00:01:194 (2)- you could move it to x:144 for the more noticable walk and the more noticable dash thereafter here 00:01:194 (2,3)- ( Ok )
00:03:803 (2)- Also move this to x:272 for consistency with 00:00:546 (1,2)- and a less ambiguous dash here 00:03:803 (2,3)- ( Okay )
00:06:412 (2)- I Would play it safe here and reduce this HDash since it might be well over 1.5x of the trigger distance, which is unrankable. Maybe ctrl g and a subtle reposition? ( Do you realize that the Hdash trigger distance for this diff at 1 /2 beatsnap is 4.10x because of the SV? I would have to alter the slider velocity of the map for the distance trigger to shrink and that would mean resnapping the whole map. This is fine unless Grapes agrees to a SV change )
00:09:673 (3)- In my ears this is a bit stronger than 00:09:020 (2)- this, yet the latter gets the HDash.I would suggest switching up the distancing here so as this jump 00:09:020 (2,3)- is a HDash instead ( The pitch is higher on (2) so I wanted to reflect that and it's quieter on (3) )
00:14:238 (2,3)- Ambiguous spacing here. Easily fixed if you move 00:14:238 (2)- to somewhere like x:208 ( Done )
00:18:803 (1,2)- Also tone these down a tad bit, maybe a -0.20x DS decrease? ( No, it becomes an edge dash if I do that )
00:20:760 (5,6,7)- Should be snapped to 1/6 not 1/3. There are quite a lot of beats that you missed resulting in a not so favourable feedback ( Yeah, sure )
00:21:412 (1,2)- Bordeline edge dash. This isnt expected in any way and definitely doesnt compliment the music. Definitely reduce the spacing of this jump to something like 4.00x or 3.80x DS ( Done )
00:25:814 (4,5)- Slight nerf here would do the trick to be consistent with 00:36:249 (6,7)- ( Done )
00:40:977 (4)- A slight reposition would work nicely here so as to make 00:40:977 (4,5)- a dash as well. ( Done )
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