ginkiha - nightfall [CatchTheBeat] · forum

wonjae

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2016-11-13T03:28:13+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, October 29, 2017 at 12:43:35 PM

Artist: ginkiha
Title: nightfall
Source: BMS
Tags: g2r2014 NIZI-RINGO ne/nuit piano alchemists deemo rayark Magic Girl RoseusJaeger
BPM: 92
Filesize: 4008kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:

collab platter (2.37 stars, 224 notes)
cup (1.29 stars, 160 notes)
magic girl's salad (1.75 stars, 161 notes)
the dead of night (3.09 stars, 239 notes)

Download: ginkiha - nightfall
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ra_k _ightfall

background change at 2017/9/27

collab info

Roseus mapped up to the first kiai.

I mapped everything else.

Metadata/Background

BG: (thanks celerih)
http://kelogsloops.deviantart.com/art/Lionhearted-564439338

https://ginkiha.bandcamp.com/album/ne-nuit

#2

Last edited by wonjae 2023-05-26T19:27:59+00:00, edited 58 times in total.

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2016-12-14T01:03:55+00:00

Im too lazy to finish, so you can do whatever you like with the diff and I'll mod what i do have done. Just put a blue bookmark where i ended so i know where i stopped.

lazy platter

osu file format v14

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Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2017-02-05T04:02:48+00:00

I know this is graved but like

lol

osu file format v14

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wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-02-05T04:03:47+00:00

holy shit

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-02-05T06:29:18+00:00

ayyyyyyyyy

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-02-08T02:58:02+00:00

its back, time to get mods

sxy62146214

Beatmap Nominator

227 posts

Joined May 2016

sxy62146214 2017-02-17T12:04:25+00:00

Maybe M4M?

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-02-17T14:47:36+00:00

sxy62146214 wrote:
Maybe M4M?

Sure if yoi pm me maybe

sxy62146214

Beatmap Nominator

227 posts

Joined May 2016

sxy62146214 2017-02-18T15:08:36+00:00

I said

Nice music
M4M on this map.
OK

[

Cup]
00:22:736 (4) - X:216?
01:11:649 (7) - X:40?
01:44:910 (1,2) - 1:X:264? A little dash here...
01:50:127 (1) - Ctrl+G it and then move righter?
[

Magic Girl's Salad]
00:01:214 (2) - Make it like 00:00:563 (1)?
00:46:214 (2,3,4) - Kidding me?Make it like ")" with 5 notes?
00:56:649 (1,2,3) - ^ ( "(" )
[

Collab Platter]
AR looks a little fast O.O
00:06:432 (2) - Put a hyperdash here?No I don't think it's good.
00:17:519 (3) - Not a good slider.Make it like "(" ?
00:33:171 (4) - ^ ( ")" )
00:41:649 (5) - Ctrl+G?
01:12:953 (4,5,6,7) - Not good.move (6,7) left and make it like "(" ?
01:38:388 (3) - Not a good slider.
01:46:214 (4) - ^
01:53:388 (2) - Ctrl+G?
[

Midnight]
~~Where's the overmap?~~
00:28:606 (6) - Ctrl+G?
00:52:247 (8,10) - X:64> (A little closer?)
00:54:530 (5) - The end at (496,156) ?
00:57:138 (5) - ^ (184,224) ?
00:59:747 (5) - ^ (88,128) ?
01:02:519 (8,9,10,11) - Kidding me?Ctrl+G?

GL!

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-02-18T23:15:52+00:00

sxy62146214 wrote:
I said Nice music
M4M on this map.
OK

[ Cup]
00:22:736 (4) - X:216? no, i had this note positioned here because of the drum noise
01:11:649 (7) - X:40? made it x=32
01:44:910 (1,2) - 1:X:264? A little dash here... nerfed by a little but not that much
01:50:127 (1) - Ctrl+G it and then move righter? nah
[ Magic Girl's Salad]
00:01:214 (2) - Make it like 00:00:563 (1)?
00:46:214 (2,3,4) - Kidding me?Make it like ")" with 5 notes?
00:56:649 (1,2,3) - ^ ( "(" )
[ Collab Platter]
AR looks a little fast O.O
00:06:432 (2) - Put a hyperdash here?No I don't think it's good.
00:17:519 (3) - Not a good slider.Make it like "(" ?
00:33:171 (4) - ^ ( ")" )
00:41:649 (5) - Ctrl+G?
01:12:953 (4,5,6,7) - Not good.move (6,7) left and make it like "(" ? nah,, i think its fine here and i wanted a hyper here
01:38:388 (3) - Not a good slider.how? i think its fine
01:46:214 (4) - ^ ^
01:53:388 (2) - Ctrl+G? this does little to nothing and keeping it like this helps keeps flow.
[ Midnight]
~~Where's the overmap?~~
00:28:606 (6) - Ctrl+G? no, its harder to catch and gets rid of a hyper
00:52:247 (8,10) - X:64> (A little closer?) personally i think its fine but ill keep not of this if other people dont like it
00:54:530 (5) - The end at (496,156) ? i dont get what you mean here
00:57:138 (5) - ^ (184,224) ?
00:59:747 (5) - ^ (88,128) ?
01:02:519 (8,9,10,11) - Kidding me?Ctrl+G? ctrl + g does nothing here and i like the pattern like this

GL!

Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2017-02-19T08:15:16+00:00

sxy62146214 wrote:
I said Nice music
M4M on this map.
OK

[ Magic Girl's Salad]
00:01:214 (2) - Make it like 00:00:563 (1)? - Its shaped like this to follow the piano change, keeping.
00:46:214 (2,3,4) - Kidding me?Make it like ")" with 5 notes? - No reason to, plays out fine with me, plus the sliders follow the small extended piano notes.
00:56:649 (1,2,3) - ^ ( "(" ) - Sorry... not sure I understand this.

GL!

Thanks for modding.

No changes, although my diff is the only one without source so could you fix that PG?

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-02-20T16:34:24+00:00

General

Difficulty settings exhibits some wacky trends - Cup and Salad are both AR6, whereas Platter-Rain goes HP5->7. AR5 on Cup and HP6 on Platter would result in a better spread
Why is the map basically devoid of hitsounds? Aside from your jingle finishes and the odd drum clap, there's very little feedback provided to the player at all throughout the entire map. Get a soft whistle in there to complement the rhythm please, and you can even make use of the drum rhythm in the kiai for added variety

Cup

00:08:062 (1) - Slider head mapping an unnecessary beat here. A circle on the downbeat alone would be more fitting
00:27:953 (2,3) - Awkward flowstop, consider spacing this more
00:44:095 (2) - 00:46:703 (2) - etc. - weak 1/4 slider will be confusing to players at this difficulty. Something like 01:05:780 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - is easy to follow, but not here. I'd remove and map the drum sound at 00:43:606 - etc. instead
00:49:312 (2,3) - Easy to overshoot given the large spacing and shortness of (2). If you don't make changes mentioned above, consider a more flowing pattern here
01:05:780 (3) - Would suggest a NC for these, since the density may be a challenge for new players. Same applies to 01:16:214 (3) -
01:10:997 (6,1) - Swap NC, the first combo is very long for a Cup at 10 fruits
01:31:214 (1) - It would make more sense to continue your previous 4/1 pattern and start the spinner at 01:31:866 - instead. Additionally, even though the RC states you can use a 1/2 beat spinner-note spacing here, I would avoid it, since the spinner formation is very dense on the right side at the end, and 01:34:475 (1) - is on the left. Ending at 01:33:823 - would be better in this case
01:37:084 (4) - NC please, excessively long combo at 12 fruits. Same applies to 01:42:301 (4) -
01:43:606 (6,1) - Quite a large spacing considering the direction change, easy to miss here

Salad

00:00:563 (1,2,3) - A little excessive for the start of the map, especially considering the following patterns are all easily walkable. Reduce the distances a little here please
00:10:345 (4,1) - Could be seen as a dash, try reducing a little
00:11:975 (2,3) - ^
00:25:019 (2,3) - Justification for being dashless considering 00:22:410 (2,3) - 00:27:627 (2,3) - etc. require dash for the same sound?
00:34:475 (1,2) - Borderline jump, please reduce
00:37:736 (2,3) - Missing jump?
00:42:301 (1) - Unsnapped? Or maybe it just messed up for me by accident. Regardless, You could Ctrl+G this to create a dash which would be a great way to start the kiai
00:47:193 (5,1) - Dash please, serious lack of emphasis here
00:57:953 (1) - Another good spot to Ctrl+G if you want to add dash
01:08:388 (1,2) - Unexpectedly large jump, consider reducing a tiny bit
01:12:953 (6,1) - ^
01:31:214 (1) - Same comment r.e. spinner start as Cup
01:42:301 (1,2) - Slightly excessive, would reduce a bit
01:48:497 (2,3) - Borderline jump, try reducing slightly

Platter

00:20:127 (3,4) - Weird flowstop after the hyper, move (4) slightly to the left of (3) instead for better flow
00:20:780 (5,6,7) - Should be snapped to 1/6, not 1/4
00:36:921 (10,1) - 00:52:573 (4,1) - Doesn't really seem fitting for a 1/4 hyper imo. Second one especially so since it's leading into an antiflowing slider which is unrankable
00:41:649 (5,1) - I know this is low BPM, but please avoid hypering into antiflow, it's a major acc killer at this level of diffculty where a flowing pattern would be much better to play. Applies to similar such as 00:47:193 (5,1) - etc. also
00:43:606 (2) - 00:44:584 (4,1) - Feels weird to have dashes for neither downbeat synth or onbeat drums. Choosing a patter here would provide better emphasis since you're in a kiai section
00:57:627 (5,1) - Hyper into slight slant is likely to result in more droplet misses. Curved slider or horizontal slider would work better here
01:02:356 (4,1) - This is close to an edge dash, please reduce the spacing
01:12:464 (1) - Ugh, hyper to a weak blue tick is so unfitting, the emphasis is wrongly placed and it's very offputting to the player. Personally I don't feel a hyper is even necessary here at all considering how much stronger 01:11:649 (1) - and 01:13:606 (1) - are
01:22:736 (5,1) - ^
01:40:345 (2,3) - Was expecting a dash here based on your patterning in the intro, which mapped a similar rhythm
01:53:388 (2,3) - (3) deserves a hyper on account of being stronger than (2)

Midnight

00:08:388 (1,2) - No jump or even hyper for this strong piano sound? Comapre with 00:18:823 (1,2) - where you had a hyper lol
00:20:780 (5,6,7,8) - Should be snapped to 1/6, not 1/4
00:30:236 (3,4) - Expecting more spacing for the drum sound. Same applies to 00:37:410 (2,3) - 00:39:693 (4,5) - etc. so maybe change (2,4) to a curved 1/2 triplets
00:47:519 (1,2,3) - Stop-start nature of these sliders presents an awkward series of flowbreaks. Making these more horizontal would improve playability
00:52:573 (10,1) - Overly strong hyper into slow slider results in easy droplet misses. Reduce hyper strength please
01:01:866 (4,5) - Justification for hypering from the strong note for this instead of to as you have been doing through the map?
01:02:519 (8,9,10,11) - Curve could be reduced for better flow
01:04:149 - and similar - Any reason why you left all these drum sounds unmapped? The 1/1 gaps fit well in the lower diffs, but here they just feel boring and prevent you from doing anything with the strong synth sounds on the slider heads
01:22:084 (2,3) - Why is this 1/4 jump put on the blue tick also? the white and red ticks are far stronger
01:53:388 (6,7) - Missing hyper? Consistency with 01:42:953 (6,7) -

Hope these suggestions help - good luck! (:

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-02-21T11:18:27+00:00

sxy62146214 wrote:
Collab Platter]
AR looks a little fast O.O
00:06:432 (2) - Put a hyperdash here?No I don't think it's good. ???? im confused
00:17:519 (3) - Not a good slider.Make it like "(" ? The sound becomes stagnant, so i think it's fine.
00:33:171 (4) - ^ ( ")" ) I tried
00:41:649 (5) - Ctrl+G? Seems fine

GL!

