1. Easy (1.54 stars, 88 notes)
2. Kujinn's Normal (2.1 stars, 163 notes)
3. Light Insane (4.15 stars, 315 notes)
4. Spark (4.68 stars, 392 notes)
5. Stingy's Hard (3.28 stars, 232 notes)

Ohwow wrote:

m4m

[Spark]
00:44:352 (1,2,3) - Mmm sry this pattern doesn't look that great right now imo. Would suggest something different. (If you really want to keep that pattern, sharpen the angles of the sliders a more, would look a lot better imo: https://i.gyazo.com/4184ad232186b04bfa5 ... 4282ac.jpg fixed
00:47:095 (1,2,3) - ^same, it doesn't look natural to play nor does it look good. I get you're trying to have that 60 degree pattern, but having that as a mechanic for structure isn't enough. The long slider doesn't look too good either. i think it plays fien, changeed the long slider though
00:45:381 (3,4) - current blanket is not perfect, fix i tried
00:49:495 (4) - just make the slider point to the right for better flow. i dont see how it would flow better
00:49:838 (1,2,3) - just wanted to say this one looks a bit better at least ok
00:54:638 (1,2) - any reason to make these extended sliders and to silence the ends of those? Just regular 1/1 sliders like what you've been using would be more consistent. i dont know.. if anyone else suggests it then I'll change
01:04:238 (3) - I feel like this should be NC instead of 01:04:067 (1) - and 01:04:581 (1) - but i guess you're following the electric melody thingy. Tbh the drum sound on the white ticks are more prominent. Also you were following the percussions on 01:00:809 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - so it'd make sense to keep following the drums. okay
01:05:267 (1) - Don't think you need to NC this fixed
01:10:752 (2) - this slider stands out a lot from the normal straight/curved sliders you used, but nothing really special happenings in the music that could support it. i tried to make it stand out less
01:11:438 (4,1) - ^similar okay

[Light Insane]
01:04:581 (1,2) - something tells me that these two should be in the same color combo. Maybe NC? fixed
01:22:752 (1) - same with the top diff, nothing special in the song to support the special slider. alright
Hmm not bad


[Easy]
01:02:181 (3,4) - Make into 2 1/1 sliders like the 2 sliders before? I see no reason to change it up here. i did that bc of the synth here 01:02:524
01:03:552 (5) - should NC here. idk i wanna keep it consistent
01:14:524 (4,5) - can blanket a bit better. fixed
01:24:124 (2,3) - Not liking the 3/2 gap here when you've been consistent with 1/1 gap in this section.
01:25:495 (4,5) - ^ I'll think about it
Not bad.

Could use some more polishing, but i really do like some concepts you used in your maps. Keep up the good work man! thanks

Ohwow wrote:

m4m

[Stingy's Hard]
00:55:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not liking how the rhythm density is lower here but the song gets a bit more intense compared to the section before this one. Should try to follow the melody like you've done before. The bass kicks just came in and it would be bad to ignore them.
01:03:552 (1,2) - I would just make the 1/4 sliders repeat twice and put them on 01:03:552 - 01:03:895 - 01:04:238 - and 01:04:581 - to emphasize the white ticks cause they seem the loudest imo. I agree with you but I don't know if that will be bad for a Hard difficulty. I'll ask about it~
01:04:924 - could use a repeat slider instead of a spinner to keep on mapping that 1/4 beat. No thanks :3 I love spinners and I think it really fits the build-up
01:16:495 - tbh i feel like you're overusing the extended 3/4 sliders. It really makes the rhythm feel less intense since you're not amplifying the intensity by mapping the red ticks. happens at 01:17:181 - 01:19:924 - and many other places on the other kiai too. ;w; This entire point of most Hard maps is about introducing new rhythms to get the player ready for higher difficulties. The reason I chose this rhythm is because it follows the synths and it's the end of a phrase.
01:07:667 (5) - ^similar reasoning, mapping with 1/1 sliders with a repeat makes the rhythm density seem weak, when it should more intense in this section. =w= nuh I like it! I love it because there's no "real" break when you flow into the next beat.
01:10:067 (5,6) - ^
01:36:124 - You're skipping this loud beat here :/ and why the silence on the sliderend? I'm following the high-pitched synths for emphasis. It's silenced because there's no hitsound for the Drum set.
01:46:924 (5) - 01:57:895 (8) - 02:08:867 (8) - same ^
01:30:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:36:467 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - why tf are these two copy and pasted. The method of mapping is heavily discouraged. they're copy/pasted for consistency and to keep the flow similar to the rest. it's also not visible in editor OR in gameplay. I mean, look at alacat, Gero, ezek, Asphyxia, or MkGuh. that's literally their whole style xD also, please keep your timestamps in chronological order for simplicity.
01:53:952 (4,5) - Should make into 2 1/2 sliders instead. no, I shouldn't. I like this because it helps emphasize the held synth
You might want to work on the hitsounds too, they don't really sound too great. They follow the music, and that's what they're for.
This diff could use some more work.

