Weff Days (M4M)
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[Inner Oni]
As recommendation: OD6, HP7. The note count and the BPM largely permits that.
00:11:626 (67,68,69) - , 00:19:024 (109,110,111) - , 01:21:489 (182,183,184) - 01:28:065 (219,220,221) - I would not recommend SV changes that fast - they might throw off the player (as they are pretty unexpected, and especially when Oni has no changes). A decent value, if you wish to keep them, can be 1.25, up to 1.4.
00:36:695 (201) - You may need to replace that as kat: When your mapping has vocal parts you go with them; but you go more on the percussion side when there is nothing - there is a hihat at that place.
00:42:140 (230) - I'd feel like this is better to be deleted - porting the note down to 00:42:243 (231) - loses a tiny bit of emphasis on both vocal syllables. The more notes you put, the less emphasis you have.
00:52:722 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe change as ddkkd ? The melody seems to be increasing in pitch until 00:53:441 (8) - .
00:53:852 (10,11,12,13) - Although I personnally like this arrangement in terms of accuracy, it feels heavy to play... 12 would be a good candidate for deletion, but at that point I have no idea. Might be the patterning right after.
[Oni]
Recommendation same as Inner Oni
00:28:270 (125,126) - I'd rather see that as double d, 00:29:092 (129,130) - is the same thing musically. (Also this doublet is implicitly present in Inner Oni)
[Muzukashii]
Recommending HP7, OD5.
00:13:681 (38,39,40,41,42) - This quintuplet does not really feel like it's in its place (due to the final kd) clashing with the rest which has a fairly straightforward mapping. Change to kdddk, or kddkk?
00:53:852 (7,8) - I would recommend against having that doublet - you can have a better focus only with the d.
[Futsuu]
HP 7.5, OD4
00:06:284 (12) - I don't get why this is don, you go with alternating colors every 3 notes on 00:00:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - . And the pitch's not changing on 12.
00:31:763 (77,78,79) - I would rather see 78 at 00:32:174 - and 79 deleted, to avoid making an odd rhythm (since you don't have any of these)
00:53:955 (5) - This note should be deleted to bring more power to 00:54:366 (6) -
01:00:941 (27) - Since you're focusing on vocal, this note seems too much. However, I'd rather see 01:00:736 (26) - deleted to give some more time (since this part is much more dense than the rest, being almost completely restless.
01:03:613 (35,36,37) - I think any one of these notes can be deleted for a small >1 beat pause.
01:18:407 - No note compared to 00:15:941 (37) - ?
01:28:065 (108,109) - You don't have volume changes on similar parts, perhaps delete it? (Might be the case for all but Inner methinks)
[Kantan]
HP 7.5, OD3
00:02:996 (5) - 00:06:284 (10) - I think it's much better if you delete these notes to keep consistency on the intro rhythm.
00:05:051 (8,9) - Also put these at k for consistent alternation.
00:06:695 (11,12) - 00:08:339 (14,15) - 00:09:983 (17,18) - You can safely put 3/2 gaps on these, 1/1 is plain awkward to play. (Most spots where you do put 1/1 in place of 3/2 are awkward to play)
00:09:572 (16) - And delete this if you apply ^ to give some break time.
00:13:681 (23) - Move 1/1 forward to have a 1/1 triplet instead of 2 doublets, as they are less confusing to play.
00:16:147 (27) - Change as k as the rhythm changes?
00:21:489 (36) - ^ d
00:32:585 (53) - Delete to have a consistent rhythm with previously
00:45:736 (74) - And delete that one to bring more power to 00:46:147 (75) - .
00:54:366 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - This rhythm will definitely confuse new players, as it keeps switching back and forth between 3/2 and 1/1. You're much better off making breaks and use primarly 1/1.
01:07:517 (28,29,30,31) - Rather than 1 and 3 notes, it's better if you could do 3 and 1 to map onto the vocal.
01:16:147 (44) - Same as 00:13:681 (23) -
01:28:065 (64,65) - Remove the volume change? (reasoning is same as Futsuu)