Ranko - Sei Natsu · forum

Skystar

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Skystar 2012-09-07T07:17:58+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月28日 at 21:28:53

Artist: Ranko
Title: Sei Natsu
Source: Touhou
Tags: c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
BPM: 200
Filesize: 7151kb
Play Time: 03:03
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.64 stars, 145 notes)
Hard (5 stars, 606 notes)
Lunatic (5 stars, 697 notes)
Normal (3.64 stars, 208 notes)

Download: Ranko - Sei Natsu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3 LKs x NTR hehehe

December 28th, 2012 - Bubbled by LKs
~~Could it ranked at 1.1.2013?~~

January 1st, 2013 - Ranked by NatsumeRin

[Mapset]

Easy - x847606653

Normal - Flask

Hard - me

Lunatic - me

Last edited by Skystar 2013-01-08T11:57:16+00:00, edited 41 times in total.

Ulysses

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Ulysses 2012-09-08T14:21:27+00:00

沙發

Strawberry

osu! Alumni

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Joined October 2010

Strawberry 2012-09-08T22:57:57+00:00

地板

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2012-09-09T16:42:49+00:00

神麻婆您好``我是送SP的
IRC MOD

SPOILER

23:57 Lan_wings: 00:06:232 (6,7,8,1,2,3) -
23:57 Lan_wings: 這裡可以擺成一個六邊形
23:57 AmamiyaYuko: 好
23:57 Lan_wings: 00:05:482 (1,2,3) - 然後擺完后應該可以跟這裡弄對稱
23:58 Lan_wings: 00:06:232 (6,7,3) - 跟這３個點對稱
23:58 AmamiyaYuko: 好
23:58 AmamiyaYuko: 然后
23:58 Lan_wings: 00:06:082 (5) - 這個放六邊形中間你懂的
23:58 AmamiyaYuko: 嗯
23:59 Lan_wings: 00:27:082 (3) - NC
23:59 AmamiyaYuko: 不加
23:59 Lan_wings: 不NC卡不清
23:59 Lan_wings: 差評
23:59 Lan_wings: 看*
23:59 AmamiyaYuko: 反正有移动一格
23:59 Lan_wings: 反正我差評lol
00:00 AmamiyaYuko: 看不清关我P事蛤蛤蛤
00:00 AmamiyaYuko: 我自己知道就行
00:00 AmamiyaYuko: 这玩意打一pc就记住了啊
00:01 Lan_wings: 00:43:582 (3) - 又是坑爹貨
00:02 Lan_wings: 擺明了故意的
00:02 AmamiyaYuko: 这一点不坑爹谢谢
00:02 Lan_wings: 改成2個slider就不坑爹了
00:02 AmamiyaYuko: 故意的
00:02 Lan_wings: 現在每次都坑我1combo
00:02 AmamiyaYuko: 反正我围观了好几个就你一个被坑
00:02 AmamiyaYuko: 说明你弱
00:03 Lan_wings: 我這是大眾水平
00:05 Lan_wings: 01:59:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 個人表示不喜歡這樣的梗
00:05 AmamiyaYuko: 嗯没事我很喜欢
00:05 AmamiyaYuko: 在折腾六边形你继续
00:05 Lan_wings: ........
00:05 Lan_wings: slider后接stream很難打的
00:06 AmamiyaYuko: 我很好打
00:06 Lan_wings: 02:30:982 (1) - 這裡的節奏太難讀了點
00:07 Lan_wings: 02:38:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同樣的
00:07 Lan_wings: 湊字數
00:08 Lan_wings: 02:47:932 (2,4,6,7,8,9) - 這梗我喜歡
00:08 Lan_wings: 02:48:382 (6) - 不過這裡不加個NC么``雖然我能看到``但是感覺還是應該加一下
00:10 Lan_wings: 00:17:332 (4,1) - 好``又跑回前面去``這裡circle沒擋好slider
00:11 AmamiyaYuko: 加
00:11 AmamiyaYuko: 挡啥
00:11 AmamiyaYuko: 没看懂
00:11 Lan_wings: 00:16:432 (4,1) -
00:11 Lan_wings: 這樣的
00:12 AmamiyaYuko: 这个懒比了不挡也行
00:12 Lan_wings: 擋了好看點0.0
00:12 AmamiyaYuko: 00:17:632 (6,1) - 主要是这个包围一下比较好看
00:12 AmamiyaYuko: 挡了就包不全了
00:13 Lan_wings: 隨便<.<
00:13 Lan_wings: 00:23:782 (1) - 於是這個相信也是很難把尾巴弄到那位置了
00:14 AmamiyaYuko: 试了下好像还行
00:15 AmamiyaYuko: 这个可以有
00:15 Lan_wings: 咦`可以么
00:15 AmamiyaYuko: 00:34:582 (1) - 这个不跪服?
00:15 Lan_wings: 這個幹嗎要跪
00:15 AmamiyaYuko: 没啥你继续
00:15 Lan_wings: 00:34:582 (1) - 後面兩個點拉好點
00:16 AmamiyaYuko: 嗯0.0
00:16 Lan_wings: 外圈夠漂亮了
00:16 Lan_wings: 但是內圈不是很好看
00:17 AmamiyaYuko: 破了
00:22 Lan_wings: 來試下這個怎麼樣
00:22 Lan_wings: 00:42:982 (1) -
00:22 Lan_wings: 中間白點在x360 y272
00:23 Lan_wings: 尾巴白點在356 320
00:23 Lan_wings: 00:42:982 - 時間點
00:24 Lan_wings: 00:43:282 - 然後複製到這裡順時針旋轉144°
00:24 Lan_wings: 00:43:582 - 複製轉144°
00:24 Lan_wings: 00:43:882 - ^
00:25 AmamiyaYuko: .
00:25 Lan_wings: 00:44:182 - ^
00:25 Lan_wings: 然後00:44:182 - 這個拉長一下
00:25 Lan_wings: 弄成對稱
00:25 Lan_wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/427695
00:25 Lan_wings: 大概是這鳥樣
00:25 AmamiyaYuko: 比较没看懂
00:26 AmamiyaYuko: 已吓尿还是没看懂
00:26 Lan_wings: 圖能看懂么0.0
00:26 Lan_wings: 0.0
00:26 Lan_wings: 我QQ發你
00:31 Lan_wings: 00:42:982 -
00:31 AmamiyaYuko: 我擦
00:31 AmamiyaYuko: 太鬼畜了
00:31 AmamiyaYuko: 不改
00:31 Lan_wings: 很鬼畜么
00:31 Lan_wings: 看著很爽啊
00:32 AmamiyaYuko: 不过缩小点spacing的话倒是可以我想想怎么破
00:33 AmamiyaYuko: 好破了0.0
00:33 Lan_wings: 破成怎麼樣
00:33 AmamiyaYuko: update之后给你看0.0
00:34 AmamiyaYuko: 然后呢0.0
00:34 AmamiyaYuko: 没了?
00:34 Lan_wings: 然後後面的稍微調整位置你懂的
00:35 Lan_wings: 01:05:782 (1,2,1,2,1) - 感覺這裡還能破一下
00:36 AmamiyaYuko: 破成啥样...
00:36 AmamiyaYuko: 求正常
00:36 Lan_wings: 01:06:232 (1) - 這個slider改成circle
00:36 Lan_wings: 然後jump
00:36 Lan_wings: 01:06:382 - 然後slider
00:36 AmamiyaYuko: 不改你没发现整个图这地方都是这节奏
00:37 Lan_wings: 咦``有麼
00:37 Lan_wings: 我沒發現耶
00:37 Lan_wings: 01:03:382 (1) - 這裡尾巴沒弄好
00:37 AmamiyaYuko: 02:12:982 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -
00:37 Lan_wings: 這不是跟你之前的節奏一樣么
00:38 Lan_wings: 你需要多點變化
00:38 AmamiyaYuko: 前后一致才是王道
00:38 Lan_wings: 變化王道
00:38 AmamiyaYuko: ...同样的地方节奏变了会很奇怪的
00:39 AmamiyaYuko: 不过你能给出信服的梗我就变._.
00:39 Lan_wings: 在研究怎麼擺
00:39 AmamiyaYuko: 快睡了...
00:40 AmamiyaYuko: 这段先发上去骗kd吧剩下的另外说也行0.0
00:41 AmamiyaYuko: .-. 人呢
00:42 Lan_wings: ０．０
00:42 Lan_wings: 在
00:42 Lan_wings: 剛弄了點``感覺略渣
00:42 AmamiyaYuko: 好那就这样了
00:42 Lan_wings: 發你看看