1. 00:38:867 (1,1) - needs more recovery time for an easy diff around 4/1 gap
2. 00:55:324 (1) - got some soft cymbals here on a new section start, could maybe use a soft addition fiinish or drumwhisle to indicate that
3. 00:55:324 (1) - control + j on the spot would be nice for a bit smoother play beteween (6;1)
4. 01:06:295 (1) - ^ soft addition finish works great here, same for 01:28:238 (1) - 01:50:181 (1) - 02:09:381 (1) - (lower volume fade out cymbal at the last one)
5. 01:24:124 (2,3) - That rhythm gap here came abit out of nowhere for this section, I think for an easy diff its prob better to start that different rhythm at the major change at 01:28:238 (1,2) - and stick to your current rhythm for this part, I'd suggest making starting 01:24:467 (3) - earlier and into a 2/1, you can hear the sound your following kinda starts on the white tick too but its a bit disguised by the clap
6. 01:47:438 (3,4) - just an idea here but why not delete 4 and change 3 into a circle for a bit of break feeling for that quiet down part, gives a little pause for easy players too since the diff currently has no breaks
7. 02:08:009 (2,3) - same as 01:24:124 (2,3) - if you agreed
8. The soft finish additions apply to the rest of the diffs aswell if you applied some

1. 00:55:324 (1,2,3) - if your making a 1/2 rhythm here then I'd also repeat it at 00:58:067 (1,2) - since its similar music wise and you don't have a standalone 1/2 rhythm for the intro
2. 01:28:238 (1) - NC concept kinda breaks here, would stick to either one every downbeat or one every 2 downbeats for the entire map
3. 01:38:352 (2,3,4,1) - the flow changs and major overlap seems a bit too much here compared to the rest of the diff, prob better if you could rearrange 01:38:524 (3,4,1) - so this is just regelar circlar/linear flow instead of the flow breaks like you did with the rest

1. 01:01:495 (3) - with the intensity increasing here I'd be better to have the end here clickable like the rest of 01:00:809 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - since this is the main feedback for the speedup, so same rhythm as 01:02:867 (3,4,5) - would be nice or something like this rhythm if you want diversity
   
2. 01:03:552 (1) - 4 1/4 white to red returns could work here for clap emphasis for this (double returns seem a bit too hard compared to the rest of the diff tho)
3. 01:08:695 (7) - and similar, would recommend silencing slider using the soft sample setting instead, now you stll have that like background tick even with 5% volume due to the hitnormal being so high pitched
4. 01:16:238 (5,6) - 02:00:124 (5,6) - these extended silders seem kinda overdone since the synth starts at (3) which makes it feel really weird that you kinda follow only the half of it, I'd stick to 1/2 for these 2
   01:35:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be nice to avoid overlaps here, rest of the maps is pretty clean so this kinda looks a bit off, maybe could dos omething like this for example
   

1. 00:58:752 (3,4,1) - would be nice if you could make this a bit more connected visually, just looks a bit random to fill the ds imo, could try something like this for example
   
2. 01:01:495 (4) - maybe NC this too if you NC 01:02:867 (1) - so theyre all groups of 3 (or delete the last NC)
3. 01:09:552 (2,3) - could blanket these so you emphasize 01:10:067 (4) - aswell with a jump like the rest in the section
4. 01:13:152 (1,2,3) - would be nice to make the visual distance between 1-2 and tail of 3 and 2 even so this feels more structured while playing the same
5. 01:17:781 (2,3,4) - would reduce the jump just a bit by placing 3 more upleft so those slider to circle jumps are more inline with the rest of this section
6. 01:27:209 (1,2,3,4) - pretty strong jumps for those really weak tom sounds, would maybe reduce a bit since its kinda buildup towards 01:28:238 (1) -
7. 01:41:438 (5,6,1) - simalr to ^ placing 6 left and build around the visual of 6-5-1 to make it feel more connected and less random
   

• 00:45:381 (3,4) - could rearange it like this for similar flow but avoiding that a bit bad overlap
  

1. 00:52:238 (4) - would place this more near x240/y208 so you take the sliderleniecy from (63) bit more into account flow wise and you got the jump on the next downbeat
2. 01:04:067 (7,8,1) - bit misleading spacing here, would be better if 01:04:067 (7,8) - was still 0.8 ds so you have the change on the next set of 8 notes
3. 01:10:752 (2,3,4) - felt kinda off flow wise while playing really wide almost linear movenement here, could try placing (3) at x308/y28 ish for a bit mor anglular movement, makes this play smoother
4. 02:00:467 (5) - why not control + g this one, you kinda introduced it this rhythm and similar placement at 01:57:295 (2,3,4,5,6) - with the 2 same direction ones sliders so could repeat that here since its so similar that its kinda expected to be the same direction too

Wishkey wrote:

Yow! M4M return

Hard

1. 01:01:495 (3) - with the intensity increasing here I'd be better to have the end here clickable like the rest of 01:00:809 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - since this is the main feedback for the speedup, so same rhythm as 01:02:867 (3,4,5) - would be nice or something like this rhythm if you want diversity
   
   dude that's way too hard for what I'm looking for ;w; sorry
2. 01:03:552 (1) - 4 1/4 white to red returns could work here for clap emphasis for this (double returns seem a bit too hard compared to the rest of the diff tho) I like what I have now because having too much 1/4 REPEATS could cause confusion. This is much easier to read, despite there being more repeats
3. 01:08:695 (7) - and similar, would recommend silencing slider using the soft sample setting instead, now you stll have that like background tick even with 5% volume due to the hitnormal being so high pitched I like how it is because I don't see a reason for this ;w;
4. 01:16:238 (5,6) - 02:00:124 (5,6) - these extended silders seem kinda overdone since the synth starts at (3) which makes it feel really weird that you kinda follow only the half of it, I'd stick to 1/2 for these 2 1.) I don't understand ;w; 2.) Hards are meant to INTRODUCE 3/4 rhythms and these holds play very well.
   01:35:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be nice to avoid overlaps here, rest of the maps is pretty clean so this kinda looks a bit off, maybe could dos omething like this for example
   
   I agree with the first part but I did something else to fix it

Nice set! Really liking the top diff, gl man! RIP to my diff

Wishkey wrote:

Yow! M4M return

Easy

1. 00:38:867 (1,1) - needs more recovery time for an easy diff around 4/1 gap okay
2. 00:55:324 (1) - got some soft cymbals here on a new section start, could maybe use a soft addition fiinish or drumwhisle to indicate that sure
3. 00:55:324 (1) - control + j on the spot would be nice for a bit smoother play beteween (6;1) yeah but not better for 1 - 2, I'll see if anyone else points it out
4. 01:06:295 (1) - ^ soft addition finish works great here, same for 01:28:238 (1) - 01:50:181 (1) - 02:09:381 (1) - (lower volume fade out cymbal at the last one) yeah
   
