Chorogons - Ishukan Communication(TV size) [Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Skylish
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2019年3月27日 at 19:23:31

Artist: Chorogons
Title: Ishukan Communication(TV size)
Source: 小林さんちのメイドラゴン
Tags: 松井洋平 佐藤純一 rionos ending ed Kobayashi-san Chi no Meidoragon Miss Maid Dragon maidragon トール 桑原由気 Kuwahara Yuuki カンナ 長縄まりあ Naganawa Maria エルマ 高田憂希 Takada Yuuki ルコア 高橋未奈美 Takahashi Minami Taiko
BPM: 107.96
Filesize: 2690kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dragon Inner Oni (5.63 stars, 430 notes)
  2. Futsuu (2.36 stars, 159 notes)
  3. Kantan (0.88 stars, 95 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3.12 stars, 273 notes)
  5. Oni (4.4 stars, 354 notes)


Download: Chorogons - Ishukan Communication(TV size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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3/16lish #1 , Ranklish #2, Unranklish #1

I am so done with the 1/16 time snaps.

Metadata check:

Source: http://maidragon.jp/product/cd/soundtrack.php
davidminh0111
Hello from modding queue:
[Oni]
00:21:590: Change k to fit the pitch
00:32:660: Change to d
00:53:642: Change to k
01:05:036: Change to K

[Muzukashii]
00:07:231: Change to k
00:44:193: Same
00:47:528 (2, 3, 4): Swap k to 00:48:361 (2, 3, 4)

Sorry for short mod, but good map, im fan
btw, good luck
davidminh0111
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404 AccNotFound
hi ( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ
from your queue~
Thanks for accepting <3



[ Normal ]

00:49:473 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8024525.



[ Kantan ]

00:30:575 (32) - delete? for little rest after the end of the stream.

00:56:977 (11) - K. all of notes are 1/1 beat without here, so, for emphasize 1/2 beat, continuing 00:56:143 (10) trumpet sound.
01:05:870 (22) - ^

01:10:594 (27) - move to 01:10:455 (27) or delete? 1/4 is really hard for kantan, but to me, there isn't any sound at 01:10:594

01:11:706 (28,29,30,31) - d D k K so that looks beautiful ٩(ٌ>◡<ٌ)۶



[ Futsuu ]

00:10:010 (2) - delete? for avoid 00:08:343 (11,12,1,2,3,4,1) this offbeat long stream.

00:14:457 (5) - ^. for avoid multy beat stream.
00:16:680 (2) - ^

00:52:252 (6) - delete for consistence with 00:50:029. same 01:01:145.



[ Muzukashii ]

00:03:896 (10,11,12) - little unmatched to me. cause this song is offbeat, and use 1/3,1/6 in muzukashii, i'd like to use patterns like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025808.

00:08:343 (10) - double note.

00:43:915 (13) - move to 00:43:776 ?

00:51:974 (9) - delete? to avoid boring dkdkdk pattern.



[ Oni ]

00:30:020 (2,3,4,5,6) - for more offbeat feel, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025907?

01:21:616 (6) , 01:23:654 (16) - not snapped



[ Peoplish Inner Oni ]

00:04:452 (27) - delete? for avoid continuing double notes and emphasize 00:04:360. if applied, 00:08:898 (27) same.

00:26:546 (9) - move to 00:26:592 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8026004? just my opinion ٩(ٌ>◡<ٌ)۶




looks so difficult to mapping, cause of many ambiguous offbeat.
And now i'm playing perfect taiko map-set!

Learned so many thing like patterning and beat, while modding this map.
Thanks for make this awesome taiko map xD
Hope to see in rank as soon as possible ٩(ٌ>◡<ٌ)۶
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Skylish

404 AccNotFound wrote:

hi ( ´ ▽ ` )ノツ
from your queue~
Thanks for accepting <3

> You're welcome >:3

[ Normal ]

00:49:473 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8024525.

> lol those goggles

[ Kantan ]

00:30:575 (32) - delete? for little rest after the end of the stream. > nope, Kantan should maintain a better note balance with other difficulties. You can see at the same timing in other difficulties, there are quite a lot of note packed around this timing.

00:56:977 (11) - K. all of notes are 1/1 beat without here, so, for emphasize 1/2 beat, continuing 00:56:143 (10) trumpet sound.
01:05:870 (22) - ^

> Well spotted, fixed.

