Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Extreme

我感觉Extreme这难度名应该比Insane难，但是打了感觉是个比较简单的Insane

00:20:961 (4,5) - 远一点
00:25:560 (6) - new combo加到这里，后面删
00:33:961 (7) - new combo.
00:25:560 (6) - 这个放到右上方吧……这么排感觉太小气了
01:04:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这串怎么声音越打越小？我觉得应该增大才对吧……
01:53:160 (7) - new combo?
02:03:160 (5) - ^


Hard

00:25:560 (5) - new combo加到这里后面的去掉


总体来说我感觉排列略显小气了。这个歌我感觉应该是满图跑，但是你为了排对称用了太多正中心的部分，打来打去都是在一个地方打。

音效显软。

不够AHO啊这个

nicktoons wrote:

strange =/ downloaded only extrem =/
General:
I can't hear hitsounds =/
nice beat
Extream:
only some suggestions
00:24:361 (5) - maybe delete 1 reverse and add a circle here 00:25:160 (x) - better
00:25:561 (1,2) - delete these, and add a short reversing slider 00:25:560 (x) - so it ends here 00:25:760 - used some circle instead
01:07:161 (3) - delete?
01:09:361 (3) - make it shorter so it'll be more rythmical? 01:09:460 - end better xD
01:09:961 (3) - ^ ^
01:10:561 (3) - ^ ^
01:11:161 (3) - ^ ^
01:13:561 (3) - delete?
01:15:761 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you should do smth like that
[attachment=0:d4869]screenshot020.jpg[/attachment:d4869]
done and made some changes xD
Btw, nice music, from second time played on FC on 99%. Like it. Star =)

ZLOdeuka wrote:

its approved ? I have not tested this.Sorry ~

loveFantasy wrote:

你好

我喜歡的歌之一, 所以我願意幫你做Normal Guest Diff, 建議你先玩過我的pending map中的兩個難度瞭解我的map style後再決定是否同意 (我目前沒有ranked map), 近期都能穩定上線. 其實更想做HD或MX不過看來被你做光了T_T
Hyper?

由於你做過兩個gd所以把你當作有經驗的mapper處理

[General]
- your BG need a rename.
- Title: ESTi - Ray of Illuminati. 移掉 (DJMAX)
- 嗯..我理解你可能並不想要比背景大聲的音效, 但你現在的音量和下hitsound的密度幾乎要等於沒音效了
- 綠色combo color可以換成深藍或黑色

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Remove "(DJMAX) from the song's title.

Also, you could add this video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FDJNZmNa ... re=related
PM me if you can't remove audio from a .flv file.

Hard
Sometimes you use 1.00 Distance Snap, sometimes, 1.20, and sometimes is everywhere. Use a constant distance snap.
01:02:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make these into jumps. (Distance snap more) changed to 1.6
01:29:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What's going on here? it's strange but I don't know how to place these...

Extreme

No problems found.

Great map, and I love this song, so pm me in irc or on-site if you want a guest diff

loveFantasy wrote:

done.

loveFantasy wrote:

done.

prefer diff name: lF Style (if you do so be sure to mentioned it's a Normal in beatmap description, so modder can mod it with Normal preference/criteria)
otherwise name it lF's Normal

maybe a bit hard as normal but Ray of Illuminati [NM] itself is not easy in DJMAX technika so...
also, copy normal-hitwhistle.wav and named it normal-slidertick2.wav, i use it in my diff.

EDIT1: 麻煩把combo color code換成這樣

SPOILER

• [Colours]
  Combo1 : 11,163,244
  Combo2 : 200,245,251
  Combo3 : 236,132,251
  Combo4 : 90,73,243

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Gerneral]
AudioLeadIn: 1000


[Hard]
00:17:560 (4) - delete
00:17:160 (3) - add an arrow.
00:49:360 (4) - 不怎么好看0.0. FIXED
01:18:760 (5) - delete.
01:18:360 (4) - add an arrow.
------------------------
EX diff没什么大问题。
嗯 star~☆

# Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total.

vincerio wrote:

Here's my speed modding~
lF Style
- do not exactly put audio timing section on a note... make it earlier or something...
to let you know, the green line bug (what you're mentioning) is fixed
- kiai time here is different from other diffs.
i'll discuss this with fanzhen when he's online

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[lF Style]
nice work with the sliderslide sounds
[Hard]难度在这图里特简单，对比之下这个比起normal更像alternate hard了... yes x_x..i'll think about how to makes it easier
00:06:960 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这段给人以想要对称的感觉 但是有些左偏 = = yes :3
02:03:160 (11) - one more repeat? yes :3
Nice diff~

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Great map~ ☆
[lF Style]
00:48:560 (1) - Whistle? ooops how could i miss that
00:49:160 (3) - Whistle on head and end ooops how could i miss those
00:51:160 (7) - Delete Whistle and Finish nope :3
01:53:960 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle? (Without override) if you mean N:whistle, a bit not suitable imo...

vincerio wrote:

Here's my speed modding~

[General]
TAG : Portable Trilogy Fever Hot Tunes Technika2 Thank you

Don't forget to removed .osb file and then full-submitting again :3

Quote from Official ranking submit criteria

# Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total.