5. 01:24:124 (2,3) - That rhythm gap here came abit out of nowhere for this section, I think for an easy diff its prob better to start that different rhythm at the major change at 01:28:238 (1,2) - and stick to your current rhythm for this part, I'd suggest making starting 01:24:467 (3) - earlier and into a 2/1, you can hear the sound your following kinda starts on the white tick too but its a bit disguised by the clap sure, but should i keep 4 the same?
6. 01:47:438 (3,4) - just an idea here but why not delete 4 and change 3 into a circle for a bit of break feeling for that quiet down part, gives a little pause for easy players too since the diff currently has no breaks maybe
7. 02:08:009 (2,3) - same as 01:24:124 (2,3) - if you agreed yep
8. The soft finish additions apply to the rest of the diffs aswell if you applied some ye

Light Insane

1. 00:58:752 (3,4,1) - would be nice if you could make this a bit more connected visually, just looks a bit random to fill the ds imo, could try something like this for example fixed
   
2. 01:01:495 (4) - maybe NC this too if you NC 01:02:867 (1) - so theyre all groups of 3 (or delete the last NC) right
3. 01:09:552 (2,3) - could blanket these so you emphasize 01:10:067 (4) - aswell with a jump like the rest in the section good catch
4. 01:13:152 (1,2,3) - would be nice to make the visual distance between 1-2 and tail of 3 and 2 even so this feels more structured while playing the same i think i fixed it but im kinda confused tbh
5. 01:17:781 (2,3,4) - would reduce the jump just a bit by placing 3 more upleft so those slider to circle jumps are more inline with the rest of this section did something
6. 01:27:209 (1,2,3,4) - pretty strong jumps for those really weak tom sounds, would maybe reduce a bit since its kinda buildup towards 01:28:238 (1) - fixed
7. 01:41:438 (5,6,1) - simalr to ^ placing 6 left and build around the visual of 6-5-1 to make it feel more connected and less random done
   

Spark

• 00:45:381 (3,4) - could rearange it like this for similar flow but avoiding that a bit bad overlap
  
  did something else

1. 00:52:238 (4) - would place this more near x240/y208 so you take the sliderleniecy from (63) bit more into account flow wise and you got the jump on the next downbeat sure
2. 01:04:067 (7,8,1) - bit misleading spacing here, would be better if 01:04:067 (7,8) - was still 0.8 ds so you have the change on the next set of 8 notes idk, i wanted to nc every 8 but the synth is on 6 so i changed it there
3. 01:10:752 (2,3,4) - felt kinda off flow wise while playing really wide almost linear movenement here, could try placing (3) at x308/y28 ish for a bit mor anglular movement, makes this play smoother fixed
4. 02:00:467 (5) - why not control + g this one, you kinda introduced it this rhythm and similar placement at 01:57:295 (2,3,4,5,6) - with the 2 same direction ones sliders so could repeat that here since its so similar that its kinda expected to be the same direction too idk i want some variety i guess

Nice set! Really liking the top diff, gl man!

Stingy wrote:

double post!~

[Easy]
00:47:095 (5,6,1) - These shapes are quite conflicting because of the angle changes. With that being said, there isn't a huge need to change them. not sure that i really understand this :p
01:02:181 (3,4,5) - I disagree with this rhythm choice because this part of the song is a build-up. which means that intensity is building. Your rhythm is lowering intensity, which is contradictory to the music. idk I don't think that's a big deal in an easy, i kinda like it the way it is rn. I'll change it if anyone else points it out
01:13:152 (2,3,4,5,6) - THIS is a great use of intensity!~ Even though there is no quickening pace of the snares, you emphasized the end of a phrase. thanks
imo, this difficulty needs to be much more dense to fit with the spread. As of now, there isn't much rhythm variation or difficulty, and the Normal is mapped quite nicely regarding these aspects. Overall, I think it's quite unstructured in the sense that your direction changes are very unexpected and most of the slider shapes don't flow well. There are instances of where you show very good structure and usage of sliders but this is a small minority. yeah i guess the flow could be better but I don't understand why it needs to be more dense.

[Light Insane]
01:00:809 - I like your use of intensity here, but it is very out-of-place when comparing it to the earlier sections. The jumps are very big and unexpected. I suggest toning down the intensity for a few measures then building it up further into the section. fixed
01:03:552 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - For instance, take this. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this idea, but it's very "out of the blue" and is actually really hard to play. I feel like it's expected because of the long buildup, but I also don't want to make these all 1/4 sliders. I'll consider it
01:22:752 (1,2) - Match these two sliders up for aesthetic reasons ;w;. 2's angle isn't lined up well. fixed
There really isn't much else to say about this difficulty. I love your structural ideas and it seems you executed them quite well. The only major issue I have is with the way you cluster difficulty into one section. For the most part, the map flows alright. Some of the sliders (kicks, mainly) could use a bit of reshaping to fit their respective sections, but that comes with mapping itself~

[Spark]
00:44:352 (1,2,3) - Match these angles ;w; eeee my OCD is dying! Although I must say, (3) is a nice slider~ haha, sorry.. and thanks!
01:05:609 (1) - I highly suggest making this a kickslider because there's a hi-hat on the blue tick here and it'd be contradicting to ignore it. uhh, are you sure? I can't hear the anything on the blue tick
Damn~

1. 00:46:752 (4) - might be nice if all of these leading beats were hit circles so that rhythm is different and so that it adds emphasis on the next note
2. 00:49:495 (4) - like this one
3. 00:52:238 (4) - and this one as well
4. 01:30:981 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a bit problematic because it makes 01:31:152 (2) - this note seem just as important as 01:31:324 (3) - this one when they definitely have varying amounts of importance. applies to everywhere else as well