01:10:594 (27) - move to 01:10:455 (27) or delete? 1/4 is really hard for kantan, but to me, there isn't any sound at 01:10:594 > umm, my intention would be trying to keep the notes on the on-beat. Since this is a Finish, if it is not following the correct timing, it will sound too off. So I adopt your suggestion currently.

01:11:706 (28,29,30,31) - d D k K so that looks beautiful ٩(ٌ>◡<ٌ)۶ > 01:11:706 - / 01:13:929 - should be the correct place for Finishers, as they are strong on-beats. I change 01:13:929 - K due to the pitch.



[ Futsuu ]

00:10:010 (2) - delete? for avoid 00:08:343 (11,12,1,2,3,4,1) this offbeat long stream. > That makes sense, fixed.

00:14:457 (5) - ^. for avoid multy beat stream.
00:16:680 (2) - ^

> There are strong piano pedals at all these notes. I think they should be present to stand for the piano strong chords or the map itself will become too porous. No change.

00:52:252 (6) - delete for consistence with 00:50:029. same 01:01:145. > Fixed.



[ Muzukashii ]

00:03:896 (10,11,12) - little unmatched to me. cause this song is offbeat, and use 1/3,1/6 in muzukashii, i'd like to use patterns like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025808. > You can compare with the same time slot in Oni, similar density should be considered in Muzukashii. Those 1/4 may sound a bit off, but they should be fine considering the density problem.

00:08:343 (10) - double note. > lol fixed.

00:43:915 (13) - move to 00:43:776 ? > Vocal goes denser at 00:43:915 - (actually at 00:43:822 - ), so the 1/4 triplet is kept to express the intensity of the music.

00:51:974 (9) - delete? to avoid boring dkdkdk pattern. > 00:51:974 - / 01:00:867 - are removed because of density issue across Muzukashii and Oni. Deletion of these notes can promote a better balance.



[ Oni ]

00:30:020 (2,3,4,5,6) - for more offbeat feel, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8025907? > The off-beat feeling only presents in the parts with vocal. If it is instrumental solo, a normal on-beat pattern should be kept.

01:21:616 (6) , 01:23:654 (16) - not snapped > Fixed. Unsnapped objects every where actually.



[ Peoplish Inner Oni ]

00:04:452 (27) - delete? for avoid continuing double notes and emphasize 00:04:360. if applied, 00:08:898 (27) same. > concrete vocal note here and there. They should not be removed.

00:26:546 (9) - move to 00:26:592 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8026004? just my opinion ٩(ٌ>◡<ٌ)۶ > Both suggestion sound weird to me, I am sorry to reject them.


Self-changes:

< Snapped the wrong snapped notes correctly with 1/16 beat snap divisor
< Fix 1 ms error manually



looks so difficult to mapping, cause of many ambiguous offbeat.
And now i'm playing perfect taiko map-set!

Learned so many thing like patterning and beat, while modding this map.
Thanks for make this awesome taiko map xD
Hope to see in rank as soon as possible ٩(ٌ>◡<ٌ)۶
Good luck~

> Thanks for your appreciation! :D I hope that modding the others map will be beneficial in your future as well! Keep it on!
Thanks for your mod. :3
stu00608
Hi~ Here is my mod from your queue

the "*" mark means how I will do

[Kantan ]

  • 00:20:571 D
    01:15:040 K

    01:27:268 and 01:28:102 K , because you put K in the other diffs
    and I also recommend that add K at 01:27:546 and 01:28:380

    that's all :D


[Futsuu ]

  • 00:49:473 K because there is K at 00:58:366
    00:50:029 add a d
    00:52:252 also ^
    00:58:922 also ^
    01:01:145 also ^
    01:04:480 here shouldn't be a d?
    01:10:872 add a d
    01:13:929 (1,2,3) - make all them all K or else

    01:27:546 and 01:28:380 add K


[Muzukashii ]

  • 00:13:345 and 00:17:792 make them same :D
    (I recommend k k)
    00:22:516 k

    01:09:899 add a d


[Oni ]

  • 00:17:606 add a d to follow the vocal
    00:28:213 move to 00:28:260
    00:54:163 move to 00:54:197


[Alien Inner Oni ]

