1. Easy (2.61 stars, 192 notes)
2. Hinsvar's Hard (5 stars, 462 notes)
3. Muzukashii (4.61 stars, 828 notes)
4. n y a's Normal (3.94 stars, 250 notes)
5. Taiko Collab (4.61 stars, 280 notes)
6. Winber1's Insane (5 stars, 674 notes)

SPOILER

lololol XD

Combo1 : 184,61,113
Combo2 : 96,48,32
Combo3 : 4,75,147
Combo4 : 67,30,98

lovhin456 wrote:

general;
- you need a 192 or lower kbps mp3, yours is 256 kbps which is unrankable

• Easy : 0.5 (instead of SliderMultiplier:0.500000005960464)
  Normal : 1.0 (instead of SliderMultiplier:1.00000000596046)
  Hard : 1.5 (instead of SliderMultiplier:1.50000000596046)

• 00:20:750 (1,2) - (2)'s rhythm could be deceptive, even for veteran players. I suggest to delete (2), add note on 00:22:000, and add a 1/1 slider on 00:22:312
  00:30:125 (2) - Stack this above (3) instead of below (2)?
  00:47:937 (1) - The reverse arrow is covered by comboburst. I suggest to make this slider facing right instead
  00:50:437 (1) - It's weird to have a 2x repeating 1/1 slider (which is 3/1 in total) after a series of 2/1 slider. I suggest to remove a repeat, and add note on 00:51:687, preferably stacked above (3)
  01:10:750 (1) - The 2nd slidertick is not in the center. This could be easily fixed by moving this 1 grid up though
  01:24:500 (1) - The vocals start 1/2 after this slider...
  01:38:250 (2,1) - ...A jump? I know it's easy to catch, but still, it could shock beginners
  02:32:000 (1,1) - Just use one new combo here. No need to spam new combos here, because it will mess up the HP drain
  02:48:562 (2) - I can hear vocals here as well. Add note here?

• 00:02:937 (2) - Add note with clap here perhaps, to fill the emptiness?
  00:18:093 (1,2) - I think it's better to alter (1) into a repeating 1/2 slider and add a circle 1/1 after it, fits the vocal more this way
  00:22:156 (3) - Remove the repeat? (if you do so, you could try a 1/2 repeating slider on 00:23:093 though)
  00:27:156 (4,5,6) - Again, this will confuse some players. I suggest to make something like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:33:718 (1,2) - Space them further apart. They're separated by 3/2, but the spacing looks like they're 1/1.
  00:47:000 (4) - Stack to (2)'s end?
  01:08:094 (1,2) - Same suggestion as 00:18:093
  01:37:001 (4) - Stack to (2)'s end?
  02:09:500 (3) - The reverse arrow is covered by comboburst. A slider wave here could help perhaps?
  02:36:687 (1,2) - These two looks like they're spaced 1/1 apart, although they're actually 1/2. Space them closer?
  02:40:281 (1,2,1,1) - Why new combo spam here? Remove NC on 02:40:281 (1) 02:41:062 (1), and 02:41:687 (1) - and also add New Combo on 02:42:312 (2)
  03:12:000 (3) - Hitsound finish on slider's end, instead of clap (just like what you did on Easy diff) ?

• 00:15:593 (1,2,3) - Alter these three into a repeating slider? This stack will look weird in play mode
  00:26:843 (5) - Move it 3 grids down, so (6) could be flipped perfectly following the distance snap?
  00:48:250 (5,6) - This spacing is so hard to guess. Move (6) further apart, OR stack it to (5) and add a New Combo.
  00:52:312 (1,1,1) - Again, don't spam new combos here (this is a bad place to spam new combos : the jump here is quite unpredictable, and it will be VERY hard to catch this on HardRock mod because there's no followpoint guiding)
  01:05:593 (1,2,3) - Alter into repeating slider?
  01:36:687 (6,7,8,9) - So hard to read >_<
  01:37:986 - New combo here. It's a beginning of a new vocal part
  01:42:312 (1,1,1,1) - Again with the new combo spam problem, but at least this one is much better
  01:59:187 (3) - Why suddenly 3 repeats? Not intuitive imo
  02:22:625 (1,2) - If you're going to make a slider kickstream, curve it a bit and add a bit angular twist:
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:32:625 (1,1) - Remove the new combo on these two. The one on 02:33:250 (1) is enough

1. Kiai time is too much and some just spam and will distract players. I think kiai time will be better in here:
   - 00:43:250 - 00:53:250
   - 01:33:250 - 01:43:250
   - 02:23:250 - 02:43:250
2. The break isn't allowed more than 20 second (I saw in rules)

1. Some note isn't consistent spacing, please use distance snap because usually not jump in easy

1. Same with easy, some notes has error spacing

General
Kiai time is too much and some just spam and will distract players. I think kiai time will be better in here:
- 00:43:250 - 00:53:250
- 01:33:250 - 01:43:250
- 02:23:250 - 02:43:250 [. . . i love how i do that.. so no change ]
The break isn't allowed more than 20 second (I saw in rules) [done]