JBHyperion wrote:
Platter
00:20:127 (3,4) - Weird flowstop after the hyper, move (4) slightly to the left of (3) instead for better flow Lets see if thats better
00:20:780 (5,6,7) - Should be snapped to 1/6, not 1/4 woops fixed
00:36:921 (10,1) - 00:52:573 (4,1) - Doesn't really seem fitting for a 1/4 hyper imo. Second one especially so since it's leading into an antiflowing slider which is unrankable fixed first one
00:41:649 (5,1) - I know this is low BPM, but please avoid hypering into antiflow, it's a major acc killer at this level of diffculty where a flowing pattern would be much better to play. Applies to similar such as 00:47:193 (5,1) - etc. also BlameGrapes

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wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-02-23T03:27:24+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
General
Difficulty settings exhibits some wacky trends - Cup and Salad are both AR6, whereas Platter-Rain goes HP5->7. AR5 on Cup and HP6 on Platter would result in a better spread
Why is the map basically devoid of hitsounds? Aside from your jingle finishes and the odd drum clap, there's very little feedback provided to the player at all throughout the entire map. Get a soft whistle in there to complement the rhythm please, and you can even make use of the drum rhythm in the kiai for added variety
ehhhhhhhhhh i tried to use pretty minimalistic hitsounding, ill try to get more opinions on this though

Cup
00:08:062 (1) - Slider head mapping an unnecessary beat here. A circle on the downbeat alone would be more fitting ok
00:27:953 (2,3) - Awkward flowstop, consider spacing this more changed the pattern around, hopefully it made it better
00:44:095 (2) - 00:46:703 (2) - etc. - weak 1/4 slider will be confusing to players at this difficulty. Something like 01:05:780 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - is easy to follow, but not here. I'd remove and map the drum sound at 00:43:606 - etc. instead ok i got rid of the ones in the beginning of the kiai before the four note jingle.
00:49:312 (2,3) - Easy to overshoot given the large spacing and shortness of (2). If you don't make changes mentioned above, consider a more flowing pattern here k
01:05:780 (3) - Would suggest a NC for these, since the density may be a challenge for new players. Same applies to 01:16:214 (3) - k
01:10:997 (6,1) - Swap NC, the first combo is very long for a Cup at 10 fruits k
01:31:214 (1) - It would make more sense to continue your previous 4/1 pattern and start the spinner at 01:31:866 - instead. Additionally, even though the RC states you can use a 1/2 beat spinner-note spacing here, I would avoid it, since the spinner formation is very dense on the right side at the end, and 01:34:475 (1) - is on the left. Ending at 01:33:823 - would be better in this case k
01:37:084 (4) - NC please, excessively long combo at 12 fruits. Same applies to 01:42:301 (4) - u right
01:43:606 (6,1) - Quite a large spacing considering the direction change, easy to miss herefixed

Platter
00:41:649 (5,1) - I know this is low BPM, but please avoid hypering into antiflow, it's a major acc killer at this level of diffculty where a flowing pattern would be much better to play. Applies to similar such as 00:47:193 (5,1) - etc. also good point
00:43:606 (2) - 00:44:584 (4,1) - Feels weird to have dashes for neither downbeat synth or onbeat drums. Choosing a patter here would provide better emphasis since you're in a kiai section added a dash on the drum
00:57:627 (5,1) - Hyper into slight slant is likely to result in more droplet misses. Curved slider or horizontal slider would work better here curved it
01:02:356 (4,1) - This is close to an edge dash, please reduce the spacingok
01:12:464 (1) - Ugh, hyper to a weak blue tick is so unfitting, the emphasis is wrongly placed and it's very offputting to the player. Personally I don't feel a hyper is even necessary here at all considering how much stronger 01:11:649 (1) - and 01:13:606 (1) - are you right
01:22:736 (5,1) - ^^
01:40:345 (2,3) - Was expecting a dash here based on your patterning in the intro, which mapped a similar rhythmdid it but it feels a bit forced imo
01:53:388 (2,3) - (3) deserves a hyper on account of being stronger than (2)k bossman

Midnight
00:08:388 (1,2) - No jump or even hyper for this strong piano sound? Comapre with 00:18:823 (1,2) - where you had a hyper lol
00:20:780 (5,6,7,8) - Should be snapped to 1/6, not 1/4
00:30:236 (3,4) - Expecting more spacing for the drum sound. Same applies to 00:37:410 (2,3) - 00:39:693 (4,5) - etc. so maybe change (2,4) to a curved 1/2 triplets
00:47:519 (1,2,3) - Stop-start nature of these sliders presents an awkward series of flowbreaks. Making these more horizontal would improve playability
00:52:573 (10,1) - Overly strong hyper into slow slider results in easy droplet misses. Reduce hyper strength please
01:01:866 (4,5) - Justification for hypering from the strong note for this instead of to as you have been doing through the map?
01:02:519 (8,9,10,11) - Curve could be reduced for better flow
01:04:149 - and similar - Any reason why you left all these drum sounds unmapped? The 1/1 gaps fit well in the lower diffs, but here they just feel boring and prevent you from doing anything with the strong synth sounds on the slider heads
01:22:084 (2,3) - Why is this 1/4 jump put on the blue tick also? the white and red ticks are far stronger
01:53:388 (6,7) - Missing hyper? Consistency with 01:42:953 (6,7) -
Hope these suggestions help - good luck! (: i accepted everything at the rain except marked

Also changed the BG for something more fitting of the song

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-02-25T09:54:04+00:00

Not qat coming in for m4m

General

I think AR 5,6,7,8 would work a lot better since this might be too high for the top diffs
Use more hitsounds pls, just copy stuff from the ranked set if need be.
I'll just assume you haven't applied jbh's mod about HP
Check AI mod on all your diffs

Cup

00:06:432 (2,3) - Could use more movement here
00:08:388 (1,2) - same, cause you use somewhere around 2.2-2.4 for most stuff but drops on 1/1 which have more important sounds
00:31:866 (1,2,3) - Different than your other three note patterns like 00:22:084 (2,3,4), reduce distance
00:35:453 (2,3) - can use more different spacings to highlight important sounds like this on cup
00:44:258 (3,4,1) - Why spacing suddenly increased when there's nothing much to map
01:01:866 (2,3,4,5) - could change to 2 sliders, cause each one would cover the same sounds
01:07:736 (2,3,4) - Cup really doesn't need consistent spacing like this, use higher for higher pitch. imo 2,3 should be slider but whatever
01:10:997 (6,7) - same sound as mentioned above but now 1/1 mapping :thinking:
01:16:214 (1,2) - can improve flow more if closer together
01:22:736 (3) - Just a mapping preference, but for patterns like this I think it's much better to use circles as a basis for flow. example. If applied, should apply to other parts of diff to be consistent
01:40:345 (2,3) - again, don't have to use consistent spacing, can still emphasise by having it further and walkable

Mcgrill's Salad

00:09:693 (3,4) - Make more walkable
00:20:127 (3,4) - Relative to other sliders, don't think should be a jump. Already have plenty of dashes in this area.
00:25:019 (2,3) - Completely walkable but 00:27:627 (2,3) - is a dash
00:26:649 (1,2) - Suggest to space these out a bit more, since have to stop moving to catch. Applies to other similar patterns later
00:40:997 (3,4,1) - 3,4 is bigger jump than 4,1 :thinking:
00:51:432 (2) - Note density is too high for salad imo, 1/4 should only be used as a highlight once or twice per measure, things like 00:54:529 (2,3) -
01:05:780 (1,2,3,1) - Dashes should only be used once or twice per measure. Think of it like using hypers on platter, this wouldn't work.
01:07:247 (1,2) - Imo 2 has the more important sounds and should have the 1/4 circle.
01:12:953 (6,1) - pretty big jump for salad
01:43:606 (3,4) - doesn't deserve a dash just because it's a sharp key
01:47:519 (1,2,3) - Change around so 1,2 is bigger than 2,3 to map pitch better
01:54:040 (3,4) - same thing about not using too many dashes in salad

Platter

00:05:780 (1,2) - Really shouldn't have dash here
00:16:866 (2) - Imo flows better if using a horizontal slider here instead 00:27:301 (2) - same
00:18:823 (1) - Move slider body so droplets are easier to catch
00:18:497 (4,1) - Unclear distance if it's dash or walk
00:20:997 (6,7) - Imo after change to 1/3 really doesn't work, cause the only important sounds are on the 1/6 rather than the 1/3. Just change to a 1/2 slider to instead map the piano rhythm and 1/6 sound with the slider
00:22:247 (2) - Shouldn't be dash cause more important sound on slider tails
00:25:019 (5) - Why is 4,5 a dash and not 5,1. You did this pattern just fine at 00:34:475 (1,2,3) -
00:44:910 (1,2) - Reduce distance so 3 is emphasised better
00:47:519 (1,2) - Kind awkward dash cause you have to stop, could increase a bit
01:07:573 (3,4) - internally crying bc 3,4 is not hyper
01:42:301 (1,2) - unclear if walk or dash
01:48:171 (2,3) - shouldn't be a dash compared to last circles
01:53:388 (2,3) - overspaced for normal dash

Midnight
Doesn't midnight occur way after nightfall

00:30:562 (4,1) - You had hypers on the previous patterns for this, should increase distance
00:40:997 (5) - ctrl-g so there's enough space for 4,5
00:49:312 (4) - ctrl-g + angle it, flows better
00:53:225 (2,3) - Overspaced
01:02:193 (3) - Doesn't really flow as a circle well, decrease 2,3 or increase 3,4
01:42:301 (5) - nc on each large white tick in this section to prevent too many fruits from stacking
01:52:736 (5,6) - what happened to the hyper like last time

imo this could really benefit from using a higher slider velocity, a lot of the droplets are way too close to the previous slider

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-03-07T19:53:47+00:00

00:05:780 (1,2)- Really shouldn't have dash here ( Fine, fixed )
00:16:866 (2)- Imo flows better if using a horizontal slider here instead 00:27:301 (2)- same ( I disagree, I don't see how it affects flow in anyway other than it makes it harder for me to create dashes there if it's horizontal )
00:18:823 (1)- Move slider body so droplets are easier to catch ( What do you mean? It plays just fine. What are you asking me to change? )
00:18:497 (4,1)- Unclear distance if it's dash or walk ( I would say it's pretty clear but increased slightly )
00:20:997 (6,7)- Imo after change to 1/3 really doesn't work, cause the only important sounds are on the 1/6 rather than the 1/3. Just change to a 1/2 slider to instead map the piano rhythm and 1/6 sound with the slider ( I prefer my own stream here, the 1 /2 slider makes no sense to me here rhytmically when the 1/3 and 1/6 is obviously heard. A slider would be more confusing to play than the stream. No change )
00:22:247 (2)- Shouldn't be dash cause more important sound on slider tails ( ???? What? What are you hearing? )
00:25:019 (5)- Why is 4,5 a dash and not 5,1. You did this pattern just fine at 00:34:475 (1,2,3)- ( Idk fam, but repositioned )

Ahhhhhh

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wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-03-08T02:25:44+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
Not qat coming in for m4m