  • 00:04:267 It seems no sound there D: del this
    00:08:436 also this
    00:11:956 add a d
    00:13:206 move to 00:13:241
    00:14:735 obviously there is a drum sound , so add a d
    00:15:152 move to 00:15:186
    *00:17:514 I'd like to put a d here
    00:19:181 add a d (drum sound here)
    *00:20:467 add a d like 00:17:514
    00:25:990 move to 00:26:025
    00:26:546 move to 00:26:580
    00:28:213 move to 00:28:248
    00:29:360 add a k here
    00:29:742 add a d

    01:10:768 add a k
    01:10:872 add a d

    01:19:580 del ^
    01:24:026 del ^

    If I lose something didn't write down pls don't mind ><


It's a little weird about Inner Oni , so I hope that will be a nice diff after ranked :)
and thanks for accepting , Good Luck !! :)
stu00608
this is a wrong Post x.x sorry
Topic Starter
Skylish

stu00608 wrote:

Hi~ Here is my mod from your queue > Actually I was expecting the map owner to do M4M with me, but nvm....

the "*" mark means how I will do

[Kantan ]

  • 00:20:571 D > K for consistencies in all difficulties.
    01:15:040 K > Nope, D d K k pattern is much clearer than your suggestion.

    01:27:268 and 01:28:102 K , because you put K in the other diffs >yes, fixed.
    and I also recommend that add K at 01:27:546 and 01:28:380 > too dense imo

    that's all :D


[Futsuu ]

  • 00:49:473 K because there is K at 00:58:366 > variation purpose, no change
    00:50:029 add a d
    00:52:252 also ^
    00:58:922 also ^
    01:01:145 also ^

    > rejected these 'adding don' suggestion since they go against my mapping channel in Kiai: mainly focusing on vocal, leaving these gaps on purpose to show a better note spread across Futsuu and Muzukashii.

    01:04:480 here shouldn't be a d? > k D emphasis, no change
    01:10:872 add a d > I can't see a point of having a d mapped right here.
    01:13:929 (1,2,3) - make all them all K or else > 01:13:929 - focus on this timing, others do not have that loud cymbal crash obviously.

    01:27:546 and 01:28:380 add K > still too dense until Muzukashii


[Muzukashii ]

  • 00:13:345 and 00:17:792 make them same :D> variation, and 00:18:070 - sounds esp.ly high pitch due to the singer's voice. d k match the pitch flow there.
    (I recommend k k)
    00:22:516 k > fixed, do the same change if applicable in other difficulties.

    01:09:899 add a d > break after that K at 01:09:482 -


[Oni ]

  • 00:17:606 add a d to follow the vocal > no, too dense.
    00:28:213 move to 00:28:260 > wrong timing, that should be 00:28:248 -
    00:54:163 move to 00:54:197 > lol I mis-snapped this note. Fixed



[Alien Inner Oni ]

  • 00:04:267 It seems no sound there D: del this > interpret the flow of vocal, keep it currently speaking
    00:08:436 also this > same as above
    00:11:956 add a d > leave there for 1 beat for the sake of break and rest.
    00:13:206 move to 00:13:241 > fixed.
    00:14:735 obviously there is a drum sound , so add a d > out of track, not suitable for vocal mapping.
    00:15:152 move to 00:15:186 > ayy yes, fixed.
    *00:17:514 I'd like to put a d here > wrong focus for me ,sorry.
    00:19:181 add a d (drum sound here) > same as b4, it's out of track too. There's indeed a sound, but I need not to put notes on every sound, right?
    *00:20:467 add a d like 00:17:514 > There's Finisher upcoming lol, what?
    00:25:990 move to 00:26:025
    00:26:546 move to 00:26:580
    00:28:213 move to 00:28:248

    > nice ear, fixed.
    00:29:360 add a k here > same case at 00:20:467 -
    00:29:742 add a d > for break purpose.

    01:10:768 add a k
    01:10:872 add a d

    > ^ these make much sense with my mapping logic, added

    01:19:580 del ^
    01:24:026 del ^

    > blah blah blah

    If I lose something didn't write down pls don't mind >< >That's fine.


It's a little weird about Inner Oni , so I hope that will be a nice diff after ranked :)
and thanks for accepting , Good Luck !! :)
Thanks for your modding, please, next time try to explain and elaborate a bit why do you suggest in this or that way, so the mapper will understand your points easier and your mod will become more convincing. :3 Cheers.
toara_fict
Sorry late ;__;
M4M request from your queue.

[ General]
  1. Okay.