Last edited by Lan wings 2012-09-13T14:15:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2012-09-10T12:47:03+00:00

可，你要啥难度
其次感觉和风听起来不太舒服

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Skystar 2012-09-10T15:41:42+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
可，你要啥难度
其次感觉和风听起来不太舒服

你隨便挑0.0 音效的話當時覺得這BGM配和風音效會怎麼樣結果試了下就覺得dbl然後就.

wmfchris

osu! Alumni

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wmfchris 2012-09-13T14:17:41+00:00

Lan wings wrote:
LRC MOD

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Lan wings 2012-09-13T14:40:18+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
Lan wings wrote:
LRC MOD

泥马````````

x847606653

524 posts

Joined January 2011

x847606653 2012-11-01T12:13:33+00:00

去吃翔

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: OAO.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48082
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Sei Natsu
TitleUnicode:Sei Natsu
Artist:Ranko
ArtistUnicode:Ranko
Creator:AmamiyaYuko
Version:EZ
Source:Touhou
Tags:
BeatmapID:176712
BeatmapSetID:58785

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-11-06T00:42:21+00:00

Hi ~ AmamiyaYuko ~

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lunatic]

OD+1 more challenge players.
00:34:132 (3) - Try ctrl+g,flow much better.

[Hard]

00:10:882 (2) - Change new combo to here,looks better.
01:27:682 (2) - ^
01:46:882 (2) - ^
01:59:932 - Sound empty to here,Add a circle is better.

[Normal]

01:00:982 (4) - Add new combo,looks better.

[Easy]

AR+1 is better.
01:05:782 (1) - Missing Add finish to here.

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~

Saten

Global Moderator

3,866 posts

Joined August 2010

Saten 2012-11-06T03:58:04+00:00

Strange.. I normally can read AR 9 lol

[General]
Add Buta-Otome & Bowling to the tags
http://vgmdb.net/album/34450

[Lunatic]

Kawayi Rika wrote:
OD+1 more challenge players.

it is challenging enough imo. 7 is fine
00:03:082 (6,1,2,3,4) - this was really hard to read the first time
00:09:982 (1,2,1,2) - awkward movement
00:24:232 (2,3) - un-readable imo. Ctrl+G this
02:30:982 (1,2,1) - this distance make it hard to read the sudden beat change
02:33:982 (2) - NC here for new beat change

[Hard]
00:20:482 (2) - this is completely hidden under all the hitbursts

SPOILER

00:36:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ok seriously lol
00:47:032 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why do you use these on a Hard? D:
00:48:082 (1) - again, hard to see. but it's more notable than the the previous one
01:38:782 (5) - 2 repeats, it's really confusing, especially after these forth and back notes 01:38:182 (1,2,3,4) -
01:41:182 (5) - same as above
01:48:382 (3) - try avoid using 2 repeats. It can really be confusing most of the time (There are more but I wont point out all of them)
01:55:282 (1) - kinda hidden too
02:14:782 (3) - hard to see. use NC please

SPOILER

This is really not a Hard imo. It's more like a Lunatic and the current Lunatic is an Extra

[Normal]
AR+1 please
This diff lacks those epic bass hitsounds
01:50:482 (4) - 1 grid right & up

[Easy]
AR+1
00:38:182 (1) - not sure if this is really reccomended
01:05:782 (1) - finish
02:35:782 (1) - finish on head
02:59:782 (3) - finish on tail

That's all from me, sorry if I sounded rude or anything~
Good luck!

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Skystar 2012-11-06T12:27:32+00:00

Saten

Saten wrote:
Strange.. I normally can read AR 9 lol

[General]
Add Buta-Otome & Bowling to the tags Added
http://vgmdb.net/album/34450

[Lunatic]
Kawayi Rika wrote:
OD+1 more challenge players.
it is challenging enough imo. 7 is fine I think so :3
00:03:082 (6,1,2,3,4) - this was really hard to read the first time fixed
00:09:982 (1,2,1,2) - awkward movement It's my own style. No changed.
00:24:232 (2,3) - un-readable imo. Ctrl+G this fixed
02:30:982 (1,2,1) - this distance make it hard to read the sudden beat change fixed
02:33:982 (2) - NC here for new beat change fixed

[Hard]
00:20:482 (2) - this is completely hidden under all the hitbursts fixed
SPOILER
00:36:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ok seriously lol look this ↓
00:47:032 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why do you use these on a Hard? D: Because I'd like to know people how to thought about such kind of pattern and yeah, I got the answer. :3
00:48:082 (1) - again, hard to see. but it's more notable than the the previous one ^
01:38:782 (5) - 2 repeats, it's really confusing, especially after these forth and back notes 01:38:182 (1,2,3,4) - fixed
01:41:182 (5) - same as above same
01:48:382 (3) - try avoid using 2 repeats. It can really be confusing most of the time (There are more but I wont point out all of them) But I think here is appropriate..?
01:55:282 (1) - kinda hidden too well, fixed.
02:14:782 (3) - hard to see. use NC please fixed
SPOILER

This is really not a Hard imo. It's more like a Lunatic and the current Lunatic is an Extra lol

Rika

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ AmamiyaYuko ~

Mod time for my Lucky Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Lunatic]

OD+1 more challenge players. No, OD8 is crazy IMO.
00:34:132 (3) - Try ctrl+g,flow much better. right

[Hard]

00:10:882 (2) - Change new combo to here,looks better. fixed
01:27:682 (2) - ^ fixed
01:46:882 (2) - ^ But this not. I think it's readable
01:59:932 - Sound empty to here,Add a circle is better. fixed

Rotte

582 posts

Joined October 2011

Rotte 2012-11-07T06:55:22+00:00

Easy/Basic

没啥大问题

Normal/Standard

00:04:882 - 空的有点坑...
00:56:182 (4) - 小修了一下

248,128,56182,2,0,B|232:68|148:48|88:88|68:148|88:204|124:232|124:232|64:320,1,400

01:03:382 (1) -

176,52,63382,6,0,B|116:60|88:124|108:176|148:204|148:204|148:304,1,300,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Hard/Hyper

总之我pass不能

00:30:982 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 坑死了
00:33:382 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
00:36:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hard里出现更坑，这BPM200啊
01:45:382 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这些在hard太难，用短滑条代替吧...Orz

Insane/Advanced/Lunatic

pass无望.....超出打图能力，mod不能....

~~星神你个死货，早就说了神图不要丢啊，哎哟，吃了你~~

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-11-07T10:02:42+00:00

@Saten: That would be out screen if I move 1 gird right + up D:

Anyway all fixed except ^

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: OAO.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48082
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Sei Natsu
TitleUnicode:Sei Natsu
Artist:Ranko
ArtistUnicode:Ranko
Creator:AmamiyaYuko
Version:Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
BeatmapID:188142
BeatmapSetID:58785

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG4.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,68382,76582
2,135582,143782
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
-218,300,4,1,1,50,1,0
48982,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
58282,-100,4,2,2,50,0,0
58582,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
68182,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
116182,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
125632,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
125782,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
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178282,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
178582,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
183382,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0


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Combo2 : 68,102,159
Combo3 : 245,158,185
Combo4 : 220,198,139

