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ESTi - Ray of Illuminati

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fanzhen0019
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月21日 at 16:15:42

Artist: ESTi
Title: Ray of Illuminati
Source: DJMAX
Tags: loveFantasy mekadon Portable Trilogy Fever Hot Tunes Technika2
BPM: 150
Filesize: 3257kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.4 stars, 135 notes)
  2. Hard (4.69 stars, 297 notes)
  3. lF Style (4.22 stars, 232 notes)
  4. Maniac (5 stars, 448 notes)
  5. Taiko (4.94 stars, 600 notes)
Download: ESTi - Ray of Illuminati
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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plz redownload if you donwloaded this map before 7/14/2011

1st map :D
it's one of my favorite song in DJMAX

Easy - 100%
lF Style - 100% (thx for loveFantasy's diff
Taiko - 100% (thx for mekadon's taiko diff
Hard - 100%
Maniac - 100%
hez
:Dgood song
Ballance
nice map
Sandpig
hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Extreme

我感觉Extreme这难度名应该比Insane难,但是打了感觉是个比较简单的Insane

00:20:961 (4,5) - 远一点
00:25:560 (6) - new combo加到这里,后面删
00:33:961 (7) - new combo.
00:25:560 (6) - 这个放到右上方吧……这么排感觉太小气了
01:04:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这串怎么声音越打越小?我觉得应该增大才对吧……
01:53:160 (7) - new combo?
02:03:160 (5) - ^


Hard

00:25:560 (5) - new combo加到这里后面的去掉


总体来说我感觉排列略显小气了。这个歌我感觉应该是满图跑,但是你为了排对称用了太多正中心的部分,打来打去都是在一个地方打。

音效显软。

不够AHO啊这个
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

Sandpig wrote:

hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Extreme

我感觉Extreme这难度名应该比Insane难,但是打了感觉是个比较简单的Insane

00:20:961 (4,5) - 远一点
00:25:560 (6) - new combo加到这里,后面删
00:33:961 (7) - new combo.
00:25:560 (6) - 这个放到右上方吧……这么排感觉太小气了
01:04:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这串怎么声音越打越小?我觉得应该增大才对吧……
01:53:160 (7) - new combo?
02:03:160 (5) - ^


Hard

00:25:560 (5) - new combo加到这里后面的去掉


总体来说我感觉排列略显小气了。这个歌我感觉应该是满图跑,但是你为了排对称用了太多正中心的部分,打来打去都是在一个地方打。

音效显软。

不够AHO啊这个
这段时间可能没时间改了。。先给kd吧
谢谢神触猪XD 帮大忙了


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EDIT: EXTREME diff all done
Axey
lovely ava <3

Mod Time >.< just suggestions.

[Extreme]
0025:160(6)-这里再拉条silder吧DX 感觉这样比较适合音点

O.O咱hard下载不下来Orz..
don't give kds thanks

很棒!<3 ~ me shoot star~
nicktoons
strange =/ downloaded only extrem =/
General:
I can't hear hitsounds =/
nice beat 8-)
Extream:
only some suggestions
00:24:361 (5) - maybe delete 1 reverse and add a circle here 00:25:160 (x) -
00:25:561 (1,2) - delete these, and add a short reversing slider 00:25:560 (x) - so it ends here 00:25:760 -
01:07:161 (3) - delete?
01:09:361 (3) - make it shorter so it'll be more rythmical?01:09:460 - end
01:09:961 (3) - ^
01:10:561 (3) - ^
01:11:161 (3) - ^
01:13:561 (3) - delete?
01:15:761 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you should do smth like that

Btw, nice music, from second time played on FC on 99%. Like it. Star =)
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

nicktoons wrote:

strange =/ downloaded only extrem =/
General:
I can't hear hitsounds =/
nice beat 8-)
Extream:
only some suggestions
00:24:361 (5) - maybe delete 1 reverse and add a circle here 00:25:160 (x) - better
00:25:561 (1,2) - delete these, and add a short reversing slider 00:25:560 (x) - so it ends here 00:25:760 - used some circle instead
01:07:161 (3) - delete?
01:09:361 (3) - make it shorter so it'll be more rythmical? 01:09:460 - end better xD
01:09:961 (3) - ^ ^
01:10:561 (3) - ^ ^
01:11:161 (3) - ^ ^
01:13:561 (3) - delete?
01:15:761 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you should do smth like that
[attachment=0:d4869]screenshot020.jpg[/attachment:d4869]
done and made some changes xD
Btw, nice music, from second time played on FC on 99%. Like it. Star =)

thanq for ur modding :D
ZLOdeuka-
its approved ? I have not tested this.Sorry ~
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