General
I think AR 5,6,7,8 would work a lot better since this might be too high for the top diffsto me i like having ar8.5
Use more hitsounds pls, just copy stuff from the ranked set if need be.
I'll just assume you haven't applied jbh's mod about HPfixed
Check AI mod on all your diffsle fixed
Cup
00:06:432 (2,3) - Could use more movement here oki
00:08:388 (1,2) - same, cause you use somewhere around 2.2-2.4 for most stuff but drops on 1/1 which have more important sounds buffed
00:31:866 (1,2,3) - Different than your other three note patterns like 00:22:084 (2,3,4), reduce distance ok
00:35:453 (2,3) - can use more different spacings to highlight important sounds like this on cup slightly buffed
00:44:258 (3,4,1) - Why spacing suddenly increased when there's nothing much to map nerfed 2 slightly
01:01:866 (2,3,4,5) - could change to 2 sliders, cause each one would cover the same sounds nah i want the four note patterns to be four notes
01:07:736 (2,3,4) - Cup really doesn't need consistent spacing like this, use higher for higher pitch. imo 2,3 should be slider but whatever buffed slightly
01:10:997 (6,7) - same sound as mentioned above but now 1/1 mapping :thinking: :thinking:
01:16:214 (1,2) - can improve flow more if closer together ye u right
01:22:736 (3) - Just a mapping preference, but for patterns like this I think it's much better to use circles as a basis for flow. nah i wanna stay consistent with this type of pattern in this map.example. If applied, should apply to other parts of diff to be consistent
01:40:345 (2,3) - again, don't have to use consistent spacing, can still emphasise by having it further and walkablek

Platter
00:44:910 (1,2) - Reduce distance so 3 is emphasised better k
00:47:519 (1,2) - Kind awkward dash cause you have to stop, could increase a bit increased
01:07:573 (3,4) - internally crying bc 3,4 is not hyper externally laughing (fixed)
01:42:301 (1,2) - unclear if walk or dash slanted (1)
01:48:171 (2,3) - shouldn't be a dash compared to last circles increased dist
01:53:388 (2,3) - overspaced for normal dashmade hyper
Midnight
Doesn't midnight occur way after nightfall
00:30:562 (4,1) - You had hypers on the previous patterns for this, should increase distance
00:40:997 (5) - ctrl-g so there's enough space for 4,5
00:49:312 (4) - ctrl-g + angle it, flows better
00:53:225 (2,3) - Overspaced
01:02:193 (3) - Doesn't really flow as a circle well, decrease 2,3 or increase 3,4
01:42:301 (5) - nc on each large white tick in this section to prevent too many fruits from stacking
01:52:736 (5,6) - what happened to the hyper like last time
imo this could really benefit from using a higher slider velocity, a lot of the droplets are way too close to the previous slideryea i added more slider velocity but it might have fucked with snapping and distancing for some jumps i didnt notice so /shrug

i think i took all suggestions from the rain also, thanks bb

Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2017-03-10T06:53:04+00:00

"I'll get to it tonight" apparently tonight = days away

JBHyperion wrote:
Salad
00:00:563 (1,2,3) - A little excessive for the start of the map, especially considering the following patterns are all easily walkable. Reduce the distances a little here please - Eeeehhhh alright fair enough
00:10:345 (4,1) - Could be seen as a dash, try reducing a little - Gotcha
00:11:975 (2,3) - ^ - ^
00:25:019 (2,3) - Justification for being dashless considering 00:22:410 (2,3) - 00:27:627 (2,3) - etc. require dash for the same sound? - Damn I didn't even notice, fixed
00:34:475 (1,2) - Borderline jump, please reduce - Kk
00:37:736 (2,3) - Missing jump? - I tried
00:42:301 (1) - Unsnapped? Or maybe it just messed up for me by accident. Regardless, You could Ctrl+G this to create a dash which would be a great way to start the kiai - snapped fine here but yea sure i'll do that
00:47:193 (5,1) - Dash please, serious lack of emphasis here - ashubfisdn how did i not notice this wtf
00:57:953 (1) - Another good spot to Ctrl+G if you want to add dash - Sure
01:08:388 (1,2) - Unexpectedly large jump, consider reducing a tiny bit - Ye
01:12:953 (6,1) - ^ - Shit yea this is pretty big
01:31:214 (1) - Same comment r.e. spinner start as Cup - tbh I wanted to point this out but I just followed blindly like the sheep i am
01:42:301 (1,2) - Slightly excessive, would reduce a bit - >4.09x distance i honestly sometimes wonder wtf im on when i map
01:48:497 (2,3) - Borderline jump, try reducing slightly - Yaya

Hope these suggestions help - good luck! (: - i learn new things whenever i get my shit modded k_hand:

Sinnoh wrote:
Not qat coming in for m4m

Mcgrill's Salad
00:09:693 (3,4) - Make more walkable - Technically already did but like theres a piano here so im keeping a implied jump
00:20:127 (3,4) - Relative to other sliders, don't think should be a jump. Already have plenty of dashes in this area. - If I remove the dashes I'd be literally ignoring the very audible piano, keeping.
00:25:019 (2,3) - Completely walkable but 00:27:627 (2,3) - is a dash - Fixed already in JBH's mod
00:26:649 (1,2) - Suggest to space these out a bit more, since have to stop moving to catch. Applies to other similar patterns later - It would remove the whole "dashes on that weird drum sounding thing" that I've been doing, but I do agree that I should probably move the single note along somewhere.
00:40:997 (3,4,1) - 3,4 is bigger jump than 4,1 :thinking: - Fixed in JBH's by Ctrl-G
00:51:432 (2) - Note density is too high for salad imo, 1/4 should only be used as a highlight once or twice per measure, things like 00:54:529 (2,3) - - Personally I don't really see an issue, this song is a very slow and calm song at 92bpm. If this gets pointed out again though I'll probably fix it.
01:05:780 (1,2,3,1) - Dashes should only be used once or twice per measure. Think of it like using hypers on platter, this wouldn't work. - ^
01:07:247 (1,2) - Imo 2 has the more important sounds and should have the 1/4 circle. - I'm not entire sure I wanna take this suggestion just because I prefer having the slider there to follow the extended sound. I'll think about it.
01:12:953 (6,1) - pretty big jump for salad - Already fixed
01:43:606 (3,4) - doesn't deserve a dash just because it's a sharp key - Um, I've had a dash on every single one I'm pretty sure (haven't tested so feel free to call me out on this)
01:47:519 (1,2,3) - Change around so 1,2 is bigger than 2,3 to map pitch better - Good idea, done.
01:54:040 (3,4) - same thing about not using too many dashes in salad - I had too little dashes in a salad it played out easier than the cup, the notes also emphasize the piano well here so I'm keeping unless it gets pulled up again.

Thanks for modding.

Sorry for being a bit late PG.

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Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2017-03-10T07:02:09+00:00

passing by, I think offset should -25
You may ask some other modders for their opinions.

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-03-11T02:27:32+00:00

applied,

also @yumeno offset sounds off at -25, ill stick with this untill someone else comments.

Cowboy

472 posts

Joined November 2011

Cowboy 2017-04-08T00:25:45+00:00

Sorry for the late, M 4 M

[Cup]

00:07:736 - I feel empty without a note, I recommend you add a note to give a good follow-up to the next note.
00:22:084 (2,3,4) - I would like to see a little more movement in those notes, I feel it is very simple, try to add a repeat slider, the position I leave to your judgment.
00:57:138 (3,3) - I recommend rotating the sliders in a vertical way, the current movement it has can be somewhat "uncomfortable" for some players.
01:05:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Compared to the previous suggestion, here you can make an exception, to have some variety.
01:16:214 (1,2) - Movement with the previous note to these is very uncomfortable, try to change them vertically in a right direction.
01:54:040 (3) - This slider is very repetitive, to make the end more interesting, I suggest replacing them with 2 1/2 sliders to balance the difficulty.

[Magic Girl's Salad]

00:06:758 (2,3) - I can catch the note without the boost, which makes it uncomfortable, I suggest increase / reduce, I leave it to your decision, but I would choose to increase a little.
00:16:214 (1) - It would be great to give more movement to that slider, since currently it is too easy to get the notes without needing to move, I suggest replacing them with notes.
01:24:040 (1) - I feel it would be great if you emphasize this note increases your distance with the previous note.
Nothing more to say, good work.

[Collab Platter]

00:36:921 (10,1) - Maybe a Hash fits between these notes, to have similarity with 00:26:486 (8,1) - this other HDash.
01:43:606 (3) - I would like this slider not to be so repetitive, try to intersperse with several notes in a right direction.
01:54:040 (3) - If you try to remove the repeat that is in this slider, it would be a good approximation to a new note replacing the place of the repeat, that is, something like the following image: Image.

[Midnight]

00:20:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream seems unconventional, I would suggest having a little more flow to have a good inclination towards the next note.
00:40:997 (6) - I feel that because of this repeat, you are missing a great HDash towards the beginning of kiai time, try to separate the slider by two 1/2 sliders, as shown in the following image: Image.
Well, I have nothing more to add.

I hope and my mod is of help despite the slight variation, I have no specialty with low BPM, so good luck, it's a good set.

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-04-08T18:12:09+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
Sorry for the late, M 4 M

[Collab Platter]

00:36:921 (10,1) - Maybe a Hash fits between these notes, to have similarity with 00:26:486 (8,1) - this other HDash. Added

I hope and my mod is of help despite the slight variation, I have no specialty with low BPM, so good luck, it's a good set.

ok

osu file format v14

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wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-04-11T01:12:41+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
Sorry for the late, M 4 M

[Cup]

00:07:736 - I feel empty without a note, I recommend you add a note to give a good follow-up to the next note. nah i dont think the song fits it in the background.
00:22:084 (2,3,4) - I would like to see a little more movement in those notes, I feel it is very simple, try to add a repeat slider, the position I leave to your judgment. added more movement.
00:57:138 (3,3) - I recommend rotating the sliders in a vertical way, the current movement it has can be somewhat "uncomfortable" for some players.ok
01:05:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Compared to the previous suggestion, here you can make an exception, to have some variety. k
01:16:214 (1,2) - Movement with the previous note to these is very uncomfortable, try to change them vertically in a right direction. did same thing i did as post above.
01:54:040 (3) - This slider is very repetitive, to make the end more interesting, I suggest replacing them with 2 1/2 sliders to balance the difficulty. ok.
[Magic Girl's Salad]

00:06:758 (2,3) - I can catch the note without the boost, which makes it uncomfortable, I suggest increase / reduce, I leave it to your decision, but I would choose to increase a little.
00:16:214 (1) - It would be great to give more movement to that slider, since currently it is too easy to get the notes without needing to move, I suggest replacing them with notes.
01:24:040 (1) - I feel it would be great if you emphasize this note increases your distance with the previous note.
Nothing more to say, good work.
[Collab Platter]

00:36:921 (10,1) - Maybe a Hash fits between these notes, to have similarity with 00:26:486 (8,1) - this other HDash.
01:43:606 (3) - I would like this slider not to be so repetitive, try to intersperse with several notes in a right direction. aaa ok good point
01:54:040 (3) - If you try to remove the repeat that is in this slider, it would be a good approximation to a new note replacing the place of the repeat, that is, something like the following image: Image ok.
[Midnight]

00:20:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream seems unconventional, I would suggest having a little more flow to have a good inclination towards the next note. cleaned the stream up
00:40:997 (6) - I feel that because of this repeat, you are missing a great HDash towards the beginning of kiai time, try to separate the slider by two 1/2 sliders, as shown in the following image: Image. ok
Well, I have nothing more to add.
I hope and my mod is of help despite the slight variation, I have no specialty with low BPM, so good luck, it's a good set.

thanks for the mod,

updated/revived.

Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2017-04-21T00:20:00+00:00

Jusenkyo wrote:
Sorry for the late, M 4 M

[Magic Girl's Salad]

00:06:758 (2,3) - I can catch the note without the boost, which makes it uncomfortable, I suggest increase / reduce, I leave it to your decision, but I would choose to increase a little. - Increased
00:16:214 (1) - It would be great to give more movement to that slider, since currently it is too easy to get the notes without needing to move, I suggest replacing them with notes.- Turned into a triplet slider with a note after instead, this is the pattern a used for the majority of the map.
01:24:040 (1) - I feel it would be great if you emphasize this note increases your distance with the previous note. - Increased slightly, I don't want this to be too difficult of a Salad, especially at low BPM.
Nothing more to say, good work. - Thank you!
I hope and my mod is of help despite the slight variation, I have no specialty with low BPM, so good luck, it's a good set.

Thanks for modding. Again, sorry for being late PG ~~school started up again and im dying~~.

Peek-a-boo

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wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-04-21T01:13:12+00:00

applied.

Nokashi

304 posts

Joined December 2014

Nokashi 2017-04-22T21:19:44+00:00

Hello there!

[

General]

https://ginkiha.bandcamp.com/album/ne-nuit some metadata
Add "NIZI-RINGO" to tags since the album "ne/nuit" is under that company. Also add "g2r2014"
When you applied the offset you actually went for the chime effect as the first beat in the metronome instead of the piano, resulting in an incorrect offset. I Fiddled around with timing and it seems that 543 or something along that does the trick nicely.

[

Cup]

00:00:563 (1) - Would play better as a 1/2 to slider to better reflect the music and also be consistent with 00:10:997 (1) -
00:02:519 (3,1) - I Would definitely expect more movement to get to this strong beat, if you take into account that the jump to to this 00:02:519 (3) - circle had a ~ 1.40x and was movement to a noticeably weaker sound. Thus, i would expect this 00:02:519 (3,1) - to be 1.40x DS or higher
00:06:432 (2) - Maybe 1/2 slider instead here as well for the added melody emphasis?
00:13:606 (1,2) - There isnt indication that some graduality in spacing should happen so i would suggest sticking to the 2.60x DS like here 00:10:997 (1,2) -
00:18:497 (1) - Maybe something like x:296 here for the added emphasis on this 00:18:497 (1,2) - movement since the sound on 00:18:823 (2) - is really strong and the movement to get to it should be emphasized more
00:20:127 (4) - Maybe split this into 2 1/2 sliders to get better movementum towards the downbeat here 00:21:432 (1) - . I mean theres a beat here 00:21:106 - so you could try it
00:41:649 (3,1) - Since you arent playing with stable DS Either way, this definitely deserves more spacing, when taking into consideration that you have used up to 2.80x DS in calmer section of this song and yet in the start of the kiai its pretty lackluster
00:47:519 (1,2) - Should be 1.00x DS to be consistent with how you space these beats
00:54:530 (3) - Why did you suddenly start mapping this rhythm in the background. The intensity it had didnt change that much from the past so it suprises me that you suddenly decided to express it in the map. I would go for something more consistent, either map the previous similar beats like this or just dont map this at all
01:01:866 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe ctrl g here to make this 01:02:845 (5,1) - jump noticable although u might need to reposition 01:03:171 (1) - so its a bit close cause 3.20x DS xd
01:06:758 (5,6) - Should be spaced like 01:05:780 (1,2) - . Cause of their horizontal nature, they fill up too much of the platter so they might be hard to position for newer players. space them like this 01:05:780 (1,2) - one
01:08:388 (4,5) - Increase this spacing so there is more graduality between these objects to compliment the melody 01:08:388 (4,5,6) -
01:24:040 (1) - Move to somewhere like x:188 for the added emphasis?
01:44:910 (1,2,3) - These should be spaced more to be consistent with the spacing of similar patterns

[

Magic Girl's Salad]

00:00:562 (1) - You can make this fully horizontal, kinda like 00:01:214 (2) -, and place it on x:256 for extra movement retention, since they are similar sounds and should be expressed in a similar manner
00:05:127 (3) - Could have been a 1/2 slider instead to better express this beat 00:05:453 - here. Up to this point you took advantage of all these melodies so it feels a bit off to have this one unmapped
00:08:388 (1,2) - I feel like this should be toned down as spacing is a bit too much here for a dash so early into the map, maybe something like 3.60x DS or something similar. The dash will still be apparent but easier to catch
00:09:693 (3,4) - You could make this a walk so the player can cool off after the intense dash. Instead, 00:10:345 (4,1) - this could be made into a dash, since the downbeat here 00:10:997 (1) - is pretty strong
00:15:888 - Circle here and create a dash here to here 00:16:214 (1) - ? There hasnt been a dash for a while so it would be a bit fitting here
00:18:823 (1,2,3,4,1) - Salads are meant to introduce the dashing mechanic to the player in logical measures. Here having 4 dashes in a row, so early into the song, in a non-kiai section is too much for a salad in my eyes. I would drop the 1/2 dash structure here and have a 1/1 dash structure instead, making some of these jumps walkable and some of them dashable, not all of them dashable. Similar point here 01:52:736 (1,2,3,4) -
00:24:040 (1,1) - You could try to give them a 1.50x DS with previous object instead since the sound isnt that strong to imply a dash and you have shown that you place dashes on snares here 00:25:019 (2,3) - for example. 00:29:258 (1) - Were there to have been a 2.00x DS 1/1 gap in this rhythm you are making, it should have been this cause of the stronger flute note.
00:30:236 (2,3) - compared to the graduality of the spacing the dashes in this section have, this is way too spiky on its spacing. all the previous jumps have a ~0.30x DS difference or even less ( 00:25:019 (2,3) - compared to 00:27:627 (2,3) - ) this one spikes 0.50x DS spacing increase. Should be decreased a bit to be consistent
00:31:866 (1,2,1,2,3) - I Wouldnt really drop the nice rhythm i had going in previous measures. This new rhythm kills all the emphasis that you had on the snares ( to the point that the snares are on a slider end here 00:35:780 - , meaning almost no movement to get to it even though in the previous measure it was a clear dash, like all snares) and the overall dash consistency. The song doesnt really call for such a drastic underwhelming rhythm switch.
00:40:997 (3,4) - Would play better as 2 1/2 sliders instead of 2 1/1 circles and, if positioned correctly, they can make the transition to the kiai really noticable and neat
00:43:606 - Since you played so much around these snares in the previous sections it feels weird to me that you didnt take advantage of this snare beat here. Similar point here 00:54:040 -
00:46:866 (4,5) - Maybe lower this spacing so the walk is more apparent, and the following dash here 00:47:193 (5,1) - more noticable
00:52:573 (2,1) - Make this jump more noticable, the music really calls for it
01:05:780 (1,2,3) - theres graduality in the instrument pitch going from highter to lower pitch, however the spacing goes the other way around, ranging from lower to higher spacing. 01:06:269 (2,3) - this sudden 0.50x DS spacing spike isnt so justified and it should be made consistent with the previous similar rhythms. It would be for the best since placing dashes on such irregular rhythms might be off-putting for newer players. 01:16:214 (1,2,3) - Similar point here
01:12:953 (6,1) - maybe a 0.20x DS decrease here for consistency

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Collab Platter]

00:01:194 (2) - you could move it to x:144 for the more noticable walk and the more noticable dash thereafter here 00:01:194 (2,3) -
00:03:803 (2) - Also move this to x:272 for consistency with 00:00:546 (1,2) - and a less ambiguous dash here 00:03:803 (2,3) -
00:06:412 (2) - I Would play it safe here and reduce this HDash since it might be well over 1.5x of the trigger distance, which is unrankable. Maybe ctrl g and a subtle reposition?
00:09:673 (3) - In my ears this is a bit stronger than 00:09:020 (2) - this, yet the latter gets the HDash.I would suggest switching up the distancing here so as this jump 00:09:020 (2,3) - is a HDash instead
00:14:238 (2,3) - Ambiguous spacing here. Easily fixed if you move 00:14:238 (2) - to somewhere like x:208
00:18:803 (1,2) - Also tone these down a tad bit, maybe a -0.20x DS decrease?
00:20:760 (5,6,7) - Should be snapped to 1/6 not 1/3. There are quite a lot of beats that you missed resulting in a not so favourable feedback
00:21:412 (1,2) - Bordeline edge dash. This isnt expected in any way and definitely doesnt compliment the music. Definitely reduce the spacing of this jump to something like 4.00x or 3.80x DS
00:25:814 (4,5) - Slight nerf here would do the trick to be consistent with 00:36:249 (6,7) -
00:40:977 (4) - A slight reposition would work nicely here so as to make 00:40:977 (4,5) - a dash as well.
00:55:325 (1,2,3) - Really inconsistent with 00:44:890 (1,2,3) - . The former implies a walk while the latter implies a harsh dash. I would go for something more consistent
01:11:466 (6,1) - I think this was supposed to be a HDash instead. The normal dash really feels like an edge dash and totally contrasts normal dash usage in previous 1/4 rhythms in the kiai
01:52:716 (1,2,3) - Also a slight nerf is in order here cause this might be distancing longer than 1.5x of the HDash trigger distance, which is unrankable

[

Midnight]

00:01:194 (3) - Inconsistent with 00:11:629 (2,3) - . It definitely should have used the latters rhythm. The beat here 00:01:846 - is pretty prominent
00:05:107 (4,1) - Could be made into a dash, its pretty ambiguous in its current spacing
00:20:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - For a rain i think this pattern is way too strainful to the player. After pattern of consecutive dashing and hyperdashing this pattern needs a large amount of control so as not to be dropped. I would recommend a more simplistic approach to this pattern
00:22:064 (2) - A slight rotation rotation to the left would work well here for the extra movement retention
00:29:890 (2,3) - Im aware why this is more spaced ( the more noticable instrument apparent only for those 2 beats) however i still would think this is too much spacing for this generally calm section of the song. Something like x:448 for this 00:30:236 (3) - would work better in terms of spacing. Its more forgiving but still retains the intensity its supposed to express
00:27:627 (4,5) - should have been a HDash, consistency with 00:35:453 (4,5) -
00:31:214 (5,1) - Reduce this spacing a bit. You gave similar spacing in the previous section to a beat that was way stronger than this. So this being so intense seems inconsistent to me
00:25:834 (4,5) - HDash here for consistency with 00:36:269 (6,7) -
00:40:671 (5,1) - This is a bit of an overemphasized normal dash to the point of becoming an edge dash. Some more leniency would do the trick
00:44:910 (1,2,3) - Drop the spacing to be consistent with 00:42:301 (1,2,3) -
00:48:008 (2,3) - Pretty harsh antiflow consirering all similar patterns didnt utilize antiflow and this is a pretty sudden spot to introduce
00:52:084 (7,8,9,10) - A slight spacing drop here could have played way better. Although it still feels pretty inconsistent as a pattern since 01:01:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this similar pattern which is on a stronger sound doesnt really utilize this left right pattern you had going on. My other guess is that you just accidentally ctrlg'd 01:02:845 (7,8) - on the second pattern and it was originally supposed to be a left right as well
01:11:649 (2,1) - HDash here would be nice for a neater HDash distribution
01:14:910 (4,5) - Considering similar patterns, this has way more spacing than it should have had

Good Luck~

wonjae

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Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-04-29T19:09:21+00:00

Nokashi wrote:
Hello there!