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[ Kantan]
  1. 00:20:015 (20) - delete ( some 00:28:908 (30) - )


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[ Futsuu]
  1. nothing to say. 1/2 spacing is secured as well :3

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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:34:883 (12) - delete it ? ( 00:32:938 - you don't pick it. Same as here )

  2. 00:43:915 (14) - move & 00:44:193 (15) - change kat ? ( I think that is it matches Vocal :3 )

  3. 00:45:304 (1) - 1/2 right. ( same as Oni )


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[ Oni]
  1. 00:25:990 (6) - move 00:26:025 - ? ( follow vocal. some as 00:17:132 (6) - )

  2. 01:13:547 (8,9) - swap. ( 01:13:651 (9,1) - some drum sounds. )


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[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:39:920 - add don ( I think I put d here if I made it. follow back sound. )

  2. 00:44:008 (8) - delete & 00:44:089 (9,10) - swap. ( I felt a little incompatibility. I think that it is okay just to pick up the back sound. )

  3. 01:15:492 - or 01:15:457 - add kat here ? follow vocal is better.

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Skylish wrote:

I will remove the Standard set when I receive certain mods for my Taiko set.
[ Kantan]
  1. use soft sampleset

  2. 00:40:580 (1) - move x:125 y:94
  3. 00:41:692 (2) - move x:105 y:243 is better. This one looks pretty ww
    :)8-):)8-):)

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I might have seen this mapping style for the first time
I could not find a place to mod. sorry ;__;

Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
Skylish

toara_fict wrote:

Sorry late ;__;
M4M request from your queue.

[ General]
  1. Okay.


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[ Kantan]
  1. 00:20:015 (20) - delete ( some 00:28:908 (30) - )

    > kats for these 00:20:015 (20,21) - piano high-pitch accompaniments.


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[ Futsuu]
  1. nothing to say. 1/2 spacing is secured as well :3

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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:34:883 (12) - delete it ? ( 00:32:938 - you don't pick it. Same as here )

    > Different vocal patterns there, so different patterns are used.

  2. 00:43:915 (14) - move & 00:44:193 (15) - change kat ? ( I think that is it matches Vocal :3 )

    > I dont really get what you try to express here. 00:44:471 - concrete kat for the drum kick and kawaii vocal voice, previous notes should all be dons to emphasize it.

  3. 00:45:304 (1) - 1/2 right. ( same as Oni ) > nope, the spinner is very close to the K at 00:45:027 - as it is used as a playable thing that 'continues note but I dont really want to use slider or circles to represent it'.


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[ Oni]
  1. 00:25:990 (6) - move 00:26:025 - ? ( follow vocal. some as 00:17:132 (6) - )

    > Sure, I mis-snapped it lmao, fixed.

  2. 01:13:547 (8,9) - swap. ( 01:13:651 (9,1) - some drum sounds. )

    > 01:13:651 - if this is a kat, then there will be a bunch of kats spammed at 01:13:651 (9,1,2,3) - , that's not good at all.


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[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:39:920 - add don ( I think I put d here if I made it. follow back sound. )

    > 00:40:024 - very consistent Finisher note, it should stay isolated in all difficulties.
  2. 00:44:008 (8) - delete & 00:44:089 (9,10) - swap. ( I felt a little incompatibility. I think that it is okay just to pick up the back sound. )

    > I love how I overmapped it, removed my dumb minds anyway, fixed.
  3. 01:15:492 - or 01:15:457 - add kat here ? follow vocal is better.

    > my current note at 01:15:457 - is already following the vocal :P

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Skylish wrote:

I will remove the Standard set when I receive certain mods for my Taiko set.
[ Kantan]
  1. use soft sampleset

  2. 00:40:580 (1) - move x:125 y:94
  3. 00:41:692 (2) - move x:105 y:243 is better. This one looks pretty ww
    :)8-):)8-):)

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I might have seen this mapping style for the first time
I could not find a place to mod. sorry ;__;

> Remove those STD mode before more jokes come out lol

Good Luck :3
Thanks for your mod :>
Sanawi
hi! M4M from your quere

[Kantan]

  • 00:15:013 (13,14,15) - d d k?

    00:38:357 (10) - change to k?

    00:39:468 (11) - change to d?

    00:50:585 (2) - change to d?

    00:56:977 (11) - ^

    00:58:366 (12) - change to k?



[Futsuu]

  • 00:20:571 (1) - change to d

    00:30:853 (14) - delete...?

    00:48:639 (4) - ^

    00:48:917 (5) - change to d

    00:57:810 (3) - ^



[Muzukashii]

  • 00:04:452 (13) - move to 00:04:313 - ?