1. 00:45:724 (3,4) - any reason to go against circular flow here and make it bend to the left, adding unnecessary emphasis on 4?
2. 00:45:724 (3) - i dont really like having these held long note on apparently no note, you could argue that you holding over the previous note but id rather it was just a hit circle so that rhythm is a bit lighter and less slidery in the beginning, applies everywher eelse as well until 00:55:324 (1) -
3. 01:03:552 (5) - this would be nice to replace as a 1/1 repeat into hit circle so that the roll doesnt feel as skipped out rhythm wise
4. 01:09:038 (4) - it would be nice to double nc usage in the kiai so that notes feel more important here
5. 01:10:409 (5) - there isnt really a note that this starts on, i would skip until the white beat in the middle and add a 1/1 slider there, would mix up rhythm and follow it better
6. 01:15:895 (5) - i would just put a hit circle on the slider end and remove the start because it doesnt really start on a note here again
7. same suggestions for the rest of this section and the next kiai as this one

1. 00:46:409 (4) - i would remove 00:51:895 (3) - all of 00:49:152 (3) - these sliders and replace them with just a hit circle on the slider end so that rhythm is mixed up and that the synth is more emphasized
2. 01:16:581 (5) - this would be nice as not a repeat but hit circle after because of the synth behind it
3. 01:29:609 (1,2,3) - why is nc usage doubled here, i would keep it like you did in the previous section
4. pretty good kujinn

1. 00:44:352 (1,2,3) - i would probably keep this as a 3/2 slider repeat rhythm in the beginning because its still really calm
2. 00:54:638 (6,7) - these dont really fit as 3/4 sliders because your skipping over a hihat rhythm on the red beats and it loses its emphasis doing it twice in a row like this
3. 01:09:552 (2,3,4) - you only use 1/4 rhythms twice in this entire section and it feels really unnecessary because it doesn't emphasize anything being there,
   they're just kinda there randomly
4. same thing in the next kiai
5. the biggest problem i have with this map is just the WAY overuse of 3/4 sliders and extended notes. like their meant to be used as emphasis usually at lower level difficulties like this and its just over excessive the amount of times you use it that its less emphasizing and more unintuitive rhythm because sy times of the same note you use a 3/4 slider and other times you just dont, making it inconsistent, and even if it was consistent it just feels excessive the amount of times you use it still

1. 01:04:924 (1) - why is this ncd, doesnt really need to be
2. pretty okay

Aeril wrote:

spark

1. 00:46:752 (4) - might be nice if all of these leading beats were hit circles so that rhythm is different and so that it adds emphasis on the next note ehh I only want clickable notes on the melody
2. 00:49:495 (4) - like this one
3. 00:52:238 (4) - and this one as well
4. 01:30:981 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a bit problematic because it makes 01:31:152 (2) - this note seem just as important as 01:31:324 (3) - this one when they definitely have varying amounts of importance. applies to everywhere else as well the straight flow kinda makes it harder to play. on the third note, i could've made it at a sharp angle to 2, but it's straight and everything else flows differently. idk if that's a valid reason but thats what i was thinking

easy

1. 00:45:724 (3,4) - any reason to go against circular flow here and make it bend to the left, adding unnecessary emphasis on 4? fixed
2. 00:45:724 (3) - i dont really like having these held long note on apparently no note, you could argue that you holding over the previous note but id rather it was just a hit circle so that rhythm is a bit lighter and less slidery in the beginning, applies everywher eelse as well until 00:55:324 (1) - okay
3. 01:03:552 (5) - this would be nice to replace as a 1/1 repeat into hit circle so that the roll doesnt feel as skipped out rhythm wise fixed
4. 01:09:038 (4) - it would be nice to double nc usage in the kiai so that notes feel more important here sure
5. 01:10:409 (5) - there isnt really a note that this starts on, i would skip until the white beat in the middle and add a 1/1 slider there, would mix up rhythm and follow it better i dont think it would follow the rhythm better
6. 01:15:895 (5) - i would just put a hit circle on the slider end and remove the start because it doesnt really start on a note here again ill think about it
7. same suggestions for the rest of this section and the next kiai as this one

light insane

1. 01:04:924 (1) - why is this ncd, doesnt really need to be yeah i guess
2. pretty okay

Aeril wrote:

stingy hard

1. 00:44:352 (1,2,3) - i would probably keep this as a 3/2 slider repeat rhythm in the beginning because its still really calm I don't see why
2. 00:54:638 (6,7) - these dont really fit as 3/4 sliders because your skipping over a hihat rhythm on the red beats and it loses its emphasis doing it twice in a row like this I'm not emphasizing the hi-hats though...?
3. 01:09:552 (2,3,4) - you only use 1/4 rhythms twice in this entire section and it feels really unnecessary because it doesn't emphasize anything being there,
   they're just kinda there randomly My reasoning behind this is because 01:10:067 (5,6) - these are kind of like rests for the player, and they are also technically a new rhythm. I have the triplet in front because it adds a sort of "hint" that there is a new rhythm coming.
4. same thing in the next kiai
5. the biggest problem i have with this map is just the WAY overuse of 3/4 sliders and extended notes. like their meant to be used as emphasis usually at lower level difficulties like this and its just over excessive the amount of times you use it that its less emphasizing and more unintuitive rhythm because sy times of the same note you use a 3/4 slider and other times you just dont, making it inconsistent, and even if it was consistent it just feels excessive the amount of times you use it still I really disagree with these because I listen to the synths when placing 3/4 sliders. The main reason for this is because they're the melody and that's the most important part along with the drums. If I follow the drums throughout the whole thing, it's extremely boring... Also, notice how I do it on every other 4-beat measure... This is called consistency.

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! Forgive me for the huge delay, I've been quite busy lately. So... M4M~ A mod in return as promised!

[- - Easy - -]

1. 00:38:867 (1) - Well, the offset's volume level just made this spinner quite too loud as far as I can hear, especially the end of it. I would suggest reducing the volume to somewhere like... approximately 50%-60%? Because it's a long intro before the spinner, it might probably be best to keep the objects' audibility down somehow. good catch
2. 00:55:324 (1) - At the very end of this slider, it could've been a drum clap that would amplify the percussion here rather than soft. You also did add some drum claps after this part. So, just saying it here in case you care about consistency. fixed
3. 01:47:438 - Nearly the same thing about the volume stuff on the first mod, but kinda a little different this time. This part as well a little too loud based on the volume set, since the song track over this section doesn't seem to have a huge impact right before the chorus drops. So it might okay if you'd lower the volume here too. just by a bit
4. - Speaking about volume that is hitsound-related, I can really tell that it applies onto some of the other difficulties in the set too. This difficulty is quite okay enough for me honestly, but you've probably need to pay more attention to volume control next time.

[- - Kuijinn - -]

1. 00:58:067 (1,2) - Maybe you could try something much appealing here by using the structure here. I might say these two sliders can be flipped vertically and adjust a few placements for this kind of structural flow or something similar. Not actually the most perfect pattern to suffice a smoother flow, but at least it may help out the execution of structure at some point.
2. 01:38:524 (3,4) - Technically, I don't really find this pattern coherent having a strange overlap, especially when it comes to normal difficulties. But really, I don't really recommend such clustered sliders and overlapping in a very strange way of executing the pattern. I would mind to make these two sliders split, and do the other way around. You could at least do something similar with a way you've previously did on 01:33:038 (3,4) - for visibility and consistency too.

[- - Stingy - -]

1. 00:51:552 (5) - There's this pitched melody on this part that has a pretty clear beats. I'd probably say, it might be a lot better if this slider would be replaced to two circles in order to emphasize the melody much dense and suitable. It might make the rhythm composition a little out of nowhere, but it'll work much better in comparison to the slider.
2. 01:14:181 (7,1,2) - In my point of view, that kinda looks a bit clustered looking by the structure and some stacking usage over there. Would probably overlap (7) and (2) rather than stacking it up with a slider head and tail. You could try to map it out by using slider (2)'s straight angle behind slider (7)'s head afterwards, something like this might inspire you or something else in a weird way.
3. 01:35:438 (2) - I guess you missed a hitsounding spot here for keeping up with the percussion? Might you wanna add a clap here for sure. Just saying..
4. 02:08:009 (4,5,6,7) - You almost did something pretty good here, almost. The overlapping between the two sliders were okay, but the next few circles kinda disintegrate the structural flow somehow. So it's either because of the next three circles' placements, or the slider position could be a little misplaced. I would actually suggest to either flip the slider's position and redo the curve a little, or maybe make the slider flow towards the next circle, or move away one of the three circles. Well, there are many options somehow, but you may do it your own way.

[- - Light Insane - -]

1. 00:51:552 (2,3,4) - I think this triangle could've been done the opposite of where its heading of flow, because of the previous slider's positioning. Could just easily select all these three circles and do some of your Ctrl + G way of mapping or so. That being said, It'll also stack up a circle on slider (5)'s head which makes it a little dense enough to barely notice the change of the emphasis between the notes and the song track. imo the flow seems fine and i don't want to make a 1/2 stack either
2. 00:54:295 (2,3) - Well, that's somehow an unnecessary small jump on a calm part that's merely close to the buildup section or something. You could've done it on 00:55:152 (4,1) - instead, but it was already been done. So why creating such jump here only for the sake of structure? You might wanna reconsider this or something. okay
3. 01:04:924 (2) - How about adding a new combo here? You've probably added a few of them each snare that lands in the song track to perform a distress stream, so adding just one more on this streaming slider would literally give you the glimpse of combo consistency with 01:03:552 (1,1,1) - . that's how i originally had it but i think one or two people said the nc wasn't necessary. I'll change it again i guess
4. 01:13:838 (3,4,1) - Over these couple of jumps, there's this differential jump intensity that could be a little contradictory. I mean like, one of the jumps is probably bigger than another and it's most likely one of those jumps doesn't fit the song track's dense parts in order to amplify the intensity. Let's say, the two linear sliders on 01:13:838 (3,4) - has a spacing of above 2.7x while the other jump on 01:14:181 (4,1) - is partially smaller than the previous. I'd simply say, you may wanna swap them out by placing them a little closer. You can keep the patterning for the aesthetics if you want, but just try to reduce the huge jump on (3) and (4). fixed
5. 01:27:209 (1,2,3,4) - To me, I kinda feel this part over those notes somehow lacks a bit of hitsounding. The drums over the song track's background is distinctly audible and would be worth adding some hitsounds for it to amplify. Would recommend drum sampleset hitsound for the music change though. fixed

[- - Spark - -]

1. 00:43:667 (1,2,1) - 00:54:638 (1,2,1) - There's some small visual issue with these two parts around this particular section of the song track. You've quite used some 2/4 rhythm compositions here, yeah. But the distance spacing could really tell the huge difference over these two. That being said, the second part is actually a lot bigger than the first one due to the buildup section. But visually, it could probably be a little tricky to players on gameplay with these two having the same rhythm but different structuring. You might need to be a little more consistent towards spacing mostly or somewhat. fixed
2. 01:27:209 (1,2,1,2) - Exactly the same thing about the hitsounding, and therefore as well the next section after the note that has a finish hitsound on 01:28:238 -. fixed the hitsounds, but what do you mean in the second part of that sentence
3. 01:29:095 (8,9) - 01:31:838 (8,9) - 01:33:209 (7,8) - 01:37:324 (8,9) - 01:42:809 (8,9) - Alright, this may lead to something much major than the other issue about distance spacing. Probably all these parts, and the rest of those similar to these, are literally inconsistent based on execution and correspondence to emphasis. And because of that, this whole section of the song track's sound waves and drums technically sounds the same by density. So there's no actual reason to vary such spacing or patterning in terms of relevancy or emphasis. I highly recommend to comprise the unnecessary jumps that's after the five-circle streams to progress the flow at the same rate. For short, consist the jumps equally by distance spacing. well i kinda adjusted some, but the DS doesn't vary by a lot anyway and imo it all plays similarly.

