Naomile - LAST CHRISTMAS

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Topic Starter
Lust
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, December 24, 2013 at 5:38:28 PM

Artist: Naomile
Title: LAST CHRISTMAS
Tags: holidays winter xmas utau
BPM: 123
Filesize: 3700kb
Play Time: 01:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.71 stars, 262 notes)
  2. Normal (2.71 stars, 120 notes)


Download: Naomile - LAST CHRISTMAS
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♥ Merry Christmas! ♥

I'd just wanted to say thank you to everyone who made this year fantastic for me - the friends I met here on osu!, the people that have changed my life in and out of the game, my family, everyone!
My life has changed a lot this past year. Made new friends, lost old ones, but that only made me a stronger person. I lost someone very close to me, and I will never forget what she's done for me. I found this game, which is now taking up a lot of my free time. All in all I do not regret this year one bit, and it is all thanks to you guys! Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New year!

I hope you get what you wish for >w>
DenoisoGoiso
Hi! M4M

[General]
  1. add to tags : Kagamine Len Rin
  2. The offset is 879 (+2)


[Hard]
  • 00:02:340 (4,2) - fix this two stack
    00:03:803 (4) - don't make this too curve.
    00:06:242 (4) - don't try to overlap with next slider
    00:14:291 (5) - Fix distancing
    00:14:535 (1) - don't try to overlap with next slider
    00:14:535 (1,2) - i suggest make blanket here
    00:15:998 (3) - i suggest move it into White Tick. suggestion :
    00:18:194 (5) - this slider is too curve
    00:18:925 (1) - i think NC in here is not Rhythmable. remove nc at 00:18:925 (1) so add nc at 00:18:194 (5)
    00:19:901 (3) - fix stack
    00:53:559 (1) - too curve
    01:00:876 (4,1) - blanket is worse
    01:04:291 - Add break time?
    01:18:681 (6,1) - fix blanket
  1. Please do hitsounding D:


Just that.
Good luck ~
Topic Starter
Lust

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

Hi! M4M

[General]
  1. add to tags : Kagamine Len Rin :o why?
  2. The offset is 879 (+2) its fine how it is


[Hard]
  • 00:02:340 (4,2) - fix this two stack
    00:03:803 (4) - don't make this too curve.
    00:06:242 (4) - don't try to overlap with next slider
    00:14:291 (5) - Fix distancing its fine o.o
    00:14:535 (1) - don't try to overlap with next slider ?
    00:14:535 (1,2) - i suggest make blanket here its fine how it is
    00:15:998 (3) - i suggest move it into White Tick. suggestion :
    00:18:194 (5) - this slider is too curve its fine
    00:18:925 (1) - i think NC in here is not Rhythmable. remove nc at 00:18:925 (1) so add nc at 00:18:194 (5) done
    00:19:901 (3) - fix stack
    00:53:559 (1) - too curve its fine
    01:00:876 (4,1) - blanket is worse fixed
    01:04:291 - Add break time? nah
    01:18:681 (6,1) - fix blanket not really a blanket
  1. Please do hitsounding D:


Just that.
Good luck ~ thanks

not many changes, but thank you anyways!
amir
you asked for it so here it is~~~~ :)

Hard -

00:07:462 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - try a different pattern, this one is too clunky and feels way to compact
00:08:681 (1,2) - change it to this rhythm
00:12:584 (1,2) - switch these
00:14:535 (1) - replace with a circle, the slider gives it a kind of funky rhythm, circle sounds a lot better.
00:15:023 (7) - move this to 00:14:779 - as it will sound a lot better with the change to the slider ^
00:50:389 (2,3) - swap these so they look like this.
00:49:657 (1,2,3) - change to
01:27:462 (2) - ctrl+h then rotate to -97° and place at x:256 y:352
01:42:828 (2) - change to a slider that ends at 01:43:072 - then add a circle at 01:43:316 -
01:07:462 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - change to this rhythm
01:32:340 (5) - replace to a circle
01:47:950 (1) - (THIS IS OPTIONAL) change to this.