    00:08:898 (13) - change to d and move to 00:08:760 - ?

    00:39:468 (11) - change to D ?

    00:48:917 (9) - ^ same as 00:47:250 (1) -

    01:01:423 (10,11) - ctrl+G ?



[Oni]

  • 00:10:462 (5,6,7,8,9) - i think k k d kd is better

    00:21:856 (6,7) - ctrl+G ?



[Alien Inner Oni]

  • 00:26:303 (7,8,9,10) - i think this pattern is good



Good Luck !!! >w<
Topic Starter
Skylish

Sanawieck wrote:

hi! M4M from your quere

[Kantan]

  • 00:15:013 (13,14,15) - d d k? > no, vocal pitch goes down, k k d suits more.

    00:38:357 (10) - change to k? > consistent on-beat D, no change.

    00:39:468 (11) - change to d? > vocal high-pitch, k is preferred.

    00:50:585 (2) - change to d? > k for drum kick, no change

    00:56:977 (11) - ^ > variation, D D seems too boring.

    00:58:366 (12) - change to k? > consistent on-beat D again.



[Futsuu]

  • 00:20:571 (1) - change to d > high-pitch accompaniment behind the strong base drum --> K

    00:30:853 (14) - delete...? > keep it to maintain a better note spread with Muzukashii

    00:48:639 (4) - ^ > nope, but this time is Kantan with Futsuu.

    00:48:917 (5) - change to d > drum kick blah blah bah

    00:57:810 (3) - ^ > ~_~



[Muzukashii]

  • 00:04:452 (13) - move to 00:04:313 - ? > no, it's on the drum kick concretely.

    00:08:898 (13) - change to d and move to 00:08:760 - ? > same situation as stated above.

    00:39:468 (11) - change to D ? > as this section only contains the Finishers (different from Oni/ Inner Oni, they have other accompaniments surrounding these D/K there), so I would like to use K here to show the overall note flow.

    00:48:917 (9) - ^ same as 00:47:250 (1) - > nope, strong preparation for emphasizing upcoming D at 00:49:473 -

    01:01:423 (10,11) - ctrl+G ? > nope, it does not sound good to me.



[Oni]

  • 00:10:462 (5,6,7,8,9) - i think k k d kd is better > 00:11:018 - high pitch melody --> kat, no change.

    00:21:856 (6,7) - ctrl+G ? > similar case in Muzukashii's suggestion, rejected here as well.



[Alien Inner Oni]

  • 00:26:303 (7,8,9,10) - i think this pattern is good
    > Higher density for Vocal+Instrument, lower density for Instrument Only, I am following this mapping concept very strictly.



Good Luck !!! >w<
Thanks for modding though, nice attempt, but next time please try to explain why you are suggesting in these ways so the mappers can understand your suggestions more easily. Explanation can also make the mod be more persuasive. :>
Username105
hello M4M here~
[General]
  1. I thought "Alien Inner Oni" was a GD... lol... can you name it just "Alien Oni" ?

[Kantan]
  1. 00:32:799 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't recommend you make these 1/1 triplets identical. They are very different vocals in the music, so I recommend you map them different;y to avoid repetition here. Consider kkd ddD, dkd ddD, or dkd kkD (this one is best imo), and the lyrics will be mapped more accurately and interestingly.
  2. 00:41:692 (13) - Consider switching this to a k because it's a very sharp and intense vocal.
  3. 01:26:064 (8) - I don't see what justifies the sudden use of 1/6 here. You should be consistent with the other occurrence this pattern is seen 01:26:064 (8) - here, and instead map this on the following white tick, since it's not a finisher or a cymbal or anything like that.

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:18:070 (5) - imo this seems to be a random time to start implementing 1/2 patterns. If you're going to use one here, then I recommend adding one
  2. 00:13:623 - here so that the futsuu player will be more likely to expect it the second time the pattern occurs, especially to prepare the futsuu player to the many more 1/2 that are about to come.
  3. 00:30:853 - Consider removing this 1/2 pattern, as all of your previous 1/2 patterns have been used to map the vocals in the song, this one is not. Removing it would make the first section more tidy, as all of the 1/2 patterns will be because of the lyrics.
  4. 01:10:038 (2) - Since you made tons of 1/6 notes accurately snapped in this difficulty, it doesn't make much sense to map this on the white tick just for the drum, when that would be the only time you've done this in the kiai. (You do this a lot in your Muzu, but that makes sense because the player will be expecting it since you do it a lot.)

