Mizuki Nana - No Limit · forum

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

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Taeyang 2015-06-06T10:59:01+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 7월 2일 목요일 at 오전 12:40:15

Artist: Mizuki Nana
Title: No Limit
Source: DOG DAYS"
Tags: opening Doyak eINess
BPM: 146
Filesize: 23769kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Doyak's Normal (1.83 stars, 153 notes)
Easy (1.46 stars, 88 notes)
eINess' Insane (3.83 stars, 374 notes)
Hard (2.82 stars, 227 notes)
Insane (3.63 stars, 322 notes)

Download: Mizuki Nana - No Limit
Download: Mizuki Nana - No Limit (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3rd Ranked Map
Hope to Enjoy!

Easy : by me

Normal : by Doyak

Hard : by me

Insane : by me

eINess's Insane : by eINess

Thanks to Doyak , eINess for GD

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Last edited by Taeyang 2015-08-18T09:55:09+00:00, edited 60 times in total.

Doyak

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Doyak 2015-06-07T11:30:32+00:00

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Dog Days.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54335
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 294,6869,10978,11800,13444,26595,39746,54540,64379,67691,75910,81663,82485,88239,88547,88855
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:No Limit
TitleUnicode:No Limit
Artist:Nana Mizuki
ArtistUnicode:Nana Mizuki
Creator:Taeyang
Version:Doyak's Normal
Source:Nana Mizuki
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,23563,25391
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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88911,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0


[Colours]
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Combo2 : 255,128,128
Combo3 : 0,128,255
Combo4 : 88,230,64

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Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-06-10T17:05:38+00:00

http://puu.sh/ijIBP/a1d1be9d23.zip

소스 바꾸셔야하는거 잊지마세요.

Come[Back]Home

1,790 posts

Joined October 2011

Come[Back]Home 2015-06-12T12:10:31+00:00

Easy

00:11:034 (3) Wouldnt it be better if you move it too 220/328 so you can go straight down to the slider instead of going left first? I think it feels better to play imo
00:38:158 (3) Move the middleslidertick too 384/160 for a perfect overlap
00:51:308 (1,1) It may just be me, but it feels like the recoverytime is too short for an Easy
01:16:377 (1,1) ^

Doyak's Normal

00:01:274 (2,3) I dont think they should be stacked, can be kinda confusing for Normal players since its not 1/2 or 1/1 and i dont think they could predict it
00:05:589 (4,5) ^
00:08:158 (2,3) They should switch placed so (3) wont start on an offbeat
00:31:377 (4) Delete this circle, otherwise it'd be too hard
00:36:308 (8) ^
00:23:363 - 00:26:651 Pretty long break on a mappable part. You should map this
00:59:117 (3,4) Slider instead to make it easier?
01:00:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) This feels more like a Hard to me. Delete some circles
01:14:939 (5) This should be a slider till 01:15:350 here to make it easier. You can add a circle here when youve changed it 01:15:555
01:21:719 (6,7) Dont stack them please
01:23:774 (3,4) Dont do this in a Normal, its too confusing

Hard

01:02:199 (5,1) Please improve the blank here
01:09:391 (1) ctrl+g . It has a weird flow otherwise ( 01:08:569 (3,4,1) )
01:27:473 (6) It may be just me but this slider feel outta place to me

Insane

00:44:117 (7) ctrl+g?

eINess' Insane

00:04:459 Shouldnt there be a circle here?
00:06:103 ^
00:13:295 (1) Move this one too 204/332 looks better imo
01:24:596 Add a circle?

Really awesome mapset again~ :3
Good Luck

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-06-12T14:19:56+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Doyak's Normal

00:01:274 (2,3) I dont think they should be stacked, can be kinda confusing for Normal players since its not 1/2 or 1/1 and i dont think they could predict it Fixed.
00:05:589 (4,5) ^ ^
00:08:158 (2,3) They should switch placed so (3) wont start on an offbeat Fixed.
00:31:377 (4) Delete this circle, otherwise it'd be too hard Fixed.
00:36:308 (8) ^ Fixed.
00:23:363 - 00:26:651 Pretty long break on a mappable part. You should map this Mapped there.
00:59:117 (3,4) Slider instead to make it easier? This should be fine.
01:00:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) This feels more like a Hard to me. Delete some circles Changed the structure and made one resting beat.
01:14:939 (5) This should be a slider till 01:15:350 here to make it easier. You can add a circle here when youve changed it 01:15:555 Umm, I think this part is very important thus can have little more beats than other parts. This could be fine, I guess.
01:21:719 (6,7) Dont stack them please Fixed.
01:23:774 (3,4) Dont do this in a Normal, its too confusing Taeyang suggested this but fixed.

I made this map a bit rhythm-wise hard, rather than the spacing (the star rating is pretty low becuase of that), but yeah, I do agree that I've overdone it on this Normal diff, so I fixed most of them. Thanks anyway

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Hiyori

151 posts

Joined May 2015

Hiyori 2015-06-13T22:45:48+00:00

Hello! I'm here for the M4M!

EASY:

SPOILER

00:12:678 (2) - I suggest you make this one to a 1/1 slider end tail here - 00:13:089
00:36:514 (1,3) - maybe try not to overlap this
00:40:623 (2) - i think this jump is hard to read for new players, maybe saw places with 00:41:445 (3)
01:12:678 (3,4) - there is a great downbeat at 01:13:500 yet it is unmapped, so i suggest you try this if you want:

01:21:308 - end spinner here
01:21:719 - add slider, end tail here - 01:22:130

NORMAL:

SPOILER

00:07:336 (1,2,3) - I'm not really a fan of overlapping sliders but its up to you if you want to move it or not

01:10:007 (5,1) - might be hard to read for new players. try moving this
01:15:966 (1,3) - akward overlap
01:21:719 (6,7) - too close to each other

Your Normal diff is mapped well but imo the only issue is the overlaps. So its up to you if you want to move it or not as long as your following the right Distance Snap.

Nice mapset. Hope this mod helps. Goodluck with ranking!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-06-14T04:27:33+00:00

Hiyori: Thanks for your mod! But Taeyang haven't updated my last editing, so there could have been some changes for the parts you mentioned (I got mine back to pending version and too lazy to update it myself xD) I'll check it after it is updated.

Taeyang: 으 모딩 새로 받기 전에 업뎃 좀 해주시지 ㅠ

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-06-14T16:49:43+00:00

Doyak wrote:
Hiyori: Thanks for your mod! But Taeyang haven't updated my last editing, so there could have been some changes for the parts you mentioned (I got mine back to pending version and too lazy to update it myself xD) I'll check it after it is updated.

Taeyang: 으 모딩 새로 받기 전에 업뎃 좀 해주시지 ㅠ

아이고 ㅈㅅ요 랭작업하는게 5개씩이나 되다보니 이쪽껄 소홀해진...

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-06-14T16:59:43+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Easy

00:11:034 (3) Wouldnt it be better if you move it too 220/328 so you can go straight down to the slider instead of going left first? I think it feels better to play imo
00:38:158 (3) Move the middleslidertick too 384/160 for a perfect overlap
it's fine to me
00:51:308 (1,1) It may just be me, but it feels like the recoverytime is too short for an Easy
01:16:377 (1,1) ^

Hard

01:02:199 (5,1) Please improve the blank here
01:09:391 (1) ctrl+g . It has a weird flow otherwise ( 01:08:569 (3,4,1) )
it's fine to me
01:27:473 (6) It may be just me but this slider feel outta place to me
i will consider

Insane

00:44:117 (7) ctrl+g?