sorry would do normal mod but u already kno y i didnt :o
Topic Starter
Lust

Amir wrote:

you asked for it so here it is~~~~ :)<3

Hard -

00:07:462 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - try a different pattern, this one is too clunky and feels way to compact changed around
00:08:681 (1,2) - change it to this rhythm
nah i think it is fine
00:12:584 (1,2) - switch these done
00:14:535 (1) - replace with a circle, the slider gives it a kind of funky rhythm, circle sounds a lot better. i think it sounds fine, but if more people point it out i will change
00:15:023 (7) - move this to 00:14:779 - as it will sound a lot better with the change to the slider ^ read above
00:50:389 (2,3) - swap these so they look like this.
done
00:49:657 (1,2,3) - change to
done
01:27:462 (2) - ctrl+h then rotate to -97° and place at x:256 y:352 not sure what you mean here, it goes off screen if I do what you tell me
01:42:828 (2) - change to a slider that ends at 01:43:072 - then add a circle at 01:43:316 - nah its okay
01:07:462 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - change to this rhythm
unchanged
01:32:340 (5) - replace to a circledone
01:47:950 (1) - (THIS IS OPTIONAL) change to this.
ill keep this in mind, my slider isnt the prettiest xD

sorry would do normal mod but u already kno y i didnt :o

Thank you very much for mod!
YielShelion
hello~

I don't think this map need modding anymore
Its already perfect :)
Hula
Begging for mods off the great modder. Me.

[General]

This song is pretty gay
How about instead of blue you use a white/silvery white, wait more christmassy, also there's skins out there which sparkle, use one of those.

I'm no blanket slider master fyi

[Normal]
00:16:486 (1) - Kind of invert the slider to make it look like this, since it looks crap right now. It's better than nothing http://puu.sh/5GHW6.jpg
00:24:291 (1) - Not stacked properly with the 1 before it should be y:141.
00:49:657 (1) - Not stacked with the 1 before, should be y:189
01:07:218 (1) - Doesn't blanket perfectly, it tapers out where the repeating arrow shit is
01:35:023 (1) - Move this 1 to x:135 y:296
[Hard]
00:11:852 (4) - The beginning of this slider isn't completely in line with the end of slider 2, if it matters?
00:14:535 (1) - Make this slider look like this Imo, (I just flipped it and shit), http://puu.sh/5GHiu.jpg
00:19:901 (4) - Not stacked with the end of that slider
00:21:120 (3) - Rotate this slider by 7 degrees clockwise (selection field thing) Looks like this, http://puu.sh/5GHnL.jpg a blind sight neater if you ask me and in slight keeping with the next set of lsiders. Oh fuck now it's not 1.2x DS, fix that too.
00:24:779 (2) - ^

00:29:169 (3) - Make this parallel to the straight slider before, it's off point by a couple of degrees clockwise.
00:32:828 (2) - Move this a bit up and left to make it a better blanket for the next circle. x: 188, y:144

00:45:511 (5) - Use the same slider as the straight slider before and hit Ctrl+G, it's not parallel.
00:47:950 (2) - Rotate this 7 degrees like earlier
00:50:389 (2) - Not stacked on the end of the previous slider properly
01:30:633 (1) - Not stacked on the end of the slider properly
Topic Starter
Lust
Thanks hula! I changed a bunch
BounceBabe
Hey, just leaving this here. I made a Map Analysis on my YT channel for this map.

Topic Starter
Lust
:o I'm honored, I'll use your criticisms in improving my set!
Hard
Mod because bored.

That song's bad. But well it's christmas. Be nice.

Normal


00:02:340 (3) - I think you should strg + g this. First the flow goes like this:
but if you strg + g it, it's
I think that plays much nicer because you have to change your pace only 2 times, not 3.
OFC you'd have to change the notes afterwards so that it fits.
00:20:876 (2) - ^ same like before. It's just some flow.
Actually I don't have to point out much more than this. It's just that this map plays... boring. Try to put some more interesting pattern or a pretty slider in it. Even if it's a normal only 1/1 and 1/2 are like no.


Hard


00:12:828 - I think you should emphasize a bit at this point. The map is easygoing and straight but maybe some kind of surprise or sth would be nice, like you are surprised while listening to that song and all... I don't like it how that basedrum is on the smaller end of the slider. It's just not... I think it just doesn't fit with the music and all.
00:13:559 - ^
00:14:291 - ^
00:14:779 - ^
00:15:998 - I don't think you should miss those 3 1/4 drums. Even if it's a hard you could make it a bit harder.
00:16:486 - I think I would change the SV a bit for the refrain. The musics getting faster and more exciting so why not using faster sliders? Would fit, imo.
00:28:437 - same as at 00:12:828
00:44:047 - ^
somehow this map is 1/2 's all the time. Try to play around with the beats and stuff. Try to emphasize and make the map more interesting. Also try to pretty your blankets up. I'm not blanket master but maybe ... Well.. You know...
Topic Starter
Lust
No changes except

ChivaCookie wrote:

Normal


00:02:340 (3) - I think you should strg + g this. First the flow goes like this:
but if you strg + g it, it's
I think that plays much nicer because you have to change your pace only 2 times, not 3.
OFC you'd have to change the notes afterwards so that it fits. You are right about the flow, I reverse the first slider instead so the flow is fixed.

