※ 注意
紅色是unrankable的 一定要改藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議
general
Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)
- inconsistent tags in "Lunatic" diff
Easy
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:25:582 (1) - [nazi] I guess you want to make symmetrical pattern... so~ :
217,192,25582,6,0,B|256:146|256:146|294:192,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
- 00:26:782 (2) - (optional) make a slider curve to blanket 00:25:582 (1) - slider tail? it's too stiff pattern now.
- 00:28:582 (1,2,3,4,5) - still a stiff pattern ((recommend to make it fun like this:
- 00:29:782 (5,1) - uhm... 00:29:782 (5) - is beginning for a paragraph so exchange the new combo looks better.
- 00:32:182 (2,1) - ^
- 00:34:582 (2,1) - ^
- 00:41:782 (3,1) - same...
- 00:44:182 (2) - add newcombo and remove at 00:45:382 (1) - same reason as 00:29:782 (5,1) - .
- 00:56:182 (1) - move to x:424,y:304 to make a pretty flow (slider 1's end & slider 2)
- 01:19:582 (1) - unnecessary new combo. and... wrong click time imo. because 01:20:182 - it's more suitable to make a click/hit time. but you used reverse to skip it.
Possible solutions: - 01:32:782 (1) - slider end should snap to 01:33:232 - . It's very odd hitsound for playing when you used wrong rhythm (delay 1/2 rhythm).
- 01:36:982 (5,1) - same as 00:29:782 (5,1) - (exchange the new combo)
- 01:39:382 (3,1) - ^
- 01:41:782 (3,1) - ^
- 01:56:182 (1) - 4th node to make a bad curve for this shape, please fix it. like this:
- 02:03:382 (1) - Err... try to copy 02:00:982 (1) - and rotate 180∘to replace this shape. it's a kinda awkward shape.
- 02:35:782 (1) - remove this new combo? looks 02:30:982 (1,1) - it's a sentence, so... new combo it's unnecessary.
- 02:50:782 (2) - move to x286,y163 to make it blanket?
- 02:51:382 (1,1) - avoid used large spacing to center (especially easiest diff.). It's hard to play for newbie even advanced player.
- 02:56:182 (1,1) - ^
Normal
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:15:682 (1,2,3,4) - Umm... I guess you want to make a square, but looks it's not a square now. (because it need re-spacing to other pattern... so I should give a code xD )
512,72,16882,1,8,0:0:0
356,44,17482,1,8,0:0:0
276,52,17782,6,0,B|224:68|172:104,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,44,18682,1,8,0:0:0
436,60,18982,2,0,B|492:112|492:188|452:232|452:232|452:332|420:368|336:384,1,400,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,344,20482,6,0,B|220:312|164:340,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,372,21082,2,0,B|81:328|113:276,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0 - 00:30:982 (2) - (optional) do you want a symmetrical shape? if yes (example):
- 00:36:982 (4) - new combo for the beginning.
- 00:42:982 (3) - let the last node to x212,y323 to make a blanket
- 00:51:382 (5) - recommend to add new combo.
- 01:50:482 (4) - make the last node to x:528,y:156 to make a blanket
- 02:08:182 (5) - recommend add new combo.
- 02:41:782 (5) - ^
- 02:46:582 (5) - ^
Hard
Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
- unnecessary green line:
00:46:582 -
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
- 00:32:032 (2) - recommend used clap
- 00:34:432 (2) - ^
- 00:37:582 (1) - remove finsh. It's very odd to used finish here. looks 00:36:982 - to 00:39:382 - is a sentence. and finish just like a period.
- 00:39:082 (3,4) - add clap?
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:02:482 (3,4) - used x xxx x type it's better then x xx x type. obviously,00:02:632 - have a click point (hit point).
- 00:19:432 (2,3,4,5,1) - in this project (4,5,1) should be stressed. so remove 00:19:732 (3) - and used reverse at 00:19:432 (2) -?
- 00:27:382 (1,2,3,4) - 說實話的既然00:27:382 (1,2) - 用了比較大間距的jump 那為什麼00:27:982 (3,4) - 卻用小間距呢? 基本上節奏一樣強度也一樣 因此我建議把00:27:982 (3) - stack在(2)的結尾上.
- 01:55:732 (2) - add reverse? 01:56:032 - it's a kinda empty. used reverse to make to rhythm like "xx xxxx ((recommend: xx oxxO type. "x" is hihat (whistle)
- 01:59:782 (1,2,3,4,1) - 實在不知道怎麼說 節奏方面的問題 真的很建議用x xxx x xxx x x x 或是 x xxx x xxxxx x x這樣 應該是音調問題 聽起來也比較順耳
- 02:03:382 - 到02:05:782 - 是這小段的3,4小節 通常下節奏會讓第三節做轉折 第四段做過門 而過門會比轉折的節奏來的複雜些 (也可以說第四段才是整段的高潮) 所以你在第三段做出這麼複雜的節奏讓我聽/打起來有點confuse... ((same as 00:56:182 (1,2,3,4) -
- 02:26:632 (2) - add new combo to make 02:26:182 (1,2) - spacing more readable.
- 02:38:482 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 同前段節奏
03:02:332 (1,2,3,4) - 聽起來不是左右跳嗎 D: ((大誤
Lunatic
Settings
(For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
- tags problem.
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
- 00:37:582 (1) - & 00:38:782 (1) - unsuitable finish imo. 理由同Hard...
- 01:44:782 (1) - ^
- 01:51:382 - used "Audioset" to Normal ((correspond 01:52:582 - ,01:53:782 -
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:02:782 (5,6) - same as Hard said. ((used x xxx x type it's better then x xx x type. obviously,00:02:632 - have a click point (hit point).
- 00:16:432 (4) - (optional) move to x:400, y:288? make a smooth flow (Clockwise)
((btw: 00:16:432 (4,1) - this note it's cover the slidertick (turning point). you must avoid any pattern like this.後頭的原因盡量避免 因為這真的容易讓人confust - 00:19:732 (4) - same as Hard said. (( remove this object and make 00:19:432 (3) - reverse.
- 00:23:782 (1) - slidertick covered.
- 00:31:582 (5) - add new combo to make this pattern more readable.
- 00:34:432 (4,1) - ._. slidertick covered...
說實話 Hard和Insane的質量夠了 應該說不錯 但是Normal和Easy真的還需要多加強 ~加油吧 (ノ・ω・)ノ