Really awesome mapset again~ :3
Good Luck

@all fixed~ thanks mod

Sonnyc

7,760 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-06-14T17:44:23+00:00

Easy:

00:12:678 (2) - 여기에서는 소프트 피니시 빼셔야 (1)에서 강조가 더 잘 되고, (1)과의 힛사적 차이를 이끌어 내실 수 있을 겁니다.
00:43:089 (1) - 00:48:021 (3) - 강한 음 있으니까 머리에 피니시 넣어주시는게 어떤가요?
01:14:322 (1,2) - 간격 자체는 잘 지킨 상황인데 (3)을 이전의 (4)와 겹치게 하려다 보니 슬라이더 몸통들의 거리가 가까워져서 다소 신경이 쓰입니다. (3) 노트를 다른 곳으로 옮겨서 (1,2)의 평행을 지키시는 방향으로 수정하시거나 http://puu.sh/ioGcN/6e7f12ec0d.jpg 아니면 새로운 패턴을 짜보시는 걸 추천합니다. http://puu.sh/ioG9m/63f76cf6a1.jpg (발로 만들어서 예시 퀄은 별로에요 ㅎ)

Doyak's Normal:

00:07:336 (1) - 이전 파트에서의 리듬들이 피아노를 기반으로 따라가고 있고, 이 슬라이더는 다른 박자를 따라가고 있습니다. 공교롭게도 이 슬라이더를 1/4 앞으로 당기면 00:07:233에 피아노 소리가 존재하고 있기 때문에 잘 어울리게 되고, 지금의 박자가 되려 어색하게 느껴집니다. 쉽게 말해서 노말 난이도에서 복잡한 박자의 사용이 일관되게 이루어지지 않았다는 겁니다. 박자를 이대로 유지하시려면 힛사에 두드러진 변화를 주셔서 리듬이 바뀌었다는 것을 표현하는 것을 추천합니다. 이 경우에는 슬라이더의 소프트 휘슬들을 모두 드럼 휘슬로 바꾸시는게 적절하겠습니다. 00:08:979 (4) - 00:10:623 (2,3)도 동일하게 적용해주세요.
00:32:815 (6) - 슬라이더의 곡률을 조금만 낮춰주세요. 이렇게 짧은 슬라이더는 곡률이 너무 높으면 오히려 보기 불편합니다.
00:48:021 (3) - 박자 처리를 이전의 00:41:445 (3)와 동일하게 하셨는데, 전 파트와 달리 음악에서 강한 박자가 00:48:432에 등장하고 지금은 그 강한 박자가 씹히고 있어서 어색한 상태입니다. 피니시를 살리기 위해서 이 부분은 아래와 같은 박자가 이상적이라고 생각합니다.
01:21:719 (6) - 01:28:295 (6) - 뉴콤보하시는게 00:19:254 (1)와 통일성이 생기지 않을까 싶습니다.

Hard:

00:31:377 (4,1) - 그닥 적절한 점프 포인트가 아닌 듯한 느낌입니다.

Insane:

00:38:158 (1,2) - 콤보 순서를 뒤집어서 지금의 (2)가 (1)이 되게 해야 같은 간격에서 박자가 다르다는 것을 플레이어들에게 더 잘 전달할 수 있습니다.
01:28:911 (3) - 꼭 그럴 필요는 없지만 (1,2) 처럼 슬라이더와 겹치지 않게 두는건 어때요?

eINess' Insane:

00:00:350 (1,2) - 엇박 연타를 넣으신 특별한 이유라도 있으신가요? 00:00:452에는 특별한 박자가 음악에서 느껴지지 않고, 시작부터 아무런 음악적 단서도 없이 엇박 연타가 등장해서 플레이하는 입장에서 약간 부담스러울 수도 있을것 같습니다.
00:13:226 (1,1) - 반짝반짝 소리는 1/4 박자가 맞습니다. 0.25배속으로 감상해주세요.
00:25:829 (1) - 여담이지만 전반적인 맵 퀄리티에 비해 2% 부족하게 생긴 아쉬운 S자 슬라이더네요 ㅋ
00:42:062 (3) - 꼬리에 까지 힛사가 딸려있네요. 실수하신 거라고 믿습니다.

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-06-14T19:55:15+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Easy:
00:12:678 (2) - 여기에서는 소프트 피니시 빼셔야 (1)에서 강조가 더 잘 되고, (1)과의 힛사적 차이를 이끌어 내실 수 있을 겁니다.
수정완료!
00:43:089 (1) - 00:48:021 (3) - 강한 음 있으니까 머리에 피니시 넣어주시는게 어떤가요?
수정완료!
01:14:322 (1,2) - 간격 자체는 잘 지킨 상황인데 (3)을 이전의 (4)와 겹치게 하려다 보니 슬라이더 몸통들의 거리가 가까워져서 다소 신경이 쓰입니다. (3) 노트를 다른 곳으로 옮겨서 (1,2)의 평행을 지키시는 방향으로 수정하시거나 http://puu.sh/ioGcN/6e7f12ec0d.jpg 아니면 새로운 패턴을 짜보시는 걸 추천합니다. http://puu.sh/ioG9m/63f76cf6a1.jpg (발로 만들어서 예시 퀄은 별로에요 ㅎ)
수정완료!
Hard:
00:31:377 (4,1) - 그닥 적절한 점프 포인트가 아닌 듯한 느낌입니다.
음... 강한보컬음을 점프로 잡아둔건데 이거 모딩 또 온다면 바로 고치겠습니다.
Insane:
00:38:158 (1,2) - 콤보 순서를 뒤집어서 지금의 (2)가 (1)이 되게 해야 같은 간격에서 박자가 다르다는 것을 플레이어들에게 더 잘 전달할 수 있습니다.
뉴콤을 전체적으로 다운비트로 맞춰둿기에 깨트리기보단 간격부분을 수정했습니다.
01:28:911 (3) - 꼭 그럴 필요는 없지만 (1,2) 처럼 슬라이더와 겹치지 않게 두는건 어때요?
수정완료!

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-06-15T00:21:51+00:00

Hiyori wrote:
NORMAL:
00:07:336 (1,2,3) - I'm not really a fan of overlapping sliders but its up to you if you want to move it or not Already fixed on previous mod.
01:10:007 (5,1) - might be hard to read for new players. try moving this Imo, players who play Normal should not be 'new' players (if they do, they're too early) and at least know how this game works. Thus this shouldn't be that hard. It's not even on blue line.
01:15:966 (1,3) - akward overlap Seems okay to me.
01:21:719 (6,7) - too close to each other Already fixed on previous mod.

Your Normal diff is mapped well but imo the only issue is the overlaps. So its up to you if you want to move it or not as long as your following the right Distance Snap.

Nice mapset. Hope this mod helps. Goodluck with ranking!

