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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 13, 2017 at 9:19:09 PM

Artist: TO-MAS feat. Chima
Title: FLIP FLAP FLIP FLAP (TV SIZE)
Source: フリップフラッパーズ
Tags: flip flappers 伊藤真澄 itou masumi anime ed ending DJ Lucky
BPM: 117
Filesize: 16651kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.4 stars, 90 notes)
  2. Hard (2.28 stars, 175 notes)
  3. Insane (3.2 stars, 236 notes)
  4. Normal (1.92 stars, 166 notes)


Download: TO-MAS feat. Chima - FLIP FLAP FLIP FLAP (TV SIZE)
Download: TO-MAS feat. Chima - FLIP FLAP FLIP FLAP (TV SIZE) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Insane Hard Normal Easy made by me <3








Added my old username (DJ Lucky) to the tags
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General:
- Take metadata of this map would help

Normal:
- As it's a map lower than 2*, i propose for not use overlap which will confuse beginner players
- 00:08:978 (1,2) - i think make a blanket here will make it looks better
- 00:17:952 (2,3) - ^
- 01:00:260 (1,3) - ^
Hmm nothing else to say, the flow is quite interesting but maybe needs some work on aesthetic(advice: like slider at 00:01:798 (3) - , you can try to change it into
193,163,1798,2,0,P|252:136|327:163,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
to see if it's better for you.

Hard:
- 00:04:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - That stream will be quite a disaster for a hard diff, i propose for using a 1/1 inverse slider or, if u insist for using a stream, then put them together or scale their ds for 0.5x. The same for rest parts where you using streams(Ah except 00:49:490 (1,1,1) - )
- 00:39:106 (1) - the rhythm is right but a better choice would be make it into a 1/2 inverse slider like 00:37:952 (1,1,1) - and put a note at 00:39:490 -
- 00:49:490 (1,1,1) - as there don't have 3 strong beats, so i think we don't need to use 3 nc here, just 1-2-3
- 01:17:439 (2,3,1,1) - the strong part here is on 01:17:952 - , so i think instead of put a sliderend here, you can change 01:17:696 (3) - into 2 notes so that would emphasize 01:17:952 a lot

Good luck :D
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Neanmoins wrote:

from queue

General:
- Take metadata of this map would help lol this might be the map where I stole the mp3 from including the video...

Normal:
- As it's a map lower than 2*, i propose for not use overlap which will confuse beginner players I do agree to this but at the same time I going to get an Easy diff to make up for this because since there is no easier hard difficulty like a Advanced difficulity, I much have it kept like it is than to make it easier I'll try to fix this issue
- 00:08:978 (1,2) - i think make a blanket here will make it looks better added
- 00:17:952 (2,3) - ^ no change
- 01:00:260 (1,3) - ^ no change
Hmm nothing else to say, the flow is quite interesting but maybe needs some work on aesthetic(advice: like slider at 00:01:798 (3) - , you can try to change it into
193,163,1798,2,0,P|252:136|327:163,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
to see if it's better for you.

Hard:
- 00:04:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - That stream will be quite a disaster for a hard diff, i propose for using a 1/1 inverse slider or, if u insist for using a stream, then put them together or scale their ds for 0.5x. The same for rest parts where you using streams(Ah except 00:49:490 (1,1,1) - )I disagree with this - the stream are perfectly fine to me and I feel like this song being low bpm it not really not hard for players to do them
- 00:39:106 (1) - the rhythm is right but a better choice would be make it into a 1/2 inverse slider like 00:37:952 (1,1,1) - and put a note at 00:39:490 - I agree with this however no change at this moment
- 00:49:490 (1,1,1) - as there don't have 3 strong beats, so i think we don't need to use 3 nc here, just 1-2-3 changed
- 01:17:439 (2,3,1,1) - the strong part here is on 01:17:952 - , so i think instead of put a sliderend here, you can change 01:17:696 (3) - into 2 notes so that would emphasize 01:17:952 a lot changed

Good luck :D
k thanks for the mod :)
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Heya! This is my second mod, so... yeah.

General:
  1. Better quality background, but it looks like you've already considered this on your beatmap listing.


Normal:
SPOILER
  1. 00:04:106 (4) - What is this slider representing in the song? I can't hear anything in the song on the slider starts.
  2. 00:10:260 (4) - ^
  3. 00:12:311 (4) - ^
  4. 00:21:542 (2) - ^
  5. 00:47:183 (4) - ^
  6. *00:53:080 (3) - This is a good use of the reverse slider since it syncs with the vocals.*
  7. 00:49:490 (1) - I think there should be a circle 1/2 a bar after this circle (on the red), since I can hear something on that beat, and it follows the rhythm you are going for there.
  8. 01:10:516 (1) - 00:54:106 (1) - 01:06:414 (1) - 01:10:516 (1) - There are multiple times when a slider ends on a "Flap", maybe make the slider shorter and add a circle (or slider) on "Flap"? I feel that the "Flap" should be emphasized more, like what is done at 00:50:773 (2,3,4)


Hard:
SPOILER
  1. 00:22:183 (4) - I'm not feeling this circle, it doesn't really fit with the song.
  2. 00:46:798 (4) - ^
  3. 00:55:003 (4) - ^
  4. 01:11:414 (3) - ^
  5. 00:37:952 (1,1,1,1) - I don't really like the sliders here, if you want to keep the sliders here, I think there needs to be a better transition into the sliders. The white -> red beat feels a little strange to me, maybe transition into the reverse sliders with a short stream, or maybe just a longer slider?
  6. 01:15:131 (3) - After this it feels a little empty, maybe change this to a slider?