In my honest opinion, the mapset looks pretty solid. You could've tried to polish some of the structures in some difficulties, especially the mid difficulties at some point. Overall execution and concept was pretty much fine though. Just some issues about the hitsounding and a bit of rhythm and emphasis in harder difficulties that needs more tweaking and refinements.

That is all for now, great song~
Best of luck!

also grats on BN

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

[- - Stingy - -]

1. 00:51:552 (5) - There's this pitched melody on this part that has a pretty clear beats. I'd probably say, it might be a lot better if this slider would be replaced to two circles in order to emphasize the melody much dense and suitable. It might make the rhythm composition a little out of nowhere, but it'll work much better in comparison to the slider. I did this sort of idea in the kiai, and since this entire beginning is based on sliders and patterning, I'd like to leave it. It is less exciting than the kiai so that's another reason.
2. 01:14:181 (7,1,2) - In my point of view, that kinda looks a bit clustered looking by the structure and some stacking usage over there. Would probably overlap (7) and (2) rather than stacking it up with a slider head and tail. You could try to map it out by using slider (2)'s straight angle behind slider (7)'s head afterwards, something like this might inspire you or something else in a weird way. ;w;w;w???
3. 01:35:438 (2) - I guess you missed a hitsounding spot here for keeping up with the percussion? Might you wanna add a clap here for sure. Just saying.. oops ;w;
4. 02:08:009 (4,5,6,7) - You almost did something pretty good here, almost. The overlapping between the two sliders were okay, but the next few circles kinda disintegrate the structural flow somehow. So it's either because of the next three circles' placements, or the slider position could be a little misplaced. I would actually suggest to either flip the slider's position and redo the curve a little, or maybe make the slider flow towards the next circle, or move away one of the three circles. Well, there are many options somehow, but you may do it your own way. Did something!~

Xayler wrote:

Stingy's Hard
01:21:724 (6,7) - From structure perspective, they are way too close imo. 01:20:695 (4,6,7) - they aren't equal in terms of spacing as well. I did a liiiittle something ;w;
01:24:809 (6,7) - As I saw the same rhythm at the beginning, I already thought that sth maybe would make it better. I'd recommend to stack them so the slider would feel better for the rhythm choice as well, otherwise imo that slider is kinda off. 1.) I don't understand. 2.) I don't really like 1/2 or 1/1 stacks >.>
01:35:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - Equal the spacings a bit more here? Would be better to the eye as well, for example 01:35:095 (1,4) - these are way too close and 01:35:095 (1,2) - these the opposite.
I think it looks quite good ;w; Also, wtf? It's all DS so idk what you mean anyway ;w;w;w;

Ohwow wrote:

m4m

[Kujinn's Normal]
00:44:352 (2) - Should NC here since it's the start of the measure. Also tbh, 00:43:667 (1) - this slider could be deleted, it's best to start on a beginning of a measure, even though there's sound beforehand.
00:47:095 (1) - Could use an extra gray node to better blanket with 00:48:467 (2) -
01:17:267 (1,2) - These look a little too clumped/too close for comfort compared to the other ones agree, but it was the only pattern I could think of at the time and it doesn't hinder gameplay.
01:28:238 (1,2,3) - cntrl+g this 01:28:752 (2,3) - would be better rhythm to follow the melody. Same with 01:30:981 (1,2,3) - 01:33:724 (1,2,3) - 01:36:467 (1,2,3) - 01:39:209 (1,2,3) - 01:41:952 (1,2,3) - 01:44:695 (1,2,3) - You still get to keep these: 01:29:609 (1,2,3) - 01:40:581 (1,2,3) - and some other ones since the melody isn't changing there.
01:29:609 (1) - From here til 01:50:181 - Your NCs changed from every 2 measure to every 1 measure. You need to keep the NC's consistent or else it's going to mess up the health drain.
^ Some of your NCs in the kiai are inconsistent in the kiai as well, need to look over.
01:55:667 (1,2,3) - this looks better imo --> https://i.gyazo.com/4cf71be2528d801e199 ... f6754f.jpg
pretty good for the most part.

Wishkey wrote:

Yow! M4M retur

Normal

1. 00:55:324 (1,2,3) - if your making a 1/2 rhythm here then I'd also repeat it at 00:58:067 (1,2) - since its similar music wise and you don't have a standalone 1/2 rhythm for the intro one has sound on red tick inbetween the white and one doesn't.
2. 01:28:238 (1) - NC concept kinda breaks here, would stick to either one every downbeat or one every 2 downbeats for the entire map
3. 01:38:352 (2,3,4,1) - the flow changs and major overlap seems a bit too much here compared to the rest of the diff, prob better if you could rearrange 01:38:524 (3,4,1) - so this is just regelar circlar/linear flow instead of the flow breaks like you did with the rest

Stingy wrote:

[Kujinn's Normal]
wew nice sliders my dude oWo
01:28:238 - Hm... I feel like here, you could have much more rhythm variation than you do. I see that you have some different rhythms to start with, but I think that this section could be much more interesting and more fun to play with more types of rhythm. Ohwow's mod helped me realise that.
01:38:524 (3,4,1) - eeee I don't know how visible this is for sightreading but I don't really think it's an issue? I fear that someone might bring it up. I personally think it's a teeny bit cluttered compared to the other patterns in the section, but I still think it should be okay. changed from previous mod.
01:46:067 (1,2,3) - Gero is that you? :thinking: lol