Thanks for mod

Sonnyc wrote:
Doyak's Normal:
00:07:336 (1) - 이전 파트에서의 리듬들이 피아노를 기반으로 따라가고 있고, 이 슬라이더는 다른 박자를 따라가고 있습니다. 공교롭게도 이 슬라이더를 1/4 앞으로 당기면 00:07:233에 피아노 소리가 존재하고 있기 때문에 잘 어울리게 되고, 지금의 박자가 되려 어색하게 느껴집니다. 쉽게 말해서 노말 난이도에서 복잡한 박자의 사용이 일관되게 이루어지지 않았다는 겁니다. 박자를 이대로 유지하시려면 힛사에 두드러진 변화를 주셔서 리듬이 바뀌었다는 것을 표현하는 것을 추천합니다. 이 경우에는 슬라이더의 소프트 휘슬들을 모두 드럼 휘슬로 바꾸시는게 적절하겠습니다. 00:08:979 (4) - 00:10:623 (2,3)도 동일하게 적용해주세요.
00:32:815 (6) - 슬라이더의 곡률을 조금만 낮춰주세요. 이렇게 짧은 슬라이더는 곡률이 너무 높으면 오히려 보기 불편합니다.
00:48:021 (3) - 박자 처리를 이전의 00:41:445 (3)와 동일하게 하셨는데, 전 파트와 달리 음악에서 강한 박자가 00:48:432에 등장하고 지금은 그 강한 박자가 씹히고 있어서 어색한 상태입니다. 피니시를 살리기 위해서 이 부분은 아래와 같은 박자가 이상적이라고 생각합니다.
01:21:719 (6) - 01:28:295 (6) - 뉴콤보하시는게 00:19:254 (1)와 통일성이 생기지 않을까 싶습니다.

모두 고쳤습니다. 모딩 감사합니다!

노말 수정본

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lit120

3,272 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2015-06-15T13:25:21+00:00

hi, M4M requested in chat. quite lazy to check other diffs =w=

[Doyak's Normal]

I'd highly recommend you to use a custom hitsound for this
00:48:843 (4) - remove the slider whistle
00:49:665 (1) - finish

[Hard]

00:25:007 (1,3) - remove finish
00:43:089 (1) - finish
00:48:021 (1) - ^
00:49:665 (1) - ^
00:50:897 (5) - ^ (end)
01:00:143 (2) - 320|184
01:01:171 (1) - finish
01:07:747 (1) - ^
01:14:322 (1) - ^

[Insane]

00:25:007 (1,2) - remove finish since there is no cymbal sound
00:48:021 (1) - finish
00:49:665 (1) - ^
01:01:171 (1) - ^
01:07:747 (1) - ^
01:12:679 (1) - ^

GL!

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-06-17T08:23:57+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
eINess' Insane

00:04:459 Shouldnt there be a circle here? // no piano sound
00:06:103 ^ // no piano sound
00:13:295 (1) Move this one too 204/332 looks better imo
01:24:596 Add a circle? // sound is little week to me >_>

Really awesome mapset again~ :3
Good Luck

Sonnyc wrote:
eINess' Insane:
00:00:350 (1,2) - 엇박 연타를 넣으신 특별한 이유라도 있으신가요? 00:00:452에는 특별한 박자가 음악에서 느껴지지 않고, 시작부터 아무런 음악적 단서도 없이 엇박 연타가 등장해서 플레이하는 입장에서 약간 부담스러울 수도 있을것 같습니다. // 보킬이랑 잘 맞는다고 생각하는데.. 흠... 플레이생각해서 확실히 엇박은 힘들긴 하겠지만 지적한번더 들어오면 고쳐볼게요. 저는 박자는 충분히 좋아보이거든요.
00:13:226 (1,1) - 반짝반짝 소리는 1/4 박자가 맞습니다. 0.25배속으로 감상해주세요. // 매핑할떄 이어폰이 맛이 가서 힛사랑 이런거 전부 놓쳣는데 ~ㅅ~ 감사합니다 ㅋ
00:25:829 (1) - 여담이지만 전반적인 맵 퀄리티에 비해 2% 부족하게 생긴 아쉬운 S자 슬라이더네요 ㅋ // 선생님 모양이쁘게 만드는법좀 알려주세요 ㅂㄷㅂㄷ..
00:42:062 (3) - 꼬리에 까지 힛사가 딸려있네요. 실수하신 거라고 믿습니다. // 왜 여기다 피니쉬 넣었지 ㅋㅋ 감사

thanks mod~ :3

diff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Dog Days.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54335
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.699999

[Metadata]
Title:No Limit
TitleUnicode:No Limit
Artist:Mizuki Nana
ArtistUnicode:水樹奈々
Creator:Taeyang
Version:eINess' Insane
Source:Dog Days"
Tags:Doyak eINess
BeatmapID:716695
BeatmapSetID:320510

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7.3
ApproachRate:8.5
SliderMultiplier:1.78
SliderTickRate:1

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296,120,76582,2,0,P|228:108|148:136,1,106.799996740723,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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216,352,77507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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152,264,86651,2,0,P|104:200|116:320,1,320.399990222168,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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352,232,88089,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Taeyang

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Taeyang 2015-06-18T21:33:43+00:00

-Hakurei- wrote:
hi, M4M requested in chat. quite lazy to check other diffs =w=

[Doyak's Normal]
I'd highly recommend you to use a custom hitsound for this
00:48:843 (4) - remove the slider whistle
00:49:665 (1) - finish
[Hard]
00:25:007 (1,3) - remove finish
00:43:089 (1) - finish
00:48:021 (1) - ^
00:49:665 (1) - ^
00:50:897 (5) - ^ (end)
01:00:143 (2) - 320|184
01:01:171 (1) - finish
01:07:747 (1) - ^
01:14:322 (1) - ^
[Insane]
00:25:007 (1,2) - remove finish since there is no cymbal sound
00:48:021 (1) - finish
00:49:665 (1) - ^
01:01:171 (1) - ^
01:07:747 (1) - ^
01:12:679 (1) - ^
GL!

i dont want add finish

but i change something

Nathan

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Nathan 2015-06-19T01:49:47+00:00

M4M

[General]

You should really get a better mp3, it might be 192 but it's poorly encoded, just compare the audio quality to some video on youtube and you can clearly hear the difference

[Easy]

01:16:377 (1) - I would remove the finish at the end, there isn't any crash type sound

[Hard]

00:06:925 (1,2) - I'd unstack these, most players would perceive this as a 1/2 stack so it's a bit confusing with the slider starting on a blue tick
00:08:569 (1,2) - Same as above
00:20:076 (1,2) - stack :V
00:34:459 (5) - This looks awkward and a bit hard to read, I'd actually just use two circles instead to accent the next vocal on 00:34:870 (1) - better, since it seems like you ran out of playfield space anyways hah
01:18:843 (3) - just looks bleh, move to another position

[Insane]

00:15:555 (3) - Consider using a 1/4 slider and a circle, the red tick is actually the strongest out of the repeat so it would be nice if it was clickable
00:23:569 (2,5) - I would change the rhythm into something else here, both of these repeats end on something stronger than the head
00:38:980 (3) - Would use a triplet here for pretty much the same reason above
00:42:062 (2,4) - aaaa these both end on strong beats, rework the rhythm w/e way you want, just make them clickable
00:53:980 (1) - ^
00:54:904 (2) - Just use two circles here so the player doesn't have to click a blue tick slider, it ends on a strong vocal too
00:56:548 (2) - ^
01:03:123 (2) - ^
01:06:925 (5) - I would change the curve to a red point since it will match with 01:06:103 (1) and they're in the same combo

rest difficulty was solid but those rhythms need to be reworked as I pointed out to be more intuitive

[eIness' Insane]

00:25:829 (1) - This extended slider feels forced, there is a beat on the red tick and the held sound the slider is emphasizing get's weak towards the end anyways, I would just shorten it to the red tick
00:54:082 (2) - I understand you're trying to emphasize the synth here, but two circles would allow that white tick to also be emphasized and prevent a blue tick start, it also brings more impact when hitting 00:54:391 (3)
01:10:315 (3) - Don't see why this repeat starts on a blue tick, I'd just extend by one and have it start on a white tick

nice

good luck!