Easy
Some note isn't consistent spacing, please use distance snap because usually not jump in easy [i already use it]
00:22:156 (2) this is too far from previous object, please fix the spacing [um.. changed]
00:30:125 (2) I think stack like this is too hard for beginner, I suggest to unstack this
00:34:812 (1) this note is too close from previous object, you can check with distance snap
01:15:125 (2) same reason as 00:30:125 [done]
01:38:875 (1) why jump in here? this jump will make confused beginner players [done]
02:38:250 (2) error spacing
02:43:250 - I think notes after this isn't used. because, after this, is very "little" notes and break is too long orz. and I think more better if end in here.. but, whatever you want [i dont get it ><]
this easy is not like easy orz. just my opinion [o right.. thats what i think.. because i made this in 2 hours only.. also, this beatmap is my friend's request.. so i made as fast as i can LOL ]

Normal
Same with easy, some notes has error spacing
00:33:718 (1,2,3) error spacing [done]
00:42:000 (2) ^
01:09:656 (4,5,1) I think this pattern will make confused player orz. can put them in better place, please? [i'll change this if i see the other modder critic about this too]
02:09:500 (3) ok, error spacing again [deliberate]
00:40:437 (2) stack (1) with this, more better I think [done]
02:41:062 (1,1) why put NC in here? this NC just spam. delete them ok? [ok]
02:42:312 (5) add spacing in this note more easy for read more than stack like this [done]
02:43:250 - same with easy [huh?]

Hard
00:19:968 (8) add NC in this note, because you add jump from previous notes I think[done]
00:36:687 (3) make that same distance with before note is more tidy [um.. distance snap]
00:47:312 (10) This stack little make confused because colour is same. consider to add NC in here[done]
00:48:562 (6) because this slider break the stream from before notes, add NC in here or add jump so that not like trap in here[done]
01:09:968 (8) same reason with 00:19:968[done]
01:13:250 (8) the vocal is end in (7). so add NC in here, and stack this slider properly [i think the (7) is the start of the vocal.. so i add (7) as NC]
01:24:187 (3) same reason with 00:36:687[nope]
01:26:687 (3) ^[nope]
01:32:937 (3) this jump in this note isn't to read orz. can move to more better place, plz? [there is a follow point, so it can be read]
01:37:937 (10) add NC in here because new vocal [done]
02:37:312 (10) same reason with 00:47:312 [done]
02:38:250 (1) this circle like a trap in here. consider delete this and add 1 repeater on (1) [done]
02:43:250 - same with before diff [?]

Ok, that's all
Good luck

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GiNa wrote:

[General]
-I guess you fixed your timing, please resnap your “green lines,” especially the ones for kiai. However, green lines with hitsound changes, you may not need to resnap all of them, just make sure they all work well. (This doesn't include your guests)[okay]
-I think you need a timing pro[like who?]

[Easy]
00:47:981 (1) – too close to the previous note, maybe move to x:268 y:308[fix]
01:32:044 (1) – too far[nope]
02:02:044 (2) – too close[fix]
02:03:294 (1) – adjust this one too[?]
02:40:481 (1) – ^[^]
Only thing I really want to say is … SV is quite low … [yap.. i know it.. i make this diff when i'm still dont know how to make easy..]

[Normal]
00:13:449 – all the notes on red line somehow sound a little off imo, maybe try to fix some of them [fix]
00:17:511 (5) – too close [done]
00:22:200 (3) – off screen, [fix]
01:35:481 (1) – too close, which causes overlapping [doesn't see any overlapping]
01:37:981 (1) – move to x:444 y:216 [fix]
02:08:293 (1) – super close[fix]
Well … try to keep spacing constant, I would suggest you recheck all of them and rearrange them
02:09:543 (3) – super far from the previous[fix]
02:37:199 (2) – hard to read (quite hidden by 02:36:105 (3)), move to somewhere else[okay]
02:48:919 – remove this short break[okay]

[Hard]
-Yeah, this hard is pretty hard
00:47:981 (1,2,3,4,5) – maybe this is too long for a hard[nope.. its okay]
01:42:356 (1,2,3,4) – scary jumps [yes, they are]
01:57:044 (5) – NC[okay]
01:59:231 (3) – different times of repeats compared to the previous, which tricks player a little, I would suggest you NC here [fix]
02:09:544 (2) – not straight[:o fix]
02:26:731 (6) – NC ?[fix]
02:48:762 – remove this short break [fix]
03:07:044 (5) – same as 01:59:231 (3)

BeatofIke wrote:

I last modded this map 7 months ago. I was a complete noob at modding maps back then XD. I'm much better now.
Anyway, as requested from PM, I will re-mod!

