Mod Info:
- Unrankable or very questionable stuff
- Highly suggestion
- Coment or opinions about some
- nazi stuff or normal suggestions
General:
- the white combo colour its really annoying in the kiai part also the repeat arrow are kinda hard to notice with it maybe try another colour?
Hard:
- I will focus on rhythm since its the main issue here imo also you should ad claps you are missing alot of them thought
- 00:00:877 (1) - anyways I dont agree with your first rhythm since It dond follow the vocals orthe music properly try to add some like:
Ok I'll explain you why in firts the 1/1 slider in 00:00:877 (1) - represent the vocals ¨LAST¨ its just one word thats why the long slider empathize it better, 00:01:608 the repeat slider its cuz the vocals ¨christmas¨ start in 00:01:608 but yeah we have to use some repeat cuz the sound in 00:01:852 its also important and should be mapped also the vocals en at 00:02:096 you will ask why a repeat cuz the vocals ¨christmas¨its just one wordand the repeat will represent that conecction between vocals and music sounds and here 00:02:218 you can hear a bell? yeahI like if you map that sound properly 00:02:584 an this one have to be a single beat cuz the vocals start again here thats why >.< - 00:02:218 not sure why you ignore this important sound in the song try to map it properly you will get a better empathize with the song if you do
- 00:02:340 (4,2) - stack this properly :c
- 00:03:072 ending sliders in downbeats dont follow the song properly and make the game play weird try to change the rhythm and try to map the heavy beats with a circle or slider start cuz that beats are really important and them needa clickeable action maybeyou want to improve the rhythm and try some like:
- 00:03:803 really nazi but the curve of this slider its to much o.o try to make em like your previous one
- 00:04:535 symilar case as the above you are ignoring the stronges beat here in 00:04:779 and its pretty bad for the rhythm try this one instead:
- 00:04:779 also this will need finish sound for better empathize with the music
- 00:05:267 In my opinion you should use a 1/2 slider here since you can hear how the vocal get holded for some time also this spot 00:05:511 end with a sound on it
- 00:06:120 adding a 1/8 repeat slider here will represent themusic better imo like this:
- 00:06:730 this should be a 1/2 repeat slider following the vocals properly thought
- 00:07:706 (3,4,5) - I feel really weird this part o.o cuz the circles dont sound like the main vocal since you are trying to follo the echo and then the volume of your hitsounds make this 00:07:706 (3,4,5) - sound really off place solution 2 low the volume o.oi really will not like this solution thought xD I preffer if you follow the main vocal and do a 1/1 slider following the main vocal and drums like:
- 00:08:681 (1) - this long repeat dont represent the music really well 00:09:169 here not a real music sound if you listen at 25% but I like the idea of follow the hold vocals since I do it on my maps too then lets try to improve this section try to use this rhythm:
Ok lets explain it the first long slider will follow the hold vocal like was your idea but will not add a repeat why? if you listen carefull the piano sounds start here 00:09:413 so if you map the 4 beats as circles you will do a nice empathize with rhythm here also if you like and get my idea reduce the volume here 00:09:169 maybe 50% or 40% and up it again at 00:09:413 andwill be really nice owo - 00:10:389 this is symilar at 00:03:072 you use a repeats slider in downbeats here if you listen to the music the stronger sounds are on it same to 00:11:852 so yes the rhythm in this section can be some like:
http://puu.sh/5K45Q.jpg - 00:12:584 in this case is above the same thing when you found a stonger beats in the music like 00:12:828 you have to map them with a slider start or with a circle since you know its a really stronger beat u add finish on it so lets map it properly
- 00:12:828 you add finish here so be concistent and add it on 00:13:559 - 00:14:291 - its the same sound in music if you dont like how the finish sound here maybe claps but yea whistles dont do the work here
- 00:15:755 kinda wonder why you stop mapping here since the music its very symilar at what you are following in 00:15:023 try this rhythm instead:
- 00:16:486 (1,2) - this its symilar to what I suggest you before in the ¨last christmas¨ word sinc its the tittle of the song lets make a cool rhythm with them like I suggest you before this will follow better this:
- 00:18:194 same with this repeat dont follow the music properly I explain you before about heavy beats and stuff try this:
- 00:21:120 same here try to follow the main sound in the music and map them properly conver this slider 00:21:120 in 2 circles
- 00:21:608 symilar problem as above since if you ignore 00:21:852 you broke your clap pattern also you ignore thedrums in music thought
- 00:24:779 (2,3) - nazi again but not afan of your ¨overlap¨ look like a mistake x.x try to blank it better like:
- 00:26:730 missing clap
- 00:26:974 remove clap o.o maybe its a mistake? if not it sound pretty bad better remove it
- 00:28:194 make this 2 circles same explain as before 00:28:437 this strong have to be mapped properly like you did with the symilar one at 00:29:901
- 00:32:584 Im wonder why you stop with claps in this section? o.o they fit alot in some spots mainly 2 and 4 downbeat