[ General]
https://ginkiha.bandcamp.com/album/ne-nuit some metadata
Add "NIZI-RINGO" to tags since the album "ne/nuit" is under that company. Also add "g2r2014"
When you applied the offset you actually went for the chime effect as the first beat in the metronome instead of the piano, resulting in an incorrect offset. I Fiddled around with timing and it seems that 543 or something along that does the trick nicely. i applied all of the metadata stuff and the timing.

[ Cup]
00:00:563 (1) - Would play better as a 1/2 to slider to better reflect the music and also be consistent with 00:10:997 (1) - made it a 1/2 repeat
00:02:519 (3,1) - I Would definitely expect more movement to get to this strong beat, if you take into account that the jump to to this 00:02:519 (3) - circle had a ~ 1.40x and was movement to a noticeably weaker sound. Thus, i would expect this 00:02:519 (3,1) - to be 1.40x DS or higher increased the jump to around 1.45
00:06:432 (2) - Maybe 1/2 slider instead here as well for the added melody emphasis? nah i dont think it would fit.
00:13:606 (1,2) - There isnt indication that some graduality in spacing should happen so i would suggest sticking to the 2.60x DS like here 00:10:997 (1,2) - uhh i think i did it correctly, changed some placements in the pattern after though
00:18:497 (1) - Maybe something like x:296 here for the added emphasis on this 00:18:497 (1,2) - movement since the sound on 00:18:823 (2) - is really strong and the movement to get to it should be emphasized more instead of that, i moved (2) around for the emphasis.
00:20:127 (4) - Maybe split this into 2 1/2 sliders to get better movementum towards the downbeat here 00:21:432 (1) - . I mean theres a beat here 00:21:106 - so you could try it again yea i see yor point but i wanted a gap of space from the transition to this part of the song.
00:41:649 (3,1) - Since you arent playing with stable DS Either way, this definitely deserves more spacing, when taking into consideration that you have used up to 2.80x DS in calmer section of this song and yet in the start of the kiai its pretty lackluster good point
00:47:519 (1,2) - Should be 1.00x DS to be consistent with how you space these beats alright
00:54:530 (3) - Why did you suddenly start mapping this rhythm in the background. The intensity it had didnt change that much from the past so it suprises me that you suddenly decided to express it in the map. I would go for something more consistent, either map the previous similar beats like this or just dont map this at all remapped notes boi
01:01:866 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe ctrl g here to make this 01:02:845 (5,1) - jump noticable although u might need to reposition 01:03:171 (1) - so its a bit close cause 3.20x DS xd i really didnt want to make the jump too high and just make a smooth transition. i did increase the distance though
01:06:758 (5,6) - Should be spaced like 01:05:780 (1,2) - . Cause of their horizontal nature, they fill up too much of the platter so they might be hard to position for newer players. space them like this 01:05:780 (1,2) - one uhh i changed the spacing a bit but idk if thats what you wanted.
01:08:388 (4,5) - Increase this spacing so there is more graduality between these objects to compliment the melody 01:08:388 (4,5,6) - k
01:24:040 (1) - Move to somewhere like x:188 for the added emphasis? sure
01:44:910 (1,2,3) - These should be spaced more to be consistent with the spacing of similar patternsok

[ Midnight]
00:01:194 (3) - Inconsistent with 00:11:629 (2,3) - . It definitely should have used the latters rhythm. The beat here 00:01:846 - is pretty prominent ok dad
00:05:107 (4,1) - Could be made into a dash, its pretty ambiguous in its current spacing fair enough
00:20:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - For a rain i think this pattern is way too strainful to the player. After pattern of consecutive dashing and hyperdashing this pattern needs a large amount of control so as not to be dropped. I would recommend a more simplistic approach to this pattern i think its fine.
00:22:064 (2) - A slight rotation rotation to the left would work well here for the extra movement retention alright
00:29:890 (2,3) - Im aware why this is more spaced ( the more noticable instrument apparent only for those 2 beats) however i still would think this is too much spacing for this generally calm section of the song. Something like x:448 for this 00:30:236 (3) - would work better in terms of spacing. Its more forgiving but still retains the intensity its supposed to express okay
00:27:627 (4,5) - should have been a HDash, consistency with 00:35:453 (4,5) - okay
00:31:214 (5,1) - Reduce this spacing a bit. You gave similar spacing in the previous section to a beat that was way stronger than this. So this being so intense seems inconsistent to me
00:25:834 (4,5) - HDash here for consistency with 00:36:269 (6,7) -
00:40:671 (5,1) - This is a bit of an overemphasized normal dash to the point of becoming an edge dash. Some more leniency would do the trick yea youre right.
00:44:910 (1,2,3) - Drop the spacing to be consistent with 00:42:301 (1,2,3) - ok
00:48:008 (2,3) - Pretty harsh antiflow consirering all similar patterns didnt utilize antiflow and this is a pretty sudden spot to introduce nerfed but didnt get rid of the antiflow
00:52:084 (7,8,9,10) - A slight spacing drop here could have played way better. Although it still feels pretty inconsistent as a pattern since 01:01:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this similar pattern which is on a stronger sound doesnt really utilize this left right pattern you had going on. My other guess is that you just accidentally ctrlg'd 01:02:845 (7,8) - on the second pattern and it was originally supposed to be a left right as well slight spacing drop indeed
01:11:649 (2,1) - HDash here would be nice for a neater HDash distribution ok
01:14:910 (4,5) - Considering similar patterns, this has way more spacing than it should have had yes

Good Luck~

im going to let roseus apply the platter shit for him first then ill reply with my platter fixes. thanks!

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-04-30T04:47:58+00:00

00:01:194 (2)- you could move it to x:144 for the more noticable walk and the more noticable dash thereafter here 00:01:194 (2,3)- ( Ok )
00:03:803 (2)- Also move this to x:272 for consistency with 00:00:546 (1,2)- and a less ambiguous dash here 00:03:803 (2,3)- ( Okay )
00:06:412 (2)- I Would play it safe here and reduce this HDash since it might be well over 1.5x of the trigger distance, which is unrankable. Maybe ctrl g and a subtle reposition? ( Do you realize that the Hdash trigger distance for this diff at 1 /2 beatsnap is 4.10x because of the SV? I would have to alter the slider velocity of the map for the distance trigger to shrink and that would mean resnapping the whole map. This is fine unless Grapes agrees to a SV change )
00:09:673 (3)- In my ears this is a bit stronger than 00:09:020 (2)- this, yet the latter gets the HDash.I would suggest switching up the distancing here so as this jump 00:09:020 (2,3)- is a HDash instead ( The pitch is higher on (2) so I wanted to reflect that and it's quieter on (3) )
00:14:238 (2,3)- Ambiguous spacing here. Easily fixed if you move 00:14:238 (2)- to somewhere like x:208 ( Done )
00:18:803 (1,2)- Also tone these down a tad bit, maybe a -0.20x DS decrease? ( No, it becomes an edge dash if I do that )
00:20:760 (5,6,7)- Should be snapped to 1/6 not 1/3. There are quite a lot of beats that you missed resulting in a not so favourable feedback ( Yeah, sure )
00:21:412 (1,2)- Bordeline edge dash. This isnt expected in any way and definitely doesnt compliment the music. Definitely reduce the spacing of this jump to something like 4.00x or 3.80x DS ( Done )
00:25:814 (4,5)- Slight nerf here would do the trick to be consistent with 00:36:249 (6,7)- ( Done )
00:40:977 (4)- A slight reposition would work nicely here so as to make 00:40:977 (4,5)- a dash as well. ( Done )

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wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-05-06T05:02:02+00:00

Nokashi wrote:
Hello there!

[ Collab Platter]
00:55:325 (1,2,3) - Really inconsistent with 00:44:890 (1,2,3) - . The former implies a walk while the latter implies a harsh dash. I would go for something more consistent
01:11:466 (6,1) - I think this was supposed to be a HDash instead. The normal dash really feels like an edge dash and totally contrasts normal dash usage in previous 1/4 rhythms in the kiai
01:52:716 (1,2,3) - Also a slight nerf is in order here cause this might be distancing longer than 1.5x of the HDash trigger distance, which is unrankable

[][/notice]

Good Luck~

fixed all boi and applied

Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2017-05-13T06:37:48+00:00

Nokashi wrote:
Hello there! - Sup

[ Magic Girl's Salad]
00:00:562 (1) - You can make this fully horizontal, kinda like 00:01:214 (2) -, and place it on x:256 for extra movement retention, since they are similar sounds and should be expressed in a similar manner- I prefer keeping this as it is, since they aren't the exact same sound I don't see why I should have the exact same pattern to it. I like to emphasize the higher pitch of the (2) slider by making it horizontal.
00:05:127 (3) - Could have been a 1/2 slider instead to better express this beat 00:05:453 - here. Up to this point you took advantage of all these melodies so it feels a bit off to have this one unmapped - Fair enough, fixed
00:08:388 (1,2) - I feel like this should be toned down as spacing is a bit too much here for a dash so early into the map, maybe something like 3.60x DS or something similar. The dash will still be apparent but easier to catch
00:09:693 (3,4) - You could make this a walk so the player can cool off after the intense dash. Instead, 00:10:345 (4,1) - this could be made into a dash, since the downbeat here 00:10:997 (1) - is pretty strong - I'd rather not make it a walk, the piano sounds are very audible and strong here and I don't want to blandly ignore them. I'll keep everything as it is on this one.
00:15:888 - Circle here and create a dash here to here 00:16:214 (1) - ? There hasnt been a dash for a while so it would be a bit fitting here - Eh it's not a matter of dashing, but more of density to me. I don't wanna keep adding notes where I purposefully left them blank and make the salad denser than it should be.
00:18:823 (1,2,3,4,1) - Salads are meant to introduce the dashing mechanic to the player in logical measures. Here having 4 dashes in a row, so early into the song, in a non-kiai section is too much for a salad in my eyes. I would drop the 1/2 dash structure here and have a 1/1 dash structure instead, making some of these jumps walkable and some of them dashable, not all of them dashable. Similar point here 01:52:736 (1,2,3,4) - - I understand, but again, I don't wanna ignore very clear and audible sounds. So I brought (4) closer to (3) to make it walkable since the sounds there is a lot lless powerful. I also decreased the distance of the jumps because 4x distance wtf
00:24:040 (1,1) - You could try to give them a 1.50x DS with previous object instead since the sound isnt that strong to imply a dash and you have shown that you place dashes on snares here 00:25:019 (2,3) - for example. 00:29:258 (1) - Were there to have been a 2.00x DS 1/1 gap in this rhythm you are making, it should have been this cause of the stronger flute note.- Changed the first, kept the second. Mainly because it's kind of difficult for me to do this while still keeping the pattern I want, another reason is that the second one has a clear piano in the back too.
00:30:236 (2,3) - compared to the graduality of the spacing the dashes in this section have, this is way too spiky on its spacing. all the previous jumps have a ~0.30x DS difference or even less ( 00:25:019 (2,3) - compared to 00:27:627 (2,3) - ) this one spikes 0.50x DS spacing increase. Should be decreased a bit to be consistent - Gotcha
00:31:866 (1,2,1,2,3) - I Wouldnt really drop the nice rhythm i had going in previous measures. This new rhythm kills all the emphasis that you had on the snares ( to the point that the snares are on a slider end here 00:35:780 - , meaning almost no movement to get to it even though in the previous measure it was a clear dash, like all snares) and the overall dash consistency. The song doesnt really call for such a drastic underwhelming rhythm switch.- o k f r i e n d o
00:40:997 (3,4) - Would play better as 2 1/2 sliders instead of 2 1/1 circles and, if positioned correctly, they can make the transition to the kiai really noticable and neat - "Positioned correctly" you're talking to the shittiest salad mapper placement wise but I tried.
00:43:606 - Since you played so much around these snares in the previous sections it feels weird to me that you didnt take advantage of this snare beat here. Similar point here 00:54:040 - - ok
00:46:866 (4,5) - Maybe lower this spacing so the walk is more apparent, and the following dash here 00:47:193 (5,1) - more noticable - :thumbsup:
00:52:573 (2,1) - Make this jump more noticable, the music really calls for it - fixed
01:05:780 (1,2,3) - theres graduality in the instrument pitch going from highter to lower pitch, however the spacing goes the other way around, ranging from lower to higher spacing. 01:06:269 (2,3) - this sudden 0.50x DS spacing spike isnt so justified and it should be made consistent with the previous similar rhythms. It would be for the best since placing dashes on such irregular rhythms might be off-putting for newer players. 01:16:214 (1,2,3) - Similar point here - o true fixed
01:12:953 (6,1) - maybe a 0.20x DS decrease here for consistency - fixed

Good Luck~

Thanks for modding, wasn't in the applying mindset for this one so quality is probably affected.

