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- 00:46:752 (4) - might be nice if all of these leading beats were hit circles so that rhythm is different and so that it adds emphasis on the next note
- 00:49:495 (4) - like this one
- 00:52:238 (4) - and this one as well
- 01:30:981 (1,2,3) - this pattern is a bit problematic because it makes 01:31:152 (2) - this note seem just as important as 01:31:324 (3) - this one when they definitely have varying amounts of importance. applies to everywhere else as well
- 00:45:724 (3,4) - any reason to go against circular flow here and make it bend to the left, adding unnecessary emphasis on 4?
- 00:45:724 (3) - i dont really like having these held long note on apparently no note, you could argue that you holding over the previous note but id rather it was just a hit circle so that rhythm is a bit lighter and less slidery in the beginning, applies everywher eelse as well until 00:55:324 (1) -
- 01:03:552 (5) - this would be nice to replace as a 1/1 repeat into hit circle so that the roll doesnt feel as skipped out rhythm wise
- 01:09:038 (4) - it would be nice to double nc usage in the kiai so that notes feel more important here
- 01:10:409 (5) - there isnt really a note that this starts on, i would skip until the white beat in the middle and add a 1/1 slider there, would mix up rhythm and follow it better
- 01:15:895 (5) - i would just put a hit circle on the slider end and remove the start because it doesnt really start on a note here again
- same suggestions for the rest of this section and the next kiai as this one
- 00:46:409 (4) - i would remove 00:51:895 (3) - all of 00:49:152 (3) - these sliders and replace them with just a hit circle on the slider end so that rhythm is mixed up and that the synth is more emphasized
- 01:16:581 (5) - this would be nice as not a repeat but hit circle after because of the synth behind it
- 01:29:609 (1,2,3) - why is nc usage doubled here, i would keep it like you did in the previous section
- pretty good kujinn
- 00:44:352 (1,2,3) - i would probably keep this as a 3/2 slider repeat rhythm in the beginning because its still really calm
- 00:54:638 (6,7) - these dont really fit as 3/4 sliders because your skipping over a hihat rhythm on the red beats and it loses its emphasis doing it twice in a row like this
- 01:09:552 (2,3,4) - you only use 1/4 rhythms twice in this entire section and it feels really unnecessary because it doesn't emphasize anything being there,
they're just kinda there randomly - same thing in the next kiai
- the biggest problem i have with this map is just the WAY overuse of 3/4 sliders and extended notes. like their meant to be used as emphasis usually at lower level difficulties like this and its just over excessive the amount of times you use it that its less emphasizing and more unintuitive rhythm because sy times of the same note you use a 3/4 slider and other times you just dont, making it inconsistent, and even if it was consistent it just feels excessive the amount of times you use it still
- 01:04:924 (1) - why is this ncd, doesnt really need to be
- pretty okay