BeatofIke wrote:

Hinsvar's Hard
-> Reduce HP Drain Rate to 5, since your Insane has 6 already. I'm staying with what I have now. HP5 is too low for a Hard diff, IMO.
-> Lots of note pauses on this difficulty! It makes it confusing and sometimes doesn't flow well with the music. ...Can't be helped; the song demands that.

chaotic_iak wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]
Ini harusnya Insane -_- ...Jujur aja, menurut saya ini lebih ke Hard+ sih, tapi saya yakin ini masih belum bisa diklasifikasikan sebagai diff Insane.
Masalah fountain lagi. Dari si Teru kalau soal fountain itu. Mestinya sih nggak masalah...
Hitsound kurang; banyakin. Err... Untuk saya ini udah cukup, tapi soal itu nanti deh...
00:01:262 (1,1,1) - Slider path harus keliatan ...Tapi justru pattern seperti ini yang menurut saya bisa "menggambarkan" lagunya. Lagipula masih kelihatan kok, walaupun memang sedikit...
00:02:512 (2,1) - Spacing ganti padahal ga di tempat yang cocok Tampaknya ini masalah preferensi... :/
00:24:387 (1) - Repeat-nya mungkin ga keliatan; pas aku main ga keliatan Semua repeating slider di sini kelihatan repeat-nya (:
00:27:356 (2,3) - Spacing ganti pas timing juga ganti (kalo mau di-stack harusnya gap-nya 1/2-beat, barengan sama yang lain); kalo ini Insane, ini cuma saran, tapi ini Hard jadi masalah
00:31:887 (1,2) - ^
00:33:450 (1,2) - ^
00:39:231 (2,3) - Sekarang justru ini yang jadi masalah; sebelumnya gap yang nge-stack semua 1-beat, tapi ini 1/2-beat
Yah intinya kalo nge-stack pastiin gap-nya masih konsisten; kalo kaya gini jadi terlalu susah pake intuisi
...Saya merasa nggak perlu pakai perasaan ketika nge-test diff saya. Semua stack saya lewati dengan lancar (: Nggak ada masalah yang berarti. Serius kok. Saya bukannya menutup diri terhadap pendapat orang, tapi ritme lagu ini sendiri bisa dikatakan "memaksa" saya untuk mengeluarkan style yang agak aneh ini :/

chaotic_iak wrote:

Sang mapper (dalam hal ini kamu) pasti tau apa aja yang udah dimasukin ke map, makanya kadang mapper bisa mikir ini hal gampang padahal buar yang lain hal dewa. Aku (sebagai pemain Hard+ ke Insane) masih sering liat spacing kalo belom familiar sama lagunya (specifically kalo modding soalnya biasanya cuma main satu diff sekali), dan di sini play-nya jadi kacau banget sampe ga bisa pass.

Yah, pendapatku sih spacing-nya bermasalah. Kalo mau coba bikin gapnya konsisten 1/2-beat semua di daerah yang spacing-nya ga konsisten? Kalo spacing konsisten ato ga bikin kaget ga masalah. Di Hard harusnya masih passable main pake intuisi (tanpa ngehafalin).

Yang slider ngestack itu unrankable, apa lagi pemainnya ga punya waktu respon (1/2-beat doang). Kalo mau bisa coba geser masing-masing ke kiri dikit supaya yang di bawahnya keliatan?

chaotic_iak wrote:

Unrankable (apa sih Indo-nya #agh), masalah, saran. Bagus, keren, dsb.

[Easy]
00:20:794 (1,2) - 1.5-beat agak susah diprediksi sama pemain Easy, tapi OD-nya rendah jadi bebas >noo.. aku rasa oke2 aja.. karna sliderticknya kan menunjukkan bahwa itu 1.5 xD
00:33:250 - 00:35:750 - 00:38:250 - 00:40:750 - Kiai fountain ga boleh dipake banyak-banyak, termasuk abuse > okayy.. fix them in all diff xD
00:48:215 - Kalo mau pasang fountain lagi, coba pasangnya di sini daripada di 00:47:981 supaya ga keliatan kiai-nya sempet mati >
01:10:794 (1,2) - 1.5-beat agak susah diprediksi sama pemain Easy, tapi OD-nya rendah jadi bebas aku kopi paste.. so no
01:38:215 - Kalo mau pasang fountain lagi, coba pasangnya di sini daripada di 01:37:981 supaya ga keliatan kiai-nya sempet mati[/color] this too xD
02:25:794 (1,2,3,4) - Sebaiknya ga di-stack buat Easy tapi masih bisa kebaca kok xD
02:28:215 - Hm...tebak. Alesannya udah disebutin di atas koq.
02:33:215 - ^ ^
02:38:215 - ^^[/color]

Oke... Fountain abuse itu unrankable. Yang Hard juga ga konsisten spacing-nya, perlu dibenerin ga apa lahh aku rasa.. kan flow nya sama lagunya cocok xD . Good luck!

chaotic_iak wrote:

[n y a's Normal]
Belom selesai di-map? emang lengthnya segitu aja gapapa kan? >:a
Masalah sama fountain lagi. Liat aja di atas mana aja masalah fountain, sama masalah fountain abuse yang sama di (01:23:294 - 01:25:794 - 01:28:294 - 01:30:794). leave this problem to teru-san o7
00:30:794 (1,1) - Gap terlalu kecil; buat Normal harusnya ada paling nggak...bilang aja 2 beat di lagu ini antara spinner sama objek selanjutnya www repaired
02:21:106 (1,1) - ^

osu file format v9

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 40750
Countdown: 0
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Title:E? Aa, Sou
Artist:Dasoku
Creator:Teru21
Version:n y a's Normal
Source:Choucho-P
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300,120,33294,6,2,B|248:88|184:116|164:164|180:224,1,180,2|2
132,264,34231,2,0,B|184:296|248:268|268:220|252:160,1,180,2|2
336,188,35169,2,2,B|396:176|436:212,1,90,0|2
372,268,35794,6,2,B|424:300|488:272|508:224|492:164,1,180,2|2
416,200,36731,2,0,B|448:148|420:84|372:64|312:80,1,180,2|2
292,140,37669,2,2,B|232:152|192:116,1,90,0|2
148,184,38294,6,2,B|116:236|144:300|192:320|252:304,1,180,2|0
240,228,39231,2,2,B|292:260|356:232|376:184|360:124,1,180,2|0
292,120,40169,2,2,B|280:60|316:20,1,90,0|2
368,84,40794,6,2,B|400:136|372:200|324:220|264:204,1,180,2|0
216,244,41731,2,0,B|184:192|212:128|260:108|320:124,1,180,2|2
368,84,42669,2,0,B|428:72|468:108,1,90,0|2
448,180,43294,6,0,B|480:224|480:224|456:272,1,90,4|8
396,296,43919,2,0,B|328:304|312:236|312:236|272:216,2,135,0|0|8
456,348,45169,1,0
492,276,45481,2,8,B|516:220|516:220|512:168,1,90,8|0
436,164,46106,5,8
400,144,46262,1,8
376,112,46419,1,0
308,64,46731,2,0,B|248:40|188:80,1,90,8|0
140,52,47356,2,0,B|76:28,2,45,8|8|0
164,128,47981,1,8
216,192,48294,6,0,B|284:208|284:208|328:176,1,90,4|8
380,204,48919,1,0
424,136,49231,2,0,B|440:88|440:88|432:40,1,90,8|0
356,24,49856,2,0,B|268:24|268:24|160:56,1,180,8|8
112,96,50794,1,0
64,160,51106,2,0,B|8:160,2,45,8|8|0
112,224,51731,2,0,B|192:256|240:232,1,90,8|0
276,220,52356,2,0,B|276:296,2,45,0|0|8
340,168,52981,5,8
404,120,53294,2,0,B|440:72,1,45,0|8
340,304,62981,6,0,B|292:284|244:284,1,90,8|4
184,240,63606,1,8
128,180,63919,2,0,B|96:140,2,45,0|0|8
208,164,64544,2,0,B|264:84,1,90,0|8
332,124,65169,2,0,B|452:124,1,90,0|8
468,192,65794,5,0
468,192,65950,1,0
468,192,66106,2,0,B|460:260|416:292,1,90,8|0
380,336,66731,1,8
300,312,67044,1,0
256,244,67356,1,8
300,176,67669,2,0,B|368:200|408:188,1,90,0|8
400,112,68294,6,0,B|332:88|292:100,1,90,4|8
300,176,68919,1,0
300,176,69231,2,0,B|248:208|184:180|164:132|180:72,1,180,8|8
124,40,70169,2,0,B|52:40,2,45,0|0|8
104,120,70794,6,0,B|24:204,1,90,0|8
80,256,71419,1,0
144,308,71731,1,8
208,260,72044,2,0,B|260:236|300:264|300:264|344:232|416:272,1,180,0|0
448,108,73294,5,4
448,108,73606,2,0,B|380:204,2,90,8|0|8
376,72,74544,1,0
296,92,74856,1,8
220,64,75169,2,0,B|160:64,2,45,0|0|8
204,144,75794,6,0,B|132:180|120:228,1,90,0|8
196,252,76419,1,0
136,308,76731,1,8
216,324,77044,2,0,B|468:360,1,225,0|0
444,236,78294,5,4
444,236,78606,2,0,B|384:124,1,90,8|0
344,100,79231,2,0,B|344:-8,2,90,8|0|8
280,152,80169,2,0,B|216:152,1,45
148,236,80794,6,0,B|232:236,2,45,0|0|8
76,196,81419,1,0
84,116,81731,2,0,B|124:64|228:80|240:140,1,180,8|8
312,140,82669,1,0
312,140,82981,1,12
360,204,83294,6,2,B|308:236|244:208|224:160|240:100,1,180,2|2
156,144,84231,2,2,B|104:176|40:148|20:100|36:40,1,180,2|2
