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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, January 05, 2018 at 8:03:15 PM

Artist: Kirsten Price
Title: We Will Be Heroes
Source: Pokémon: DP Battle Dimension
Tags: John Loeffler David Wolfert pokemon diamond and pearl tv size opening underforest gero nelly lcfc lowcombofc
BPM: 145
Filesize: 1401kb
Play Time: 00:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Forest's Easy (1.19 stars, 31 notes)
  2. Forest's Normal (1.97 stars, 55 notes)
  3. Gero's Insane (3.63 stars, 108 notes)
  4. Hard (2.92 stars, 83 notes)
  5. Heroes (4.45 stars, 124 notes)
  6. LCFC's Advanced (2.44 stars, 64 notes)
  7. Nelly's Platter (2.54 stars, 77 notes)


Download: Kirsten Price - We Will Be Heroes
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man i should expect for tv size if maps that are from int

[Forest's Easy]
  1. 00:00:073 (1) - hard to notice the note comes from red tick so probably just ignore it and replace a circle on 00:00:280 -
  2. 00:02:349 (4) - move a bit left
  3. 00:03:177 (1,2) - improve blanket
  4. 00:04:832 (2,3,1) - I would say that doing a triangle here is better, then 00:06:073 (3) - can linear flow with 00:04:832 (2) -
  5. 00:13:108 (1) - move upper to improve the linear flow
  6. 00:27:176 (2) - move a bit right to improve linear flow
[Forest's Normal]
  1. 00:03:798 (2,3) - starting on red tick seems more tricky then usual, it feels weird to play and uncomfortable. Try to start it on the white tick.
  2. 00:17:246 (3,1) - ^
  3. 00:25:107 (2,3) - not sure could a new player click that fast
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:522 (2,4) - overlap
  2. 00:21:591 (2,4) - ^
  3. 00:25:729 (5) - it plays better if you replace the pattern like 00:25:108 (3,4) -
[Heroes]
  1. 00:19:522 (1,3) - switch NC
  2. 00:22:832 (1,3) - ^
  3. 00:25:522 (5,6) - why the distance is shorter compare to the other jumps? should move it further
gl with your tv size map
posted
LOL

Forest's Easy

00:08:142 (2,1) - This could be spaced a little further apart to improve visual flow.

Forest's Normal

00:06:487 (1,2) - I might be wrong but i think these are just slightly misaligned, i'd correct it if it is.

Other diffs seem fine, FUG

Good luck!
posted
Requested by int

[ General]
  1. Combo Colours are not set!
[ Forest's Easy]
  1. 00:00:073 (1) - As CookieBite pointed out, this is really sudden and not a nice start for the map, placing a circle here 00:00:280 - is so much better since the song is starting off with a white tick and a clean metronome reset
  2. 00:04:832 (2) - Lessen this curve so the sliderend directly point to the next circle
  3. 00:06:487 (1) - Would be so much better if it was a curve that blanketed 00:08:142 (2) - :D
  4. 00:17:246 (2) - Maybe a suggestion, but you could turn this into a 1/2 instead and add a circle to 00:18:073 - so improve the transition
  5. 00:21:384 (3) - blanket, will be fixed if 00:21:384 (3) - is less curvy
  6. 00:23:039 (1,2) - neater if parallel imo, also more consistent with your other straight sliders
[ Forest's Normal]
  1. 00:00:073 (1) - I Wouldnt start a slider here. Since the song is on 4/4 metronome starting on the white tick here 00:00:280 - is more musically predictable and actually plays better since the focus on the vocals is more apparent. So i would recommend using just a 1/2 slider here on that white tick
  2. 00:08:142 (4) - Shouldn't this be NCed?
  3. 00:16:418 (1) - Adjust DS Here. Can easily be fixed if you move it up a bit. Also you could try making it a curve as well like the following slider for a more consistent shape choice here
  4. 00:17:246 (3,1) - this sort of antiflow shouldn't be that welcome in a normal diff, pretty subjective tho
  5. 00:22:004 (4) - Curve as well like previous slider like this
  6. 00:25:315 (3,4) - I would make this a reverse actually. Not only will it reduce beatmap strain since this is the only time you used 2 consecutive 1/2 circles in the map. Also it will improve the focus on the vocals.
  7. 00:30:901 (3) - Suggestion but, this one would play better as a 1/2 slider followed by circle instead, to place more emphasis on the downbeat here 00:31:315 -
[ Hard]
  1. your hitnormal is a bit too loud
  2. I Really dont agree with the fact that you dont have consistent DS in a hard diff
  3. 00:00:073 (1) - Delete this circle, due to same reason i listed above
  4. 00:02:349 (5,6,1) - make these 1/4 snaps consistent in spacing
  5. 00:08:142 (1) - Reduce DS here with the next circle
  6. 00:16:004 (5,6,1) - This is more of a pattern i would find in an insane rather than a Hard, also in a matter of 30 seconds you have introduced so many rhythm varieties the song cant possibly support. As such, i would remove this pattern along with its brother pattern 00:22:625 (5,6,1) -
[ Heroes]
  1. Lower the volume of hitnormal here as well, too loud
  2. 00:03:073 (7,1) - with this spacing it can easily be misread as 1/2 while its 1/4, i would suggest stacking it under the 00:02:763 (6) - sliderend
  3. 00:06:073 (5) - you should move it so the transition to 00:06:487 (1) - is better, now its pretty sharp
  4. Feels pretty overdone, but objectively it isnt bad
Good Luck~
posted
hello there

100% volume seems pretty loud :/

[Heroes]
  1. 00:06:487 (1) - move this closer to 00:06:073 (5) - so it can be easier to hit
  2. 00:09:177 (4,5,6,7,8) - maybe you could curve this stream more for aesthetics?
  3. 00:12:280 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
  4. 00:25:729 (6) - i think the drum here should be more emphasized with larger spacing
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:108 (3) - missing whistle
  2. 00:17:660 (5,6) - make into 1/2 slider for better transition into drumfest (00:18:073 (1) - 00:19:729 (3) - )
other diffs are fine :)
gl
posted
[Easy]
  1. 00:01:522 (3,4) - not perfectly pararell
  2. 00:03:177 (1,2,3) - and 00:06:487 (1,2) - should be identical imo
  3. idk what else to point out


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:315 - there's a vocal here so it should have an object
  2. 00:04:625 - there's clearly a vocal that asks to be clickable here xd, I would recommend you to remove the reverse of 00:04:211 (3) - and moving 00:04:832 (1) - to 00:04:625 - , that will result on perfectly following the vocals :D
  3. 00:06:487 (1,2) - not perfectly pararell
  4. 00:07:935 - vocal here also so it should have an object
  5. cool diff, just some vocal emphasis issues and it's good to go!


[Hard]
  1. 00:00:073 - there's a really hearable sound here, add a cicle or smth
  2. 00:03:177 (1,2) - vocal emphasis seems kinda faulty to me. make 00:03:177 (1) - a circle and start a 1/2 slider from 00:03:384 -
  3. 00:05:039 (2,3) - same as above, but do the opposite lool
  4. 00:11:660 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:14:763 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:15:384 (3,4) - ^


[My heroes! Up to you!]
  1. nothing really wrong LOOOOL your rhythms are followed correctly and it plays pretty well


can u just break the chain and rank this already
posted

LowComboFC wrote:

can u just break the chain and rank this already
no
posted

CookieBite wrote:

man i should expect for tv size if maps that are from int

all fixed in easy

[Forest's Normal]
  1. 00:03:798 (2,3) - starting on red tick seems more tricky then usual, it feels weird to play and uncomfortable. Try to start it on the white tick. I'll think about it
  2. 00:17:246 (3,1) - ^ Following vocal
  3. 00:25:107 (2,3) - not sure could a new player click that fast improved a bit
gl with your tv size map

Weber wrote:

LOL

Forest's Easy

00:08:142 (2,1) - This could be spaced a little further apart to improve visual flow. thinking because the ds

Forest's Normal

00:06:487 (1,2) - I might be wrong but i think these are just slightly misaligned, i'd correct it if it is. I see them fine

Other diffs seem fine, FUG

Good luck!

LowComboFC wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:01:522 (3,4) - not perfectly pararell no need
  2. 00:03:177 (1,2,3) - and 00:06:487 (1,2) - should be identical imo hmm
  3. idk what else to point out


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:315 - there's a vocal here so it should have an object following music here
  2. 00:04:625 - there's clearly a vocal that asks to be clickable here xd, I would recommend you to remove the reverse of 00:04:211 (3) - and moving 00:04:832 (1) - to 00:04:625 - , that will result on perfectly following the vocals :Dok
  3. 00:06:487 (1,2) - not perfectly pararell same as easy
  4. 00:07:935 - vocal here also so it should have an object following music
  5. cool diff, just some vocal emphasis issues and it's good to go!