- 00:35:023 (3,4,5,6) - i love this cirles since them follow the bells pretty nice but not like this spot 00:36:730 the sound here its kinda out of place try to convert it in 1/2 slider with previous 00:36:486 to keep the bells sound as the main beats in this section will be great imo just like you did on 00:36:974
- 00:45:998 the NC should be here you may know why >.<
- 00:45:998 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - also where are the claps x.x ahaha if you add claps here u will bring more empathize at what are u following in the music
- 00:47:950 same issue about the rhythm try this instead:
- 00:56:730 same as above
- 00:59:169 ^
- 00:59:657 ^
- 01:01:364 if you ctrl g this you will improve alot the flow and will make your dif more interesting to play
- 01:02:340 and yes dont ignore the main sounds on the music
- 00:48:194 (3,4) - yeah this overlaps look like mistakes better blank them thought
- 00:55:023 (5,6) - If you ask me since this have to be a 1/2 slider since the sound in the upbeat its really low and the vocal its the same also that triple stack break the flow of the map for not special reason
- 00:59:169 same ending slider on the main beats of the song try this instead:
- 01:06:974 symilar this have to be 2 circles instead
- 01:07:462 dont ignore the main beats of the song this 01:07:706 should be mapped properly
- 01:11:852 same as above
- 01:09:047 im kinda wonder why you ignore this sound? should be a triplet here
- 01:12:950 same as above
- 01:14:291 same as 00:59:169
- 01:18:681 (6,1) - avoid the overlap look pretty bad
- 01:18:925 (1,2) - the same as the previous kiai start at 00:16:486
- 01:22:584 same dont map the main sounds in the music like this, 01:22:828 should be mapped properly
- 01:23:316 (1,2,3) - same as the previous kiai part did you copy past o.o?
- 01:25:023 same as 00:47:950
- 01:25:511 same as 01:07:462
- 01:27:462 remove the clap of the slider start o.o
- 01:29:657 (3,1) - stack this properly lol nazi
- 01:32:584 kiai should end here also add NC on that beat
- 01:34:535 same as 00:16:486
- 01:40:145 another rhythm issue that downbeats should be mapped with a slider start or a circle
- 01:42:340 your rhythm its kinda messed i dint get what are you trying to follow here try to using this one sound alot better:
- 01:47:950 just pointing this slider look really symple maybe you can try to add some slider art here?
the main problem its the rhythms you regulary ignore heavy beats also the other issue its the hitsounds o.o you ignore alot of sections since claps fit most of the song you should add them also following always the distance look really bored in some parts you have to make some jumps when the music fit and try to make a concistent patterns with your hitsounds
Normal:
- 00:06:242 no real sound in this spot thats why it sound pretty bad try to change the rhythm maybe like this with follow bettrer the song:
- 00:02:340 this is symilar as above since its a normal you can use some 1/2 to follow better the song
- 00:08:194 If you ask me I remove this beat since that downbeat dont have sound in the music thought
- 00:12:828 you need to add some here since this beat its really strong btw I see you are trying to map just downbeats but that make your rhythm dont fit the song pretty nice and thats bad since you have to try to follow the music the best you can and yeah you should not ignore beats like 00:12:828 cuz them will be not hard to play for newbies but will be easy for them to click this strong beats
- 00:14:047 same issue here since the downbeat dont have empathize in the song and yeah the spots like 00:14:291 - 00:14:779 - have to be mapped due the strong feeling them represent in the song the more suitable rhythm you can follow its this one:
- 00:28:437 this is the same case as 00:12:828
- 00:29:901 same as above since that beats should be mapped your rhythm there dont follow the song properly for the whole combo I suggest you:
- 00:30:389 - maybe remove and add a spinner like you did the other kiai? since the rhythm here its kinda complex for a normal diff a spinner will fit better for this diff
- 00:55:023 this slider have the repeat on a main beat in the sound here 00:55:511 - same with 00:56:974 thats why the rhythm its bad again and also you combo pattern its broken here try to fix this maybe with this rhythm:
- 01:05:267 (1,2,3,1,2) - kinda nazi try to make this pattern symetrical actually look kinda bad thought
- 01:12:584 another rhythm issue here try this one will fit alot better:
- 01:17:950 (1) - we have 3 issues here first one the spinner its tho short for a normal/easy diff second issue this 01:19:413 come to fast after the spinner third issue starting the kiai 01:18:925 in the end of a spinner dont represent the music well the best solution for me its remove the spinner and map maynbe with this rhythm:
- 01:22:340 same issue as the others repeats try another rhythm here also try to fix your combo pattern maybe like:
- 01:23:803 (4,5) - avoid the stack since you should not use them on the easy diff of the set cuz newbies cant play em
- 01:25:755 symilar to 01:22:340 use some like:
- 01:30:876 you should map this beat too
- 01:32:340 symilar here try to use some more fiting with the song like:
- 01:35:023 you better remove this beat to soon after the spinner for the easy diff of the set
- 01:41:852 same as the othes ones try to use:
- 01:47:950 the spinner its to long and bored I'll like if you improve the rhythm and add a slider before starting it like: