1. Easy (2.4 stars, 135 notes)
2. Hard (4.69 stars, 297 notes)
3. lF Style (4.22 stars, 232 notes)
4. Maniac (5 stars, 448 notes)
5. Taiko (4.94 stars, 600 notes)

Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Extreme

我感觉Extreme这难度名应该比Insane难，但是打了感觉是个比较简单的Insane

00:20:961 (4,5) - 远一点
00:25:560 (6) - new combo加到这里，后面删
00:33:961 (7) - new combo.
00:25:560 (6) - 这个放到右上方吧……这么排感觉太小气了
01:04:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这串怎么声音越打越小？我觉得应该增大才对吧……
01:53:160 (7) - new combo?
02:03:160 (5) - ^


Hard

00:25:560 (5) - new combo加到这里后面的去掉


总体来说我感觉排列略显小气了。这个歌我感觉应该是满图跑，但是你为了排对称用了太多正中心的部分，打来打去都是在一个地方打。

音效显软。

不够AHO啊这个

nicktoons wrote:

strange =/ downloaded only extrem =/
General:
I can't hear hitsounds =/
nice beat
Extream:
only some suggestions
00:24:361 (5) - maybe delete 1 reverse and add a circle here 00:25:160 (x) - better
00:25:561 (1,2) - delete these, and add a short reversing slider 00:25:560 (x) - so it ends here 00:25:760 - used some circle instead
01:07:161 (3) - delete?
01:09:361 (3) - make it shorter so it'll be more rythmical? 01:09:460 - end better xD
01:09:961 (3) - ^ ^
01:10:561 (3) - ^ ^
01:11:161 (3) - ^ ^
01:13:561 (3) - delete?
01:15:761 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you should do smth like that
[attachment=0:d4869]screenshot020.jpg[/attachment:d4869]
done and made some changes xD
Btw, nice music, from second time played on FC on 99%. Like it. Star =)

ZLOdeuka wrote:

its approved ? I have not tested this.Sorry ~

loveFantasy wrote:

你好

我喜歡的歌之一, 所以我願意幫你做Normal Guest Diff, 建議你先玩過我的pending map中的兩個難度瞭解我的map style後再決定是否同意 (我目前沒有ranked map), 近期都能穩定上線. 其實更想做HD或MX不過看來被你做光了T_T
Hyper?

由於你做過兩個gd所以把你當作有經驗的mapper處理

[General]
- your BG need a rename.
- Title: ESTi - Ray of Illuminati. 移掉 (DJMAX)
- 嗯..我理解你可能並不想要比背景大聲的音效, 但你現在的音量和下hitsound的密度幾乎要等於沒音效了
- 綠色combo color可以換成深藍或黑色

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Remove "(DJMAX) from the song's title.

Also, you could add this video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FDJNZmNa ... re=related
PM me if you can't remove audio from a .flv file.

Hard
Sometimes you use 1.00 Distance Snap, sometimes, 1.20, and sometimes is everywhere. Use a constant distance snap.
01:02:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make these into jumps. (Distance snap more) changed to 1.6
01:29:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What's going on here? it's strange but I don't know how to place these...

Extreme

No problems found.

Great map, and I love this song, so pm me in irc or on-site if you want a guest diff

loveFantasy wrote:

done.

loveFantasy wrote:

done.

prefer diff name: lF Style (if you do so be sure to mentioned it's a Normal in beatmap description, so modder can mod it with Normal preference/criteria)
otherwise name it lF's Normal

maybe a bit hard as normal but Ray of Illuminati [NM] itself is not easy in DJMAX technika so...
also, copy normal-hitwhistle.wav and named it normal-slidertick2.wav, i use it in my diff.

EDIT1: 麻煩把combo color code換成這樣

SPOILER

• [Colours]
  Combo1 : 11,163,244
  Combo2 : 200,245,251
  Combo3 : 236,132,251
  Combo4 : 90,73,243

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Gerneral]
AudioLeadIn: 1000


[Hard]
00:17:560 (4) - delete
00:17:160 (3) - add an arrow.
00:49:360 (4) - 不怎么好看0.0. FIXED
01:18:760 (5) - delete.
01:18:360 (4) - add an arrow.
------------------------
EX diff没什么大问题。
嗯 star~☆

# Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total.

vincerio wrote:

Here's my speed modding~
lF Style
- do not exactly put audio timing section on a note... make it earlier or something...
to let you know, the green line bug (what you're mentioning) is fixed
- kiai time here is different from other diffs.
i'll discuss this with fanzhen when he's online