112,76,85169,2,2,B|140:24|188:24,1,90,0|2
260,24,85794,6,2,B|312:-8|376:20|396:68|380:128,1,180,2|2
316,144,86731,2,2,B|264:112|200:140|180:188|196:248,1,180,2|2
248,276,87669,2,2,B|220:328|172:328,1,90,0|2
176,248,88294,6,2,B|124:280|60:252|40:204|56:144,1,180,2|2
120,132,89231,2,2,B|172:164|236:136|256:88|240:28,1,180,2|2
324,76,90169,2,2,B|352:24|400:24,1,90,0|2
324,76,90794,6,2,B|272:108|208:80|188:32|204:-28,1,180,2|2
128,40,91731,2,2,B|160:92|132:156|84:176|24:160,1,180,2|2
52,244,92669,2,2,B|80:296|128:296,1,90,0|2
188,252,93294,6,0,B|156:208|156:208|180:160,1,90,4|8
232,120,93919,2,0,B|300:112|316:180|316:180|356:200,2,135,0|0|8
160,80,95169,1,0
96,132,95481,2,8,B|72:188|72:188|76:240,1,90,8|0
148,252,96106,5,8
184,272,96262,1,8
208,304,96419,1,0
276,352,96731,2,0,B|336:376|396:336,1,90,8|0
428,300,97356,2,0,B|492:324,2,45,8|8|0
384,232,97981,1,8
312,200,98294,6,0,B|244:184|244:184|200:216,1,90,4|8
148,204,98919,1,0
104,272,99231,2,0,B|88:320|88:320|96:368,1,90,8|0
172,384,99856,2,0,B|260:384|260:384|368:352,1,180,8|8
416,312,100794,1,0
464,248,101106,2,0,B|520:248,2,45,8|8|0
416,184,101731,2,0,B|336:152|288:176,1,90,8|0
252,188,102356,2,0,B|252:112,2,45,0|0|8
188,240,102981,5,8
120,284,103294,1,4
206,156,123294,6,0,B|234:102|303:93|345:124|363:183,1,180,4|0
408,216,124231,1,0
460,280,124544,1,0
380,292,124856,2,0,B|172:356,1,180
136,304,125794,5,4
180,236,126106,2,0,B|224:184|200:128,1,90
128,144,126731,2,0,B|84:92|108:36,1,90,0|4
180,40,127356,6,0,B|264:16|264:16|392:48,1,180
420,84,128294,1,4
352,128,128606,6,0,B|324:224|356:324,2,180,0|0|0
276,96,130169,1,0
200,120,130481,1,0
140,176,130794,6,0,B|120:240|168:288|168:288|168:360,2,180,4|0|0
104,104,132356,2,0,B|104:36|176:36,1,90
228,12,132981,2,0,B|328:12,1,90,0|4
396,36,133606,6,0,B|444:36|444:101,1,90
392,160,134231,1,0
448,216,134544,2,0,B|472:328|368:360,1,180
300,320,135481,1,0
220,300,135794,5,4
188,224,136106,2,0,B|168:136|188:36,2,180
268,212,137669,1,0
348,192,137981,1,0
420,152,138294,5,4
420,152,138606,2,0,B|452:236,1,90
396,296,139231,2,0,B|288:328,1,90
248,268,139856,1,0
244,172,140169,2,0,B|48:172,1,180
256,192,141106,12,4,142669
324,132,143294,6,0,B|356:176|356:176|332:224,1,90,4|8
280,264,143919,2,0,B|212:272|196:204|196:204|156:184,2,135,0|0|8
352,304,145169,1,0
416,252,145481,2,8,B|440:196|440:196|436:144,1,90,8|0
364,132,146106,5,8
328,112,146262,1,8
304,80,146419,1,0
236,32,146731,2,0,B|176:8|116:48,1,90,8|0
84,84,147356,2,0,B|20:60,2,45,8|8|0
128,152,147981,1,8
200,184,148294,6,0,B|268:200|268:200|312:168,1,90,4|8
364,180,148919,1,0
408,112,149231,2,0,B|424:64|424:64|416:16,1,90,8|0
340,0,149856,2,0,B|252:0|252:0|144:32,1,180,8|8
96,72,150794,1,0
48,136,151106,2,0,B|-8:136,2,45,8|8|0
96,200,151731,6,0,B|176:232|224:208,1,90,8|0
252,260,152356,1,8
324,296,152669,1,0
396,256,152981,1,8
328,216,153294,6,0,B|328:112,1,90,4|8
248,128,153919,2,0,B|248:224,1,90,0|8
172,244,154544,1,0
92,224,154856,1,8
64,148,155169,1,0
72,68,155481,5,8
128,68,155637,2,0,B|180:68,1,45
252,64,156106,2,0,B|252:8,2,45,8|0|0
324,100,156731,2,0,B|392:100,2,45,8|0|0
280,168,157356,2,8,B|160:312,1,180
88,284,158294,5,4
76,204,158606,2,0,B|48:160|48:76,2,90,8|0|8
152,176,159544,1,0
152,176,159856,2,0,B|184:128|232:120,1,90,8|0
288,76,160481,6,0,B|288:8,2,45,8|0|0
360,116,161106,2,0,B|416:116,2,45,8|0|0
360,196,161731,1,8
288,236,162044,2,0,B|204:272|88:244,1,180
52,192,162981,5,8
52,192,163294,2,8,B|52:120,1,45,8|12