Nokashi wrote:

[ Forest's Easy]
  1. 00:00:073 (1) - As CookieBite pointed out, this is really sudden and not a nice start for the map, placing a circle here 00:00:280 - is so much better since the song is starting off with a white tick and a clean metronome reset already fixed it
  2. 00:04:832 (2) - Lessen this curve so the sliderend directly point to the next circle ok
  3. 00:06:487 (1) - Would be so much better if it was a curve that blanketed 00:08:142 (2) - :Dok
  4. 00:17:246 (2) - Maybe a suggestion, but you could turn this into a 1/2 instead and add a circle to 00:18:073 - so improve the transition done
  5. 00:21:384 (3) - blanket, will be fixed if 00:21:384 (3) - is less curvy ok
  6. 00:23:039 (1,2) - neater if parallel imo, also more consistent with your other straight sliders done
[ Forest's Normal]
  1. 00:00:073 (1) - I Wouldnt start a slider here. Since the song is on 4/4 metronome starting on the white tick here 00:00:280 - is more musically predictable and actually plays better since the focus on the vocals is more apparent. So i would recommend using just a 1/2 slider here on that white tick there's a clap and that's why it's reverse
  2. 00:08:142 (4) - Shouldn't this be NCed? yup, whoops
  3. 00:16:418 (1) - Adjust DS Here. Can easily be fixed if you move it up a bit. Also you could try making it a curve as well like the following slider for a more consistent shape choice here fixed in cookiebite's mod
  4. 00:17:246 (3,1) - this sort of antiflow shouldn't be that welcome in a normal diff, pretty subjective tho yeah, right
  5. 00:22:004 (4) - Curve as well like previous slider like this :thinking:
  6. 00:25:315 (3,4) - I would make this a reverse actually. Not only will it reduce beatmap strain since this is the only time you used 2 consecutive 1/2 circles in the map. Also it will improve the focus on the vocals. I'm doing a music switch here
  7. 00:30:901 (3) - Suggestion but, this one would play better as a 1/2 slider followed by circle instead, to place more emphasis on the downbeat here 00:31:315 - I think it's fine, because it follows the drums and the final vocal
Good Luck~
nopp
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disable countdown btw, it looks gay
posted
Mod:
GENERAL:
-00:13:108: I would rather you put kiai here till end(depend when would you like to put kiai mode)

Heroes:
-00:03:073 (7):Your distance snap is wrong

Asking: Is your distance snap or silder velocity correct?

Hard:
-00:13:108(6): need a bit closer to the slider.