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188,168,86182,2,0,B|220:112|284:108|344:136|344:208,1,200
264,204,87082,2,0,B|232:300,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,332,87682,6,0,B|104:352|52:344,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,332,88582,2,0,B|296:352|348:344,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,344,89032,2,0,B|440:376|500:356|516:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,280,89782,2,0,B|420:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,112,90382,5,0,0:0:0
324,56,90682,1,8,0:0:0
244,48,90982,2,0,B|184:48|136:72,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,112,91582,2,0,B|28:136|32:208,2,100,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,184,92482,5,8,0:0:0
196,192,92782,2,0,B|180:260|112:264|112:264|80:304,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,384,93832,2,0,B|296:360|336:288,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
388,228,94582,6,0,B|444:240|504:204,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
496,136,95182,2,0,B|512:88,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
485,214,95782,2,0,B|496:280|488:336,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,356,96382,2,0,B|368:368|308:352,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,308,96982,1,4,0:0:0
184,288,97282,6,0,B|128:296,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,216,97882,1,8,0:0:0
296,236,98182,2,0,B|316:180|272:124|212:116|168:136|140:192|140:192|80:156,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,124,99382,1,0,0:0:0
16,204,99682,6,0,B|8:264|16:312,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,124,100582,2,0,B|80:76|152:72|216:124|216:124|272:104|276:32,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,28,101782,1,0,0:0:0
344,108,102082,6,0,B|324:164|272:192,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
220,232,102682,1,8,0:0:0
192,308,102982,1,0,0:0:0
76,336,103432,2,0,B|56:272|56:272|60:240|60:240|48:176,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,172,104182,2,0,B|120:128|64:96|36:112,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,228,105082,1,8,0:0:0
240,168,105382,2,0,B|248:124|304:92|332:108,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,72,105982,2,0,B|428:44,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,152,106582,5,4,0:0:0
452,172,106882,2,0,B|440:220|400:232|360:236,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,276,107632,2,0,B|216:276,1,50
140,240,108082,2,0,B|40:240,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,180,108982,5,0,0:0:0
216,104,109282,2,0,B|276:120|276:196,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,184,110032,2,0,B|444:156,1,50
448,80,110482,2,0,B|508:92|516:156,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,60,111382,6,0,B|312:60|312:60|268:20|212:36,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,140,112582,2,0,B|312:140|312:140|268:180|212:164,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,220,113782,2,0,B|296:252|228:272|168:256|112:220|144:136|160:116,1,300,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,48,114982,1,0,0:0:0
12,340,116182,6,0,B|112:340|112:340|168:324|184:272,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,200,117082,1,8,0:0:0
100,256,117382,2,0,B|28:256|28:256|-12:192|16:132,1,200
4,56,118282,1,8,0:0:0
76,84,118582,2,0,B|108:128|84:180|84:180|184:180,1,200
264,180,119482,1,8,0:0:0
300,108,119782,2,0,B|352:144|344:208,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,272,120382,2,0,B|352:336|400:364,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,288,120982,5,0,0:0:0
460,212,121282,2,0,B|464:160|428:152|432:96,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,220,122032,2,0,B|360:224|268:216,1,150
192,220,122782,1,0,0:0:0
112,224,123082,1,8,0:0:0
112,144,123382,2,0,B|64:148|32:172|12:216|16:288|84:328|160:292|160:292|196:340|224:360|252:368,1,400
284,300,124882,2,0,B|244:268|216:224,2,100,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,324,125782,6,0,B|424:296|488:332|488:332|512:268,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
505,189,126682,1,8,0:0:0
431,157,126982,2,0,B|418:194|439:230|439:230|381:220|318:250,1,200
270,186,127882,1,8,0:0:0
213,242,128182,2,0,B|152:260,1,50
88,279,128632,1,0,0:0:0
33,220,128932,1,0,0:0:0
18,141,129232,6,0,B|80:136|111:196|111:196|147:164,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,112,129982,1,0,0:0:0
260,78,130282,1,8,0:0:0
311,16,130582,6,0,B|353:57|333:119|333:119|333:168,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,78,131782,2,0,B|256:121|256:121|244:191|298:232,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,132982,12,4,135382,0:0:0
84,96,144982,5,4,0:0:0
163,88,145282,1,8,0:0:0
232,127,145582,1,0,0:0:0
267,198,145882,1,8,0:0:0
252,276,146182,2,0,B|247:330|195:366|195:366|166:366|139:366,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,298,147382,5,0,0:0:0
401,265,147682,1,8,0:0:0
440,195,147982,1,0,0:0:0
446,115,148282,1,8,0:0:0
409,43,148582,2,0,B|358:22|299:22|252:32,1,150
196,76,149332,1,2,0:0:0
90,132,149782,6,0,B|127:178|186:195,3,100,0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,266,150982,2,0,B|100:254|65:222,2,66.6666666666667,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,305,151582,2,0,B|165:344|133:364,2,66.6666666666667,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
237,305,152182,2,0,B|256:344|288:364,2,66.6666666666667,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
280,273,152782,2,0,B|328:261|363:229,2,66.6666666666667,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
239,238,153382,2,0,B|258:199|287:184,2,66.6666666666667
185,237,153982,2,0,B|166:184|122:145,2,100,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
445,50,155782,5,4,0:0:0
125,69,156982,6,0,B|77:106|55:156,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
57,224,157582,2,0,B|73:262|121:299,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
185,347,158182,2,0,B|287:347,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
297,267,158782,2,0,B|195:267,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,257,159682,6,0,B|425:239,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
335,187,160282,1,8,0:0:0
286,123,160582,2,0,B|242:77|190:50,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,57,161182,2,0,B|94:73|50:119,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
37,198,161782,2,0,B|19:267|66:314|139:317|167:277,1,200
115,219,162682,1,8,0:0:0
100,140,162982,2,0,B|169:134|192:200,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
235,243,163582,2,0,B|278:299,2,50,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
270,171,164182,6,0,B|294:133|351:95|419:125|443:174,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
479,233,165082,1,8,0:0:0
443,304,165382,2,0,B|419:342|362:380|294:350|270:301,1,200
228,245,166282,1,8,0:0:0
148,251,166582,2,0,B|94:259,1,50
52,324,167032,2,0,B|13:288|21:230,2,100,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
165,364,168082,2,0,B|217:373|272:366|273:366,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
342,347,168682,1,8,0:0:0
422,347,168982,6,0,B|481:310|467:235|467:235|501:235,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
342,348,170182,2,0,B|283:311|297:236|297:236|263:236,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,171382,12,0,173182,0:0:0
146,114,173782,6,0,B|94:121|65:179|89:232,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
217,149,174982,2,0,B|240:199|211:257|159:264,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,176182,12,0,177982,0:0:0
254,298,178582,6,0,B|298:313|325:333|325:333|346:309|389:285,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
174,298,179782,2,0,B|130:313|103:333|103:333|82:309|39:285,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,180982,12,4,183382,0:0:0

x847606653

524 posts

Joined January 2011

x847606653 2012-11-07T11:52:12+00:00

AR+1
01:05:782 (1) - finish

others no change.Thanks>_>

Citrus

744 posts

Joined January 2011

Citrus 2012-11-08T13:51:41+00:00

[Easy]

00:25:582 (1) - 稍稍修整了一下
```
360,328,22582,2,0,B|432:320|456:240,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
01:38:782 (2) - （480，288）
02:35:782 (1) - 开头finish
02:59:782 (3) - 开头和结尾均加finish

[Normal]

00:48:982 (1) - 稍微修整了一下
```
362,225,48982,6,0,B|362:145|362:145|394:113|398:89|394:53|384:36,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
00:55:582 (2,3) - 我的建议是换成slider，从00:55:432开始
SPOILER
```
301,188,55432,2,0,P|268:224|200:216|176:164,1,150
```
00:53:482 (8,1) - 上一条如果改了的话，这两个挪动一下位置就行
01:54:982 (4) - （192,56）感觉沿着滑条的方向比较美观
02:30:982 (2,3,4,5,6) - 建议把所有的whistle去掉，然后02:33:382 (6) - 开头加finish
02:58:582 (1,2) - 这两个沿中间对称怎么样？

[Hard]

00:30:982 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 建议换成slider，这个排列对于hard来说太难了
00:33:382 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
00:36:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^毫无人性，天理何在？
01:44:182 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 建议适当使用slider，hard难度200bpm的连续单点略难
02:27:082 (3) - 摆正
```
294,328,147082,2,0,B|256:350|216:327,1,80
```
02:29:332 (3) - 音量下降20%比较好

[Lunatic]

神图，找不到什么问题，只能帮你把一些slider弄得好看一点
00:00:982 (1) - 弧度大一点比较好看

56,180,982,6,0,P|83:146|152:127|197:183|199:226,1,192,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:18:982 (1) - 修了一下

268,100,78982,6,0,P|232:64|163:84|152:133,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:22:582 (1) - ^

292,132,82582,6,0,P|336:156|336:228|292:252,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:28:582 (1) - ^

300,48,88582,6,0,P|255:72|255:144|299:168,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:30:982 (1) - ^

180,168,90982,6,0,B|232:195|288:170|295:121,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

02:29:332 (3) - 降低20%音量

awesome map！五体投地！

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2012-11-13T23:12:58+00:00

Hi Yuko san :3 As requested.

