Sorry for the late, M 4 M
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[Cup]
- 00:07:736 - I feel empty without a note, I recommend you add a note to give a good follow-up to the next note.
- 00:22:084 (2,3,4) - I would like to see a little more movement in those notes, I feel it is very simple, try to add a repeat slider, the position I leave to your judgment.
- 00:57:138 (3,3) - I recommend rotating the sliders in a vertical way, the current movement it has can be somewhat "uncomfortable" for some players.
- 01:05:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Compared to the previous suggestion, here you can make an exception, to have some variety.
- 01:16:214 (1,2) - Movement with the previous note to these is very uncomfortable, try to change them vertically in a right direction.
- 01:54:040 (3) - This slider is very repetitive, to make the end more interesting, I suggest replacing them with 2 1/2 sliders to balance the difficulty.
- 00:06:758 (2,3) - I can catch the note without the boost, which makes it uncomfortable, I suggest increase / reduce, I leave it to your decision, but I would choose to increase a little.
- 00:16:214 (1) - It would be great to give more movement to that slider, since currently it is too easy to get the notes without needing to move, I suggest replacing them with notes.
- 01:24:040 (1) - I feel it would be great if you emphasize this note increases your distance with the previous note.
- Nothing more to say, good work.
- 00:36:921 (10,1) - Maybe a Hash fits between these notes, to have similarity with 00:26:486 (8,1) - this other HDash.
- 01:43:606 (3) - I would like this slider not to be so repetitive, try to intersperse with several notes in a right direction.
- 01:54:040 (3) - If you try to remove the repeat that is in this slider, it would be a good approximation to a new note replacing the place of the repeat, that is, something like the following image: Image.
- 00:20:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream seems unconventional, I would suggest having a little more flow to have a good inclination towards the next note.
- 00:40:997 (6) - I feel that because of this repeat, you are missing a great HDash towards the beginning of kiai time, try to separate the slider by two 1/2 sliders, as shown in the following image: Image.
- Well, I have nothing more to add.