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[lF Style]
nice work with the sliderslide sounds
[Hard]难度在这图里特简单，对比之下这个比起normal更像alternate hard了... yes x_x..i'll think about how to makes it easier
00:06:960 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这段给人以想要对称的感觉 但是有些左偏 = = yes :3
02:03:160 (11) - one more repeat? yes :3
Nice diff~

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Great map~ ☆
[lF Style]
00:48:560 (1) - Whistle? ooops how could i miss that
00:49:160 (3) - Whistle on head and end ooops how could i miss those
00:51:160 (7) - Delete Whistle and Finish nope :3
01:53:960 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle? (Without override) if you mean N:whistle, a bit not suitable imo...

vincerio wrote:

Here's my speed modding~

[General]
TAG : Portable Trilogy Fever Hot Tunes Technika2 Thank you

Don't forget to removed .osb file and then full-submitting again :3

Quote from Official ranking submit criteria

# Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total.

Your easiest diff was 3.31 and I'm agree that is a bit hard for beginner will make changes

lF Style
- do not exactly put audio timing section on a note... make it earlier or something...
- kiai time here is different from other diffs.

[Hard]
01:30:360(2) - move right 1 grid lv 3 i think i'd better re-place them DX
02:03:560(3) - remove new combo doesnt matter?

[Extreme]
why we got the biggest hit circle here in Insane diff xD I love big circle :3
Drain Rate -1 done
Hit Circle -1
Sounds nicely playable with the same score :3

I have see no a problems :3
very nice~
good luck with this~

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[Beginner]
Tick rate 1?
这难度超过了3星 作为for rank的最简单难度应该小于等于3星 否则是unrankable的 请降低星数
00:11:560 (1) - 建议换成和00:09:960 (5)垂直对称的slider
01:02:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Easy难度放这个不合适 新手不知道怎么点 会点成1/2 建议换成重复slider fixed
01:17:160 (3) - 减1repeat然后01:18:360放circle ? done

[lF Style]
nice work with the sliderslide sounds
[Hard]难度在这图里特简单，对比之下这个比起normal更像alternate hard了...
00:06:960 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这段给人以想要对称的感觉 但是有些左偏 = =
02:03:160 (11) - one more repeat?
Nice diff~

[Hard]
00:12:560 (5) - 加finish然后做音量渐强? 好听多了
00:16:460 到 00:17:360 - 音量减低?
01:29:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 比起这个难度别的部分来说稍微有点蛋疼 变速而摆得不开,前面的超简单部分又令人放松了警惕,导致略有初见杀 建议替换成比较常规的摆法,或者将spacing摆开(可能会变得有点跳) 改掉了
others fine for me

[Extreme]
圈比Hard要大..? Circle Size +1 ? ^
00:06:761 (1) - 红色控制点应该在00:07:160时位于球的中心 这是?
00:08:361 (2) - ^, 00:08:760
00:12:561 (5) - 加finish然后做音量渐强? done
00:16:460 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 降低一点音量? 听起来有点失去重点的感觉
00:22:161 (5) - new combo然后删去00:22:761 (1)的new combo? 大丈夫
00:25:961 (3) - 红色控制点应该在00:26:160时位于球的中心
00:26:761 (4) - ^, 00:26:960
00:33:060 - 加note?
00:33:860 - ^
00:34:760 (3) - 移到00:34:660 ?
00:35:561 (1) - 红色控制点应该在00:35:760时位于球的中心
00:36:361 (2) - ^, 00:36:560
00:51:561 (1) - ^, 00:51:760, 左移1grid (grid 3) 这样和它对称的 00:53:160 (1) 结尾就挡好了 done XD
00:53:160 (1) - 使用00:51:561 (1) 复制粘贴,这样结尾正好是挡好的 ^
00:58:761 (2) - 下3grid 或者上7grid (grid 3) 这样挡一半不大好看 >.> upp

Star~

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Great map~ ☆

[Overall]
You need a difficulty which is below 3 stars in order to have it ranked!