[General]
●If you can , change to BG size 800 x 600 → 1024 x 768

[Easy]
●OD and HPDrain +1
●00:00:382 - you should start here ~ same as other diff
●00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little.I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●00:39:982 (2) - add new combo
●01:17:782 (1,1) - the flow isnt good.. >< I think it'd look better and good the flow if it was symmetrical.
●01:35:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as here.00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) -
●02:38:182 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
●03:01:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Normal]
●00:00:382 - start to here ? red line...maybe confusing many players
●01:18:982 - try this ?

●02:01:282 (2) - Rotate by 20°? Aim for the start of 02:02:032 (3) -
●02:33:982 (7) - add new combo
●02:59:782 (2) - add finish on the slider's head ?

[Hard]
●00:21:832 (2) - hmm... try this ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492790
●00:35:107 (3) - remove note ..? Rhythm here is hard to take a little.
●00:43:432 (2,3) - try this ? like this here.00:41:182 (3) -

●00:46:432 - NC:2 sound here ? like this your pattern00:45:232 -
●00:52:432 (5) - move to x:200 y:160 . looks better and make the spacing equal here
●01:44:782 (1,2,3,4) - try to put spacing around (0.60x ~ 0.80x)?
●02:27:082 (3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
●02:34:582 (5) - add new combo ? same as Lunatic diff . I think Lunatic diff is looks good :3
●02:40:582 (1) - 1 grid down at slider end point? same as 02:41:032 (2,1) -

[Lunatic]
●OD + 1 ?
●00:11:782 (1) - slider end point to x:204 y:216? looks better imo
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492779
●00:17:482 (5) - stack on middle point to this slider ? 00:17:782 (1) - like this your pattern at here.00:16:582 (1,3) -
●00:26:182 - hmm , this finish sound is a little loud . want to put 50% volume ~ gradually add finish sound ~ 00:24:982 - →00:26:182 - →00:27:382 -
●00:38:782 (1) - add finish ? try to put finish with constant rhythm ~ ? 'v'
●00:41:782 (1) - it is better to use (0.06x) like this your pattern ~
●00:57:232 (8) - more jump..? I want more spacing here >< because it is stronger sound ~
●01:32:182 (1,2,3,4,5) - gradually add volume here ? 40% → 50% → 60%
●01:38:332 - only default sound ? o.o
●01:45:982 (1) - add finish ?
●02:25:282 (2) - remove finish~it follows nothing.
●02:34:282 (3) - 1 grid right . stack on here.02:32:582 (1) -
●02:47:032 (3) - Ctrl + G ? try to make a little jump :3

nice Lunatic !

good luck

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Skystar 2012-11-14T14:30:18+00:00

alacat

alacat wrote:
Hi Yuko san :3 As requested.

[General]
●If you can , change to BG size 800 x 600 → 1024 x 768 maybe 800×600 is ok..?

[Hard]
●00:21:832 (2) - hmm... try this ? ok
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492790
●00:35:107 (3) - remove note ..? Rhythm here is hard to take a little. ^
●00:43:432 (2,3) - try this ? like this here.00:41:182 (3) - No I want keep this pattern 00:42:682 (4,1,2) -
SPOILER
●00:46:432 - NC:2 sound here ? like this your pattern00:45:232 - fixed
●00:52:432 (5) - move to x:200 y:160 . looks better and make the spacing equal here ^
●01:44:782 (1,2,3,4) - try to put spacing around (0.60x ~ 0.80x)? haha ok
●02:27:082 (3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical. fixed
●02:34:582 (5) - add new combo ? same as Lunatic diff . I think Lunatic diff is looks good :3 :3
●02:40:582 (1) - 1 grid down at slider end point? same as 02:41:032 (2,1) - fixed

[Lunatic]
●OD + 1 ? No...OD8 is too hard to get full combo. (OD7 is hard too ;_; I can't get FC even it's OD7)
●00:11:782 (1) - slider end point to x:204 y:216? looks better imo fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/492779
●00:17:482 (5) - stack on middle point to this slider ? 00:17:782 (1) - like this your pattern at here.00:16:582 (1,3) - No, I made this blanket 00:17:632 (6,1) -
●00:26:182 - hmm , this finish sound is a little loud . want to put 50% volume ~ gradually add finish sound ~ 00:24:982 - →00:26:182 - →00:27:382 - GOOD!
●00:38:782 (1) - add finish ? try to put finish with constant rhythm ~ ? 'v' ok
●00:41:782 (1) - it is better to use (0.06x) like this your pattern ~ I can't understand...? But I think it's good enough.
●00:57:232 (8) - more jump..? I want more spacing here >< because it is stronger sound ~ ok
●01:32:182 (1,2,3,4,5) - gradually add volume here ? 40% → 50% → 60%GOOD WAY!!
●01:38:332 - only default sound ? o.o my fault o.o fixed
●01:45:982 (1) - add finish ? No..
●02:25:282 (2) - remove finish~it follows nothing. ahh I forgot remove finish when I copy this note...
●02:34:282 (3) - 1 grid right . stack on here.02:32:582 (1) - fixed
●02:47:032 (3) - Ctrl + G ? try to make a little jump :3 :3

nice Lunatic !

good luck
thanks > <

thou bad

thou bad wrote:
[Lunatic]
神图，找不到什么问题，只能帮你把一些slider弄得好看一点
00:00:982 (1) - 弧度大一点比较好看
56,180,982,6,0,P|83:146|152:127|197:183|199:226,1,192,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:18:982 (1) - 修了一下
268,100,78982,6,0,P|232:64|163:84|152:133,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:22:582 (1) - ^
292,132,82582,6,0,P|336:156|336:228|292:252,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:28:582 (1) - ^
300,48,88582,6,0,P|255:72|255:144|299:168,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:30:982 (1) - ^
180,168,90982,6,0,B|232:195|288:170|295:121,1,144.000005493164,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
02:29:332 (3) - 降低20%音量不
awesome map！五体投地！
Others all fixed.

sherrie__fay

437 posts

Joined October 2010

sherrie__fay 2012-11-14T14:31:58+00:00

mod req via ~~QQ group PM~~ ~~in-game PM~~ ~~baka scorpiour's modding queue~~
……总之就是过来mod了>A<

[Lunatic]

00:06:982 (3) - 尾部上移一格和00:06:832 (2) - 分开
00:10:882 (2) - NC
00:17:482 (5) - 建议微移到x:124 y:132
00:31:582 (5) - 建议NC 要不这里一堆圈圈不好读图
01:47:782 (1) - 这个静音没问题吗>_>
02:15:382 (1) - 上移一格(grid level 4
02:34:282 (3) - 和02:32:582 (1) - 没有对齐

[Hard]

00:41:182 (3) - 偶数折返有点坑建议最后一个做成单点
01:48:382 (3) - ^
01:50:782 (3) - ^
00:52:957 (2,3) - 建议长度换成一样的
02:00:082 (2,3) - ^
02:03:532 - +note
02:13:432 (1) - 去掉NC
02:14:782 (1) - ^
02:29:032 (2) - 下移一格和后面对齐
02:38:332 - +note

[Normal]

00:08:782 (4) - 建议+clap
01:00:682 - +note
01:24:982 (5) - +NC
01:44:182 (5) - ^
01:47:632 (3) - 为什么不前移一格然后做reverse 这个2连出现在这里节奏有点突兀啊
01:50:032 (3) - ^

[Easy]