1. I see you used soft-hitwhistle as normal-hitwhistle, if you want to use soft whistle on normal sampleset, you can just make the note you want to do so into "soft addtions", so you can save some space for you osz file, not much though XD
   
2. 01:38:919 - lol wut? the cat like sound lololol

1. 00:18:294 (1) - Obviously there's a finish sound in background music, consider adding a finish here, soft of normal sampleset both fine
2. 00:28:294 (1) - ^
3. 00:47:981 (1) - Slider end, add finish sounds good
4. 01:08:294 (1) - Finish?
5. 01:28:294 (1) - (nazi) It's not perfectly stack under the end of 01:26:106 (2)m you can turn of grid snap to stack them
6. 01:57:981 (4) - (nazi) If you can make this note perfectly overlap under 01:55:481 (4), it would looked better imo
7. 02:02:669 (4) - Slider end, should be a finisher there. Turn down volume from 02:03:606 (1)
8. 02:13:294 (1) - Add finish here?
9. 02:27:044 (4) - ^, slider end
10. 02:38:294 (1) - ^
11. 02:43:450 - It looked like you have dragged break to here? I think no need to do so
12. 03:03:294 (1) - Slider head, finish with louder volume

1. 00:35:169 (3) - Make the end of this slider perfectly overlap with the head of 00:36:731 (2) would looked better, backwards works, too
2. 00:53:294 (2) - Add finish to slider head and remove clap on tail, the clap sounds really bad
3. 01:02:981 (1) - I'd suggest remove this clap, a clap before the finish sound of a bar sounds odd
4. 01:21:731 (3)
   01:23:294 (1) - They can overlap better, you know
5. 01:28:294 (1) - The slider head is half hidden by 01:26:731 (2), looked bad, you can totally avoid this
6. 01:43:450 - 02:03:137 - 20s break seems too long
7. Hmm, why this diff end at a different point?

1. 00:13:294 (4) - Add finish here?
2. 00:17:044 (1) - It's hidden by 00:15:637 (4,1), looked bad
3. 00:23:294 (1) - Finish?
4. 00:44:544 - Add a note here sound better imo
5. 01:40:794 (1) - Hmm, unexpected jump, this may be confusing
6. 02:04:778 - 02:09:934 - These slidertick sounds weird in this part, I'd suggest remove them
7. 02:22:981 (2) - NC this note, it's after a spinner
8. 02:23:294 (2) - Add finish?
9. 02:33:137 (6) - Half hidden by 02:32:200 (4), just put it out of that area would looked better, like this? ofc if you do so, you need to adjust the spacing after this change
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:42:981 (2) - ^, something like that, avoid half hidden would looked better, or maybe you can make it totally stack under one of previous note/slider
11. 03:08:919 (3,4,5) - Hmm, this might be a little confusing, I think two slider here would be better, and 03:09:544, 03:09:700 can be another slider or 2 notes.

1. 00:17:825 (8) - Make its end stack under 00:17:044 (5) would looked better imo
2. 01:46:262 (1,2,3) - This anti-jump might be confusing, maybe increase spacing a bit?
3. 01:55:169 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. I see you used soft-hitwhistle as normal-hitwhistle, if you want to use soft whistle on normal sampleset, you can just make the note you want to do so into "soft addtions", so you can save some space for you osz file, not much though XD
   tho I still not understand about the addition thingy.. what should I do about them then ;A;
2. 01:38:919 - lol wut? the cat like sound lololol

LOOOOOL XD

[Easy]

1. 00:18:294 (1) - Obviously there's a finish sound in background music, consider adding a finish here, soft of normal sampleset both fine added
2. 00:28:294 (1) - ^ ^
3. 00:47:981 (1) - Slider end, add finish sounds good okayy XD
4. 01:08:294 (1) - Finish? ^
5. 01:28:294 (1) - (nazi) It's not perfectly stack under the end of 01:26:106 (2)m you can turn of grid snap to stack them lol kay
6. 01:57:981 (4) - (nazi) If you can make this note perfectly overlap under 01:55:481 (4), it would looked better imo fix them XD
7. 02:02:669 (4) - Slider end, should be a finisher there. Turn down volume from 02:03:606 (1) fix
8. 02:13:294 (1) - Add finish here? ^
9. 02:27:044 (4) - ^, slider end ^
10. 02:38:294 (1) - ^ ^
11. 02:43:450 - It looked like you have dragged break to here? I think no need to do so well.. I don't drag them ;A;
12. 03:03:294 (1) - Slider head, finish with louder volume okayy XD

Breeze wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]