Ah thanks for the mod anyways! I appreciate it~
Alarido
Hey Lust :D

Special M4M from #modreqs


[Hard]
♥ Found it flows so good (very well :3)
00:02:340 (4,2) - Make their heads overlap each other perfectly. It could be achieved more easily by using Grid Snap (turning it ON in the Editor).
00:11:120 (2) - Move the last node to x:316 y:196, so its tail will perfectly fit to the 00:11:852 (4) - 's head.
00:11:608 (3,5) - They aren't stacked properly. The easiest solution is delete 00:12:340 (5) - and copy it from 00:11:608 (3) - so they'll get the same place (:
00:13:072 (2,3) - ^
00:18:925 (2) - Move the last node to x:57 y:209 (disabling Grid Snap to do this), so they will be perfect with 00:19:901 (4) -
00:28:194 (1) - Make the blanket better with moving it to x:436 y:204, then move the 2nd node to x:436 y:256 and the 3rd node to x:424 y:276.
00:29:901 (4) - Move slightly to x:298 y:224 for perfect overlapping.
00:34:291 (2) - For a perfect blanket, move the 2nd node to x:432 y:176 and the 3rd node to x:452 y:148.
00:35:511 (5,1) - Overlap perfectly (5) with (1)'s head.
00:36:974 (4,6) - Same thing, (6) with (4)'s head.
:?: 00:47:218 (5,1,2) - The distance between (5) and (1) feels a bit tricky, but it maybe due to my current playing skills. Hearing the song at this part, there's a small stop, what makes the pattern fine.
00:48:681 (4,1,2) - Where they meet each other (i.e., overlap), could be more perfect (some little adjustement with Grid Snap disabled).
01:06:974 (5,1) - Could make them like this ? → http://puu.sh/5HGw6.jpg
01:18:437 (5,1) - Overlap perfectly (5) with (1)'s head.
01:19:413 (2,4) - Overlap perfectly (4) with (2)'s head.
01:21:364 (2) - Move the 2nd node by 1 grid up, then move the 3rd node to x:156 y:236 to make its tail overlap perfect with 01:22:340 (4) -
01:22:584 (5) - Move the 2nd node to x:264 y:272 and then move the 3rd node to x:316 y:268. For better blanket here.
01:35:755 (3,2) - Overlap perfectly (2) with (3)'s head.
* 01:47:950 (1) - This slider is really not symmetrical, but, specially in this case, I don't care. Its head is part of the former square and also it feels not possible fixing symmetry with no drastic damage on further patterns, so better keep it as is.

[Normal]
00:00:877 (1) - Move the 2nd and the 3rd nodes by 1 grid up for perfect blanket.
00:08:681 (1) - Move the 2nd node by 1 grid down and move the 3rd node by 1 grid left, so the blanket will get perfect.
00:19:901 (2) - Move to x:140 y:200 for nicer blanket, and...
00:20:389 (1) - ...move to x:220 y:236 for same reason.
00:48:194 (2) - Move the 2nd node by 1 grid right and 1 grid up to perfect the blanket.
00:50:145 (2) - Move the 2nd node to x:336 y:148, same reason.
00:52:096 (2) - Move the 2nd node to x:72 y:148, same reason. Or, if you applied the last mod, copy from 00:50:145 (2) and make Ctrl-H (flip horizontally), then move to x:125 y:105.
00:55:023 (3) - Move the 2nd node to x:412 y:200 and the 3rd node to x:416 y:240, for perfect blanket too.
00:56:974 (2) - Move the middle node by 2 grids down, same reason.
00:59:901 (2) - Move the niddle node by 1 grid down, more perfect blanket.
01:01:852 (2) - For same reason, move the middle node by 1 grid left.
01:03:316 (3,1) - Not stacked perfectly.
01:24:291 (5) - Add clap (missing clap here)
01:27:218 (1) - ^
01:35:511 (2) - Move the middle node to x:216 y:168, perfect blanket.
01:36:974 (2) - Move the middle node by 1 or 2 grids down, same reason.
01:44:291 (1) - Move the 2nd node to x:412 y:228, same reason.
01:46:242 (1,2) - Move the 3rd node of 01:46:242 (1) - to x:188 y:64, then move the note 01:47:218 (2) - by 1 grid right.