Aeril wrote:

kujinn normal

1. 00:46:409 (4) - i would remove 00:51:895 (3) - all of 00:49:152 (3) - these sliders and replace them with just a hit circle on the slider end so that rhythm is mixed up and that the synth is more emphasized
2. 01:16:581 (5) - this would be nice as not a repeat but hit circle after because of the synth behind it
3. 01:29:609 (1,2,3) - why is nc usage doubled here, i would keep it like you did in the previous section
4. pretty good kujinn

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

[- - Kuijinn - -]

1. 00:58:067 (1,2) - Maybe you could try something much appealing here by using the structure here. I might say these two sliders can be flipped vertically and adjust a few placements for this kind of structural flow or something similar. Not actually the most perfect pattern to suffice a smoother flow, but at least it may help out the execution of structure at some point.
2. 01:38:524 (3,4) - Technically, I don't really find this pattern coherent having a strange overlap, especially when it comes to normal difficulties. But really, I don't really recommend such clustered sliders and overlapping in a very strange way of executing the pattern. I would mind to make these two sliders split, and do the other way around. You could at least do something similar with a way you've previously did on 01:33:038 (3,4) - for visibility and consistency too.

Xayler wrote:

Kujinn's Normal
00:46:409 (4) - The movement is pretty rough this way, ctrl+h would make it better for flow as well.
00:48:467 (2) - For this one I'd recommend the same, although it would mess up a lot of your next things. Flow is a lot better this way for this one for sure.
01:24:124 (4) - Would recommend ctrl+j here. (not gonna repeat the flow one)
01:38:524 (3,4) - I think that the overlap is a bit too much here, I'd not overlap them as much here.
01:44:352 (4) - Recommending ctrl+h and ctrl+g here.

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Xayler wrote:

Oh hey there, been a while since we did M4M again! c:

Easy
00:47:095 (5) - This slider seems out of place as I checked other ones, I think that it's different so I'd recommend to copy 00:58:067 (4) - this one and use it there also for more similarity, it's only good for Easy! sure
01:00:809 (1,2) - The movement between these is very harsh, maybe do something like you did 01:13:152 (2,3) - here? I can't really do the exact same thing as there but I think I fixed the flow

Spark
01:23:267 (3,5) - I'd highly recommend to make (5) a bit better to see, otherwise it would bring a lot of confusion. Idk I personally don't think it's confusing at all

Nothing much to tell, imo the diffs are pretty decent. Just with a bit better structure learning and you all will be making some nice maps soon. Good luck!
Gonna give the map just in case: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/677685

Log Off Now wrote:

sorry this is so late

[General]

01:06:295 - any reason why this part isn't a kiai considering 01:50:181 - is and they sound very similar? yeah the kiai has different drum patterns, I might change it later i guess

[Easy]

00:52:581 (4,5) - maybe make a cute blanket? sure
01:10:409 (2,2) - fix stack fixed
01:21:381 (2,3) - any reason why you didnt use the same rhythm as you did 01:15:895 (2,3) - for these two notes? i personally prefer the first pattern since it makes the changing notes clickable, although if you wanted to add even more emphasis on these two high pitch notes i would maybe try a rhythm like this. i makes the rhythm more dense but i think thats ok considering the intensity of the melody here yeah youère right, I matched the rhythms
01:52:924 (4) - nc this for consistency with the first part
01:58:409 (4) - ^same
02:03:895 (4) - ^same yeah mb

[Light Insane]

01:16:067 (1,2) - im not rly sure about this huge spacing jump when you don't really represent this rhythm like this anywhere else in the song with this much spacing, i would consider reducing a bit (and if not, can you at least fix up the visual spacing here 01:16:067 (1,2,3) - a little bit?) itès not that huge, fixed visual spacing tho
01:34:238 (3,5) - nazi fix parallel yep

couldn't find much tbh, i was a little but unsure about the lack of triples in the midsection of the map but you used them in the latter part so i think its ok

[Spark]

00:46:752 (4,1) - i would space (1) a bit further away to keep the visual spacing here consistent uhh i don't want to change the pattern too much, I might change it if someone else suggests it
not sure how i feel about the intro being less dense than the light insane, especially here 00:50:867 (3) - tbh i just wanted to keep it really simple on light insane. I don't know if it's too much of a problem rn so ill keep it
01:16:924 (4,4) - try keep the overlap distance similar to what you use for the rest of this section ye
02:00:809 (7,1) - any reason why this distance spacing is much bigger here for this gap than what you use for the rest of the map, i would stick to the previously used ds since it seems a bit inconsistent here (also if you do this, make sure to respace 02:01:324 (2,3,4) - ) there's actually this spacing a lot in this part of the map
02:09:467 (1) - i would map the melody here with sliders and then start the spinner on the last one since it doesn't really make sense to stop following the melody right at the end, and reducing the note density here instead of completely dropping it off would benefit the ending imo really nice idea!

gl!

