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[Spark]
00:44:352 (1,2,3) - Mmm sry this pattern doesn't look that great right now imo. Would suggest something different. (If you really want to keep that pattern, sharpen the angles of the sliders a more, would look a lot better imo: https://i.gyazo.com/4184ad232186b04bfa5 ... 4282ac.jpg
00:47:095 (1,2,3) - ^same, it doesn't look natural to play nor does it look good. I get you're trying to have that 60 degree pattern, but having that as a mechanic for structure isn't enough. The long slider doesn't look too good either.
00:45:381 (3,4) - current blanket is not perfect, fix
00:49:495 (4) - just make the slider point to the right for better flow.
00:49:838 (1,2,3) - just wanted to say this one looks a bit better at least
00:54:638 (1,2) - any reason to make these extended sliders and to silence the ends of those? Just regular 1/1 sliders like what you've been using would be more consistent.
01:04:238 (3) - I feel like this should be NC instead of 01:04:067 (1) - and 01:04:581 (1) - but i guess you're following the electric melody thingy. Tbh the drum sound on the white ticks are more prominent. Also you were following the percussions on 01:00:809 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - so it'd make sense to keep following the drums.
01:05:267 (1) - Don't think you need to NC this
01:10:752 (2) - this slider stands out a lot from the normal straight/curved sliders you used, but nothing really special happenings in the music that could support it.
01:11:438 (4,1) - ^similar
[Light Insane]
01:04:581 (1,2) - something tells me that these two should be in the same color combo. Maybe NC?
01:22:752 (1) - same with the top diff, nothing special in the song to support the special slider.
Hmm not bad
[Stingy's Hard]
00:55:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not liking how the rhythm density is lower here but the song gets a bit more intense compared to the section before this one. Should try to follow the melody like you've done before.
01:03:552 (1,2) - I would just make the 1/4 sliders repeat twice and put them on 01:03:552 - 01:03:895 - 01:04:238 - and 01:04:581 - to emphasize the white ticks cause they seem the loudest imo.
01:04:924 - could use a repeat slider instead of a spinner to keep on mapping that 1/4 beat.
01:16:495 - tbh i feel like you're overusing the extended 3/4 sliders. It really makes the rhythm feel less intense since you're not amplifying the intensity by mapping the red ticks. happens at 01:17:181 - 01:19:924 - and many other places on the other kiai too.
01:07:667 (5) - ^similar reasoning, mapping with 1/1 sliders with a repeat makes the rhythm density seem weak, when it should more intense in this section.
01:10:067 (5,6) - ^
01:36:124 - You're skipping this loud beat here :/ and why the silence on the sliderend?
01:46:924 (5) - 01:57:895 (8) - 02:08:867 (8) - same ^
01:30:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:36:467 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - why tf are these two copy and pasted. The method of mapping is heavily discouraged.
01:53:952 (4,5) - Should make into 2 1/2 sliders instead.
You might want to work on the hitsounds too, they don't really sound too great.
This diff could use some more work.
[Kujinn's Normal]
00:44:352 (2) - Should NC here since it's the start of the measure. Also tbh, 00:43:667 (1) - this slider could be deleted, it's best to start on a beginning of a measure, even though there's sound beforehand.
00:47:095 (1) - Could use an extra gray node to better blanket with 00:48:467 (2) -
01:17:267 (1,2) - These look a little too clumped/too close for comfort compared to the other ones
01:28:238 (1,2,3) - cntrl+g this 01:28:752 (2,3) - would be better rhythm to follow the melody. Same with 01:30:981 (1,2,3) - 01:33:724 (1,2,3) - 01:36:467 (1,2,3) - 01:39:209 (1,2,3) - 01:41:952 (1,2,3) - 01:44:695 (1,2,3) - You still get to keep these: 01:29:609 (1,2,3) - 01:40:581 (1,2,3) - and some other ones since the melody isn't changing there.
01:29:609 (1) - From here til 01:50:181 - Your NCs changed from every 2 measure to every 1 measure. You need to keep the NC's consistent or else it's going to mess up the health drain.
^ Some of your NCs in the kiai are inconsistent in the kiai as well, need to look over.
01:55:667 (1,2,3) - this looks better imo --> https://i.gyazo.com/4cf71be2528d801e199 ... f6754f.jpg
pretty good for the most part.
[Easy]
01:02:181 (3,4) - Make into 2 1/1 sliders like the 2 sliders before? I see no reason to change it up here.
01:03:552 (5) - should NC here.
01:14:524 (4,5) - can blanket a bit better.
01:24:124 (2,3) - Not liking the 3/2 gap here when you've been consistent with 1/1 gap in this section.
01:25:495 (4,5) - ^
Not bad.
Could use some more polishing, but i really do like some concepts you used in your maps. Keep up the good work man!
