Hello, I have some feedback.
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[00:00:773 - 00:01:542] A single circle followed by a 1/2 slider would make more sense here based on how the syllables of the vocals are stressed. The new slider would finish on 00:01:798
[00:02:311 - 00:02:567] "Chi-wa", vocal emphasis is clearly with a 1/2 slider.
[00:03:849] This should not be a slider, a circle is clearer. The end of the slider you have occurs without a sound.
[00:04:362] This repeating slider should only last 3/4 of beat not 1.
[00:05:901] The strings play for less time than the slider, change from 1 to 1/2 slider.
[00:06:414] You began mapping the vocals passively with the slider, but a new combo to highlight the change in what is being mapped is more understandable. Either two circles placed 1/2 beat part or a 1/2 would make sense.
[00:06:926-00:07:696] Two 1/2 sliders would better represent the similar sounds of the lyrics.
[00:07:952] The strings finish their note at the end of this 1/2 slider, but you're following the vocals, since this is a lower difficulty a circle would be easier to understand.
[00:09:747] This is an awkward shape for a lower difficulty, consider following the circular flow here or stacking the two circles.
[00:10:260] The flute sound occurs at 00:10:516, and is only 3 1/4 rhythms. For consistency, it should be mapped the same as earlier.
[00:11:029 - 00:11:542] There are 3 sounds here, each 1/2 beat apart.
[00:12:311 - 00:12:824] Mapping the flute here would provide more consistency.
[00:13:593] This silder end does not occur on a sound, consider a circle instead - at 00:13:080.
[00:15:131 - 00:16:670] Consider some low spacing here, without only 1 new combo for the 4 notes.
[00:17:183] This is the first 1/4 slider used with the vocals, a circle would be more understandable.
[00:18:208] There is no sound where the slider repeats, use a 1 slider instead.
[00:19:234] Same as [00:17:183].
[00:20:773] Only 3 flute notes not 4.
A circle for the vocals would make more sense.
[00:21:798] (see above)
[00:22:183] There is no sound here.
[00:25:388] This slider would make more sense if it went from bottom to top instead of vice versa.
[00:26:157] 1/2 slider starting here, there is no sound on 00:26:670.
[00:27:439 - 00:28:465] A 1/2 slider followed by a repeated 1/2 slider would represent the 5 sounds in this section.
[00:28:721] My guess is that this circle was intended to map the end of the strings sound, but the map would be better without it.
[00:30:260] The previous slider should finish here, instead of mapping a circle here.
[00:30:388] There is no sound here.
[00:30:516] If your intent is to map the strings here, a new combo would let the player know that your switching from mapping the vocals to the strings.
[00:31:542 - 00:33:080] It is unclear what you are mapping here, a pause or mapping the bells(?) would work. At 00:33:080 there is a basoon(?) that you map as well.
[00:37:696 - 00:40:773] I'm do not think repeated 1/4 sliders follow the rhythm here.
[00:41:285] These two circles should be away from the slider, since they represent percussive sounds while the slider is strings.
[00:44:362] Use a 1/2 slider without a repeat, then start a slider on the strong vocal sound. So 3 1/2 sliders here instead of 2 repeated 1/2 sliders.
[00:46:670] Same as [00:17:183].
[00:50:003] Using the 1 beat slider, for the "Flip-flop" vocals could be repeated throughout to draw attention to it.
[00:54:875] Again, 1 circle follows the vocals better than a 1/4 slider.
[01:03:080] (same as above.)
[01:04:875] Move this slider up a bit, it looks nicer, (very much opinion.)
[01:06:414] I would like to see you use 1 beat sliders to repeat the idea that you presented earlier with the "Flip-flop" vocals.
[01:11:285] Circle > 1/4 slider.
[01:12:567] The slider here could start 1/2 beat later to follow the vocals instead of the strings. Very much your call.
[01:14:619] It would be better if these 3 circles were the same distance apart, time = distance consistency is important on lower difficulties especially.
[01:18:080] No sound here.
[01:19:619] (see above.)
[01:24:875] No need to new combo each note, could use larger spacing to emphasive that these circles are 1 beat apart instead of 1/2 beat apart.
I may get around to the other difficulties later.
These are my comments, and thus my opinions so do with them as you will.
~Krameer
Advanced
[00:00:773 - 00:01:542] A single circle followed by a 1/2 slider would make more sense here based on how the syllables of the vocals are stressed. The new slider would finish on 00:01:798
[00:02:311 - 00:02:567] "Chi-wa", vocal emphasis is clearly with a 1/2 slider.
[00:03:849] This should not be a slider, a circle is clearer. The end of the slider you have occurs without a sound.
[00:04:362] This repeating slider should only last 3/4 of beat not 1.
[00:05:901] The strings play for less time than the slider, change from 1 to 1/2 slider.
[00:06:414] You began mapping the vocals passively with the slider, but a new combo to highlight the change in what is being mapped is more understandable. Either two circles placed 1/2 beat part or a 1/2 would make sense.
[00:06:926-00:07:696] Two 1/2 sliders would better represent the similar sounds of the lyrics.
[00:07:952] The strings finish their note at the end of this 1/2 slider, but you're following the vocals, since this is a lower difficulty a circle would be easier to understand.
[00:09:747] This is an awkward shape for a lower difficulty, consider following the circular flow here or stacking the two circles.
[00:10:260] The flute sound occurs at 00:10:516, and is only 3 1/4 rhythms. For consistency, it should be mapped the same as earlier.
[00:11:029 - 00:11:542] There are 3 sounds here, each 1/2 beat apart.
[00:12:311 - 00:12:824] Mapping the flute here would provide more consistency.
[00:13:593] This silder end does not occur on a sound, consider a circle instead - at 00:13:080.
[00:15:131 - 00:16:670] Consider some low spacing here, without only 1 new combo for the 4 notes.
[00:17:183] This is the first 1/4 slider used with the vocals, a circle would be more understandable.
[00:18:208] There is no sound where the slider repeats, use a 1 slider instead.
[00:19:234] Same as [00:17:183].
[00:20:773] Only 3 flute notes not 4.
A circle for the vocals would make more sense.
[00:21:798] (see above)
[00:22:183] There is no sound here.
[00:25:388] This slider would make more sense if it went from bottom to top instead of vice versa.
[00:26:157] 1/2 slider starting here, there is no sound on 00:26:670.
[00:27:439 - 00:28:465] A 1/2 slider followed by a repeated 1/2 slider would represent the 5 sounds in this section.
[00:28:721] My guess is that this circle was intended to map the end of the strings sound, but the map would be better without it.
[00:30:260] The previous slider should finish here, instead of mapping a circle here.
[00:30:388] There is no sound here.
[00:30:516] If your intent is to map the strings here, a new combo would let the player know that your switching from mapping the vocals to the strings.
[00:31:542 - 00:33:080] It is unclear what you are mapping here, a pause or mapping the bells(?) would work. At 00:33:080 there is a basoon(?) that you map as well.
[00:37:696 - 00:40:773] I'm do not think repeated 1/4 sliders follow the rhythm here.
[00:41:285] These two circles should be away from the slider, since they represent percussive sounds while the slider is strings.
[00:44:362] Use a 1/2 slider without a repeat, then start a slider on the strong vocal sound. So 3 1/2 sliders here instead of 2 repeated 1/2 sliders.
[00:46:670] Same as [00:17:183].
[00:50:003] Using the 1 beat slider, for the "Flip-flop" vocals could be repeated throughout to draw attention to it.
[00:54:875] Again, 1 circle follows the vocals better than a 1/4 slider.
[01:03:080] (same as above.)
[01:04:875] Move this slider up a bit, it looks nicer, (very much opinion.)
[01:06:414] I would like to see you use 1 beat sliders to repeat the idea that you presented earlier with the "Flip-flop" vocals.
[01:11:285] Circle > 1/4 slider.
[01:12:567] The slider here could start 1/2 beat later to follow the vocals instead of the strings. Very much your call.
[01:14:619] It would be better if these 3 circles were the same distance apart, time = distance consistency is important on lower difficulties especially.
[01:18:080] No sound here.
[01:19:619] (see above.)
[01:24:875] No need to new combo each note, could use larger spacing to emphasive that these circles are 1 beat apart instead of 1/2 beat apart.
I may get around to the other difficulties later.
These are my comments, and thus my opinions so do with them as you will.
~Krameer