Good luck with the map, I'm liking the direction of the map and really like the song.
posted

Stedoss wrote:

Heya! This is my second mod, so... yeah.

General:
  1. Better quality background, but it looks like you've already considered this on your beatmap listing.


Normal:
SPOILER
  1. 00:04:106 (4) - What is this slider representing in the song? I can't hear anything in the song on the slider starts. I added this slider like this because I thought it fit - there is actually a stream here but I figure that since it is a normal i had to interpret it differently
  2. 00:10:260 (4) - ^ same
  3. 00:12:311 (4) - ^ ^
  4. 00:21:542 (2) - ^ change this one
  5. 00:47:183 (4) - ^ no change
  6. *00:53:080 (3) - This is a good use of the reverse slider since it syncs with the vocals.*
  7. 00:49:490 (1) - I think there should be a circle 1/2 a bar after this circle (on the red), since I can hear something on that beat, and it follows the rhythm you are going for there. added
  8. 01:10:516 (1) - 00:54:106 (1) - 01:06:414 (1) - 01:10:516 (1) - There are multiple times when a slider ends on a "Flap", maybe make the slider shorter and add a circle (or slider) on "Flap"? I feel that the "Flap" should be emphasized more, like what is done at 00:50:773 (2,3,4) no changes for now


Hard:
SPOILER
  1. 00:22:183 (4) - I'm not feeling this circle, it doesn't really fit with the song. there is sound here so i disagree also same for all down below this
  2. 00:46:798 (4) - ^
  3. 00:55:003 (4) - ^
  4. 01:11:414 (3) - ^
  5. 00:37:952 (1,1,1,1) - I don't really like the sliders here, if you want to keep the sliders here, I think there needs to be a better transition into the sliders. The white -> red beat feels a little strange to me, maybe transition into the reverse sliders with a short stream, or maybe just a longer slider? it fits the song and I really don't want to change this part into something different
  6. 01:15:131 (3) - After this it feels a little empty, maybe change this to a slider? well consider the fact there is no sound which why it stop there I see no need to


Good luck with the map, I'm liking the direction of the map and really like the song.
thanks for the mod ;D
posted
looks like you put the tags in the source box, fix pls
posted
Hello :v
Hard
  1. 00:08:465 (4,5,1) - 00:08:465 (4,5,1) - spacing is a bit diferent https://puu.sh/thUYn/66b6b459b7.png
  2. 00:08:978 (1,2,3) - End of slider+circles - diferent spacing
  3. 00:08:978 (1,4) - imo this overlap is bad
  4. I think this stream 00:10:516 (1,2,3,4) - should be placed on the right from slider 00:10:003 (4) - to keep anti-clockwise movement.
  5. 00:10:003 (4,1) - overlap, the same as above
  6. 00:11:285 -shorten this slider and put reverse here (imo its better)
  7. 00:11:029 (1,2) - blanket
  8. 00:13:593 (2,3) - I dont 'feel' this part. Try this https://puu.sh/thVWm/23d9107815.png
  9. 00:17:183 (1,2,3) - 00:25:388 (1,2,3) - 00:27:439 (1,2,3) - this angle is too big. Make it more straight :v Fix spacing too
  10. 00:19:234 (1,2,3) - this is the same as above, but spacing is bigger, it should be same as 00:17:183 (1,2,3) -
  11. 00:17:183 (1,2,3) - overlap
  12. 00:17:183 (1,2,3) -^ on sliders
  13. 00:27:439 (1,2,3) - overlap
  14. 00:28:465 (5,6,7) - this spcacing is shorter than the rest (00:30:003 (3,4,5) - )
  15. 00:37:952 (1,1,1,1) - this is baaaad :v Dont start sliders on blue ticks! :v https://puu.sh/thWrO/1c37a16c7f.png thy this
  16. 00:40:003 (1,1,1,1) - ^
  17. i dont like it 00:52:055 (1) - try this https://puu.sh/thWCc/6665ed226f.png or this https://puu.sh/thWCW/a45fda2007.png
  18. 00:54:106 (1,2) - put slider there instead of circles to match this "flap" as you did here 00:50:003 (1,2,3,4) -
  19. 01:16:157 (5,3) - blanket
  20. 01:20:516 (1,1) - put triple as you did there 01:19:490 (1,2,3) -

Thats it..for now.
id recomend you to decrase sliders curve, because sliders like these are looking bad 00:07:439 (2) -
Good luck!
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Blan_C wrote:

Hello :v
Hard
  1. 00:08:465 (4,5,1) - 00:08:465 (4,5,1) - spacing is a bit diferent https://puu.sh/thUYn/66b6b459b7.png
  2. 00:08:978 (1,2,3) - End of slider+circles - diferent spacing
  3. 00:08:978 (1,4) - imo this overlap is bad
  4. I think this stream 00:10:516 (1,2,3,4) - should be placed on the right from slider 00:10:003 (4) - to keep anti-clockwise movement.
  5. 00:10:003 (4,1) - overlap, the same as above
  6. 00:11:285 -shorten this slider and put reverse here (imo its better)
  7. 00:11:029 (1,2) - blanket
  8. 00:13:593 (2,3) - I dont 'feel' this part. Try this https://puu.sh/thVWm/23d9107815.png
  9. 00:17:183 (1,2,3) - 00:25:388 (1,2,3) - 00:27:439 (1,2,3) - this angle is too big. Make it more straight :v Fix spacing too
  10. 00:19:234 (1,2,3) - this is the same as above, but spacing is bigger, it should be same as 00:17:183 (1,2,3) -
  11. 00:17:183 (1,2,3) - overlap
  12. 00:17:183 (1,2,3) -^ on sliders
  13. 00:27:439 (1,2,3) - overlap
  14. 00:28:465 (5,6,7) - this spcacing is shorter than the rest (00:30:003 (3,4,5) - )
  15. 00:37:952 (1,1,1,1) - this is baaaad :v Dont start sliders on blue ticks! :v https://puu.sh/thWrO/1c37a16c7f.png thy this there is nothing wrong with this - this is a kind of a stream and the slider on the blue ticks for this reason is perfectly fine
  16. 00:40:003 (1,1,1,1) - ^ see above for reason
  17. i dont like it 00:52:055 (1) - try this https://puu.sh/thWCc/6665ed226f.png or this https://puu.sh/thWCW/a45fda2007.png
  18. 00:54:106 (1,2) - put slider there instead of circles to match this "flap" as you did here 00:50:003 (1,2,3,4) - no change
  19. 01:16:157 (5,3) - blanket
  20. 01:20:516 (1,1) - put triple as you did there 01:19:490 (1,2,3) -

Thats it..for now.
id recomend you to decrase sliders curve, because sliders like these are looking bad 00:07:439 (2) -
Good luck!
You know it sad when u asked for mods for weeks and when u finally do get one u stop playing the game...

anyways i'm sorry it took so long just for this

I really just apply to the main things that I decline on ur post while everything is minor but I did change some stuff.
posted
Hello,
just a quick mod for your Hard difficulty

  1. 00:00:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't really like how this feels. 00:01:285 (2,4,2) - All these sliderends feel like they should be clicked because the vocals have new syllables or words or whatever. https://puu.sh/xj1mF/c81445b748.png this could be fitting. Same goes for the slider after that part.
  2. 00:08:978 (1,2,3,4) - 00:13:593 (2,3) - 00:17:439 (3,4,5) - 00:27:439 (1,2,3) - You should really take care about your aesthetics more. There are bad blankets 00:08:978 (1,3) - , distances to other objects are not perfect 00:10:003 (4) - ,seemingly same objects but they look slightly different 00:13:593 (2,3) - (use copy paste), Symmetries not done well 00:17:439 (3,4,5) -
    All these little mistakes keep summing up to one big one and thats not really good.
  3. 00:33:080 (1) - even tho you emphasized this sound through spaceing i don't think just a circle is fitting here. try to put a reverse 1/4 slider there so you get the sound mapped that follows. You can maybe even put a stream here but leaving it blank is not really good.
  4. 00:37:696 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i actually have no clue at all what you are doing here. 00:37:952 (1) - what is this mapped to? it starts like without any reason and ends where something should have started. All these reverse slider should have to start on the white ticks. Next thing about this is, the reverse slider feel unfitting. They are always the same basically but you can clearly hear the singer going higher from 00:37:696 (1) - to 00:38:721 (1) - and then again from 00:39:747 (1) - to 00:40:773 (1) - You should the increased density in the song reflect with your map but putting the same thing here 00:37:952 (1) - and 00:40:773 (1) - is not good at all.
  5. 00:52:055 (1) - why don't you map the white tick? its kiai you want to have this the climax of your map. Putting a long slider there really takes a lot of density of your map and slows it down. Overall your kiai feels much easier then the middle part of your map.
  6. 01:21:029 (2,3) - make sure you do not do this both these slider have their strongest sound not clicked. They are either in the middle or at the end.
  7. 01:18:721 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1) - generally this last part is kinda weird. You switched back and forth between mapping to lyrics and drums. 01:18:721 (1,1,2,3,1) - these are lyrics 01:20:773 (1,2,3,4) - drums 01:22:824 (1) - lyrics 01:23:593 (2) - drums 01:24:875 (1,1,1) - drums and lyrics (this is good actually). But don't change that often in such a short time to what you are mapping to. pick one thing you want to make stand out. this is how i would have done it maybe my cursor in the picture is at 01:22:311 (7) - . You can come up with something different tho.


So overall be more consistent with aesthetics and with emphasis.
Ask me if something is unclear

Good luck with your map.
posted
#modreqs

quick mod on hard because bored

[Hard]

  1. 00:00:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - tbh the rhythm you chose here is extremely boring... It's mostly just 1/2 sliders the whole section while ignoring all the vocal changes in the song
  2. 00:13:593 (2,3) - These repeats kinda play weird, as they dont start on any important beats, something like this would work a lot better imo
  3. 00:15:644 (1,1) - Don't think these ncs are needed really
  4. 00:17:183 (1,2,3) - these triples are all uneven and they look really weird and kinda awkward to play, you should try a lot smaller spacing like in 00:10:773 (3,4) - and such, or possibly just stack
  5. 00:34:619 (3,4) - Unexpected 1/4 jump here, better just to make it a lot smaller as most people would definitely read it as 1/2 if you do something like this out of the blue
  6. 00:37:696 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - well these are REALLY weird. Not sure why you decided to nc every single one and why a lot of them start on blue ticks. That's basically unreadable stuff right there.
  7. 01:08:465 (5) - tbh I'd probably just have a circle here and continue sliders at 01:08:721 - when vocals continue
  8. 01:15:131 (3,4) - might want to change this somehow, this looks like 1/2 gap after those jumps
  9. 01:20:773 (1,2) - Kinda weird rhythm choice again imo, as there's an emphasized beat here 01:21:285 -
  10. 01:23:593 (2) - ^ kinda same thing here
posted