01:21:382 (2) - 把前边的NC挪到这里

其他没有啥问题

(๑• •๑)感觉没有前一张做得好一些silder拉得不是很严谨有以grid level 4为单位的微小偏差。
静音note不让用。
不过整体来看还是不错的
加油(*˘︶˘*).｡.:*♡

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-11-14T15:00:25+00:00

Almost fix! Really thanks >w<

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: OAO.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 48082
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Sei Natsu
TitleUnicode:Sei Natsu
Artist:Ranko
ArtistUnicode:Ranko
Creator:AmamiyaYuko
Version:Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
BeatmapID:188142
BeatmapSetID:58785

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG4.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,68382,76582
2,135582,143782
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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260,78,131782,2,0,B|256:121|256:121|244:191|298:232,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,132982,12,4,135382,0:0:0
84,96,144982,5,4,0:0:0
163,88,145282,1,8,0:0:0
232,127,145582,1,0,0:0:0
267,198,145882,1,8,0:0:0
252,276,146182,2,0,B|247:330|195:366|195:366|166:366|139:366,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,298,147382,5,0,0:0:0
401,265,147682,1,8,0:0:0
440,195,147982,1,0,0:0:0
446,115,148282,1,8,0:0:0
409,43,148582,2,0,B|358:22|299:22|252:32,1,150
196,76,149332,1,2,0:0:0
90,132,149782,6,0,B|127:178|186:195,3,100,0|8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,266,150982,2,0,B|100:254|65:222,2,66.6666666666667,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,305,151582,2,0,B|165:344|133:364,2,66.6666666666667,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
237,305,152182,2,0,B|256:344|288:364,2,66.6666666666667,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
280,273,152782,2,0,B|328:261|363:229,2,66.6666666666667,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
239,238,153382,2,0,B|258:199|287:184,2,66.6666666666667,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
185,237,153982,6,0,B|166:184|122:145,2,100,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
445,50,155782,5,4,0:0:0
125,69,156982,6,0,B|77:106|55:156,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
57,224,157582,2,0,B|73:262|121:299,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
185,347,158182,2,0,B|287:347,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
297,267,158782,2,0,B|195:267,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,257,159682,6,0,B|425:239,2,50,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
335,187,160282,1,8,0:0:0
286,123,160582,2,0,B|242:77|190:50,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,57,161182,2,0,B|94:73|50:119,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
37,198,161782,2,0,B|19:267|66:314|139:317|167:277,1,200
115,219,162682,1,8,0:0:0
100,140,162982,2,0,B|169:134|192:200,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
235,243,163582,2,0,B|278:299,2,50,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
270,171,164182,6,0,B|294:133|351:95|419:125|443:174,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
479,233,165082,1,8,0:0:0
443,304,165382,2,0,B|419:342|362:380|294:350|270:301,1,200
228,245,166282,1,8,0:0:0
148,251,166582,2,0,B|94:259,1,50
52,324,167032,2,0,B|13:288|21:230,2,100,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
165,364,168082,2,0,B|217:373|272:366|273:366,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
342,347,168682,1,8,0:0:0
422,347,168982,6,0,B|481:310|467:235|467:235|501:235,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
342,348,170182,2,0,B|283:311|297:236|297:236|263:236,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,171382,12,0,173182,0:0:0
146,114,173782,6,0,B|94:121|65:179|89:232,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
217,149,174982,2,0,B|240:199|211:257|159:264,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,176182,12,0,177982,0:0:0
296,300,178582,6,0,B|340:315|367:335|367:335|388:311|431:287,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,300,179782,6,0,B|172:315|145:335|145:335|124:311|81:287,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,180982,12,4,183382,0:0:0

Ulysses

1,911 posts

Joined September 2010

Ulysses 2012-11-18T14:24:54+00:00

From CLANNAD Modding Queue(Flask requested)

Black = They're only suggestions.
Blue = You have better to change them.
Red = They're unrankable issue.You should change them.

[General]

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Easy] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
- [Hard] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
- [Lunatic] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask
- [Normal] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
Easy,Normal :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:982, ends on 00:58:282
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:56:182, ends on 02:05:632
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:36:982, ends on 02:43:882

Hard,Lunatic :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:982, ends on 00:57:982
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:56:182, ends on 02:05:182
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:36:982, ends on 02:43:582

[Lunatic]

00:23:782 (1) -

SPOILER

This slider is too hidden in default skin.The other word to say,unseenable.Abosultely annoying while playing.Highly recommend you to repair it.

00:26:482 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get why you repeating this pattern(1~2)=(3~4),the feelling are different however you use the same pattern.It ruins the map itself,bring bore to players.Rather than keeping this,I suggest you to change it like this.

SPOILER

Or anything you think it's better than the crruent pattern,it sucks.

00:59:782 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ryu0 (NAZI) It blankets bad.Use this code.

324,160,59782,6,0,B|332:216|284:252|220:260|184:204,1,192,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:01:432 (3) - Same as above.

204,220,61432,2,0,B|244:260|304:260|352:220|344:160,1,192

01:01:432 (3,4) - I read it as 1/4 spacing since you used to use it as 1/4 spacing.But now it's 1/2,put it away.Like this:

01:20:182 (1) - The finish doesn't fit IMO.

01:24:982 (1) - Same as above

01:50:782 (3) - Repeative slider pizzes players off.1/2 slider in 200 BPM with this kind of slider speed casue players hard to determine how many reverses does it have.It's not tricky not funny but troll.Looks like you surpass your aesthetic pattern and put laziness in it.Del the last reverse and put a note anywhere is better than what you use to do here.

02:31:582 (1,2) - The spacing here is just misleading players.Suddenly 0.92 spacing when you use to use 2.0 or above.See 02:33:982 (1,2,3,4,1)

I am not forcing you to follow my suggestions but I highly advice you to think twice before resisting.A confuseion in my own opinion,keep spacing and patterns neat and you gain a senior talent.

[Hard]

00:20:482 (2) - If I were you,I won't put it as an anti-jump but stack it directly.

00:59:332 (3) - Why don't you Ctrl+G it?The spacing looks so weird.

01:07:882 (6) - lol put it on x436,y336 looks more aesthetic for me.

01:48:382 (3) - Dunno why it plays odd for me.But after using 4 notes /2 sliders/2notes plus one slider insteading it,plays better.Dunno why.

02:15:382 (1) - Why don't you stack it on the end of the pervious slider but the head of it:3 it plays better for me again.

02:35:482 (2) - (NAZI) It isn't a straight slider.Use this code.

161,334,154582,5,4,0:0:0

02:48:382 (1,2,3,4) - <_> huge jump

[Normal]

00:23:782 (6) -

This rhythmsounds much much more better.

02:33:982 (7) - Del reverse and add note on 02:34:582 plays better for me

[Easy]

00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 notes is a bit hard for a easy.

plays better for me ._.

01:35:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above

02:38:182 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above

03:01:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Like what you did on
01:45:382 (1,2,3) -
01:50:182 (1,2,1) -

They play good.

I don't know if you are willing to change them.Depending on youself.
Nothing found in this diff.

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2012-11-26T17:23:22+00:00

Hello~~ Sorry for the long delay..

General:

-- I hope you to start mapping from 00:00:982 (1) (except Easy) because I believe the song needs a bit time for an intro, and also I dont think the part above is a nice place for a mapping
-- I also suggest you to maintain the kiai sections exactly the same for all diffs.

Easy:

-- I don't think Audio lead in is necessary in Easy

00:20:182 (3) - 1 Grid left or something to make the distance more closer to 1.00x
00:25:582 (1) - If you can do, avoiding overlap with the first and the final may look better. Also add a Finish at the end
00:32:182 (2,2) - Maybe you've had some intention to emphasize these notes, but according from the song, just a single whistle will sound better
00:39:982 (2) - You forgot NC
00:41:782 (3) - Similar opinion from above, Delete Finish. (and you've forgot Whistle here :3) Infact, 00:44:182 (2) doesn't need a change...
01:19:582 (1,2) - I prefer you using combo as (2,1) Because First combo is for lyrics, second goes with the melody
01:25:582 (1,2) - In here, (3,1)
01:30:382 (1,2) - ^
01:39:382 (3,3) - Delete Finish :3
02:10:282 (4) - Hope you can put some effort to make the distance closer to 1.00x (by turning off the grid)
02:36:982 (1,2) - (2,1) reasons mentioned above~
02:39:382 (6) - 1 Grid Right
02:54:682 (2) - (156,50) would be an ideal spot
02:59:482 (2) - Maybe (83,120)?

