i cant search for that one... err.. can you search it for me? if cant, nevermind..lovhin456 wrote:
general;
- you need a 192 or lower kbps mp3, yours is 256 kbps which is unrankable
thanks for your mod.. thats really help me.. D
i cant search for that one... err.. can you search it for me? if cant, nevermind..lovhin456 wrote:
general;
- you need a 192 or lower kbps mp3, yours is 256 kbps which is unrankable
Generalthanks
Kiai time is too much and some just spam and will distract players. I think kiai time will be better in here:
- 00:43:250 - 00:53:250
- 01:33:250 - 01:43:250
- 02:23:250 - 02:43:250 [. . . i love how i do that.. so no change ]
The break isn't allowed more than 20 second (I saw in rules) [done]
Easy
Some note isn't consistent spacing, please use distance snap because usually not jump in easy [i already use it]
00:22:156 (2) this is too far from previous object, please fix the spacing [um.. changed]
00:30:125 (2) I think stack like this is too hard for beginner, I suggest to unstack this
00:34:812 (1) this note is too close from previous object, you can check with distance snap
01:15:125 (2) same reason as 00:30:125 [done]
01:38:875 (1) why jump in here? this jump will make confused beginner players [done]
02:38:250 (2) error spacing
02:43:250 - I think notes after this isn't used. because, after this, is very "little" notes and break is too long orz. and I think more better if end in here.. but, whatever you want [i dont get it ><]
this easy is not like easy orz. just my opinion [o right.. thats what i think.. because i made this in 2 hours only.. also, this beatmap is my friend's request.. so i made as fast as i can LOL ]
Normal
Same with easy, some notes has error spacing
00:33:718 (1,2,3) error spacing [done]
00:42:000 (2) ^
01:09:656 (4,5,1) I think this pattern will make confused player orz. can put them in better place, please? [i'll change this if i see the other modder critic about this too]
02:09:500 (3) ok, error spacing again [deliberate]
00:40:437 (2) stack (1) with this, more better I think [done]
02:41:062 (1,1) why put NC in here? this NC just spam. delete them ok? [ok]
02:42:312 (5) add spacing in this note more easy for read more than stack like this [done]
02:43:250 - same with easy [huh?]
Hard
00:19:968 (8) add NC in this note, because you add jump from previous notes I think[done]
00:36:687 (3) make that same distance with before note is more tidy [um.. distance snap]
00:47:312 (10) This stack little make confused because colour is same. consider to add NC in here[done]
00:48:562 (6) because this slider break the stream from before notes, add NC in here or add jump so that not like trap in here[done]
01:09:968 (8) same reason with 00:19:968[done]
01:13:250 (8) the vocal is end in (7). so add NC in here, and stack this slider properly [i think the (7) is the start of the vocal.. so i add (7) as NC]
01:24:187 (3) same reason with 00:36:687[nope]
01:26:687 (3) ^[nope]
01:32:937 (3) this jump in this note isn't to read orz. can move to more better place, plz? [there is a follow point, so it can be read]
01:37:937 (10) add NC in here because new vocal [done]
02:37:312 (10) same reason with 00:47:312 [done]
02:38:250 (1) this circle like a trap in here. consider delete this and add 1 repeater on (1) [done]
02:43:250 - same with before diff [?]
Ok, that's all
Good luck
256,320,750,2,0,B|256:224|256:216,1,100.000001192093,2|000:34:812- (1) slider kayak gini mending dihindarin deh di diff easy TwT;; kesan diffnya jadi bener2 ribet gimana (ditambah lagi, sv teru pelan banget T_T). menurut maya sendiri, mungkin yang gini lebih masuk.
208,152,2000,2,0,B|256:120|304:152,1,100,2|0
256,220,3250,1,4
76,328,750,2,0,B|76:264,1,50.000000298023,2|200:19:031- mulai dari sini rasanya beatnya mulai offbeat T_T ga tau kenapa orz
156,276,1218,2,0,B|156:216,1,50
236,224,1687,2,0,B|236:172,1,50
316,168,2156,2,0,B|316:112,3,50
268,56,2937,2,0,B|316:24|368:56,1,100
124,184,12781,6,0,B|136:132,3,50.000000298023,0|8|0|0
256,128,750,2,0,B|256:52,1,75.000000298023,2|202:48:406- (x) note disini
164,256,1218,2,0,B|112:316,1,75.000000298023,2|2
348,256,1687,2,0,B|400:316,1,75.000000298023,2|2
256,192,2156,5,0
256,192,2312,1,0
256,192,2468,1,0
256,192,2625,1,0
184,176,2781,2,0,B|192:119|250:94|312:109|342:164|325:220,1,225
L_P wrote:
hi...