Zunv wrote:

Hello,
just a quick mod for your Hard difficulty

  1. 00:00:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't really like how this feels. 00:01:285 (2,4,2) - All these sliderends feel like they should be clicked because the vocals have new syllables or words or whatever. https://puu.sh/xj1mF/c81445b748.png this could be fitting. Same goes for the slider after that part.
    I see what you mean - I did a hotfix so at least it looks better atm - I will go with something similar to suggestio
  2. 00:08:978 (1,2,3,4) - 00:13:593 (2,3) - 00:17:439 (3,4,5) - 00:27:439 (1,2,3) - You should really take care about your aesthetics more. There are bad blankets 00:08:978 (1,3) - , distances to other objects are not perfect 00:10:003 (4) - ,seemingly same objects but they look slightly different 00:13:593 (2,3) - (use copy paste), Symmetries not done well 00:17:439 (3,4,5) - I agree - the only reason why eveything is like that is basically because I only rewok the difficulty - I haven't polish yet so oh course symmetry is gonna look kind of bad until I fix it
    All these little mistakes keep summing up to one big one and thats not really good.
  3. 00:33:080 (1) - even tho you emphasized this sound through spaceing i don't think just a circle is fitting here. try to put a reverse 1/4 slider there so you get the sound mapped that follows. You can maybe even put a stream here but leaving it blank is not really good. Some things I left un touched because I wanted this to just be an hard difficulty - I wasn't planned on mapping to everything in this map - I will add though since it hard nothing
  4. 00:37:696 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i actually have no clue at all what you are doing here. 00:37:952 (1) - what is this mapped to? it starts like without any reason and ends where something should have started. All these reverse slider should have to start on the white ticks. Next thing about this is, the reverse slider feel unfitting. They are always the same basically but you can clearly hear the singer going higher from 00:37:696 (1) - to 00:38:721 (1) - and then again from 00:39:747 (1) - to 00:40:773 (1) - You should the increased density in the song reflect with your map but putting the same thing here 00:37:952 (1) - and 00:40:773 (1) - is not good at all. I change it to where it has only one repeating slider than stream and than the other part similar but has higher spacing - This is a hard difficulty and I much rather not gradually increase the spacing
  5. 00:52:055 (1) - why don't you map the white tick? its kiai you want to have this the climax of your map. Putting a long slider there really takes a lot of density of your map and slows it down. Overall your kiai feels much easier then the middle part of your map. Meh - I agree that the kiai needs to be more interesting but right now I kept it simple until I do change it
  6. 01:21:029 (2,3) - make sure you do not do this both these slider have their strongest sound not clicked. They are either in the middle or at the end.
  7. 01:18:721 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,1) - generally this last part is kinda weird. You switched back and forth between mapping to lyrics and drums. 01:18:721 (1,1,2,3,1) - these are lyrics 01:20:773 (1,2,3,4) - drums 01:22:824 (1) - lyrics 01:23:593 (2) - drums 01:24:875 (1,1,1) - drums and lyrics (this is good actually). But don't change that often in such a short time to what you are mapping to. pick one thing you want to make stand out. this is how i would have done it maybe my cursor in the picture is at 01:22:311 (7) - . You can come up with something different tho.


So overall be more consistent with aesthetics and with emphasis.
Ask me if something is unclear

Good luck with your map.
Thanks for mod - This map just got fresh rework so I ain't expecting things to get pretty after only an hour of fixing every problem that was there 9 months ago

I will change the beginning and I will map more to the kiai section -

My Angel Mir wrote:

#modreqs

quick mod on hard because bored

[Hard]

  1. 00:00:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - tbh the rhythm you chose here is extremely boring... It's mostly just 1/2 sliders the whole section while ignoring all the vocal changes in the song Already mention what was going to be change here
  2. 00:13:593 (2,3) - These repeats kinda play weird, as they dont start on any important beats, something like this would work a lot better imo
  3. 00:15:644 (1,1) - Don't think these ncs are needed reallythey ain't just - Just forgot to get rid of them when I change this
  4. 00:17:183 (1,2,3) - these triples are all uneven and they look really weird and kinda awkward to play, you should try a lot smaller spacing like in 00:10:773 (3,4) - and such, or possibly just stack fix mass majority of them since I didn't like the spacing at all - will continue to work on them
  5. 00:34:619 (3,4) - Unexpected 1/4 jump here, better just to make it a lot smaller as most people would definitely read it as 1/2 if you do something like this out of the blue Made it smaller and add a NC to help as a hotfix until I come up with something different or keep it like it is
  6. 00:37:696 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - well these are REALLY weird. Not sure why you decided to nc every single one and why a lot of them start on blue ticks. That's basically unreadable stuff right there. this has been change completely by the mod above
  7. 01:08:465 (5) - tbh I'd probably just have a circle here and continue sliders at 01:08:721 - when vocals continue
  8. 01:15:131 (3,4) - might want to change this somehow, this looks like 1/2 gap after those jumps Did an hotfix - their is a NC here until I change the spacing
  9. 01:20:773 (1,2) - Kinda weird rhythm choice again imo, as there's an emphasized beat here 01:21:285 -
  10. 01:23:593 (2) - ^ kinda same thing here kiai is getting change
Thanks for the mod
posted
Normal

01:19:490 (2) - not stacked properly ?

other diff seems fine. gl :)
posted

Kyousukee wrote:

Normal

01:19:490 (2) - not stacked properly ?

other diff seems fine. gl :)
fix it thanks
posted
Hello, I have some feedback.