All good
posted
some irc stuff regarding a few things in the top diff

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08:32 InternalLight: hihi, im trying to get my first ranked map, and would like to get some pro's opinion D: are u busy now? >w<
08:46 Doormat: oh
08:46 Doormat: sure i can take a look
08:46 Doormat: aha i wish i was pro
08:47 InternalLight: but you already are :D
08:47 InternalLight: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/579551 this >w<
08:47 Doormat: oh wow, this is an old song
08:47 InternalLight: yeah
08:47 Doormat: okay, which diff am i looking at
08:48 InternalLight: last
08:48 InternalLight: (hard too, if ya can xd)
08:50 Doormat: it's not bad
08:50 InternalLight: o
08:51 Doormat: 00:09:694 - you missed a drum note here though
08:51 Doormat: i'd map it out for consistency with 00:05:660 (1,2,3,4,5) -
08:52 InternalLight: wait what drum note
08:52 Doormat: the ticking sound thing
08:52 Doormat: idk how to explain it
08:52 InternalLight: i dont hear anything on 00:09:694 - D:
08:52 Doormat: hmm
08:52 Doormat: i might be hearing things
08:53 Doormat: i pulled another all nighter lol
08:53 Doormat: so i'm pretty tired as it is
08:53 InternalLight: heh
08:53 Doormat: just my own opinion as well but i also think the jumps at 00:18:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - might be a little too big
08:53 Doormat: it's fine the way it is
08:53 Doormat: but you might get called out on it
08:53 InternalLight: hm
08:53 Doormat: 00:25:935 (7,8) - same with this jump
08:54 Doormat: just a few opinions
08:54 InternalLight: actually i had reverse slider there at first
08:54 Doormat: overall nothing wrong with the map
08:54 Doormat: the jumps fit
08:54 Doormat: i'd make it a bit smaller distance
08:54 InternalLight: yea ok
08:55 Doormat: 00:02:763 (6,7,1) - i'd also consider reducing distance here to give better indication that this is 1/4 snap
08:55 InternalLight: waitt eh
08:55 InternalLight: 00:13:108 (1,2,3,4) -
08:55 InternalLight: is this distance ok
08:55 Doormat: because it looks like 00:04:625 (1,2) -
08:56 Doormat: yeah looks fine
08:56 Doormat: sliders generally have more lenience with hit acc
08:58 InternalLight: 00:04:625 (1,2,3) - also im thinking about this moment
08:58 InternalLight: 00:04:625 (1,3) - this looks not really nice t bh
08:58 Doormat: yeah
08:58 Doormat: it could probably be better
08:58 InternalLight: i wanted to lower that slider abit
08:58 InternalLight: but then it overlaps that burst
08:58 InternalLight: so idk what can i do
08:58 InternalLight: D:
08:59 Doormat: hmmm
09:00 Doormat: you could try something like this https://puu.sh/uFspa/a04d85b12c.png
09:01 InternalLight: weelll i dont really want to break that rhythm
09:01 Doormat: makes sense
09:04 Doormat: hmm
09:04 Doormat: yeah
09:04 Doormat: overall it's not bad
09:05 Doormat: just a couple parts where the spacing is arguably too high
09:05 Doormat: and that one part where you mapped yourself into a corner
09:05 InternalLight: well there's one way
09:05 InternalLight: 00:04:625 (1) - just outspace this
09:05 Doormat: well yeah
09:05 InternalLight: but
09:05 InternalLight: no looool
09:06 Doormat: well whatever you come up hopefully it works
09:06 InternalLight: there's actually no reason to outspace this
09:06 Doormat: i'm gonna go to sleep now lol
09:06 Doormat: hope it helped regardless zzzzz
09:06 InternalLight: 09:06
09:06 Doormat: time to sleep
09:06 InternalLight: ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
09:06 Doormat: i stayed up all night
09:06 InternalLight: wew
09:06 InternalLight: gn~
09:07 InternalLight: eh wait
09:07 InternalLight: aslo
09:07 InternalLight: also
09:07 InternalLight: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547614
09:07 Doormat: ?
09:07 InternalLight: can i do it like this
09:08 Doormat: i'd argue that that makes it worse
09:08 Doormat: because you haven't overlapped like that throughout the map
09:08 Doormat: having that one overlap makes it stand out too uch
09:08 Doormat: much*
09:08 InternalLight: hm
09:09 InternalLight: then just leave it as it is now??? LO
09:09 Doormat: hmm
09:09 Doormat: it's hard to say
09:09 Doormat: i'd definitely change it
09:09 Doormat: but given the limited space it'd probably be faster to remap that small part
09:09 Doormat: but it's not bad the way it currently is either
09:09 Doormat: it could be better for sure
09:09 InternalLight: o wait
09:09 Doormat: but not wrong
09:09 InternalLight: i got an idea
09:10 InternalLight: oooooo
09:11 InternalLight: nvm, looks even worse
09:11 Doormat: lol
09:11 Doormat: if you can't think of anything don't rush it
09:11 Doormat: play around with it and if you like something then try it out and see if it works
09:12 Doormat: you could also come back to the map after a break or something
09:12 InternalLight: well
09:12 InternalLight: i changed smth
09:12 *InternalLight is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1227168 Kirsten Price - We Will Be Heroes [Heroes]]
09:12 InternalLight: updated
09:12 InternalLight: can u take a look on this moment again xd
09:13 Doormat: yeah that's slightly better
09:13 InternalLight: meeeeeeeeeeh 3 is outspaced
09:13 Doormat: 00:04:625 (1,2) - this is way too close to spacing in 00:02:763 (6,7,1) - though
09:13 Doormat: you could move out the 00:04:625 (1) - a bit
09:13 InternalLight: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547681 like this?
09:14 Doormat: no i mean like
09:14 Doormat: move it out so that the slider end is farther away from the 2
09:15 Doormat: maybe like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547690
09:15 InternalLight: but 3 is really far
09:15 Doormat: you could move the 3 a bit closer then
09:16 Doormat: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547696
09:16 InternalLight: hmmm
09:16 InternalLight: nice
09:19 InternalLight: thank you <3
09:19 Doormat: np np
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tl;dr Insane's spacing feels too similar throughout song, patterns could be improved a little. Hard is fine, just random spacing inconsistencies that don't really make sense.