Normal:

00:14:182 (6) - NC since this is a part where melody only comes out
00:23:782 (6) - NC
00:28:582 (4) - NC
00:38:182 (6) - NC
00:48:082 (4) - NC
01:01:432 (2) - Rather than this rythm, Hope you will start at 01:01:582. The current one is quite confusing, and doesnt follow the song
01:20:782 (1,2) - If you have understand about the point of comboes what I was wanting to say, hope you know yourself what to change..
01:45:082 (6) - (186,227) will be nice, Since this is quite a symmetric pattern
01:47:632 (3) - Hope you follow the lyrics. Just dragging 1/2 will not be a bad choice
01:50:032 (3) - ^

Hard:

00:33:382 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Stacking will be better, looks quite weird
00:48:082 (1,2,3) - Nice speed down, but I think placing somewhere else instead stacking at (5) will be better to play
00:52:957 (2,3) - Making the rythm something like 00:56:557 (2,3,4,5) maybe better imo
00:58:282 (2) - Ctrl+G may make more playable? Just my opinion..
00:59:332 (3) - Strongly suggest a Ctrl+G here, I dont see big reasons for a jump here
01:28:282 (3) - Ctrl+G,To follow the patterns of (1,2). Also changing makes more playable
01:38:332 (2) - Template Whistle? maybe a mistake of Timeline?
01:41:182 (5) - I think increasing reverse 1 more is better
02:08:482 (2) - 1 Gird up and left will be better position
02:13:432 (1,1) - Deleting NC will look nicer
02:15:082 (3) - Increase reverse

Lunatic:

01:40:582 (1) - Starting this at 01:40:432 will be better
02:34:282 (3) - Imo, placing somewhere like (340,208) is better

To give my opinions about the map, Some interesting sliders you've used was impressive.
Though Lunatic's note were quite confusing to me, I think the mapset is surely nice, and almost rankable~~

Good luck with the map and get my star~

spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2012-11-28T12:42:08+00:00

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general

Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)

inconsistent tags in "Lunatic" diff

Easy

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:25:582 (1) - [nazi] I guess you want to make symmetrical pattern... so~ :
```
217,192,25582,6,0,B|256:146|256:146|294:192,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
00:26:782 (2) - (optional) make a slider curve to blanket 00:25:582 (1) - slider tail? it's too stiff pattern now.
00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - still a stiff pattern ((recommend to make it fun like this:
00:29:782 (5,1) - uhm... 00:29:782 (5) - is beginning for a paragraph so exchange the new combo looks better.
00:32:182 (2,1) - ^
00:34:582 (2,1) - ^
00:41:782 (3,1) - same...
00:44:182 (2) - add newcombo and remove at 00:45:382 (1) - same reason as 00:29:782 (5,1) - .
00:56:182 (1) - move to x:424,y:304 to make a pretty flow (slider 1's end & slider 2)
01:19:582 (1) - unnecessary new combo. and... wrong click time imo. because 01:20:182 - it's more suitable to make a click/hit time. but you used reverse to skip it.
Possible solutions:
01:32:782 (1) - slider end should snap to 01:33:232 - . It's very odd hitsound for playing when you used wrong rhythm (delay 1/2 rhythm).
01:36:982 (5,1) - same as 00:29:782 (5,1) - (exchange the new combo)
01:39:382 (3,1) - ^
01:41:782 (3,1) - ^
01:56:182 (1) - 4th node to make a bad curve for this shape, please fix it. like this:
```
112,192,116182,6,0,B|96:248|144:280|144:280|183:265|220:286,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
02:03:382 (1) - Err... try to copy 02:00:982 (1) - and rotate 180∘to replace this shape. it's a kinda awkward shape.
02:35:782 (1) - remove this new combo? looks 02:30:982 (1,1) - it's a sentence, so... new combo it's unnecessary.
02:50:782 (2) - move to x286,y163 to make it blanket?
02:51:382 (1,1) - avoid used large spacing to center (especially easiest diff.). It's hard to play for newbie even advanced player.
02:56:182 (1,1) - ^

Normal

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:15:682 (1,2,3,4) - Umm... I guess you want to make a square, but looks it's not a square now. (because it need re-spacing to other pattern... so I should give a code xD )

512,72,16882,1,8,0:0:0
356,44,17482,1,8,0:0:0
276,52,17782,6,0,B|224:68|172:104,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,44,18682,1,8,0:0:0
436,60,18982,2,0,B|492:112|492:188|452:232|452:232|452:332|420:368|336:384,1,400,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,344,20482,6,0,B|220:312|164:340,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,372,21082,2,0,B|81:328|113:276,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:30:982 (2) - (optional) do you want a symmetrical shape? if yes (example):
```
48,296,30982,2,0,B|127:351|239:327|239:327|350:351|430:296,1,400
```
00:36:982 (4) - new combo for the beginning.
00:42:982 (3) - let the last node to x212,y323 to make a blanket
00:51:382 (5) - recommend to add new combo.
01:50:482 (4) - make the last node to x:528,y:156 to make a blanket
02:08:182 (5) - recommend add new combo.
02:41:782 (5) - ^
02:46:582 (5) - ^

Hard

Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)

unnecessary green line:
00:46:582 -

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

00:32:032 (2) - recommend used clap
00:34:432 (2) - ^
00:37:582 (1) - remove finsh. It's very odd to used finish here. looks 00:36:982 - to 00:39:382 - is a sentence. and finish just like a period.
00:39:082 (3,4) - add clap?

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:02:482 (3,4) - used x xxx x type it's better then x xx x type. obviously,00:02:632 - have a click point (hit point).
00:19:432 (2,3,4,5,1) - in this project (4,5,1) should be stressed. so remove 00:19:732 (3) - and used reverse at 00:19:432 (2) -?
00:27:382 (1,2,3,4) - 說實話的既然00:27:382 (1,2) - 用了比較大間距的jump 那為什麼00:27:982 (3,4) - 卻用小間距呢? 基本上節奏一樣強度也一樣因此我建議把00:27:982 (3) - stack在(2)的結尾上.
01:55:732 (2) - add reverse? 01:56:032 - it's a kinda empty. used reverse to make to rhythm like "xx xxxx ((recommend: xx oxxO type. "x" is hihat (whistle)
01:59:782 (1,2,3,4,1) - 實在不知道怎麼說節奏方面的問題真的很建議用x xxx x xxx x x x 或是 x xxx x xxxxx x x這樣應該是音調問題聽起來也比較順耳
02:03:382 - 到02:05:782 - 是這小段的3,4小節通常下節奏會讓第三節做轉折第四段做過門而過門會比轉折的節奏來的複雜些 (也可以說第四段才是整段的高潮) 所以你在第三段做出這麼複雜的節奏讓我聽/打起來有點confuse... ((same as 00:56:182 (1,2,3,4) -
02:26:632 (2) - add new combo to make 02:26:182 (1,2) - spacing more readable.
02:38:482 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同前段節奏
~~03:02:332 (1,2,3,4) - 聽起來不是左右跳嗎 D: ((大誤~~

Lunatic

Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)

tags problem.

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

00:37:582 (1) - & 00:38:782 (1) - unsuitable finish imo. 理由同Hard...
01:44:782 (1) - ^
01:51:382 - used "Audioset" to Normal ((correspond 01:52:582 - ,01:53:782 -

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

00:02:782 (5,6) - same as Hard said. ((used x xxx x type it's better then x xx x type. obviously,00:02:632 - have a click point (hit point).
00:16:432 (4) - (optional) move to x:400, y:288? make a smooth flow (Clockwise)
((btw: 00:16:432 (4,1) - this note it's cover the slidertick (turning point). you must avoid any pattern like this.後頭的原因盡量避免因為這真的容易讓人confust
00:19:732 (4) - same as Hard said. (( remove this object and make 00:19:432 (3) - reverse.
00:23:782 (1) - slidertick covered.
00:31:582 (5) - add new combo to make this pattern more readable.
00:34:432 (4,1) - ._. slidertick covered...