1. 00:13:294 (4) - Add finish here? Done.
2. 00:17:044 (1) - It's hidden by 00:15:637 (4,1), looked bad Err, it isn't in testing/playing mode.
3. 00:23:294 (1) - Finish? Done.
4. 00:44:544 - Add a note here sound better imo I'm following the vocal here.
5. 01:40:794 (1) - Hmm, unexpected jump, this may be confusing This jump goes well with the emphasizing of vocal, so I'll keep this.
6. 02:04:778 - 02:09:934 - These slidertick sounds weird in this part, I'd suggest remove them I think it goes with the music on the part nicely...
7. 02:22:981 (2) - NC this note, it's after a spinner Done.
8. 02:23:294 (2) - Add finish? ^
9. 02:33:137 (6) - Half hidden by 02:32:200 (4), just put it out of that area would looked better, like this? ofc if you do so, you need to adjust the spacing after this change Done in another way.
10. 02:42:981 (2) - ^, something like that, avoid half hidden would looked better, or maybe you can make it totally stack under one of previous note/slider Fixed.
11. 03:08:919 (3,4,5) - Hmm, this might be a little confusing, I think two slider here would be better, and 03:09:544, 03:09:700 can be another slider or 2 notes. Hmm... Well, did stuff here.

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi.

[General]
- The 3rd kiai on Easy doesn't end at the same time as he other diffs. err.. where? ;A;

[SB]
- Seems like lyrics\048.png is not being used. deleted X3

[Easy]
- I highly suggests you this, although please keep in mind it's my suggestion based in my opinion haha. With the normal hit normal I feel like it's too much for this song, I think that it would be better to use the soft hitsound set but with the current custom hitsounds of normal (the clap, slidertick, etc.) Please try it and see if you like it. Like I said I highly recommend you this. errr X3 half of me like it and half of me don't like it ;A; yeah i think the finish part were good XD so i'll add sample set for the soft finish only X3
- 00:00:794 You could try this, is a bit risky to try it on an Easy but anyways http://puu.sh/1KAv5 OAO;; thats what I do before ;A; anyway.. I think its better XD
- 02:01:419 A soft finish would be good here. added XD
- 02:43:294 Add a finish. added XD
- 02:53:294 Same as above. added XD
- 02:58:294 Same as above. added XD

lovhin456 wrote:

[Hinsvar's Hard]
- 00:13:762 Add a note here, helps with the flow and follows the vocals. Done.
- 00:16:731 Shorten the slider until here then add a note on 00:16:887? This one follows the vocal, and I think it's better that way, so... no.
- 00:17:356 Add a note, helps with the flow and follows the vocals. Done.
- 00:38:294 Remove clap and add finish. ^
- 00:40:794 Remove whistle and add finish. ^
- 01:05:637 (1,2) Exchange their places. ^
- 01:15:637 Add a note. ^
- 01:23:762 (1,2) Exhange their places. ^
- 01:25:794 Remove whistle, add finish. Nope; the music here doesn't seem to support it.
- 01:30:794 Same as above. Did it here.
- 01:53:294 Same as above. ^
- 02:53:294 Same as above. ^
- 03:09:231 Add a note. Umm, nope. The music here is pretty... quiet, I guess?
- 03:11:887 Same as above. ^

TheVileOne wrote:

Hinsvar
Really epic finish in this difficulty. It takes risks but for the most part it works. Good job. Good to hear that~

00:15:169 (3,4) - 1.02 plays better to me and would match 2,3 Don't really think it would matter that much, but nvm, changed.
00:19:387 (2,3,4,5) - Flow is awkward here. I think it should start with a note, and then stack into a slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/574464 I think the current pattern I have goes better with the song, though...
00:19:700 - A whistle actually sounds nice here. Added.
00:30:637 - Plays best as a repeat slider, but I guess it's fine the way it is. Yeah.
00:50:481 (3) - Not stacked properly. It shouldn't be visible above the stack. I'm sure enough it's already stacked properly...
00:50:481 (3,1) - Check this stack as well. ^
00:52:200 (4,5,6,7) - Great pattern! \o\
01:03:762 (1,2) - Not as fluid as it probably should be. It's a valid pattern, but it's a pretty jarring movement. It plays a lot smoother with 01:04:231 - mapped, but perhaps not crossing that triple due to overlap issues. Might be worth remapping this for a better flow. Up to you though. I'm following the vocal here, so no.
01:07:825 (6) - I don't hear 1/4th notes and it would be a lot easier to read if this was repeating on 1/2th instead. I suggest doing so. Not gonna change this. This place definitely demands a 1/4 repeating slider.
01:09:387 (4,5) - I suggest stacking these instead. It plays better and you might not even need to fix the spacing after it. I feel it plays intuitive even at 0.5 spacing. I mean it plays better than some other transitions in your difficulty. I'm okay with what I have here.
01:17:669 (4,5) - You should account for stack leniency here. It's harder to read when the stack is misplaced. Try moving this to x 260 y 308 Done.
01:23:762 (4,1) - Similar issue. try moving it down until the stack isn't visible about the transition anymore. I think this one looks fine, though...
01:40:637 (7,1) - Bad spacing Stack please. Umm, this is intentional to emphasize the song.
02:01:575 (2) - Move down 1 unit? One grid you mean? Done.
02:03:250 - Unsnapped green line. what. Snapped.
02:22:981 (1) - This is part of the spinner combo, is this intentional? I hate it when things like this happen. NC'd.
03:08:919 (3,4) - Highly recommend you fill this. you shouldn't have a gap and then start offbeat into more streams. Stay on the white ticks through here and it will play better. (Moving the slider 1/2th back and adding a note worked for me) Moved (4) 1/2 beats back and added a circle at 03:09:544.