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:291 (13) - Move this to 00:15:198 - here because this beat is more of the vocal beat than the other. You're also not missing any important drums there.
  2. 00:21:404 (3) - Same as above, move this 1/6 backwards for the same reason.
  3. 00:23:350 (10,11) - Ctrl+g this, it's more accurate to the vocals and it gets the k on the snare.
  4. 00:28:526 (13,14) - I recommend you ctrl+g this too, Since you're willing to make an exception to the k = snare rule back here - >00:17:132 (4,5,6,7) -, then you should be able to do it again here if it makes the vocals much more accurate.
  5. 00:57:532 (4) - Consider switching to d because it's a weak note.

[Oni]
  1. 00:15:846 (18) - Consider switching to d because the vocal pitch is falling, plus it's not interrupting the drums.
  2. 00:19:633 (16) - Consider switching to k, similar reasoning as above.
  3. 00:25:851 (5,6) - consider ctrl+g here because the pitch is rising and it seems more consistent with 00:17:132 (6,7,8,9,10) - this

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:11:956 - consider adding something here since it's your highest difficulty
  2. 00:25:851 (5,6) - same as oni
  3. 01:09:760 (2,3) - ^ ctrl+g for the vocal pitch

overall good map
call me back when you get more sp
Topic Starter
Skylish

Jonawaga wrote:

hello M4M here~
[General]
  1. I thought "Alien Inner Oni" was a GD... lol... can you name it just "Alien Oni" ?

    > Keep "Inner" to state a clear difficulty naming spread.


[Kantan]
  1. 00:32:799 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't recommend you make these 1/1 triplets identical. They are very different vocals in the music, so I recommend you map them different;y to avoid repetition here. Consider kkd ddD, dkd ddD, or dkd kkD (this one is best imo), and the lyrics will be mapped more accurately and interestingly.

    > I have been using 1/1 triplets from 00:11:678 - , and it is expected that I continue to use them at 00:31:687 - actually. Yes they have different vocals, but if i follow them perfectly, then that'd not be no longer a kantan. In order to avoid repetition and slightly fitting to my previous mapping style, 00:33:354 - is changed to d now for the sake of pitch flow.

  2. 00:41:692 (13) - Consider switching this to a k because it's a very sharp and intense vocal.

    > Nice catch, changed.
  3. 01:26:064 (8) - I don't see what justifies the sudden use of 1/6 here. You should be consistent with the other occurrence this pattern is seen 01:26:064 (8) - here, and instead map this on the following white tick, since it's not a finisher or a cymbal or anything like that.

    > It is not the first appearance for the 1/6 3/16 beatsnap note, there's one at 01:10:501 - . The intention of strictly following the music is that there are extremely strong vocals at these two timings. Players will not sense it due to a relatively lenient OD setting and spacing provided before these weird snapped notes.


[Futsuu]
  1. 00:18:070 (5) - imo this seems to be a random time to start implementing 1/2 patterns. If you're going to use one here, then I recommend adding one 00:13:623 - here so that the futsuu player will be more likely to expect it the second time the pattern occurs, especially to prepare the futsuu player to the many more 1/2 that are about to come.

    > I agree completely, changed.
  2. 00:30:853 - Consider removing this 1/2 pattern, as all of your previous 1/2 patterns have been used to map the vocals in the song, this one is not. Removing it would make the first section more tidy, as all of the 1/2 patterns will be because of the lyrics.

    > You spotted it well, but I wanna keep it to stay a better note spread across difficulty. Kept.
  3. 01:10:038 (2) - Since you made tons of 1/6 notes accurately snapped in this difficulty, it doesn't make much sense to map this on the white tick just for the drum, when that would be the only time you've done this in the kiai. (You do this a lot in your Muzu, but that makes sense because the player will be expecting it since you do it a lot.)


    > That is 3/16 actually, fixed now. Well spotted.


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:15:291 (13) - Move this to 00:15:198 - here because this beat is more of the vocal beat than the other. You're also not missing any important drums there.

    > 00:15:291 - is more prominent than 00:15:198 - , I have to give up the latter otherwise the spacing of notes will go against RC.
  2. 00:21:404 (3) - Same as above, move this 1/6 backwards for the same reason. > different cases, but you spotted it correctly, shifted to the new timing at 00:21:300 - .
  3. 00:23:350 (10,11) - Ctrl+g this, it's more accurate to the vocals and it gets the k on the snare.