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wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-05-13T18:59:05+00:00

applied

Dea ex machina

535 posts

Joined January 2014

Dea ex machina 2017-05-18T20:53:48+00:00

General

Tags

There is a tag conflict within the set. Please address.

Metadata

Good!

Spread/Other

Why are the Salad and Platter hp5, but the Rain is hp7?
Made a better version of your bg for you! http://i.imgur.com/DFpjny3.jpg

Hitsounds

General Hitsounding

Good!

Cup

General

00:13:586 (1,2) - This is mapped as a slider and then repeat slider, while the exact same thing at the start is mapped as a slider and two circles:
00:03:151 (1,2,3) - . Please fix the consistency
00:29:238 (3) - NC here?
01:00:216 (4,1) - Every other time you had one these sliders, you put a space between (4) and (1). Why not this time?
01:08:368 (1) - NC here?
01:12:281 (1,2,3,4,1) - This flow is pretty difficult to grasp for a new player. Make a more flow-friendly pattern?
01:18:803 (4) - NC here?
01:36:412 (3,1,2) - Not a good flow for new players.

Magic Girl's Salad

General

00:17:193 (2,3) - This jump is too small compared to the other jumps you've used in this section.
00:18:823 (1,2,3) - I don't think it's good to have three large jumps right after another. Very difficult for new players to execute.
00:26:649 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This section is basically the same pattern repeating itself Maybe think of something more creative, even if it's just changing some directions here and there.
00:51:432 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - This is too dense for a salad.
01:01:866 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Same as above.
01:10:997 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Again, too dense
01:22:736 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - At least it's the last dense stream :/
01:50:127 (1) - Make the angle more shallow. The sharp angle makes the effect of the repeat almost pointless

Collab Platter

General

00:16:194 (1,2) - The sharp angle on both of these sliders makes them very awkward to play
00:16:846 (2,3) - To keep consistency, you would need to add a hyperdash between these two notes.
00:19:455 (2,3,4) - afaik, a hyper into an anti-flow pattern is unrankable in a platter.
00:25:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider cleaning up this stream and making it look more pretty
00:52:553 (4,1) - Anti-flow hyper pattern again
01:37:064 (1,2) - Awkward sharp angles on the sliders again too!

Midnight

General

00:20:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm... this pattern is a bit awkward to jump into. I wouldn't consider doing anything with it yet, just wait until you get a few more opinions.
00:33:151 (4) - Not a fan of this slider. It's a bit weird to hit.
00:54:510 (5,5,5) - Random completely vertical sliders! These are not cool at all...
01:16:194 (1,2,3) - The distances here are not all the same, unlike when you last used this pattern. Please fix.

Good luck!

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-05-20T00:21:12+00:00

fixed set inconsistencies for now, going to wait till roseus applies platter to start my end but thanks

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-05-26T00:35:10+00:00

-wwwww wrote:
General

[notice]Collab Platter

General

00:16:194 (1,2) - The sharp angle on both of these sliders makes them very awkward to play Sharp angle? they're almost vertical.
I dont understand how it plays awkwardly.
00:16:846 (2,3) - To keep consistency, you would need to add a hyperdash between these two notes. I tried but it plays weird now
00:19:455 (2,3,4) - afaik, a hyper into an anti-flow pattern is unrankable in a platter. I tried to fix
00:25:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider cleaning up this stream and making it look more pretty Increased distances
00:52:553 (4,1) - Anti-flow hyper pattern again
01:37:064 (1,2) - Awkward sharp angles on the sliders again too!

Good luck!

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wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-06-06T22:00:50+00:00

-wwwww wrote:
General

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Metadata
Good!
Spread/Other
Why are the Salad and Platter hp5, but the Rain is hp7?
Made a better version of your bg for you! http://i.imgur.com/DFpjny3.jpg
Hitsounds

General Hitsounding
Good!

Cup

General

00:13:586 (1,2) - This is mapped as a slider and then repeat slider, while the exact same thing at the start is mapped as a slider and two circles:
00:03:151 (1,2,3) - . Please fix the consistency although they are different, they are not the same thing as the later one have a louder ding noise that i think fit mapping the noise.
00:29:238 (3) - NC here? ok
01:00:216 (4,1) - Every other time you had one these sliders, you put a space between (4) and (1). Why not this time? increased distance
01:08:368 (1) - NC here? ok
01:12:281 (1,2,3,4,1) - This flow is pretty difficult to grasp for a new player. Make a more flow-friendly pattern? ye
01:18:803 (4) - NC here? ok
01:36:412 (3,1,2) - Not a good flow for new players. made better

Collab Platter

General

00:52:553 (4,1) - Anti-flow hyper pattern again
01:37:064 (1,2) - Awkward sharp angles on the sliders again too!
fixed both

Midnight

General

00:20:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm... this pattern is a bit awkward to jump into. I wouldn't consider doing anything with it yet, just wait until you get a few more opinions.
00:33:151 (4) - Not a fan of this slider. It's a bit weird to hit.
00:54:510 (5,5,5) - Random completely vertical sliders! These are not cool at all...horizontal
01:16:194 (1,2,3) - The distances here are not all the same, unlike when you last used this pattern. Please fix.
fixed rest also
Good luck!

Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2017-06-11T03:15:27+00:00

-wwwww wrote:
Magic Girl's Salad

00:17:193 (2,3) - This jump is too small compared to the other jumps you've used in this section. - Fixed
00:18:823 (1,2,3) - I don't think it's good to have three large jumps right after another. Very difficult for new players to execute. - I don't want to blantly ignore the clear increase in sound and volume here. I've decreased the distance though to help new players perform the jumps.
00:26:649 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This section is basically the same pattern repeating itself Maybe think of something more creative, even if it's just changing some directions here and there. - SHIT I THOUGHT I PUT A DIRECTION CHANGE FUCK ME
00:51:432 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - This is too dense for a salad. - Fixed
01:01:866 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Same as above. - Keeping this one as a pre-kiai kinda thing
01:10:997 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Again, too dense - Kinda fixed?
01:22:736 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - At least it's the last dense stream :/ - Keeping again, the bpm and song is quite slow so I think I'd be fine keeping this as a final stream.
01:50:127 (1) - Make the angle more shallow. The sharp angle makes the effect of the repeat almost pointless - Gotcha, fixed

Thanks for modding.

Magic Girl's Salad

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Benita

604 posts

Joined February 2014

Benita 2017-06-11T21:23:17+00:00

random mod, actually I expected the diff names to be all low caps because of the title/artist name

cup

00:03:151 (1) - would be cool beans as 1/1 slider, also stay consistent with rhythm usage here 00:00:542 (1,2) -
00:10:977 (1) - aand again rhythm change, try this as a single note instead as the beat on the red tick isn't that strong
00:18:477 (1) - actually I don't feel there is a strong enough beat here for a note, also put nc on 2 instead cause downbeat
00:21:086 - I feel as if a note is missing here, the music is pretty intense
00:27:607 - here as well for consistency
00:34:455 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is this differently mapped to 00:24:020 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - when the music is the exact same?
00:39:673 (4,1) - swap nc
01:03:151 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I think a timeline like this is better suited but up to you. I feel the doubles is kind of too dense for a cup diff, same here 01:13:586 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -
01:08:368 (1,2) - same for these sliders as the screenshot above and all similar sliders xd
01:31:194 (1) - you can extend this slider by 1/2 because the bpm is so low
01:34:455 - The outro is mapped way more densely than the intro, like here 01:37:064 (1,2,3) - vs 00:03:151 (1,2,3) - so maybe try fixing up so the rhythm/density stays the same in the intro as the outro since the music is basically the same

Magic Girl's salad

00:10:977 (1,2,3) - why sudden rhythm change from 00:00:542 (1,2,3,4) - ? owo
00:38:368 (3) - aaa downbeat on sliderend, please remove one repeat and add a note there instead for better emphasising mwm also 00:38:368 (3,1,2) - all these notes are placed on almost the same grid so if you choose not to apply the first I'd still recommend putting some distance between these notes as 3/1 standstill is quite boring
00:41:629 (4,1) - this is such a long distance with a very sharp directonchange owo consider lowering the distance
00:43:586 (2,3,4) - I don't see a dash here very fitting, I'd rather like to see a dash between 00:44:238 (4,1) -
00:46:194 (2,3) - ehm why follow piano suddenly? uwu I like the idea but it's kind of meh when other places there are very strong piano that remains unmapped and tbh, I think it's good to keep the density low, especially when these piano sounds are unmapped in Platter, even if it is a gd xd
00:47:499 (1,2) - maybe lower the distance here a tiny bit if it's supposed to be walkable owo
00:52:553 (2,1) - I'd increase the distance here a bit to make it clear it's a dash uwu
00:56:629 (1,2) - Same as I mentioned before about density and stuff owo
00:57:933 (1,2) - and here, I guess it's supposed to be walkable so consider lowering the distance to make it clearer it's a walk UWU
01:02:988 (2,1) - Consider increasing the distance a bit to make it clear it's a dash
01:04:455 (2,1) - Here also, I assume it's supposed to be a dash so increase the distance a tiny bit
01:11:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since the pitch is lowering on 1 to 4, maybe make those 1/2's instead and make 6 1/4's? Or actually, I'd like if you used the same rhythm as you did here 01:21:412 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - owo
01:14:890 (2,1,2,3) - hmm consider making spacing equal to 01:04:455 (2,1,2,3) - as it is now, it's kinda jumpy and antiflowy/directionchangy at the same time which doesn't suit the music or this difficulty imo
01:31:846 (1) - You can extend the spinner 1/2 to the red tick because the bpm is so low, but up to you mwm
01:44:890 (1,2,3) - same as before, why suddenly change rhythm usage? uwu
01:55:325 (1) - same here, you can either add a note to the red tick before the spinner or move the spinner start 1/2 after the last note because the bpm is so low, it's allowed owo

collab platter

00:08:042 - Add a note here for consistency with 00:18:477 (4) -
00:20:760 (5,6,7,8,9) - like i understand you wanna keep a hyper here but imo this just sounds silly with the 1/3 break in the music so I would just keep it 1/2 rhythm or remove 00:21:194 (9) - cause 1/2 break sounds a million times better than 1/3
00:21:412 (1,2) - Feels weird with a dash to 2 when the beat standing out is on slider end of 2, could try doing something like you did here 00:31:846 (1,2,3) -
00:24:020 (4,1) - swap nc
00:25:325 (1,2,3) - 00:35:760 (3,4,5) - I'd change 1 to a 1/2 slider as that's how this part is mapped in Rain and it feels weird Platter is higher densed, even if it's a gd/collab
00:46:031 (2) - I'd remove this cause it's snapped to barely audible piano and you're obviously not focusing on piano in the kiai so
00:44:075 (3) - On basically all sliders like this, you could try moving it 1/4 forward and adding a repeat to it, I feel it covers the background piano a lot better
00:52:064 (6,7,8,9,1) - Movement is very snappy to the slider, try making the notes before end further to the right so you can make the slider a bit more like 00:47:499 (1) - only on the other side ofc
00:54:020 (1) - Remove nc
01:00:542 (5) - nc
01:02:988 (4,1) - okay so i would like to see 1 more horisontal as the boost from the hyperdash makes it easy to overdash and miss a lot of droplets
01:10:977 (3) - nc here, remove here 01:11:629 (1,1) - and add here again 01:12:281 (5) -
01:24:020 (8,1,2,3) - Either swap nc on 8 and 1 or nc all notes for hp, they're pretty far away so hp goes down pretty fast if you miss a lot before this part also I'm not sure about the movement here 01:23:368 (4,5,6,7,8) - the antiflow right before the hyper