Your easiest diff was 3.31 and I'm agree that is a bit hard for beginner will make changes

lF Style
- do not exactly put audio timing section on a note... make it earlier or something...
- kiai time here is different from other diffs.

[Hard]
01:30:360(2) - move right 1 grid lv 3 i think i'd better re-place them DX
02:03:560(3) - remove new combo doesnt matter?

[Extreme]
why we got the biggest hit circle here in Insane diff xD I love big circle :3
Drain Rate -1 done
Hit Circle -1
Sounds nicely playable with the same score :3

I have see no a problems :3
very nice~
good luck with this~

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[Beginner]
Tick rate 1?
这难度超过了3星 作为for rank的最简单难度应该小于等于3星 否则是unrankable的 请降低星数
00:11:560 (1) - 建议换成和00:09:960 (5)垂直对称的slider
01:02:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Easy难度放这个不合适 新手不知道怎么点 会点成1/2 建议换成重复slider fixed
01:17:160 (3) - 减1repeat然后01:18:360放circle ? done

[lF Style]
nice work with the sliderslide sounds
[Hard]难度在这图里特简单，对比之下这个比起normal更像alternate hard了...
00:06:960 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这段给人以想要对称的感觉 但是有些左偏 = =
02:03:160 (11) - one more repeat?
Nice diff~

[Hard]
00:12:560 (5) - 加finish然后做音量渐强? 好听多了
00:16:460 到 00:17:360 - 音量减低?
01:29:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 比起这个难度别的部分来说稍微有点蛋疼 变速而摆得不开,前面的超简单部分又令人放松了警惕,导致略有初见杀 建议替换成比较常规的摆法,或者将spacing摆开(可能会变得有点跳) 改掉了
others fine for me

[Extreme]
圈比Hard要大..? Circle Size +1 ? ^
00:06:761 (1) - 红色控制点应该在00:07:160时位于球的中心 这是?
00:08:361 (2) - ^, 00:08:760
00:12:561 (5) - 加finish然后做音量渐强? done
00:16:460 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 降低一点音量? 听起来有点失去重点的感觉
00:22:161 (5) - new combo然后删去00:22:761 (1)的new combo? 大丈夫
00:25:961 (3) - 红色控制点应该在00:26:160时位于球的中心
00:26:761 (4) - ^, 00:26:960
00:33:060 - 加note?
00:33:860 - ^
00:34:760 (3) - 移到00:34:660 ?
00:35:561 (1) - 红色控制点应该在00:35:760时位于球的中心
00:36:361 (2) - ^, 00:36:560
00:51:561 (1) - ^, 00:51:760, 左移1grid (grid 3) 这样和它对称的 00:53:160 (1) 结尾就挡好了 done XD
00:53:160 (1) - 使用00:51:561 (1) 复制粘贴,这样结尾正好是挡好的 ^
00:58:761 (2) - 下3grid 或者上7grid (grid 3) 这样挡一半不大好看 >.> upp

Star~

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Great map~ ☆

[Overall]
You need a difficulty which is below 3 stars in order to have it ranked!

[Beginner]
This is far too hard for beginners, change it to [Normal]?
00:09:960 (5) - Finish on slider end o.o done
00:13:560 (1) - Too close to spinner! deleted spinner and use slider instead
00:35:160 (8) - Whistle ops
01:03:060 (2,4,5,6) - Whistle use slider instead
01:51:160 (1) - Too close to spinner! hm..i made it shorter :3
02:01:960 (1) - Finish hitsound (Without override) soft-finish :3

[lF Style]
00:48:560 (1) - Whistle?
00:49:160 (3) - Whistle on head and end
00:51:160 (7) - Delete Whistle and Finish
01:53:960 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle? (Without override)

[Hard]
Recalculate Slider Lengths and check all the sliders again please! done
Some sliders are not ending at appropriate locations!

SPOILER

00:25:260 (4) - Whistle added

[Extreme]
Looks fine for me!

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

lF Style
00:25:360 (1) - 从这个diff的整体难度考虑，这个有些难了 fixed
01:12:560 (1,2,3,4) - 为什么我觉得应该整体移动到上一个白线上去 rearrange to x xx xx
01:38:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 整个这一块我都觉得只在每个白线上有note更好一些 i think it's okey
02:03:160 (11) - 这里没有stream的感觉，更应该是02:03:160 - ，02:03:360 - ， 02:03:560 - 三点的note that's a solid suggestion, but i like how it was better

IceBeam wrote:

followed some of your suggestion on finish

Where's 1-st Kiai? added, i had different online time with fanzhen so it's a miscommunication x_x

00:06:960 (1,2,3,4) - Why it's so off? Move all this stuff half beat later. it's in purpose for slider tick sounding..
00:25:360 (1) - It's rankable,but...ugh..too short,really. fixed
01:12:560 (1,2,3,4) - Such moments sound really off,was it in purpose? fixed
01:37:960 (6) - Slider shape is uggly fixed

LaunchedthousandShip wrote:

这是我非常想map的图之一 T T....