    > vocal pitch is well compromised in the current patterns, no change.
  4. 00:28:526 (13,14) - I recommend you ctrl+g this too, Since you're willing to make an exception to the k = snare rule back here - >00:17:132 (4,5,6,7) -, then you should be able to do it again here if it makes the vocals much more accurate.

    > Here's the mapping method: vocal comes first, then instrumental part, esp.ly in the calm part of instruments (from 00:11:678 - to 00:29:464 - ). You can see that I followed the snare rule nice in Oni, but not in Muzukashii, because I used some accompaniments in Oni but not able to do so in Muzukashii. So, I decided to follow more vocals than the instruments in Muzukashii to strike a balance. No change after all.
  5. 00:57:532 (4) - Consider switching to d because it's a weak note.

    > changed due to mirror pattern with 01:06:425 (4,5,6) - , applied in Oni as well.

[Oni]
  1. 00:15:846 (18) - Consider switching to d because the vocal pitch is falling, plus it's not interrupting the drums. > wanna emphasize 00:16:124 - rather than the general vocal pitch flow by using two 1/1 kats before it.
  2. 00:19:633 (16) - Consider switching to k, similar reasoning as above. > nice, changed.
  3. 00:25:851 (5,6) - consider ctrl+g here because the pitch is rising and it seems more consistent with 00:17:132 (6,7,8,9,10) - this > variation purpose here lol, no change.

[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:11:956 - consider adding something here since it's your highest difficulty > common gap at this timing, not going to put any notes as it serves as a break.
  2. 00:25:851 (5,6) - same as oni > definitely having 3 dk patterns are really bad in terms of flow in game-play
  3. 01:09:760 (2,3) - ^ ctrl+g for the vocal pitch > fixed in all difficulties if applicable

overall good map
call me back when you get more sp
Thanks for modding :>
Topic Starter
Skylish
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> Fixed Artist from chorogons ---> Chorogons
Zpmzpm
Hi, NM request from my queue.
WAW you have good ears
[General]
This is what I feel:
Kantan >>>> Futsuu >> Muzukashii >>>>> Oni >>> Inner Oni
- 2 >'s is standard spread
  1. Buff kantan a lot
  2. Buff Futsuu just a bit
  3. Buff Muzu quite a lot
  4. Oni and Inner can let it be.

I think kantan can use some basic 1/2's or 3/4s, Futsuu can use some 3/8s and Muzu can use a little bit of 3/16 as well.

[Kantan]
00:10:566 (8) - weird enough to be that offbeat, thats the problem of the song tbh. anyways, this along with a lot of other small places doesn't fit into the song.
[Futsuu]
The slow SV makes everything look slow paced - which is clearly what the song is NOT showing. try to fix it with either 1.2x or 1.25x
01:13:373 (4) - 01:11:150 (4) - why k? this clearly has lower pitch than next notes
[Alien inner]
Hi pp
I think you are overcrowding notes here, such a jumpy and fast paced feel but it even feels slower than an average 175bpm beatmap, use 1.6 or 1.7 i think is better
00:08:065 (20) - I think this should be 1/16 later
01:23:690 (20) - ^

thats about it i guess
good mapset, like the offbeat and jumpy feel of it
Topic Starter
Skylish

Zpmzpm wrote:

Hi, NM request from my queue.
WAW you have good ears
[General]
This is what I feel:
Kantan >>>> Futsuu >> Muzukashii >>>>> Oni >>> Inner Oni
- 2 >'s is standard spread
  1. Buff kantan a lot
  2. Buff Futsuu just a bit
  3. Buff Muzu quite a lot
  4. Oni and Inner can let it be.

I think kantan can use some basic 1/2's or 3/4s, Futsuu can use some 3/8s and Muzu can use a little bit of 3/16 as well.

> I was thinking about the spread when started mapping it. I consider Kantan as a very basic Beginner which consists of 1/1 only if possible. Futsuu is the real Kantan actually but as we all know the SR system is kinda broken, so I adopt different mapping channels in the easier difficulties. Speaking of Kantan, it only contains the most impt elements of the music, while in Futsuu, it contains all elements actually, but still the prominent elements are taken.

> Back to the current version, I would say that the spreading itself looks not really good because of different musical elements are used in different difficulties. Considering the note spread, the current one should still be fine. I dont want to overdo the difficulties themselves obviously, so Muzukashii will not contain any 3/16 patterns.


