Hello~~ Sorry for the long delay..
General:
-- I hope you to start mapping from 00:00:982 (1) (except Easy) because I believe the song needs a bit time for an intro, and also I dont think the part above is a nice place for a mapping
-- I also suggest you to maintain the kiai sections exactly the same for all diffs.
Easy:
-- I don't think Audio lead in is necessary in Easy
00:20:182 (3) - 1 Grid left or something to make the distance more closer to 1.00x
00:25:582 (1) - If you can do, avoiding overlap with the first and the final may look better. Also add a Finish at the end
00:32:182 (2,2) - Maybe you've had some intention to emphasize these notes, but according from the song, just a single whistle will sound better
00:39:982 (2) - You forgot NC
00:41:782 (3) - Similar opinion from above, Delete Finish. (and you've forgot Whistle here :3) Infact, 00:44:182 (2) doesn't need a change...
01:19:582 (1,2) - I prefer you using combo as (2,1) Because First combo is for lyrics, second goes with the melody
01:25:582 (1,2) - In here, (3,1)
01:30:382 (1,2) - ^
01:39:382 (3,3) - Delete Finish :3
02:10:282 (4) - Hope you can put some effort to make the distance closer to 1.00x (by turning off the grid)
02:36:982 (1,2) - (2,1) reasons mentioned above~
02:39:382 (6) - 1 Grid Right
02:54:682 (2) - (156,50) would be an ideal spot
02:59:482 (2) - Maybe (83,120)?
Normal:
00:14:182 (6) - NC since this is a part where melody only comes out
00:23:782 (6) - NC
00:28:582 (4) - NC
00:38:182 (6) - NC
00:48:082 (4) - NC
01:01:432 (2) - Rather than this rythm, Hope you will start at 01:01:582. The current one is quite confusing, and doesnt follow the song
01:20:782 (1,2) - If you have understand about the point of comboes what I was wanting to say, hope you know yourself what to change..
01:45:082 (6) - (186,227) will be nice, Since this is quite a symmetric pattern
01:47:632 (3) - Hope you follow the lyrics. Just dragging 1/2 will not be a bad choice
01:50:032 (3) - ^
Hard:
00:33:382 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Stacking will be better, looks quite weird
00:48:082 (1,2,3) - Nice speed down, but I think placing somewhere else instead stacking at (5) will be better to play
00:52:957 (2,3) - Making the rythm something like 00:56:557 (2,3,4,5) maybe better imo
00:58:282 (2) - Ctrl+G may make more playable? Just my opinion..
00:59:332 (3) - Strongly suggest a Ctrl+G here, I dont see big reasons for a jump here
01:28:282 (3) - Ctrl+G,To follow the patterns of (1,2). Also changing makes more playable
01:38:332 (2) - Template Whistle? maybe a mistake of Timeline?
01:41:182 (5) - I think increasing reverse 1 more is better
02:08:482 (2) - 1 Gird up and left will be better position
02:13:432 (1,1) - Deleting NC will look nicer
02:15:082 (3) - Increase reverse
Lunatic:
01:40:582 (1) - Starting this at 01:40:432 will be better
02:34:282 (3) - Imo, placing somewhere like (340,208) is better
To give my opinions about the map, Some interesting sliders you've used was impressive.
Though Lunatic's note were quite confusing to me, I think the mapset is surely nice, and almost rankable~~
Good luck with the map and get my star~
General:
-- I hope you to start mapping from 00:00:982 (1) (except Easy) because I believe the song needs a bit time for an intro, and also I dont think the part above is a nice place for a mapping
-- I also suggest you to maintain the kiai sections exactly the same for all diffs.
Easy:
-- I don't think Audio lead in is necessary in Easy
00:20:182 (3) - 1 Grid left or something to make the distance more closer to 1.00x
00:25:582 (1) - If you can do, avoiding overlap with the first and the final may look better. Also add a Finish at the end
00:32:182 (2,2) - Maybe you've had some intention to emphasize these notes, but according from the song, just a single whistle will sound better
00:39:982 (2) - You forgot NC
00:41:782 (3) - Similar opinion from above, Delete Finish. (and you've forgot Whistle here :3) Infact, 00:44:182 (2) doesn't need a change...
01:19:582 (1,2) - I prefer you using combo as (2,1) Because First combo is for lyrics, second goes with the melody
01:25:582 (1,2) - In here, (3,1)
01:30:382 (1,2) - ^
01:39:382 (3,3) - Delete Finish :3
02:10:282 (4) - Hope you can put some effort to make the distance closer to 1.00x (by turning off the grid)
02:36:982 (1,2) - (2,1) reasons mentioned above~
02:39:382 (6) - 1 Grid Right
02:54:682 (2) - (156,50) would be an ideal spot
02:59:482 (2) - Maybe (83,120)?
Normal:
00:14:182 (6) - NC since this is a part where melody only comes out
00:23:782 (6) - NC
00:28:582 (4) - NC
00:38:182 (6) - NC
00:48:082 (4) - NC
01:01:432 (2) - Rather than this rythm, Hope you will start at 01:01:582. The current one is quite confusing, and doesnt follow the song
01:20:782 (1,2) - If you have understand about the point of comboes what I was wanting to say, hope you know yourself what to change..
01:45:082 (6) - (186,227) will be nice, Since this is quite a symmetric pattern
01:47:632 (3) - Hope you follow the lyrics. Just dragging 1/2 will not be a bad choice
01:50:032 (3) - ^
Hard:
00:33:382 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Stacking will be better, looks quite weird
00:48:082 (1,2,3) - Nice speed down, but I think placing somewhere else instead stacking at (5) will be better to play
00:52:957 (2,3) - Making the rythm something like 00:56:557 (2,3,4,5) maybe better imo
00:58:282 (2) - Ctrl+G may make more playable? Just my opinion..
00:59:332 (3) - Strongly suggest a Ctrl+G here, I dont see big reasons for a jump here
01:28:282 (3) - Ctrl+G,To follow the patterns of (1,2). Also changing makes more playable
01:38:332 (2) - Template Whistle? maybe a mistake of Timeline?
01:41:182 (5) - I think increasing reverse 1 more is better
02:08:482 (2) - 1 Gird up and left will be better position
02:13:432 (1,1) - Deleting NC will look nicer
02:15:082 (3) - Increase reverse
Lunatic:
01:40:582 (1) - Starting this at 01:40:432 will be better
02:34:282 (3) - Imo, placing somewhere like (340,208) is better
To give my opinions about the map, Some interesting sliders you've used was impressive.
Though Lunatic's note were quite confusing to me, I think the mapset is surely nice, and almost rankable~~
Good luck with the map and get my star~