20:24 Asphyxia: The map is okay, I think it still could use improvements here and there but technically it's rankable, at least in my eyes
20:24 InternalLight: O_O
20:25 Asphyxia: The map plays fine, that is for sure, but I feel like you didn't put enough spacing emphasis on the map
20:26 InternalLight: what could i improve then?
20:26 Asphyxia: the beginning and the stronger parts on the map could be improved in a sense that
20:26 Asphyxia: 00:00:073 - this part to like 00:09:798 - is clearly calmer than the next ones
20:26 Asphyxia: yet the spacing is awfully similar throughout the map
20:26 Asphyxia: lowering the overall spacing would be nice in my opinion
20:27 Asphyxia: but that's your choice in the end
20:27 InternalLight: well i was increasing spacing in every part
20:27 Asphyxia: A lot of the patterns you used are fine for playing, but they don't really do anything else except that in my opinion
20:28 Asphyxia: like 00:17:660 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - for example
20:28 Asphyxia: it's visually really inconsistent spacing-wise and it looks like a bunch of random objects here and there placed without too much thought
20:29 Asphyxia: 00:24:901 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this thing could be made into a correct star pattern thingy and then it could center 00:24:280 (8) - 's head but
20:29 Asphyxia: that's quite subjectiver
20:29 Asphyxia: -r
20:30 Asphyxia: also my suggestions are really subjective in general aside from the spacing thing, so if you think these wouldn't improve your map in any way, you're more than free to decline them
20:30 Asphyxia: just stating what I personally think
20:30 InternalLight: ye
20:32 Asphyxia: that's all I think though
20:32 Asphyxia: I think with few improvements the map can be a lot better
20:32 InternalLight: thanks~ c:
20:33 InternalLight: can u take a look on hard?
20:33 InternalLight: Dx
20:33 InternalLight: that's my first hard difficulty ever so it may suck really bad
20:34 Asphyxia: I think the Hard is fine, I could maybe nitpick about small things but
20:34 Asphyxia: aside from those, it's fine
20:35 InternalLight: really o _O
20:35 Asphyxia: ye
20:35 Asphyxia: thought if you use OD8 with AR8 in the Insane diff
20:35 Asphyxia: you could use OD6 in Hard
20:35 InternalLight: can u point out that things then D:
20:35 Asphyxia: would also make more sense with your spread
20:35 Asphyxia: 2 -> 4 -> 6 -> 8
20:36 Asphyxia: but right now it's 2 -> 4 -> 5 -> 8
20:36 InternalLight: yeah i gotta add one more diff
20:36 InternalLight: between hard and insane
20:36 InternalLight: oh
20:36 InternalLight: that
20:37 InternalLight: alright changed
20:41 Asphyxia: do you want me to post this thing in the thread or no need?
20:41 InternalLight: why not
20:41 InternalLight: free kds if you want lol
20:42 Asphyxia: oh right about the things in HArd
20:42 Asphyxia: the thing with Hard is that
20:42 Asphyxia: your spacing varies a lot and it seems inconsistent unless I'm missing your logic?
20:42 Asphyxia: 00:08:142 (1,2,3) - let's take these and 00:08:763 (3,4) - for example
20:42 Asphyxia: 123 is spaced with 1,0x spacing
20:42 Asphyxia: then for whatever reason 34 is spaced with 1,1
20:43 Asphyxia: 00:09:798 (1,2,3,4) - more inconsistencies
20:43 InternalLight: alright i'll try to make it more consistent now
20:44 Asphyxia: my advice is that
20:44 Asphyxia: try to stick to 1 or 2 spacings in a section
20:44 Asphyxia: like 1,0x for X section and you can go to like 1,4x spacing to emphasize certain sounds
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I'll just check the set quickly, nothing much

[General]
  1. Need an explanation as to why 'Gero' and 'pkhg' are in the tags :thinking:
  2. I recommend you look for a better BG, it's not exactly necessary but the quality of this one isn't exactly good and it's not completely sharp


[Hard]
  • Notable Nazi Stacks: 00:01:935 (3,5) -
  1. 00:00:073 (1,2) - Weird that this specifically doesn't follow DS, nothing to special in comparison to the rest. Reasons for using DS x1.23?
  2. 00:06:487 (1,2) - It seems like you're alternating between vocals and instruments at every down beat (00:00:073 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ) but this one doesn't follow vocals as accurately like your pattern suggests, ctrl+g the rhythm?
  3. 00:12:280 (4,5) - While ofc this placement is fine, a player on this diff level might break combo easily here since they don't know 1/4 gaps too well. Try using DS x1.4 on these to be sure (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7564841)
  4. 00:13:935 (3) - 00:20:556 (5) - Looks like it has some logic behind this but I think ctrl+g-ing this would represent the music more and would create fitting circular flow. This is optional ofc if you want to keep it this way
  5. 00:16:315 (6) - 00:22:935 (6) - 00:29:556 (6) - Is it just me or are these overmapped? I think they should be removed
  6. 00:18:487 (3,4,5) - This 00:18:901 (4) - visually feels too close to 00:18:487 (3) - in comparison to 00:18:901 (4,5) - and that makes 00:19:315 (5) - stand out, although imo 00:18:901 (4) - should stand out more. Try visually spacing these out more like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7564919 and 00:26:763 (2,3,4) - possibly
  7. 00:26:349 (1,2) - Hmm, you used 1/4 and 1/2 in similar looking stacks, you could make the 1/1 stack more obvious by maybe using DS x0.1
  8. 00:29:867 (2,1,2) - This angle should be widened a bit imo, it looks a bit too wide and doesn't emphasize 00:30:487 (2) - enough
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_DT3 wrote:

I'll just check the set quickly, nothing much

[General]
  1. Need an explanation as to why 'Gero' and 'pkhg' are in the tags :thinking: waiting for gd's
  2. I recommend you look for a better BG, it's not exactly necessary but the quality of this one isn't exactly good and it's not completely sharp cant find one


[Hard]
  • Notable Nazi Stacks: 00:01:935 (3,5) -
  1. 00:00:073 (1,2) - Weird that this specifically doesn't follow DS, nothing to special in comparison to the rest. Reasons for using DS x1.23? fixed
  2. 00:06:487 (1,2) - It seems like you're alternating between vocals and instruments at every down beat (00:00:073 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ) but this one doesn't follow vocals as accurately like your pattern suggests, ctrl+g the rhythm? seems fine to me tbh
  3. 00:12:280 (4,5) - While ofc this placement is fine, a player on this diff level might break combo easily here since they don't know 1/4 gaps too well. Try using DS x1.4 on these to be sure (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7564841) ok
  4. 00:13:935 (3) - 00:20:556 (5) - Looks like it has some logic behind this but I think ctrl+g-ing this would represent the music more and would create fitting circular flow. This is optional ofc if you want to keep it this way na
  5. 00:16:315 (6) - 00:22:935 (6) - 00:29:556 (6) - Is it just me or are these overmapped? I think they should be removed dont think so
  6. 00:18:487 (3,4,5) - This 00:18:901 (4) - visually feels too close to 00:18:487 (3) - in comparison to 00:18:901 (4,5) - and that makes 00:19:315 (5) - stand out, although imo 00:18:901 (4) - should stand out more. Try visually spacing these out more like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7564919 and 00:26:763 (2,3,4) - ok
  7. 00:26:349 (1,2) - Hmm, you used 1/4 and 1/2 in similar looking stacks, you could make the 1/1 stack more obvious by maybe using DS x0.1 yea
  8. 00:29:867 (2,1,2) - This angle should be widened a bit imo, it looks a bit too wide and doesn't emphasize 00:30:487 (2) - enough ye
thank 4 mod
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м4м

  • [PP]
  1. 00:06:073 (5) - лучше сделать 2 кика, чтобы сохранить интенсивность и движение при игре,а то курсор будет стоять на месте несколько миллисекунд)
  2. 00:09:694 (9) - тут есть звук, но слабый, можно стрим вывести на слайдер, так будет проще играться
  3. 00:18:901 (1) - нк на вокал, да и паттерн красивее будет выглядить
  4. 00:25:522 (1) - тоже нк, и спейсинг не консистентен с 00:18:694 (4,1) -
  5. 00:31:315 (3) - http://puu.sh/uLV0Z/ddd5d0d223.png чтобы выделить ласт звук получше, да и этот флоу удобнее
  6. 00:03:073 (7,1) - не очень эстетично, а также не очень удобно, лучше переместить их под слайдер
    [Hard]
  7. 00:17:867 (6,1,2) - ужаснейший флоу, этот тупой угол просто выкручивает руку, так как ты сначала используешь круговой флоу 00:17:660 (5,6) - а потом резко увеличиваешь угол, что интуитивно читается плохо, не говоря уже о неудобстве.
  8. 00:25:108 (3,4,5) - неконситентный спейс, как-то мало выделяешь или слишком много расстояния до ноты.
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Loreley wrote:

м4м

  • [PP]
  1. 00:06:073 (5) - лучше сделать 2 кика, чтобы сохранить интенсивность и движение при игре,а то курсор будет стоять на месте несколько миллисекунд) да
  2. 00:09:694 (9) - тут есть звук, но слабый, можно стрим вывести на слайдер, так будет проще играться не хочу смешивать это все, еще и звук очень слабый
  3. 00:18:901 (1) - нк на вокал, да и паттерн красивее будет выглядить да
  4. 00:25:522 (1) - тоже нк, и спейсинг не консистентен с 00:18:694 (4,1) - да
  5. 00:31:315 (3) - http://puu.sh/uLV0Z/ddd5d0d223.png чтобы выделить ласт звук получше, да и этот флоу удобнее да
  6. 00:03:073 (7,1) - не очень эстетично, а также не очень удобно, лучше переместить их под слайдер под слайдером теряется вся идея паттерна, да и смотрится не очень тбх
    [Hard]
  7. 00:17:867 (6,1,2) - ужаснейший флоу, этот тупой угол просто выкручивает руку, так как ты сначала используешь круговой флоу 00:17:660 (5,6) - а потом резко увеличиваешь угол, что интуитивно читается плохо, не говоря уже о неудобстве. вроде бы пофиксил
  8. 00:25:108 (3,4,5) - неконситентный спейс, как-то мало выделяешь или слишком много расстояния до ноты. пофиксил
posted
hi mod as u requested :3 and sorry for the delay
General
Why are gero and pkhg in tags?, are they gd-ing?
Heroes
00:19:625 (2) - , 00:22:935 (2) - , 00:29:556 (2) - i dont hear anything here :P why did u place notes here too? xD
00:30:073 (5,1,2) - (5) -> (1) should have bigger jump imo, since (1) sounds alot stronger. while (1) -> (2) should have smaller jump.
00:18:901 (1) - this spacing is a bit big imo, the beats was not that strong unless you're going for the vocal instead? ><
00:26:349 (1) - bigger jump for this? need more emphasization for that cymbal sound imo
00:25:729 (2,3) - the clap works better on 00:25:935 (3) - imo
Hard
00:16:315 (6) - ,00:19:625 (2) - , 00:22:935 (6) - , 00:29:556 (6) - i dont hear any beats here too :o
Forest's Normal
00:22:624 (5) - a little ds problem here :D
00:30:901 (3) - a combination of 1/2 slider + circle here works better imo, to emphasize the last notes like u did in easy diff :D
That's all from me, Good Luck :D
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walaowey wrote:

hi mod as u requested :3 and sorry for the delay

Why are gero and pkhg in tags?, are they gd-ing? yh

00:19:625 (2) - , 00:22:935 (2) - , 00:29:556 (2) - i dont hear anything here :P why did u place notes here too? xD i'll think on this, really why i did this LOL
00:30:073 (5,1,2) - (5) -> (1) should have bigger jump imo, since (1) sounds alot stronger. while (1) -> (2) should have smaller jump. y
00:18:901 (1) - this spacing is a bit big imo, the beats was not that strong unless you're going for the vocal instead? >< vocal
00:26:349 (1) - bigger jump for this? need more emphasization for that cymbal sound imo Ye
00:25:729 (2,3) - the clap works better on 00:25:935 (3) - imo no, i clearly hear a kick there