Advanced
[00:00:773 - 00:01:542] A single circle followed by a 1/2 slider would make more sense here based on how the syllables of the vocals are stressed. The new slider would finish on 00:01:798
[00:02:311 - 00:02:567] "Chi-wa", vocal emphasis is clearly with a 1/2 slider.
[00:03:849] This should not be a slider, a circle is clearer. The end of the slider you have occurs without a sound.
[00:04:362] This repeating slider should only last 3/4 of beat not 1.
[00:05:901] The strings play for less time than the slider, change from 1 to 1/2 slider.
[00:06:414] You began mapping the vocals passively with the slider, but a new combo to highlight the change in what is being mapped is more understandable. Either two circles placed 1/2 beat part or a 1/2 would make sense.
[00:06:926-00:07:696] Two 1/2 sliders would better represent the similar sounds of the lyrics.
[00:07:952] The strings finish their note at the end of this 1/2 slider, but you're following the vocals, since this is a lower difficulty a circle would be easier to understand.
[00:09:747] This is an awkward shape for a lower difficulty, consider following the circular flow here or stacking the two circles.
[00:10:260] The flute sound occurs at 00:10:516, and is only 3 1/4 rhythms. For consistency, it should be mapped the same as earlier.
[00:11:029 - 00:11:542] There are 3 sounds here, each 1/2 beat apart.
[00:12:311 - 00:12:824] Mapping the flute here would provide more consistency.
[00:13:593] This silder end does not occur on a sound, consider a circle instead - at 00:13:080.
[00:15:131 - 00:16:670] Consider some low spacing here, without only 1 new combo for the 4 notes.
[00:17:183] This is the first 1/4 slider used with the vocals, a circle would be more understandable.
[00:18:208] There is no sound where the slider repeats, use a 1 slider instead.
[00:19:234] Same as [00:17:183].
[00:20:773] Only 3 flute notes not 4.
A circle for the vocals would make more sense.
[00:21:798] (see above)
[00:22:183] There is no sound here.
[00:25:388] This slider would make more sense if it went from bottom to top instead of vice versa.
[00:26:157] 1/2 slider starting here, there is no sound on 00:26:670.
[00:27:439 - 00:28:465] A 1/2 slider followed by a repeated 1/2 slider would represent the 5 sounds in this section.
[00:28:721] My guess is that this circle was intended to map the end of the strings sound, but the map would be better without it.
[00:30:260] The previous slider should finish here, instead of mapping a circle here.
[00:30:388] There is no sound here.
[00:30:516] If your intent is to map the strings here, a new combo would let the player know that your switching from mapping the vocals to the strings.
[00:31:542 - 00:33:080] It is unclear what you are mapping here, a pause or mapping the bells(?) would work. At 00:33:080 there is a basoon(?) that you map as well.
[00:37:696 - 00:40:773] I'm do not think repeated 1/4 sliders follow the rhythm here.
[00:41:285] These two circles should be away from the slider, since they represent percussive sounds while the slider is strings.
[00:44:362] Use a 1/2 slider without a repeat, then start a slider on the strong vocal sound. So 3 1/2 sliders here instead of 2 repeated 1/2 sliders.
[00:46:670] Same as [00:17:183].
[00:50:003] Using the 1 beat slider, for the "Flip-flop" vocals could be repeated throughout to draw attention to it.
[00:54:875] Again, 1 circle follows the vocals better than a 1/4 slider.
[01:03:080] (same as above.)
[01:04:875] Move this slider up a bit, it looks nicer, (very much opinion.)
[01:06:414] I would like to see you use 1 beat sliders to repeat the idea that you presented earlier with the "Flip-flop" vocals.
[01:11:285] Circle > 1/4 slider.
[01:12:567] The slider here could start 1/2 beat later to follow the vocals instead of the strings. Very much your call.
[01:14:619] It would be better if these 3 circles were the same distance apart, time = distance consistency is important on lower difficulties especially.
[01:18:080] No sound here.
[01:19:619] (see above.)
[01:24:875] No need to new combo each note, could use larger spacing to emphasive that these circles are 1 beat apart instead of 1/2 beat apart.

I may get around to the other difficulties later.
These are my comments, and thus my opinions so do with them as you will.
~Krameer
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Krameer wrote:

Hello, I have some feedback.

Advanced
[00:00:773 - 00:01:542] A single circle followed by a 1/2 slider would make more sense here based on how the syllables of the vocals are stressed. The new slider would finish on 00:01:798
[00:02:311 - 00:02:567] "Chi-wa", vocal emphasis is clearly with a 1/2 slider.
[00:03:849] This should not be a slider, a circle is clearer. The end of the slider you have occurs without a sound. change the begining a bit
[00:04:362] This repeating slider should only last 3/4 of beat not 1. no change
[00:05:901] The strings play for less time than the slider, change from 1 to 1/2 slider. change
[00:06:414] You began mapping the vocals passively with the slider, but a new combo to highlight the change in what is being mapped is more understandable. Either two circles placed 1/2 beat part or a 1/2 would make sense. change
[00:06:926-00:07:696] Two 1/2 sliders would better represent the similar sounds of the lyrics.
[00:07:952] The strings finish their note at the end of this 1/2 slider, but you're following the vocals, since this is a lower difficulty a circle would be easier to understand.
[00:09:747] This is an awkward shape for a lower difficulty, consider following the circular flow here or stacking the two circles. tried to change
[00:10:260] The flute sound occurs at 00:10:516, and is only 3 1/4 rhythms. For consistency, it should be mapped the same as earlier. change
[00:11:029 - 00:11:542] There are 3 sounds here, each 1/2 beat apart.
[00:12:311 - 00:12:824] Mapping the flute here would provide more consistency. change
[00:13:593] This silder end does not occur on a sound, consider a circle instead - at 00:13:080.
[00:15:131 - 00:16:670] Consider some low spacing here, without only 1 new combo for the 4 notes.
[00:17:183] This is the first 1/4 slider used with the vocals, a circle would be more understandable.
[00:18:208] There is no sound where the slider repeats, use a 1 slider instead.
[00:19:234] Same as [00:17:183].
[00:20:773] Only 3 flute notes not 4.
A circle for the vocals would make more sense. it is fine like it is
[00:21:798] (see above)
[00:22:183] There is no sound here.
[00:25:388] This slider would make more sense if it went from bottom to top instead of vice versa. I'm confuse here so no change
[00:26:157] 1/2 slider starting here, there is no sound on 00:26:670.
[00:27:439 - 00:28:465] A 1/2 slider followed by a repeated 1/2 slider would represent the 5 sounds in this section.
[00:28:721] My guess is that this circle was intended to map the end of the strings sound, but the map would be better without it. no change for now
[00:30:260] The previous slider should finish here, instead of mapping a circle here. no it fine like it is
[00:30:388] There is no sound here.
[00:30:516] If your intent is to map the strings here, a new combo would let the player know that your switching from mapping the vocals to the strings.
[00:31:542 - 00:33:080] It is unclear what you are mapping here, a pause or mapping the bells(?) would work. At 00:33:080 there is a basoon(?) that you map as well. change slightly and yes I was mapping to the bells
[00:37:696 - 00:40:773] I'm do not think repeated 1/4 sliders follow the rhythm here. it does sorta but I see what your saying
[00:41:285] These two circles should be away from the slider, since they represent percussive sounds while the slider is strings.
[00:44:362] Use a 1/2 slider without a repeat, then start a slider on the strong vocal sound. So 3 1/2 sliders here instead of 2 repeated 1/2 sliders.
[00:46:670] Same as [00:17:183].
[00:50:003] Using the 1 beat slider, for the "Flip-flop" vocals could be repeated throughout to draw attention to it. I might do that since this is the advanced difficulty but at the same time I pretty much do similar to do that in my normal difficulty and I want to keep this difficulty more challenging than that 1
[00:54:875] Again, 1 circle follows the vocals better than a 1/4 slider. I figure the slider flow better for new players is follow the vocals just as well
[01:03:080] (same as above.)
[01:04:875] Move this slider up a bit, it looks nicer, (very much opinion.) change
[01:06:414] I would like to see you use 1 beat sliders to repeat the idea that you presented earlier with the "Flip-flop" vocals.
[01:11:285] Circle > 1/4 slider.
[01:12:567] The slider here could start 1/2 beat later to follow the vocals instead of the strings. Very much your call.
[01:14:619] It would be better if these 3 circles were the same distance apart, time = distance consistency is important on lower difficulties especially.
[01:18:080] No sound here.
[01:19:619] (see above.)
[01:24:875] No need to new combo each note, could use larger spacing to emphasive that these circles are 1 beat apart instead of 1/2 beat apart. the NC is fine here - if it needs to be change cause of the level of the difficulty than that is when I will do so

I may get around to the other difficulties later.
These are my comments, and thus my opinions so do with them as you will.
~Krameer
On most things I agree with and stuff I didn't is replied in red and stuff that been repeating about the same issue that was in red also mean I disagree

The stuff you said about no sound - I clearly hear a sound there so no change

but overall stuff I haven't replied/written in pink = fix

Thanks for the mod

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(This has nothing to do with ur mod btw - just pointing this out for future mods)
the only things I ain't really changing is the difficulty of Advanced - because this may be just an advanced - but it has to be harder than Normal and it already at a low star than I planned (suppose to be 2.6*) so any changes that involve over all decrease to difficulty is no change unless obviously hard
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Hi, from modreqs

Normal
00:22:055 (3,4) - make same shape
00:33:593 (1,3) - ^
00:48:465 (1,1,1) - remove nc
00:54:106 (1,2) - awk flow
01:16:670 (1,2) - ^
01:25:388 (1,1) - remove nc
There's not too many specific problems with this map, I just feel some of the note placement and flow looks a bit un-neat and overall it seems a bit too dense rhythm wise, but SR is kept low due to big cs and low spacing.
Advanced
AR8 OD6 is far too high for a 2*, AR6 max for an advanced and probably OD5 would work well
00:05:901 (3,4) - parallel flow?
00:11:798 (2,3,4) - distance snap
00:30:260 (2,3,4) - i'd avoid stacking these, make it obvious how many notes there are as you're also stacking 1/2 notes and this could be confusing to a new player
00:33:593 (1,3) - make same shape
00:37:696 (1,2,3) - distance snap
00:39:747 (1,2,3) - copy and paste from previous
00:48:465 (1,1,1) - remove nc
00:47:952 (1,1,1) - equilateral triangle - use create polygon circle tool
00:56:157 (1) - make this curve more gentle then blanket with 00:57:439 (2)
00:57:696 (3,1) - make parallel
01:04:875 (1,1,1) - remove nc
01:08:465 (1) - curve more gentle, blanket with 2
01:12:567 (1) - make symmetrical
01:25:388 (1,1) - remove nc

Decent map
Hard
Consider AR7, OD6 for this low SR
00:04:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - move a bit closer to previous (3)
00:07:439 (2,3) - same shape
00:07:952 (3) - make sure doesn't go outside play area
00:08:465 (4,5,1) - https://i.gyazo.com/2faef611c1560906840 ... 46296e.png
00:09:490 (2) - Spacing a little bit high?
00:10:003 (4,1) - make sure 4 flows into 1
00:10:516 (1) - could remove NC, not sure
00:18:978 (6) - stack perfectly on 4
00:20:773 (6,7,8,9,1) - curve a bit neater
00:24:875 (4,1) - make flow - you have to remember that streaming isn't common at this star difficulty so try and make it as simple as possible
00:27:183 (7,1) - ^
00:29:490 (1) - lower the height a bit, looks a bit crap atm https://i.gyazo.com/35645e6c72c1691eb2c ... 26ae56.png
00:30:260 (2,3) - don't stack, be consistent and use the same spacing as before
00:32:055 (1,1) - remove nc
00:35:131 (1,1) - that's a bit mean
00:36:157 (3,4,5) - space out a little
00:37:952 (1) - remove nc
00:39:234 (1) - ^
00:40:003 (1) - ^
00:41:285 (1) - ^
00:48:465 (1,1) - ^
00:49:490 (1,2,3,4) - keep same spacing as before
01:04:875 (1,1,1) - remove nc
01:04:362 (1,1) - could increase SV on these 2, if you do keep NC on 01:04:875 (1)
01:15:644 (1) - stack on 3 and remove nc
01:19:490 (1,2) - don't stack
01:20:516 (1) - remove nc
01:24:106 (4,5,6) - don't stack
01:25:388 (1,1) - remove nc

Decent map, has potential, just fix some inconsistency issues and calm it on the NCs lol
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rockstarrzz wrote:

Hi, from modreqs

Normal
00:22:055 (3,4) - make same shape
00:33:593 (1,3) - ^
00:48:465 (1,1,1) - remove nc
00:54:106 (1,2) - awk flow
01:16:670 (1,2) - ^
01:25:388 (1,1) - remove nc
There's not too many specific problems with this map, I just feel some of the note placement and flow looks a bit un-neat and overall it seems a bit too dense rhythm wise, but SR is kept low due to big cs and low spacing.
Advanced
AR8 OD6 is far too high for a 2*, AR6 max for an advanced and probably OD5 would work well
00:05:901 (3,4) - parallel flow?
00:11:798 (2,3,4) - distance snap
00:30:260 (2,3,4) - i'd avoid stacking these, make it obvious how many notes there are as you're also stacking 1/2 notes and this could be confusing to a new player
00:33:593 (1,3) - make same shape
00:37:696 (1,2,3) - distance snap
00:39:747 (1,2,3) - copy and paste from previous
00:48:465 (1,1,1) - remove nc
00:47:952 (1,1,1) - equilateral triangle - use create polygon circle tool
00:56:157 (1) - make this curve more gentle then blanket with 00:57:439 (2)
00:57:696 (3,1) - make parallel
01:04:875 (1,1,1) - remove nc
01:08:465 (1) - curve more gentle, blanket with 2
01:12:567 (1) - make symmetrical
01:25:388 (1,1) - remove nc

Decent map
Hard
Consider AR7, OD6 for this low SR
00:04:362 (1,2,3,4,1) - move a bit closer to previous (3)
00:07:439 (2,3) - same shape
00:07:952 (3) - make sure doesn't go outside play area
00:08:465 (4,5,1) - https://i.gyazo.com/2faef611c1560906840 ... 46296e.png
00:09:490 (2) - Spacing a little bit high?
00:10:003 (4,1) - make sure 4 flows into 1
00:10:516 (1) - could remove NC, not sure
00:18:978 (6) - stack perfectly on 4
00:20:773 (6,7,8,9,1) - curve a bit neater
00:24:875 (4,1) - make flow - you have to remember that streaming isn't common at this star difficulty so try and make it as simple as possible
00:27:183 (7,1) - ^
00:29:490 (1) - lower the height a bit, looks a bit crap atm https://i.gyazo.com/35645e6c72c1691eb2c ... 26ae56.png
00:30:260 (2,3) - don't stack, be consistent and use the same spacing as before
00:32:055 (1,1) - remove nc
00:35:131 (1,1) - that's a bit mean
00:36:157 (3,4,5) - space out a little
00:37:952 (1) - remove nc
00:39:234 (1) - ^
00:40:003 (1) - ^
00:41:285 (1) - ^
00:48:465 (1,1) - ^
00:49:490 (1,2,3,4) - keep same spacing as before
01:04:875 (1,1,1) - remove nc
01:04:362 (1,1) - could increase SV on these 2, if you do keep NC on 01:04:875 (1)
01:15:644 (1) - stack on 3 and remove nc
01:19:490 (1,2) - don't stack I am not changing it because it look weird and awkward it isn't
01:20:516 (1) - remove nc
01:24:106 (4,5,6) - don't stack nope - the reason is because I don't normal have these circle unstack unless it was along side a slider and it will look off putting to suddenly do this at the end of the map
01:25:388 (1,1) - remove nc

Decent map, has potential, just fix some inconsistency issues and calm it on the NCs lol
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EDIT - RIP I accidently cut off my damn reply to this mod so basically...