[Beginner]
This is far too hard for beginners, change it to [Normal]?
00:09:960 (5) - Finish on slider end o.o done
00:13:560 (1) - Too close to spinner! deleted spinner and use slider instead
00:35:160 (8) - Whistle ops
01:03:060 (2,4,5,6) - Whistle use slider instead
01:51:160 (1) - Too close to spinner! hm..i made it shorter :3
02:01:960 (1) - Finish hitsound (Without override) soft-finish :3

[lF Style]
00:48:560 (1) - Whistle?
00:49:160 (3) - Whistle on head and end
00:51:160 (7) - Delete Whistle and Finish
01:53:960 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle? (Without override)

[Hard]
Recalculate Slider Lengths and check all the sliders again please! done
Some sliders are not ending at appropriate locations!

SPOILER

00:25:260 (4) - Whistle added

[Extreme]
Looks fine for me!

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

lF Style
00:25:360 (1) - 从这个diff的整体难度考虑，这个有些难了 fixed
01:12:560 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么我觉得应该整体移动到上一个白线上去 rearrange to x xx xx
01:38:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 整个这一块我都觉得只在每个白线上有note更好一些 i think it's okey
02:03:160 (11) - 这里没有stream的感觉，更应该是02:03:160 - ，02:03:360 - ， 02:03:560 - 三点的note that's a solid suggestion, but i like how it was better

IceBeam wrote:

followed some of your suggestion on finish

Where's 1-st Kiai? added, i had different online time with fanzhen so it's a miscommunication x_x

00:06:960 (1,2,3,4) - Why it's so off? Move all this stuff half beat later. it's in purpose for slider tick sounding..
00:25:360 (1) - It's rankable,but...ugh..too short,really. fixed
01:12:560 (1,2,3,4) - Such moments sound really off,was it in purpose? fixed
01:37:960 (6) - Slider shape is uggly fixed

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

这是我非常想map的图之一 T T....

Beginner
00:12:760 (3,4,1) - 再叠的好看一些？没对齐 fixed
00:20:360 (2) - ^ 你用ds0 按住shift去叠，就会对其了，主要是要取消grid snap fixed
00:24:360 (1,2,1) - 都做成一个repeat slider，这个难度应该是非常简单的，现在有些难 fixed

Hard
00:39:960 (4,5) - repeat slider好看一些 后面有局部对称o.o
01:17:560 (2) - 会被前面打出来的300挡住，难看出是repeat slider

Extreme
01:56:760 (2,3,4) - 个人不是很喜欢这个东西，我觉得5连更好一些 fixed

IceBeam wrote:

[Finish suggestions]
Works for all difficulties:

00:13:160 (4) - Finish
00:19:560 - ^
00:32:360 - ^
00:38:760 (4) - ^
00:49:960 (1) - ^
00:57:960 - ^
01:05:960 (1) - ^
01:12:360 (1) - ^
01:18:760 (4) - ^
01:25:160 (1) - ^
01:31:560 (1) - ^
01:37:960 (1) - ^
01:50:760 (1) - ^
01:57:160 - ^

[Beginner]
00:13:160 (4) - New combo fits better here.
00:25:760 (2) - I'd remove this note. fixed
01:18:760 (4) - New combo.

[Hard]
01:20:360 (4) - Why it's much closer to (3) then others? ...

[Extreme]
00:18:760 (5) - New combo,cause spacing changed. fixed

Star.

akrolsmir wrote:

lF Style:
00:11:760 (4) - Maybe shorten by 1/2 beat? So (4) can mirror (3), and the beat will be seperate? Alternatively, fix the shapes of (3,4); the almost-symmetric-but-slightly-skewed shapes discomfort me. fixed (1,2,3,4)
00:13:360 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Move forward 1/2 beat? See below. rearranged
01:12:560 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Move forward 1/2 beat? Unless you were deliberately going for a 1/2 note delay, unlike the previous notes starting at 01:05:960 (1). Anyways, keep it consistent. it was fixed in my last post, fanzhen didn't update

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO
lF Style
00:06:960 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1/2 backward, it's doesn't make sense if the slider place on red tick giving up my creativity there, fixed
00:25:360 (1) - Are you sure that this spinner is short? Ninja spinner is unrankable it was fixed in my last post, fanzhen didn't update
01:12:560 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1/2 backward, it's doesn't make sense if the slider place on red tick same as above
01:20:360 (1) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay fixed
01:23:560 (1) - ^ fixed
01:37:960 (6) - These slider are make no sense i think they fit the music fine

kurohacker wrote:

Hi there~
Managed to finish this one early =3
Nway, here's the mods:

[General]
About the slider body, I don't really like the sound right now, but i don't know where can you get custom ones. I highly recommend changing it, to preserve the beauty of the song.