Well, I recognize I gone Nazi on depth >< because the flow is amazing :3 imho. Both Hard and Normal. And feel it's so close to be ranked this year :3 Nothing unrankable (standard diff naming, no slider with extra red nodes making it unreadable, and perfect spacing with a few -- and song-suitable - exceptions).

Good luck and I wanted this map RANKED soon ^^

Merry Christmas <3 Happy New Year

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Topic Starter
Lust
Thanks alarido! I fixed everything
[ Raphael ]
Hi~! from my queue!

[Normal]
  • 00:05:755 (4) - What about to be symmetry with 00:04:291 (1)?
    01:03:803 - add 4/4 slider with 1 reverse (Suggestion :3)

    [Hard]
    • 00:02:340 (4,2) - accurate overlap
      00:11:852 (4) - move to (316,198) for accurate overlap with 00:11:120 (2)
      00:19:901 (4) - move to (61,211) for accurate overlap with 00:18:925 (2)
      00:43:803 (1) - add finish on mid ┓
      00:44:779 (3) - add finish on start ┣ for follow song's rhythm :3
      00:45:511 (5) - ^ ┛
      00:47:706 (1) - add finish
      00:49:657 (1) - move to (223,204) for accurate overlap with 00:47:950 (2)
      00:50:389 (2) - if you follow the above, move to (342,136) for accurate overlap with 00:49:657 (1)
      00:55:511 (1,3) - it would be better if you remove that overlap lightly
      01:03:803 - add 4/4 slider with 1 reverse (Suggestion :3)
      01:15:755 (3) - add finish on mid
      01:28:194 (3,3) - accurate overlap

      Nice BG and nice song~! I like it >w<
      and Good luck~ :3
Ethercastle
From my queue~ Guess Xmas song should get priority ^ ^

Well didn't expect a Japanese version...

[General]
Considering adding a custom clap for the non-kiai part?

[Hard]
Overall in good state. Personally find it a bit too monotonous with 1/2 spamming & constant ds. Try to suggest some variety, but merely suggestions.

00:04:535 (1) - rotate by about -15 degree?
00:06:242 (4) - prefer just a circle at the red line, follows the vocal better
00:08:681 (1) - fix blanket
00:14:535 (1) - guess this should be rotated anti-clockwise for better flow
00:16:486 (1) - 3/4 slider?
00:18:925 (2) - replace it with a slider (either 1/2 or 3/4) plus a circle
00:20:389 (1) - 3/4 slider? and either way you could rotate this anticlockwise & probably ctrl + G
00:24:291 (1) - 3/4 slider?
00:35:023 (3,4,5,6) - fixed ds
00:38:194 (2) - rotation?
00:43:803 (1) - blanket?
00:46:242 (1,2,3,4,5) - gradually increase the ds?
00:49:657 (1,2) - may consider a jump here?
00:53:559 (1) - 3/4 slider? (same suggestions, not gonna repeat for later parts....)
00:55:755 (2,3) - may consider follow vocal here
00:57:950 (2,3) - ^
00:57:462 (1) - rotate this anticlockwise?
00:59:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - may consider increasing the ds and add some jumps to fit the music (feels back-and-forth)
01:15:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ (Guess you can also consider jumps for other similar parts)
01:17:950 (3,4,5,6) - gradually increase the ds
01:19:413 (2) - also prefer slider + circle
01:21:364 (2) - ^
01:22:584 (5) - rotate anticlockwise?
01:46:242 (1,2,3,4) - fix ds

Again just suggestions...Didn't even check myself if these will work....

[Normal]

00:22:828 (2) - rotate slightly?
00:28:681 (2,3,4) - guess this is intended to be a triangle? should fix imo.
00:30:145 (1) - feels weird not following the vocal. It's normal diff so I guess some red line objects are fine
01:05:755 (2,3,1) - could be a better blanket

Good normal~


Good luck xD
Topic Starter
Lust

Ethercastle wrote:

From my queue~ Guess Xmas song should get priority ^ ^

Well didn't expect a Japanese version...

[General]
Considering adding a custom clap for the non-kiai part? nah

[Hard]
Overall in good state. Personally find it a bit too monotonous with 1/2 spamming & constant ds. Try to suggest some variety, but merely suggestions.