[Spark]
00:44:352 (1,2,3) - Mmm sry this pattern doesn't look that great right now imo. Would suggest something different. (If you really want to keep that pattern, sharpen the angles of the sliders a more, would look a lot better imo: https://i.gyazo.com/4184ad232186b04bfa5 ... 4282ac.jpg
00:47:095 (1,2,3) - ^same, it doesn't look natural to play nor does it look good. I get you're trying to have that 60 degree pattern, but having that as a mechanic for structure isn't enough. The long slider doesn't look too good either.
00:45:381 (3,4) - current blanket is not perfect, fix
00:49:495 (4) - just make the slider point to the right for better flow.
00:49:838 (1,2,3) - just wanted to say this one looks a bit better at least
00:54:638 (1,2) - any reason to make these extended sliders and to silence the ends of those? Just regular 1/1 sliders like what you've been using would be more consistent.
01:04:238 (3) - I feel like this should be NC instead of 01:04:067 (1) - and 01:04:581 (1) - but i guess you're following the electric melody thingy. Tbh the drum sound on the white ticks are more prominent. Also you were following the percussions on 01:00:809 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - so it'd make sense to keep following the drums.
01:05:267 (1) - Don't think you need to NC this
01:10:752 (2) - this slider stands out a lot from the normal straight/curved sliders you used, but nothing really special happenings in the music that could support it.
01:11:438 (4,1) - ^similar
[Light Insane]
01:04:581 (1,2) - something tells me that these two should be in the same color combo. Maybe NC?
01:22:752 (1) - same with the top diff, nothing special in the song to support the special slider.
Hmm not bad
[Stingy's Hard]
00:55:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not liking how the rhythm density is lower here but the song gets a bit more intense compared to the section before this one. Should try to follow the melody like you've done before.
01:03:552 (1,2) - I would just make the 1/4 sliders repeat twice and put them on 01:03:552 - 01:03:895 - 01:04:238 - and 01:04:581 - to emphasize the white ticks cause they seem the loudest imo.
01:04:924 - could use a repeat slider instead of a spinner to keep on mapping that 1/4 beat.
01:16:495 - tbh i feel like you're overusing the extended 3/4 sliders. It really makes the rhythm feel less intense since you're not amplifying the intensity by mapping the red ticks. happens at 01:17:181 - 01:19:924 - and many other places on the other kiai too.
01:07:667 (5) - ^similar reasoning, mapping with 1/1 sliders with a repeat makes the rhythm density seem weak, when it should more intense in this section.
01:10:067 (5,6) - ^
01:36:124 - You're skipping this loud beat here :/ and why the silence on the sliderend?
01:46:924 (5) - 01:57:895 (8) - 02:08:867 (8) - same ^
01:30:981 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:36:467 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - why tf are these two copy and pasted. The method of mapping is heavily discouraged.
01:53:952 (4,5) - Should make into 2 1/2 sliders instead.
You might want to work on the hitsounds too, they don't really sound too great.
This diff could use some more work.
[Kujinn's Normal]
00:44:352 (2) - Should NC here since it's the start of the measure. Also tbh, 00:43:667 (1) - this slider could be deleted, it's best to start on a beginning of a measure, even though there's sound beforehand.
00:47:095 (1) - Could use an extra gray node to better blanket with 00:48:467 (2) -
01:17:267 (1,2) - These look a little too clumped/too close for comfort compared to the other ones
01:28:238 (1,2,3) - cntrl+g this 01:28:752 (2,3) - would be better rhythm to follow the melody. Same with 01:30:981 (1,2,3) - 01:33:724 (1,2,3) - 01:36:467 (1,2,3) - 01:39:209 (1,2,3) - 01:41:952 (1,2,3) - 01:44:695 (1,2,3) - You still get to keep these: 01:29:609 (1,2,3) - 01:40:581 (1,2,3) - and some other ones since the melody isn't changing there.
01:29:609 (1) - From here til 01:50:181 - Your NCs changed from every 2 measure to every 1 measure. You need to keep the NC's consistent or else it's going to mess up the health drain.
^ Some of your NCs in the kiai are inconsistent in the kiai as well, need to look over.
01:55:667 (1,2,3) - this looks better imo --> https://i.gyazo.com/4cf71be2528d801e199 ... f6754f.jpg
pretty good for the most part.
[Easy]
01:02:181 (3,4) - Make into 2 1/1 sliders like the 2 sliders before? I see no reason to change it up here.
01:03:552 (5) - should NC here.
01:14:524 (4,5) - can blanket a bit better.
01:24:124 (2,3) - Not liking the 3/2 gap here when you've been consistent with 1/1 gap in this section.
01:25:495 (4,5) - ^
Not bad.
Could use some more polishing, but i really do like some concepts you used in your maps. Keep up the good work man!