Hi.
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- 00:27:593 (1,2,3) - Maybe this would flow nicer: http://puu.sh/n7Q10/5aa8685857.jpg
- 00:54:677 - No need to pull the break out here. Just let it start at the natural place.
- 01:47:593 (1) - The shape of this slider has room for improvement. It would look prettier if you made the inner edge of the top part more circular, like this: http://puu.sh/n7QCI/5af3ca7d35.jpg
- 02:39:885 (5,6,7,1) - The flow here is pretty awkward. It's hard to rearrange the placement with this rhythm, but maybe you could change the rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/n7QZc/c327fb05ea.jpg
- 02:53:635 (7,8) - Stack is slightly off.
- 02:54:468 - Again, no need to pull the break out there. Just leave it.
- 03:27:593 - Move the start of the break here. It makes more sense.
- Same stuff about breaks as in Normal.
- 01:20:302 - I'm not hearing drum in the song on this tick. Maybe you should remove the repeat.
- 01:28:323 - There's a snare drum sound here in the song, so maybe you could add a circle here for a triple.
- 01:31:343 (1) - Unnecessary new combo.
- 02:29:885 (2,3,4) - Fix stack.
- 02:48:218 (2,3) - Same as 01:28:323
- 03:39:885 (1,2,3) - Fix stack.
- Same stuff about breaks as in Normal.
- 00:52:802 (1,2,3) - Fix stack.
- 00:53:635 (1,2,3,1) - I think you can make the spacing larger here. It would be nice to have some jumps in Lunatic diff, and especially between (3,1) to give stronger emphasis on the downbeat.
- 03:24:885 (2,3,4) - Fix stack.