I agree to all Normal - I will happily nerf/change it if it deem to hard for the lowest difficulty and it make it easier

Hard I change majority and Same for Advanced

the only thing I didn't agree was some of the NCs but I got rid of the ones that was useless and had no reason to actually be there

replied to some things I didn't change with reasoning

thanks for the mod
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EggsGone wrote:

  • NM request

    [Normal]
  1. 01:22:824 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent distance.
  2. 00:00:773 (1,3) - Just make them similar. Just ctrl+c ; ctrl+v; ctrl+<(2x) and ctrl+g and you done.
  3. 00:02:824 (1,2,3,4) - You can try here a peel motion placement http://i.imgur.com/tKnUeBG.png http://i.imgur.com/GsWv4jr.png Just check this guide if you wanna know more about them.
  4. 00:05:901 (3,4) - D I S T A N C E pls.
  5. 00:07:952 (3,4) - could blanket this.
  6. 00:08:978 (1,2) - ^ you can improve this too.
  7. 00:11:029 (1) - a neat sliderwave should look like this http://i.imgur.com/GSCbYOs.png
  8. 00:12:311 (4,1) - Blanket.
  9. 00:19:234 (1,2) - check the distance again.
  10. 00:40:773 (3,4) - ^
  11. 00:41:798 (1,2) - ^
  12. 00:52:824 (2,3) - ^
  13. 01:04:362 (1,2) - ^
  14. 00:33:593 (1) - Make it neat.
  15. 00:34:619 (1) - ^
  16. 00:58:208 (1) - ^
  17. 00:56:157 (1) - You could make this symmetrical.
  18. 01:02:311 (1) - ^
  19. 00:37:696 (1,2,3) - 00:39:747 (1,2,3) - If it's hard to make this pattern more organised, you can try peel motion placement again.
  20. 00:47:952 (1,2) - This pattern doesn't look symmetrical. To make this just copy paste first slider into second and flip it in horizontally axis and ctrl+g don't forget.
  21. 01:19:747 (1) - Slider is overlaping himself.
  22. 01:25:901 (3) - Place it on x:293 Y:373 to make more perfect triangle pattern. ^^

    Nothing I disagree


    [Advanced]
  23. 00:09:747 (2,3,4) - I think you can make jumps smaller.
  24. 00:12:055 (3,4) - Just keep spacing same as these 00:11:798 (2,3) - because music is similar here 00:09:747 (2,3,4,5) - but doesn't have huge jump at the third note.
  25. 00:17:183 (1,2) - Just make a 1/1 slider to follow pitch sound.rather have it like it is
  26. 00:34:362 (2,3) - Stack it properly. Move slider on X:50 Y:177there isn't nothing wrong here
  27. 00:38:721 (3,1) - I don't think it's good idea to make a 1/4 jump.my bad here - didn't realize it was like that so change
  28. 00:40:772 (3,1) - ^ this is even bigger. same
  29. 00:54:106 (1) - Improve sliderwave. change
  30. 01:10:516 (1) - ^ change
  31. 00:56:157 (1,2) - You can improve a blanket a bit.
  32. 01:12:567 (1) - You can make this symmetrical.
  33. 01:19:490 (1,2) - Looks like you never did 1/4 thing with circles before, how about to switch into slider.
  34. 01:24:875 (1,1,1) - combo inconsistensy with normal difficulty. Normal diff is like that so it be easier to read - this is like this to be prepare for hard difficulty

    [Hard]
  35. 00:10:516 (5,6,7,8) - fourh doesn't look that smooth maybe try to convert it from slider with ctrl+shift+f
  36. 00:21:798 (3,4,5) - How about to make more symmetrical design here?
  37. 00:34:619 (3) - Sliderwave isn't ok. adjusted
  38. 01:18:721 (1) - 01:19:747 (3) - 01:02:311 (1) - Slidertail is overlaped by sliderhead a bit. nothing wrong here - it suppose to look like that to since I thought it fit with the music
  39. 00:46:414 (3,4,5) - 01:11:029 (2,3,4) - 01:17:696 (5,6,7) - 00:08:465 (4,5,1) - 00:30:516 (4,5,6) - DS Inconsistency. all changed
  40. 00:56:670 (2,3,4,5,6) - Star pattern not even neat. Use ctrl+shift+d. change
thanks for the mod :)

any thing I didn't reply assume it is fix
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hey~
From my modding queue!
Some obvious things

I think you want to go for rank, so you still need an Easy difficulty.
[Normal]
Things that could be changed
The combo colour fit in with the background. if I remember correctly, they should build a contrast and not be the same.
Maybe use Black or Dark Blue.

01:04:362 (1,2) - I think the spacing could be closer together.


Really good diff.

[Advanced]

Things that could be changed
00:04:362 (4) - Too many reverses may be confusing for people just starting out with the game.

00:17:183 (1) - I don't think the 1/4 thingy here is a good idea here. Maybe something like this?

00:19:234 (1,2) - Maybe try to find a way to go around those 1/4s. They are too fast for new players.

00:21:798 (2,3,4) - ^

00:30:260 (2,3) - ^

There are many more of those 1/4 things in the map, I don't list them all here.

This diff is decent.

[Hard]

Great difficulty.

Just a few tips.

00:46:670 (2,3) - Here are jumps, but 01:15:644 (4,5) are sliders. Just replace the sliders with similar jumps as the music is basically the same.

01:16:670 (1,2,3) - This "stream" seems forced. Delete 2 and you have a nice alternative.

All in all a very nice map.
Hope you can rank this!
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