[Kantan]
00:10:566 (8) - weird enough to be that offbeat, thats the problem of the song tbh. anyways, this along with a lot of other small places doesn't fit into the song.

> I forgot to fix it here, lol. Fixed now.
[Futsuu]
The slow SV makes everything look slow paced - which is clearly what the song is NOT showing. try to fix it with either 1.2x or 1.25x

> 1.2x SV is used now.

01:13:373 (4) - 01:11:150 (4) - why k? this clearly has lower pitch than next notes

> the vocal stay in a relatively high pitch position, that's why they are all mapped as kat.

[Alien inner]
Hi pp
I think you are overcrowding notes here, such a jumpy and fast paced feel but it even feels slower than an average 175bpm beatmap, use 1.6 or 1.7 i think is better

> That's too fast if people use HR, and I think 1.4x can show the 3/16 just in a right spacing effect during game play.
00:08:065 (20) - I think this should be 1/16 later
01:23:690 (20) - ^

> Missing the instrumental part here and there seems weird, and the vocal itself is delayed there I guess.... No change.

thats about it i guess
good mapset, like the offbeat and jumpy feel of it
Thanks for modding :D
Topic Starter
Skylish
> 00:10:427 - / 01:26:018 - they are shifted 1/4 in Kantan, instead of 3/16 to avoid any possible DQ issues.

> Fixed some wrongly snapped notes in Inner Oni.
Surono

Skylish wrote:

to avoid any possible DQ issues.
avoid my love pls

>Inner
* 00:03:618 - 01:19:209 - kat?
* 01:19:580 (23) - but 00:04:267 (25) - demm. move this to left as dkddk. just 1 this that inconsistent
* 00:11:956 - add notes cuz vocal, 00:46:972 - d k 1/2. mostly empty spot are nonvocal ye?

>Futsuu
* 00:19:367 (8) - and how this dem cant be detected as unsnapped? xd btw change this don? good alteration sounds between 00:18:348 (6,7,8) -
* 00:47:528 - add kat here, cuz far with muzu and to buff density futsuu from kantan.

>Kantan
* 00:02:229 - add here kat, 00:02:785 - similar sounds and dem this part empty.. 00:06:675 - don
* 01:17:819 - 01:22:266 -

so thats why kantan rip sr cuz simple snap lo, are u sure applied this snapping style for kantan? just wonder with follow da music but a bit simpler like futsuu I guess since kantan has many longer gaps.
Topic Starter
Skylish

Surono wrote:

Skylish wrote:

to avoid any possible DQ issues.
avoid my love pls > accept your dem plz

>Inner
* 00:03:618 - 01:19:209 - kat? > no, k does not sound good for the skippy rhythm here and there
* 01:19:580 (23) - but 00:04:267 (25) - demm. move this to left as dkddk. just 1 this that inconsistent > Changed 00:04:267 (25) -to d now for consistency
* 00:11:956 - add notes cuz vocal, 00:46:972 - d k 1/2. mostly empty spot are nonvocal ye? > These are common gaps, no note should be put.

>Futsuu
* 00:19:367 (8) - and how this dem cant be detected as unsnapped? xd btw change this don? good alteration sounds between 00:18:348 (6,7,8) -

> Shifted all 1/12 patterns back to 3/16 for consistency, changed 00:19:355 - to d as well.

* 00:47:528 - add kat here, cuz far with muzu and to buff density futsuu from kantan. > good, changed

>Kantan
* 00:02:229 - add here kat, 00:02:785 - similar sounds and dem this part empty.. 00:06:675 - don > No, I want to keep them with such big gaps. First point is keeping a good-looking note spread with Futsuu, second point is keeping that part very clean for patterns building up after 00:09:455 -
* 01:17:819 - 01:22:266 - > same then

so thats why kantan rip sr cuz simple snap lo, are u sure applied this snapping style for kantan? just wonder with follow da music but a bit simpler like futsuu I guess since kantan has many longer gaps.

> RIP SR sys., don't rip me dem `L_`
Self-mod:

< 00:52:704 - / 01:01:597 - / 01:03:820 - / 01:08:266 - / 01:12:157 - / 01:14:380 - fix these wrongly snapped notes in all difficulties.

< Fixed metadata (changed the Title and Romanised Title)


Thanks for modding, Sur 69.
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