Insane
good and fun..suggestion only, feel free to reject it
00:13:450 (2) - stack this...(spacing was hugely reduced, maybe you wanna emphasize the vocal? no idea but i think stacks does better)? i don't really want to stack this section
00:15:950 (2) - same, stack this and dont move the next note? ^
00:21:262 (4) - i feel a bit boring.. (maybe many sliders? maybe jumping notes?) perhaps, but imo it follows the music pretty well and I like it.
00:25:950 (2) - if blanket the note would be a lot nicer to see? blanket probably would look nice too, but it just messes up my pattern. if i blanket the rest of my pattern looks weird (at least to me).
00:31:262 (3) - a bit boring...same as above
00:33:215 (x) - i strongly felt that if you add a note here would make a good rhythm? of course adjust it up to you.. not really sure what this note could be following.
00:52:981 (4) - if you wanna frighten player take this : make it 1x velocity, add 1 or 2 repeat (2 repeat will totally make it a trap, but sounds good to me) again, I don't see a point in this since there is not drums or anything playing those notes. Also I don't put those things for the sole purpose of messing around with the player >_> I only do if it follows the music and it adds variation to the beatmap. I used this later on in the beatmap
01:07:044 (5) - stack at next slider to emphasize the vocal? similar to above, i don't want to stack anything in this section
01:22:669 (1,2,3,4) - antijump here feels great i'm staying consistent with the previous section. Perhaps anti-spacing could work, but it just doesn't feel right.
01:27:981 (1) - antijump this too? im just staying consistent with my previous section. the first time i anti-jump, the 2nd time i don't, just for variations sake.
01:55:637 (4) - change something? the piano here has a high pitched note not sure what you want me to do. I originally had 1/8 tick notes here, but I realized how pointless that was. It sounded nice and I knew the player would probably not realize it was a 1/8 tick note. the player would still get a 300 on it, but it was just illogical, and it came as a surprise when the player hit the note.
03:12:044 (1) - change this slider to antijump? no?
GiNa wrote:
[General]
-I guess you fixed your timing, please resnap your “green lines,” especially the ones for kiai. However, green lines with hitsound changes, you may not need to resnap all of them, just make sure they all work well. (This doesn't include your guests)[okay]
-I think you need a timing pro[like who?]
[Easy]
00:47:981 (1) – too close to the previous note, maybe move to x:268 y:308[fix]
01:32:044 (1) – too far[nope]
02:02:044 (2) – too close[fix]
02:03:294 (1) – adjust this one too[?]
02:40:481 (1) – ^[^]
Only thing I really want to say is … SV is quite low … [yap.. i know it.. i make this diff when i'm still dont know how to make easy..]
[Normal]
00:13:449 – all the notes on red line somehow sound a little off imo, maybe try to fix some of them [fix]
00:17:511 (5) – too close [done]
00:22:200 (3) – off screen, [fix]
01:35:481 (1) – too close, which causes overlapping [doesn't see any overlapping]
01:37:981 (1) – move to x:444 y:216 [fix]
02:08:293 (1) – super close[fix]
Well … try to keep spacing constant, I would suggest you recheck all of them and rearrange them
02:09:543 (3) – super far from the previous[fix]
02:37:199 (2) – hard to read (quite hidden by 02:36:105 (3)), move to somewhere else[okay]
02:48:919 – remove this short break[okay]
[Hard]
-Yeah, this hard is pretty hard
00:47:981 (1,2,3,4,5) – maybe this is too long for a hard[nope.. its okay]
01:42:356 (1,2,3,4) – scary jumps [yes, they are]
01:57:044 (5) – NC[okay]
01:59:231 (3) – different times of repeats compared to the previous, which tricks player a little, I would suggest you NC here [fix]
02:09:544 (2) – not straight[:o fix]
02:26:731 (6) – NC ?[fix]
02:48:762 – remove this short break [fix]
03:07:044 (5) – same as 01:59:231 (3)
yaaayyyy!!!! ily <333.. thanks =DBeatofIke wrote:
I last modded this map 7 months ago. I was a complete noob at modding maps back then XD. I'm much better now.
Anyway, as requested from PM, I will re-mod!
300,192,67200,2,0,B|232:160|232:96|232:96|268:96,1,160,2|2
332,24,67669,1,8
268,96,67825,2,0,B|208:96|208:96|176:76|176:76|108:76,1,160,2|2
BeatofIke wrote:
Hinsvar's Hard
-> Reduce HP Drain Rate to 5, since your Insane has 6 already. I'm staying with what I have now. HP5 is too low for a Hard diff, IMO.
-> Lots of note pauses on this difficulty! It makes it confusing and sometimes doesn't flow well with the music. ...Can't be helped; the song demands that.
