1. The map is structured quite well, great looking patterns that play not bad at all, although there are stuff that I personally don't find fitting -
2. 00:20:114 (2,5) - This full overlap is just confusing, as the previous patterns had a circle on the head, you used a slider here, it's unexpected and unnecessary as the music doesn't really support that one really well.
3. 00:32:040 (2,5) - ^
4. 00:27:195 (1) - Feels kinda out of place, not as elegant as the other sliders such as 00:36:139 (1) - 00:24:214 (1) - in a way that goes well with the previous moment too.
5. 01:01:667 (2,1) - I'd say it's pretty awful to stack those, the halt with the music is great, but if you are going to slow down the slider that much it's misleading, as I thought it'd gain a speed boost or at the very least be in the same speed as the previous slider, just like 01:28:313 (1,2,3) -. If you want it to work with the current velocity, I'd move 01:01:853 (1) - to around x356 y304 as it slows down the movement from the jump and plays really well.
6. 01:07:816 (1,2,3) - If you create so much emphasis on it, you could increase the SV a bit (1.2x) and even increase the spacing a little more, as the hitsounds overdo it compared to how it actually plays.
7. 01:21:605 (3,4) - You're not overlapping 01:20:673 (5) - but you do overlap 01:20:860 (1) - which comes afterwards? egh.. It looks a bit ugly anyway
8. 01:26:450 (8,1) - I'd say spacing is a bit big for such diff?
9. 01:34:649 (3,3) - Those are not symmetrical on the grid as the first slider overlaps with 01:35:021 (1,2) - while the second does not.

Avishay wrote:

Hey, sorry for the long wait, life happens.

[Insane]

1. The map is structured quite well, great looking patterns that play not bad at all, although there are stuff that I personally don't find fitting -
2. 00:20:114 (2,5) - This full overlap is just confusing, as the previous patterns had a circle on the head, you used a slider here, it's unexpected and unnecessary as the music doesn't really support that one really well.fixed some, but I'll use this pattern.
3. 00:32:040 (2,5) - ^^
4. 00:27:195 (1) - Feels kinda out of place, not as elegant as the other sliders such as 00:36:139 (1) - 00:24:214 (1) - in a way that goes well with the previous moment too.fixed
5. 01:01:667 (2,1) - I'd say it's pretty awful to stack those, the halt with the music is great, but if you are going to slow down the slider that much it's misleading, as I thought it'd gain a speed boost or at the very least be in the same speed as the previous slider, just like 01:28:313 (1,2,3) -. If you want it to work with the current velocity, I'd move 01:01:853 (1) - to around x356 y304 as it slows down the movement from the jump and plays really well.fixed
6. 01:07:816 (1,2,3) - If you create so much emphasis on it, you could increase the SV a bit (1.2x) and even increase the spacing a little more, as the hitsounds overdo it compared to how it actually plays.fixed
7. 01:21:605 (3,4) - You're not overlapping 01:20:673 (5) - but you do overlap 01:20:860 (1) - which comes afterwards? egh.. It looks a bit ugly anyway fixed
8. 01:26:450 (8,1) - I'd say spacing is a bit big for such diff?fixed
9. 01:34:649 (3,3) - Those are not symmetrical on the grid as the first slider overlaps with 01:35:021 (1,2) - while the second does not.???

Glz.

[Colours]
Combo1 : 245,158,193
Combo2 : 245,200,137
Combo3 : 115,181,247
Combo4 : 135,228,151

1. 00:12:661 (3,1) - Please move these a bit away from each other, they touch a little bit which makes it seem strange.
2. 00:13:406 (3) - Also move this so it's symmetrical.
3. 01:10:984 (3,4) - Not perfectly stacked, looks strange ingame.
4. 01:35:767 (1) - Missing hitsounds.
5. 01:40:239 (1,2) - These sounds are long sounds, maybe put slow sliders instead of just circles?

1. 00:02:226 (2,3) - BLANKETTTTTTT :3
2. 01:35:767 (1) - Missing hitsounds.

1. nothing here.

1. 01:38:748 (1,2) - Switch NC locations for set consistency?

Priti wrote:

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Artist: Get someone else to confirm it, I'm not 100% sureI'll ask to BN about it.
Title: [1/5] ショート ver.fixed
Romanisation: [1/5] Short ver.fixed

Also, are you sure about current colors? they don't go well with each other.. try this;fixed

[Colours]
Combo1 : 245,158,193
Combo2 : 245,200,137
Combo3 : 115,181,247
Combo4 : 135,228,151

Insane

1. 00:12:661 (3,1) - Please move these a bit away from each other, they touch a little bit which makes it seem strange.fixed
2. 00:13:406 (3) - Also move this so it's symmetrical. fixed
3. 01:10:984 (3,4) - Not perfectly stacked, looks strange ingame.fixed
4. 01:35:767 (1) - Missing hitsounds. fixed
5. 01:40:239 (1,2) - These sounds are long sounds, maybe put slow sliders instead of just circles?it's last part of the song, so I want to make an impact on each beat by circles.

Hard

1. 00:02:226 (2,3) - BLANKETTTTTTT :3I didn't have intention but fixed
2. 01:35:767 (1) - Missing hitsounds.fixed, and Normal and Easy 2

Normal

1. nothing here.

Easy

1. 01:38:748 (1,2) - Switch NC locations for set consistency?fixed

Short mod because the map is super solid and there isn't much to say about it.

thanks for super super fast mod!

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IamKwaN wrote:

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東タカゴー Azuma Takago

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