說實話 Hard和Insane的質量夠了應該說不錯但是Normal和Easy真的還需要多加強 ~加油吧 (ノ・ω・)ノ

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Skystar 2012-11-30T10:21:29+00:00

膜姐

sherrie__fay wrote:
mod req via ~~QQ group PM~~ ~~in-game PM~~ ~~baka scorpiour's modding queue~~
……总之就是过来mod了>A<

[Lunatic]
00:06:982 (3) - 尾部上移一格和00:06:832 (2) - 分开沒位置了
00:10:882 (2) - NC 我覺得不需要
00:17:482 (5) - 建议微移到x:124 y:132 由於被吐了很多次我將整個pattern改了下
00:31:582 (5) - 建议NC 要不这里一堆圈圈不好读图 k
01:47:782 (1) - 这个静音没问题吗>_> 還是膜姐細心>_> 全note自設音效總會有點失誤的
02:15:382 (1) - 上移一格(grid level 4 這個已經是正中心了
02:34:282 (3) - 和02:32:582 (1) - 没有对齐對齊了啊? >A<
其他没有啥问题

(๑• •๑)感觉没有前一张做得好一些silder拉得不是很严谨有以grid level 4为单位的微小偏差。
静音note不让用。
不过整体来看还是不错的
加油(*˘︶˘*).｡.:*♡

Nold

Nold wrote:
From CLANNAD Modding Queue(Flask requested)

Black = They're only suggestions.
Blue = You have better to change them.
Red = They're unrankable issue.You should change them.

[General]

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Easy] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
- [Hard] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
- [Lunatic] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask
- [Normal] : c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
fixed

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
Easy,Normal :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:982, ends on 00:58:282
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:56:182, ends on 02:05:632
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:36:982, ends on 02:43:882

Hard,Lunatic :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:48:982, ends on 00:57:982
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:56:182, ends on 02:05:182
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:36:982, ends on 02:43:582

Not necessary

[Lunatic]

00:23:782 (1) -
SPOILER
This slider is too hidden in default skin.The other word to say,unseenable.Abosultely annoying while playing.Highly recommend you to repair it. 咁你話點改... 完全冇解/_\

00:26:482 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get why you repeating this pattern(1~2)=(3~4),the feelling are different however you use the same pattern.It ruins the map itself,bring bore to players.Rather than keeping this,I suggest you to change it like this.
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Or anything you think it's better than the crruent pattern,it sucks. Not that anyone must follow the vocal. I'd rather like to follow the drum. And didn't you see I always followed the drum through all non-kiai part?

00:59:782 (1) - http://puu.sh/1ryu0 (NAZI) It blankets bad.Use this code. yay
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01:01:432 (3) - Same as above. same
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01:01:432 (3,4) - I read it as 1/4 spacing since you used to use it as 1/4 spacing.But now it's 1/2,put it away.Like this: 雖不明還是改了:O

01:20:182 (1) - The finish doesn't fit IMO. fixed

01:24:982 (1) - Same as above same

01:50:782 (3) - Repeative slider pizzes players off.1/2 slider in 200 BPM with this kind of slider speed casue players hard to determine how many reverses does it have.It's not tricky not funny but troll.Looks like you surpass your aesthetic pattern and put laziness in it.Del the last reverse and put a note anywhere is better than what you use to do here. 換

02:31:582 (1,2) - The spacing here is just misleading players.Suddenly 0.92 spacing when you use to use 2.0 or above.See 02:33:982 (1,2,3,4,1) 改不過沒太大區別

I am not forcing you to follow my suggestions but I highly advice you to think twice before resisting.A confuseion in my own opinion,keep spacing and patterns neat and you gain a senior talent.

Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:
Hello~~ Sorry for the long delay..

General:

-- I hope you to start mapping from 00:00:982 (1) (except Easy) because I believe the song needs a bit time for an intro, and also I dont think the part above is a nice place for a mapping You can heard the drum at here(00:00:382 - 00:00:832), right?
-- I also suggest you to maintain the kiai sections exactly the same for all diffs. Not necessary

Lunatic:

01:40:582 (1) - Starting this at 01:40:432 will be better Nope, I followed the drum.
02:34:282 (3) - Imo, placing somewhere like (340,208) is better Good suggestion.

To give my opinions about the map, Some interesting sliders you've used was impressive.
Though Lunatic's note were quite confusing to me, I think the mapset is surely nice, and almost rankable~~

Good luck with the map and get my star~

Only replied for Lunatic... Because I'm too busy now. TAT sorry

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-11-30T10:35:52+00:00

@nold 兩個都是故意的所以就不fix -A-
@Soyync 01:01:432 (2) - I make the slider fit with vocals o.o
@sp3 01:50:482 (4) - 感覺上還是我的好看-w-

Others all changed !!!

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Skystar 2012-11-30T10:46:57+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
※ 注意
紅色是unrankable的一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

Hard

Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
unnecessary green line:
00:46:582 -
fixed

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
00:32:032 (2) - recommend used clap fixed

00:34:432 (2) - ^ ^

00:37:582 (1) - remove finsh. It's very odd to used finish here. looks 00:36:982 - to 00:39:382 - is a sentence. and finish just like a period. ^

00:39:082 (3,4) - add clap? ^
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
00:02:482 (3,4) - used x xxx x type it's better then x xx x type. obviously,00:02:632 - have a click point (hit point). changed

00:19:432 (2,3,4,5,1) - in this project (4,5,1) should be stressed. so remove 00:19:732 (3) - and used reverse at 00:19:432 (2) -? 不愧是薯片

00:27:382 (1,2,3,4) - 說實話的既然00:27:382 (1,2) - 用了比較大間距的jump 那為什麼00:27:982 (3,4) - 卻用小間距呢? 基本上節奏一樣強度也一樣因此我建議把00:27:982 (3) - stack在(2)的結尾上. 感覺現在這樣可以那2個滑條其實不算大間距

01:55:732 (2) - add reverse? 01:56:032 - it's a kinda empty. used reverse to make to rhythm like "xx xxxx ((recommend: xx oxxO type. "x" is hihat (whistle) <_> 不想加...

01:59:782 (1,2,3,4,1) - 實在不知道怎麼說節奏方面的問題真的很建議用x xxx x xxx x x x 或是 x xxx x xxxxx x x這樣應該是音調問題聽起來也比較順耳 you're right

02:03:382 - 到02:05:782 - 是這小段的3,4小節通常下節奏會讓第三節做轉折第四段做過門而過門會比轉折的節奏來的複雜些 (也可以說第四段才是整段的高潮) 所以你在第三段做出這麼複雜的節奏讓我聽/打起來有點confuse... ((same as 00:56:182 (1,2,3,4) - <_> 跟Lunatic的...

02:26:632 (2) - add new combo to make 02:26:182 (1,2) - spacing more readable. added

02:38:482 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同前段節奏感覺這裡聽起來又順耳了...

~~03:02:332 (1,2,3,4) - 聽起來不是左右跳嗎 D: ((大誤~~ <_>這個梗我也不太滿意於是改掉啦~
~~Hard明天再改~~ Done

Lunatic

Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
tags problem.
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
00:37:582 (1) - & 00:38:782 (1) - unsuitable finish imo. 理由同Hard... 好改

01:44:782 (1) - ^ same

01:51:382 - used "Audioset" to Normal ((correspond 01:52:582 - ,01:53:782 - 說實話沒看懂...現在這樣我覺得可以了
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
00:02:782 (5,6) - same as Hard said. ((used x xxx x type it's better then x xx x type. obviously,00:02:632 - have a click point (hit point). 好 0.0

00:16:432 (4) - (optional) move to x:400, y:288? make a smooth flow (Clockwise)
((btw: 00:16:432 (4,1) - this note it's cover the slidertick (turning point). you must avoid any pattern like this.後頭的原因盡量避免因為這真的容易讓人confust ._. 這些非改不可嗎? 如果能不改的話我真的不想改...

