的
加油(*˘︶˘*).｡.:*♡
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Almost fix! Really thanks >w<

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: OAO.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48082
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Sei Natsu
TitleUnicode:Sei Natsu
Artist:Ranko
ArtistUnicode:Ranko
Creator:AmamiyaYuko
Version:Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
BeatmapID:188142
BeatmapSetID:58785

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG4.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,68382,76582
2,135582,143782
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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446,115,148282,1,8,0:0:0
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196,76,149332,1,2,0:0:0
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239,238,153382,2,0,B|258:199|287:184,2,66.6666666666667,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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445,50,155782,5,4,0:0:0
125,69,156982,6,0,B|77:106|55:156,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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297,267,158782,2,0,B|195:267,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,257,159682,6,0,B|425:239,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
335,187,160282,1,8,0:0:0
286,123,160582,2,0,B|242:77|190:50,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,57,161182,2,0,B|94:73|50:119,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
37,198,161782,2,0,B|19:267|66:314|139:317|167:277,1,200
115,219,162682,1,8,0:0:0
100,140,162982,2,0,B|169:134|192:200,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
235,243,163582,2,0,B|278:299,2,50,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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479,233,165082,1,8,0:0:0
443,304,165382,2,0,B|419:342|362:380|294:350|270:301,1,200
228,245,166282,1,8,0:0:0
148,251,166582,2,0,B|94:259,1,50
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342,347,168682,1,8,0:0:0
422,347,168982,6,0,B|481:310|467:235|467:235|501:235,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,192,171382,12,0,173182,0:0:0
146,114,173782,6,0,B|94:121|65:179|89:232,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,192,176182,12,0,177982,0:0:0
296,300,178582,6,0,B|340:315|367:335|367:335|388:311|431:287,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,192,180982,12,4,183382,0:0:0
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