00:04:535 (1) - rotate by about -15 degree? that will mess up the pattern I have going there
00:06:242 (4) - prefer just a circle at the red line, follows the vocal better done
00:08:681 (1) - fix blanket fixed
00:14:535 (1) - guess this should be rotated anti-clockwise for better flow its fine how it is
00:18:925 (2) - replace it with a slider (either 1/2 or 3/4) plus a circle not feeling it
00:20:389 (1) - 3/4 slider? and either way you could rotate this anticlockwise & probably ctrl + G nope
00:24:291 (1) - 3/4 slider? ^
00:35:023 (3,4,5,6) - fixed ds the DS is already fine ?
00:38:194 (2) - rotation? nah
00:43:803 (1) - blanket? its for the flow afterwards, not every pattern needs to be blanket...
00:46:242 (1,2,3,4,5) - gradually increase the ds? doesn't fit in well in this type of hard
00:49:657 (1,2) - may consider a jump here? ^
00:53:559 (1) - 3/4 slider? (same suggestions, not gonna repeat for later parts....) good, because it doesnt fit
00:55:755 (2,3) - may consider follow vocal here its fine
00:57:950 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:57:462 (1) - rotate this anticlockwise? done
00:59:657 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - may consider increasing the ds and add some jumps to fit the music (feels back-and-forth) doesnt fit with an easier hard
01:15:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ (Guess you can also consider jumps for other similar parts) ^
01:17:950 (3,4,5,6) - gradually increase the ds ^
01:19:413 (2) - also prefer slider + circle nah
01:21:364 (2) - ^ ^
01:22:584 (5) - rotate anticlockwise? nope
01:46:242 (1,2,3,4) - fix ds again the DS is fine...

Again just suggestions...Didn't even check myself if these will work....
Good luck xD

No changes to normal

[ Raphael ] wrote:

Hi~! from my queue!

[Normal]
  • 00:05:755 (4) - What about to be symmetry with 00:04:291 (1)? done
    01:03:803 - add 4/4 slider with 1 reverse (Suggestion :3) i like the pause there~

    [Hard]
    • 00:02:340 (4,2) - accurate overlap fixed
      00:11:852 (4) - move to (316,198) for accurate overlap with 00:11:120 (2) done
      00:19:901 (4) - move to (61,211) for accurate overlap with 00:18:925 (2) done
      00:43:803 (1) - add finish on mid ┓ done
      00:44:779 (3) - add finish on start ┣ for follow song's rhythm :3 done
      00:45:511 (5) - ^ ┛ done
      00:47:706 (1) - add finish done
      00:49:657 (1) - move to (223,204) for accurate overlap with 00:47:950 (2) done
      00:50:389 (2) - if you follow the above, move to (342,136) for accurate overlap with 00:49:657 (1) done
      00:55:511 (1,3) - it would be better if you remove that overlap lightly done
      01:03:803 - add 4/4 slider with 1 reverse (Suggestion :3) as said before i like the pause ^^
      01:15:755 (3) - add finish on mid done
      01:28:194 (3,3) - accurate overlap done

      Nice BG and nice song~! I like it >w<
      and Good luck~ :3 me too >w>

Thanks for the mods!
amir
oh look. a star.
Topic Starter
Lust

Amir wrote:

oh look. a star.
<3
smallboat
Hi,Lust,I'm late. In-game req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

None.

[Normal]

00:20:876 (2) - Forget to add clap in slider end?
00:22:828 (2) - ^
00:24:779 (2) - Forget to add clap in slider head?
00:28:681 (2) - Add clap.
00:29:169 (3) - Remove clap (Because 24clap.)
00:32:096 (3) - Strong beat,can add finish is good better.
01:03:316 (3) - ^

[Hard]

00:07:950 (4,5) - Select this 2 notes,use ctrl+g?
00:13:559 (4) - Strong beat,move to (244|312),be triangle.
00:26:974 (2,3,4,5) - Make a pattern? (Christmas tree XD)
00:35:023 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -
00:39:657 (6) - Place (180|300) is better flow,try it.
00:44:779 (3,4,5) - Can make a jump,it will be better flow:
00:57:462 (1) - Make a jump.Try this:
01:07:462 (1) - Feel move to (388|80) is good pattern.
01:15:755 (3,4) - Try this rhythm,and (4) stack (3) slider head:
01:24:779 (1) - (152|136)? (Feel stack a lot at this here.)
01:31:608 (4) - The same with 01:15:755.
01:42:340 (1) - Try this part add 24clap?
01:46:242 (1,2,3,4) - Strong beat,can make jump:

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked "in christmas" :p
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

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