00:19:732 (4) - same as Hard said. (( remove this object and make 00:19:432 (3) - reverse. 不愧是薯片一下就切重點

00:23:782 (1) - slidertick covered.

00:31:582 (5) - add new combo to make this pattern more readable. 膜姐已經說了>_>

00:34:432 (4,1) - ._. slidertick covered...

說實話 Hard和Insane的質量夠了應該說不錯但是Normal和Easy真的還需要多加強 ~加油吧 (ノ・ω・)ノ

x847606653

524 posts

Joined January 2011

x847606653 2012-12-12T05:41:28+00:00

fix almost,sorry for late.

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osu file format v10

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Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

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Title:Sei Natsu
TitleUnicode:Sei Natsu
Artist:Ranko
ArtistUnicode:Ranko
Creator:Amamiya Yuko
Version:Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:c82 ZUN x847606653 Flask Buta-Otome Bowling
BeatmapID:176712
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296,336,181582,5,8,0:0:0
352,320,181882,1,0,0:0:0
400,280,182182,1,2,0:0:0
432,232,182482,1,0,0:0:0
440,176,182782,1,8,0:0:0
392,64,183382,5,4,0:0:0

wonders

610 posts

Joined December 2011

wonders 2012-12-12T21:18:39+00:00

我咋觉得应该用ar8呢,这样就成为史上最难读的图了

lunatic难度名不太合适吧，没见过这样难的lunatic,改成Extra吧

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2012-12-14T11:56:46+00:00

hi

[general]

As said reasons and chats happened in the past, I think my attidude toward the AR10 diff is pretty clear. I personally, technically don't see problem using AR10 whereas it might be considered an unnecessary feature that used only for popularity by other staff members. So, go gather opinions.

http://puu.sh/1ALfY 1024x768 BG

kiai有必要不一样吗

[Lunatic]

AR

00:05:932 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 求解这是什么形状
00:16:132 (3) - move to x193y209

262,282,15082,2,0,B|358:282,2,96,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
262,282,15682,5,8,0:0:0
342,250,15832,2,0,B|358:302|326:342,1,96,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
191,227,16132,2,0,B|228:187|278:194,1,96,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
178,310,16432,1,2,0:0:0
250,370,16582,6,0,B|196:357|178:310|178:310|130:306|86:338,1,192,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
191,227,17032,1,2,0:0:0
178,311,17182,1,2,0:0:0
97,236,17332,1,2,0:0:0
119,145,17482,1,8,0:0:0
56,80,17632,1,2,0:0:0
33,163,17782,6,0,B|77:174|117:142|117:142|173:154|205:190,1,192,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

给你小弄了下排版如果你不嫌弃主要是那个三角形以及00:16:132 (3) -
00:18:982 (1) - 吐槽一下blanket
00:28:282 (7) - ^
01:35:032 (2,3) -^
00:55:432 (2) - ^
00:42:082 (2) - ^
00:57:382 (1) - ^
00:28:882 (4) - ^多的不说了请自查
00:21:382 (1,2,3,4,5) - 吐槽这个弧线打起来不是那么顺畅
00:36:982 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个四方跳作为你ar10的理论依据我觉得其实出现在这里没什么实际意义不过既然加了那就放着吧
00:42:982 (1,2,3,4) - 不太好看这四个随意放置的slider除了flow外剩下的作用都是扣分项建议想想什么方式好看又好玩
00:50:782 (4,2) - 这种合围围的不好很明显看出你是手动拉的这种合围的另一边弧线都应该用翻转做的不说对称性弧线到circle的间距也不一样
01:35:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这地方..做这种扁平跳虽然无可厚非但你不觉得按照音高做饱满点更好么
01:39:382 (1) - 虽说你这种逐渐拉开幕帘式的呈现slider有些新意但明显人在打的时候不会注意到一抹绿色所以基本建议换
01:50:932 (4,5) - 这俩为啥不按照前面的做拉大间距了

简单说说blanket 做好blanket需要3点
一点是每个元件本身不能难看
一点是blanket要符合等距原则既以你要包围的circle为圆心到弧线距离不能歪歪扭扭当然不排除特殊情况
一点是在一个人们瞬时记忆能保留下印象的时间段内不要出现明显的间距变化(我指的是blanket的圆心到弧线距离) 同样是特殊情况除外
槽点比如我下面给出的这些例子你可以看看哪些是什么问题这三点做错一点就会毁了你的整张图所以说请仔细查看我觉得说明道理比帮你改有用得多
00:39:382 (1,2,3) -
00:33:382 (1,2,3,4) -
00:43:582 (3,1) -
01:26:032 (4,1,2) -
00:51:232 (6,2,5) -

[Hard]

hard加sv changes感觉其实意思不大

00:05:782 (1,2,3) - 请用旋转功能拒绝手摆从我做起没有手摆就没有mod
00:16:582 (1) - blanket 以后都不说了其他难度自己看
00:16:582 (1) - 友情提示怕你看不出来这个也有问题
00:25:432 (2,3,4,5,1) - 哦顺便你用circle做blanket和slider同理友情提示怕你无视
00:27:682 (2,3,5) - 为啥不能让这三个三点一线
00:30:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉不用nc
00:33:382 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^

[Normal]

00:32:482 (1) - 间距
00:18:982 (3) - 吐槽一下形状
00:33:382 (3) - 吐槽一下形状

rhythm

00:10:882 (1) - 现在就谈谈这里开始以后

00:11:782 (2,3) - 这个节奏有点特别但可以接受我以为你要保持这种节奏型下去
00:14:782 (2) - 但紧接着这里又没有刚才那种节奏型了这还不算
00:15:682 (1,2,3,4) - 这里放四个空拍的意义何在这里首先和你之前的节奏不一致然后这里又有vocal 那你下这个1/1的四个就意义未知
00:21:082 (2,3) - 好的刚才最开始是隔了2/1 现在变成了1/1 变成红线起了

只是简单举个例子为了说明一下系统性的问题
人这种生物无论什么都是对称的你不会看见他左右不对称你也不会看见他从手指直接连着一个大腿
这就是同理作图要注意的事
你不能让人觉得我这里是手指下一步就变大腿而是要有身体做衔接该是手指的地方就一直是手指再按照歌曲的变化过渡到手臂再到身体再到大腿是不是很H

但是并不是说不能有变化但这种变化就像人身上的首饰手指上可以带戒指胳膊上有手镯这都是做亮点的地方比如你在lunatic里的四方跳就有点这种意思

具体点说就是要树立小节这个理念要树立歌曲AB段这个理念这样你做起来歌就不是一团乱而是一条公路周围的植被从草丛变成森林就像从前奏到副歌

我怀疑我这是2012 best mod233

[Easy]

00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - 你不觉得比起之前这里5个circle连点难度浮动太大？

低难度排版不想看

但关于consistency这玩意你要知道他不只是节奏上的排版上的
他同时也是音量上的密度上的难度上的甚至所有你能想象到的度上的
就像一首歌经过混音师处理绝对不会有爆音有过小歌曲表面上看是艺术品自由发挥其实背后是制作人员精密按照规律调教出来的结果只不过他机械化的那一面不会呈现在你眼前罢了所以图也一样
做好的排版会花费你更多时间和耐心但他传达的不仅仅是好看这种事情

所有上述这些描述不包括跳针式的对称map

完毕

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,466 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-12-15T09:03:53+00:00

是不是很H
http://puu.sh/1B6GI

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2012-12-28T13:40:34+00:00

irc modded, but no KD. changelog:

NC in normal
some parts in hard

we've been working on this map for long. opinions(from XATs and mappers) were gathered and consensus finally reached.

bubbled

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Skystar 2012-12-28T13:42:37+00:00

LKs wrote:
irc modded, but no KD. changelog:

NC in normal
some parts in hard

we've been working on this map for long. opinions(from XATs and mappers) were gathered and consensus finally reached.

bubbled

服

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2012-12-28T15:13:55+00:00

yay:D

Heatherfield

927 posts

Joined March 2010

Heatherfield 2012-12-31T03:23:18+00:00

什么都bubble了, 那就不mod了(