That's all from me, Good Luck :D
posted
Was requested to check the platter, will do so on saturday, placeholder
posted
Platter chatlog
16.38 Nelly: Benny
16.38 Nelly: quick
16.38 Nelly: I need your help
17.01 Benny-: what
17.01 Benny-: am i too late? xd
17.01 Nelly: could you mod my map really quick?
17.01 Nelly: nah :^)
17.02 Benny-: what map
17.02 Nelly: Pokemon shit xd
17.02 *Nelly is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1252437 Kirsten Price - We Will Be Heroes]
17.03 Benny-: and wtf when did you become higher rank than me :thinking:
17.03 Nelly: Dunning Krugger effect son
17.03 Benny-: what does that mean even
17.03 Benny-: :(
17.03 Nelly: karma
17.03 Nelly: if in short
17.04 Benny-: what
17.04 Benny-: I've only been good towards you
17.04 Benny-: so that doesn't make sense
17.04 Nelly: well, okay
17.05 Benny-: your diff has a few unrankable hyperdashes
17.05 Nelly: where?
17.06 Benny-: well do you want me to mod it through chat or forum?
17.06 Nelly: chat
17.06 Benny-: ok
17.07 Nelly: if you have some time
17.07 Benny-: 00:02:763 (3,1,2) - hyperdashes straight into antiflow is unrankable
17.07 Nelly: hmmm
17.07 Benny-: you see the movement of 00:03:177 (1,2) - goes to straight to the left so you need to turn right after landing the hyperjump
17.08 Nelly: i just love modding xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7678418
17.09 Benny-: that slider will just play as a straigth down vertical slider btw
17.09 Benny-: The curve doesn't have any affect on gameplay when placed outside the playfield xd
17.10 Nelly: straight slider then?
17.10 Benny-: na it doesn't matter really
17.10 Benny-: just saying
17.10 Benny-: I wouldn't really place objects that far out anyway
17.10 Nelly: oh
17.11 Nelly: and great i already made a straight slider oh my god
17.11 Benny-: It says in the guideline the direction of a hyperjump shouldn't be placed on the very edges of the playfield but idk
17.11 Nelly: is this okay? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7678432
17.12 Benny-: looks okay
17.13 Benny-: okay onto next unrankable hyperdash
17.13 Benny-: 00:12:693 (4,1) - 1/4 hyperdashes are unrankable on BPM higher than 120
17.13 Benny-: it's also extremely long
17.13 Benny-: like, hypers in general shouldn't be much longer than hyper trigger distance
17.13 Nelly: i can agree
17.14 Benny-: you can try like
17.14 Benny-: it doesn't sound very good but
17.14 Benny-: you can try having these 00:12:280 (3,4) - as triplets instead
17.14 Benny-: then you get to keep the hyper between 00:12:693 (4,1) -
17.15 Benny-: or, it sounds okay but not as well as a full stream
17.15 Nelly: well the music is using 1/4 rhythm but idk
17.15 Benny-: yes, but 1/4 hypers are unrankable either way
17.15 Benny-: so you either have to do that
17.15 Benny-: or remove the hyper
17.15 Benny-: it's up to you
17.16 Nelly: rip dt pp farming xd
17.16 Benny-: lol
17.16 Nelly: removed the hyper
17.17 Nelly: dont take it seriously though ;D
17.17 Benny-: yeye xd
17.17 Benny-: 00:15:384 (2,3) - I don
17.17 Benny-: oops
17.17 Benny-: I don't feel like 3 is that strong of a beat
17.18 Benny-: doesn't really support hyperdash imo but it's not unrankable
17.18 Benny-: 00:17:867 (1,2,3) - like here I understand the hyper usage because of the vocal
17.18 Nelly: removed
17.19 Benny-: okok
17.19 Benny-: 00:19:522 (4,1) - this also is very antiflow hyperdash
17.19 Benny-: try tilting 1 so it looks like 00:20:556 (3) - maybe
17.20 Benny-: should fix it
17.20 Benny-: but rearrange the notes afterwards ofc
17.20 Benny-: also maybe add a finisher on 00:19:729 (1) - ?
17.20 Benny-: I can hear a finisheralike sound in the music
17.21 Nelly: okay
17.22 Benny-: 00:24:487 (5,1) - and here also antiflow :s
17.23 Benny-: and here 00:25:315 (2,3) -
17.23 Benny-: and here 00:29:246 (3,1) - and 00:30:280 (2,3) -
17.23 Benny-: xd
17.25 Benny-: oh and finisher here too maybe 00:26:349 (1) -
17.26 Benny-: all makes sense?
17.26 Nelly: wait
17.26 Nelly: im still fixing stuff D:
17.26 Benny-: yesyes
17.26 Benny-: I'm just asking if you understood it
17.26 Benny-: haha<3
17.26 Benny-: if you got any questions n stuff
17.27 Nelly: trying to make a perfect flow here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7678537
17.27 Nelly: but I cant place a HD reverse slider
17.27 Nelly: thats what im doing currently
17.28 Benny-: yaok >< maybe you need to adjust some patterns before to make room for other patterns :s
17.29 Nelly: oh nvm i got it
17.29 Nelly: thanks distance snapping
17.29 Benny-: o
17.31 Nelly: wait
17.31 *Benny- is waiting
17.31 Nelly: what about 00:22:004 (2,3) - theyre also should be fixed right?
17.31 Benny-: nah they are fine
17.32 Benny-: follows flow
17.32 Nelly: ok
17.32 Nelly: ill check until ill say something
17.33 Nelly: is this fine? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7678580
17.34 Benny-: I think so
17.34 Benny-: It's a bit hard to see how it will play though
17.35 Nelly: well okay
17.35 Nelly: i guess its done :o
17.35 Benny-: did you fix the other hyperdashes as well?
17.35 Nelly: at the end?
17.36 Benny-: yes
17.36 Benny-: 00:24:487 (5,1) - 00:25:315 (2,3) - 00:29:246 (3,1) - 00:30:280 (2,3) -
17.36 Nelly: removed anti-flows
17.36 Nelly: yes
17.36 Benny-: okok
17.36 Benny-: good
17.36 Benny-: then it should be fine :3
17.37 Nelly: :ok_hand:
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