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Yellow Zebra - Darling Star

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Yes_old
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Yes_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, November 12, 2009 at 7:02:49 PM

Artist: Yellow Zebra
Title: Darling Star
Source: Moment of Impulse
Tags: Touhou Marisa roxkyuubiforever Metroid
BPM: 130
Filesize: 7934kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.96 stars, 549 notes)
  2. Metroid Mix (4.4 stars, 302 notes)
  3. Normal (4.23 stars, 347 notes)
  4. Puzzle Sliderz (2.73 stars, 97 notes)
  5. Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 663 notes)
Download: Yellow Zebra - Darling Star
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This song is a vocalized remix of Vessel of Stars ~ Casket of Star. (:


Special thanksss to roxkyuubiforever for [Puzzle Sliderz], Metroid for [Metroid Mix] and Cyclone for the comboburst. <3
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Torran
724 posts
Joined November 2008
Torran

Yes wrote:

work in progress ._. i fail at finding offset
Your offset's not bad, just a bit early
BPM 130
Offset 4715

Starred!
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
Thank you!
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Diff wip for a while.

Star for now :D
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
n____n Thanks for star!
Lame_old
2 posts
Joined May 2009
Lame_old
Nice map :D
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
timing fine, Good Job~
IMO the countdown don't fit the song very good. remove it.

RoxK.:
no modding coz it haven't finish ;)

Normal:
small spacing problem could be ignored,but i think the spacing below are confused(although i could pass them at the first time XD)
00:59:63 (3,4) -; 02:21:09 (4,1) -; 02:07:71 (1,2,3,4) -

Taiko:
actually i don't know how to mod a taiko map ;_;

Hard:
HP drain rate seems a bit too fast,but it's fine when i play it third time. leave it or change it, as your wish.
seems i just could do spacing modding jobs :(
01:21:33 (5,6) - ; 02:43:48 (1,2,3) -

actually it is a good map that i could only do seldom on it(maybe if i do nazi jod i could post a lot XD).

stard~
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
[General]
... WHERE IS the beat's volume? It's too low... try to raise it a bit...

RoxK. Puzzle Sliders
00:21:09 (3) - finish and whistle this slider's end
00:23:17 (1) - finish this slider's start
00:41:63 (1,2,3) - start (or end, your choise) the sliders with whistles, finish the beat
00:58:02 (spinner) - set kiai time in the end of this slider
01:00:56 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62) - looks like a work in progress... try to set an intelligent beat spacing for these beats... plus, set claps on 6th, 14th, 22nd, 30th, 31st, 39th, 46th, 47th, and 55th (clap and finish on 61st and 62nd). Remember to set new combos! (maybe every after a clap beat...)

Normal
00:37:02 (2,3) - soft finish here
01:00:09 (4) - kiai time from here to the break. If you do it, set new combo ^^
01:21:56 (4) - clap the whole slider
02:28:71 (5) - kiai time from here until the end

Hard
01:00:09 (5) - like Normal mode...
02:17:63 (5) - new combo here
02:28:71 (5) - kiai time from here until the end. If you do it, set new combo (pretty symmetrical, isn't it? ^^)

Taiko
... it's perfect-don! :3 (Remiember to set kiai time as seen on the other modes... u.u)

A funny and catchy song with good rhythm and some pesky jumps... Star 4 you ;)
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Since this is a WIP, I won't fully mod it yet, but i'll give you this at least.

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER
Video: No
SB (Story Board): No
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 11.00 MB / 10.00 MB (Please get the .mp3 compressed.)
Source: No (Please add in the Source to all difficulties.)
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags to all difficulties.)

When the map is done, forum PM me again. I normally don't star without really modding the map first, sorry.
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
o(^v')b
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
hmm.. I have nothing to do. Because well done. :)

By the way

[Normal]
HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty is very low.
It seems to easier but this map is actually a little bit hard. It has hard spacing. :P
I suggest these values.
HP DR : 2 → 4
OD : 3 → 5
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Normal:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
01:45:56 (1) - before the break, there wouldn't be a new combo here, but after the break, there are new combos in this location and ones similar to it. I advise you make the whole song consistent

Timing section mod:
01:07:12 - the hitsound volume and type for this timing section is the same as the previous one, please remove it
You might want to consider adding kiai to the chorus