Taeyang

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Taeyang 2015-06-19T22:20:07+00:00

Mp3를 교체했기에 그에맞춰 오프셋도 변경되었습니다.
이점 참고해서 모딩온거 고치거나 업데이트,포스팅 해주세요~

Taeyang

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Taeyang 2015-06-19T22:47:18+00:00

sukiNathan wrote:
M4M

[General]
You should really get a better mp3, it might be 192 but it's poorly encoded, just compare the audio quality to some video on youtube and you can clearly hear the difference
I changed mp3
[Easy]
01:16:377 (1) - I would remove the finish at the end, there isn't any crash type sound
i think here is fine and my Hard,Insane diff used normal addition finish so i didn't fixed this
[Hard]
00:06:925 (1,2) - I'd unstack these, most players would perceive this as a 1/2 stack so it's a bit confusing with the slider starting on a blue tick
fixed
00:08:569 (1,2) - Same as above
fixed
00:20:076 (1,2) - stack :V
:V
00:34:459 (5) - This looks awkward and a bit hard to read, I'd actually just use two circles instead to accent the next vocal on 00:34:870 (1) - better, since it seems like you ran out of playfield space anyways hah
nah i think it's fine
01:18:843 (3) - just looks bleh, move to another position
overlap a little fixed
i will consider, but i want this overlap
[Insane]
00:15:555 (3) - Consider using a 1/4 slider and a circle, the red tick is actually the strongest out of the repeat so it would be nice if it was clickable
it's fine
00:23:569 (2,5) - I would change the rhythm into something else here, both of these repeats end on something stronger than the head
this rhythm fine to me
00:38:980 (3) - Would use a triplet here for pretty much the same reason above
that make more hardly
00:42:062 (2,4) - aaaa these both end on strong beats, rework the rhythm w/e way you want, just make them clickable
fixed
00:53:980 (1) - ^
fixed
00:54:904 (2) - Just use two circles here so the player doesn't have to click a blue tick slider, it ends on a strong vocal too
00:56:548 (2) - ^
01:03:123 (2) - ^
i want use this rhythm i will consider more
01:06:925 (5) - I would change the curve to a red point since it will match with 01:06:103 (1) and they're in the same combo
that's fine 01:06:489 (4,5) - i already caught vocal sound here used jump
rest difficulty was solid but those rhythms need to be reworked as I pointed out to be more intuitive
good luck!

Thanks natthan~

Mekki

Mekki 2015-06-20T00:41:08+00:00

General

- This is a anime opening, right?? So i think you have to put a (TV Size)

Easy

00:12:448 (2) - Move this note to X: 284 Y:128, just to flow better, also, i think you have to add a nc and remove the nc here 00:13:270 since this note 00:12:448 (1) seems to be following the vocals

00:29:298 (4,1) - Improve this blanket

- I liked the diff xD

Normal

00:03:407 (1,2) - Blanket??

00:14:914 (5) - CTRL J then CTRL H then CTRL G and stack again, i think it's a better idea for flows better

00:35:051 (1) - NC Here than 00:36:284 (3) - remove nc here and 00:37:106 (1) - add nc here

00:37:106 (1) - Move the red point of the slider to X: 40 Y: 296

Good Diff

Hard

01:21:489 (3) - Maybe CTRL H this??

Perfect diff for me xD

Both insanes are good!!

Congratulations on your mapset!! It's really cool, hope this gets ranked xD

Taeyang

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Taeyang 2015-06-20T03:35:26+00:00

MkGuh wrote:
General

- This is a anime opening, right?? So i think you have to put a (TV Size)

Easy

00:12:448 (2) - Move this note to X: 284 Y:128, just to flow better, also, i think you have to add a nc and remove the nc here 00:13:270 since this note 00:12:448 (1) seems to be following the vocals
i think that's fine
00:29:298 (4,1) - Improve this blanket
ok fixed
- I liked the diff xD

Hard

01:21:489 (3) - Maybe CTRL H this??
i dont want makes jump
Perfect diff for me xD

Both insanes are good!!

Congratulations on your mapset!! It's really cool, hope this gets ranked xD

Thanks mod~

Mekki

Mekki 2015-06-20T05:11:13+00:00

Hard

01:21:489 (3) - Maybe CTRL H this??
i dont want makes jump when i said this, i was trying to say for you reverse the slider you ctrl h the slider, and put in the right place again hehehe

Something like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3277423

Doyak

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Doyak 2015-06-20T05:23:01+00:00

I'll consider using custom hitsound and work on it soon, then check the mods.

아이네스님: 01:15:121 (5,6) - 여기 잘 들어보시면 1/4 1/8*3이 아니라 1/6 4개입니다.

Taeyang

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Taeyang 2015-06-20T06:22:09+00:00

MkGuh wrote:
Hard

01:21:489 (3) - Maybe CTRL H this??
i dont want makes jump when i said this, i was trying to say for you reverse the slider you ctrl h the slider, and put in the right place again hehehe

Something like that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3277423

oh ok i will consider this really Thanks

Doyak

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Doyak 2015-06-20T08:29:33+00:00

-Hakurei- wrote:
[Doyak's Normal]
I'd highly recommend you to use a custom hitsound for this
00:48:843 (4) - remove the slider whistle
00:49:665 (1) - finish

I re-hitsounded with custom sounds, and there were a lot of change from Taeyang's mod. So they've been fixed already. Thanks for mod

MkGuh wrote:
Normal

00:03:407 (1,2) - Blanket?? No, that's not the concept for that pattern.

00:14:914 (5) - CTRL J then CTRL H then CTRL G and stack again, i think it's a better idea for flows better fixed.

00:35:051 (1) - NC Here than 00:36:284 (3) - remove nc here and 00:37:106 (1) - add nc here Umm... I don't think that makes sense. I've NCed all around the map with basically period, but why suddenly change there?

00:37:106 (1) - Move the red point of the slider to X: 40 Y: 296 ? What do you mean by that?

Good Diff Thanks

Thanks for mod

수정본

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Dog Days.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54058
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:No Limit
Artist:Mizuki Nana
ArtistUnicode:水樹奈々
Creator:Taeyang
Version:Doyak's Normal
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Tags:Dog Days" opening Doyak eINess
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Mekki

Mekki 2015-06-20T19:59:25+00:00

00:37:106 (1) - Move the red point of the slider to X: 40 Y: 296 ? What do you mean by that? [b]No . I'm sorry . at this slider 01:24:572 (4) - hehehe

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-06-20T21:06:48+00:00

맵제작자가 하는 자기맵 모딩

Doyak's Normal

00:06:284 (6,1) - 여기 드럼 에디션 피니시 넣으셨는데 (아이네스님,제맵 에는 안넣음) 뺴셔도 되고 넣을거면 일관성있게
00:08:339 (4,6,1) - 여기도 넣어주면 좋을것 같습니다.
00:12:448 - 00:12:756 - 드럼 에디션 클랍 00:13:065 - 드럼 에디션 피니시 추가 힛사 없는것이 어색함
00:11:626 (5) - 뉴콤해제? 00:06:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:13:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 앞뒤로 뉴콤턴 맞추기위해
00:16:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - 슬라 이정도로 펴주면 좋을것 같습니다. 00:16:558 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 둥근슬라만 있어서 중간에 하나 직선 섞어주면 좋을듯
이건 취향차이이니 맘에들면 냅둬도 상관없습니다.
SPOILER
00:25:085 - 소리 있습니다. 아래리듬 이나 혹은 맘에드는걸로 바꾸면 좋을듯
SPOILER
위에 추천 배치 더좋은게 있거나 맘에드는게 있다면 그걸로 하셔도 상관없!
SPOILER
00:25:599 (5,1) - 여길 스택
00:57:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 리듬 00:59:092 (4) - 이거 지웠으면 아래는 배치(더좋은게있다면 그걸로 하셔도 상관없)
SPOILER
01:00:736 (1,2,3) - 흐름이 약간.. 01:01:352 (2,3) - 이걸 좀 아래로? 01:00:736 (1,5) - 이거 평행 가급적이면 01:00:530 (6,1) - 01:01:352 (2,3) - 스택
둘중하나는 해제하는편이 좋을것 같습니다.
SPOILER
01:00:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 리듬 보컬음 따라같다면 이리듬이 가장 좋을듯한? 적당히 봐서 고치거나 하면 좋을것 같습니다.
(01:02:380 (5) - 여길 리버스로 보컬잡는게 포인트)
SPOILER
01:14:914 (6,7) - 어려움 리듬 01:14:914 (6) - 스택 보단 리버스 그뒤 01:14:914 (6,1) - 평행
SPOILER
[img]01:14:092%20(4,5,6)%20-[/img]
00:19:846 (2) - 01:22:311 (2) - 휘슬추가
01:22:311 (2) - 좀만 펴주세요
SPOILER
01:25:599 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 바이올린 소리 맞춰서
SPOILER

eINess' Insane

00:11:627 (1,2,3,1) - 3과 1사이에 거리를 뉴콤으로 차이를 뒀긴해도 그래도 리딩적으로 헷갈릴수있는데 1.8DS 고정으로 이런배치는어떤가요
SPOILER
00:13:066 (2,3) - 드럼 피니시 에디션으로?
00:16:148 (1) - 의도한건 알겠지만 슬라변속 없는데 뉴콤 스팸 일지도?
00:19:025 (1) - 뉴콤 해제? 그냥 다운비트 뉴콤 쓰는게 어떨까요?
00:25:085 - 드럼소리가 여기있는데 이리듬이 더 좋지 않을까요?
SPOILER
01:15:121 (5,6) - 위의 도약님 말씀대로 1/6
01:17:997 (4) - 피니시 추가 아니면 00:15:531 (4) - 여길 제거
01:20:256 (1) - 피니시 넣을곳은 아닌것 같은?
01:20:256 (1) - 뉴콤 제거 01:20:462 - 슬라 여기까지 끊고01:20:667 - 여기 서클추가 해서 뉴콤

ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

2,724 posts

Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2015-06-21T04:15:51+00:00

asdasd hi o/

[easy]

Im not agree with DS!, feels too away, and did it more difficult. Pls, consider change DS to 1.0x, its better for a easy diff!
00:02:585 - 00:05:873 - this without whistles feels too void... pls, add whistles.
00:09:572 - you are missing a drum here... try to move the red note to here.
00:11:626 (1,2,1) - this flow will be difficult... meh idk xD
00:21:489 (3,4) - This will feels better imo:
00:36:284 (1) - A litte detail.. but will be very nice:
00:49:435 (1) - its not 100% symmetric (?) hahahaa

[Doyak's Normal]

In general... this feels difficult for a normal diff... my suggestion is try to find better rhythms for simplified the polarity issues.
00:25:393 (5) - This feels better:
00:40:393 (2) - 00:46:969 (2) - because the slider tail is over the flow... this feels a bit wrong imo... I think is better if you move a bit to right/up.
00:54:983 (2,3) - try Ctrl+G?? feels better, imo.
01:00:941 - will be bad idea if you ignore this note :/

[hard]

00:20:873 (3,4) - jump betwee (3) and (4) feels wrong (but between (4) and (1), is fine).
00:35:051 (2) - 00:51:284 (1) - bad stack?
00:45:633 - this feels overmaped here... pls, delete the circle and do the slider a bit more long.
01:15:736 (1) - Improve blanket pls.
01:27:243 (6) - looks ugly
01:28:065 (1,2,3) - This was difficult to read... and... the flow will be more smooth if you do Ctrl+G to 01:28:373 (2,3) - :3

[Insane]

00:20:051 (2,3,4) - here will be same like 00:27:037 (2,3) -
00:50:256 (4,6) - may be??
00:55:496 (6) - it is overmapped. (but in 00:55:085 - miss a beat)
01:01:044 (2) - overmapped. (miss a beat in 01:00:839 - )
etc... pls, be careful with overmapping!!

[elNess Insane]

00:42:756 - why not a continuous stream??

Good luck o/

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-06-21T05:03:51+00:00

I think what's more important is the difficulty spread, rather than if it's hard for Easy/Normal etc. Easy has big DS, but still its difficulty can be said as Easy rather than Normal. My Normal has relatively harder rhythm than Easy and a little bit of higher SV and distance, but it should be Normal rather than Hard. The only absolute "rule" is 'lowest difficulty < 2.0 stars' and it fits to that, and the spread seems not too bad for me. I would try to simply some rhythm though, for more safety.

I'll check the mods when I get ready, I'm returning to hometown now

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-06-21T08:35:47+00:00

sukiNathan wrote:
M4M

[eIness' Insane]
00:25:829 (1) - This extended slider feels forced, there is a beat on the red tick and the held sound the slider is emphasizing get's weak towards the end anyways, I would just shorten it to the red tick
00:54:082 (2) - I understand you're trying to emphasize the synth here, but two circles would allow that white tick to also be emphasized and prevent a blue tick start, it also brings more impact when hitting 00:54:391 (3) // feel awkward to me.. >_>
01:10:315 (3) - Don't see why this repeat starts on a blue tick, I'd just extend by one and have it start on a white tick

nice
good luck!

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
asdasd hi o/

[elNess Insane]
00:42:756 - why not a continuous stream?? // I want to emphasize 00:42:860 (1) - sound

Good luck o/

Doyak wrote:
아이네스님: 01:15:121 (5,6) - 여기 잘 들어보시면 1/4 1/8*3이 아니라 1/6 4개입니다. // 이어폰 상태가 지난주부터 이상해서 캇한태 확인 해봤더니 맞다네요. 감사합니다 :)

Taeyang wrote:
맵제작자가 하는 자기맵 모딩

eINess' Insane
00:11:627 (1,2,3,1) - 3과 1사이에 거리를 뉴콤으로 차이를 뒀긴해도 그래도 리딩적으로 헷갈릴수있는데 1.8DS 고정으로 이런배치는어떤가요
SPOILER
00:13:066 (2,3) - 드럼 피니시 에디션으로? // 피아노 강조하고싶음
00:16:148 (1) - 의도한건 알겠지만 슬라변속 없는데 뉴콤 스팸 일지도?
// 점프거리 보세요. 넣는 편이 오히려 리딩 하기 편함. 노래랑도 어울리는 뉴콤이고
00:19:025 (1) - 뉴콤 해제? 그냥 다운비트 뉴콤 쓰는게 어떨까요? // 위랑 똑같은 이유고 인센 유니크라고 생각하면 문제 될거없음.
00:25:085 - 드럼소리가 여기있는데 이리듬이 더 좋지 않을까요? // 앞쪽 패턴이랑 맞춰주는게 오히려 플레이하기 좋음 그리고 약드럼이러 굳이 맞출만큼 필요하지는 않을듯
SPOILER
01:15:121 (5,6) - 위의 도약님 말씀대로 1/6
01:17:997 (4) - 피니시 추가 아니면 00:15:531 (4) - 여길 제거 // 있는 소리라 제거 하면 어색하고 앞쪽에 말한곳에 피니쉬 넣으면 01:18:614 (7) - 이쪽이 리듬 더 강조되는데 밸런스 망가짐.
01:20:256 (1) - 피니시 넣을곳은 아닌것 같은?
01:20:256 (1) - 뉴콤 제거 01:20:462 - 슬라 여기까지 끊고01:20:667 - 여기 서클추가 해서 뉴콤 // 매핑하면서 드럼이 아니라 백그라운드 위주로 따라가서... 지금이 휠씬 좋음

thanks mod

osu file format v14

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Lama Poluna

796 posts

Joined June 2014

Lama Poluna 2015-06-22T07:16:58+00:00

Hi, M4M :3

Easy

00:23:133 (1) - Why not add clap at the end of the slider?
00:52:825 (1) - Can add another spinner?

Doyak's Normal

00:28:065 (4,5,6) - Why not make a semi-circle? As here -> http://puu.sh/iy207/371fa14d80.jpg. Be customized by distance 00:29:709 (1).
01:13:270 (2) - Make the slider a little neater.As here -> http://puu.sh/iy2cj/9566b8b593.jpg.

Hard

00:13:065 (3,4,1) - Add a triple stack.

00:32:277 - Add the note.

Insane

01:28:373 (2) - Move 512/72.
I just couldn't do anything more to find (ﾉω･､)

eINess' Insane

00:14:093 (4) - Move 456/68.
00:17:792 (6) - Do something like this : http://puu.sh/iy9Gf/51c1ccbd76.jpg .
00:54:162 (3) - Move 144/24.
01:04:230 (1) - Do something like this : http://puu.sh/iy9Ou/8a4d227a93.jpg .
01:10:805 (1) - A little to the side 148/300.

That's all. Gl <(￣︶￣)>

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-06-22T07:29:34+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
맵제작자가 하는 자기맵 모딩

Doyak's Normal
00:06:284 (6,1) - 여기 드럼 에디션 피니시 넣으셨는데 (아이네스님,제맵 에는 안넣음) 뺴셔도 되고 넣을거면 일관성있게
00:08:339 (4,6,1) - 여기도 넣어주면 좋을것 같습니다.
00:12:448 - 00:12:756 - 드럼 에디션 클랍 00:13:065 - 드럼 에디션 피니시 추가 힛사 없는것이 어색함
00:11:626 (5) - 뉴콤해제? 00:06:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:13:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 앞뒤로 뉴콤턴 맞추기위해
00:16:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - 슬라 이정도로 펴주면 좋을것 같습니다. 00:16:558 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 둥근슬라만 있어서 중간에 하나 직선 섞어주면 좋을듯
이건 취향차이이니 맘에들면 냅둬도 상관없습니다.
SPOILER
00:25:085 - 소리 있습니다. 아래리듬 이나 혹은 맘에드는걸로 바꾸면 좋을듯
SPOILER
위에 추천 배치 더좋은게 있거나 맘에드는게 있다면 그걸로 하셔도 상관없!
SPOILER
00:25:599 (5,1) - 여길 스택
00:57:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 리듬 00:59:092 (4) - 이거 지웠으면 아래는 배치(더좋은게있다면 그걸로 하셔도 상관없)
SPOILER
01:00:736 (1,2,3) - 흐름이 약간.. 01:01:352 (2,3) - 이걸 좀 아래로? 01:00:736 (1,5) - 이거 평행 가급적이면 01:00:530 (6,1) - 01:01:352 (2,3) - 스택
둘중하나는 해제하는편이 좋을것 같습니다.
SPOILER
01:00:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 리듬 보컬음 따라같다면 이리듬이 가장 좋을듯한? 적당히 봐서 고치거나 하면 좋을것 같습니다.
(01:02:380 (5) - 여길 리버스로 보컬잡는게 포인트)
SPOILER
01:14:914 (6,7) - 어려움 리듬 01:14:914 (6) - 스택 보단 리버스 그뒤 01:14:914 (6,1) - 평행
SPOILER
[img]01:14:092%20(4,5,6)%20-[/img]
00:19:846 (2) - 01:22:311 (2) - 휘슬추가
01:22:311 (2) - 좀만 펴주세요
SPOILER
01:25:599 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 바이올린 소리 맞춰서
SPOILER

쭉 다 고쳐봤습니다! 수정하고 이어나가기 애매해진 부분만 조금 변형시켜봤어요.

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[Doyak's Normal]
In general... this feels difficult for a normal diff... my suggestion is try to find better rhythms for simplified the polarity issues.
00:25:393 (5) - This feels better: Taeyang's idea and I like that more.
00:40:393 (2) - 00:46:969 (2) - because the slider tail is over the flow... this feels a bit wrong imo... I think is better if you move a bit to right/up. Changed a little bit.
00:54:983 (2,3) - try Ctrl+G?? feels better, imo. Yeah, that actually looks good.
01:00:941 - will be bad idea if you ignore this note :/ I've been following the vocal mostly and there's definitely where I should make it as a slider body.

Thanks for mod

Lama Poluna wrote:
Doyak's Normal

00:28:065 (4,5,6) - Why not make a semi-circle? As here -> http://puu.sh/iy207/371fa14d80.jpg. Be customized by distance 00:29:709 (1). I didn't understand your word, but maybe you mean I can make the movement more round? So I changed it like that.
01:13:270 (2) - Make the slider a little neater.As here -> http://puu.sh/iy2cj/9566b8b593.jpg. I don't see a difference than now, so I'll skip it.

Thanks

재수정본

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Zetera

Medal Hunter

1,019 posts

Joined November 2010

Zetera 2015-06-22T15:22:48+00:00

Hi, here's my M4M-part.

[General]

I suggest using the same Kiais as in eIness' diff.

[Easy]

|00:37:928 (3) - This would look a bit better if the slidertick was in the middle of the previous slider's tail.

---
Nothing else to say, good diff.

[Normal]

|00:28:681 (5,6) - If you move this a bit more down and to the right, you will have a more round shape with 00:28:065 (4) - .
|What about making 00:39:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:46:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - the same?

[Hard]

|01:02:380 (1) - This slider breaks your clap chain. It's good that you followed the vocals, but I think you should use an object at 01:02:996 - .
|01:28:065 (1) - Wanna make a triplet out of that?