TheVileOne wrote:

My Mod

General
That cat trolls me ._. Yayyyy XD

Easy
All your green lines look unsnapped. it is because i was missed at the offset last time..

Very unique. Few songs support this kind of mapping. thanks XD

00:15:794 (1) - Third red point should be a regular point instead. Drag it out some until the curve looks natural. nope ;A; i do it purposely
00:25:794 (1,2,3) - Could be spaced slightly better. Move 00:26:731 (2) - to x 400 y 149 and 00:27:044 (3) - to x 347 y 168 fix XD
00:40:794 (1) - Are you trying to create unusual sliders on purpose? I would prefer you round one of those bent parts. I came up with this, but it's probably not perfect. http://puu.sh/1P1IL kyaaaaaa X3 that one looks good >w< changeee~
01:05:794 (1) - Same as 15 seconds nope ;A; i do it purposely
01:15:794 (1,2,3) - Same as 25 seconds okayyy
01:15:169 (3,1,2,3) - The hitsounds through here were soft in the first version. I think you shouldn't change from soft. I want to give something like accent because the vocal.. but yeah.. remove it XD
01:30:794 (1) - You have a normal slider here, but not at 40 seconds? should I change owo? okay then X3
01:39:066 - Epic storyboard nyaaaaaaaaaaaannn~ thanks X3
02:00:794 (1) - Whistle? woopsss X3 fixed
02:30:794 (1,2) - exactly straight. x values need to be 16. fixed XD


Almost finished finished? XD

Shoily wrote:

Good luck teru!! hopes this gets ranked u v u <3

SkyDevil wrote:

wwww mod after you asked me 99999 times in game xD o3o

General
Japanese title: え？あぁ、そう added in all diff
Japanese artist: 蛇足 added in all diff

Easy
00:19:856 - to 00:22:981 - Uguu I kinda miss those claps DX You should try to add some sliders :33 owo;; added a slider with reverse
01:09:856 - to 01:12:981 - Same here... ^
01:38:919 - You should add a circle with a normal whistle or something here xDD NYAA okayy XD
02:06:106 (1) - ./nazi slider 1 grid down woops >x< fix
02:50:794 - y u no do something like this http://puu.sh/1S8Ra nice but nope, because a spinner would fit in that part XD
02:53:919 (1,2,3) - I think these are somehow very awkwardly placed... (in the rhythm) you might want to put those breaks away and put some notes there nope, the break arrow fit the song XD
02:58:294 (1,2,3,4) - same owo ^ XD


Good luck teruuuu :33333 Epic SB and I like the song www y u no rank it soon be a MAT and bubble my map then >_>

Teru21 wrote:

be a MAT and bubble my map then >_>

SkyDevil wrote:

Hinsvar's Hard
00:12:825 (1,2,3,4) - ew 4 notes stacked on each other lol, maybe this? http://puu.sh/1S9lp Did something different.
00:16:106 (1) - Add clap on that slider OAO;; Umm... idk... ._.
00:18:528 - add circle here, to follow the vocals Done.
00:22:512 (2,3,4,5,6) - Im pretty sure you can make this better I hope I did it right...
00:32:200 (1,2) - Im pretty sure almost everyone reads this as if you had to click it 1/2 later, so Increase distance spacing Nope; it follows the vocal and I think people can read it because of that.
00:38:762 (1,2,3) - This might be confusing because they are all stacked on each other, but the spacing in the rhythm is different, so you should put 3 somewhere else Umm, I don't think it's confusing though...
00:49:544 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - erhm I suggest that you should space the 1/2 in rhythm out, and keep the 1/1 in rhythm stacked... Oh well, did stuff here.
01:17:825 (5) - 1 grid left xD ./nazi Read TVO's mod.
01:34:544 (3,4) - Increase DS in them... (because 1/2 in rhythm) Done.
01:38:919 (2) - Normal whistle on sliderhead OAO;; NYAAA I think the current whistle is fine...
01:39:231 (2,3,$) - nicrease DS www This one's not really confusing though...
01:40:637 (7,1) - waaaatttt unexpectable jump... please do something like this... http://puu.sh/1Svie The increased power of the vocal (?) here definitely supports the jump, so I won't change it.
01:54:544 (1,2) - This jump is also unexpectable... ./lets you be creative so y u no figure something out yourself? This one's supposed to be a symmetrical one, but eh... I'll see later opinions...