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

m4m from queue uwu
sorry for late lmao

Spark

1. 00:44:352 (1) - Might confuse players a bit because they might think it's a 1/2 gap but instead it's 1/4, make the spacing same as 00:43:667 (1,2) - and there isn't any strong sound on the beat so it's pretty much unjustified
2. 00:44:867 (2) - Why is the spacing here so big? Also the flow is kinda bad, make the spacing smaller i think its fine
3. 00:47:609 (2) - Ctrl+G I want to keep the flow
4. 00:49:495 (4,1) - This flows bad it's okay
5. 00:50:867 (3) - There's a strong piano sound here so you should increase the spacing the problem is that all other sliders like this one have consistent spacing with the 1/1 sliders before
6. 00:52:238 (4) - Ctrl+J cause flow okay
7. 00:56:695 (1) - The sound on this tick has the same amount of emphasis as 00:55:667 (3,4) - so you should make spacing the same i9t's a buildup tho
8. 01:00:124 (3) - Same as above fixed
9. 01:01:152 (3) - 01:01:838 (3) - 01:02:524 (3) - Make this into circles to indicate that the song is getting more and more intense I feel like that would be too many circles
10. 01:35:609 (3,4,5) - Make this same as 01:34:238 (4,5,6,7,8) - for consistency or turn it into circles if you're emphasizing the synth sound the wording here is kinda confusing but the point is I want to emphasize the synth there with something different
11. 01:48:124 (3) - Increase spacing for the kick fixed

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Only this diff cause i'm tired xd

Chaoslitz wrote:

m4m

[General]

1. Increase the volume of soft-hitclap2, right now it is too soft compared to soft-hitclap alright
2. Can add blank soft-sliderslide since the default sliderslide doesnt really fit sure
3. 00:43:667 to 00:55:324 is lacking hitsound feedback, you can add soft whistles to higher pitch sounds I added whistles to piano notes

[Easy]

1. 01:04:581 (6,7) - Better not to reverse the direction of flow in the same combo, you can try something like this: alright
   
   
2. 01:25:495 (4) - Missing NC, and missing drum-hitnormal at slider tail i guess? yeah whoops

[Spark]

1. Can use od 7.5-8 so that it won't be the same as light insane fixed
2. 00:50:867 (3) - mute sliderend?ye

call me back for recheck, and i will see if im gonna push this forward depends on how mods above are replied o/

Log Off Now wrote:

[Kujinn's Normal]

00:46:409 (3) - i would try make this slider end clickable since this is where the note changes
00:51:209 (2,3) - i feel like this rhythm can be a bit more interesting to follow the new instrument in the music, maybe try something like this??, it makes the rhythm more dense but i think the music warrants that here
01:11:095 (5) - maybe ctrl + h and replace this for a cooler aesthetic (imo) like you did here 01:15:895 (4,5) - ?
01:13:152 (4,5) - nazi parallel can be improved
01:35:781 (6) - this is the only time you use this repeat slider rhythm in this section and it feels a bit inconsistent (even though it works), i would try and use this somewhere else in this section, maybe here 01:41:267 (6) - ? so it doesn't seem so out of place (alternatively you can use the rhythm on (6) in place of the repeat slider)
02:05:952 (5,6) - i would use the same rhythm you used here 02:00:467 (5,6) - since they're very similar musically yet use different rhythms

Chaoslitz wrote:

m4m

[Normal]

1. 00:52:238 (3) - I don't understand why this is mapped same as 00:49:495 (3), because the main melody is on red tick instead of white
2. 01:15:895 (4) - Make it parallel with 01:16:581 (5) for better flow?
3. 01:47:438 (1) - Would be better to follow the main melody instead of ending it on 01:48:124
   
4. 02:10:409 (1) - I dont think you need a NC here

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Strategas wrote:

[all diffs except kujinn]
don't think you need a spinner in the start, you already have spinners elsewhere so it's unnecessary alright
[spark]
00:44:009 (2,1) - could be less spaced tbh, looks exactly like your 1/2 spacing but it's overlapping tho?
02:08:524 (4,5,6,7) - flow could be better fixed

[easy]
01:10:409 - at places where there's no beat here I think it's better if you just made a short 1/2 slider at 01:10:581 - or remove one repeat from 01:09:038 (1) - and have clickable objects at 01:10:067 - something similar to the later section 01:30:981 (3,4) - uhh idk I think the rhythm sounds okay right now

Log Off Now wrote:

[Stingy's Hard]

01:26:609 (1) - i don't really agree with the spinner here, there is nothing building up in the music for the first half of it and theres a drum fill halfway through that i think would be beneficial to map at this level of difficulty I agree because of the sustained synth
02:07:152 (2,4) - i would move (4) further towards the middle of the slider so that the edges of each slider head dont overlap in default skin ok

Chaoslitz wrote:

m4m

[notice][General]

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  [Hard]

1. I really suggest you to reduce those distance snap of objects after 00:55:324, right now they are spaced too far (for example you can use 1.1x-1.2x during kiai sections) I don't see why? It's distance snapped to everything else...
2. Please add a blank normal sliderslide =_=, this is too noisy and not fitting at all wtf don't blame me :c
3. 01:31:495 (2) - I dont think it is a good idea to introduce 1/4 sliders in a hard diff, a single note will be fine fix but idk about the repeats?
4. 01:46:924 (5,1) - well the flow is bad and isnt look good lol ;w; okie

Strategas wrote:

[all diffs except kujinn]
don't think you need a spinner in the start, you already have spinners elsewhere so it's unnecessary alright
[stingy]
01:31:495 (2) -01:32:867 (3) - 01:36:981 (2) - 01:38:352 (3) - I'd avoid 1/4 sliders for hard diff tbh 2late chaoslitz mentioned already <3
01:46:924 (5) - don't really agree with the rhythm choice lol i do lol 01:35:095 - lol consistency tho lol uwu);;

Chaoslitz wrote:

@Stingy the current distance snap doesn't look good in visual spacing because objects are pretty spaced, also it will be more difficult for players to aim with, just consider it in future maps x3

01:46:924 (5) - I mean the red anchor suddenly changes the flow in sharp angle which isn't good lol

call me back againnn

Strategas wrote:

ready for qualify?

Strategas wrote:

ready for qualify?

Strategas wrote:

ready for qualify?

_orange wrote:

[spark]
00:44:009 (2,1) - could be less spaced tbh, looks exactly like your 1/2 spacing but it's overlapping tho?

_orange wrote:

ty so much
i did it