[Insane]

|00:10:804 (5) - Delete the clap, I think this one is too much. I see what you did, but I think keeping the low density is the better solution.
|01:22:517 (2,3,4) - You might want to lay some more focus on 01:22:722 - , you can do this with a sliderjump like this.
|01:28:373 (2) - A curve looks a bit better (Example)
|01:03:818 (5,6) - Cool alternate rhythm, but it might be too confusing.
|01:09:572 (2,3,4,5) - Could be a better-looking square.
|01:16:969 - Should be a clickable beat.
|01:26:421 (4,5,6,7,8) - Using Ctrl H and Ctrl J, this will flow better. But recreate slider 8.

[eIness' Insane]

Love it, but there is one thing that bothers me.

|00:51:489 - This spinner simply doesn't fit density-wise.There are plenty of drums in the background that you can follow.

Good Luck!

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

kamisamaaa 2015-06-24T13:17:28+00:00

M4M

eIness's Insane

00:04:847 (6,7,1) - ctrl+J? flow will better imo.
00:12:962- add a note here? because the sound here is same with 00:13:066 (2,3) - and much louder
01:27:655 (2) - why not set this at 255,339 ? make a line with 01:27:244 (1,1) - these two

Insane

00:08:133 (3) - why not use a 1/4 slider like before 00:04:846 (3) -
00:46:044- here miss a note? this sound is strong. I think you should add a note to express it
01:05:154- same here
00:53:852- same here
01:23:955 (1) - end this slider at 01:24:161- and add a whihstle will sound better imo. because you add whistle at this part really sounds exciting. If here miss one feel very bad.

good map almost nothing to say

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-06-25T04:54:55+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
asdasd hi o/

[easy]
Im not agree with DS!, feels too away, and did it more difficult. Pls, consider change DS to 1.0x, its better for a easy diff!
i think it's fine this is 146BPM
00:02:585 - 00:05:873 - this without whistles feels too void... pls, add whistles.
no i didn't agree 00:00:941 - 00:04:229 - here didn't added
00:09:572 - you are missing a drum here... try to move the red note to here.
fixed
00:11:626 (1,2,1) - this flow will be difficult... meh idk xD
fixed
00:21:489 (3,4) - This will feels better imo:

fixed
00:36:284 (1) - A litte detail.. but will be very nice:

fixed
00:49:435 (1) - its not 100% symmetric (?) hahahaa
fixed
[hard]
00:20:873 (3,4) - jump betwee (3) and (4) feels wrong (but between (4) and (1), is fine).
fixed
00:35:051 (2) - 00:51:284 (1) - bad stack?
fixed
00:45:633 - this feels overmaped here... pls, delete the circle and do the slider a bit more long.
fixed
01:15:736 (1) - Improve blanket pls.
fixed
01:27:243 (6) - looks ugly
i want this slide
01:28:065 (1,2,3) - This was difficult to read... and... the flow will be more smooth if you do Ctrl+G to 01:28:373 (2,3) - :3
fixed

[Insane]
00:20:051 (2,3,4) - here will be same like 00:27:037 (2,3) -
it's fine
00:50:256 (4,6) - may be??

fixed
00:55:496 (6) - it is overmapped. (but in 00:55:085 - miss a beat)
fixed
01:01:044 (2) - overmapped. (miss a beat in 01:00:839 - )
that's fine
etc... pls, be careful with overmapping!!
Good luck o/

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-06-25T05:07:46+00:00

Lama Poluna wrote:
Hi, M4M :3

Easy

00:23:133 (1) - Why not add clap at the end of the slider?
fixed
00:52:825 (1) - Can add another spinner?
that's unrankable

Hard

00:13:065 (3,4,1) - Add a triple stack.
fixed
00:32:277 - Add the note.

Insane

01:28:373 (2) - Move 512/72.
fixed
I just couldn't do anything more to find (ﾉω･､)

That's all. Gl <(￣︶￣)>

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-06-25T05:56:41+00:00

Sala- wrote:
Hi, here's my M4M-part.

[Easy]

|00:37:928 (3) - This would look a bit better if the slidertick was in the middle of the previous slider's tail.
fixed
Nothing else to say, good diff.

[Hard]

|01:02:380 (1) - This slider breaks your clap chain. It's good that you followed the vocals, but I think you should use an object at 01:02:996 - .
fixed
|01:28:065 (1) - Wanna make a triplet out of that?
i dont want

[Insane]

|00:10:804 (5) - Delete the clap, I think this one is too much. I see what you did, but I think keeping the low density is the better solution.
fixed
|01:22:517 (2,3,4) - You might want to lay some more focus on 01:22:722 - , you can do this with a sliderjump like this.
i dont want that but i will consider
|01:28:373 (2) - A curve looks a bit better (Example)
i dont want overlap
|01:03:818 (5,6) - Cool alternate rhythm, but it might be too confusing.
but this rhythm fine
|01:09:572 (2,3,4,5) - Could be a better-looking square.
fixed
|01:16:969 - Should be a clickable beat.
fixed
|01:26:421 (4,5,6,7,8) - Using Ctrl H and Ctrl J, this will flow better. But recreate slider 8.
i dont want taht
Good Luck!

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-06-25T06:05:22+00:00

kamisamaaa wrote:

M4M

[notice][list:1337]
Insane
00:08:133 (3) - why not use a 1/4 slider like before 00:04:846 (3) -
i used jump
00:46:044- here miss a note? this sound is strong. I think you should add a note to express it
01:05:154- same here
00:53:852- same here
i followed vocal rhythm so i dont want add circle
01:23:955 (1) - end this slider at 01:24:161- and add a whihstle will sound better imo. because you add whistle at this part really sounds exciting. If here miss one feel very bad.
fixed

good map almost nothing to say

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,686 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2015-06-25T07:34:59+00:00

ticket

[General]

Source must be changed < DOG DAYS" >
Metadata source : http://www.dogdays.tv/music/
title source

[Easy]

00:21:489 (3,1) - missing distance snap
01:23:955 (4,1) - ^

[Normal]

00:01:044 (2) - missing distance snap
00:29:709 (1,2) - ^
00:44:298 (4) - ^
01:02:174 (4) - ^

[Hard]

00:24:777 (1,2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this
00:34:229 (5) - This spacing is really awkward. please changed another pattern. I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please.
01:18:613 (3) - same as above.
01:27:243 (6) - i think add nc here.

other diff looks fine.
really nice mapset :3
call me back ~

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-06-25T08:12:46+00:00

Satellite wrote:
ticket

[General]
Source must be changed < DOG DAYS" >
Metadata source : http://www.dogdays.tv/music/
title source
fixed
[Easy]
00:21:489 (3,1) - missing distance snap
01:23:955 (4,1) - ^
[Normal]
00:01:044 (2) - missing distance snap
00:29:709 (1,2) - ^
00:44:298 (4) - ^
01:02:174 (4) - ^
[Hard]
00:24:777 (1,2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this
00:34:229 (5) - This spacing is really awkward. please changed another pattern. I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please.
01:18:613 (3) - same as above.
01:27:243 (6) - i think add nc here.
other diff looks fine.
really nice mapset :3
call me back ~

i fixed all thanks~

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,686 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2015-06-25T08:34:23+00:00

tag : remove dog days"

Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-06-25T08:44:41+00:00

Satellite wrote:
tag : remove dog days"

~~Why? This is opening of that anime...~~

I got it, sorry.