Hard:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:30:79 (1) - remove new combo for consistency
00:31:71 (1) - ^
00:57:09 (1) - ^
01:14:17 (6) - new combo?
01:45:56 (1) - same as normal

Timing section mod:
00:52:23 - move a quarter note forward
You might want to consider adding kiai to the chorus

Nice map so far. Star.
If you want me to mod the easy difff, call me back when it is finished.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Here! Made my diff :D
Soryy for the long time that I took to make it and I hope that you like the storyboarded hit sounds.
ps.: I'm sending too a "Normal-hitclap.wav" that is the normal one but my diff will not work if you don't add this one.
Download: Diff and Hit Sound.rar

yey! /o/
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
yay! uploaded n___n thanks a lot roxkyuubi<333333

okie. i decided not to put kiai in (maybe i'll change my mind later) because the song is short and i wouldnt want kiai going on for half the song.

i didn't make the difficulty much higher for [normal] because i want to keep the rating at 4 stars but i did raise it a little.

thanks so much for modding<3 and thanks siriru for starrrr~!
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
puzzle sliders:
00:37:48 (1) - why not make this symmetric?
00:50:63 (2) - sounds too short to me...extend to 00:51:33?

normal:
00:21:09 (6) - awesome (had to say it)
no problems here

hard:
01:07:83 (2) - 1 tick down?
02:46:59 (2,3) - doesnt look nice to me

taiko:
cant mod this :/

nicely done map
*star*
nullPointLOL
99 posts
Joined September 2008
nullPointLOL
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2009
orioncomet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
O god, I never modded a Taiko. If I say something wrong, please, don't kill me X__X

//Taiko//
  1. 00:16:022(x) - add a note here?
  2. 00:16:253(x) - and here? (w/ whistle)
  3. 00:16:484(x) - n here?
  4. 00:21:907(4) - maybe clap here and not on the (5)?
  5. 01:28:484(3-11) - hum... too manny Claps, I think, Maybe only using on the (5,6,8,9) >__<
Sounds really cool for me.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
updated(: thank youuuu.
PicoLo
188 posts
Joined July 2009
PicoLo
~Star. ;)
mm201
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
mm201
+5ms to the offset or so, but it's not a big deal.

Combo numbers were the only things I could find to fix. Instead of making a long list, I'm posting some .osus with the numbers fixed:

Edit: Wrong thread, right mapper, wtf

Download: Kagamine Rin - I Like You, I Love You (Yes) [Easy].osu

Download: Kagamine Rin - I Like You, I Love You (Yes) [Normal].osu

Download: Kagamine Rin - I Like You, I Love You (Yes) [Hard].osu
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Mystearica
Mystearica
Ok I'm quite tired at the moment so I just gave this a quick play and quick check, I'll just note a couple things:

[Taiko]

I'm not qualified to mod Taiko :p

[Slider]

Ok, but in general spacing seems quite large for an easy difficulty. I've been shot for this by a couple BATs now so I thought I'd just mention it.

01:26:40 (1,2,3) I'd suggest moving this up to space out from the following 1,2 more as that actually tripped me up lol. But then you might want to make everything else closer anyway as it is an easy, I assume.

[Normal]

01:00:09 (4,5,6) - Oh tricky tricky, but I don't really have anything to suggest here.

Pretty nice.

[Hard]

01:37:36 - Redo the break, it shortens a little bit.

I guess that's all! Good job.

Sorry I couldn't be more useful >< ☆
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit. (Assuming that everything else looks okay enough, i'll use a lighter modding style this time.)

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[RoxK. Puzzle Sliders] (Done)

SPOILER
00:30:56 (1,2,3,4) - This set doesn't have the slider curl over the notes neatly like the others.
00:43:25 (4,5,6,7) - ^

Notes: Just some small design stuff to look into. The rest of the map seems fine.

[Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
00:52:25 (3,4) - Looks a bit bunched up together.
00:58:94 (1,2) - ^
01:01:25 (1,2,3) - ^
01:06:09 (2,3) - ^
01:20:17 (4,5) - ^
01:21:09 (3,4) - ^ (A bit more closer together than the other ones.)
01:26:17 (1,2,3) - ^
01:48:09 (1,2,3) - ^
01:51:33 (4,1) - ^
01:55:94 (3,4) - ^
02:02:86 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:05:40 (2,3) - ^
02:09:56 (4,5) - ^
02:16:48 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:18:56 (6,7) - ^
02:24:33 (2,3,4) - ^
02:28:48 (4,5) - ^
02:40:48 (3,4) - ^
02:44:63 (1,2,3) - ^
02:48:79 (6,1) - ^
02:55:02 (2,3) - ^

Notes: Just mostly odd spacing spots around the map. Some notes are slightly bunched together and some are not. It kinda effects the neatness in a way but though to list them out to let you know.