[Beginner]
Separate loveFantasy and Portable in tags here. already did it :3
0:13:160 [4] - Start new combo here, and.... fixed
0:13:560 [1] - Delete the new combo here. ^
0:22:760 [5] - Start new combo here, and... ^
0:24:360 [1] - Delete the new combo here. ^
0:26:360 [2] - Start new combo here. i think it's okay
0:29:160 [7] - ^ , and... fixed
0:30:760 [1] - Delete the one here. ^
0:32:760 [2] - Start new combo here. ^
0:53:160 [3] - Spacing issues, please fix this. already did+1

[Hard]
0:06:760 [1-4] - Maybe you made it on purpose, but I think that it'll sound better if you snap the ends of the sliders to the white tick. already fixed.maybe you downloaded the old version :3
1:59:760 [6-9] - I think these sliders would sound better as single circles instead. i want to make it a little easy xD

[Extreme]
There are instances where the notes almost reach the top or bottom of the screen. For me, it's not a problem, but other modders might point this out, so you might want to keep a tab on this.

1:53:560 [9,10] - This is just a suggestion, but maybe it's better for these two to switch places. yeah! thank you and finally you make it not so strange xD

I like the custom hitsounds used here, and the maps are really nice in general, so a star for you guys~
And all the best!

kurohacker wrote:

[lF Style]
It's LF as in loveFantasy, right? At first I thought it was IF

0:06:960 [1-4] - These 4 sound really off from the beats, but I think they are intentional. Am I correct? it's fixed in last update, maybe you missed them
0:19:360 [1] - This feels really off... Maybe you can shorten the slider by 1/2 beats and move it so that it starts at 0:19:560 instead? The timing change will still work here. this is intentional and i won't change it
2:01:960 [9] - New combo here. ok

Overall, I think this map is a concerted chaos; it sounds kinda off at first glance, but actually it has its own unique sense of rhythm. thank you, but i guess it is being modded into a STANDARD, which makes me sad

theowest wrote:

IF Stlye:

Use the same claps as above. most of them has claps on actually, others -- i don't even have a note on them

00:19:560 - The beat starts HERE, not 00:19:360. (The slider) this is intentional and i won't change it
00:51:960 - Forgot a clap, the other 2 are correctly placed. added
01:18:760 - Finish added

Pretty good, other than that.

Kitsuneko wrote:

[IF Style]
nice hitsounds
00:51:560 (x) - down volume a little

[TimingPoints]
51160,-100,4,1,1,50,0,0
51260,-100,4,1,1,59,0,0
51360,-100,4,1,1,67,0,0
51460,-100,4,1,1,76,0,0
51560,-100,4,1,1,85,0,0

theowest wrote:

Beginner:

Since beginner is sometimes even easier than easy, how the hell is this normal? Consider changing the name or the difficulty of the beatmap.

Insert this under [Editor] in the osu file:

SPOILER

Bookmarks: 13560,14360,15960,16760,17560,18360,19960,21560,22360,23160,23960,32760,33560,34360,35160,37560,37960,38360,39160,39960,40760,41560,42360,43160,43960,44760,45560,46360,47160,47960,48760,49560,51960,52760,53560,54360,55160,55960,56760,58360,59960,60760,61560,62360,72760,73560,74360,75960,76760,77560,78360,79160,79960,80760,81560,82360,83160,83960,84760,85560,86360,87160,87960,88760,89560,90360,91160,91960,92760,93560,94360,95160,95960,96760,97560,98360,99160,99960,100760,101560,102360,103160,103960,111160,111960,112760,113560,114360,115160,115960,116760,117560,118360,119160,119960,120760,121560

It shows where you MUST add a clap to this diff. Whistles are not claps. Finishes are not claps.

00:38:760 - Finish
01:57:160 - Finish

Other than that. Nothing wrong really.


Hard:

Use claps as in beginner.

00:19:560 - If you can hear a finish, add a finish.
01:18:760 - ^

Not that much else.

Extra:

How the hell can the hardest diff have the easiest size of their beats?! Dude. NO!
And because it's extra, increase distance between the beats.

Remember the hitsound rule, if you can hear a finish, add it. + use claps as in the beginner and other diffs I've mentioned about.

It seems to be very good so far. But it would really improve a bit if you consider these changes, please.