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-06-25T09:00:06+00:00

Lama Poluna wrote:
Hi, M4M :3

eINess' Insane

00:14:093 (4) - Move 456/68. //no, I want to emphasize clap sounds
00:17:792 (6) - Do something like this : http://puu.sh/iy9Gf/51c1ccbd76.jpg .
00:54:162 (3) - Move 144/24.
01:04:230 (1) - Do something like this : http://puu.sh/iy9Ou/8a4d227a93.jpg .
01:10:805 (1) - A little to the side 148/300. // looks fine to me

That's all. Gl <(￣︶￣)>

Sala- wrote:
Hi, here's my M4M-part.

[eIness' Insane]

Love it, but there is one thing that bothers me.

|00:51:489 - This spinner simply doesn't fit density-wise.There are plenty of drums in the background that you can follow. // but Idk how I make more better to play than now. have any idea? owo

Good Luck!

kamisamaaa wrote:

M4M

eIness's Insane
00:04:847 (6,7,1) - ctrl+J? flow will better imo.
00:12:962- add a note here? because the sound here is same with 00:13:066 (2,3) - and much louder // follow ring* sounds
01:27:655 (2) - why not set this at 255,339 ? make a line with 01:27:244 (1,1) - these two // coz that's placement make better to play.

good map almost nothing to say

others all fixed

thanks mod owo~

SPOILER

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-06-25T09:17:09+00:00

Sala- wrote:
[Normal]

|00:28:681 (5,6) - If you move this a bit more down and to the right, you will have a more round shape with 00:28:065 (4) - . Hmm it's not very intended to make it round... but okay.
|What about making 00:39:572 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:46:147 (1,2,3,4,5) - the same? As like Taeyang did on his diffs, I'd like to keep this rhythm.

Thanks for mod

수정했습니다. 이걸로 될까요...

osu file format v14

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182,95,77380,2,0,P|221:90|258:65,1,82.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,20,77996,2,0,L|356:140,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,188,78613,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,284,79024,6,0,P|364:304|392:336,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,376,79640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,376,79846,2,0,P|436:308|472:280,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,236,80462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
504,236,80667,2,0,L|472:128,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,32,81489,6,0,P|444:12|492:16,2,82.5,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,75,82311,1,2,0:0:0:0:
373,195,82722,6,0,P|372:260|355:301,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,347,83339,2,0,L|255:344,1,55,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
197,241,83955,2,0,P|162:267|144:304,1,82.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,344,84572,2,0,B|40:292|40:292|64:245,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,193,85188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,89,85599,6,0,P|202:139|214:185,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,238,86215,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,298,86421,2,0,L|104:334,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,347,87654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
391,248,88065,6,0,P|415:208|419:168,1,82.5,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,84,88681,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined June 2012

Satellite 2015-06-25T10:46:02+00:00

irc mod with mapper. fixed some missing ds and video offset. looks fine to me. so bubbled ~

HabiHolic

5,399 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-06-25T14:28:53+00:00

Ok, here is modding

[General]

None

[Easy]

00:19:024 (4) - 시작부분 피니쉬 빼시는게 더 자연스러울듯 싶네요. 그렇게 강조할 필요도 없고 도약님처럼 보컬만 강조하면 안어색한데. 유독 저거는..
01:28:065 (4) - NC? 보컬이 워낙 앞보다 강조됐으니까 여기는 뉴콤이 훨씬 나아보여요

[Doyak's Normal]

00:25:599 (5) - 클랩
00:51:078 (1) - 이거 100퍼 언랭입니다. 스피너 끝나기 전에 노트 보이면 안되요 이지처럼 00:52:722 - 여기까지 줄이세요

[Hard]

01:27:243 (1) - 이런 박자보다는 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3301183 이런 박자가 나은듯

[Insane]

01:14:092 (1,2) - 이거 그냥 1/1로 길게 빼시는게 리듬이 훨씬 좋아보이는것 같음..

[eINess' Insane]

01:13:989 - 여기 연타 잘어울리는데 굳이 안넣으신 이유를 모르겠네요.. 여기도 넣어보시는게 어떠신가요?

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Ujimatsu Chiya

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Ujimatsu Chiya 2015-06-25T15:02:03+00:00

01:14:093 (1) - 정말 강조될만한 강한 음이 아니라면 저는 01:14:093 (1) - 이쪾 피니쉬를 강조하고싶어 점프를 넣었습니다.

모딩 감사합니다 owo~

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-06-25T15:05:42+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Ok, here is modding

[General]

None

[Easy]

00:19:024 (4) - 시작부분 피니쉬 빼시는게 더 자연스러울듯 싶네요. 그렇게 강조할 필요도 없고 도약님처럼 보컬만 강조하면 안어색한데. 유독 저거는..
그러기엔 하드,인센에 저부분 강조해서 넣어줬기때문에... 여기도 01:22:722 (2) - 일관성있게 넣어줬고요
하드,인센부분도 확인해보시고 그래도 안어울린다고 하신다면 빼도록 하겠습니다.
01:28:065 (4) - NC? 보컬이 워낙 앞보다 강조됐으니까 여기는 뉴콤이 훨씬 나아보여요
수정완료!

[Hard]

01:27:243 (1) - 이런 박자보다는 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3301183 이런 박자가 나은듯
제나름대로 드럼박자 맞춰서 고쳐봤습니다.
[Insane]

01:14:092 (1,2) - 이거 그냥 1/1로 길게 빼시는게 리듬이 훨씬 좋아보이는것 같음..
수정완료!

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2015-06-25T15:19:31+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
[Doyak's Normal]

00:25:599 (5) - 클랩
00:51:078 (1) - 이거 100퍼 언랭입니다. 스피너 끝나기 전에 노트 보이면 안되요 이지처럼 00:52:722 - 여기까지 줄이세요

모두 태양님께 직접 수정 요청했습니다. 모딩 감사합니다!

HabiHolic

5,399 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-06-25T15:59:56+00:00

Ranked

Nozhomi

Global Moderator

4,569 posts

Joined May 2013

Nozhomi 2015-06-25T16:17:41+00:00

Well I'm late on this one. Gratz.
Call me for mod one of your other maps (if you have one who need mods).

Hiyori

151 posts

Joined May 2015

Hiyori 2015-06-26T10:27:57+00:00

Whoah! Taeyang Congrats

Nomination Assessment Team

182 posts

Joined August 2014

Nomination Assessment Team 2015-07-01T13:53:49+00:00

Disqualification Notice

Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

eINess' Insane

Incorrectly snapped object

01:15:222 (6) - There is no sound and it doesn't fit the music. Therefore it should be 1/6: http://puu.sh/iJthd/a98825f5d3.jpg

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck!

###C

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Taeyang 2015-07-01T15:25:21+00:00

고췸~
fixed

HabiHolic

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Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-07-02T02:52:02+00:00

미안해요.....

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined June 2012

Satellite 2015-07-03T16:00:07+00:00

re

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

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Okoratu 2015-07-03T18:12:51+00:00

wb

Hiyori

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Joined May 2015

Hiyori 2015-07-28T11:57:10+00:00

Yay!

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