Beginner
00:12:760 (3,4,1) - 再叠的好看一些？没对齐 fixed
00:20:360 (2) - ^ 你用ds0 按住shift去叠，就会对其了，主要是要取消grid snap fixed
00:24:360 (1,2,1) - 都做成一个repeat slider，这个难度应该是非常简单的，现在有些难 fixed

Hard
00:39:960 (4,5) - repeat slider好看一些 后面有局部对称o.o
01:17:560 (2) - 会被前面打出来的300挡住，难看出是repeat slider

Extreme
01:56:760 (2,3,4) - 个人不是很喜欢这个东西，我觉得5连更好一些 fixed

IceBeam wrote:

[Finish suggestions]
Works for all difficulties:

00:13:160 (4) - Finish
00:19:560 - ^
00:32:360 - ^
00:38:760 (4) - ^
00:49:960 (1) - ^
00:57:960 - ^
01:05:960 (1) - ^
01:12:360 (1) - ^
01:18:760 (4) - ^
01:25:160 (1) - ^
01:31:560 (1) - ^
01:37:960 (1) - ^
01:50:760 (1) - ^
01:57:160 - ^

[Beginner]
00:13:160 (4) - New combo fits better here.
00:25:760 (2) - I'd remove this note. fixed
01:18:760 (4) - New combo.

[Hard]
01:20:360 (4) - Why it's much closer to (3) then others? ...

[Extreme]
00:18:760 (5) - New combo,cause spacing changed. fixed

Star.

akrolsmir wrote:

lF Style:
00:11:760 (4) - Maybe shorten by 1/2 beat? So (4) can mirror (3), and the beat will be seperate? Alternatively, fix the shapes of (3,4); the almost-symmetric-but-slightly-skewed shapes discomfort me. fixed (1,2,3,4)
00:13:360 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Move forward 1/2 beat? See below. rearranged
01:12:560 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Move forward 1/2 beat? Unless you were deliberately going for a 1/2 note delay, unlike the previous notes starting at 01:05:960 (1). Anyways, keep it consistent. it was fixed in my last post, fanzhen didn't update

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO
lF Style
00:06:960 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1/2 backward, it's doesn't make sense if the slider place on red tick giving up my creativity there, fixed
00:25:360 (1) - Are you sure that this spinner is short? Ninja spinner is unrankable it was fixed in my last post, fanzhen didn't update
01:12:560 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1/2 backward, it's doesn't make sense if the slider place on red tick same as above
01:20:360 (1) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider, or it'll be weird stack during gameplay fixed
01:23:560 (1) - ^ fixed
01:37:960 (6) - These slider are make no sense i think they fit the music fine

kurohacker wrote:

Hi there~
Managed to finish this one early =3
Nway, here's the mods:

[General]
About the slider body, I don't really like the sound right now, but i don't know where can you get custom ones. I highly recommend changing it, to preserve the beauty of the song.

[Beginner]
Separate loveFantasy and Portable in tags here. already did it :3
0:13:160 [4] - Start new combo here, and.... fixed
0:13:560 [1] - Delete the new combo here. ^
0:22:760 [5] - Start new combo here, and... ^
0:24:360 [1] - Delete the new combo here. ^
0:26:360 [2] - Start new combo here. i think it's okay
0:29:160 [7] - ^ , and... fixed
0:30:760 [1] - Delete the one here. ^
0:32:760 [2] - Start new combo here. ^
0:53:160 [3] - Spacing issues, please fix this. already did+1

[Hard]
0:06:760 [1-4] - Maybe you made it on purpose, but I think that it'll sound better if you snap the ends of the sliders to the white tick. already fixed.maybe you downloaded the old version :3
1:59:760 [6-9] - I think these sliders would sound better as single circles instead. i want to make it a little easy xD

[Extreme]
There are instances where the notes almost reach the top or bottom of the screen. For me, it's not a problem, but other modders might point this out, so you might want to keep a tab on this.

1:53:560 [9,10] - This is just a suggestion, but maybe it's better for these two to switch places. yeah! thank you and finally you make it not so strange xD

I like the custom hitsounds used here, and the maps are really nice in general, so a star for you guys~
And all the best!

kurohacker wrote:

[lF Style]
It's LF as in loveFantasy, right? At first I thought it was IF

0:06:960 [1-4] - These 4 sound really off from the beats, but I think they are intentional. Am I correct? it's fixed in last update, maybe you missed them
0:19:360 [1] - This feels really off... Maybe you can shorten the slider by 1/2 beats and move it so that it starts at 0:19:560 instead? The timing change will still work here. this is intentional and i won't change it
2:01:960 [9] - New combo here. ok

Overall, I think this map is a concerted chaos; it sounds kinda off at first glance, but actually it has its own unique sense of rhythm. thank you, but i guess it is being modded into a STANDARD, which makes me sad

theowest wrote:

IF Stlye:

Use the same claps as above. most of them has claps on actually, others -- i don't even have a note on them

00:19:560 - The beat starts HERE, not 00:19:360. (The slider) this is intentional and i won't change it
00:51:960 - Forgot a clap, the other 2 are correctly placed. added
01:18:760 - Finish added

Pretty good, other than that.