LuPiiTa wrote:

Hello~

Begginer

00:41:960 (1) - You should make this slider more similar with the one at 00:42:760, just look at the spacing between the gray and the red point.
fixed

Hard

02:03:560 (1) - Delete new combo dosent matter

Extreme

Fine for me but the circle size is so big :S

Dont give me kudos, i didnt found anything xD
Star!

Kitsuneko wrote:

Hi fanzhen0019
as your request

[General]
please check offset:374 :O
I think better than before, if you add whistle to heavy beat at least in Kiai time.

[Beginner]
Change Slider Tick Rate to 1
01:44:360 (1,1) - down volume lower or 0%. I think 2nd spinner is 0% fixed
nice Diff ~

[hard]
00:06:760 (1,2,3,4) - add finish each end of slider fixed
00:48:360 (1) - remove whistle ^
00:59:960 (x), 01:00:760 (x) - add whistle ^
01:01:160 (1,2) - add whistle each end of slider ^
01:08:160 (5) - add finish to end of slider ^
01:14:560 (5) - ^ ^
01:21:560 (7) - add whistle ^
01:24:760 (7) - ^ ^
01:25:160 (1,2,4) - add whistle each end of slider ^
01:28:360 (3) - add whistle to end of slider ^
01:29:560 (6) - add whistle to first of slider ^
01:31:560 (1,2) - add whistle to end of slider ^
01:33:560 (4) - whistle to first ^
01:34:360 (6) - add whistle ^
01:34:760 (1,3) - add whistle to end of slider ^
01:37:560 (8) - add whistle ^
01:39:160 (3,6) - ^ ^
01:41:560 (2,4) - whistle to first ^
01:43:160 (7) - add whistle ^
01:44:460 (1,1) - down volume lower or 0%

[Extreme]
00:57:560 (11) - add whistle
01:44:460 (1,1) - down volume lower or 0%
01:29:960 (7) - add whistle to end of slider
02:03:560 (3) - add whistle
love<3 this diff. But I want more hit sounds~


nice map, and I like song
( >ω<)っ☆ star here

good luck!

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[lF Style]
you should try to not use red tick patterns used (with almost non-udible sound) when there is a so much more udible one
00:13:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - try like this
00:40:574 (1,2,3,4) - try like this
00:43:774 (1,2,3) - try like this
there are other, generally try to add hit in the white tick's when you change to following the red ticks that have a low volume sound ...

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Beginner]
if it's named in DJ MAX Style it's ok.. if not change to "Easy" or "Normal"

[Hard]
00:24:374 (1,2,3) - Order them like a triangle done
00:25:274 (4) - Move to 00:25:174 (4) - , the sound you followed is here... done
00:41:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - copypaste 00:38:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - patten (and rotate by 90° Clockwise ), or do something similiar remaped this part
01:15:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - No antijumps here... i think jumps stay much much more better
01:59:774 (6,7,8) - order them like 01:53:974 (1,2,3,4) - sliders *.*

[Extreme]
If you follow DJ Max naming, rename this to "Maniac" or "Maximum", if not, ok

Hushu wrote:

Easy:
0:19:174 - Make it only half as long, add a note at 0:19:574 and make that the new combo. done

Hard:
Tick rate 2 looks nicer than 1 in my opinion here. done
2:03:574 - Could this be a spinner till 2:06:744? done

Extreme:
I think you could rise the speed a little bit during this kind of parts, the chorus I may even say,: 1:53:974 - 1:56:974, 2:00:374 - 2:01:744 did it in this part
Tick rate 2 I think once again. done
Seems actualy quite lazy for extreme because of its slow speed. If possible, could you make it more exciting by rising slider velo?
i'm lazy so i dont want to make slider again..
0:43:074 - I think you need an extra note in between them two. So move (7) 1/4 back and shorten it by 1/4 then add a note at 0:43:074. done
1:13:574 - To avoid pointless 1/1 sequences, I think you should remove this note. done
1:14:174 - Could u make it half as long and repeat 2 times? I would also place a 1/8 note in between the two slider. done
1:15:374 - Don't repeat. Instead move the fallowing slider 1/1 erlier and repeat it. done
1:33:174 - In my opinion, you are holding the sliders too near to the middle. The 9 is in 4's shadow which doesn't look too nice and is really ennoying because there were loads of more middleish slider before too. Try to spread the reach of this beatmap a little bit. remaped this part+1
2:03:574 - The spinner idea as for hard. done

And also... It would be nice if you put in some hitsounds... orz..