...So yeah, thanks anyway, guys (:chaotic_iak wrote:
[Hinsvar's Hard]
Ini harusnya Insane -_- ...Jujur aja, menurut saya ini lebih ke Hard+ sih, tapi saya yakin ini masih belum bisa diklasifikasikan sebagai diff Insane.
Masalah fountain lagi. Dari si Teru kalau soal fountain itu. Mestinya sih nggak masalah...
Hitsound kurang; banyakin. Err... Untuk saya ini udah cukup, tapi soal itu nanti deh...
00:01:262 (1,1,1) - Slider path harus keliatan ...Tapi justru pattern seperti ini yang menurut saya bisa "menggambarkan" lagunya. Lagipula masih kelihatan kok, walaupun memang sedikit...
00:02:512 (2,1) - Spacing ganti padahal ga di tempat yang cocok Tampaknya ini masalah preferensi... :/
00:24:387 (1) - Repeat-nya mungkin ga keliatan; pas aku main ga keliatan Semua repeating slider di sini kelihatan repeat-nya (:
00:27:356 (2,3) - Spacing ganti pas timing juga ganti (kalo mau di-stack harusnya gap-nya 1/2-beat, barengan sama yang lain); kalo ini Insane, ini cuma saran, tapi ini Hard jadi masalah
00:31:887 (1,2) - ^
00:33:450 (1,2) - ^
00:39:231 (2,3) - Sekarang justru ini yang jadi masalah; sebelumnya gap yang nge-stack semua 1-beat, tapi ini 1/2-beat
Yah intinya kalo nge-stack pastiin gap-nya masih konsisten; kalo kaya gini jadi terlalu susah pake intuisi
...Saya merasa nggak perlu pakai perasaan ketika nge-test diff saya. Semua stack saya lewati dengan lancar (: Nggak ada masalah yang berarti. Serius kok. Saya bukannya menutup diri terhadap pendapat orang, tapi ritme lagu ini sendiri bisa dikatakan "memaksa" saya untuk mengeluarkan style yang agak aneh ini :/
Oke, setelah saya pertimbangkan, slider yang nge-stack di awal bakal saya ubah besok siang (sekarang OL di HP).chaotic_iak wrote:
Sang mapper (dalam hal ini kamu) pasti tau apa aja yang udah dimasukin ke map, makanya kadang mapper bisa mikir ini hal gampang padahal buar yang lain hal dewa. Aku (sebagai pemain Hard+ ke Insane) masih sering liat spacing kalo belom familiar sama lagunya (specifically kalo modding soalnya biasanya cuma main satu diff sekali), dan di sini play-nya jadi kacau banget sampe ga bisa pass.
Yah, pendapatku sih spacing-nya bermasalah. Kalo mau coba bikin gapnya konsisten 1/2-beat semua di daerah yang spacing-nya ga konsisten? Kalo spacing konsisten ato ga bikin kaget ga masalah. Di Hard harusnya masih passable main pake intuisi (tanpa ngehafalin).
Yang slider ngestack itu unrankable, apa lagi pemainnya ga punya waktu respon (1/2-beat doang). Kalo mau bisa coba geser masing-masing ke kiri dikit supaya yang di bawahnya keliatan?
tengkiuuuu xDchaotic_iak wrote:
Unrankable (apa sih Indo-nya #agh), masalah, saran. Bagus, keren, dsb.
[Easy]
00:20:794 (1,2) - 1.5-beat agak susah diprediksi sama pemain Easy, tapi OD-nya rendah jadi bebas >noo.. aku rasa oke2 aja.. karna sliderticknya kan menunjukkan bahwa itu 1.5 xD
00:33:250 - 00:35:750 - 00:38:250 - 00:40:750 - Kiai fountain ga boleh dipake banyak-banyak, termasuk abuse > okayy.. fix them in all diff xD
00:48:215 - Kalo mau pasang fountain lagi, coba pasangnya di sini daripada di 00:47:981 supaya ga keliatan kiai-nya sempet mati >
01:10:794 (1,2) - 1.5-beat agak susah diprediksi sama pemain Easy, tapi OD-nya rendah jadi bebas aku kopi paste.. so no
01:38:215 - Kalo mau pasang fountain lagi, coba pasangnya di sini daripada di 01:37:981 supaya ga keliatan kiai-nya sempet mati[/color] this too xD
02:25:794 (1,2,3,4) - Sebaiknya ga di-stack buat Easy tapi masih bisa kebaca kok xD
02:28:215 - Hm...tebak. Alesannya udah disebutin di atas koq.
02:33:215 - ^ ^
02:38:215 - ^^[/color]
Oke... Fountain abuse itu unrankable. Yang Hard juga ga konsisten spacing-nya, perlu dibenerin ga apa lahh aku rasa.. kan flow nya sama lagunya cocok xD . Good luck!