ZLOdeuka wrote:

its approved ? I have not tested this.Sorry ~
Oh nop..it is for rank(for im lazy and schoolwork I decide make easy or normal later-about this weekend?
but,if u like u can mod this when u are free
Sorry for bothering you DX
loveFantasy
你好

我喜歡的歌之一, 所以我願意幫你做Normal Guest Diff, 建議你先玩過我的pending map中的兩個難度瞭解我的map style後再決定是否同意 (我目前沒有ranked map), 近期都能穩定上線. 其實更想做HD或MX不過看來被你做光了T_T

由於你做過兩個gd所以把你當作有經驗的mapper處理

[General]
- your BG need a rename.
- Title: ESTi - Ray of Illuminati. 移掉 (DJMAX)
- 嗯..我理解你可能並不想要比背景大聲的音效, 但你現在的音量和下hitsound的密度幾乎要等於沒音效了
- 綠色combo color可以換成深藍或黑色

[Hard]
<00:21:760> 這裡下note, 並把(6,7) 結合成1/4拍repeat slider因為藍線上有節奏
<00:22:760..> (1..) overlap的並不好看, (1,3)往右(2,4)往左剛好一點 (怕有難度問題可以把斜度降低)
<00:25:260> (4) 做成 25:160 - 25:360 的1/4拍repeat slider直覺一些, 不過需要重排
<01:04:360> (T) 這條綠線沒有作用, 請移掉
<01:06:750..> (2..) 不跟比較明顯的節奏嗎? 你後面反而有跟

[Extreme]
<00:16:361..> (1..) 比較直覺的是只repeat兩次 (1111 2345 6789 10)
<00:34:860> 下note
<00:39:160..> (2..5) not a good placement imo, 並且(6) +spacing or new combo
<00:42:960> 好位置, 不下note嗎?
<00:46:360> 好位置, 不下note嗎?
<00:49:360> 好位置, 不下note嗎? also (5)的spacing怪怪的
<01:11:161> 這裡可以變個半速, 讓slider長度跟前面兩串combo一樣但比較慢
<01:17:561> 因為只有repeat兩次(偶數次結尾會不在起頭), 所以其實是不是該這樣排? (我沒仔細的do spacing)

star for great song
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

loveFantasy wrote:

你好

我喜歡的歌之一, 所以我願意幫你做Normal Guest Diff, 建議你先玩過我的pending map中的兩個難度瞭解我的map style後再決定是否同意 (我目前沒有ranked map), 近期都能穩定上線. 其實更想做HD或MX不過看來被你做光了T_T
Hyper?

由於你做過兩個gd所以把你當作有經驗的mapper處理

[General]
- your BG need a rename.
- Title: ESTi - Ray of Illuminati. 移掉 (DJMAX)
- 嗯..我理解你可能並不想要比背景大聲的音效, 但你現在的音量和下hitsound的密度幾乎要等於沒音效了
- 綠色combo color可以換成深藍或黑色
Thank you a lot!xD
不过改图可能要等到后天回家 D:
guest diff的话 真是太感谢了。(easy normal苦手
麻烦你了 > <
LesTrucsRoses
Remove "(DJMAX) from the song's title.

Also, you could add this video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FDJNZmNa ... re=related
PM me if you can't remove audio from a .flv file.

Hard
Sometimes you use 1.00 Distance Snap, sometimes, 1.20, and sometimes is everywhere. Use a constant distance snap.
01:02:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make these into jumps. (Distance snap more)
01:29:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What's going on here?

Extreme
No problems found.

Great map, and I love this song, so pm me in irc or on-site if you want a guest diff
loveFantasy
done.

prefer diff name: lF Style (if you do so be sure to mentioned it's a Normal in beatmap description, so modder can mod it with Normal preference/criteria)
otherwise name it lF's Normal

maybe a bit hard as normal but Ray of Illuminati [NM] itself is not easy in DJMAX technika so...
also, copy normal-hitwhistle.wav and named it normal-slidertick2.wav, i use it in my diff.