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00:07:064 (3,4) - I feel a note is missing on the white tick here, maybe try making 3 a 1/1 slider?
00:13:586 (1,2,3) - It seems you're emphasising the piano mostly and the higher pitched sound is on slider end of 2, you could try adding a repeat on 1 and having a dash to a 1/2 slider on 2, I don't feel like a hyper is fitting
00:38:368 (3) - a this curve is pretty ugly in gameplay xd maybe try rotating it like -60 degrees clockwise
00:39:673 (4,1) - swap nc
00:41:629 (2) - There are pretty distinct 1/4 drums here you could map
okay my main issue with the first part of this kiai is that you're ignoring very distinct piano sounds where you've previously focused your mapping on the piano but suddenly in kiai you start focusing on pretty low background sounds. So I'd try mapping some 1/4's where you can hear the piano building up, example is like here 00:47:499 (1,2,3) - you can hear very very strong piano on the white tick on the slider of 2 there and there are a lot of similar cases like here 00:49:129 - also very strong piano.
00:44:564 (5,1) - I'd like to see at least a dash here for the downbeat, if you agree to my point above, you can add a note on the blue tick there as well for piano
00:47:173 (5,1) - here also is pretty strong beat, should at least have a stronger dash if not a hyperdash
01:10:977 (1,2,1) - all these have whistles in Platter, would also fit with a whistle here 01:13:260 (6) -
01:21:412 (1,2) - Same as above, also nc 01:22:879 (3) -
01:26:629 (2,3,4) - could nc all these notes because of hp drain
01:35:107 (3) - Try removing one repeat and add a note with dash to it for pitch change
01:36:412 (1,2) - swap nc
01:40:977 (3,4) - same as previously, i feel like a note is missing on the white tick so maybe make 3 a 1/1 slider
01:47:499 (1,2,3) - Also same as before, the higher pitched piano is on slider end of 2 so maybe try adding a repeat to 1 and a dash to 2 or something

that's all from me yo, gl~

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DeletedUser_6709840 2017-06-26T23:28:28+00:00

00:08:042- Add a note here for consistency with 00:18:477 (4)- (Okay)
00:20:760 (5,6,7,8,9)- like i understand you wanna keep a hyper here but imo this just sounds silly with the 1/3 break in the music so I would just keep it 1/2 rhythm or remove 00:21:194 (9)- cause 1/2 break sounds a million times better than 1/3 ( I strongly disagree. Ending on a 1 /2 sound betrays the 1/3 sound here. So if the player hears that 1/3 sound but no note is there, it will cause a lot of misjudging hitting that hyper. Plus, modders complained before about it being 1 /2 so I opted for the 1/3 instead )
00:21:412 (1,2)- Feels weird with a dash to 2 when the beat standing out is on slider end of 2, could try doing something like you did here 00:31:846 (1,2,3)- (Had to repattern to apply)
00:24:020 (4,1)- swap nc ( fine )
00:25:325 (1,2,3)- 00:35:760 (3,4,5)- I'd change 1 to a 1/2 slider as that's how this part is mapped in Rain and it feels weird Platter is higher densed, even if it's a gd/collab (I think it's fine, I don't like how Grapes mapped the part in rain because it doesnt' follow the sound)

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wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-08-12T19:34:08+00:00

Benny- wrote:
random mod, actually I expected the diff names to be all low caps because of the title/artist name ill probably do that later
cup
00:03:151 (1) - would be cool beans as 1/1 slider, also stay consistent with rhythm usage here 00:00:542 (1,2) - added a note instead
00:10:977 (1) - aand again rhythm change, try this as a single note instead as the beat on the red tick isn't that strong hard to emphasise.
00:18:477 (1) - actually I don't feel there is a strong enough beat here for a note, also put nc on 2 instead cause downbeat changed new combo but i think the note here is fine.
00:21:086 - I feel as if a note is missing here, the music is pretty intense i think its fine since the player here has to move to a decent amount imo to catch the n ext fruit
00:27:607 - here as well for consistency ok
00:34:455 (1,2,3,4,1) - why is this differently mapped to 00:24:020 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - when the music is the exact same? i wanted the beginning of this part of the song to have less note density and slowly increase the density as the song went on longer. imo that gives new players a good way to adapt to the music but i see ur point.
00:39:673 (4,1) - swap nc ok
01:03:151 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I think a timeline like this is better suited but up to you. I feel the doubles is kind of too dense for a cup diff, same here 01:13:586 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - i like the doubles and i dont plan on changing it for the time being.
01:08:368 (1,2) - same for these sliders as the screenshot above and all similar sliders xd ok
01:31:194 (1) - you can extend this slider by 1/2 because the bpm is so low i trust u
01:34:455 - The outro is mapped way more densely than the intro, like here 01:37:064 (1,2,3) - vs 00:03:151 (1,2,3) - so maybe try fixing up so the rhythm/density stays the same in the intro as the outro since the music is basically the samei changed like 1 pattern.
collab platter
00:46:031 (2) - I'd remove this cause it's snapped to barely audible piano and you're obviously not focusing on piano in the kiai so i added this to help setup the dash and to emphasize that this part had a piano noise that the other pattern before didnt have
00:44:075 (3) - On basically all sliders like this, you could try moving it 1/4 forward and adding a repeat to it, I feel it covers the background piano a lot better made it a repeat
00:52:064 (6,7,8,9,1) - Movement is very snappy to the slider, try making the notes before end further to the right so you can make the slider a bit more like 00:47:499 (1) - only on the other side ofc i think i smoothed it out a little
00:54:020 (1) - Remove nc
01:00:542 (5) - nc did both ncs
01:02:988 (4,1) - okay so i would like to see 1 more horisontal as the boost from the hyperdash makes it easy to overdash and miss a lot of droplets uhh i changed the slider a bit i think.
01:10:977 (3) - nc here, remove here 01:11:629 (1,1) - and add here again 01:12:281 (5) - ok
01:24:020 (8,1,2,3) - Either swap nc on 8 and 1 or nc all notes for hp, they're pretty far away so hp goes down pretty fast if you miss a lot before this part also I'm not sure about the movement here 01:23:368 (4,5,6,7,8) - the antiflow right before the hyper did the nc things. i also fixed the antiflow just incase.
midnight
00:07:064 (3,4) - I feel a note is missing on the white tick here, maybe try making 3 a 1/1 slider? okay
00:13:586 (1,2,3) - It seems you're emphasising the piano mostly and the higher pitched sound is on slider end of 2, you could try adding a repeat on 1 and having a dash to a 1/2 slider on 2, I don't feel like a hyper is fitting did it but added a hyper to 2
00:38:368 (3) - a this curve is pretty ugly in gameplay xd maybe try rotating it like -60 degrees clockwise rotating it is still ugly so i just changed shape
00:39:673 (4,1) - swap nc ok
00:41:629 (2) - There are pretty distinct 1/4 drums here you could map fuk drumms
okay my main issue with the first part of this kiai is that you're ignoring very distinct piano sounds where you've previously focused your mapping on the piano but suddenly in kiai you start focusing on pretty low background sounds. So I'd try mapping some 1/4's where you can hear the piano building up, example is like here 00:47:499 (1,2,3) - you can hear very very strong piano on the white tick on the slider of 2 there and there are a lot of similar cases like here 00:49:129 - also very strong piano. i dont want to deter from the main pattern that i keep on repeating in the first half of the kiai but i did add more notes for emphasize other piano sounds.
00:44:564 (5,1) - I'd like to see at least a dash here for the downbeat, if you agree to my point above, you can add a note on the blue tick there as well for piano ok
00:47:173 (5,1) - here also is pretty strong beat, should at least have a stronger dash if not a hyperdash changed the pattern a bit
01:10:977 (1,2,1) - all these have whistles in Platter, would also fit with a whistle here 01:13:260 (6) -
01:21:412 (1,2) - Same as above, also nc 01:22:879 (3) - did both hitsounding and nc
01:26:629 (2,3,4) - could nc all these notes because of hp drain ok
01:35:107 (3) - Try removing one repeat and add a note with dash to it for pitch change
01:36:412 (1,2) - swap nc
01:40:977 (3,4) - same as previously, i feel like a note is missing on the white tick so maybe make 3 a 1/1 slider
01:47:499 (1,2,3) - Also same as before, the higher pitched piano is on slider end of 2 so maybe try adding a repeat to 1 and a dash to 2 or something applied all 3 in some way or another
that's all from me yo, gl~

revive

i blame californian for applying mods :p

Liyac

138 posts

Joined October 2014

Liyac 2017-08-13T06:41:21+00:00

Paranoid Grapes wrote:
i blame californian for applying mods :p

time to keep my end of the bargain by the end of tomorrow, until then oyasumi

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-08-24T21:44:43+00:00

Nightfall more like Night(this set is never going to get ranked)fall

Magic Girl

224 posts

Joined August 2013

Magic Girl 2017-08-28T14:19:15+00:00

Benny- wrote:
random mod, actually I expected the diff names to be all low caps because of the title/artist name
Magic Girl's salad[/color]
00:10:977 (1,2,3) - why sudden rhythm change from 00:00:542 (1,2,3,4) - ? owo - for the extra jingle sound i guess uwu
00:38:368 (3) - aaa downbeat on sliderend, please remove one repeat and add a note there instead for better emphasising mwm also 00:38:368 (3,1,2) - all these notes are placed on almost the same grid so if you choose not to apply the first I'd still recommend putting some distance between these notes as 3/1 standstill is quite boring - i worked with it owo
00:41:629 (4,1) - this is such a long distance with a very sharp directonchange owo consider lowering the distance - oki uwu
00:43:586 (2,3,4) - I don't see a dash here very fitting, I'd rather like to see a dash between 00:44:238 (4,1) - - ovo
00:46:194 (2,3) - ehm why follow piano suddenly? uwu I like the idea but it's kind of meh when other places there are very strong piano that remains unmapped and tbh, I think it's good to keep the density low, especially when these piano sounds are unmapped in Platter, even if it is a gd xd - look im really sorry but ive come too far to change this now and i need to sleep so i'll consider it but im keeping it for now.
00:47:499 (1,2) - maybe lower the distance here a tiny bit if it's supposed to be walkable owo - rawr owo!
00:52:553 (2,1) - I'd increase the distance here a bit to make it clear it's a dash uwu - it'll be against the wall henny uvu
00:56:629 (1,2) - Same as I mentioned before about density and stuff owo - same response owo
00:57:933 (1,2) - and here, I guess it's supposed to be walkable so consider lowering the distance to make it clearer it's a walk UWU - OWO
01:02:988 (2,1) - Consider increasing the distance a bit to make it clear it's a dash- ok
01:04:455 (2,1) - Here also, I assume it's supposed to be a dash so increase the distance a tiny bit - wall me harder
01:11:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since the pitch is lowering on 1 to 4, maybe make those 1/2's instead and make 6 1/4's? Or actually, I'd like if you used the same rhythm as you did here 01:21:412 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - owo - i did a thing
01:14:890 (2,1,2,3) - hmm consider making spacing equal to 01:04:455 (2,1,2,3) - as it is now, it's kinda jumpy and antiflowy/directionchangy at the same time which doesn't suit the music or this difficulty imo - done
01:31:846 (1) - You can extend the spinner 1/2 to the red tick because the bpm is so low, but up to you mwm - umu
01:44:890 (1,2,3) - same as before, why suddenly change rhythm usage? uwu - same answer as before uwu
01:55:325 (1) - same here, you can either add a note to the red tick before the spinner or move the spinner start 1/2 after the last note because the bpm is so low, it's allowed owo - tbh i changed the spinner at first to be consistent with the other diffs but now i dont evne know what the other diffs are doing so sure.
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that's all from me yo, gl~ - my passionate flame of hatred will not be snuffed out until i fucking kill you for this

here u fuckin go

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wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-08-28T19:44:03+00:00

owo

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-09-13T04:33:54+00:00

upddated set names to be lowercase in hopes of keeping this alive.