[Taiko] (Exempt from modding)

SPOILER
Notes: Sorry, I don't do well with Taiko... :o

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
01:08:63 (1,2,3,4) - (4) is a bit too close.
01:28:48 (3) - Sounsd like it ends 3/8 late.
01:53:86 (4,5) - The spacing looks more larger than 01:53:17 (2,3).
02:02:17 (5,6,1) - (6) looks a bit off with the spacing here.

Notes: Looks good so far. Just some small things to look at but make sure to check on the rest of the map for any other errors or problems.

Overall: The map seems nice so far. Mostly minor stuff to take care of but the map should be much better after you check into this post. Also, the Download size is still over 10 MB, maybe you can ask someone to help you compress/cut the .mp3 so that it would be less of a burden later on when ranking time comes. Well, as I promised, i'll drop my star in.
mm201
osu! Alumni
4,495 posts
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mm201
So now it's time to actually mod this map:

Puzzle Sliders:
  1. lol I make these sliders all the time without even thinking about it
  2. 01:07:48 (1,2) - With the slow approach rate, it's hard to tell these aren't 1/1s. Please unstack or turn into 1/1s.
Normal:
  1. 01:21:09 (3,4) - Ugly overlap
Taiko:
  1. If taiko maps can even have flaws, I can't find them. =/
Hard:
  1. 01:28:48 (3) - Lengthen by a 1/4.
A bit boring by the end but it looks good.
GbL
332 posts
Joined February 2009
GbL
Offset: 1.022

I think.

[RoxK.]

01:28:48 (1) - Finish[?]

All diffs looks fine, staar. :D :)
Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
The BG is cute :3
SPOILER
Flandre looks like any cute little toddler.

Puzzle Sliders - I LOVE THE PATTERN SLIDERS!
00:24:33 (1) - Don't make this a new combo.
00:28:48 (3) - Add a whistle to the star of the slider.

Normal - if you want me to, I can SB in some nice arrows for the sliders.
00:21:09 (6) - SB a arrow pointing clockwise with the slider?
00:43:25 (7) - Same as ^.

Taiko
Fine to me but I'm not good at modding Taiko.

Hard - Again I can do some SBing for free :3
00:21:33 (1) - move this back by 1/4 and extend by 1/4 to back to where it originally ended.
00:43:25 (7) - Same slider thing as Normal.

starred' for awesomeness.
I hope this gets ranked soon. Go start asking BATs to mod.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
updated :D
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
[RoxK. Puzzle Sliders]
all fine

[Normal]
01:10:94 (7) - move 1 grid to the down(level 3)~nazi~
02:03:09 (2) - move 1 grid to the up(levle 3)~nazi~

[Hard]
all fine

nice mappset.
star*

btw,i like the song :)
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Hu!? Now that I saw that you took off the storyboarded hitsounds o.O
Why? .__.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
o_O i didn't do anything to your difficulty. O_O dunno where it went >______________________<
i guess i'll reload the diff that you posted on here before?
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Ow, now I saw why. There are no "normal-hitclap.wav" on the song foulder. Please, pick the one that is on the Osu-templateskin. And u can chnage my diff name to just Puzzle Sliders ^^ Later I'll give you a logo pick or something like that so you can storyboard my name on the diff =] (RoxK. Puzzle Sliders is ugly and huge X__X)
Yes_old
525 posts
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Topic Starter
Yes_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
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Armin
Puzzle Sliderz
All fine!

-Normal
02:38:868 Clap at the start
02:41:638 Whistle or clap at the start
02:52:022 Clap at the start; remove the clap at the end

Taiko
...°°

Hard
00:21:330 Remove the finish and add a clap?
00:30:791 Remove new combo?
00:58:022 Whistle at the start
01:27:561 Clap
01:28:484 Whistle at the start?