EDIT1: 麻煩把combo color code換成這樣
SPOILER
  • [Colours]
    Combo1 : 11,163,244
    Combo2 : 200,245,251
    Combo3 : 236,132,251
    Combo4 : 90,73,243

Download: ESTi - Ray of Illuminati (DJMAX) (fanzhen0019) [lF Style].osu
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Remove "(DJMAX) from the song's title.

Also, you could add this video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FDJNZmNa ... re=related
PM me if you can't remove audio from a .flv file.

Hard
Sometimes you use 1.00 Distance Snap, sometimes, 1.20, and sometimes is everywhere. Use a constant distance snap.
01:02:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make these into jumps. (Distance snap more) changed to 1.6
01:29:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - What's going on here? it's strange but I don't know how to place these...

Extreme
No problems found.

Great map, and I love this song, so pm me in irc or on-site if you want a guest diff

made changes but no updated yet D: (offline edit
DS in Hard changed to 1.3
Thank you for ur modding! :D
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

loveFantasy wrote:

done.

:O 麻烦你了
該死的safari...
全改了 但是没上传(学校断网
Snowy Dream
[Gerneral]
AudioLeadIn: 1000


[Hard]
00:17:560 (4) - delete
00:17:160 (3) - add an arrow.
00:49:360 (4) - 不怎么好看0.0.
01:18:760 (5) - delete.
01:18:360 (4) - add an arrow.
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EX diff没什么大问题。
嗯 star~☆
mjw5150
star~
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

loveFantasy wrote:

done.

prefer diff name: lF Style (if you do so be sure to mentioned it's a Normal in beatmap description, so modder can mod it with Normal preference/criteria)
otherwise name it lF's Normal

maybe a bit hard as normal but Ray of Illuminati [NM] itself is not easy in DJMAX technika so...
also, copy normal-hitwhistle.wav and named it normal-slidertick2.wav, i use it in my diff.

EDIT1: 麻煩把combo color code換成這樣
SPOILER
  • [Colours]
    Combo1 : 11,163,244
    Combo2 : 200,245,251
    Combo3 : 236,132,251
    Combo4 : 90,73,243


粉色感觉怪怪的
改了一下
thx for ur gd :D
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Gerneral]
AudioLeadIn: 1000


[Hard]
00:17:560 (4) - delete
00:17:160 (3) - add an arrow.
00:49:360 (4) - 不怎么好看0.0. FIXED
01:18:760 (5) - delete.
01:18:360 (4) - add an arrow.
------------------------
EX diff没什么大问题。
嗯 star~☆
3Q :D
vincerio
Here's my speed modding~

[General]
TAG : Portable Trilogy Fever Hot Tunes Technika2

Don't forget to removed .osb file and then full-submitting again :3

Quote from Official ranking submit criteria
# Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total.
Your easiest diff was 3.31 and I'm agree that is a bit hard for beginner

lF Style
- do not exactly put audio timing section on a note... make it earlier or something...
- kiai time here is different from other diffs.

[Hard]
01:30:360(2) - move right 1 grid lv 3
02:03:560(3) - remove new combo

[Extreme]
why we got the biggest hit circle here in Insane diff xD
Drain Rate -1
Hit Circle -1
Sounds nicely playable with the same score :3

I have see no a problems :3
very nice~
good luck with this~
loveFantasy

vincerio wrote:

Here's my speed modding~
lF Style
- do not exactly put audio timing section on a note... make it earlier or something...
to let you know, the green line bug (what you're mentioning) is fixed
- kiai time here is different from other diffs.
i'll discuss this with fanzhen when he's online
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019
I can view this post on itouch in weekdays but I cant make any changes on map until weekend D:

Edit: D:
Cirno
Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[Beginner]
Tick rate 1?
这难度超过了3星 作为for rank的最简单难度应该小于等于3星 否则是unrankable的 请降低星数
00:11:560 (1) - 建议换成和00:09:960 (5)垂直对称的slider
01:02:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Easy难度放这个不合适 新手不知道怎么点 会点成1/2 建议换成重复slider
01:17:160 (3) - 减1repeat然后01:18:360放circle ?