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

JierYagtama 2017-09-14T11:09:18+00:00

aight I'll mod first for ya grapes xd

Platter collabbbb

Hmmm pretty interesting when i first played this was that there isnt any mini fruits a

00:27:281 (2) - maybe move this to x:288 since i kinda feel like this kinda lacks to emphasize that flute sound
00:40:651 (3) - maybe also move this to x:382 since its a loud sound to give it more impact to dash at here
01:51:412 (3) - hmmm maybe put an h-dash here like what you did in 00:07:064 (3) -
01:54:999 (1,2) - might wanna fix that 2B or if thats allowed in ctb then i stand corrected xd

hmm since this is a platter i kinda think the diffs needs more sidedashes imo but overall this diff flows out nice xd

im ded at night

Just some personal stuff here:
You can honestly put some sweet slider art 01:24:020 - to 01:31:846 - (even tho it doesnt really show that much in gameplay but it could be nice to see for mappers like us to see for once xd)
but e up to you

00:04:129 (3) - maybe move this to x:253 for a side dash? since its sort of a loud piano sound i think it would it to put one here
00:20:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmmm i kinda how you did the stream here it might be weird to look at first but it actually kinda flows well xd
00:26:629 (1) - hmmm can you move this to x:57 for an h-dash since its pretty much a downbeat and it can give some consistency on the h-dash you gave over here 00:21:412 (1,2,3,4) -
00:26:955 (2) - also move this to x:260 if you took the route i suggested above
00:40:977 (1,2) - maybe move 1 to x:251 for better flow here and 2 at x:412 for both of them to have side dashes here since these two sounds raises up volume and pretty much have loud sounds.
00:49:292 (4) - maybe ctrl g this since its better to have some antiflow here imo
01:51:412 (3) - hmmm maybe h-dash here like what you did on 01:40:977 (3) -

this diff also flows nice xddd

So far yeah this is a gud set
lookin forward seein this ranked by u senpai XD

Goodluk bud

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-09-14T18:54:42+00:00

JeirYagtama wrote:
aight I'll mod first for ya grapes xd
Platter collabbbb
Hmmm pretty interesting when i first played this was that there isnt any mini fruits a

00:27:281 (2) - maybe move this to x:288 since i kinda feel like this kinda lacks to emphasize that flute sound
00:40:651 (3) - maybe also move this to x:382 since its a loud sound to give it more impact to dash at here
01:51:412 (3) - hmmm maybe put an h-dash here like what you did in 00:07:064 (3) - nah, me and roseus' parts are different so i dont thing think thats nessesary. if i get more opinions on it then maybe though
01:54:999 (1,2) - might wanna fix that 2B or if thats allowed in ctb then i stand corrected xd idk how that happened LOL

hmm since this is a platter i kinda think the diffs needs more sidedashes imo but overall this diff flows out nice xd

im ded at night
Just some personal stuff here:
You can honestly put some sweet slider art 01:24:020 - to 01:31:846 - (even tho it doesnt really show that much in gameplay but it could be nice to see for mappers like us to see for once xd) nah
but e up to you

00:04:129 (3) - maybe move this to x:253 for a side dash? since its sort of a loud piano sound i think it would it to put one here okay
00:20:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmmm i kinda how you did the stream here it might be weird to look at first but it actually kinda flows well xd thanks?
00:26:629 (1) - hmmm can you move this to x:57 for an h-dash since its pretty much a downbeat and it can give some consistency on the h-dash you gave over here 00:21:412 (1,2,3,4) -
00:26:955 (2) - also move this to x:260 if you took the route i suggested above took both suggestions and changed some spacing
00:40:977 (1,2) - maybe move 1 to x:251 for better flow here and 2 at x:412 for both of them to have side dashes here since these two sounds raises up volume and pretty much have loud sounds. i just made 1 into a hyper.
00:49:292 (4) - maybe ctrl g this since its better to have some antiflow here imo
01:51:412 (3) - hmmm maybe h-dash here like what you did on 01:40:977 (3) - nah

this diff also flows nice xddd

So far yeah this is a gud set
lookin forward seein this ranked by u senpai XD

Goodluk bud

thx

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Hareimu 2017-09-15T02:57:38+00:00

rank nightfall

[General]

magic girl's salad has widescreen storyboard enabled, pls disable as there is no sb on the map
collab platter's last spinner finishes half a beat earlier than all other diffs' spinners. Consider making it a beat longer for consistency.
such high HPs for all diffs, maybe lower all of them by one?

[cup]

00:42:281 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - aaaa the same shape repeated so many times it's not even fun anymore. Please consider varying either the orientation or the shape of these sliders before I get my ocd triggered ;_; (should be easy enough if you only decide to change the orientation of some, since they are repeats and don't require being moved over the x axis at all, just moving the tail of the slider works too)
01:12:607 (2,3) - I'd rather move these to x:56 so that the curve isn't so sharp/edgy.
00:51:738 (3,4) - ^ but to x:104

[magic girl's salad]

00:09:673 (3,4) - Is the distance between these supposed to be a dash? If so, move 00:10:325 (4) - to x:188 to make it clear, if not I'd suggest to reduce distancing a bit since it's unclear whether it's a dash or not.
00:19:455 (2) - Tilt this slider a bit more horizontally, I can still catch 00:20:107 (3) - with a walk and not with a dash like it's supposed to be o.O
00:27:933 (3) - Move to x:496 instead? Same as before, distance is kinda ambiguous here.
00:30:542 (3) - x:396? Same as before.
00:29:238 (1,2,3) - and 00:34:455 (1,2,3) - look exactly the same, try varying the patterns here a bit, maybe you could do this with the latter selection, it really works nicely: HUZZAH
00:38:368 (3) - Move to x:380, ambiguous spacing, you know the drill
00:49:781 (4) - Move to x:188 (2,0x spacing) and then move 00:50:107 (1) - to x:472 to keep consistency with previous dashing emphasis.
00:52:064 (1,2) - Move to x:392 so that the next 3/4 slider is emphasized correctly.
00:55:325 (1) - stack with 00:56:303 (3) - ? Also for distancing consistency
00:56:629 (1,2,3) - aaaa pls copypaste 00:46:194 (2,3,4) - and place it on the place of this curve please, seeing such a beautiful curve and then seeing this breaks my heart and gives me mixed feelings *runs*
01:03:151 (1) - Move to x:228 for better emphasis
01:05:760 (1) - x:128, ^ :^)
01:08:368 (1) - x:400, ^ hue
01:09:673 (2) - x:96, the violin is really highly pitched here so yea, emphasis
01:10:977 (1,2) - x:364 to compensate for previous change I guess (if you apply it that is)
01:20:107 (2) - x:412, high violin :>
01:40:977 (3) - x:496?
01:44:238 (4) - x:336 for clear dash distance
01:53:368 (2) - x:220, same as before.

[collab platter]

00:44:890 (1,2,3) - Move to x:72? rn the distancing between 00:44:564 (4,1) - these too is kinda too much, borderline hyper IMO
00:54:510 (3,4,4,5) - These look exactly like the ones from the previous section (00:44:075 (3,4,4,5) - , I'd suggest varying the shapes of the sliders a bit,
say, by 00:49:292 (3,4) - copypasting these and ctrl+h'ing them and placing them where 00:54:510 (3,4) - these are and perhaps you could 00:44:075 (3,4) - copypaste these and 00:57:118 (4,5) - replace these with them for more variety.

[the dead of night]

what is that grammatically incorrect diffname wh

There was not much I could point out about the rain diff, it's pretty well made and there are no detectable issues on it whatsoever to me, so yeah.

There we go, good luck!

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

Topic Starter

wonjae 2017-09-15T03:45:38+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
rank nightfall

[General]
magic girl's salad has widescreen storyboard enabled, pls disable as there is no sb on the map fixed
collab platter's last spinner finishes half a beat earlier than all other diffs' spinners. Consider making it a beat longer for consistency. fixed
such high HPs for all diffs, maybe lower all of them by one? decreased by .5 for now, ill change if i get more opinions on this.

[cup]
00:42:281 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - aaaa the same shape repeated so many times it's not even fun anymore. Please consider varying either the orientation or the shape of these sliders before I get my ocd triggered ;_; (should be easy enough if you only decide to change the orientation of some, since they are repeats and don't require being moved over the x axis at all, just moving the tail of the slider works too)
01:12:607 (2,3) - I'd rather move these to x:56 so that the curve isn't so sharp/edgy. okay
00:51:738 (3,4) - ^ but to x:104 ^

[collab platter]
00:44:890 (1,2,3) - Move to x:72? rn the distancing between 00:44:564 (4,1) - these too is kinda too much, borderline hyper IMO ok
00:54:510 (3,4,4,5) - These look exactly like the ones from the previous section (00:44:075 (3,4,4,5) - , I'd suggest varying the shapes of the sliders a bit,
say, by 00:49:292 (3,4) - copypasting these and ctrl+h'ing them and placing them where 00:54:510 (3,4) - these are and perhaps you could 00:44:075 (3,4) - copypaste these and 00:57:118 (4,5) - replace these with them for more variety. to be honest, i was just trying to go for consistency here for this part and i dont want to change the map too drastically. i will consider it if other people tell me to change it though.

[the dead of night]
what is that grammatically incorrect diffname wh
http://www.thesaurus.com/browse/dead%20of%20night?s=t
There was not much I could point out about the rain diff, it's pretty well made and there are no detectable issues on it whatsoever to me, so yeah.

There we go, good luck!

thanks

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DeletedUser_6709840 2017-09-19T23:09:44+00:00

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DeletedUser_6709840 2017-09-25T23:43:58+00:00

00:27:281 (2)- maybe move this to x:288 since i kinda feel like this kinda lacks to emphasize that flute sound ( Done )
00:40:651 (3)- maybe also move this to x:382 since its a loud sound to give it more impact to dash at here ( No, because it would break my consistent spacing there )

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