That's all for me. Starred!
Yes_old
525 posts
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Topic Starter
Yes_old
thanks Armin! changed most of the things you mentioned.
Scar
681 posts
Joined January 2009
Scar
Nice
Marisa =3
Star~
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Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Really fun map, great job, <3 jumps.

No problems found, so have a star.
awp
osu! Alumni
11,869 posts
Here since the beginning
awp
Offset's still a tad early...+4ms imo

Anyhow, your mp3's got a couple problems. One, 320kbps is a little too "fine" for osu!; you'd cut the filesize back a fair bit without suffering quality to knock it down to 256kbps

also, you have almost 2 minutes of excess, unused mp3. By shaving the last 90 seconds off the mp3 you'd be dropping the filesize by a good 4MB or so. After modifying the mp3, you may need to readjust the offset.

woooooosh
Yes_old
525 posts
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Topic Starter
Yes_old
okay finally changed the mp3 file >__< i think i need help with finding offset again (or maybe i don't need to change it? not sure o-o)
Torran
724 posts
Joined November 2008
Torran

Yes wrote:

okay finally changed the mp3 file >__< i think i need help with finding offset again (or maybe i don't need to change it? not sure o-o)
Back again for your checkup?
Yup, you don't need to change your offset. :)
Yes_old
525 posts
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Topic Starter
Yes_old
thank you n____________n
Mismagius
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Joined July 2008
Mismagius
Puzzle Sliderz
00:26:40 (7) - clap here?
00:50:63 (2,1) - spacing

Normal
00:21:09 (6) - this is a epic slider, but looks a little confusing
00:21:09 (6) - btw, clap at end?
00:43:25 (7) - what i said @0:21
00:46:94 (3) - [distance snap off] move 3 small squares up and then 1 to right and then fix spacing

Taiko
I don't know how to mod this, sorry @_@

Hard
Awesome.

Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
thanks! fixed :D
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
My logo for my diff :D

Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
oh okie. um >___< where should i put it ._."
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
[Puzzle Sliderz]
  1. 00:43:25 (4) - this slider isn't curved perfect, like the rest is
[Normal]
  1. 01:19:48 (2) - Hidden under slider. Little not important detail.
[Taiko]
My playing abilities sucks, but notes are chosen well and it plays great :)

[Hard]
Perfect. It Plays very naturally.

Good work man. Beatmap is awesome :) Starred of course.
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
I saw this had a taiko difficulty so I had to check it out :D [I actually play taiko]. Anyway, that's where all my suggestions are directed, the other difficulties all seem nice enough, so taiko mod go:

Taiko:

Name this "Taiko Oni" please so Taiko players know what type of difficulty in taiko this is, they would get a shock if they thought it was easy.

00:23:40 (2,3,4) – Remove these for a small break [It still follows the vocals].
00:31:48 (5) – Remove?
00:36:33 (9) – Make this a beat instead of a clap?
00:36:67 Add a beat [Red]
00:37:71 (7,8) – Red beats?
00:40:94 - Add a clap [blue].
00:58:83 – Add a clap.
01:21:90 - Add a clap.
01:22:02 - Clap
01:51:215 - Clap?
01:51:445 – Clap?
01:52:48 (4) – Make a beat instead of a clap?
02:34:94 (4,5,6) – Try clap, clap, beat instead of repeating the same pattern in 02:34:48 (1,2,3).
02:35:868 – Finish beat here? [Big Red]
02:49:71 (4,5,6,7,8,9) – If you are going to use this pattern I recommend adding:
02:50:522 – Add a beat [Clap/Blue]
02:50:638 – Add a beat [Beat/Red]

Overall - If you take any of my suggestions then please rename this “Taiko Oni”. Other than that it plays well and I liked it, so here is your star!
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Storyboard on the beggining >.>
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
UPDATED~

Added a storyboard logo for Easy and made a bunch of changes on Taiko (thanks Shulin!!)
KatanAnime
58 posts
Joined November 2008
KatanAnime
Nice!I Liked the map and the song good job! :P
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Skin:
Force default skin OR add a custom slider-ball.

Hard:
00:43:25 (7) - Not sure if want.Though, if you don't wanna change that slider, don't.

Normal:
00:21:09 (6) - Not sure if want.Though, if you don't wanna change that slider, don't.
00:43:25 (7) - ^

Puzzle Sliders:
Maybe make it more obvious that this diff can be seen as Easy

Oni:
yep.

So the only thing you HAVE to do is the skin thing
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