[lF Style]
nice work with the sliderslide sounds ;)
[Hard]难度在这图里特简单,对比之下这个比起normal更像alternate hard了...
00:06:960 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这段给人以想要对称的感觉 但是有些左偏 = =
02:03:160 (11) - one more repeat?
Nice diff~

[Hard]
00:12:560 (5) - 加finish然后做音量渐强?
00:16:460 到 00:17:360 - 音量减低?
01:29:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 比起这个难度别的部分来说稍微有点蛋疼 变速而摆得不开,前面的超简单部分又令人放松了警惕,导致略有初见杀 建议替换成比较常规的摆法,或者将spacing摆开(可能会变得有点跳)
others fine for me

[Extreme]
圈比Hard要大..? Circle Size +1 ?
00:06:761 (1) - 红色控制点应该在00:07:160时位于球的中心
00:08:361 (2) - ^, 00:08:760
00:12:561 (5) - 加finish然后做音量渐强?
00:16:460 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 降低一点音量? 听起来有点失去重点的感觉
00:22:161 (5) - new combo然后删去00:22:761 (1)的new combo?
00:25:961 (3) - 红色控制点应该在00:26:160时位于球的中心
00:26:761 (4) - ^, 00:26:960
00:33:060 - 加note?
00:33:860 - ^
00:34:760 (3) - 移到00:34:660 ?
00:35:561 (1) - 红色控制点应该在00:35:760时位于球的中心
00:36:361 (2) - ^, 00:36:560
00:51:561 (1) - ^, 00:51:760, 左移1grid (grid 3) 这样和它对称的 00:53:160 (1) 结尾就挡好了
00:53:160 (1) - 使用00:51:561 (1) 复制粘贴,这样结尾正好是挡好的
00:58:761 (2) - 下3grid 或者上7grid (grid 3) 这样挡一半不大好看 >.>

Star~
Miu Matsuoka
Great map~ ☆

[Overall]
You need a difficulty which is below 3 stars in order to have it ranked!

[Beginner]
This is far too hard for beginners, change it to [Normal]?
00:09:960 (5) - Finish on slider end
00:13:560 (1) - Too close to spinner!
00:35:160 (8) - Whistle
01:03:060 (2,4,5,6) - Whistle
01:51:160 (1) - Too close to spinner!
02:01:960 (1) - Finish hitsound (Without override)

[lF Style]
00:48:560 (1) - Whistle?
00:49:160 (3) - Whistle on head and end
00:51:160 (7) - Delete Whistle and Finish
01:53:960 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle? (Without override)

[Hard]
Recalculate Slider Lengths and check all the sliders again please!
Some sliders are not ending at appropriate locations!
00:25:260 (4) - Whistle

[Extreme]
Looks fine for me! :D
loveFantasy

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[lF Style]
nice work with the sliderslide sounds ;)
[Hard]难度在这图里特简单,对比之下这个比起normal更像alternate hard了... yes x_x..i'll think about how to makes it easier
00:06:960 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这段给人以想要对称的感觉 但是有些左偏 = = yes :3
02:03:160 (11) - one more repeat? yes :3
Nice diff~

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Great map~ ☆
[lF Style]
00:48:560 (1) - Whistle? ooops how could i miss that
00:49:160 (3) - Whistle on head and end ooops how could i miss those
00:51:160 (7) - Delete Whistle and Finish nope :3
01:53:960 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle? (Without override) if you mean N:whistle, a bit not suitable imo...
fixed and uploaded!

Download: ESTi - Ray of Illuminati (DJMAX) (fanzhen0019) [lF Style].osu
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

vincerio wrote:

Here's my speed modding~

[General]
TAG : Portable Trilogy Fever Hot Tunes Technika2 Thank you

Don't forget to removed .osb file and then full-submitting again :3

Quote from Official ranking submit criteria
# Each map set must have at least two difficulties, one of which must be below a 3-star difficulty level. This is so that players of all levels of experience are able to enjoy maps of the songs they love. A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels"). That is, a map set can have no more than two "Insane" difficulties, etc. Finally, no map set should have more than 6 difficulties total.
Your easiest diff was 3.31 and I'm agree that is a bit hard for beginner will make changes

lF Style
- do not exactly put audio timing section on a note... make it earlier or something...
- kiai time here is different from other diffs.

[Hard]
01:30:360(2) - move right 1 grid lv 3 i think i'd better re-place them DX
02:03:560(3) - remove new combo doesnt matter?

[Extreme]
why we got the biggest hit circle here in Insane diff xD I love big circle :3
Drain Rate -1 done
Hit Circle -1
Sounds nicely playable with the same score :3

I have see no a problems :3
very nice~
good luck with this~
Thank you :3

Cirno wrote:

Hi~ My mod here. All below are just suggestions.
Red = I strongly think you should fix it.

[Beginner]
Tick rate 1?
这难度超过了3星 作为for rank的最简单难度应该小于等于3星 否则是unrankable的 请降低星数
00:11:560 (1) - 建议换成和00:09:960 (5)垂直对称的slider
01:02:760 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Easy难度放这个不合适 新手不知道怎么点 会点成1/2 建议换成重复slider fixed
01:17:160 (3) - 减1repeat然后01:18:360放circle ? done

[lF Style]
nice work with the sliderslide sounds ;)
[Hard]难度在这图里特简单,对比之下这个比起normal更像alternate hard了...
00:06:960 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这段给人以想要对称的感觉 但是有些左偏 = =
02:03:160 (11) - one more repeat?
Nice diff~

[Hard]
00:12:560 (5) - 加finish然后做音量渐强? 好听多了
00:16:460 到 00:17:360 - 音量减低?
01:29:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 比起这个难度别的部分来说稍微有点蛋疼 变速而摆得不开,前面的超简单部分又令人放松了警惕,导致略有初见杀 建议替换成比较常规的摆法,或者将spacing摆开(可能会变得有点跳) 改掉了
others fine for me

[Extreme]
圈比Hard要大..? Circle Size +1 ? ^
00:06:761 (1) - 红色控制点应该在00:07:160时位于球的中心 这是?
00:08:361 (2) - ^, 00:08:760
00:12:561 (5) - 加finish然后做音量渐强? done
00:16:460 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 降低一点音量? 听起来有点失去重点的感觉
00:22:161 (5) - new combo然后删去00:22:761 (1)的new combo? 大丈夫
00:25:961 (3) - 红色控制点应该在00:26:160时位于球的中心
00:26:761 (4) - ^, 00:26:960
00:33:060 - 加note?
00:33:860 - ^
00:34:760 (3) - 移到00:34:660 ?
00:35:561 (1) - 红色控制点应该在00:35:760时位于球的中心
00:36:361 (2) - ^, 00:36:560
00:51:561 (1) - ^, 00:51:760, 左移1grid (grid 3) 这样和它对称的 00:53:160 (1) 结尾就挡好了 done XD
00:53:160 (1) - 使用00:51:561 (1) 复制粘贴,这样结尾正好是挡好的 ^
00:58:761 (2) - 下3grid 或者上7grid (grid 3) 这样挡一半不大好看 >.> upp

Star~
Thank You :D

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Great map~ ☆

[Overall]
You need a difficulty which is below 3 stars in order to have it ranked!

[Beginner]
This is far too hard for beginners, change it to [Normal]?
00:09:960 (5) - Finish on slider end o.o done
00:13:560 (1) - Too close to spinner! deleted spinner and use slider instead
00:35:160 (8) - Whistle ops
01:03:060 (2,4,5,6) - Whistle use slider instead
01:51:160 (1) - Too close to spinner! hm..i made it shorter :3
02:01:960 (1) - Finish hitsound (Without override) soft-finish :3

[lF Style]
00:48:560 (1) - Whistle?
00:49:160 (3) - Whistle on head and end
00:51:160 (7) - Delete Whistle and Finish
01:53:960 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle? (Without override)

[Hard]
Recalculate Slider Lengths and check all the sliders again please! done
Some sliders are not ending at appropriate locations!
00:25:260 (4) - Whistle added

[Extreme]
Looks fine for me! :D
THANK YOU FOR YOUR MODDING xD

Beginner is easier now
Snowy Dream
嗯嗯 多多加油吧 ;)
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